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Teddys_Angel_Jinny 09-22-2001, 01:39 PM Okay, I know everyone's tired of the reunion fics, but since I haven't ever posted one, I figured I would... Please I want honest feedback, if you hate it say so.
Answered Prayers: The Facts of Life Reunion Movie
Chapter One
Trash blew across the yard. Cigarette butts, crumpled paper, and silver bits of candy wrapping flashed in the sun. Edna Garrett-Gaines stood and stared at the school that had once been so dear to her heart. It wasn’t a school anymore; it was a condemned building. She remembered all the good times that she and her girls had had there and tried to remember the last time she had talked to them. ‘Eight years ago...’ she thought. Blair was married with a four-year-old. The same held true for both Tootie and Natalie, and Jo... Jo was always the rebellious one. Always the one to go and do things without thoroughly thinking them through, but apparently she had shed her rebellious covering and had turned into a gentle mother and wife. She lived in the Bronx with Rick and their five-year-old daughter, Alexz.
Edna knew something had something had to be done between she and the girls. She had never felt comfortable about the way they had left things. She knew that she wanted the girls in her life. She needed the girls back in her life. The truth was that she was scared. Scared that they wouldn’t forgive her for the numerous things she had done to them. Some, the girls knew about, others, they didn’t.
For eight years, Edna had forced herself to believe that it was better if the girls didn’t know about those things, but the sudden death of her husband, Bruce, earlier in the spring, made her reconsider telling the girls. She hadn’t and she knew why.
Edna snapped out her thoughts, glanced at her watch, and hurried home.
Chapter Two
Beverly Ann Stickle flipped through one of the picture albums she had put together for her sister, Edna’s, Christmas present. The albums all had a theme. Each one was about one of the girls. She had gone through Edna’s drawers and found every picture, every letter, every card that they had sent her sister in the past thirteen years. Beverly Ann had carefully pressed the letters and cards on to a cardboard backing covered with a piece of construction paper to make things more colorful. She had backed each picture with double-sided tape and stuck them to colorful, sometimes decorated, lightweight, origami paper. She had started the albums with the girls’ baby pictures and had ended them with a picture of the girls’ children.
Beverly Ann wished that the girls could be there that Christmas to present Edna with their albums. It had been such a lonely holiday in the years since Andy had married and moved away. Beverly Ann didn’t want to feel that same loneliness and she was sure that Edna felt the same.
Beverly Ann rarely had an idea that worked out with no kinks, but she was certain that this one would work and work for the best. It just had to! If it didn’t, Beverly Ann felt that both she and Edna would both die. She had to succeed. She put down Natalie’s album and picked up her address book. She flipped it open and the first letter that caught her eye was “B”. She would call Jo.
And that's the first two chapters. I'll have the third and fouth up later tonight if y'al want it.
BlairW_1 09-22-2001, 02:05 PM Great so far, K! If you're expecting a long, drawn out "Oh my gosh, how kewl is this!!!" reply, yer wrong, cuz I gotta get off and call Jordan so we can plan on how to accesorize(sp?) our Spirit Week outfits, so t2yl!!! buh-byezies, lylas, and write more soon!!!
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You're coming back angrily from a Sunday service because all of your family tried to convert you into a true Christian. Yeah, you've been going to church, but you just don't buy all this Holy, Holy stuff. You take a bite of your peanut-butter sandwich, which is your breakfast. During the process of angrily honking your horn at a slow milk-truck in front of you, with about 40,000 bumperstickers on it, a wad of peanut butter gets stuck in your throat. You start coughing, and the car swerves uncontrollably. You run into the milk-truck, and it turns over on top of you, spilling milk all through your windshield and flooding your car. You stay there, almost drowning in milk, until you vaguely hear sirens and muffled voices. They carefully pull you out of the car, and place you on the strecher. One of the last things you see are two bumper stickers on a twisted piece of metal left from the truck, side by side. One of them says, "Got Milk?" the other says, "Got God?" As you are being loaded into the ambulance, you use the last of your strength to give out one final cry of pain. You close your eyes in prayer, asking the Lord to forgive you of your sins, thanking him for sending his Son to die on the cross for you. Suddenly some of what the strange man up in the pulpit has been preaching clicks in your mind, and you start to weep. You feel your strength flowing from you, but you stay calm, still mouthing, "Thank you, Jesus." You calmly take your last breath, knowing that you've finally figured something out, you've given your life to Christ, and you're going to Heaven...
Okay, was that too dramatic? Hmm, dunno, but I felt the need to type it, I've been in a witnessing mood lately. ?I intend to take this board for Jesus, well, if not at least one person, and all you have to do is do just what the person did in the story, that might be a real scenario someday, all I can tell you is be prepared. Well, TJ will kill me for this signature, buh-byezies! :)
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sue z q 09-22-2001, 02:28 PM Ya got me hooked now, K! This is soooooooooooooo good! I can't wait for more!!!
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Acting Girl 19 09-22-2001, 03:40 PM This is so good! post more asap!!!!
MrsGarrettRocksMySocks 09-22-2001, 11:31 PM Originally posted by fol and gi rock:
This is so good! post more asap!!!!
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Teddys_Angel_Jinny 09-23-2001, 05:34 PM Hey, peeps! Sorry for not posting more last night. I just got back from drama and I'm all black and blue, aren't I, Susan? lolzies... Okay I'll post more now! Oh, yeah. Look for an unexpected plot twist with Jo...
Chapter Three
Jo Bonner rubbed her eyes and turned the TV on. She flipped through the channels for a few minutes, before finally deciding to turn it off. She crossed to the stacks of cardboard boxes by the wall, found the one that said “Bedroom” and opened it, trying to find a book to read. Instead she pulled out a crocheted baby blanket and a teddy bear with blue words reading “It’s a boy!” across its chest. She hugged them both to her chest and started sobbing.
Rick opened the door to find his wife sobbing holding a blanket and a teddy bear and knew exactly what it was, without really thinking about it. He motioned for their daughter to go straight to her room without any questions. She nodded and obeyed.
Rick sat down in the floor beside his wife. “Jo...” He hugged her close and let her cry.
Jo stopped crying and looked up. “I’m sorry,” she stated.
“W... Why are you apologizing? It wasn’t your fault. He just wasn’t strong enough. Hey, how old would he be now?”
Jo sniffed and smiled. “Ten months. He‘d be walking.”
“And saying ‘Daddy’.” They laughed. It had been almost eleven months since the death of their son and Jo still refused to talk about it. The whole family had been through rough counseling. It had been especially hard on their daughter.
Alexz had always been a tomboy, but it was never that bad. When Jo found out she was pregnant again, her daughter was the first one she told. Alexz had been so excited and had stopped staying out until midnight to stay home and redecorate her room for the baby.
Ricky had been born three months premature and his lungs weren’t completely developed. He had spent almost a month in the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit at the hospital on life support. His sister had gone to visit him every day until the day he died. She sang to him, held his hand, and read him storybooks. The day he died, Alexz had fled the hospital and didn’t return until after the infant’s funeral. Since then, she’d been staying out all night with boys, drinking, and basically being the little bad girl that her parents had tried to keep her from turning into. Then they moved.
Jo and Rick wanted their daughter out of the Bronx and into a more positive neighborhood. It had taken them over five months to find an apartment in the “better side” of the Bronx. They had moved and unpacked only the essentials to live. The rest was still in cardboard boxes.
Jo was still crying and Rick was still holding her tight when the phone rang.
Jo pulled herself together and answered the phone.
Chapter Four
Alexz Bonner lay on her bed with her Walkman turned up almost all the way. She thought Robert and her stomach turned a somersault. She grew nervous about later that night. She really shouldn’t feel nervous. It wasn’t the first time she’d snuck out of the house at night, but it was her first time to sneak out of the house to go to a boy’s house. An older boy’s house. Her mom would croak if she found out that Alexz was seeing a twenty-year-old. Not only seeing, but kissing, and... She’d gone farther with Robert than she had with any other boy. She had liked boys her age and they liked her because the rumor was that she was easy. Alexz let them believe it and actually played into the role. She’d let them do pretty much anything they wanted to do with her, but she’d never gone “all the way”. Then she met Robert and all of her dignity and self-pride returned almost instantly. She’d gotten all that back, but she’d lost something in the process. Her--
“Erika Alexzandra Marie Bonner! Open this door immediately!”
No tellin’ how long Ma’s been knockin’, Alexz thought, shut her Walkman off, and opened the door. “What?”
“Pack!” Jo exclaimed, opened her daughter’s closet, and started throwing clothes out of the door.
“Ma, are we movin’ again?” Alexz crossed her arms over her chest.
Jo looked up. “No, we’re going for a visit. To Peekskill.”
“Peekskill? When are we leaving?”
“Tonight. This afternoon, really,” Jo answered.
Alexz groaned. “Can’t we leave tomorrow?”
Jo cocked her head. “Okay. But you’re going out tonight.”
“Okay.” Alexz. “Just as long as I have plenty of time to pack.”
Jo walked back into the living room and mumbled, “Well, that was easy.” She picked up her book and started reading.
Okay Up next is........ (Drumroll...................................)
Blair Warner Stevens!
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Jo/Blair_fan 09-23-2001, 05:45 PM This is so good!!!!!!!! Post ASAP!!!!!!!!!!
sue z q 09-23-2001, 05:48 PM LOL, K, I know all about your bruises...lol...post more soon! I can't wait!
Acting Girl 19 09-23-2001, 06:30 PM post more NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!
or whenever please? this is so good!
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MrsGarrettRocksMySocks 09-23-2001, 09:16 PM THIS IS SOOOO GOOD!! It's very well written I'm lookin forward to more, so post more ASAP!!!!BTW I'm so jealous you have drama, my town is so small, we dont' have a drama class or drama club or ANYTHING that has to do with DRAMA!!!
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Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!!
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Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy!
Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important!
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you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!!
KerriBerri687 09-23-2001, 09:22 PM woh! this is really gr8 so far! cant wait for more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif
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Swimfan85 09-23-2001, 10:38 PM ok im confused how old is alexz supposed to be..? ok but neways this kicks ass so please add more soon!
Teddys_Angel_Jinny 09-23-2001, 11:34 PM She's thirteen... Well... Yeah... She's thirteen. Why do you ask? *Because she was confused,Kenzie!* Duh, me! Y'know if you say that fast enough it sounds like dummy. nvm... More later peeps!
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KerriBerri687 09-29-2001, 01:21 PM just bumpin this up becuz it's really good! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif annnnd i kno ur gonna write more and all...i just feel like bumpin it up..dont ask...im bored...lol
WildChildJinny 09-29-2001, 02:31 PM Ok, I just read this for the first time and I just gotta say... WOW! This is great! I WANT MORE! (LOL, Please!)
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Rumors are just a person's way of trying to make you feel down about yourself. You just have to accept the fact that people will talk behind your back and you need to ignore it. That which doesn't kill you will make you stronger!
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One day a policeman saw a man speeding so he took a picture of his license plate.
The next day, the man received a ticket and a photograph of his license plate in the mail. So he sent the police a photo of the money he was supposed to pay for his fine.
Two days later, the man received a picture of a pair of handcuffs.
*Tell me that that isn't the funniest thing that you eva heard!*
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In the words of Cyndi Lauper: Girls just want to have fun. What's the point of planning for the future? I want the most out of today!-Jinny Exstead.
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Ewan's My Man 09-29-2001, 04:24 PM Awesome fic...keep it going!!!!
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Wild Child 09-30-2001, 07:14 PM This is really good.Please add more soon!
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Acting Girl 19 09-30-2001, 10:23 PM What about Blair Warner Stevens? PLEASE POST MORE SOOOOOOOOOON!!!! please?
My 200th post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WildChildJinny 10-08-2001, 09:05 AM Kenzie, I know for a fact that you have some good stuff oh the way. But could you hurry up? PlEaSe! I already know about Blair, but []b I GOTTA FIND OUT ABOUT NAT AND TOOTIE! [/b] (Oh gee, I wonder why.) PLEASE Chickadee! (Oh wait, or am I just the Chikadee? LOL) MORE PLEASE!
Teddys_Angel_Jinny 10-08-2001, 10:18 PM Okay, okay, I know I have been unfaithful in posting two chapters a night! *Ducks as tomatoes are thrown at me.* But, talking to Caitlin has gotten me unblocked! Thank you, Caitlin! In fact we brainstormed together. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif ya, chickadee! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif So here's Blair's chapters. Enjoy!
Chapter Five
Blair Warner Stevens sighed and took the bag of ice off her eye. She glanced in the mirror at her swollen eye. It’s going to bruise, she thought. “Oh, well! It’s nothing a little make up won’t cover up,” she said to herself and took out her make up case. She carefully applied foundation and powder to her red eye. While she worked she thought. What had happened to her life? When Jo and Rick moved to New York, she had sold Eastland, and moved to California to find a new life. She had enrolled in a J.C. and met Blaine Stevens, the tall, dark, and athletic baseball player. Since they were only taking side classes, when Blaine asked her to marry him, she said yes and two weeks they were married. Blair and Blaine seemed like they were the perfect couple, and Blair was sure she wasn’t going to turn out like her mother and have three different husbands. So, naturally, children were next on Blair’s list. Blaine thought differently though, and when Blair discovered she was pregnant five months after their marriage, he started hitting.
Eventually, Blaine landed a job as pitcher for the Saint Louis Cardinals and uprooted Blair and their two-month-old Rachel to Missouri.
It had been rough at first, Blaine was almost constantly gone and Blair missed him horribly, but when he was home he hurt her, both emotionally and physically. Soon, she adapted and started to look forward to the weeks when Blaine was gone, it meant another week that she wouldn’t be hurt.
She glanced at the clock that read 3:16. Rachel would be coming through the door at any second and Blair didn’t want her daughter to see her applying makeup to her eye. Blair added one finishing touch to the black eye that was practically invisible now. “I am good!” she took one last look in at her reflection in the mirror and then went to the kitchen to check on the cook’s progress with the chicken alfredo she was preparing for Rachel’s surprise birthday party.
Chapter Six
Rachel Stevens was shocked; in more ways than one. It was her birthday and she had had no idea that her mother was giving her a birthday party. It was her first ever. Her father hadn’t approved of parties unless they were drunken brawls with teammates after beating the Yankees or something that had to do with baseball. But the other way was pain. Pain she had felt before. Though her mother had done an excellent covering it, Rachel knew a black eye when she saw it.
Rachel was a very pretty young girl in her pre-teens with long, curly blonde hair, crystal blue eyes, and her mother’s perky nose. She was spoiled and a snob looking down on everyone whom she thought was below her, which was pretty much everyone in the free world. She had been raised a debutante, and that’s what she felt. Little did she know, that her idea of life was about to change drastically.
“Mom, what happened to your eye?” she ventured.
Blair stood back, gently touched her eye, and smiled. “Surprise! Look! You have a cake this year, and I had Mary made you your--”
“Mom,” Rachel interrupted. “I asked you what happened to your eye.”
Blair sighed and tried to come up with a believable reason for her eye to be swollen. “Well... You caught me, Rach. The chandelier hit me in the eye when I was changing the light bulb! Yep. Oh, it hurt like the dickens!”
Rachel raised one eyebrow and looked at her mother. She had never known her mother to change a light bulb or do anything else that might break a manicured nail, but, since she didn’t want to hear the truth she went with the theory that there was a first time for everything and acted like she believe the statement. “Right. Oh, Mary! It looks delicious!” She sat down at the head of the table. At the other end sat her mother, and Mary stood in the doorway to the kitchen. “Mary, come eat with us. Dad isn’t home and you put so much work into this meal.”
Blair smiled at her daughter’s generosity. Then the phone rang. She excused herself from the table and answered it.
Fifteen minutes later, Blair sat back down at the dinner table and said, “Rachel, how would you like to take a little trip to Peekskill?”
Okay, next is Natalie Green!
Ags2000 10-09-2001, 01:52 PM Sounds good so far. Can't wait for more.
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Blair: Well, how do you like my tree?
Nat: What are bananas doing on a Palm Tree?
Blair: The bird needed something to sit on. Besides, I wanted a splash of color.
Jo: You want color? Shoot the bird!
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WildChildJinny 10-09-2001, 03:05 PM KENZIE! I http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif LOVE http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/heart.gif YOU! But the Natalie-chapter is the one that I really want to read. (HmMmMm, I wonder why! LOL) More Soon!
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Acting Girl 19 10-09-2001, 07:31 PM Ireally like this alot! You have to post more!!!!
sue z q 10-09-2001, 08:29 PM MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Yup, yup, that's all I wanted to say. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
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MrsGarrettRocksMySocks 10-09-2001, 09:34 PM POST MORE ASAP cause this is really good!!
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*Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas!
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my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!!
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I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!!
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Estelle:You're lucky I'm a lady, or I'd knock your teeth out!
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IM me using piggy2111 or The GGirls R Koo
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Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!!
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Estelle:There's more to life than football, Jimmy!
Jimmy: Yea, but there's nothing more important!
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you have to admit, you CAN'T ARGUE WITH MRS.GARRETT!!
Panda Bear 11-15-2001, 11:23 PM Hello, I'm just bumping this up in hopes that it'll be updated. I'm leaving for competion at four o'clock tomorrow moring, and coming home at four o'clock Sunday morning. I'm hoping that when I check in I'll see some more of this story.
~ Panda Bear
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Teddys_Angel_Jinny 11-15-2001, 11:46 PM Okie dokie chickadees and sirs, I'm thinkin' that I'm gonna post the rest of this when I get it done. Only becuz if I post it in sections, it's gonna give away the big surprise at the very end. So, please bear with me and I'll have it posted in no time! I'll be gone all this weekend but I'll be home all next week, then I have three weeks til I'm out for another two weeks for Christmas, so it shouldn't take that long. Thank you for dealing with me!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Babes_Cat 09-21-2002, 12:35 AM Originally posted by Teddys_Angel_Jinny
Okie dokie chickadees and sirs, I'm thinkin' that I'm gonna post the rest of this when I get it done. Only becuz if I post it in sections, it's gonna give away the big surprise at the very end. So, please bear with me and I'll have it posted in no time! I'll be gone all this weekend but I'll be home all next week, then I have three weeks til I'm out for another two weeks for Christmas, so it shouldn't take that long. Thank you for dealing with me!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Shouldnt take that long? Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh Kenzie! PLEASE!
james_baby87 09-21-2002, 06:57 PM I hate to push people but I got to say this Hurry up!!!! This is great!
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