View Full Version : MY NEW FANFIC CALLED JO'S PAST


sambino5
05-17-2001, 07:32 PM
This will take place around the 8th season. Im my fanfiction MrsG. is still here. I think Beverly Ann is ok but I like MrsG. better.
All the girls are downstairs excpet for Jo.
Mrs.G:is something wrong with Jo?
B:I don't know
N:All we know is she hasn't came our room all day long.
T:She might be sick
N:She may be dead
MrsG:Natalie don't say that.
N:Sorry
B:I'm going to go check on her.
UPSTAIRS NOW
KNOCK KNOCK
B:Jo it's Blair
J:come in.
B:What's up with you jo.
J:What in the hell are you taking about Blair?
B:you haven't came out of our room all day long.
J:I just have a few things on my mind is all.
B:do you want to tell me all about it?
J:sure sit down first.
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk go ahead.
J:way back before I came to Eastland I was a wildchild and I did all kinds of things I now regret but on this one night and the man I was seeing at the time decided to do the dew and I got pregnant. So I decided to go ahead with the pregnancy. Then I gave birth to a beautiful, healthy babay girl. I knew down deep in my heart that I couldn't raise this child. So I gave her up for adoption(now crying) I have a daughter Blair.
B http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh my god Jo. Who is the father?
J:Eddie.
B:does he know?
J:no he got shipped off to Chicago before I could tell him.
B:how old is you little girl?
J:7. Can I be alone now Blair?
B:sure.
BACKDOWNSTAIRSb:MrsG. you need to go talk to Jo.
MrsG.:Well what for?
B:Ladies Jo has a 7 year old daughter.
Mrs.G http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh dear lets all go talk to her.
NOW TALKING TO JO.
T:Jo we know
J:know about what?
N:your kid.
J http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh great Blair squealed. Would you all leave excpet for Mrsg.
ALL LEAVE.
MrsG:Jo are you ok?
J:no I'm not
MrsG: do you want to find your little girl?
J:Yes very much so. Giving her up was the hardest thing I have ever done in my entire life. I think about her everyday of my life. She is the first thing on my mind when I get up and she is the last thing on my mind when I go to slepp at night.
Mrsg:Jo if you need anyone to talk to we will always be here for you.
J:Thanks.
Mrsg:for what?
J:for being a good friend
MrsG:Oh you welcome.
THATS ALL FOR NOW WHAT DO YOU THINK?

callmetootie
05-17-2001, 07:44 PM
I think that the idea was pretty good, but your story was pretty messy. Some if the things that you mentioned were kind of funny, but other then that there was much enjoyment that I found in it. If you do decide to continue with it, you should maybe change a few things about it. I think that once people read this, they may not think of Jo as the easy riding Eastland girl that they thought she was. Don't go too far with Jo's personal life.

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Andrew Carden

sambino5
05-17-2001, 07:54 PM
you don't like my story.

Teddys_Angel_Jinny
05-17-2001, 08:36 PM
I do! Write more soon!

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A few things that can be found on bumper stickers that reminded me of Jinny...

1. Finally 21, and legally able to do things I've been doing since 15.

2. A hangover is the wrath of grapes.

3. They call it PMS because Mad Cow Disease was already taken.

4. POLICE STATION TOILET STOLEN -- Cops have nothing to go on.

5. I have PMS and a gun. Are there any questions?
(Number 5 was altered a little.)

E Pluribus Unum... Have a nice day!

º†º Kenzie º†º

BlairandJo
05-17-2001, 10:24 PM
I loved it,dont listen to callmetootie Its going great.Post more soon;o)

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How do you say you'er going to be sweeping up your teeth in french?
-Jo
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Jinny:Are there any cops or Jinny haters here.

[This message has been edited by BlairandJo (edited 05-23-2001).]

Ryanmo97
05-18-2001, 03:11 AM
All I can say is...

MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! I WANT MORE!!

Jo_Polniaczek
05-18-2001, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by Ryanmo97:
All I can say is...

MORE!! MORE!! MORE!! I WANT MORE!!

Well, there's a major punchline in that but nevermind...Don't listen to callmetootie, I think it's awsome! Keep on goin!

Jinny_Extead
05-18-2001, 05:49 PM
You have to continue!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep going! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Blair: I've just had another one of my brilliant ideas.
Jo: Don't frighten it, it's a lonely place up there.
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Blair: The school board was leaning toward rust carpet. Rust carpet against mauve walls, can you imagine?
Jo: Oh my Lord, no.

sambino5
05-19-2001, 06:37 PM
Guys I'm sorry I left all my books at school in my locker and my story was in it so I will post more on Monday ok.

sambino5
05-22-2001, 06:39 PM
OK HERE IS MORE.
BACK DOWNSTAIRS
KNOCK KNOCK
b:i'll get it.
e:hi blair.
b:eddie hi what are you doing here?
e:jo called and said she needed to talk to me and she sounded urgent.
t/n:hi eddie.
e:hi girls how are you?
t/n:fine.
mrsg:hi eddie.
e:hi mrsg it is so good to see you.
mrsg:it's so good to see you too.
e:where is jo's room?
mrsg:all the way upstairs first door on your left.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk thanks. (now goes upstairs)
KNOCK KNOCK
e:jo it's eddie.
j:come in.
e:hi jo.
j:hi (hugs and kisses him)
e:so how have you been?
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh i've been better. Eddie we need to talk.
e:i know that is why I came.
jo:i know. Well you remember when we first started dating?
e:yes that was the best time of my life.
j:well remember the first time we had sex.
e:yes I do.
j:well it had some consenquences.
e:what kind of consenquences?
j:well eddie we have a kid?
e:we have a child.
j:yes we a 7 year old aughter to be exact.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh my god jo why didn't you tell me?
j:you got shipped off before I could tell you.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk. Where is she?
j:When I gave birth to her I knew I couldn't keep her so I gave her up for adoption.
e:well first thing in the morning we go and find our daughter,
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
WRITE MORE LATER HOW IS IT?

sambino5
05-22-2001, 06:55 PM
OK HERE IS MORE
e:jo I gotta go find a motel to stay.
j:no eddie you will stay here with us you can pack out on the couch.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk sounds good if it is no trouble.
j:no trouble at all.
e:hey jo I have an idea let's go and take a walk to catch up on old times.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
NOW DOWNSTAIRS.
j:mrsg me and eddie are going for a walk.
mrsg http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk be careful.
j:we will bye.
mrsg:bye.
NOW LEAVE JO AND EDDIE
b:i bet eddie will ask jo to marry him.
t:blair what makes you say that?
b:well they have a kid together don't they.
n:yeah.
b:well anything is possible now.
n:yeah your right.
b:i love to hear those three words you a right.
NOW GOES TO EDDIE AND JO.
e:jo there has been somthing I have wanted to ask you for a while but I just didn't know how to ask you.
j:well I'm sure any way you ask me will be fine eddie.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk here goes. (gets down on bending knees with the engagment ring)Joanna Maire Polniaczek will you marry me?
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh my god I will have to think about this.
e:take all the time you need sweetie.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk I thought it over I will marry you.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh great honey.(HUGS AND KISSES JO)
j:let's go tell the others.
e:i'm right behind you dear.
THATS ALL FOR NOW WRITE MORE LATER

sambino5
05-22-2001, 07:15 PM
HERES MORE
GOES BACK TO THE HOUSE.
j:hey mrsg where is the girls at?
mrsg http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh they went to bed.
j:me and eddie have some good news.
e:i asked jo to marry me.
mrsg:and what did she say?
j:yes I said yes.
mrsg:jo that is wonderful(hugs jo and eddie)
j:thanks.
e:thanks.
mrsg:i'm going to bed I'm tired.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk goodnight.
e:goodnight mrsg.
mrsg:goodnight you guys.
NOWS GOES TO THE GIRLS ROOM.
KNOCK KNOCK.
mrsg:girls we need to talk.
b:can't it wait.
mrsg:it's about jo.
b http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk go ahead.
mrsg:well eddie asked jo to marry him.
n:really.
t:what did she say.
mrsg:yes.
b:really I told you girls I was right.
t:yeah blair you were right.
n:i'm going back to bed now.
t:me too.
b:me three.
b/t/n:goodnight mrsg.
mrsg:goodnight girls.
NOW GOES BACK DOWNSTAIRS.
j:this has been one hell of a day.
e:yes it has been. I find out I have a kid and I ask my best girl to marry me. It has defintly been one hell of a day.
j:well I'm going to bed we have a long day ahead of us tomorrow.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk goodnight jo.
j:goodnight eddie.
e:I love you.
j:I love you too.(hugs and kisses him)
THATS ALL FOR NOW I WILL POST MORE TOMORROW.
HOW IS IT?

BlairandJo
05-22-2001, 07:15 PM
I love it so far please post more soon.

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There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving
-Jo
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Cap:Did'nt you ever have
a dog when you were growing up.
Jinny:I had a plant once,
Did'nt make it.
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Never know till you try
-My Quote

Wild Child
05-22-2001, 07:37 PM
Originally posted by BlairandJo:
I love it so far please post more soon.


Exactly what I was gonna say.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

sambino5
05-23-2001, 07:45 PM
OK HERE IS MORE
NOW IT IS THE NEXT DAY AND JO AND EDDIE ARE AT THE ADOPTION AGENCY.
d:hi i'm david how may I help you folks today?
j:i'm jo and this is my soon to be husband eddie.
d:hi.
e:hi nice to meet you.
d:likewise.
j:well we are here to find my daughter that I gave up for adoption 7 years ago.
d:well I will need to ask you a few a questions.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
d:date of birth?
j:may 17th 1980.
d:what hospital was she born at?
j:cook county general hospital.
d:her full name?
j:alexzandra marie polniaczek.
d http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk let me get this information typed into the computer and I will get back with you in a few sceconds.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
NOW ABOUT 10 MINUTES LATER.
d http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk I found a Alexzandra Marie Polniaczek she lives in Manhattan with Brad and Becky Walker. I will contact the walker's and I will arrange for you guys to meet.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk thanks alot.
e:yeah thanks.
d:your welcome and good luck you guys.
j:thanks.
e:we will sure need good luck.
d:see you guys later.
j/e:bye.
I WILL WRITE MORE IN 5 MINUTES OK

sambino5
05-23-2001, 08:31 PM
I will post more tomorrow ok

Wild Child
05-23-2001, 08:58 PM
Great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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"You're born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

sambino5
05-26-2001, 04:52 PM
OK HERE IS MORE
NOW IT IS THE DAY THAT ALEXZ COMES TO MEET JO FOR THE VERY FIRST TIME.
j:guys how do I look?
e:jo sweetie you look very sexy.
j:aw thanks eddie.
e:your welcome.
n:yeah jo you look nice.
t:yeah you look great.
KNOCK KNOCK
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh god they are here.
e:i'll get it.
br:hi i'm brad and this is my wife becky.
be:hi and this is alexz our daughter.
j:i'm jo and this eddie my soon to be husband.
e:hi nice to meet you.
br:yeah you too.
be:likewise.
br:alexz don't be shy say hi to jo and eddie.
a:hi
j:hi.
e:hi.
br:well we gotta go. bye.
e/j/a:bye.
NOW BRAD AND BECKY LEAVE.
THATS ALL FOR THE MINUTE

sambino5
05-26-2001, 05:04 PM
OK HERE IS MORE.
AFTER BRAD AND BECKY LEAVE.
mrsg:come on girls we have to work on the thing.
b http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh we need to go work on the thing.
NOW THEY ALL GO WORK ON THE THING EXCPET FOR JO, EDDIE, AND ALEXZ.
j:so alexz would you like to sit down?
a:sure i guess.
e:alexz what grade are you in?
a:second.
j:do you like it?
a:yeah i am one the smartest people in my calss.
j:well that's very good.
e:yeah it sure is.
a:so i hear that you guys are my real parents?
j:yes i gave to birth to you 7 years ago on may 17th 1980.
a:wow you are my mom.
j:yes i am.
e:i'm your father.
a:so were you in the room when i came out?
e:no i was in chicago.
a:why?
e:i was in the navy and your mom didn't tell me that she was pregnant.
a:why?
j:i was afraid.
a:can i ask you something else?
j:sure.
a:why did you give me up for adoption?
j:well i was very young when i got pregnant with you i was 16 years old and the day that i gave birth to you the very first time they put you in my arms I feel in love with you and deep down in my heart i knew i couldn't keep you so I gave you to someone who i knew would take care of you.
a:wow that took alot of guts to do what you did and I respect you for that to.
j:well thanks alexz.
a:can i ask you something else?
j:sure.
a:will you guys adopt me? please.
j:do you want us to?
a:yes i do.
e:you not like your foster parents?
a:they are ok.
j:well first thing in the morning we go and adopt you ok.
e:how does that sound?
a:very good.
THATS ALL FOR NOW. MORE IN 5-10 MINUTES

sambino5
05-27-2001, 05:01 PM
OK HERE IS MORE.
KNOCK KNOCK
e:come in.
a:mom dad it's me.
j:alexz what's wrong with you?
a:nothing i want to call brad and becky and tell them I want to live with you guys.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
j:use our phone.
a http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk(picks up phone and dials the #)
br:hello.
a:brad this is alexz.
br:well hi how are you?
a:fine. listen i want jo and eddie to adopt me.
br http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk we didn't like you at all.
a:how can you say that?
br:i just can.
a:brad becky you guys can kiss my ass. GOODBYE.
HANGS UP.
j:alexz.
a:what?
j:don't say that again.
a:say what?
j:*******.
a http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh sorry.
e/j:that's ok.
a:they said they didn't like me.
j:i'm going to call and tell them off.
RING RING.
be:hello.
j:hi becky. listen don't ever even talk to alexz again.
be:what did we do?
j:you said you didn't like her.
be http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifh.
j:you are a bitch and your husband's an *******. bye.
HANGS UP THATS'S ALL FOR NOW.

sambino5
05-27-2001, 05:12 PM
OK HERE IS MORE.
IT IS AT THE ADOPTION AGENCY.
d:hi jo and eddie.
j/e:hi.
j:we want to adopt alexz.
d http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk let me get a few papers.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
d:i just you need you both to sign right here.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
d:and here.
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
e http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk.
d:that's it she is your's now.
j:that's great.
e:yeah it is.
NOW LEAVE.
e:well alexz where would you like to go to eat to celebrate.
a:mcdonald's
j http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/redface.gifk sounds good.
a:mom dad.
j/e:yeah.
a:i love you mom.
j:i love you to alexz i'll love you more than you'll ever know.
a:that's sweet. dad i love you.
e:i love you too alexz.
THATS ALL HOW WAS IT.
MY NEXT FANFIC JO AND EDDIE'S WEDDING.

james_baby87
08-08-2002, 03:17 PM
It was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats all I can say with out giving too personal info,

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
08-08-2002, 08:51 PM
Originally posted by jo_blair_fan
It was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats all I can say with out giving too personal info,

It was terrific!!!:):)Sounds like a good idea for someone to give their child up for adoption when they know they are too young to take care of it! That was a wonderful decision for Jo!!

james_baby87
08-08-2002, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan


It was terrific!!!:):)Sounds like a good idea for someone to give their child up for adoption when they know they are too young to take care of it! That was a wonderful decision for Jo!!
Giving the kid up isn't the easiest thing to do though

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
08-09-2002, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by jo_blair_fan

Giving the kid up isn't the easiest thing to do though

that may be, but, if she really loved her daughter, and obviously she did, she would realize that that's the BEST thing for her.Sometimes the BEST thing for the people we love isn't the easiest thing to do.

james_baby87
08-11-2002, 12:53 PM
Originally posted by Charlotte Rae Fan


that may be, but, if she really loved her daughter, and obviously she did, she would realize that that's the BEST thing for her.Sometimes the BEST thing for the people we love isn't the easiest thing to do.
in this case the best thing is the hardest thing to do

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
08-11-2002, 03:39 PM
Originally posted by jo_blair_fan

in this case the best thing is the hardest thing to do

exactly!