okay.....i'm gonna write a new fanfic....it's starting when everyone's at a reunion and i'm gonna start it...everybody else finish it! Thanks! here goes nothing!

(Everybody's sitting around talking when Blaine comes up from dowstairs)

Bl- BLAIRE...where's my tie clip?!?!?!?!

B- (nervously) I...I....don't know...it must have f...fell off.

Bl- No Blaire...I think you took it! I know you took it....hand it over...you'll never get away with this!

B- (starts getting tears in her eyes) but I would never take anything from you! I promise...

Bl- (yelling) Oh, so now your lying to me?!?!

B- (teary-eyed) No! I really didn't take you tie clip! Please believe me!

Bl- I hate it when you lie like that to me!
(Slaps her)

B- (weakly) Blaine...i...i...

J- Hey leave her alone! She said she didn't take it so she didn't take it!

Bl- Stay outa this!

J- Make me!

B- Jo....please

Bl- I will get that tie clip back Blaire...(slaps her again)

B- (runs upstairs)

(Everyone's staring at Blaine with disgust)

Bl- What are all of you looking at huh? (leaves the house and slams the door)

T- Oh my...

N- Poor Blair...how could he do that to her over a tie clip?

J- I'm gonna go talk to her...

T & N- We'll be up soon.

(Jo walks up-stairs and lightly knocks on the door....she didn't hear an answer...she just heard crying so she slowly opened the door...to see Blair sitting on her old bed weaping)

J- Hey...(sits next to her)

B- W...wh..why....do..doesn't he l..l..love me?

J- I can't answer that...i'm sorry. (hugs her)

B- (Crying on her shoulder)Oh Jo! Ho...how'd i end up like this?

J- Don't be so hard on yourself Blaire, it's not your fault.

(Rachel comes to the door)

R- Mom? Are...ummmm...you okay?

J- Rachel, your mom is a little upset right now okay? She needs to talk to me so go down and play with Alexz.

R- Wait, you don't understand, i saw what my dad did to her and I...

B- you saw?!?!? (starts sobbing)

R- well the door was a little bit open downstairs and i looked through and...well that's not the point mom... the point is that whenever I'm upset you comfort me and help me, and whenever you're upset you tell me to leave you alone and i just wanted to tell you that I love you. Even if dad doesn't love you i do, and i will try to love you double so u can feel like you are being loved by dad too. Well that's all i wanted to say...see ya.

(Blair still crying but letting up a little bit)

J- Your a lucky girl Blaire, you have a daughter who loves you more than anything. Things could be worse, Rachel coud have been on Blaine's side.

B- (almost stopped crying, takes head off Jo's shoulder) I know...I am lucky to have her. What would i do without her?

(both silent for a minute)

J- want me to bring her up here?

B- please...

(Jo starts to walk out...)

B- Oh, Jo?

J- yeah?

B- Thanks,I'm lucky to have a friend like you.

J- No problem.

(Rachel walks upstairs)

B- Rachel hunny?

R- (kind of uuncomfortable) uhhh yeah mom?

B- come here.

(rachel walks over and sits next to her)

B- look, i'm sorry that you had to see me this way, but i just want to let you how much what you said meant to me.

R- it was true ya know!

B- (smiles a little) I know Rach, I know.

(Both hug)

R- Well i'm gonna go, umm ya know hang out with Alexz.

B- Okay sweetie, i'm going to lay down for a couple of minutes.

R- Oh mom? Don't worry about Dad anymore, because between me,Mrs. Bonner, Alexz, Tootie, and Natalie, he'll never hurt you like that again.

(Rachel leaves the room, nad Blair lyes down trying to go to sleep)

(Downstairs)

OKAY! YOU GUYS FINISH IT!

okay, since nobody's replying I'll write a LITTLE bit more.

(downstairs all talking to Jo about Blaire)

T- Rachel! How's your mom doing?

R- (sighs) okay i guess...why?

T- Well I'm very concerned about her.

Mrs. G- We're all very concerned about her.

N- Yeah,Can Tootie and I go up and visit her yet?

R- uhh, not now she told me that she was going to rest for a little while. When she wakes up you can visit her,i think.

T- Okay, thanks.

R- Whatever.

Mrs. G- Rachel?

R- (rolls eyes) what?

Mrs. G-are you...okay? i mean being 11 and seeing everything you have.

R- Yes, i'm fine.

A-Rachel come on! N*SYNC is coming on!

R- I've been trying to come down!

(Rachel goes downstairs to wait N*SYNC with Alexz.)

(N,J,T, and Mrs. G all sit around talking)

(one hour later)

i gusse i will continue it for a little...

Mrs g: so girls how are you doing, tell me about your life so far...

J: well I am now a cop for the state of new york, live in the city with Alexz..

Mrs G: O wonderful, and are you still married to rick?, by the way how is he?

J: hes doing fine, he is in the city today, and yes we are still married

Mrs. G: O that's fantastic, tootie, do people still call you that, how are doing?

T: only my closest friends still call me that http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif and I am now directing small films and plays, musicals. I also still love to sing every chance I get.

Mrs G: thats terrific, following you dream, I have never known one of my girls to give up on their dream!

T: yea, I am very pleased with the way my life has been going, except I wish I could have seen my closest friends more...

Mrs G: it is so great to be all back together again...and of course nat how are you doing?

N: ok..survieing, I write for the New York times and thigns are preety stable at the moment..((a little hesitant when she says this))

T: what do you mean at the moment..?and dont tell me nothing cuz i know there is something..

N: o its a little something of nothing...

T: what is that suppose to mean, if it so not important then you would have told you closest friends...and you best friend, but you did not tell us anything so that means something is not right...

N: OK, I know that tootie wont shut up till i tell so here it gose, I'm 2 months pregnant...

J: thats great, good job nat~

Mrs G: wonderful, the birth of a child is a gift that is so special, and amazing event! congradulations nat~

T: thats awesome nat, but if it was such good news she would have told us before there's more...

N: how dose she know all this, you are right, once i told snake the news he got his stuff and left me..but i am over him now((shes that in a really nonconvincing tone))

T: I am so sorry nat

J: I really am sorry

Mrs G: my dear nat i am terriblely sorry....
((there brife moment of silence is broken by a loud thud on the floor, and a high pitched scream))

T: what was that...?

J: it sounded like it was coming from our old bedroom, where blair is...o no...

keep it going....

this is coming out great! who wants to continue? anybody?

WOW! Ok, I'll give it a shot.
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Jo, Natalie, Tootie, and Mrs. Garrett all rushed up the stairs. Once they were at the door Jo motioned for them to stop. She pulled her gun and kicked the door in...
There layed Blair on the floor with Blaine standing over her, a chair raised above his head. Jo slowly walked into the room and inched closer to Blaine.

Jo: Don't do it Blaine. You hurt anymore than you already have and you'll regret it. There's four witnesses here who will testify, and you have a daughter downstairs who loves you and Blair, and you don't want her to feel guilty about this.

Bl: Oh shut up, Jo.


Mrs. Garrett, Natalie, and Tootie all looked around the corner of the door to see what was going on.

Mrs G: Oh my!

Jo: Mrs. Garrett, get out of here...NOW!

Mrs. Garrett shook her head reluctantly but finally left once Natalie and Tootie convinced her to do so.

Jo: You guys go watch Rachel and Alexz, and KEEP THEM AWAY from here.

The three did as they were told and rushed down the stairs to check on the kids...


Jo, who still had her gun drawed and aimed at Blaine let her eyes wonder to Blair who was laying on the floor clutching her shoulder and crying.

Jo: Blair, don't move your shoulder.

Blaine laughed and stared hard at Jo.

Bl: What, you a doctor now, too?

Jo continued staring at Blaine and slowly took the safety lock off her gun.

Jo: I know how to shoot this thing Blaine, and I sure as hell will if you even ACT like you're going to throw that chair down on her.

Blaine laughed as he inched closer to Blair.

Jo: And I'll blow your fingers off if you take another step toward her.

Blaine raised an eyebrow at Jo, wondering if she was telling the truth. Blaine raised the chair higher and acted like he was about to bring it down...

Before Jo knew what was happening Rachel had run into the room and fallen over her mother, and at the same time Blaine was bringing the chair down...
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NEXT! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

[This message has been edited by ks (edited 01-09-2001).]

wow! who would know that this could turn out to be so good! keep it coming!

wait, i have a question...did Rachel fall because she was shot or because she was defending her mother? help!

i think she ment that she was protecting her mother, but i am not sure! this is wicked good sooooo far!!!

this is great! anyone wanna add on? it's gettin better and better! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif i just fell so sad for Blair and Rachel http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif , I mean they're both probebly gonna be hospitalized, and wow, i hope Rachel or Blaire don't die, I mean what would they do? I wonder if Blaine's gonna be imprisoned?!?! Oy, i'm goin crazy! someone finish this before i really go insane! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/confused.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif

Ok, since no one has added on and I was having fun writing that last part I'm gonna add some more. Here goes...
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Blaine brought the chair down and hit Rachel and Blair. Before they could feel the full impact though Jo had kicked Blaine right in the stomach, causing him to drop the chair and hunch over in pain. He fell on top of Rachel who was now screaming, and Blair who had no signs of life left in her. Jo grabbed him by the shirt collar and tossed him off the two helpless people.

Jo: Someone call and ambulance--NOW!

She bent down by Blair and Rachel's side and immediately assesed their injuries. She noticed that Rachel was getting a big not on the back of her head, and that her jaw seemed to be bruised pretty badly.

Jo: NAT! Get up here.

Jo helped Rachel off her mother and carried her to the bed. She gently laid her down as Natalie walked in the room.

Jo: Nat, go in the bath room and wet a rag and put it on back of Rachel's head.

Natalie looked around the room in shock.

Jo: NOW, NAT!

Natalie snapped out of her thoughts and quickly did as she was told.

Jo then found a small piece of electrical cord and wrapped Blaine's wrists together before he could get up. She then hurried over to Blair and assessed her damages. She tried to find a pulse on Blair, and finally picked up a mild one. She then examined Blair's shoulder and determined it was definetly broken. The thing that bothered her most was the blood that was beginning to come from Blair's ear.

Jo: Damn it, he choked her.


Jo turned around at the sound of people rushing up the stairs. She turned to see Tootie standing there out of breath.

T: The ambulance will be here soon.

Jo nodded and then turned her attention back to Blair. She closed her eyes tightly, trying to think what she should do. She snapped her fingers...

Jo: I need a blanket and an ice pack. I don't have all day so hurry the hell up before I get really impatient.

Tootie tossed a concerned look over at Natalie who was trying to calm down the hysterical Rachel, and then rushed out of the room to get a blanket and ice pack.


Natalie hugged Rachel close...

N: Your mom will be just fine. Don't worry, honey.

Rachel continued screaming and crying...


Jo carefully put Blair in the HELP position, and then leaned up against the wall, pulling her knees up to her chest. Now all they could do was wait...
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Wow! This is fun! NEXT! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

[This message has been edited by ks (edited 01-09-2001).]

Ok...

(Alexz sicks her head in the door and says...)
A: Mom, what happened? I heard someone scream and then- oh my
J: Alexz, try to calm Rachel down! (Alexz nods then goes and sits by Rachel.)
A: Rachel? Can you hear me? If you can hear me, raise your right hand.
N: Wow! Jo, she's really good at that.
J: She goes with me on cases all the time. After she got over the, "My mom carries a gun around all day" thing she started asking to come with me on cases. It's her way of coping with it. That and piano.
A: Good! Now, I'm gonna ask you yes or no questions and if the answer is yes, raise your right hand. If it's no, raise your left. Ok? (Rachel raises her right hand.) Good.

I thought that might add interest to the story! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Cool! I'll go again...
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Alexc inched closer to Rachel and put her hand on the girls ankle.

A: Ok, do you think anything is broken?

Rachel slowly raised her left hand.

A: Ok, that's good. I just want you to know you mom is gonna be fine...ok?

Rachel again slowly raised her right hand.

Alexc nodded and slowly stood up.

A: I gotta go get something, but I'll be right back, ok?

Rachel again raised her right hand. Alexc nodded and walked over to her mom...

A: Mom, Blair is gonna be ok...right?

Jo looked down at Blair who still hadn't opened her eyes or said anything for the past few minutes. She then looked up at her daughter and forced a smile.

Jo: Yeah, she'll be fine. Why don't you go wait for the paramedics?

Alexc nodded her head and gave her mom a reassuring smile and kiss on the cheek.

Jo sighed and pulled herself up to her knees. She then began muttering to herself:

Jo :(muttering) You assesed her damages, took her pulse, put her in the HELP position... think damnit.

Jo slowly put her hands up under Blair's head to give it support.

Jo: They better get here soon...
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NEXT :)


[This message has been edited by ks (edited 01-09-2001).]

this is great! i can't wait to see what happens next! great job ks, and everybody who worked on this fanfic! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

who wants to finish it? ks? anybody?

Will it offend anyone if I take over this story and just finish it completely...? Just asking because it seems no one else is adding to it. Just let me know http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

no, finish it! i don't think anyone will get offended because no one's doing anything and your doing great! finish it up ks! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Ok, thanks. I'll try and finish it all up tonight.

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Jo: Things are not going well here...I think I'm gonna have to hit somebody.
Natalie: I didn't ask you to stick up for me, Jo.
Jo: I think I'm gonna have to hit you.
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Beverly Ann: Let's see. It's tomorrow in Africa so if I want to talk to Edna today then I should have called her yesterday...
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Blair: The worst thing about falling asleep at the wheel is that I didn't get to see my whole life flash in front of my eyes.
Jo: Well that woulda killed ya for sure.
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great can't wait! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

this is really good finish it!HURRY!!!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/eek.gif

ks? you still gonna finish it or you want someone else 2? just curious.

ummm....somebody else wanna finish it cuz i don't think ks will.

anybody?!?!??!?! i mean this is a good fanfic going to waste! come on peepz!

hmmm...anyone? i mean i can't do it but someone should its really good and i can't wait to see what happens next ks!

okay...well since NOBODY else is going to do this, i'll write A LITTLE more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

(Paramedics arive and immediatley put Blair and Rachel on stretchers and put them in 2 differant ambulences. A couple minutes after they leave the police arrive and take Blaine away)

J- ( looks as if almost about to cry) Come on. Let's go to the hospital.

N- Jo...are you okay?

J- (sounds unsure) yeah...i'm...(bursts out crying) oh, who am i kidding?!?!?!? it's all my fault Blaire's in this mess!

T- Jo! It's not your fault and you know it!

J- (still hysterical) Tootie, if i had taken Blaine into the station when he first hit Blaire, none of this would have ever happened! Don't you understand?!?!? I'm a cop! That's my job and when my best friend needed me I blew it and now Blaire...mi..might (starts to stutter) n..no..not l...l...l..live! (sobs) And Rachel! Poor Rachel! She's just a little girl and to have to go through all of this!

(Tootie and Natalie speechless)

A- Mom, Rachel's going to be fine. Don't worry about her and Blaire, well we can all pray for her, but sitting here crying about it isn't going to help at all. We need to go to the hospital and help Blaire get through this tough time, she needs us mom. Let's go.

(Jo hugs Alexz and they all set out to go to the hospital)

Okay! now please you guys!oh and ks? if you want to delete this part and replace it w/ your own, feel free cuz it sucks!

okay...well since NOBODY else is going to do this, i'll write A LITTLE more! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

(Paramedics arive and immediatley put Blair and Rachel on stretchers and put them in 2 differant ambulences. A couple minutes after they leave the police arrive and take Blaine away)

J- ( looks as if almost about to cry) Come on. Let's go to the hospital.

N- Jo...are you okay?

J- (sounds unsure) yeah...i'm...(bursts out crying) oh, who am i kidding?!?!?!? it's all my fault Blaire's in this mess!

T- Jo! It's not your fault and you know it!

J- (still hysterical) Tootie, if i had taken Blaine into the station when he first hit Blaire, none of this would have ever happened! Don't you understand?!?!? I'm a cop! That's my job and when my best friend needed me I blew it and now Blaire...mi..might (starts to stutter) n..no..not l...l...l..live! (sobs) And Rachel! Poor Rachel! She's just a little girl and to have to go through all of this!

(Tootie and Natalie speechless)

A- Mom, Rachel's going to be fine. Don't worry about her and Blaire, well we can all pray for her, but sitting here crying about it isn't going to help at all. We need to go to the hospital and help Blaire get through this tough time, she needs us mom. Let's go.

(Jo hugs Alexz and they all set out to go to the hospital)

Okay! now please you guys!oh and ks? if you want to delete this part and replace it w/ your own, feel free cuz it sucks!

sorry for the repeat my computers messed up!

I was going to finish it..but since ks is..I guess i won't.

No! please finish it! i don't think ks is still going to finish it! please please please finish it!

Ok, I will but could I do some of my reunion first? then I will do a good portian of yours deal?

Sorry for the delay, I've had the flu.
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Natalie, Alexz, Jo, Tootie, and Ms. G all rushed to the hospital, and surprisingly it didn't take long. They allowed Tootie to drive and she never once went under 90mph. Once at the hospital they all jumped out of the car and rushed inside. They ran down the hall and made their way to the emergency waiting room. Tootie, Natalie, Alexz, and Ms. G all sat down and waited nervously. Jo paced back and forth saying silent prayers for the two people laying helplessly in the ER.

...Two hours passed by and still nothing. Jo and Tootie took turns bugging the nurses every half hour, but the nurses gave them the same response every time. "You'll know something when we do." At one point Jo had flashed her badge and threatened to lock the nurses up, but still no news. Now they were all pacing except for Ms. G and Alexz who were sitting on the floor biting their fingernails...

...An hour later, after waiting for three hours, the door to the ER flew open, causing everyone to look that way, and a short bald man walked out with a chart in his hand.

Jo: What's the news doc?
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I'll finish it within the hour-honest!

ks

Ok, here's some more!
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The doctor looked down at his clipboard and then back up at the five people who were eagerly staring at him. "Warner?"

"Duh!" Alexz said.

Jo gave Alexz a little nudge, "Yeah, yeah, that's us."

The doctor smiled at Alexz, but then his expression turned serious. "Well, the young girl is very lucky. She sustained minor injuries to her jaw and forhead area, but nothing permanent. She does have some deep emotional trauma though, and once she leaves this hospital she will need to see a 'special' kind of doctor. As for her mother she wasn't quit so lucky... She has a dislocated shoulder and a broken rotator-cup.
She also sustained great head trauma, and to give it to you straight...she's barely hanging in there. She isn't conscious yet. That's all I know for now. She will be move to ICU and the little girl will be put in a room." The doctor nodded his head and turned to walk away.

Alexz looked up at everyone. "You mean Blair might die?"

Ms. Garrett knelt down and put her hands on Alexz's shoulder. "No honey, she will be just fine. Now why don't we all go get us some dinner and get some rest and come back to see Rachel and Blair in the morning."

Alexz fought back the tears as she slowly shook her head yes.

Tootie and Natalie looked at each other. They each knew they had to be strong for Alexz's sake.

Tootie laughed, "Yeah, I haven't eaten in hours and my stomach is letting me know it."

"You know me. I don't have these healthy bones from looking at food!" Natalie grinned.

Ms. Garrett nodded. "Let's go then"

The four began to walk out of the waiting room, but turned to look at Jo who hadn't said a word since the doctor told the news.

Natalie looked at her with a sympathetic look. "Aren't you coming, Jo?"

Jo just crossed her arms, looked at the ground, and nodded her head.

Mrs. Garrett motioned for the others to go on ahead and she walked back to Jo and embraced her in a hug. "Just keep the faith, Jo, and Blair will be fine."

Jo nodded, "Tell Alexz I love her and will see her soon.

Mrs. Garret smiled, "Will do, and don't worry, they'll all be fine."

Jo shrugged and watched as Mrs Garrett walked out of the waiting room and then out of the hospital...

Jo leaned up against the wall and wiped away the few tears that had managed to escape. She then took in a depe breath and looked around. SHe didn't know what to do, she felt incredibly lost at this very moment...

She looked up at the ceiling and then all her anger and frustration came out. She karate chopped the chairs that were in the waiting room and slung all the magazines all over the place. She then leaned up against the wall and slowly slid down it. There she sat on the ground, her knees pulled up under her chin, and the tears slowly falling down her cheeks...

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What do you think so far?

I'll post more soon!

it's GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!
That's all I have to say. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif
This is great!

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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B: Mrs. Garrett said we could talk to her about anything and not be embaressed.
J: That was sex! This is personal!

Great touch, adding the karate chop part! This is going really good, just wanted to tell you that!

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

this is really great ks! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif thanks. O and by the way i'm sorry that i was so ummmm ya know pushy. I really didn't mean to be like that! honest! please forgive me http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif well anyway, this is great! i'm sure you'll do an amazing job finishing it http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

Ok, here is some more...
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Jo woke up to the sound of sirens and watched as someone was wheeled into the ER. She slowly let her eyes adjust to the light, and then she looked up at the clock on the wall. It read 1:30. She rubbed her eyes and quickly stood up. She looked around the waiting room and remembered trashing the place just a few hours ago. She sighed and inwardly cursed herself for not containing or at least controlling her emotions. She then set to work cleaning up the waiting room...

Back at Blair's house Ms G, Natalie, and Tootie decided to stay the night, and Alexz stayed with them. They had all stopped off and rented a few movies, hoping it would get their minds off the situation at hand. At around midnight they had all fallen asleep except for Alexz who was now outside on the patio starring up at the stars. She sat down in the patio swing and continued starring at the stars as she wiped her tears away.

"God," she spoke in a meek voice. "This is Alexz Bonnor. I know that you've been watching everything that's been going on tonight, and you know that what happened to Rachel isn't her fault, or what happened to Blair. So if you could, will you please make them both better...Thanks." She wiped away a few more tears and put her face in her hands. "Oh, and, God. Please help my momma, too. Amen."

Alexz starred at the stars a few more minutes before going inside and going to bed...





Jo looked around the waiting room that was now spotless again, and she then peeked out the door to see what was going on. She looked over at the nurse's station and waited until no one was looking her way. She quietly and quickly tiptoed to the elevator and made her way to the room that the doctor had said Rachel would be in...
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I'll post more soon! How do you like it so far?

ks http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

like i said before... AMAZING! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

yeah great job! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

way to leave us hanging in suspense! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif this is awesome!!!! i cant wait to read the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! also i can reall see the karate chp part happening and her slidding down the wall crying!

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Nat: Hello sailor!

Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: if you pinch my a$$ one more time, i'll kick your's

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Blair: thunder thighs is hanging up her spikes...
Sue Ann: and you just gave me a great idea were to put them

yeah i thought the karate chop thing was cooooool! heehee!

Ok, here is some more...
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Jo walked down the hallway in the doctor's suit she had changed into so that no one would obtain her. She finally got to the door she was looking for and swiftly opened it and slipped inside unnoticed. She looked over at the bed and at the girl who was laying in it. She swallowed hard at the site of needles and IV's sticking in the girl's arm and she quickly grabbed onto a chair and began talking to herself so she wouldn't faint. Once she was sure that her knees weren't going to collapse underneath her she walked over to Rachel and placed her hand on the girls forhead. She swayed back the loose hairs that had fallen on the girls face and then knelt down and began whispering in her ear...

"Rachel, I know that you can hear me and that you're probably really worried about your momma, but I just wanted to let you know that there is no need to worry. I'm going to go check on Blair and talk to sense into hair so she'll get better. There's nothing to worry about, honey. I promise everything is going to be ok." Jo wiped away a tear and then gave Rachel a gentle kiss on the forehead. "Trust me," she whispered as she stood up.

She squeezed the girl's hand and then quietly left the room.

'Now to go find Blair,' she thought to herself...

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I'll write more soon. What do ya think so far?

Excellent!!!

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nat: Hello sailor!

Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: if you pinch my a$$ one more time, i'll kick your's

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Blair: thunder thighs is hanging up her spikes...
Sue Ann: and you just gave me a great idea were to put them

great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif i luv it!

i luv this fanfic! ks your a great writer!

i've read a lot of fanfics but this has to be one of my all time favs!

Thanks for all the great reviews. Here is some more...
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The doctor walked into the waiting room where everyone was sitting and frowned. "I'm sorry we lost them," he said quietly. He then turned to leave without saying another word...


Alexz sat up in bed with sweat dripping down her face. She sighed, 'it was just a nightmare' she thought to herself. She quickly threw the covers off air and let the cool air hit her legs. That was the second nightmare she had had tonight, and they were always about Blair and Rachel dying. She got out of bed and walked to the window. She looked up at the moon and then dropped to her knees...

"Lord, please don't let them die. It's my fault Rachel is hurt. I let her run up the stairs. I didn't mean to. I just couldn't hold onto her any tighter. If I had held on she would be fine..." Alexz laid down in the floor and curled up into a tight bawl. She didn't cry, because deep down she felt like that she wasn't able to shed anymore tears, and she continued remembering what her mom had always told her-stay strong. Alexz closed her eyes and continued repeating those words to herself until she fell into a restless sleep once again...


Downstairs Mrs. G, Natalie, and Tootie sat in the din sipping on coffee and staring at the black TV set.

"I hope everything turns out ok," Natalie spoke softly as she sipped some more coffee.

"Me, too," Tootie added as she leaned back in the recliner and pulled her legs underneath her so that she was sitting Indian style.

The room remained quiet for a while until it was interrupted by the ring of the telephone. Tootie quickly grabbed it.

"HELLO!" she spoke quickly


"Is this the Warner residents," the voice on the other end asked.

"Yes it is," Tootie said as she looked at Mrs. Garrett and Natalie who were now on the edge of their seats.

"Officer Bonnor asked me to call her there once we got the judges order on Mr. Blaine. Is she there?"

"No, she isn't, but she will be soon so you may leave a message."

"Ok, that will be fine. Please tell her that he is in prison without a chance of bail and his courtdate is set in a week. Is being charge with second degree manslaughter, and we will contact witnesses later that will need to be present at the hearing."

"Ok, will do."

"Thank you, miss and sorry for disturbing you at this odd hour."

Tootie hung up the phone as a small smile spread across her lips. "Blaine is gonna be booked."

Mrs. Garrett and Natalie let out a sigh of relief, and then Mrs. Garrett put down her coffee and smiled at them both.

"Everything is going to be fine girls," she said with a smile. "Everything is going to be fine..."

...At the hospital Jo has checked ICU but got the word Blair had been moved to stable
condition and been placed in a room. Jo hadn't gotten the room number, so she was now going from room to room and floor to floor to try and find a room that had the tag 'Warner' on the door...
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I'll write more in a few minutes. My computer is freezing on me. What do you think so far?

like i keep saying....AMAZING! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

ks, you're the coolest.

Just wanted to let everyone know that I'm going to finish this fic in the next to or three posts which should be up tomorrow night or early Thursday. It would be up sooner but I have church tomorrow and wil be busy. Hope you're liking it so far and sorry for the short delay! I promise it will be worth the wait http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

This is excellent! You are a very talented writer and should keep it up! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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J: Blair, do you ever think of anything but yourself?
B: Like what?
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"Don't rule out using your hands. It does not preclude using your head." --Andy Rooney

"What a chid doesn't recieve he can seldom give later" --P.D.James

Great job! Write more as soon as you can! I love this story! 8)

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J: You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Good, Jo! Why don't you do the books?
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B: A fire! There's been a fire here!
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B: And how are we, Aunt Natalie?
N: We are suicidal!
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Bailey: They losted me!
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T: You mean the agony of da feet!
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T: Did I lie?
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T: They can't dance? Ha! That's like the pot calling the kettle black!
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N: E Pluribus Unum; have a nice day!
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~Danielle~

take your time ks! just lettin ya know it's coming out great! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

this is really good! u should write more fanfics ks!

so....what does everybody think of this fanfic so far? i think it's great! write more soon ks! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

i can't wait to find out what happens! i'm goin crazy!

this is soooooo good! u gotta write more soon honestly!

Sorry for the delay. I start a new school Thursday so I hope to round this fic up by Wednsday night in order to sorta get a clean slate and just focus on school for a few days. Hope everyone is enjoying it, and I'm planning on a new fic that I will put out soon!--ks
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Jo walked out of the elevator and looked down the long hallway. She had been to every floor in the hospital and had yet to find Blair's room. She had even got into the nurse's station and tapped into the computer files in order to find out which room she was in, but they had yet to register so she had no success there... She sighed, this was the last floor though and she knew Blair was on it-somewhere. Part of her wanted to run around the building just screaming out Blair's name, but the other part wanted to leave an go into hiding. Deep down Jo felt it was her fault. She kept telling herself she should have kicked Blaine sooner, or fired a bullet into his foot, but she didn't... She snapped out of her thoughts and slowly begin walking down the hallway that was to the left.

"You can't think like that," she told herself. "If you blame yourself then you're going to get nothing done-just stay focused. Blair needs you, you have to be strong." She swiped the hair out of her face as she walked and continued looking for Blair's room...


Alexc sat straight up in bed once again. This was the third time in the past two hours that a nightmare had woken her up. She picked her pillow up off the floor and flung it across the room. She wiped her brow and slowly stood up. She unlocked the window and position her arms so that she could push up in on the window and it would open. She opened the window and sat on the window seal. She looked down at the bushes and wondered what would happen if she were to jump...


Jo stared at the door in front of her. It had the name 'Blair Warner' on it, and she had been starring at it for the past few minutes, not knowing what to do. She took in a deep breath as she placed her hand on the door knob and slowly turned it and walked in. Once inside she shut the door behind her and looked over at the motionless body that was laying on the bed. She clinched her eyes tight as she looked over at Blair and noticed the cast on her arm and her bruised face. She slowly made her way over to the bed and once she was there she placed her hand on top of Blair's. She pulled up a chair and slowly sat down in it, never removing her hand from Blair's. Once she had sat down she stared at Blair as a small frown formed on the corner of her lips...

"I'm sorry," Jo whispered.

The heart monitor suddenly begin to skip and pick up its pace. Jo quickly stood up and looked around the room.

"What in the hell..."

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More should be up tonight. PLEASE REVIEW!

You better put up more tonight!! I can't wait to read the rest!

Originally posted by lesliem14:
You better put up more tonight!! I can't wait to read the rest!


you got that right! awsome!

omg...what if alexz jumps! this is gettin soooooooo good!

awsome! write more write more! huuuuurrrrryyy! lol jk

Ok, here is smoe more!
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Jo looked around the room nervously, wondering what was going on. Before she knew it a female nurse and a male nurse had rushed into the room and began checking the heart monitor along with the IV's that were running into Blair's arm. Jo watched as the male nurse turned the heart monitor around and flipped a few switches, and the female nurse made sure the needle hadn't come out of Blair's arm. They then turned to Jo and gave her a curios look.

"What are you doing in here," the man spoke up?

Out of plain reaction Jo quickly through off the doctor's suit she had been wearing and pulled out her badge, showing it to the nurses. "This woman is a victim of physical abuse. I have been assigned to her case and need to be here in case she wakes up and is ready to give a statement." Jo held her breath, hoping they would let her stay.

The two nurses looked at each other curiously and shrugged the shoulder. They then turned their attention back to Jo and shrugged their shoulders. "Ok," the man said as he turned to leave the room.

"Hey, wait a minute," Jo said as she rushed towards him. "What just happened here?"

The lady smiled, "Nothing to be concerned about. That alarm goes off when the heart monitor runs out of batteries or the IV becomes positioned wrong. It's just a precautionary measure."

The two nurses left the room. Jo walked over to the chair she had been sitting in and plopped down in it as she breathed a sigh of relief. "Thank God..."


Alexz leaned over and picked the penny up off the dresser. She then turned her attention back to the sidewalk beneath her and let the penny drop. She watched as it fell... She shook her head as she slowly stood up and turned away from the window. She closed the window and walked over to her bed. She laid down in it and stared at the ceiling as she began counting the reasons that Rachel would be ok...

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I gotta go eat, then I'll post more! What do you think so far? Next Jo talks with Blair...

THIS IS AWESOME i cant wait to read what happens next!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought

Awsome! this is sooooooo good! omg! lol

like everyone says this is really good! WRITE MORE SOON!

Here's some more...

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Jo opened her eyes as she tried to gain her bearings. She noticed the sun shining through the windo wna she quickly looked at her watch. It was six in the morning... She then remembered where she was, and why she was there. She sat up and looked over at Blair, who was staring at her with a small smile on her face.

"Hey," Jo said with a smile as she sat up straight and over towards Blair so she could see her better.

"Hey," Blair said weakly as she looked at the cast that was on her arm.

"It'll be fine soon. Guess you'll have to have a designer cast made or something."

Blair tried to laugh, but found it too painful so she quickly stopped. She focused her attention on a sticker that was on the ceiling... "I should have thrown him out sooner-it's all my fault."

"Blair, don't start that."

"You know it's true, Jo. I should have asked him to leave months ago."

"Why? He would've just beet you then. At least this way you had people there to stop him."

Blair slowly turned her head to Jo. "Thanks, I guess I owe you."

"I'll bill ya later," Jo said with a smirk.

Blair once again tried to laugh, but had to stop because it made her uncomfortable.

"Oh, and don't worry. Rachel's fine."

Blair's eyes grew wide, "What's wrong with her? What happened?"

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Gotta do homework. WIll write more soon!

awsome!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
This is soooooooo great and I can't wait for it to be finished! No pressure though. I can wait. I'll just... do the next hundred lessons in our math book to keep myself occupied. I'll find a way...

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J: Partners? You mean 50/50? Uh... 50/50...50?
B: Oh, good, Jo. We'll let you do the books!
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B: I know a phony when I see one!
J: You should. You spend enough time looking at yourself in the mirror.
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T: What it is.
B: What is it?
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Ra: Is it what I think it is?
A: Well... if you think it is, what I think you think it is, it is what you think it is.
Ra: (confused) What is it?
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J: Well, I hate to tell you this, but you're wrong. Oh, and please see that it doesn't happen again in our marriage.
R: Right. Hello, my baby, hello my darlin' (runs into door) Hello, my aching head!
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B: You were a concert pianist?
R: Yeah, what's wrong with that?
B: On a regular size piano?
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T: Jo, I know you're upset. I don't know why. (Jo glares at her) And I don't need to know why, but when I'm angry at someone, do you know what I do? I write and angry letter to the person that I'm mad at and then... I don't send it!
J: Oh, that'll teach 'em, Tootie.
T: Well, if I'm still mad the next day, I send it to myself. That way I'll have the satisfaction of knowing how the other person would have felt if I had had the courage to send it to them. What do you say to that?
J: Get out!

~`~ Kenzie ~`~

omg write more this is sooooooo good!

Originally posted by BlairyPie105:
omg write more this is sooooooo good!


write more A.S.A.P! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

FINISH THIS SOON KS! ITS SO GOOD I CAN'T STAND WAITING ANY LONGER ITZ TO GOOD!

Originally posted by BlairyPie105:
FINISH THIS SOON KS! ITS SO GOOD I CAN'T STAND WAITING ANY LONGER ITZ TO GOOD!


what she said...lol


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You're so spoiled that if you were milk the date on the carton would read BC. -Jo
Turn Blue. -Blair

Sigh
I hate it when you do that.
Do what?
Sigh!
I don't sigh.
Well if it wasn't a sigh you got a slow leak.
Sigh
You did it again!
That's called breathing.
You do it just to annoy me!
No, I do it to keep from dying.
Now there's an idea!
-Jo and Blair-

-Kerri-

ks,
i am not trying at all to be rude so don't take this the wrong way. this fanfic might just be one of the best i have ever read and it should be finished, not left abandoned just sitting here on the board. i think that everyone who has read this story agrees with me when i say that you need to finish this story soon! i'm not saying that it has to be done today just sometime soon! okay? thanks!

-Eddie+Jo4Eva-

Originally posted by Blair n' Jo Rock:

what she said...lol




what they said

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Terry: Jo, c'mere! Quick! I gotta show you somethin'. Now, don't laugh. (holds up dress)
J: Yeah?
T: It's a dress!
J: So?
T: I bought this to wear to a dance at school, only never did.
J: Why not?
T: I went bowlin' with the guys instead. Actually, I had a good night; I broke 220. The only difference between Paulie and me is that he's taller? Well, I'll show them! I bet they never saw Paulie in one of these!
J: Can I ask you a question?
T: I guess.
J: Does this have anything to do with the dinner guest you got them to force you to invite?
T: What do you mean?
J: That was brilliant the way you did that. He's real cute.
T: Tony? He's not cute... he is gorgeous! Jo, you gotta help me!
J: How?
T: (runs over and dumps a bag of makeup out) I bought all this stuff, but I on't know how it works!
J: Well, what do I know about makeup? I just brush my teeth and go.
T: Jo, I don't need much. Just enough where Tony will notice... and Pop won't.
J: This is way out of my league. What you need is an expert. Someone who spends 24 hours a day lookin' at herself in the mirror.
B: Hello?
J: It's me. I've got an emergency.
B: Good heavems, you're in jail!
J: Don't kid around, Blair. We're desperate. There's a face here that desperately needs your help.
B: Okay, what shape is her face?
J: (looks at Terry) It's face shaped.
B: Does it look like a heart or an egg?
J: (looks at Terry) I think it looks like an apple. Blair, hold on a second. Are you sure you want to do this?
T: I've got to!
J: I'm not sure if they're ready to see you come down the stairs lookin' like a...
T: Looking like a girl? They better be. 'Cause ready or not, here I come.
~`~ Kenzie ~`~

finish this! PLEASE!!!!!!!

ks, this is getting ridiculous.

ok, how bout someone else just finishes it? ks is good, but its been sitting here for a while...

well, hehe, ks, if you read my last post, i was just in terrible suspense. I do think U should finish it http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif (ASAP!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif)

I don't know about all of you but I am beginning to think there may be some specific reason she hasn't finished this fanfiction. She used to post pretty much every day on the main board but I have not seen a post by her in ages. So I am starting to think there is probably a good reason why this fanfiction is not done.

Abbey

okay, now since ks pretty much abandoned this..,i'll write a little bit of it...anyone can add on though.

J- Blair, just calm down she's going to be fine.

B- he hurt rachel?!?! why? why would he do that?! i just don't understand. How could he?

J- blair, just calm down!

B- (yells) Jo, don't you tell me to calm down! it's not your daughter that's laying in a hospital bed! (puts her hand on her head)

J- (doesn't know what to say)

B- (tear rolls down her cheek) I have to see her.

J- you and i both know that your in no condition to

B- (interupts her) she's my daughter jo, she means more to me than anything in the world right now. She needs me, and i'm going to see her.

J- I understand, but i don't think that the doctors will let you go out right now, i mean you're in pretty tough shape.

B- they don't have to know. (she says firmly)Jo, i have to see her, but i can't do it alone. Will you please help me?

J- I know it's wrong but, yes...i'll help you out. (smiles)

B- (smiles back) thanks.

(both figure out a plan to sneak into Rachel's room.)

(((Now it's 3:30 in the morning-remember jo was visitng blair in late night to begin with)))

J- (still wearing the doctor outfit)Alright, come on.

B- (gets into wheelchair) ready.

(jo remembers where rachel's room is and wheels blair there)

J- (puts hand on Blair's shoulder outside Rachel's room) ready?

B- i think so.

J- (opens door and wheels blair inside)

B- (gasps at the sight of rachel) omg. (covers eyes) jo...i...i..

J- blair, be strong...for rachel.

B- (takes a deap breath) you're right. (wheels herself over to rachel's bedside)
Hi..honey. Can you hear me?

R- (slightly opens her eyes and weakly says...) mom? i...is (coughs) that you?

B- yeah. i'm here. (strokes her hair and gives her a hug)you go back to sleep sweetie, just know that i'm here with you.

R- (weakly smiles) i love you mom.

B- (smiles) i love you too.

J- blair, you know the plain..see you in about...3 hours. i guess i'll just...chill in the emergancy room...(gives a weird look)

B- stay in my room. the doctor's won;t notice. they never come to check on me anyway.

J- alright...i'll be back at exactly 6:30 to take you back up alright?

B- sure...thanks jo.


more later! but..if anybody else wants to add on...feel free! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

k i'll do a little more...i'm not very good w/ writing stuff about hospitals but...i'm trying! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

(((About 6:30 a.m.)))

J- (walks in rachel's room to see blair fast asleep by rachel's side) Hey. (taps blair) Come on...let's go.

B- (yawns) is it 6:30 already?

J- believe it or not. Come on...

B- alright. let me just say goodbye.

J- blair, i wouldn't wake her right now.

B- (sighs and gently strokes Racel's hair) love you. (gently kisses her cheek.)

J- (smiles and wheels blair back into her room)

(((Back in the room)))

J- you better get some more sleep alright? I'll visit you later today.

B- alright...goodbye jo, and thanks for everything.

J- no prob. (leaves the room)

k..will someone else take over from here? i have no idea how to end this so.....

anybody?

I'll write a little:

(Blair and Jo are at the hostpital)
Jo:Shes Gonna Die
Blair:My daughter is not gonna die
(Tootie walks in)
Tootie:Hows Rachel?
Jo:Shes gonna die
Blair: (yelling) My daughter is not gonna die
Jo:Yes she is
(Rachel walks out of the room)
Rachel:Hi
Jo:You're not dead
Rachel:I faked it all
(Alexz is rushed to the Hostpital)
Jo:Is my daughter gonna die
Blair:Maybe
I'll write more soon but anyone can add on!!!!!!!

I'll give it a shot:

(Rachel is all well and Blair is happy)
Blair:Lets leave the Hostpital
Rachel:Ok
(Jo comes in)
Jo:No we can't
Blair:Why
Jo:Alexz....(Starts to cry) Died
Rachel: (Starts to cry) What?
Blair: (Starts to cry) How?
Jo:She hit her head in the shower and......died
Blair:Wow........
(Rick comes in)
Rick:Shes dead
Jo:No.........NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pippa:Andy and I heard the news and rushed over here as soon as we could
(Alexz comes back as a ghost that only Rachel and Jo could see)
Alexz:Hello
Jo and Rachel:You're alive
Blair and Rick:WHOS ALIVE?

Keep on posting!!!!!!!

omg, sitcomwriter..you like totally just ruined the whole thing! ugh, no offense but you really should take all of that out and just let Blairnjo finish it! she says she can't write hospital scenes...i mean rachel faking it! horrible!

Hey it cold all be a dream.I'll still write a little.Its going real good.I like a good Ghost story.None Taken!!!!!

I'm not getting rid of it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heres more:

(Blairs Place)
Blair:So you faked it
Rachel:No
Blair:What do you mean?
The Ghost of Alexz:Tell her you saw me
Rachel:Jo and I can see the ghost of Alexz
Blair: (Can now see the ghost) Oh my god!!!!!! Alexz is that you
The Ghost of Alexz:Yes and you can get me back to life if you compete 3 tasks

Keep on posting!!!!!!!!

FACE IT SITCOM WRITER! YOU RUINED IT! WHOEVER AGREES WITH ME SAY SO! THIS WAAAAS MY FAVORITE FANFIC BUT NOW LOOK AT IT! KS, BLAIRN'JO ANYBODY! DO SOMETHING!

I have to say I'm sorry this is going good though.Alexz as a ghost how cool now Blair and Rachel need to compete 3 tasks.WOW I can't to see what you guys do with it.Please reply to my Fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to say I don't like what Sitcomwriter did but here is a little bit more:

(Blair is in the dessert with The ghost of Alexz and Rachel)

Ghost:Here is your 1st task:Blair must trick Jo into singing a song
B:What?
Ghost:What I just said
R:Thats dumb
Ghost:What do you mean?
R:Its just dumb
Ghost:no it Isn't
B:Yes it is
(Jo walks in)
J:Hey ghost
Ghost http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gifo they want to turn me back?
J:Yes

More soon....

Let me give it a try
(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
((Ednas Edibles))
(Jo and The Ghost of Alexz are talking)
J;You were my daughter
G;I still can be
J;Dead people can't be my daughters
G;Yes they can
J;No they can't
G;Mom
J;Yes
G;I hate you
J;What?
G;I want to be dead

*Please write more*

@Let me have a spin at this@

$(Blair is at Over our heads cleaning up)$
Blair$ Tra la la
$(Jo comes in)$
Jo$ Hey Blair
Blair$ So Alexz is dead?
Jo$ Yes and she and I both want her to be
Blair$ Compete her tasks

^WRITE MORE IF YOU DARE^

I was going to add on to this fanfic a while ago so I come back today and its a whole other story.I decided because not many people like Sitcomwriters part of the story that I end it.Here it is:

(Blair is in the dessert while Jo is in Heaven)
Blair:How did Jo die?
Ghost:She just did
Blair:Kill me
Ghost:If you wish
The End
What do you think?

Not bad.I really loved the way you ended it.I wonder what the orignal writer will think?To all my friends here on the board it was a long fanfic but it ended nice and I want to thank you for that.

No offense to anyone but ever since Sitcomwriter added to the story...it sucked.Sitcomwriter...I really like your other fanfics but...the end of this one is bad.I don't mean to be so mean but it's the truth.I'm sorry.

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"Your born,you move on,you die,that's life."-Jo
Nancy McKeon is #1!!

Sorry sitcom writer but I have to agree with everyone else. I think ya ruined it.

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

ok this may come off sounding mean but you know what i dont really care at this point! ok what happened to Blair N'Jo fan fic...which she worked so hard and it really showed...but now its turned into facts of life meet casper the freakin' ghost!!!! what the h.e. double hockey sticks happened??!! i am sry if i came of sounding like a totally beast but you ruined one of the best fan fics!!

i usually like to keep on good terms with everyone but things get to a cetain point where u cant take anymore!

sitcomwriter-i'll try not to be mean but i am very upset right now so i can't really help it if i am. u really messed up me and ks's fanfic. however, even though this may be wrong, i am going to add my own ending also. both will be up, mine and yours that way people can choose which one they want to read. how does that sound? i'll do it a little later today.

Ok that would be good.I have to say that you said anyone could write so I decided to take a spin at it and I should have read the fanfic first.Yes you can post your ending(wow I wonder what will happen will Jo return home or will Blair)I'm so excited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I didn't mean to make anyone upset.SORRY!!!!!!

You guys are soo right Sitcomwriter ruined it!!!!!!!

Yes I did

Since everyone was angry over sitcomwriters part I wrote some from where Blair n' Jo Rock left off. Does anyone want me to post it?

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

NO WAY MY PART WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SO AWSOME

Yes, jofan4life, PLEASE post your ending!

Oh, and BTW...does anyone else find it sort of ironic that After Sitcomwriter's post, every other post was an unregistered person whos parts of the story were exactly how Sitcomwriter always writes his? Interesting.....

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Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "I hate it when you do that!"
Blair: "What?"
Jo: "Sigh!"
Blair: "I don't sigh!"
Jo: "Well if it isn't a sigh you've got a slow leak!"
Blair: (sighs)
Jo: "You did it again!"
Blair: "That's called breathing."
Jo: "You do it just to annoy me!"
Blair: "No,I do it to keep from dieing."
Jo: "Now there's an idea!!"
~Steph:)

Yeah they were my friends Katie,Mike and Jacob.I hope everyone loved my part of the story(I know they did).PS.To my co-writers we wrote it good.To califorina Girl Nice ending.MY FANFICS ARE THE BEST BECAUSE EVERYONE LOVES THEM.I MADE THIS FANFIC ALOT BETTER.

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NBC Rules

I didn't finish the story cuz I was really stumped so i just added a small part between Jo and Alex to get it started and someone else can finish it.

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

K I jsut read the story today and it was really good untill sitcomwriter took over could someone please write a ending that goes w/ the rest of the story like before that?It was soooooooooo good before all that ghost stuff.

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Blair:If I don't spend money soon,well I'll just pull all my hair out.
Jo:Good,we'll finally get to see what color the roots are.

Ok I put Blair n’ Jo Rock’s post in here too so in case anyone forgot what happened.

(((About 6:30 a.m.)))
J- (walks in rachel's room to see blair fast asleep by rachel's side) Hey. (taps blair) Come on...let's go.
B- (yawns) is it 6:30 already?
J- believe it or not. Come on...
B- alright. let me just say goodbye.
J- blair, i wouldn't wake her right now.
B- (sighs and gently strokes Racel's hair) love you. (gently kisses her cheek.)
J- (smiles and wheels blair back into her room)
(((Back in the room)))
J- you better get some more sleep alright? I'll visit you later today.
B- alright...goodbye jo, and thanks for everything.
J- no prob. (leaves the room)
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Ok that’s where she left off now I am going to add some. It isn’t much but it’s a start
(Jo walks in the door turns on a light and sees Alex sitting on the couch)
J- What are you doing up? (Knows that she is upset about Rachel)
A-(Looking down at the ground) I couldn’t sleep
J- (Sits down on the couch next to Alex and puts her arms around her) Rachel is going to be fine.
A- (Starts crying) No she isn’t. I saw what she looked like. You don’t hafta lie to me.
J- Alex…(Alex looks up with tears streaming down her cheeks) Would I ever lie to you about something like this?
A- (Stops crying) No. I guess your right. I’m sorry mom. (Hugs Jo)
J- (Puts her arms around Alex) It’s okay. Now how about we go get some sleep?
A- (Smiles) Okay (Jo and Alex stand up, put their arms around each other and walk upstairs to their rooms)
((((Alarm clock goes off))))
A- (Eyes slowly open as she reaches for the alarm clock)
J- (Walks in) Good morning!
A- What’s so good about it? (Still very sleepy)
J-(Smiles) I have a surprise for you.
A- (Perks up) A surprise?!
J- (Opens door) Wheel her in Blair!
A- Blair?! But I thought she was in the hospital.
(Blair comes in the room pushing Rachel in a wheelchair)
A- Blair!!!! Rachel!!!!
(Suddenly someone is shaking her)
J- Alex? Alex wake up.
A- (Slowly opens her) Huh? (Sits up fast) Where’s Blair and Rachel?
J- How should I know.
A- You mean they aren’t at the hospital?
J- (Starts laughing) The hospital?! I wish.
A- ( Frowns) Don’t say that! You care about them and you know it.
J- (Stops laughing) I was only kidding of course I care about Rachel and yes even Blair. What’s with you anyway.
A- Nothing I think I just had a bad dream.
((((Doorbell rings))))
A- I’ll get it. (Runs downstairs and opens the door) Rachel!
R- Hey Alex listen I was wondering if your mom has any lipstick I can (is interrupted by Alex hugging her)
A- Rachel you’re my best friend and I don’t know what I would do without you.
R- (Confused look on her face) You’re my best friend to Alex.
J- (Walks down the stairs in shock) I never thought I would see the day when Alex went nuts.
(Blair walks in)
B- Hi all!
A- Blair!!!! ( Runs up and hugs Blair)
B- ( Happy look on her face) I never thought I would see the day when Alex became normal. (Looks over at Jo and smiles)
A- I don’t know what I would do without you guys.
(Everyone smiles and hugs Alex)
The End
Well I tried my best what do ya think?


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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

Ok I put Blair n’ Jo Rock’s post in here too so in case anyone forgot what happened.

(((About 6:30 a.m.)))
J- (walks in rachel's room to see blair fast asleep by rachel's side) Hey. (taps blair) Come on...let's go.
B- (yawns) is it 6:30 already?
J- believe it or not. Come on...
B- alright. let me just say goodbye.
J- blair, i wouldn't wake her right now.
B- (sighs and gently strokes Racel's hair) love you. (gently kisses her cheek.)
J- (smiles and wheels blair back into her room)
(((Back in the room)))
J- you better get some more sleep alright? I'll visit you later today.
B- alright...goodbye jo, and thanks for everything.
J- no prob. (leaves the room)
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Ok that’s where she left off now I am going to add some. It isn’t much but it’s a start
(Jo walks in the door turns on a light and sees Alex sitting on the couch)
J- What are you doing up? (Knows that she is upset about Rachel)
A-(Looking down at the ground) I couldn’t sleep
J- (Sits down on the couch next to Alex and puts her arms around her) Rachel is going to be fine.
A- (Starts crying) No she isn’t. I saw what she looked like. You don’t hafta lie to me.
J- Alex…(Alex looks up with tears streaming down her cheeks) Would I ever lie to you about something like this?
A- (Stops crying) No. I guess your right. I’m sorry mom. (Hugs Jo)
J- (Puts her arms around Alex) It’s okay. Now how about we go get some sleep?
A- (Smiles) Okay (Jo and Alex stand up, put their arms around each other and walk upstairs to their rooms)
((((Alarm clock goes off))))
A- (Eyes slowly open as she reaches for the alarm clock)
J- (Walks in) Good morning!
A- What’s so good about it? (Still very sleepy)
J-(Smiles) I have a surprise for you.
A- (Perks up) A surprise?!
J- (Opens door) Wheel her in Blair!
A- Blair?! But I thought she was in the hospital.
(Blair comes in the room pushing Rachel in a wheelchair)
A- Blair!!!! Rachel!!!!
(Suddenly someone is shaking her)
J- Alex? Alex wake up.
A- (Slowly opens her) Huh? (Sits up fast) Where’s Blair and Rachel?
J- How should I know.
A- You mean they aren’t at the hospital?
J- (Starts laughing) The hospital?! I wish.
A- ( Frowns) Don’t say that! You care about them and you know it.
J- (Stops laughing) I was only kidding of course I care about Rachel and yes even Blair. What’s with you anyway.
A- Nothing I think I just had a bad dream.
((((Doorbell rings))))
A- I’ll get it. (Runs downstairs and opens the door) Rachel!
R- Hey Alex listen I was wondering if your mom has any lipstick I can (is interrupted by Alex hugging her)
A- Rachel you’re my best friend and I don’t know what I would do without you.
R- (Confused look on her face) You’re my best friend to Alex.
J- (Walks down the stairs in shock) I never thought I would see the day when Alex went nuts.
(Blair walks in)
B- Hi all!
A- Blair!!!! ( Runs up and hugs Blair)
B- ( Happy look on her face) I never thought I would see the day when Alex became normal. (Looks over at Jo and smiles)
A- I don’t know what I would do without you guys.
(Everyone smiles and hugs Alex)
The End
Well I tried my best what do ya think?


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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

Sorry i thought it didn't post so I posted it twice on accident.

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Marsh~Mallow
Quotes said by Jo (my fav character)
Your born You move on You die
Thats life
There are people in this world who get shoved around and there are people who do the shovin
I thought you liked me in that way that you like somebody when you like them in that way
You're so stupid you couldnt spell IQ
I hate teaching people how to drive;they're nervous, they make mistakes, and they cry when you slap them
Here's to all who wish me well and all the rest can go to...
Jersey

great! i really like that! if i saw this post before i started my ending i never would have in the 1st place! does nebody still want me to finish it cuz i thout that this was a really gr-8 ending http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

MY FANFICS RULE!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T HATE ME!!!!!!!!!