"The Pregnancy Tests"
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(Andy and Pippa's apartment)
Tootie:So?
Blair:Mines negative
Jo:Well now its mt turn
Pippa:Its negative
Blair:Sorry Pippa so that means no ones pregnant
Tootie:Yeah thats sad
Bailey:Well I've got a date
Tootie:Who?
Bailey:Ed
Tootie:I've got one with Ted
Bailey:Cool
(Bailey and Tootie walk out together)
Jo:Guess what?
Blair and Pippa:Negative?
Jo:I'm pregnant
(Blair and Pippa stare at each other and then they all hug)
THE END

ok....cool

umm, ok. Well, I think it has potential, just needs more. Why don't you write more to it? http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

I like the idea that Blair, Jo, and Pippa all took pregnancy tests and that Jo pregnant. I also find it a funny sly joke that you had Blair suposidly engaging in premarital sex when Lisa Whelchel is so against that in real life. I do however have one suggestion on how you can make all the different parts of the story fit together more cohesively. I get the impression that Another Moffit Part 1, and 2, and Pregnancy Tests are all one story. It might confuse people to have two different tittles to the same story. You should use one tittle through out all the of parts your story. I'm looking foreword to seeing more of your writing in the future.