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BlairW_2
11-24-2001, 06:55 PM
Hey, here is Part 1 of "Dangerous Suspicions"..I hope you like it!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

DANGEROUS SUSPICIONS..

PART ONE

((Eastland School for Girls))
(The girl's bedroom)
B: Oh my gosh!!
N: What is it, Blair?!
B: My nail! It..it..it chipped!
N: ::Rolls eyes::
T: What else is new?
B: Now I'm gonna need to go get it re-done!
N: Why do you even NEED nails, Blair?
T: Yeah..they're all gonna chip off sooner or later.
B: ::Chuckles:: Natalie..Natalie, Natalie, Natalie, Natalie, Natalie.
N: I hate when you do that.
B: AND Tootie..Tootie, Tootie, Tootie, Tootie, Tootie.
B: You girls just never will understand. Beautiful nails show how you are a beautiful person. And when you have no nails, it..well, I don't know what that means but I'm SURE it is not good.
N & T: ::Roll Eyes::
J: ::Storms in:: Dammit!
B: ::Jumps:: Oh, what a nice way to greet people. "Dammit".
J: Shut up. I'm not having a very good day.
N: ::Walks towards her:: What's wrong, Jo?
J: What's wrong?! I'll tell you what's wrong. First, my bike busted.
B: Oh! What a tragedy!
T: Uhh Blair, wasn't it a tragedy to you when your nail chipped?
B: Ugh..
J: Well anyways, besides my bike being busted, my mom left my dad. Again. Just when they get back together!
T: Oh..I'm sorry. You have alot of problems.
N: Tootie!
J: Gee, thanks.
B: Well I'm going to Tiffany's. Chow! ::Leaves::
J: Yeah..like she gives a damn about my problems.
T: Jo I know your upset but you don't have to use such..harsh language.
J: Tootie, if your parents split up and your favorite thing in the world won't work I am sure you would be the same way.
T: ::Thinks:: That might be true.
J: ::Rolls eyes::
((Tiffany's))
B: ::Looking around:: Hm..these prices are so low!! ::Smiles:: Only $50.00 for this velvet scarf!
::A worker comes up to her::
WRK: May I help you?
B: Oh, no thank you.
WRK: Okay. ::Walks away::
B: ::Buys 6 articles of clothing and pays for it, and walks out of the store::
::She sees a group of teenagers in the back of an alley, with wripped clothing::
B: Wow..they sure are low class. ::Walks away::
((Eastland))
B: Yeah, and on my way back I saw these freaks in the back of an alley. They were SO low classed! Wripped up, old clothing and all.
J: Blair shut up. All you do is judge people.
B: Gosh..what is wrong with you?
MG: Yeah Jo..what IS wrong?
J: Nothing is friggen wrong!
::Everyone stares::
J: And Blair that group of "freaks that were low class" in the back of the alley were probably a gang.
B: I see...
J: When you live in the Bronx for half your life you know that stuff.
B: Well sorry but I didn't ever live in that junkyard!
J: That's it. I want you to take that back now.
B: Make me!
T: There is gonna be troubleee...
MG: Now, girls, ::stands between them:: Jo, calm down. Blair, apologize.
B: Well it's true!
J: Ya know what Blair, your full of crap. ::Walks out of the room::
::Everyone, once again, stares at Blair::
B: Stop looking at me!
::Later that night, about 10:00 PM::
::Blair, Tootie, Natalie, and Jo are in bed when all of the sudden Blair wakes up, seeing Jo leave the room::
B: Jo?
J: ::Pauses::
B: ::Gets up:: Where are you going?
J: Downstairs.
B: For what?
J: You think I need to tell you? Just get your beauty sleep. ::Leaves::
B: ::Stares::
J: ::Slowly tip toes down the stairs and quietly opens the door, slipping out..::
((About 5 hours later))
J: ::Walks back in the house and into the bedroom::
B: ::Still up:: Jo! Where have you been?! I went downstairs and you werent there..it's 5 in the morning!
J: Blair shutup. I..had to go out.
B: Your lucky I didn't go to Mrs. Garett or Mr. Parker on you!
J: Blair just can it okay?! I had to go somewhere and do something.
B: What?! Tell me or I'm gonna report you.
J: Tell you?! Over my dead body.
T: ::Wakes up with a yawn:: What's going on?
B & J: ::Stare at each other::
((The next day))
B: ::Reading a magazine::
J: ::Comes into the bedroom and gets her coat::
B: Where are you going NOW, Jo?
J: ::Ignores her and leaves room::
B: ::Follows her::
J: ::About to leave::
B: Mrs. Garett!!! Jo's going somewhere! ::Yells::
MG: ::Runs in:: Jo! Where are you going?
J ::Glares at Blair:: Uh..just the hardware store.
B: Yeah and I bet that's where you were going last...
MG: Last what?
B: Uh..week. Yeah, last week.
MG: Go Jo. Just be back soon. Okay?
J: Yeah. ::Leaves::
B: ::Sighs:: I have to find out where she's going.

THE END OF PART ONE

Well..how do you like it? Part 2 will be up asap!


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Blair Warner Warner: I think someone famous once said..tho shall not STEAL?

Dorothy Ramsey: ..I have panic attacks..

Blair Warner Warner: I see you, you little rascal! I'm gonna get you! I....GOTCHA!

Blair Warner: Turn Blue!

Blair Warner: I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas!

*Love, Cassie*

SitcomFan
11-24-2001, 07:11 PM
thats goood so far i like it

Wild Child
11-24-2001, 07:15 PM
This is realy really good.I hope you can post more soon!

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
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Ewan's My Man
11-24-2001, 07:46 PM
This fan fic is soooooooooo good...you have to post more ASAP!!!

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~Lauren/Laudie~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
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~Tropical Punch 19~
11-24-2001, 09:54 PM
i like it. it is very good. keep up the good work. :)

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Jo: You're so old, that the date on your milk carton would read B.C.!
Blair: Turn blue!


Blair: Oh my gosh! There's a hair in my menu!
Jo:(Blows it) There it's gone! Now order.
Blair: I can't order the picture of the hamburger is green!

Jo/Blair_fan
11-24-2001, 10:24 PM
This is exelent you are a great writer!!! please post more soon!!!!!!

KerriBerri687
11-24-2001, 11:21 PM
this is really good! i hope u add more asap so i can find out where jo will go and not lose sleep over thinking about it...lol

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
11-25-2001, 01:10 AM
great! can't wait for more@!

BlairW_2
11-25-2001, 06:06 PM
Hey..thanks for all the nice compliments! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif Here is part 2..

DANGEROUS SUSPICIONS..

PART TWO

(The Next Day)
((Eastland's Cafeteria))
B: ::Sitting at table with Natalie and Tootie:: I have to find out where Jo has been going.
T: Blair, no offense..really, but I don't think its any of your buisness.
B: Oh, Tootie, your one to talk.
N: She's right though. You shouldn't get into her life and what she does in it.
B: Yeah well I have a feeling she hasn't been going to the hardware store when she said she was.
T: So you think she lied to us? To Mrs. Garett?!
B: Tootie Jo is great at lieing.
N: All I'm gonna say is that you shouldn't jump to conclusions. Maybe she isn't lieing!
B: Yeah well where could she possibly go at 11:00 PM and stay there until 5:00 AM?! All stores are closed! And I'm not jumping to conclusions. I'm going to find out WHERE she goes after all..by following her.
T & N: ::Stare at each other::
(Later that night)
(About 11:00 PM)
((The girl's bedroom))
J: ::Puts on coat::
B: ::Watches::
T & N: ::Also watching::
J ::Looks at them:: What are you staring at?
T: Oh..nothing.
J: Whatever. ::Leaves::
B: ::Gets up and puts her coat on:: Don't tell anyone about this. ::Leaves::
T: There is gonna be..
N: ::Cuts her off:: Don't say it.
(Jo walks downtown, Blair quietly following behind her. She walks past a few stores and stops on a corner. She goes down it and it appears to be an alley.)
B: Oh my gosh..this is the same alley I saw at Bloomingdales! ::Says to herself::
B: ::Walks closer and peaks down the alley, seeing the gang. And Jo with them. Some of them are taking drugs.:: Jo!! ::Yells::
(All the gang members stare)
GM1: Who the h*ll is that?
J: Blair what are you doin here?!
GM2: ::Walks up to Blair:: Well, well, well. Your pretty..good looking.
B: Uh..thank you.
GM2: How ‘bout you join our gang? Like Jo did?
B: ::Stares at Jo:: Jo…you joined this gang?
J: Yeah…yeah, I did.
B: You could be expelled from Eastland for this!
GM1: Well nobody will TELL anyone at Eastland ‘bout this little incident, will they?
B: Jo I don’t believe you. And I would never ever join this low class group of scumbags!
GM1: What did you say?
GM2: Scum bags, huh?
J: Guys..just drop it. She didn’t mean it.
GM3: No, we ain’t gonna drop it.
GM4: Do you see this? ::Pulls out a razor:: We all have one.
GM4: And we ain’t afraid to use ‘em.
J: Will you all just lay off?
::All the gang members look at Jo::
GM1: Well, sticking up for a friend, eh? It ain’t gonna work.
GM2: We’ll make you a deal, blondie. You join our gang, or we hurt you.
B: I’m really sorry but I said it once and I will say it again…I will never join your gang.
GM2: Is that so?
::One of the gang members grabbed Blair, and the other struck her with the razor in the arm::
GM2: That’s for not joining!
J: Dammit!
::Jo tackled the gang member with the razor as Blair fell to the ground in pain. Another one of the members kicked Blair in the stomach and punched her::
GM4: ::Pulls out razor and slashes Jo on the leg::
B: ::Weakly gets up but is slashed, once again on the face – the cheek. Another one of the gang members pick up Blair and see she is bleeding::
GM4: Take this ::Punches her in the eye and pushes her down::
B: ::Is unconscious::
J: ::Gets up, and runs to the nearest payphone::
::All the gang members chase her leaving Blair alone, half dead::
::Luckily, the phone is in a booth. Jo locks the booth, thankful there was a lock::
::The members try breaking the booth’s glass but can’t::
::Jo dials 911 and requests an ambulance immediately.::

THE END OF PART TWO

Part 3 will be posted soon! What do you think of the story?


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Blair Warner Warner: I think someone famous once said..tho shall not STEAL?

Dorothy Ramsey: ..I have panic attacks..

Blair Warner Warner: I see you, you little rascal! I'm gonna get you! I....GOTCHA!

Blair Warner: Turn Blue!

Blair Warner: I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas!

*Love, Cassie*

SitcomFan
11-25-2001, 06:10 PM
man getting goooooddd cant wait to read moore

Ewan's My Man
11-25-2001, 06:21 PM
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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~Lauren/Laudie~
Ya Born, Ya Move On, Ya Die, That's Life-Jo
Ya not a cat ya don't have 9 lives so don't push it!-Me
Email: Lavenderangel7@aol.com
or
musicdiva467@hotmail.com
or
chicago6789@hotmail.com
or
irishhottie77@hotmail.com
or
nancy_jo_rox4466@hotmail.com
as some of u can see I went a little hotmail crazy. HEHE!
Visit my Nancy McKeon page that is nowhere near done!
www.angelfire.com/tv2/nancy_jo

Ryanmo97
11-25-2001, 08:28 PM
Not Bad.

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BlairW_2
11-26-2001, 09:27 PM
Hi everyone, this is a notice for all people who want me to write more on this fan fiction:

I probably won't be able to write more until Friday, Saturday, or Sunday. I have alot of school work and of course that comes first. I promise all of part 3 will be up either Fri, Sat, or Sun.

Thanks! Byebye! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/outtahere.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif

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Blair Warner Warner: I think someone famous once said..tho shall not STEAL?

Dorothy Ramsey: ..I have panic attacks..

Blair Warner Warner: I see you, you little rascal! I'm gonna get you! I....GOTCHA!

Blair Warner: Turn Blue!

Blair Warner: I just had another one of my BRILLIANT ideas!

*Love, Cassie*

DSFOL
12-01-2001, 08:27 PM
WOOHOO! Praise for "Dangerous Suspicions":

"A great piece of work leaving you with a lot of excitment and dramatic part-enders. It is written in such a way, I feel like I am watching it on TV"
---DSFOL

JDS84
12-20-2001, 07:53 PM
This a very good story post some more as soon as you can ok.