100%Cutie
10-28-2001, 01:17 PM
Hey, this is me 1st story ever so it might SUCK. So could everyone tell me what they think...good or bad....the HONEST truth...it would be great thanks!
Ok so here's whats goin on...
Jo and Blair were in a huge fight (big suprise) about who was better at anything. Blair says,"Ya know what, I've always wanted to say this..." and here goes the story.
Jo:What blondie
(Blair stares at her with squinted eyes)
B:...you...Your the WORST motorcycle driver I have EVER seen!!
(Jo took Blair to the mall earlier -believe it or not- on her bike since the car was in the repair shop)
J: (laughs)
B:what's so funny?!?!?!?
J: (laughing gradually stops) "Your the worst driver i ever saw" HA!! That's the best you could think of?!?! C'mon Tootie or Nat could of done better than that! No offense you two.
T&N: (evesdroping in the other room)
T:That's ok!
N:None taken!
J:Anyways, I would like to see you try to drive a bike like mine!!
B:Fine I will!
J:Yea, right. If you even tried to touch my bike...
B:What, you'd punch my face in to look like a smashed pumpkin or somethin?
J:No,it already looks like that...I would just...
B:what?
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk how 'bout you shut your trap. The point is I'M a better biker than you (she's thinking at the same time...DUH!!!) and you couln't even comtrol a motorcycle if you tried, much less get near mine.
Blair was extremely insulted by this even though she knew it was true. So she stormed up to her bedroom without another word to say. When Blair got to her room she immediatly went to her alarm and set it for midnight, then went to bed. When it was midnight Blair got out of bed, got dressed, and snuck downstairs. She grabbed Jo's helmet and keys to her bike then said, "I'll show her who can and can't comtrol a stupid motorcycle." She quietly went outside, but before completely closing the door thouught, "Should I actually do this. I've never thought of it before. But then again, who is she to say that I, Blair Warner can't do something. Anyway, how much harder could it be than driving a car. Right?
Well there it is the 1st part. How is it? Should I keep going?
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~~~Erin~~~
Me e-mail adress r
~Llpuk991@aol.com~
or
~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~
"Would if I could but I can't so I won't"
[This message has been edited by 100%Cutie (edited 10-28-2001).]
Ok so here's whats goin on...
Jo and Blair were in a huge fight (big suprise) about who was better at anything. Blair says,"Ya know what, I've always wanted to say this..." and here goes the story.
Jo:What blondie
(Blair stares at her with squinted eyes)
B:...you...Your the WORST motorcycle driver I have EVER seen!!
(Jo took Blair to the mall earlier -believe it or not- on her bike since the car was in the repair shop)
J: (laughs)
B:what's so funny?!?!?!?
J: (laughing gradually stops) "Your the worst driver i ever saw" HA!! That's the best you could think of?!?! C'mon Tootie or Nat could of done better than that! No offense you two.
T&N: (evesdroping in the other room)
T:That's ok!
N:None taken!
J:Anyways, I would like to see you try to drive a bike like mine!!
B:Fine I will!
J:Yea, right. If you even tried to touch my bike...
B:What, you'd punch my face in to look like a smashed pumpkin or somethin?
J:No,it already looks like that...I would just...
B:what?
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk how 'bout you shut your trap. The point is I'M a better biker than you (she's thinking at the same time...DUH!!!) and you couln't even comtrol a motorcycle if you tried, much less get near mine.
Blair was extremely insulted by this even though she knew it was true. So she stormed up to her bedroom without another word to say. When Blair got to her room she immediatly went to her alarm and set it for midnight, then went to bed. When it was midnight Blair got out of bed, got dressed, and snuck downstairs. She grabbed Jo's helmet and keys to her bike then said, "I'll show her who can and can't comtrol a stupid motorcycle." She quietly went outside, but before completely closing the door thouught, "Should I actually do this. I've never thought of it before. But then again, who is she to say that I, Blair Warner can't do something. Anyway, how much harder could it be than driving a car. Right?
Well there it is the 1st part. How is it? Should I keep going?
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~~~Erin~~~
Me e-mail adress r
~Llpuk991@aol.com~
or
~PenquinOnIce17@aol.com~
"Would if I could but I can't so I won't"
[This message has been edited by 100%Cutie (edited 10-28-2001).]