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80skid
02-25-2001, 12:47 PM
**OK, I thought this one up late last night around midnight or so when thinking about FOL fan fics... so it might be a little choppy, I don't know!!**



(Edna's Edibles. Jo is scrubbing a counter with a dazed look on her face. Tootie and Nat have noticed it and come over to investigate)
Tootie: Jo?
Jo: Yeah?
Natalie: Anything happen today at Langley?
Jo: Only the best thing in the world.
Tootie: Which is...?
Jo: Love.
Natalie: Love?
Jo: I met a really nice guy.
Tootie: And...?
Jo: His name is Josh.. Josh Davis.
Natalie: Cute name!
Jo: Doesn't Jo Davis sound great?
(Tootie and Natalie stare at each other)
Natalie: Uh..
Jo: But we don't even call each other Josh and Jo.
Tootie: You don't?
Jo: He loves motorcycles and is from the Bronx. I can't believe I never met him before...
Tootie: What do you call him?
Jo: Well, you used to call me Mr. Goodwrench, right?
Tootie: Uh-huh.
Jo: I'm Mrs. Goodwrench and he's Mr. Goodwrench. Sort of like "pet names".
Natalie: This is serious and you've only known him for less than a day!
Jo: What's wrong with that? (continues scrubbing) We're going out tomorrow night.
(Blair comes in, carrying flowers)
Blair: Jo, these are for you.
Jo: They are?
Blair: From a "Mr. Goodwrench."
Jo (grabbing them from Blair): Thank you.
Blair (to Tootie and Natalie): What's up with her?
Tootie (mimicking Jo): Love...

(I've got to go now... some kind of school party that's two hours from 12 to 2 so I'll be back around 3:30 to POSSIBLY finish it up... if not today then tomorrow, I promise! What do you think of it? Email me or post! hehe http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif )

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go MS VBall/Badminton, esp. #35!!

Tootie: There's gonna be trouble!!!!!!!

Natalie: I'm so brilliant it scares me!

80s' sitcoms 4-ever, especially Facts of Life!!

Mrs. G: Give me broccoli... or give me death!
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Mustang Mimi 04
02-25-2001, 03:14 PM
It's good- Mr and Mrs Goodwrench- how sweet! :-D

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Tootie: Can we sing?
Jo: Sing?
Tootie: That's what I do when I'm scared what do you do?
Jo: Slap people


Blair: A Warner is like a delicate soufle
Jo: Yeah light and empty


Nat: I'd rather be a happy magic marker than a skinny pencil


Blair: (Cliff's parents) live on a farm.
Tootie: A farm?
Jo: As in e-i-e-i-o?


Jo: Which one's the pig?
Tootie: That's predictable Jo, insulting Blair.
Jo: I wasn't insulting Blair, I
All: was insulting the pig!

80skid
02-25-2001, 04:28 PM
(Here's some more)

Blair: So who's this Mr. Goodwrench?
Jo: That cute guy I met today.
Blair: Josh Davis? That guy you were practically hanging on?
Natalie: I think Jo's sick. "hanging on a guy" and "Jo" in the same sentence suddenly makes my stomach turn.
Jo: Why? It makes my stomach feel wonderful!
Tootie: They're also going out tomorrow night.
Jo: And tonight.
Natalie: Tonight? You didn't mention tonight! Tonight's your work shift because Mrs. Garrett has something with her son tonight!
Jo: Natalie, Natalie, Natalie. You can do it for me.
Tootie: Because she's got *Mr. Goodwrench* tonight. (rolls her eyes). C'mon, Nat, let's get started.
Blair: Wait for me. I`ve suddenly got to work too. (she looks at Jo for a second before joining Nat and Tootie.)
Jo: Have fun! (smiles) I know I will.

(at a cafe that night)
Jo: How long did you live in the Bronx for?
Josh: Until I went to Bates at sixteen.
Jo: You went to Bates? I went to Eastland!
Josh: Maybe we saw each other.
Jo: But wouldn't know each other until now.
(they kiss just a little)
Josh: So, Jo, I was wondering...
Jo: Yes?
Josh: Umm, I know I only have known you for a day, but already I've fallen in love with you.
Jo: And...?
Josh: Would you marry me if I asked you to?
(Jo chokes a little on her Coke)
Jo: Is this a proposal?
Josh: If you can call it that.

(Jo sighs and looks thoughtfully at Josh)
Jo: I guess.

Sorry... I've got to go now and study for a stupid English test I've got tomorrow. I'll try to fit some in later tonight or tomorrow, but it will be done in the next two days ! I promise!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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go MS VBall/Badminton, esp. #35!!

Tootie: There's gonna be trouble!!!!!!!

Natalie: I'm so brilliant it scares me!

80s' sitcoms 4-ever, especially Facts of Life!!

Mrs. G: Give me broccoli... or give me death!
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Jeanie
02-25-2001, 08:34 PM
I like it. Please post more soon.

Jeanie

ILuvJo&Blair
02-25-2001, 09:51 PM
this is good. keeep it up. http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

80skid
02-26-2001, 05:42 PM
(Here's some more!!)

Josh: "I guess?" Just "I guess"?
Jo: Well, I almost married two years ago. I'd like to think about it before I'm ending up planning a wedding for once.
Josh: You almost married?
Jo: Yeah.
Josh: What made you change your mind?
Jo: The fact I was too young. Well, that and Mrs. Garrett - the former dietician at Eastland - changing my mind.
Josh: You're not too young now, are you? You're in college now, not just high school.
Jo: How long will you give me to think?
Josh: As long as you need.
Jo: I'll tell you tomorrow.

(Later that evening - back at Edna's Edibles)
Mrs. Garrett: So where'd Jo go tonight?
Natalie: Out with her new friend.
Blair: New? I wouldn't be surprised if Jo came home saying she got a marriage proposal!
Tootie: At the rate Jo talks about him, we'd probably hear wedding bells by next week!
Mrs. Garrett: Honestly girls, I don't think Jo's getting married.
(Jo walks in)
Jo: Guess what!
Tootie: You're getting married?
(Jo's smile leaves her face)
Jo: What'd you guys do, spy on me or something?
Tootie: W-w-what do you mean?
Jo: If I just say "yes" to Josh, I'm going to get married!
Natalie: I'm hearing wedding bells.
Mrs. Garrett: You won't say "yes", will you? You know what happened a couple years ago!
Jo: That's different. As Josh says, "You're in college now, not just high school." Lots of people get married in college.
Blair: And you'll be one of them?
Jo: Probably!

More later tonight! I promise either tonight or tomorrow... I'm really really sorry!

Love The Facts Of Life
02-26-2001, 06:02 PM
This is so great I love it.I can't wait to read the rest http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jo:I don't know you got to admit:Force has some good points.
Blair:Jo's hoping to attend the Chuck Norris School Of Law.

Nat:Who wants to be a skiny pencil?I'd rather be a happy magic marker.

Ms.G:Girls!Will you tell me what's been going on here?
Nat:Group sleep walking?
Ms.G:(gives that"Idon't believe you"look)
Blair:Well,you know the first day of school getting settled in and meeting new people....
Tootie:Yeah!!And now comes Miller time!

J Polniaczek
02-26-2001, 06:10 PM
This is sooo awesome! I can't wait to read more!

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Blair: I can't believe this! My parents are spending a fortune so I can get frostbite!
Nat: It's not that bad.
Blair: Maybe not to you, but a Warner is like a delicate souffle.
Jo: Yeah, light and empty.

Captain: Didn't you ever have a dog, Jinny?
Jinny: I had a plant once. It didn't make it.

80skid
02-28-2001, 04:46 PM
(Here's more!!)

Mrs. Garrett: Jo, this happens to be one college fad I'm not loving.
Jo: It's a trend.
Mrs. Garrett: All right, it's one college *trend* I'm not loving!
Natalie: You promised him tomorrow morning. (passes her a sponge) Tonight you can work.
Jo: I'm too excited to work!
Tootie: When would your wedding be?
Jo: Sometime over spring vacation or something like that.
Mrs. Garrett: That's anytime now!
Jo: So?
Mrs. Garrett: So hold off on getting married!
Jo: But... but...
Blair: She's right.
Tootie: You gotta hand it to Mrs. G for great advice!
Natalie: She's the "Dear Abby" of Peeskill!
Jo: I want to get married! And he's the one! He's...
Mrs. Garrett: Go work on your shift, Jo.

More later tomorrow... sorry, I just have a load of tests before spring vacation!

BlairW_1
03-01-2001, 08:32 PM
This is great! Write more soon!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

80skid
03-02-2001, 06:17 PM
(Here's some more... like I said, I'm really sorry this has been in bits and pieces, but before spring break next Friday, my teachers are giving us in every subject tests all next week!)

(That evening. Jo angrily works on her shift)
Jo: They don't understand. They don't understand how he's the one for me and vice versa. They'll never know.
(Mrs. Garrett walks over)
Mrs. Garrett: Jo...
Jo: Mrs. Garrett, you don't understand.
Mrs. Garrett: I do. When I was in college, I fell in love with this very nice boy that we shared everything and anything in common with - but then he gave me a proposal.
Jo: Really? Did you say yes?
Mrs. Garrett: I told him "No."
Jo: But your love was perfect - everything in common, just like me and Josh.
Mrs. Garrett: I told him, "I'm your friend. I'm glad to be known as your friend but I'm not ready to be known as your wife."
Jo: Did he take it hard?
Mrs. Garrett: It took him a while. But I'd say it to Josh and I'm sure he'll understand.
Jo: But I won't understand in my mind why I shouldn't marry him.

I'm sorry, but I promise promise promise there'll be more later this weekend, but I have to go... soooooo sorry http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/frown.gif

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-02-2001, 06:22 PM
cool cant wait to read more!

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Jo: there are two things we dont joke bout, the yankess and wht roy just did to me!
*~Katie~*

80skid
03-03-2001, 04:20 PM
(Here's the sorta rushed ending cuz I couldn't think of any other conclusion but this one... http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif )


(The next morning at Langley; where Blair and Jo are talking)
Jo: I've avoided him all morning.
Blair: I can tell. You're actually walking with me to class for a change. Maybe I'll get used to it after you talk to him.
(Jo glares at her)
Blair: Didn't mean it like that.
Jo(walks quicker and notices him): There he is. It's now or never.
(she walks away from Blair and over to Josh)
Jo: Hi Josh.
Josh: How's it going?
Jo: We need to talk.
Josh: About marriage?
Jo: Yeah.
Josh: I agree.
Jo: You do?
Josh: I don't think it's time for us to get married.
Jo: You don't?
Josh: I don't mind being known as your friend but your husband's different.
(Jo remembers what Mrs. Garrett has said and realizes Josh has said something around those lines, but not quite)
Jo: You're saying you don't care being known as my friend but you don't want to be known as my husband?
Josh: Or whatever someone told me to say if we decided not to get married. Anyway, you thought...
Jo: I think you were trying to say I like being known as your friend, but I'm not ready to be known as your husband.
Josh: Probably.
Jo: I feel the same way.
Josh: So you just want to be friends?
Jo: Fine with me. You want to walk to class?
Josh: Sure.
Jo: Let's go before we're late.
(They walk off together as... the end!)


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80s' sitcoms 4-ever, especially Facts of Life!!

Tootie: Nat's and my friendship is like a boat. We keep rocking and rocking and...
Jo: I'm seasick.

Blair: Don't hurt my baby palm!

go badminton! #35 rocks!

Jo: Cool it, Nat! Nice girls don't throw trees!

BlairW_1
03-03-2001, 04:49 PM
I think it's great! I thought the ending was really sweet!

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"God grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change the things I can, and the wisdom to know the difference."

~*Danielle*~
Go #33! Lady Bulldogs all da way! Basketball rulz!

LiL_Miss_Goodwrench_815
03-03-2001, 05:57 PM
that was wicked good! and i thought the ending was awesome...WHATCHYOUTALKINGBOUT 80skid? hehe i cant wait to see diff'rent strokes!!

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Jo: blair do you know what this means?i never have to hear you breath again!!!
Blair: and i never have to see your ugly face again!!!

Anti-reality shows!!trying to take over sitcoms!!
the tribe has spoken,
*~Katie~*

BlairandJo
03-03-2001, 09:47 PM
I love it!!!!!!!;o)

james_baby87
08-21-2002, 02:31 PM
That was awsome!