You've gotten to me
I think your crazy sometimes
You don't mind my suicidal fits of anger
I love your guitar
and it may seem bizarre
but I love you too

All the tears we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be alright",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrived,saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart

Your the one I mive
The one I wanna spend forever with
You love me for me
I love you for you
You say I'm pretty
That I just can't see

All the tears we cried,saying "Every things gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arrive, saying "I love you" into the night,These little things on which I strive,are my feelings of the heart.

You welcome me with open arms
I know you mean no harm
One day we'll leave
All you have to do is belive


All the tears that we cried,sayin' "Everything's gonna be all right",keepin' each other alive,counting the moments till you arive,sayin' "I love you" into the night,these little things on which I strive are my feelings of the heart

Now that this love song is ending
I hope you won't be forgeting
That I love you,
That I miss you,
and that I adore you
and I know you love me,too

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:bump DAMN PEOPLE RATE THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I liken it to dirt.

pretty creative.

Mmm... I'm really not a fan of poetry, exept Haiku... You got any Haiku hiding in your creative mind? :grineyes:

:bump DAMN PEOPLE RATE THE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You've got to give people time to respond. Not just 10 minutes.

You've got to give people time to respond. Not just 10 minutes.

sorry I was just really excited about it.

I like it :D

:D THANKS!I like it :D

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That was good,well done :)

That was good,well done :)

thank you!

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...says the person who posted multiple threads of the same pointless 800-word story and posts other threads merely to inform everyone that he loves doral cigarattes.

Hi Paris Hilton :bouncers

Hi Paris Hilton :bouncers
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Really good. It would make good lyrics to a song. :)

I like it alot ecpsecially the chorus, but I honestly think in some parts you are just trying to rhyme and that doesn't make for good lyrics. Like the "We both hate Hilary Duff" verse.

I like it alot ecpsecially the chorus, but I honestly think in some parts you are just trying to rhyme and that doesn't make for good lyrics. Like the "We both hate Hilary Duff" verse.

yeah you'll have to excuse that....It was 3:00 in the morning. :lol: Any suggestions?

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That was really rude :( If you didn't wanna see it,you shouldn't have clicked :mad:

He is mistaken. See:

I'm the good-looking one. ;)

I'm the good-looking one. ;)

haha :lol:

I'm the good-looking one. ;)
You need to put on some weight! ;)

[QUOTE=Max Whittaker]I'm the good-looking one. ;)[\QUOTE]

i'm the one with the staple remover =)