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I love it!! You have done a good job of keeping the characters in character!! Can't wait to read more!! :happyface :happyface :lol: :lol: :D :D :) :)

Michelle

It's very good! Makes me want to read more too!

You're good! Good story already, can't wait to read more! :D

Ah, thanks guys :D I will post the next bit here when it's written (next week prob'ly) :)

I may be too late to comment, but I agree with the others, it makes me want to read on! Excellent stuff. :D

You've really 'got' David and Maddie too - it sounds like them speaking and reacting and thinking. Whilst I read, I'm actually imagining them acting it out!

I look forward to the next installment!! :wave:

Mul

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It's great! I look forward to reading the next installment!

Love Gem

Excellent job on this! You have definitely captured the spirit of the two of them, and this could have been torn out of an episode.

I can't wait to see where you go with this. :)