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JessieOrJinny
06-02-2006, 09:26 AM
Yeah, so I haven't written these in soo long lol. But I think it's about time I do...so here it is so far->:eek:

[Setting] The day after Jinny Exstead weds with artist Hank Riley, and had a ceremony in Jinny's father's backyard.

Starts: Jinny-(Walking close to Hank feeling very excited, cheerful about how they're going to spend their honeymoon.)
Hank-Jinny, how about we ask your father if he could do us a favor and watch John while were gone?
Jinny-Ah, I don't know I mean I feel like I'd be leaning on him too much in a way because he is getting older and__
Hank (Cuts her off) Ok, well whatever you feel comfortable with. We should of made plans sooner..hmm(Nods and turn his head left and right seeing who is listening in.)
Jinny-Sorry, (Suddenly growing frustrated) ok, now I just feel that you're agging at me for not planning this ahead of time.
Hank-No, no no honey, Jin I'm not mad. Look, well find someone to babysit for the baby.
Jinny-God, you're right, I'm sorry. (Rubbing her hand against her forehead)
Hank-(Wraps his arms around her waist) Jinny, I love you. I hope you're happy with me and I am going to try my best to fullfill all your precious needs.
Jinny-(Smiles a little) I love you too.
Jinny's Dad-Jinny, my Jinny-girl is finally married! (He says in an excited voice and goes to hug her)
Jinny-(Hugs back feeling a little anxious)
Hank-How about the beach? The one you were mentioning you loved when you were like 13?
Jinny-Ohh, my gosh Ocean City, NJ? (Grows less anxious and more forward)
Hank-Yep, that one.
Jinny-Are you sure that is where you want to go?
Hank-Babe, as long as it's relaxing and you're happy.
Jinny-(Reaches up and kisses him)
(All of a sudden Ronnie, Jinny's half sister steps in the doorway as the volume of the room turns silent.)
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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-07-2006, 05:53 PM
Yay a new fic!!! Please keep writing on this! Sorry I didn't see it sooner! I can't wait to see where it's going! :wave:

JinKateFan
06-10-2006, 01:25 AM
anxious to see more. nice start

Swimgirl587
06-10-2006, 07:28 PM
great fic...keep it up...can't wait to see more :D