kk...here's my ending to what would i do without you

(((About 4 days later-Blair's release day.-Rachel will be released the day after.)))

J- Come on Al! We're leaving!

A- coming mom! (runs down the stairs) sorry. i'm here. Uhhh...mom can i ask you something?

J- shoot.

A- while mrs.stevens is checking out...can i visit rachel?

J- (smiles) of-course you can. maybe i'll go wit hyou if that's okay.

A- well, sure. i just...kinda wanted to talk to her alone for a minute or two.

J- oh, well okay then. i've seen her enough. i'll jst show you where her room is okay al?

A- yeah, thanks.

N- (yelling from outside) Jo!!! Alexz! come on! let's get a move on!

(Alexz and Jo go outside and drive over to the hospital)

more in few minutes! (I just need a break...my fingers are starting to hurt! lol)

Not bad but I spent FOREVER on my ending which wad great.I thaught you would do something like what I did so yes I am dissapointed.I did not read your fanfic

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I killed Blaitr off

w/e sitcom writer. why do i have to do something like you? this was my (and ks of-course http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif ) fanfic in the first place! so...why do i honestly have to do what you did? i'm redoing it because nobody liked your ending! it doesn't really seem to make much sense for me to re-do something no one liked...no does it? listen..i'm ending this fanfic how i want to...understand?

great ending so far, im glad that u decied to add ur ending cuz frankly the other on sucked eggs

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Jo: could you please tell mrs. onaias to stay outta my way with her hair spray face creams, colonge bottles, sometimes i think i am in a drugstore i look around for the check out stand
B: she should talk its not easy sleeping next to Mr.Goodwrench

*~Katie~*

Not true People loved my ending.I agree it was yours but you should at least put The Ghost in the end because the 3 of uss wrote it together.

No offence or anything, but I haven't seen any posts of people saying they liked your ending. I thought it was horrible... Plus it was originally her fanfic, so you have no right to say you are disappointed or she should have done this or that. Blair N' Jo Rock is a wonderful writer and this story was great, before your ending.

This is MUCH better then Sitcom writers. His ending was horrible.

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
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Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
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Blair: Turn Blue!
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Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
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..*Cassandra*..

alright here is a little more. (oh by the way....sorry sitcom writer but i'm not putting in any ghost)

(((At the Hospital)))

(R= receptionist)

R- May i help you?

J- yes, we're here to check out Blair Stevens.

R- (sees jo,rick,alexz,mrs.g, nat,snake, tootie and jeff all standing around jo) wow...she must be very popular.

(all giggle a little bit)

R- alright..she's almost ready. you may go up to room 305 now. (sees them all starting to go) not all of you! immediate family only.

J- uhhh...well that would be me. we're sorta...sisters in a way.

R- alright, well room 305. remember, be quiet in the halls!

J- alright. oh, wait a minute, can my daughter go visit rachel stevens? i mean i know it isn't visiting hours or anything but do you think she can maybe see her?

R- well, alright. However, she must be accompanied by an adult.

A- (rolls eyes) look lady, i can

J- Mrs. G! why don't you go along.

MG- suuure. (takes Alexz's hand)

more in a sec i just gotta read something...

Awesme! the goast was stupid anyway....

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
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Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
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Blair: Turn Blue!
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Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
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..*Cassandra*..

hey, if u look under the original post...i think...JoPo did an ending and it was good, so i wanted to know if anybody still wanted me to finish this...or stick w/ JoPo's ending...please respond! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

i meant to say jofan4life's ending http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif sorry bout that!

well w/e, i'm gonna write a little more...but will somebody please tell me what they think? (i mean if i should do an ending or keep the other one by jofan4life) k thanx!

MG- (looks at the room number) Well, this is the place!

A- yeah. well, thanks. would it be okay if i visited rachel alone? i mean, you can definatly go in after!

MG- sure. go ahead dear.

A- (smiles) thanks. (takes a deep breath and then opens the door to rachel's room)

(((In Rachel's room)))

A- (sees rachel sitting up in bed-she looks much better because she has had a lot of rest.) Hi!

R- (looks at alexz) Alexz? (happily) hi!!! what's up?

A- oh, nothing really. how about you? i mean, are you feeling better?

R- well yeah. i mean i guess so. i don't look my best but besides that...yeah.

A- (laughs a little) that's good. so...well...i wanted to tell you something.

R- talk away!

A- well...you see when you were first admitted here. Well i was really scared for you.

R- awwwww, how sweet. (giggles)

A- wait, just hear me out.

R- oh, sorry...keep going. (smiles)

A- and, i had wished i said this to you earlier in case you ya know...didn't make it.

R- (clears throught) yes....

A- and well...i just wanted to say that...i don't hate you as much as you think i do.

R- (giggles) that's what you had to tell me?

A- well, yeah. i mean i guess so. (giggles a little to herself)

R- i know you don't hate me! i mean, how could you hate this face! (makes a cute face)

(both laugh)

R- no but seriously al, you may think i was unconsious or something...but i saw what you were doing for me and my mom. (smiles) i never really thanked you for that did i?

A- well, you don't have to i mean it was nothing...

R- (interupts her) maybe it was nothing to you, but i meant a lot to me. (smiles) thanks. (gives her a hug)

A- look, i better go. i mean...i'm not even really supposed to be here.

R- alright. i'll see you tomorrow!

A- yeah. see ya. bye. (walks out of her room)Come on Mrs. Garett, let's go.

MG- but i wanted to see...(alexz starts to walk away) i'll just see her later.

more later! (maybe...please respond telling me yes or no to a previous post! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif )

F-A-N-T-A-S-T-I-C!!!!!!!! Sitcomwriters was disgusting, stupid and horrible. This is great! Goodjob!

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
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Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
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Blair: Turn Blue!
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Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
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..*Cassandra*..
AIM- NjDevilz09
E-Mail- BlairW_2@yahoo.com

(((Now...Blair gets checked out and everyone goes home)))

B- oh, it's good to be home! i know, i sound like you jo, but that hospital was really starting to give me the creeps! (laughs a little but then turns serious again) I wish rachel were here. i mean...i still don't believe that blaine could do such a thing.

T- look blair, no one can believe what he did, but he did. however, now that you're okay, and rachel's pretty much okay, all we have to do is win this case in court and forget you ever knew blaine.

B- tootie, it isn't that easy.

N- look let's try not to think about this now okay? lets just try to have a nice evening. i mean a nice few days...tomorrow everyone will be back and we'll start this whole reunion over okay?

B- well i suppose.

more later! (or tomorrow)




[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-09-2001).]

great so far!

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T: Natalie that is not how the game is played!
N: Canadian Rules!
*~Katie~*

(((One Day Later-at the hospital)))

R-(in a wheelchair being wheeled down to the lobby of the hospital because she is being checked out) Look, i told you i do not need a wheelchair! if you really want to help me you'll give me my curling iron!

N (nurse)- my we're a little excited today aren't we? why, last time i saw you, you weren't even able to talk! now look at you! (smiles)

R- Oh, puhlease. (rolls eyes)

B- Now rachel be nice to the nurse. (smiles)

R- (turns around) Mom! (jumps out of wheelchair to give blair a hug)

B- (laughs) you are a little hyper today!

R- well yeah. i mean that's what happens when you've been in a bed doing absolutley nothing for 5 days straight. (giggles a little)

J- come here kid! (smiles and gives rachel a hug) how ya feeling?

R- i'm doing good. well, better. i mean not perfect but i think that getting out of this place will make me feel much better. can we go?

B- well i think that would be a good idea.

A- yeah me too. come on rach..we'll talk in the car.

(Before they leave nat, snake , jeff, rick, mrs.g, and tootie all say their hellos to rachel and then head home)

more later! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-08-2001).]

great keep going

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JO rocks!!!!!!!!
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J: i'm gonna loosen some teeth!
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AIM ssgoalie8

(((Later that Day)))

R-(walks into the kitchen) hey mom. where's the cosmetic bag?

B- (sitting down with her hand on her head) oh, it's the dresser next to my old bed.

R- thanks! (starts to walk away but then turns around)can i ask you something?

B- Sure.

R- why have you been sitting in the same place for almost an hour?

B- have i really been here that long?

R- (gives blair a weird look)well, uhhh..yeah...

B- oh, i see.

R- so...what exactly are you doing?

B- thinking.

R- about what?

B- nothing. (sighs)

R- oh, come on...like i'll believe that. (she says sarcasticly)

B- you really want to know?

R- would i be asking if i didn't?

B- well fine. i'm thinking about....your father.

R- (shocked) dad?!?! why would you be thinking about him? and don't say you're thinking about getting back together with him because i swear...

B- (interupts her) Rachel...please i have a headache.

R- sorry.

B- i'm not thinking about getting back together with him. i mean after what he did to me...to you.

R- then why are you thinking about him?

B- i'm just a little nervous about court tomorrow okay?

R- why? i mean, you know you'll win...and get a divorce! two for the price of one! (giggles)

B- i know, i know it's just...

R- just what?

B- i don't know if i'm ready to face him.

R- mom...he's in jail already. it's not like he's gonna try and hurt anybody...they'll probably be security guards around him anyway.

B- i don't mean i'm scared to see him. i mean...well...look you wouldn't understand.

R- how do you know until you try?

B- (firmly) i just know.

R- (kind of upset) well...okay. bye. (walks out)

More tomorrow! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-09-2001).]

Great keep going!

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

k here's a little more only one thing, i really don't know what goes on in court so...uhh...i kinda skip a lot of it. SORRY! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

(((The next day at court)))

Bl- (walks in and glares at blair)

B- (closes her eyes and looks down at the ground)

(okay now, like i said before i really don't know anything about court so...i'm just gonna sorta skip it...sorry!!! )

(((Back at home)))

J- i knew it all along blair!

T- we all knew all along! i mean how could he win over you? that would be impossible!

N- you have it good now blair, i mean let's think about it. you have blaine in jail, a divorce, and custody of rachel! what could be better?


B- oh, not much. (sounds kind of upset)

J- Blair...what's been upsetting you so much?

T- yeah, you havn't said a word ever since we left court.

more at around 10:30! (i'm going over my friend's house)

This is really good (so much better than the other ending)I can't wait to hear the rest http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

B- oh well, i've just been thinking.

R- again?

J- Rachel, why don't you and alexz go

A- (interupts her-with attitude) upstairs. i know...come on rach, they're talking about something important. we can't be here.

R- ugh, some people. (both run upstairs)

T- (gives jeff a look)

Je- I guess i should really start packing.

Ri- yeah, me too.

N- alright blair, what have you been "thinking" about?

B- well, my life.

N- thanks for clearing that up.

T- what she means is...well...what do you mean life?

B- well, before i left for this reunion i had a daughter and a husband.

J- yeah...

B- well, i'm going home with well...a daughter. i mean, blaine worked and helped support our family.

J- so you'll work a little harder.

B- i know, i mean i can work hard. really i can. it's just...i don't know. i can't really explain how i feel right now.

J- come on blair. how would you rather live? working a little harder to support a family...or not work at all and live in fear?

B- i guess you're right. i mean, a few months back i got a job offering as a fashion executive at my daddy's company.

N- well then that's perfect!

B- yeah, it is. i mean, i'm sure the job's still open. it's good pay and even though blaine may be in jail at the moment, he still has to pay child support for rachel.

T- yeah! you see that? everything will work out great!

B- (smiles) thanks you guys. What would i do without all of you?

(All hug)

-THE END-

so..what did everyone think?




[This message has been edited by Blair n' Jo Rock (edited 03-09-2001).]

Great! BTW, all you peeps in here, I've decided not 2 leave the board. It's my life, and I don't think I could live without it. So, if you guys could accept me back, I want 2 stay.

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