View Full Version : I want your opinion


Devastation26
02-02-2001, 12:21 AM
I am creating a new FanFic and i want to run a sample by you to get your opinion. Lemme know what ya thing.


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(This excerpt is subtitled: The True Origin of Whassssssup!)

Michelle: What's up Ms. Warner, I need to see you about something.

Blair: What's up? I see the ceiling, the ceiling fan, an ugly ceiling pattern.

Jo: That's slang for hello Blair.

Blair: I knew there.

Rob: What's up, huh. Listen to this...Whasssssssup! Well, whadd'ya think.

Jo: Definitely commercial quality

Blair: what would you be selling Rob, beer?

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Well, what do you think. The FanFic is called "Michelle's Story" The excerpt is from the beginning. If you like it I'll finish it.


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Andy: C'Mon Ms. Garrett, throw us a song.

Ms. G.: Born in the U.S.S.R.

Fol_divison_rox_505
02-02-2001, 04:45 PM
great cant wait to see how it turns out!

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Tootie: hot stuff coming through, and the pizza's are warm too!

Jinny: i think i am going to give up men
Magda: you, give up sex?
Jinny: i didn't say i was giving up sex, i just said i was giving up men! to tell you the truth i kinda like the idea of becoming intamate with something that comes with a money-back gaurentee!

Jinny: You sure he's still up and moving around there, Cap?
Captin: Jinny do you really think that a crack about the age of your commanding officer is the smartest thing you could say under the circumstances
Jinny: umm.. probley not
Captin: thats what I thought