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DramaQueenTootie
02-02-2001, 09:44 PM
Hey everybody! ok this is like my second fan fic. I hope you all like it!!!!!! Please read and tell me your thoughts about it so I can add more! thank you! enjoy!
~*Alicia*~
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(camera shows Mrs. G shuffling through papers near her phone)

MG: Oh no! I can't belive i lost the paper with the girls gate #
and time that they are coming in!
::Bruce is sitting on the couch::
Br: Come on Edna you know that you put the paper in the car
MG: Why didn't you tell me that thrity minutes ago when I asked for it?
Br: I was watching a game, I wasn't paying attention to you babbling
MG: Bruce! ohrrrrrrr come on! were gonna be late on picking them up
and I haven't seen them since Tootie's Wedding! I'll be in the car, you
grab the camera and hurry on out here!
Br: ok ok I'm coming

(camera focuses in side plane, jo and Blair sitting together and Nat and
Tootie sitting together.)

B: It is going to be great seeing Mrs. G and Bruce again!
T: yeah I can't wait!
N: She does know that you and cliff are engaged rigt Blair?
B: not exactly, just that we are very close personalities
J: More like completly and totally in sepreable
B: Not true Jo, he isn't here is he?
J: ummm blair the security guards practically had to pry
him away from the door to the plane
B: well he just loves me, that's all
::stewardess gets on speeker::
S: Hello ladies and gentlemen the pilot has turned on the fasten seat belt sign
indicating that there may be some turbulance ahead in our path to the east
coast of Africa. Please fasten your seal belts and talk in a low manner.
B: No way Jo!, Rick is not even close to being as sensable as Cliff, for
example check out my engagement ring
J: wow Blair! how did he get reall orange carrots in that tiny piece of glass?
B: talking about Ricks ring for you again I should have know it's ok dear
I'm here for you, I won't gloat about my $25,000 ring from Paris don't worry
J: Oh blow it out your glass eye Blair!
S: um the pilot has requested low mannered talking which indicates your
talking to .... loud.
T: I think you should listen to her Jo
J: Thanks Tootie!, ::raising a fist:: blair can learn to kep her mouth shut until
the rest of the flight
::Stewardess walks to pilots area then races back into first class::
::all of a sudden the plane rushes into a free fall, then up again the down and up!"
B: What the heck is going on?!
S: attention people are planes left engin was just struck but lighting from the
storm we have encountered, stay calm, yeah right, stay calm and the piilot
will attempt to make and emergency landing on the Islands near Port Sudan.
There will be a slight, um sure why not, slight collison with the fast
approaching ground.
:: the plane goes back into free fall::
S: please! once landed un fasten your seat belts and get out of the plane in
an ORDERLY fashion through the exits located at the un damages end of
the plane, then run as far way from the vehical as possible thank you and
.....good luck to all
J: just our luck thank you blair this was your idea! so it's your fault we are
going to die
T: um Jo do you think you could be just a bit more positve...thanks
B: Jo dont' be mad please
J: sorry but I am always mad at you for something.....imean hey im jo
B: I love you guys
J: yeah love you all too
T: ahhh me too
N:me too! now lets live through this crap and go see Mrs. G!
:: drunk guy behind them::
D: I love you too!yippie!
:: the plane skirts towards the earth...5.......4......3........2...........1!!! the plane smashes into tree after tree leaving itself a twisted piece of metal and fire and...trees.::

hey you guys how is it so far? cya

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

[This message has been edited by DramaQueenTootie (edited 02-03-2001).]

BlairW_4
02-02-2001, 09:54 PM
AWESOME

BlairW_4
02-02-2001, 09:55 PM
i really love it

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-02-2001, 10:31 PM
great...great leave us in suspense till the next time u post it!! ahhhhhh http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago
T: right
N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed
T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed?
N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed
T: i dont do that
N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better
T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything?
N: it doesnt irritate me much
T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH?
B: my my my trouble in paridise?
T: you butt out of this blair
J: you tell her tootie
T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench

DramaQueenTootie
02-03-2001, 03:18 PM
::the girls are tangled up in the twisted metal::
(Jo is concious but has a severe cut bleeding on her torn forehead)
(blair seems to be concious and not seriously hurt)
(Nat is unconcious covered in gray mud)
(Tootie is no where to be found)
:: a large metel piece crashes between the rows striking Nat on the elbow::
J: blair are you.....
B:Jo your ok i was afriad to ask. oh no Nat's unconcious. Oh my god
where is Tootie!?
J: Blair we need to get us and Nat out of here immediately!
B: Right hey is anyone eles concious?
J: (looks back for the first time) um blair there isn't anyone eles
(the whole coach part of the plaane wasn't but 200 yards away from
them, a ball of fire, no people anywhere)
B: (looks back) Oh my god Jo were the only survivors,
Jo: blair check nat for a pulse!
B: um ok, can you move that sheet of metel
J: (manuveres her ay towards the metel and gives it a push) hey blaire
it won't budge, climb across the stewardess and help me push!
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifa surprised look on her face reluctantly climbs over the plane seat and
across the unconcious stewardesses lap) ok Jo now what?
J: on the count of three...push.......1.......2.......3!
(they push the sheet of bent keel metel and chucked it out the gaping
back end of the plane.
B: ok (she moves to nat and checks for a pulse) She has a pulse!!!!!
J: great un fasten her seat belt and high tail it outta here, if we get separated
flail around the neon scarf your whereing and il find you! ok?
B: ok ,here the belts undone take her to the right and out I'll be there asap!
J: Blair! this things gonna blow! forget about your make up bag!
(jo crouches to free her and nat of the twisted mess)
(blair grabs her carry on bag)
(jo gets away from the plane as fast as she can with Nat hanging to her shoulder
still unconcious. She looks back to see Blair escape from the plane just seconds
from the mass explosion!)

(Camera focases on Mrs. G and bruce waiting at a gate in the Sudan international airport)
MG: where are they? what could have happend? They were supposed to be
here over an hour ago!
Br: i'm sure their plane is fine probably just a delay because of the storm.
Mg: yeah your probably right, (she sits in a chair facing a TV with a news
channel on it)nothing has happunnnnd!!!!!!!Oh my god!!!!!!Bruce!! the TV.... look!
TV: flight 286 from JIA on route to Sudan international has dissapeared from
radar 5 times in the past hour before dissapearing completely only 30 minutes
flight time away from their desination. No word on where the plane has landed
yet. Tv News will bring you up to the minute news on this flight as soon as word
is in back to you jim.
MG: oh my gosh! the girls were on that flight! wher could they be?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?
(Mrs G starts sobbing and looks out the window at the pouring rain representing her tears)

Ok I gtg give my dog a bath so I'll write more later cya!

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

DramaQueenTootie
02-03-2001, 04:29 PM
Ok I don't want to go through all the work of typeing the rest of the story if no body is going to comment on it. And hey constructive critisim is good! ONce i hear what you think I will add more ASAP!!!! thanks cya

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
AIM at gliterpupp

BlairW_4
02-03-2001, 04:31 PM
ADD MORE NOW PLEASE lol..i mean asap

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"I have another one of my brilliant ideas!" -Blair
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"The worst thing about falling asleep at the wheel is you didn't get to see your life flash before your eyes." -Blair
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"Turn Blue!!" -Blair
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Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-03-2001, 05:44 PM
its great!!!!!!!!! keep posting it!

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n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago
T: right
N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed
T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed?
N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed
T: i dont do that
N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better
T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything?
N: it doesnt irritate me much
T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH?
B: my my my trouble in paridise?
T: you butt out of this blair
J: you tell her tootie
T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench

Jo_Po
02-03-2001, 07:36 PM
Keep posting it! You are off to a great start!

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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph:)

factsfanatic
02-03-2001, 07:57 PM
I think it is great too. Please post more.

BlairW_1
02-03-2001, 08:05 PM
Ditto!

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T: Oh no! She's right! Sweet little me IS a mass murderer! But I don't remember any of it. Multiple personalities! That's gotta be it! Six faces of me! Each face responsible for a different death! Andy, George, Natalie, Blair, Beverly Ann, Jo.
B: And then there was Tootie!
T: AAAAHHHHH! Blair! But... I thought you were...
B: Dippity-dooed? That's what I wanted everyone to think! That made it easier to get rid of the rest of you!
T: You? You're the murderer? Blair, that's so inconsiderate!
B: Don't you see? That's part of my plan to eliminate everyone who falls under the fifty percent tax bracket!
T: But we were your friends!
B: My friends don't wear polyester! They don't drive motorcycles or ramblers! They don't buy their shoes from the supermarket!
T: I get mine from Paris, honest!
B: Face it, Tootie! You're hopelessly middle-class!
T: Blair! Blair! Please, wait! Please! Blair! Oh no! AAHH!
BA: No, please, please! No! Don't kill Tootie! No!
N: Beverly Ann, wake up!
BA: Don't drink the cocoa!
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~Danielle~

DramaQueenTootie
02-03-2001, 08:14 PM
You want it you got it.....but don't let this part like make you turn away cuz it's a really dull part of the story until they look for tootie...but i can't tell you it yet hehe! later enjoy! ~*Alicia*~

::It's morning, the rain from the previous night has put out the fires from
the plane which is separated into to pieces::
(Jo Blair and Nat are sleeping huddled under a group of trees far from the
plane near a beach)
(Blair wakes up)
B: Oh my gosh, it wasn't a dream....we crashed...Jo..and mee got Nat out...
..and Tootie.................Oh my gosh where's Tootie? Jo? Jo wake up!
J: (wakes up from her sleep) What is it Blair? oh no the nightmare was real
...were stuck on an Island with a plane and the other people in the plane.....
didn't survive. oh no..Hey is Nat ok?
B: um......let me check...(she reaches over to Nat and checks for a pulse.)
yeah she's ok, see if you can wake her up.
J: Nat, hey Nat, you ok in there, wake up Nat, Natalie.......
(Nat slowly but surely opens her eyes seeing for the first time what has happend)
N: hey you guys are you ok....OW my elbow!
J: ewww looks like we need to get you to a hospital
B: and what about you Jo?
J: huh?
B: here look..(takes a mirror out of her bag)
(Jo takes the mirror)
J: oh it's just a scratch i'll be fine
B: if you say so, be careful not to get those thing infected yu know all those
icky bacteria things can cause all those evil illnesses and then your head
and elbows will get green and puffy bubbly and
J: (cuts in) Your face is fixen to be puffy not to mention the colors of the
rainbow! We do not need your sofisticated lectures right now Blair!
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk fine just trying to help the situation
N: (gets up looks around at the enviorment and trying to see Tootie)
umm you guys where's Tootie?
J: um nat we never.....
B: ahhhhhhaha Natalie natalie...Tootie who?
N: You know what Tootie Blair! Where is she?!
B: Well
Jo: we didn't find her
N: (frantically) did you look?
J: we we kinda more into getting us outta the plane before it exploded!
N: yeah and i'm greatful but where is my best friend??????
B: I just got one of my brilliant ideas!
N: Not now blair!
B: I meant that we should go and look for her! The island is pretty small
lets go find her
J: ok we have to look. we better check around the plane pieces first then
look through the trees but no matter what we have to stick together!
Nat and Blair together: Right!

Ok guys sory but that's all I had time for i'll add more ASAP tell me what
what you think in the mean time! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

DivisionFan_Jinny
02-04-2001, 10:34 AM
this is good so far!

Alicia, you HAVE to write more soon!

iluvfacts14
02-04-2001, 11:13 AM
THIS IS GREAT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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Mrs. G.: ...the whole subject of retardation was strictly off-limits..

Natalie: ....so was sex, religion, and politics, what was left?

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Natalie: I'm not jealous.....I'm wounded.

DramaQueenTootie
02-04-2001, 05:28 PM
Hey people how are you i am adding to this now i guess hehe. hope you like it!
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::Camera focuses on Mrs G. pacing back and forth at the airport, bruce
is at a lounge getting some donuts and coffee.::
MG: where are they!? they were so close and now no one knows if
they are even alive! oh no! they must be! but where?????
Br: (comes over and gives her her donut and cup of coffee) hey how are you doin?
MG: Bruce why did i make them come visit why?
Br: you didn't MAKE them come they wanted the reunion just as much
as you, besides it was Blairs idea wasn't it?
MG: I think so, but still I could have gone there and none of this would
have happend
Br: what happend?
MG: that's exactly the point! i have no idea what happend and niether does anyone eles!
Br: why don't we head home annd watch the news, getting upset here
won't help, you need to be home right now.
MG: i guess home sounds good, maybe one of the girls called! what are
you waiting for let go c'mon hurry!
:: they head home as fast as they can to "no new messages"::

(camera switches over to focus on Bliar Nat and Jo walking toward
the charred back end of the plane)
Jo: Blair if you don't want to come this close you don't have to
B: I know but I donit want to be by myself out here!
N: (looks at a rather large orange beetle and jumps back a bit) heck i don't blame you!
J: Hey nat when we get outta here you'll have a novel to write won't
you
N: I don't want to think about that right now, i just want to find tootie and then plann our escape from this mess.
B: hey look !
J: what?
B: there's a Blooming Dales catalog!
N: Blair!!!!!!!!
B: oh right, Tooie are you in there?(calling to the plane)
J: no answer guys, lets go around to the other side
(they walk around and spy a bag on the ground)
N: hey that's Tootie's!
B: That mean theres hope c'mon we gotta find her!
J maybe she's over towards the other half of the plane you guys!
hurry up!(they run over to the plane but slow as they near it
B: wow.......it's been engulfed by fire
J: yeah I'm so glad we got outta that
N: (sadly) me too(starts wandering off)
J: what are we going to do
B: Oh no what if we find Tootie but she's
J: don't say it Blair.......don't
B: your right lets keep looking
J: we can leave nat to herself for a little while.
B: yeah
:: they walk around the plane pieces searching for Tootie::
(nat sits leaning against a huge tree, far from the others)
N: what if we don't find her, what am I going to do? I miss her soo much!
(she starts to weep, a tear rolls down her face)
:: then nat hears a grumbled moan from the tree::
N: (thinking to herself) oh my god either I'm going crazy or that
tree is talking to me
::she gets up slowly then quietly looking at the tree tip toes
around it's hull to the back)
N: OH MY GOSH TOOTIE!!!!!!!!!!
T: (queitly) Nat is that you?
N: yes it's me Tootie are you ok?!?!?!?!
T: I don't know, where are the others?
N: stay there and don't move a muscle I'll be right back
T: and she says don't move
(camera focuses on Jo and blair)
N: you guys you guys!!!!!!!Jo!!!! blair!!!!!! I found her!!!!!!!!!!

to be continued ASAP.....how is it so far?

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
AIM at gliterpupp

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-04-2001, 06:29 PM
great cant wait to read the next part!!

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n: girls girls girls what do people usually fight over? the little things, ignor the little things and lifes a breeze..for instence if i got irritated over all the little things that tootie did we would have split up a long time ago
T: right
N: who cares if she always leaves her books on my bed
T: yea u see its like when...i always leave my books on your bed?
N: yea, you walk in and instead of dropping them on your bed you drop them on my bed
T: i dont do that
N: you do, but dont worry, your a kid you dont know any better
T: uhuh well if irritated you so much then why didnt you say anything?
N: it doesnt irritate me much
T: well is there anything else I do that doesnt irritate you MUCH?
B: my my my trouble in paridise?
T: you butt out of this blair
J: you tell her tootie
T: the same goes for you too Mr. Goodwrench

iluvfacts14
02-04-2001, 07:32 PM
ALICIA! Post more now! This is great!

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Mrs. G.: ...the whole subject of retardation was strictly off-limits..

Natalie: ....so was sex, religion, and politics, what was left?

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Natalie: I'm not jealous.....I'm wounded.

DramaQueenTootie
02-04-2001, 09:50 PM
ok everyone here is some more!!!


(the girls are huddled around tootie under a tree)

B: tootie what happend to your leg are you ok?
T: Yeah I think so
J: how did you get under the tree?
T: well i was in the plane with you guyz when we hit the ground then
I flew out the back and...
N: then what happend?!?!?
T: (weakly)I knew i had to get away so I dragged my self over here,
I heard Jo yelling to Blair but I guess i was to out of it to help. Then I heard
the explosion, i thought you were gone
N: I would have been if it wasn't for Jo and Blair
B: I know my brillance conquers all!
J: Blair
B: mmmhmmm
J: Turn Blue
B: hmph
N: hey Jo we should get some leaves or something to put on your head
T: hey, you can get some from that bush over there
N: k hold on ( walks over to a bush and picks of some leaves)Here Jo let me do it
B: (giggles)
J: What is it blair????
B: oh nothing
N: hey my hands are begining to sting owww it hurts
J: holy crap Natalie this stupid leaf is poisonious!!!!! oh my gosh get it off!!!!
get it off!!!!(she throws the leaf off her head towards blair)
B: hey don't throw it at me
T: umm you guys, don't we have better things to worry about
N: she's right were all in need of a doctor not to mention water and food,
did anyone see a first aid kit
J: probly burnt from the explosion
B: I wouldn't say that
T: no jo's right it wasn't fire proof
B: it wasn't in the fire
TN&J: (look over to the plane thinking how in the heck did it not shrivle up and melt)
N: uh Blaire would you care to explain that?
B: sure, while getting my carry on bag
J: (interupts) which has nothing but make up in it might i add
B: no you may not, i had one of my brilliant ideas, I saw the first aid kit
near the stewardess and snatched it and threw it in my bag before the plane exploded
N: great where is it?
B: right over by the big oak tree
T:great!
J: I'll get it
(the oak tree is located near the front part of the plane)
N: hey I'll come with you
(they head toward the tree)
(Jo is the first to get to the bag and unzips it open)
J: How much make up does it take to look natural!?
N: (glances in the bag) I had no idea she owned that much crap
B: (yelling from the other tree) don't you mess up anything in there!!!
it's $875 worth of stuff in the make up compartment alone
J: sheesh, now where's that 1st aid kit?
N: it that it in the corner?
J: yeah here you hold on to it till we back to the tree. hey do you smell something
N: yeah it's we kinda like charcoal
J: oh my god! Natalie run at fast as you can back to the tree!!!that's gas!
(The plane take one final explosion!) (the impulse rush smashes Nat and Jo)
B&T: NOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
AIM at gliterpupp

iluvfacts14
02-04-2001, 10:11 PM
This is awesome! Post more a.s.a.p.!

BlairW_4
02-04-2001, 10:13 PM
oh my gosh this is so good i hope jo and nat are alright POST SOME NOW

DramaQueenTootie
02-05-2001, 07:59 PM
Ok you asked for it so here!!!!
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(camera focuses on Mrs. G who is walking into her house racing to the answering machine to see if there are any messages from the girls)
MG: (pushes the flashing button on the message machine)
AM(answering machine): You have one new message, beep! hey Mrs.G and everyone it's Jeff, I was just wondering how the flight was but ummm oh my gosh the plane I umm Mrs.G please call me as soon as you get home Please!, beep!
MG: Jeff it wouldn't do me any good to cal you we'll both be upset
Br: (comes in) Hey did the girls call
MG: no but Jeff did
Br: oh ok hey you've been up since 6:00 yesterday morning why don't you take a break and a nap I wake you first thing if there is any news ok?
MG: ok sure right a nap will be good for me. I'll sleep right here on the couch and eh uhh eh(fals fast alseep as she sinks into the sofa.
Br: (chuckles a ittle but quickly his smile turns to a frown when he thinks of the girls

(camera focuses on Blair as she runs towards the flames)
T: Blair No you'll get your self killed!
B: No I have to sae them!
T: ( gets up from her spot by the tree and struggles to race after Blair and pulll her away from the fire)
Blair get BACK!!!!
B: no! Jo Jo!!!!!!!Nat!!!!!!!Can you here me!!!!???????
(nothing)
T: Blair! ( she grasps her arm) stay back blair!
(two shadows can be seen in the flames)
T: It's them! Jo Nat Hurry! come on!!!!
(the camera focuses to Jo's determined face)
J: c'mon Nat we have to get outta ow this hold on to my sleeve and don't let go!
N: Ahhhhh don't worry!
(Blair and Tootie watch anxiously as Jo and Nat make their way through the flames, once free they fall to the ground and roll towards Tootie and Blair)
B: jo! nat!
T: C'mon you guys keep rolling your almost out
(the flawmes are snuffed out)
J: oh my gosh Nat are you ok?
N: I think so, (coughs) did you get the 1st aid kit?
J: I um no I didn't but that's not the point
(The plane still engulfed in flames)
B: There were two 1st aid kits right?
T: yeah why?
N: I think so
B: well i don't remember seeing the other one
J: hey niether do I, it wasn't there when we were looking for Tootie
N: so where is it?
J: that is a good question
( voice can be heard singing from behind them)
B: Jo is that you?
J: No Nat?
N: Tootie?
T: um guys uh heheh check it out we arn't the only survivors
(they all turn around to see the drunk guy that was seated behind them on the plane ride dancing towards them)
DG: hey you sweeties how are ya!?
B: Oh no not him of all people, no offence
DG: none taken hot stuff!
J: hey Blair I guess you can get a guy to hit on you
B: don't give me that Jo
N: ow my ankle is burned really badly
DG: hey shoooey you think that's bad take a looky at my fingertippsies! there are only 2 on this hand! Hey looks like you need some first aid lemmie go gets some whiskeys and rum bum hey maybe that kit i sntched will come in handy! be right back! (walks off to retrieve the items)
T: he has the first aid kit?
B: he has no fingertips
N: he hit on blair?
J: he saved the whiskey and rum?
T: well if he can help us in anyway i'm greatful
N: yeah We need to bandage our cuts and stuff before the
B: icky nasty bacteria things jump into you and you die of mukerskelpelus
J: What is wrong with her?!
DG: here we go you all drink somer that ther whiskers and the painy will fly away like a purty birtie!
B: ah heh right none for me thanks
J: Blair!
B: what I'm not a seriously hurt like you all
DG: I like you, you likes mes to hic-up how about a little kissy kissy pucker up! (makes a fish face and leans to kiss blair but she dodges and misses him completely)
B: I don't think so!
J: awww Blaire, ho sweet just like little kindergartners and hey he even has the missing teeth!
N: not to mention the straggley hair
T: yeah Blair it's gott be love at first sight (giggles)
B: ewwww!I'm gonna go get that Blooming Dales catalog ta ta!
(she walks off toward the other half of the plane)
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That's all for now guys! more later tonight catchya later!
~*Alicia*~

BlairW_1
02-05-2001, 08:12 PM
Thanks for not letting me (Coughs.) err... Blair die! I was crying when Jo and Nat were engulfed in the flames!

DramaQueenTootie
02-05-2001, 08:20 PM
well i knew that no one wanted anyone to die soo i didn't make them lol! how is it so far?

iluvfacts14
02-05-2001, 09:16 PM
Alicia! I LOVE IT! I'm so glad you added on, but I need more! You can't leave me hangin'!

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-06-2001, 10:28 AM
keep going it is awesome!!!

DivisionFan_Jinny
02-06-2001, 12:08 PM
Alicia-it's really good so far. you have to post more.(hey, can u think of any songs to go w/ this thing? heeeheeeheee!)

DramaQueenTootie
02-07-2001, 09:10 PM
hey I will post more asap but um what did you mean by a song?

DramaQueenTootie
02-09-2001, 10:33 PM
here is some more for your reading pleasure!
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(camera focuses on Mrs. G who is still sleeping on the couch the TV is on and Bruce is writing something by the phone)
Br: (to himself) I'll see you soon Jeff, sincerely, bruce
TV: coming up next at GBC new at 6, a smal beep has been popping up on the radar system indicateing where the plane ,flight 286 from JIA to Sudan has landed.
Br: Edna! Edna!
MG: hmmm oh what?! what?!
BR: The plane they have located the beep from the black box on radar!
MG: So they are going to find them?
Br: yes yes
MG: oh no!
Br: no? why oh no?
MG: well what if there are...no survivors?
BR: you are not going to think about that do you understand me?
MG: oh Brruce, how can I not think about it?
BR:by thinking about how much you are praying and hoping for them
MG: your right
Br: not to mention to pray that they are safe and they arn't hurt or hungry
MG: I used to feed them
Br: yes Edna i know
MG: I really did, well they helped cook a little
BR: right Edna
MG: (yawns) you know im just going to lie down for a little bit more ok?
Br: sure
MG: and you tell me if anything more news happends ok?
Br: ok i will
MG: and bruce? (small smile)
Br: yeah?
MG: Thanks

(camera focuses on Nat, Tootie, and Jo the drunk guy is swinging from a tree near by and blair is at the side of another tree flipping through out the magizine)
N: that guy is a nut
T: I wonder what he is like when he isn't drunk.
N: good question
T: thanks, but i have a better one
N: what's that?
T: Jo.....
J: What?
T: May I ask what we are going to be eating
N: (interupts) hey your right that is a better one)
T: thanks, so...Jo?
J: (eying the drunk guy) every thought of turning to cannibalism?
T: c'mon Jo be serious
J: well there is a streem over there we could see if there are any fish or catch a bird or something.
N: A bird? were going to eat a bird?
J: Natalie?
N: yeah?
J: What are chickens?
N: poultry?
T: (whispers to Nat) I think the answer is a bird
N: Really? thanks Tootie.
T: No problem.
J: and Nat?
N: hmm?
J: just curious, (laughs) what are turkeys?
N: (gestures toward the man swinging from the tree) That guy?
(He falls)
DG: Owieeeeeeee
J: no, he sounds like a bird but he doesn't fly.
N: hey look! It's a mudd bath anyone want to go for a swim? (laughs)
T: I'll pass
J: hmm we actually should check it out
T: Are you nuts???!?!!?!?
J: not to swim in I mean to see if there are any worms or anything edible in there
N: Go Jo!, at least one of my friends is using their head today.
(They see the Drunk hitting his noggin against the tree)
J: you might want to make that two friends
N: Freheheeind?
J: I'm just playing witchya c'mon
N: ( following Jo and Tootie to the mud) friend?
T: Nat.....
(camera swiches to the mud pond, the girls approach and start talking)
T: ewwww talk about some icky mud
N: tha's sick! and you want me to eat something from that? It might eat me!!
J: That's stupid Nat.
(Blair comes up behind them)
B: Hey guys!check this fabulous dress in this Blooming Dales Catalog! It's lavender and periwinkle and loooww cut! (waves the calalog infront of their faces)
J: Blair we are a little more interesting in our meals than a stupid purple dress!
B: Excuse me, it is lavender and
J: (cuts her off) Ok a stupid lavender dress!
B: And periwinkle!
J: Blair! It's a Stupid DRESS and a Stupid FLOWER!!!!!!
B: Well..(you know the "Blair" well)touchy touchy
J: aren't you hungry?
B: yeah, I guess
N: (digs in the chocolate colored mud and finds a few slimy white worms) Here soups on! (smiles)
B: Oh my gosh! You have to be kidding
T: Hey Blair, just think of it as Caviar with an island twist
B: Tootie, keep dreaming
N: she's right Blair it could be coated in sugar.
B: What?
N: Well it had to be white didn't it?
J: sure Nat you dream to, But I don't care what it is as long as it can fill my stomach.
N: ditto I'm starved!
T: Down the hatch!
(all take a worm and gulp it down)
B: (disgusted) I would rather starve and kiss the drunk then eat a worm or what ever
the heck that thing is!
(drunk guy comes behind her with his kissy
face catching her off guard)
DG: Here I am sweetness ::SWAK::
B: OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!
!!!! What is your problem?!?!?!?!?!?!
DG: hehe awww shucks hehe
B: I have to wipe my mouth off with
something! (she reaches and picks a leaf
from the bush near by)
J: Um blair?
B: WHAT?
J: I wouldn't use that leaf if i were you
B: And why not? (she wisps the leaf over her mouth)
N: may I???
J: sure...
N: You remeber that stingy bush that made
all all shriek when put on our wounds?
B: yeah what about it?
T: (laughs hysterically) That's It!!!!!!!
B: Why didnt' some one tell me?????????
J: I tried but you didn't listen.
B: my lips feel funny, I don't believe you,
J: really?
B: yeah the tingle feeling is is the whiskey
yup....(unsure)
J: Ok if you say so...
B: Ow they hurt a little
T: Told ya!
DG: I always have that effect on women ::hic-
up:: whoopsi
N: right... anyways Blair we weren't kidding
B: (scratching her mouth frantically) I Have
figured that out NATALIE!!!! errrrrrrrr!

OK that's all for now cya!
~*Alicia*~

DramaQueenTootie
02-09-2001, 11:38 PM
hey do you guyz want me to add more or no?

Abbey22
02-10-2001, 12:20 AM
Definitely add some more! I would hate to see another abandoned fanfiction!


Abbey

BlairW_1
02-10-2001, 12:13 PM
Keep going, definately!

~*Danielle*~

Lil_miss_goodwrench_518
02-10-2001, 12:57 PM
yea keep adding..wht everyone else said!

iluvfacts14
02-10-2001, 04:12 PM
KEEP IT UP ALICIA! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

Love The Facts Of Life
02-10-2001, 09:11 PM
This is really good keep it up I'm going to be up all night wondering what is ghoing to happen next http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

BlairW_4
02-10-2001, 09:15 PM
Definetly Keep Going!!! Give me Posts or Give me DEATH! Lol You Go Girl!!!!!!

DramaQueenTootie
02-18-2001, 03:39 PM
ok ok fine you want it you got it sheesh
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(all the girls are sleeping under a tree, leaky bandages and all, blair has wrapped ace bandagein around her mouth while sleeping to protect her from any moe kissy kissy. The drunk guy has just finished the last drop of whiskey in his jug and flings it in to the mud sludge)
DG:whoopsies looks likes i done drank all of my durn whiskers, oh well. Wow lots of pretty colors in front of my face, go dancing dancing, hmmm (he fall down and falls fast asleep passed out)
Jo: (wakes up at the sound of a thud from the drnk guys fall) oh great e finally finished and passed out, ahh pain is not gain. I'm gonna get some water ok guys?
All others: hmmhmm,grunt,hmmummmhmmm etc
Jo: right you go on and sleep...babies, i9 end up doin all the work
(she walks over to a small stream and dips her hands into the cool clean water and douses her face, carefull not to wet the bandage on her forehead.)
Jo: I wish i could find something to carry this in
N http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifhas woken up comes up behind her all battered and bruised) Whatchya doing?
Jo: looking for something to carry the water in back to the tree.
N: what about he whiskey jug?
Jo: Nat your a genius!
N: Hey I thought Blair had that title. (laughs) want me to go fetch it for you?
Jo: sure
N: (see the passed out drunk guy)hey umm... where is it?
Jo: Oh yeah i think he threw it into the mud
N: oh great , ok well i'll be right back
Jo: thanks nat
N: (walking walking) no problem
Jo: (notices a fishswimming throght the water and tries to snatch it, thrusts her hand into the water) hah!!! got ya!
N: Jooooo! help me!
Jo: Oh my gosh nat!!!
B: (wakes up to Nats frantic screaming) Oh my gosh Tootie Nat's in trouble!
T: (woken) what?!?!?
B: look!!!
T: (sees nat struggleing in the mud) Nat!
(the three girls jump up and race toward nat)
JO: nat what happend?!?
N: i was reaching for the jug and saw a BIG bug and I jumped a bit then accidently slid into the mud
Jo: oh no, nat that isn't mud
Nat: say what? (waist deep in mudd)
Jo: nat that's quick sand
N: oh my gosh! the jug has sunk, oh no it IS quick sand!
B: What's happend?
Jo: she slipped into some quick sand
T: oh great ow are we gonna get you outta THERE!!!!!ow my ankle
B: oh gee tootie your smart lets go jump in the quicksand o SAve a friend and then put both of your lives into jeopardy
Jo: good goin tootie
T: (stuck in the sand sinking slowly with nat)what are you gonna do?
B: don't make any sharp movements you'll sink faster!
Jo: for once, she's right we need a rope or some thing
B: we don't have one of those Jo
Jo: howa bout your blooming dales catalog as an anchor (goes after a catalog near by)
B: snatches the catalog up) no way im ordering when we get out of here!
JO: come on blair! (she hits the catalog sending it flying into the mud Blair going in after it)
B: no come bacaaaakk!!
Jo: blair! ou idiot now 3 out of 4 of us are in quick sand go you!
B: sorry (ashamed look on her face)
Jo:Alright since nat you are the deepest in it the sand so let me try to pull you out first ok?
N: ok
Jo: give me your hand
N: ok but becareful
T: yeah make sure you donnnttt .....(splash like sound) fall in
Jo: gee thanks tootie
B: so we are four girls who some how all got stuck in quicksand who are hoping that a drunk guy wakes up to save us?
N: I love it when you put things so happily
T: hey what's that noise?
( a hum can be heard in the distance)
N: sounds like a..
J: A plane!!!!
B: GREAT HOW ARE WE GONNA WAVE IT OVER HERE???
T: we can't we stuck (frowns)
ALL: HELLLLPP!!!!!HELP!! HELP!!
B: I want blooming dales!!!!!

OK everyone can i keep going? what is your fav parts so far!?
luv yas always....~*Alicia*~ ( the drama princess)

iluvfacts14
02-18-2001, 03:54 PM
This is more exciting than Soap Operas! I can't wait ti find out what happens next!!

BlairW_4
02-18-2001, 04:00 PM
This is Really good!! It's just like it should be one of those movies like Castaway..post quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

folfan
02-18-2001, 04:20 PM
Im new but I love your fan fic keep writeing

-jessi

jofan4life
02-18-2001, 04:39 PM
I LOVE IT!!!!!! KEEP POSTING!!!!!

Love The Facts Of Life
02-22-2001, 08:44 PM
Keep it up this is great I luv it http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo:Blair, you always look so shique and yet so natural, I was thinking you could do somthing with my hair?
Blair:Yeah!Like wash it?
Jo:No!I was going for that brain less look you've got!

Nat:Who wants to be a skiny pencil?I'd rather be a happy magic marker.

Ms.G:Girls!Will you tell me what's been going on here?
Nat:Group sleep walking?
Ms.G:(gives that"Idon't believe you"look)
Blair:Well,you know the first day of school getting settled in and meeting new people....
Tootie:Yeah!!And now comes Miller time!

DramaQueenTootie
02-24-2001, 09:04 PM
hey everyboy right now I'm kinda blocked on how i should get them outta this mess but I will so see you soon.!

~*Alicia*~

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Tootie:Rabbits, We are in Troooooublllllle
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Tootie: Sue Anne why don't you go the the weight loss place they advertise on TV ..........Hi there I'm Yvette, Your weight councelor at the Astrotrim health Spa, do your friends talk about that unsightly buldge behind your back, Behiiind your back......when you get up from a wooden chair do you have to Flluff it up? If your answers yes, Knock it off the Astrotrim Way
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Jo: We'll sneek out right after dinner
Blair:Ok
Tootie: OK we'll be ready
Blair: We......would you care to explain that?
Tootie: Sure, We is the first person pluerl pronoun, me and Nat are a We and We are going with you!
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"The Drama Princess"
Troupe 5...7...0...9
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AIM at gliterpupp

[This message has been edited by DramaQueenTootie (edited 02-24-2001).]

DramaQueenTootie
02-24-2001, 10:03 PM
ok yeah i'm not blocked NE more!?!??! yeah! ok here goes
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(the sound of the airplanes engine fades away, for it can't her the girls fearfull cries)
Jo: Darn it! now what are we supposed to do?
B: I want out of this goup!
N: Blair panicing is my profession not yours!
T: Guys in our last hours should we really fight
Others: TOOTIE!!!!
T: sorry, jeez i was just ( they give her a look) nevermind
B: I'm getting out of this mess.
J: Blair you can't move! you'll just sink faster your allready up to your neck!
B: I'm agile watch (starts struggling in the quick sand)
N: Blair stop your sinking!
B: uhh ugg it's soo heavy
T: balir your up to your ears
B: You guys help me!!!!
J: we cant!
B: upp ugg huuh ( slowly her mouth and noes and eyes go under her hand flails about in the air
N: what''ll we do?!?!?!?!
J: I DON"T KNOW NAT!!!!!BLAIR!!!!!!!BLAIR!!!!!!
DG: Huh? What? What is everyone yelling about?
J: hey you! help her!
DG http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifsees blairs arm and rips of his t-shirt tieing a knot in the end and tieing aound Blairs wrist, carefull not to slide into the quicksand)(slowly drags her out of the mud and on the dry sand)
N: Oh my osh she not breathing!
T: oh no!
J: do you know CPR?
DG: of course I'm a doctor!
N: good hurry....(thinks to herself) a what???
DG: (starts to preform recessitation and CPR) Ok she has a pulse but she not breathing! ( keeps artificial repiration going. to himself) 1 2 3 4 5 breath
J: (frantic) is she breathing yet
DG: no wait...........................................
T: well...
DG: Yes she is,her breaths are slow but steady
J: great, now get us out of here
DG: sure ( he gets everyone out of the sand) are you guys ok?
ALL: yeah
T: hey your not drunk anymore
DG: I was drunk? oh no. I'm gonna go check on your friend
N: Tootie did you here that earlier he's a doctor
T: yeah and he's not that bad either, i didn't notice it but when he isn't drunk he is yummy!
J: would you two knock it off? (goes over to Blair and the not so drunk guy)
J: is she gonna be ok?
DG: i think so but her breaths are weak
( a sigh is heard from Blairs throat)
DG: what is her name?
J: Blair
DG: Blair Blair can you hear me?
B: (slowly opens her eyes and looks into his) huh? what?
DG: Blair are you ok?
B: Oh my gosh! get away from me! i told you no kissy kissy!!!!!
DG: what?
J: you wanted kissy when you were tipsy
DG: oh no. ugh I hate this, Blair I'm sober.
B: so
DG: Lets start this over.... um Hi my name is Anthony, I am a cardiac doctor. i just saved you and your friends life. and I don't want any kisses from you. OK?
B: oh. well why not? what could possibly be wrong with me?


Sorry guys and gurls i'll add more before I get off but this is long soo... laterz ~*Alicia*~

TVaddict
02-24-2001, 10:15 PM
hah, he was a doctor all along. Nice touch.

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
02-24-2001, 10:17 PM
awesome!! keep it up

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Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me!

the only thing wrong with jo is shes a yankees fan! go red sox~!
*~Katie~*

BlairW_2
02-25-2001, 12:08 PM
Write more...

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..*Cassandra*..

DramaQueenTootie
02-25-2001, 01:26 PM
Thanks for your comments everyone!I know I was supposed to add last night but i kinda was blocked on how to get to the next part soo here it is....
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A: Blair there is nothing wrong with you, and besides you were just yelling at me because you thought I wanted kissy kissy, your plenty great
B: I know (smiles) but if your a doctor then why were you drunk
A: what doctors can't get drunk?
B: Well I just thought that you all would be a litle bit more careful about these things
A: Usually I am, that is until , nevermind
J: C'mon tell us you'll feel beter once you get it out
A: Well you see me and my wife have been argueing about the past 3 years and we finaly got the divorce papers signed except she's the one that gave up not me, and I was extremely upset soooo, I guess i got a alittle tipsy
B: oh that's to bad
J: yeah what makes you come to Africa?
A: my sister lives in Sudan, my wife,Sara got the house so I'm staying with her until I can find a reasonable place.
B: A doctor huh?
A: Yeah
B: (smiles) Hi I'm Blaire Warner, I'm very leased to make your aquaintance..Anthony
A: Same to you Blair Warner (smiles and kisses her hand)
B: ooo (giggles)
J: Anthony I thought you were sad about your break up.
A: I was
B: not anymore?
A: maybe not enough
J: Oh this is to much for me blauck (walks off)
A: would you be utterly stunned if i kissed you right now?
B: not at all
( they move closer togeher and there lips meet)(camera focases on Nat and Tootie wih Jo approaching and Blair and Anthony passionately kissing in the background)
N: what's up with them?
J: you tell me
T: (gasps) him?...her??? kissy kissy??
J: you guessed it! pathetic huh?
N: he's a doctor? good for blair!
J: what?! we are kinda in the middle of a crisis here!
N: Oh c'mon she's Blair what'd ya expect?
J: good point
T: sistas we are in troouuublllee.....
(camera focuses on Blair and Anthony kissing)
B: Oww!
A: What did I do??
B: nothin, but my back!
A: what about it?
B: when you laid me down in the sand, Ow!
A: lets check it out
B: (whimpers) umm ok
A: Blair was a minute ago you had your toung in my mouth, not to mention I saved you life trust me
B: (laughs) well ok
A: wow good one Blair
B: what?.....What's wrong??
A: you have a baby cactus in your back
B: What??? get it off! get it off get it off!!!!!!!!!
A: It's not going to bite you.
B: tell that to my back! (makes a pout face) get it out. get it out! It's killing me (cries)
A: Blair?
B: hmm?
A: (shows the cactus in front of her face)
B: oh well then umm(looks embaressed)
A: (laughs) c'mon lets go see the others (kisses her)
B: Ok
(Anthony helps her up)
B: stupid thing (kicks the cactus toward a twised tree) hmph
(they walk over to the others occasionally pausing to lt their lips meet then giggling)
N: hey you two what's up?
B: nothing
T: were you...enjoying your selves over there?
A: we were until Blair sat on a ......
B: (interupts him) nothing that was important so we decided to come over here and talk (smiles unsure)
A: (chuckles) yea that's it for sure, oh Jo your bandage is leaking let me fix a new one for you.
J: oh. yea. ok the kit is right there
A: ok here we go (unravels the bandage) hey that's pretty nasty we need to get you to a hospital, umm (looks at his surroundings) there isn't once close by is there/
T: not exactly
A: would you care to tell me what happend? (he asks as her finishes the touches on Jo's bandage)

computer froze...more laterz cya

~*Alicia*~

Wild Child
02-25-2001, 01:40 PM
This is really good!Keep up the good work.I can't wait to read more.Your a good writer.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
(Jo's lookin at a pic of Blair and a Pig)
J-Which one's the pig?
T-Stop indulting Blair.
J-I wasen't insulting Blair,I was insulting the pig!
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

DramaQueenTootie
02-25-2001, 02:28 PM
(they told him the story and he looked around in awe about the plan an the waters edge)
A: There weren't any other survivors?
J: 'fraid not
A: (sighs)that's too bad
N: (looks downwward) yeah
T: (giggles)
N:Tootie laughing at death is sad
T: that's not what i'm laughing at
B: Then what?
T: Blair want a little kissy kissy
B: why you!!!!!
T: ah (laughs)
B: (charges tootie)
A: (whirls around graps blair and pulls her back from the elbows and kisses her) lets not murder anyone today
B: maybe not today (gigles and kises his cheek)
J: yeah ok you know this is all very touching, a littel to much but it's getting late we need to build a shelter and get a fire going.
A: oh there are matches in the first aid kit
T: i'll go get some fire wood
N: remeber dry this time tootie
T: don't worry nat, i'm not gonna get wet ones from when we went camping
J: heh heh , blair can you can Anthony find some long wooden branches to use for the shelter?
B: (to Anthony) do you know what she's talking about?
A: yeah c'mon
B: ok
N: what can I do?
J: see those fallen palm leaves?
N: yeah
J: well grab them and drag them over to that twisted tree.
N: okie dokes...um Jo what will you be doing?
J: Supervising (smiles)
N: uh huh right
J: Ok I'll get some rocks to border the fire
N: cya soon

Ok that's all your getting for now guys it will get interesting i promise! laterz ~*Alicia*~

[This message has been edited by DramaQueenTootie (edited 02-25-2001).]

DramaQueenTootie
02-25-2001, 03:11 PM
(camera focuses on Blair and Anthony picking up sticks in the shrubs)
B: Anthony? What do you think about me?
A: huh?
B: What do you think about me?
A: What dod you mean?
B: you know about my personality, looks, friends ect.
A: oh, well your beautful
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifsmiles) I know
A: and your sweet and generous
B: I know
A: and your a ray of life that brightens me up
B: I kno..Really?
A: yeah and your friends are the best
B: well yeah (blushes)
A: hey grab that branch over there
B: the one covered in dirt
A: yeeeah
B: oh well um I don't like dirt, it's like water and oil. I'm water it's oil, we repel
A: oh what about quicksand? seemed to like that alot
B: i like blooming dales not dirt
A: oh uh huh
B: Oh fine, but only under these conditions
A: (laugh)
B: (picks up the fallen branch) ewwwewwww grody! I can't belive this, it's sick! (a tiny bug crawls from the branch onto Blairs face then into her hair) Oh my gosh!(drops the branch)
A: What is it?
B: A Bug just eeewww it's in my hair get it outget it oooutttt ewwwww ( starts flaing around her arms at her hair and runs back to he camp over across the island to Jo who is looking for rocks by the waters edge, she dives into the water shaking her head back and forth.)
A: (carring a bunch of branches, dropping them near the twised tre then folling Blair to the water) Blair. (Laughing histarically)
B: (sopping wet) what it's it out
A: I think so
B: are you sure????
J: Blair is what out?
B: A bug!
J: ( laughs) a bug???? you made your self and acrobatic army man for a bug, wow Blair I'm impressed
B: oh shut up Jo!
J: no really
A: yeah blair it's out hehe
(Tootie and Nat come running up behind them)
T: What?
N: What happend>?
(they see Blair)
N: wait! don't tell me! blair learned to Fly! (cracks up)
T: Yeah did you see an ant?
B: no..... but it was big and evil and an eewy .......
T: say it
B: Alright it was a bug
T: hah I ws so close!
N:figures sheesh blair
B: it was in my hair (slowly climbs out of the water dripping wet)
J: did everyone get the supplies?
N: yep
T: yep
A: I think we have enough
(they look at blair)
B: what he said


Ok everyone more laterz!
~*Alicia*~

BlairW_2
02-25-2001, 04:52 PM
I like it! Write more soon or you won't figure out who dies in Loss of a Friend..Lol@! I love this..when are you gonna finish it!

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I'm_NMK
02-25-2001, 08:34 PM
Really great so far!! I love it!! But - one critisism - what about Cliff? He and Blair are engaged righjt?

I can't wait to read more!

~NMK

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"In a PERFECT WORLD, WE'D ALL be YANKEES!!!"
(not from fol, but still very true! ;) )

"So things change. Your born, you move on, you die - that's life!"

ssgoalie8
03-01-2001, 07:57 PM
c'mon i want more this is an awesome story and i can't wait to see what happens

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BlairW_1
03-01-2001, 08:49 PM
I can't wait 4 u to write more!

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DramaQueenTootie
03-03-2001, 10:01 PM
Hey all I'm really sorry I haven't added more But I will I promise! It's just that I'm fixing the whole cliff thing in some way without chngeing the beginning and i have to think of how. should i just change the beginning or no?? anyways gtg cyas mores soon byeness!
~*ALicia*~

ssgoalie8
03-03-2001, 10:03 PM
no don't change it it's awesome the way it is i can't wait to read more

-colleen-

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ssgoalie8
03-06-2001, 08:18 PM
hey are you going to write any more i love this story it has to be one of the best i've read -colleen-

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DramaQueenTootie
03-07-2001, 08:48 PM
Finnaly I wrote some more! yes I'm not Blocked anymore! finally! ok well here's some more I hope It doesn't bore you. I will be much quicker in my replies from now on, I just have been taking standardized tests, and abunch of church stuff and all that good stuff but here you go more laterz....enjoy!
all coments are welcome, cya later!
~*Alicia*~ IM any time....... ActingQT5709

DramaQueenTootie
03-07-2001, 08:48 PM
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(camera focuses in on Mrs G. & Bruce sitting on the couch)
MG: (wakes up to the sound of the TV news station) Huh? Bruce!
Br: (walks in from the kitchen) what is it?
MG: They found it! well not totaly they found some debres floating and now they are searching a remote area!
BR: that's great
MG: I know oh heh heh
Br: want me to get you some lemonade?
MG: Sure, and how about a little cookie.. to mmhmm
Br: (small chuckle) sure
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(the grils are walking back to camp, Blair sopping wet)
N: look Blair a bug!
B: What?!?!Where?!?!
(all burst out laughing)
B: That wasn't very nice
N: Sorry (giggles)
A: Are you sure you weren't bitten or anything
B: yeah I guess not
(they settle near the supplies they have collected)
(Blair sits against the tree and frizzles her hair)
T: Hey What do we do first make the fire or the shelter?
J: The shelter, it's growing dark and it's looks like it's going to rain, getting wetter than Blair is the last thing we need
B: (annoyed) hey... Oh No!
N: What is it?
B: My ring!
A: What ring?
B: My engage...astland school class ring
A: (concerned) what?
J: Blair
B: I forgot all about it I swear!
N: How could you forget that??
A: Forget what? what are you talking about?
T: Gee Nat are you in the mood to go for a swim me to! lets go
N: huh? oh yeah darn it's hot gotta go cya!
J: Ummmm.. I'm just gonna step over and ummm heck I'll go swimming to..later!
A: Blair, what are they talking about
B: Ummmm you better sit down
A: I think I'll stand
B: Ok then I should stand to (thinks to herself: so if it get rough I can run for a swim to) a heh
A: ok, go for it
B: Umm you know how the heat, and the awful ickyness of this island can make you ummm what's the word...
A: Delerious
B: That's it! delerious, well I was a bit dellerious myself today and um
A: the ring
B: right well the ring is um from a friend of mine named Cliff
A: Cliff
B: Right and you see he kinda popped the
A: question
B: yeah and...
A: you were wearing the ring
B: uh huh but also, were are getting
A: (saddened, looking down at the silver sand) married.
B: uhhhh yeah I'm so so sorry, but it was wonderful and I just
A: went with it
B: yeah........are you mad at me
A: a little! Blair you were flirting with me all afternoon, and all of a sudden your engaged?????
B: well, I am sorry
A: yeah me too, I thought we had something going
B: yeah(sighs) do we still have a friendship?
A: I'm not sure
B: what do I have to do to make us friends please please tell me! (pleading with him)
A: kiss me one more time
B: will do
A: (interupts) and jump off that limb into the water and let me save you,
B: (eyes the glittering water then him)
A: so we can start over
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gifsmiles) thank you
(Anthony and Blair hug, but they don't realize all eyes are on them)
N: awww isn't that sweet
J: yeah, I miss Rick
T: and I miss Jeff, I hope he's not to worried
N: you know he is Tootie
T: yeah
J: (makes odd face) this water is warm
N: I hope it's safe (eyeing the small rippling waves)
T: yeah well I wanna know, ow! I stepped on something hard!
N: what???
T: I'm scared to pick it up, It was as big as Kansas!
J: here Tootie
T: No I'll do it! (reaches in the water to scoop up a shiny diamond ring)
J: Hey it ain't Kansas but the diamond could buy it!
N: haha very funny Jo
J: heh heh
T: Blair! Blair! I found your ring!
(all three jump out of the water as blair and anthony come towards them)
B: what??? Really??? Yes! But wait I have to do something first....(clears her throat then turns to anthony and gives him one sweet innocent kiss then takes of her pink cardigan and neon scarf and walks towards the waters edge, dips her toe in the walks back up to a low branch of a tree and climbs out on the limb, careful not to fall, then with one great big leap she plows into the water with a great big *SPLASH*)
(everyone cheers)

Wild Child
03-08-2001, 07:19 PM
It's great!Please write more soon.Your doing great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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BlairandJo
03-08-2001, 09:30 PM
I thought it was done.Well if not keep going I love it!!!!!!

DramaQueenTootie
03-19-2001, 07:06 PM
Hey guys sorry to keep you waiting but my computer is a piece of crap and lost my draft so I am going to have to re type this in sections sorry. I will post the next section sometime tonight I promise thanks for being patient!
luv always,
Alicia

DramaQueenTootie
03-22-2001, 09:39 PM
Here you go, I will add more later hope you enjoy!

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B: (soaking wet) are you happy now?
A: very (smiles)
(blair walks out of the water and they go back to the supplies arm in arm all of them)
J: good you all got everything
N: uh huh
T: yep
A: should we build the fire or set up camp first?
J: Well it's getting dark and we will need a fire, we won't need the shelter unless it rains
T: right so any of you know how to make a fire?
B: I do!
J: did they teach you that in finishing school
B: yeah in our wilderness trip in the gym!
J: the gym was the wilderness
B: well, it was dirty outside, and our dresses were silk and satin we couldn't soil them.
J: right so Pretty in Pink how do you suggest we build a fire?
B: With matches of course!
N: uh Blair we have no matches
B: Oh yes we do
J: There aren't any in the First aid kit, where do you have them in your nail care kit?
B: Yeah why?
J: (pushes hands away and takes a step back) I'm not even going to ask.
B: Ok watch and weep
T: Huh?
N: (whispers to Tootie) I think she mean read 'em and weep but she wouldn't know the difference
T: oh ok
A: (gathers some kindling near by and hands it to Blair) here you go have fun!
B: I will (gets down on her knees takes out some matches, then carefuly stacks the little wood pieces in a teepee shape)
(all eyes are on Blair and her wood and matches)
(Blair puts a dried left or two under inside the Teepee of sticks and strikes a match)
B: here we go
J: I don't believe it
T: me niether
(the fire shines bright but Blair unknowingly forgets to let go of the match)
B: Owwwww! (throws the match down and it burns out)
A: your supposed to let go
B: I know that I just... forgot
A: mmmhmmm right since you got the fire going I'll get you some bigger branches so you can get it burning better while we set up the shelter ok?
B: (frowns looking at her finger red from the pain) ok
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(Mrs G and Bruce are sitting on the sofa the TV on mute reading) (the door bell rings)
MG: Who could that be?
Br: I don't know
(MG walks up to the door and opens it)
MG: Jeff!!!!!!
JE: Hi Mrs.G!
MG: hi Jeff come in! come in!
JE: Hey Bruce, how's it going?
BR: not so good did you get my letter?
JE: Yeah sorry to barge in but I could stop to write or call, I was a little nervous flying over here
MG: With good reason (frowns)
JE: anything thing new?
MG: Not a word
JE: too bad
BR: you don't seem sad
JE: well I know that she's out there alive some where i just don't know where
MG: Jeff, how do you know?
JE: this was in my jacket pocket this morning when I got on the bus (he pulls a chain with a cross on the end)
BR: What's that?
JE: She has a cross just like this
MG: I know that she's had it since the 6th grade
JE: right
MG: it has a inscription on the back right? It says..."GOD loves you and will always be with you"
JE: that's right but...
BR: but what?
JE: read the incription
MG: (pulls up the glasses hanging from her neck and reads the inscription outloud) She loves, She lives, and will love you always
BR:wow
MG: Thats great
(they all smile and await news from the TV)
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Ok you guys I gtg I will write more ASAP cya!

FOL-FAN
03-22-2001, 10:43 PM
I love it! Keep it going.

BlairandJo
03-22-2001, 11:09 PM
I love it write more soon.

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J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:Can you keep it down over there I'm tring to watch this.
J:Take a hike!!!!

BlairW_1
03-22-2001, 11:45 PM
Great! I can't wait 4 the end! Not that I want it to be over or anything... Not that I want it to keep going and going... Or that I want it to end right here and you not finish it... hehee! A little Bev 4 ya! :P

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iluvfacts14
03-23-2001, 01:50 PM
Alright Alicia! I've been reading this story forever! You're not gonna keep waiting LONGER are ya? hehehe

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LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-23-2001, 11:31 PM
this is sooo good so far!!! i cant wiat for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!

DramaQueenTootie
03-23-2001, 11:51 PM
Hey alll, I wrote a little more sorry it's not very big but more will come soon cya!
-Alicia
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::Camera falls on girls creating their shelter, and Blairworking on her fire::
B: Look you guys! (smiling proud at her creation)
N: great Blair now go get some wood so it will stay that way
B: ( smiles) OK! (jumps up and walks off to find more wood)
J: Hey anthony I'm out of twine now what do we use?
A: ummm (looks down towards the ground) your shoe laces!
T: what?
J: Like this tootie. (bends down yanks off tooties shoe then unlaces it, she then ties the shoelace around a branch fixing it to a piece of wood serving at a bit of the roof) there. get it?
T: ohhhhh I get it
N: Good now use your other shoe to hop over there and get the palms to cover the roof to keep out the rain
T: ok (looks solem)
A: Blair what's taking you so long? (he calls into the woods)
(no answer)
A: Blair?
B: (from high above and out) I'm up here! Hep me get down!
A: Up here where?(takes a few steps under a big tree)
B: right above you!
A: what on earth are you doing up there?
B: well before we took the icky bug filled rotten branches from the ground, I wanted to pick some fresh ones but they don't seem to want to move.
A: Blair, they are still growing, besides you can't just pick them off you need a saw
B: (looks emabarassed) I knew that
A: lets get you down from there
B: Ok (starts to put her foot on a branch but slips and falls into anthony's arms)whoa!
A: Do you always have that beautiful warner grace(sarcastically)
B: Ohhhh hush up (looks kinda frustrated) let go of me I have to go pick I mean gather wood
A: ok (let her down and watches her walk away then he himself walks back to the shelter)
J: (calls as anthony aproaches) Hey look we finished the shelter!
A: Great it's getting late lets sit in the shelter and wait for Blair to come back.
ALL: ok sure whatever ect...
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More ASAP laterz
~*Alicia*~

FOL-FAN
03-24-2001, 12:41 AM
This is really good!! Keep it coming!

BlairandJo
03-24-2001, 02:05 AM
Love it keep going

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J:Well you did'nt have to yell!
N:Well I was mad!!!
J:A library Is like a church you are suppose to be nice and Quiet!!!!
B:SSSSHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
J:Take a hike.

Wild Child
03-24-2001, 11:24 AM
This is really awsome.Please post more soon! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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BlairW_1
03-25-2001, 01:57 PM
Come on, Alicia! This is getting good! (Ignore below, just practicing for buybuddy.com)

Will the crew be discovered? Will Anthony and Blair hit it off? Or will something else, more... tragic... happen? Find out if all goes well in the next installment of Broken Ground...

So, how was it? Think I could get NE points? I'm almost in 10th! LYLAS/LYLAB!


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or
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iluvfacts14
03-25-2001, 09:34 PM
Ok Alicia....add more or I WILL hunt you down :P

I really should start posting some fanfics again...I remeber the thrill of it when I used to http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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DramaQueenTootie
04-13-2001, 05:50 PM
Hey everyone, I'm sorry i haven't been here in a while, i had a fight with someone from the bored, but now I'm back and will start writing again ASAP! sorry for the delay!
Luv always:
Alicia

Devastation26
04-14-2001, 11:58 AM
I remember, way back when, when this thing actually appeaed as a little post swith 0 replies. Now it's over 2 monhs later and it's still here near the top. I gotta believe this FanFic's still gonna be on the front page when I get my Driver's license (a year and a half from now). lol

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BlairW_1
04-14-2001, 02:16 PM
I see what you mean... In two years, I'll hop on my motorcycle with my new motorcycle license and find you!

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JoRox11
04-27-2001, 07:07 PM
I was catching up on my fan fics today and was totally wondering...

IS ANYBODY GOING TO FINISH THIS SCRIPT?

It has been on this board unfinished for, like, well, put it this way, like FOREVER!!!

It was great fan fic and it's still not finished. I don't know about you, but I think someone should just finish it. And please don't suggest me because I have NO CLUE how to end it.I really do believe that it's a great fan fic and should be finished.

Anyone want to do the honors and finish it?

JoRox11
04-27-2001, 07:13 PM
I was catching up on my fan fics today and was totally wondering...

IS ANYBODY GOING TO FINISH THIS SCRIPT?

It has been on this board unfinished for, like, well, put it this way, FOREVER!

I thought it was a really great fan fic and, I don't know about you, but I think someone should finish it. But please, don't suggest me because I have NO CLUE how to end it. So, does anyone want the honors of finishing it?

JoRox11
04-27-2001, 07:15 PM
I was catching up on my fan fics today and was totally wondering...

IS ANYBODY GOING TO FINISH THIS SCRIPT?

It has been on this board unfinished for, like, well, put it this way, FOREVER!

I thought it was a really great fan fic and, I don't know about you, but I think someone should finish it. But please, don't suggest me because I have NO CLUE how to end it. So, does anyone want the honors of finishing it?

BlairW_2
04-27-2001, 09:55 PM
I totally agree. This has been up for a while! Where is Dramaqueentootie? She didn't abandon the story did she?

Yoohoo!!! Dramaqueentootie! LOL!

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JoRox11
04-28-2001, 04:28 PM
Sorry 4 the triple post my computer was messed up

DramaQueenTootie
05-02-2001, 08:55 PM
Hey guess what I'm alive!!!!! lol sorry i haven't been here in like a while. I did not abandon this kewl thing hehehe. Never. but i keep getting interupted with family stuff and church stuff and i have exams coming up in like 2 weeks, so I promise i will finish it! I am sooo SORRY!!!

JoRox11
05-03-2001, 03:33 PM
A long as it gets done, I'm ok. And please try 2 hurry up! I mean, don't rush or anything, take your time. I'ts just I want 2 hear the ending, but I don't want it 2 sound rushed. I'd rather wait longer 4 the rest of a good, well-writen story, then wait shorter 4 the rest of a rushed story. So, take your time and post the rest soon! By the way, did I tell you I like the story? Well I do! A lot!

DramaQueenTootie
06-26-2001, 08:30 PM
hey all, Umm I'm really sorry about not finishing this fan fic. I have forgotten alot of the details i slipped in and planned to use for the future so I'm going to have to reread through the story to find out how I can finish it and make it good. I am really really sorry. I'll try and add a little bit tonight. if you have any comments just reply or IM me @ actingqt5709, thanx..luv always, Alicia

BlairW_1
06-26-2001, 10:30 PM
Kewl!!! I'm soooo glad you're gonna finish! Oh, you know what? I'm pretty close to getting my motorcycle liscense! (Well, closer than I was, anyway.) Y'all, I had a feeling this would be brought back to the top sometime! :P

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Jenn87
06-27-2001, 11:48 PM
great story i absolutley loved it!!!!!

DramaQueenTootie
11-11-2001, 12:31 AM
hey all..its me...the lazy chick who cant seem to finish this...in fact im not even sure that i want to...it seems to be forgotten......i was just curious if yall(yes im from florida and not the hick part) wanted me to finish it or not...i dont want ne one to finish it for me...i would like to do it on my on..or leave it...either way you all take the vote...if you dont care one bit you can say so...thanks a bunch guys! luv always ~licia

Panda Bear
11-11-2001, 01:01 AM
This means more soon right? I can't wait to see Cliff.

~ Panda Bear

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BlairandJo
11-11-2001, 01:57 AM
I wondered the other day if you were going to
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I opened up Fol Fandemonium Marathon section just till
monday the Nov 12.So you can see the list on episodes that Tvland will be airing.

Please send me fan fictions and receipies.And Take my quiz
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~kEwL~sayings
Lord keep your arm around
my shoulder,And Your hand
over my mouth.

Its Fall and I cant get up!

You can agree with me or you can be WRONG!

I didn't ask to be a Princess but if the TIRA
fits.....
(I love that one)
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God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference.
-Blair

Ryanmo97
11-11-2001, 02:00 AM
More!

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MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
11-11-2001, 10:45 PM
yeup...more would be AWESOME!! I love it! EXCEPT, A LOT MORE MRS.G!!Other than that it's MAGNIFICENT!

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*Blair:I just had another one of my brilliant ideas!
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my e-mail is charlotte_rae_fan@yahoo.com e-mail me!!
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I think that CHARLOTTE RAE is the BEST ACTRESS that EVER lived!!She is incredible!!SOMEDAY...I *WILL* meet HER!!
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I finally got it all together, but I forgot where I put it!
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IM me using piggy2111
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Tootie:WE ARE IN TROUBLLEEEEE!!!!
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I'm a sports pro------crastinator.-Cathy
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Dorothy: Get back here you WITHERED OLD SICILLAIN MONKEY!
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The greatest come backs of all time I get from Blair Warner, turn blue! In your Ear! and It all sounds so wholesome, I could barf!
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-Lizzie Marie~!:)

Acting Girl 19
11-12-2001, 11:53 PM
Plase finish it!

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~$^*Amber*^$~
Jo: Whats wrong Mrs. G?
Nat: Yea, Did tiny bubbles rub you the wrong way?

see y'all!

DramaQueenTootie
02-07-2002, 09:14 PM
OK guys..I give up...I can't put this off any longer..its almost been a year since i started this..if it hasnt been a year...so I'm gonna actually finish...BUT...i need a conclusion idea...so...i need some help...but yeah i know i have said many of times that i was going to finish..and i never did..lol...but i will...i just need a lil help with some brainstorming...ok so you can IM me at actingqt5709 or email me at actingqt5709@hotmail.com....or sumthing like that..until we meet again...~Alicia:wave:

ssgoalie8
06-08-2003, 11:35 PM
hey i remember this fanfic....i haven't been on here in so long....i hope you do end up finishing it. i love this one. i also remember talking to you on instant messenger a long time ago. lol hope you get to finish soon. bye

Johnny be good!
08-22-2012, 12:13 PM
You really should update soon.