ok heres the beginning of it i have to go think of something intrsting to happen but if you have any ideas email me please!!!(dont worry i'll give you credit for it too..)phatkatg03@hotmail.com, ok well here we go...

((the captin is yelling at jinny for something))
K: Jinny do you really think that given the circumstances that you made the wise decsison?
J: Captin if you let me explain...
((flower guy comes in with two seperate dozen roses))
FG: i have a delivary for a Captin Kate McCaffery...
K: thats me, thanks ((smells them and sighs and forgets about wht she was saying to jinny and leaves and goes in her office))
((Magda comes over to Jinny))
M: what was that all about?
J i dont know but maybe someone should give her flowers more often...and you wouldnt think that captin is someone who gets around much...would ya?
M: uhuh
FG: i have another delivary for a Jinny Exstead...
J: yep right here...
M: talk about getting around...
J: right now i have one guy and one guy only
M: whatever you say jin
((Angela and CD come in have a small argument))
A: i just think that
CD: it dosent matter we are still together..
J: so how are blair and jo doing?
A: I dont get it...
M: you remember jo and blair from facts of life...ok nevermind dont mind her she just got more flowers from teddy...
A: getting preety serious huh?
CD: anyways on to more important issues then jinnys love life, whats up for tonight its our night off..
A: how bout a movie?
M: or bowling...
J: cruisin
M: huh?
J: lets go cruisin!!
CD: i havent gone for a while, but sounds like fun count me in
A: cruisin the streets of San Fran.?
CD: come on it will be fun..
A: ok count me in
M: im in...
J: wooohoo lets go cruisin!!
ALL: right jinny(give her a weird look)

ok i know not that intresting so far but if u have any ideas email~ and dont worry more later

Cute... loved the FOL reference...

Oh, btw, here's an idea: adding onto a FOL reference, have 'em sing what the girls sang in Crusin'!

All in all, veeeeery cute! cant wait to see the rest!

Oh this is cool, im like acting out jinnys part in my room, ehhh nevermind.

Originally posted by NancyJoJinny:
Oh this is cool, im like acting out jinnys part in my room, ehhh nevermind.

(From Growing Pains.)

Ohhhhhh! So am I!!!!!!

You do that too huh? LOL on the FOL referece! Very good! BTW, they sang You've Lost That Lovin' Feelin' by THe Rightous Brothers I've got the entire song on a CD (no pun intended!) if you want the lyrics!

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B: God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
J: Where'd you hear that?
B: It's on the plaque over there.
~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~
J: Tell Mrs. G we're out of mouthwash!
B: Well, if it isn't the kissing valedictorian.
J: Blair I have a sense of humor just like everybody else, but there are certain things in life we do not laugh at.
The Yankees and what Roy did to me. Never, are you ever to mention that!
T: He really planted one on you, didn't he?
N: Your face turned purple!
T: No oxygen!

God bless your every footstep,
~_~ Kenzie ~_~
E-Mail-- LoveNancyMcKeon@webtv.net
or
teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com
or
toocuteforyou67890@yahoo.com

I love it! Nice with the FOL comparson. i love it!!! Keep going it is awesome!!!

ok heres a little more but not to much cuz i have start my hw, but thanks for the idea 80skid(i will get to it later if not in this post) and AlexzBonnor thanks for the name of it~

((after work jinny kinda just walks in magdas house with out even knocking and open the refrigerator))
J: hey Magda dont you have any good energy drinks?
M: (sarcasticly) o hey jinny glad to see you knocked and when i go to the store want me to pick red bull or jolt?((magda son enters i think his name is ben but i am not sure)
B: hey jinny do you want to tell me a story?
M: no
J: sure come on...
M: ((sorta shouts after them but the dont listen)) remember what happened last time!!
J: ok this is the story of Cinderalla...
B: o i hate this one
J: you havent heard my verison then have you? ok well anyways there is this female inspector for the city of lets say San Fran. and her name is Cinderalla and she has this old evil boss who gets her the worst cases and all this boring paper work and is always bugging her until one day this cindralla
find out that her prince charmings boss the d.a. is her boyfriend who much younger then her~ and from then one the evil captin is nice to cinderalla because she knows that cinderalla knows about the secret...and everyone lived happily ever after good night
((Magda who was standing at the door)
M: you were talking about the capatin and you werent you?
J: o i dont know, come on i told cd and angela that i wouldnt pick them up a minute late!
(on the way to get cd and angela in the car)
M: i dont get you and the captin its like she hates you and is always out to get you
J: o its just our personal history and when i was a teen...
M: when you were a teen what happened and what personal history?
(jinny pulls over to get cd and angela)
CD+Angela: hi guys
J: hi
M: hi, but guys shush jinny was about to tell me why the captin always is on her case and why she hates her so much!
CD: well sorry tootie! and if its any constaltion i know why
(jinny gives her a look thats like if you tell her i will nevr speak to you again)
J: never mind this lets turn on the radio and get wild!!(you've lost that loving feeling comes on) now heres good music,
ALL: (singing)"you lost that loving feeling, whoo thta loving feeling, you've that loving feeling and now its gone gone gone wooowoo"
(after the song ends jinny pulls into a parking lot to a drug store and they all get out and go in the store)
J: (she takes like 5 candy bars and a red bull) now thats wht i am talking about...and i need some chips now
(a suspious guy comes in takes jinny and sticks a gun to her head)
Guy: ok this is a stick up give me all your money or she gets it....

ok well gotta go but i will maybe if i get a chance add more tonight

Oh you gotta finsh this

Lovin' it! And you're welcome 4 the name!

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Rachel: Like that key chain said, boys are like parking spaces, all the good ones are taken.
Alexz: Yeah... too bad they don't come in silver mercedes benz!
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Rachel: Have I ever been wrong?
Alexz: Don't get me started! Don't EVEN get me started!
~_~ Kenzie ~_~
E-Mail-- teddysangeljinny@yahoo.com

This is really good...please post more soon!

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

OHHHHH, youhave to go on tonite!!!! It is great and just getting juicy!!!! Please go on!!!!!! AWESOME!!!

Keep going!!!!!

thanks for the comments! here is a little more but i do not know how much more i will be able to post in this post cause i dont know my time limit(hope that makes a little sense) http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

((everyone is in the store that is being held up except for CD, who sees what going on and run to the car and gets her gun, i dunno why she would have her gun and badge and calls for back up but a good cop is always prepared, so i hope thats not to far fetched)

((cd runs into the store))
CD: FREEZE inspecter from the SFPD put your hands up and release the hostage!
(the guy slowly starts to release jinny but just enough so she can do some karate move and get free and trip the guy so that he falls, he kicks her just barely but not very hard and as he fall Angela grabs his gun~by this time the police that CD called for back up comes and arrest the man)
(after CD waits for Jinny as they walk out the door of the store)
J: hey CD i owe you again
CD: dont mention it jinny, just doing my job
J: its more then that though ever since I have joined the SFPD you looked out for me a couple times and saved my a$$ a few times from the captian
CD: hey dont mention it like i said before i was just doing my job, now lets get back to cruisin!
(Jinny and CD get in the car)
A: would guys hurry up I want to expirence the thirll of CRUISIN!!!!
M: dont you think we have had enough thrills for one night?
A: no!
CD: angela have you been drinking Jinnys red bull?
A: no why do you ask?
(Jinny pulls over to a liquior store)
M: hey jin why are we stopping here?
J: cuz you know the Cindy Loper'S words "girls just wanna have fun"
M: i thought she was talking about other stuff and guys...(all confused)
J: we can get some of those too...!!!
(all look at her confused but dont stop her when she goes into the liquior store, she comes out with a 6 pack and trades spots with Angela who is know the driver)
J: any body want one?
ALL: not right now jinny
J: hi yea cd r sure you dont want one(jinny is starting to spaz cuz of the red bull)
M: jinny are you really sure you should be having that right now??

ok well i know nothing much interesting happened right then but it was leading up to something else and my older bro has to use to the computer so i will add more tomorrow or possibly tonight but proabley tomorrow!

Ohhh...get off the computer brother!!! LOL!!! I love it! i feel like it is leading some where! I hope you come on tonite!!!

Lovin it!

heres a little more but i dont know how much i will be able to add becaus ei amvery spaztic right now....haha so just hang in there with me!

CD: jinny dont u think that 3 beers is enough?
J: no way... i am just getting this party started!
M: hey jin can have 3 beers?
A: magda do you know what you are doing?
J: sure thing, see magda knows how to party!!!!!!
(madga takes the beers and throws them out the window)
J: hey magda what did u do that for!?!
M: because you dont need it...
CD: hey angela do you mind pulling over I am craving a big mac and super size coke...
A: yep sure thing (she pulls over) come on every body out we are getting food!!
M: CD might want to help jinny there
J: I can handle my self...
(they walk in the store and get there food and everything situated, and thensome guys walk in the McDonalds and start a fight with someone and then said if the cashire did not hand over the money that he would shot randomly...the guy points his gun and at Magda and then jinny realized what was going on and just as the man pulled the triger and jinny dove right in front of the bullet)
J: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
m+cd+a- JINNY!!!!!!!!

sorry more tomorrow!

OMG!!!! You're leavin us all might until tomorrow! I am on the edge of my seat!! NOOO! MOREEEEE!!!

PLEAZZZZ!!! Write more before i fall off the edge of my seat! i have been waiting all day!!

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Jinny: She's got a bug up her a$$ for me!

Jo: Uh..in a minuete your gonna have flared teeth.

(Jo falls down while ballroom dance practice in the living room)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo, do u want soup?

Computer: Good Afternoon
Jo: How would you know...you've been turned off all day.

so here we go heres a little more for yea!

(jinny gets shot in the stomach and then knocks her head on the ground really hard and because of everything that happened to her she became unconious and right after the shot the man flees...)
M: CD and Angela you contact police about what just happened and get as much information bout the mall and i will call 911
CD+A: ok were on it...hey wait who made you captain..ummm nevermind
(At the Hospital everyone is worrided and the captain rushes in)
K: what happened and is she alright?
CD: a man was about to shot at Magda and jinny saw what was about to happened and she dove in front because Magda didnt know what was about to happen cuz her back was turned...and we havent heard anything?
K: well has anyone contacted her family...or any one else who she may be close with
M: Theodore...
K: Theodore? who is Theodore? this wouldnt happen to be the ADA Theodore who got mobbed and Jinny was on his case...
CD: yep I am preety sure thats the same one
K: i knew i should have never given her that case..but ok Madga go contact him...
(( a few hours later after Teddy, Casey, John and her father had arrived the doctors came out))
DOC: Exstead?
C: how bad is it doc?
DOC: we cant really say right now, she lost massive amount of blood, and she needs to have her stomach pumped because of a large amount of alchohal was found...this just makes the whole situation complacated. Once she has her stomach pumped she will be have surgey~
K: thank you docotor
C: god...please take care of my sister?
(jinnys father sorta pats caseys back but not really)
K: do you mind me asking why she had a large amount of alchohal found?
(Magda, CD, and Angela was speechless)
K: how many beers did she have?
M: 3
K: and you let her drink them?? do you ever think to realize that she might be having more then 3 because before she picked you up she could of had a drink or two...What were you thinking?
C: Captain McCafferty may I speak freely?
K: Casey I really do not think that you have anything to do with this so just keep out!
C: shes my sister and I have ever right and if i do not say so this is already a hard enough situation without you placing blame on anyone
K(is speechless and all) i guesse you are right sorry...


ok sry i fgotta go cu more in a little bit

NOOO!!! MORE!!!! Keep going! Your killing me!!! RRRRR!!! Write more as soon as possible!!! i love it!!!

GrRrRrRrRrR!!!!!!!Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!! More!!!!! More!!!!!! More!!!!! Pwease.

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! You must finish! GRRRRRRRRRRRR. pwease?

ok heres a little more i dunno what should happen so if you HAVE ANY IDEAS PLEASE WRITE THEM!!!

C: hey john what do you have to say? you've been offly quiet and you sisters in the ER...
J: now dont start with me casey, the only reason im here is because we're family
C: thats right we are family, everyone knows we arent the perfect family award so why cant our put differences aside and come through during a time of need for jinny
J: a time of need for JINNY? ever since i can remeber its been a time of need for Jinny! whether its when she slept with all the guys on the block or whether she got hurt...or her drinking problem, its all about JINNY!
C: how can you say that she loves and shes your sister!
J: just because she is my sister dosent mean the love is muteral!! i am outta here, i am sick and tired of everything being about jinny...
K: ok its getting late will you guys(magda, cd, and angela) come with me to get some coffee, if my feeling is right this is gonna be a long night...
C http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifstarts to cry) dad... i hope shes alright...y dose she have to drink, why??
JSR: son she has some issues that need to be dealt with and drinking just soaths her..it will be ok
(doc comes out)
DOC: she had her stomach pumped which went fine, and then she just got out of surgey, she is really weak, and she should be waking up an moment now...
(kate, magda, cd, and angela come back)
M: was that just the doctor?
C: yep he said that she had her stomach pumped and that she just got out of surgey and she should be wakeing up some time soon so we can fo visit her..
CD: ok lets go...
(they all go to the room)
A: shouldnt we let her father and casey go in first?
(casey and jinnys dad go in and jinny is up but loks really weak...and is really weak)
C: hey jin
JSR: hey jinny girl..how ya feeling
J: OK i guesse for someone who just had surgey(trys to sit up but cant...)ooouuchh
C: jinny whats wrong u ok?
J: just hurts when i try and sit up
JSR: ok then dont sit up...
J: thanks pop think i realized that one and where is john?
C: he left...
(jinnys face is all sad sorta)
J: oohhhh
Jsr: well hope you feel betta Jinny and we be back tomorrow
J: ok love ya..cu
C: cu jin and dont worry john will be back!
(ok next the squad goes in)
K+A+CD+M: hey jinny how you doin...
J: what do you mean how am i doing, i am pain, i just got out of surgey, the closest i am getting to a man is when one takes my bed pan away and i dont have anything to drink..tell me how am i doing?
K: jinny dont you think that maybe you not having anything to drink is a good thing?
M: hey jin thanks for saving my life and risking yours for mine, that means a lot to me
J: dont thank me it was the beers thinking..just kidding, no prob, anything for a friend~
CD: u got guts girl, i am just so glad that you are ok...
A: me 2 the squad wouldnt have been the smae with out you!!
K: hey do you guys mind going outside for a little bit i need to have a chat with jinny...

up next kates chat with jinny! if u ahve any idea please tell me!

Excuse me don't leave us in suspense we want to know what happens!!! (At least I do!!!!)

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Jinny:God She's got to bug up her a** for me.
CD: Why?
Jinny: Oh how should I know...maybe I'm not her idea of what a lady cop should look and act like.

~Exstead~

K: so how are you doing?
J: didnt you just hear my response...
K: not that...about you mother
J: my mother? what dose she have to do with any of this, she died 20 years ago...
K: I've known you too long, i was good friends with your mother and i know how you were before she died...you have not gotton over mothers death...and you handle your pain by drinking
J: WHAT DO U KNOW??!! i am to over it and I have BEEN OVER IT!
K: Jinny cut the crap you need help why cant you just admit that? I remember your case so clearly too...under age drinker passed out...possibly depressed...you did go through AA didnt you?
J: What is this to you anyways?
k: because I want to help you, i am trying to save you from something that might really hurt in the future...and I know your mother and she would not want you to do destroy yourself like this...I know this guy who can help you(gives her a card) please if you dont call for me or yourself, call for your mother...please
J: ok..thanks
(they hug)

THE END!

i didnt know how to end it, so i hope it was ok~

I liked the ending!!! It was good the captain showed that she actually cared.

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Jo: Uh...In a minute your gonna have flared teeth.