Here is the start of my new FOL Spinoff The FOL Kidz.It will star the girls kids.
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(Blair is in Pansies Room ready to wake Pansie up)
Blair:Wake up Pansie
Pansie:Why?
Blair:Today is your first day of school at Beckyard U.
Pansie:Why can't I just go to Eastland?
Blair:Your Friend Moody will be there.
Pansie : (Gets up)Moody Bonner is not my friend!!!!!!!!
Blair: (They both Walk to the Kitchen)What did she do?
Pansie:Its not her its her brother Liko
Blair:What did he do?
Pansie:Nothing thats just the point
Blair:So he did nothing
Pansie:Thats right he did nothing
(Pansies Brother Kane walks into the room)
Kane:Who did nothing?
Pansie:None of your beezwax Kane
Blair:Liko Bonner
Pansie:Thanks alot Mom
Blair:You are welcome
Pansie: (yells) I was being Sarcastic!!!!!!!!
Blair:All of a sudden I noticed that you....WERE NOT
Pansie:Yes I was
Blair:Umm I'm doing the Jo Bonner
Pansie:Maybe you should Mom
Kane http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifo the locomotion
(Tia walks in from the Kitchen window)
Blair:How did you get here?
Tia:The Window Miss Warner
Blair:Call me Blair You know I'm not your Headmisstress anymore
Tia:Ok Blair
Pansie:Can I call you Blair Mom?
Blair:No Honey
Pansie:Tia does your mom know you're here?
Tia:No
(Tootie walks in)
Tootie:Its time for you to go to Beckyard U.
Tia:Mom I don't want to go to Beckyard
Tootie:Well you have to
Blair:Thats right we all decided that your 17 and you should go to another school this year
Pansie:Kane and Marco go to Eastland
Blair:Well Beckyard U. is for kids 17 and up
Tootie:Thats rght Kane and Marco are 16
Pansie:I don't find this fair
Blair:All your friends will be there
Pansie:Ok I'm getting dressed
THE END
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Find out what happens at Beckyard U. in my 2nd FOL Kidz Fanfic "Never say never ever" coming soon.What do you think?



[This message has been edited by Sitcomwriter (edited 03-06-2001).]

no comment...

Please tell me what you think?

it doesn't come together. it doesn't sound like an entire store, it sounds more like a conversation. I'n not criticizing your ideas but what kind of names are liko and pancie?
i've never heard 'em b4.
Another Question- what does the story have to do with the title(or mabey the other way around)?

Well, I am finished with critisism. I like it, but the only thing is (Now don't get mad..I don't wanna be rude!) Is I don't understand the title and its a little to short. Other than that I really like it! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Blair: You don't see me getting all upset when people tell me how gorgeous I am!!
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Blair: Blah, Blah, Blah. Emily Dickinson.
Jo: It's freezing. Jo Polniceck.
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Blair: Turn Blue!
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Blair: I have another one of my brilliant ideas!
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