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Bella_KitKat 09-05-2004, 11:30 PM Hey, I got this idea from another message board () and I thought it might be fun here. WE'll write a story. Together. I'll start it, and then you guys conitnue it. A scene, a paragraph, however much you want. It doesn't matter. Here's the beginning....
Ashlee Simpson's newest single blared through the speakers, so loud that Janet could hear every word, every syllable prefectly, even though she was sitting on the balcony, the door closed. She was at her sister's house in Indiana, and right now her 16 year ol niece was throwing a huge blowout, what Jen privately dubbed her semi - annual 'to hell with parents' party. Janet sighed, tears spiiling down her cheeks, the lyrics seeming to taunt her. "[I]Ohhhh/ it seems like I can finally rest my head on something real / I like the way that feels..." The moment she had learned the devestating news, she had picked up her things and ran. And now, two hours later, she was thousands of miles away from California, from her problems. But that didn't make it any better. She still had no idea what to do. She placed her hand on her now-flat stomach where a smal life was growing, sighing heavily. As the result of one night of drunken passion that both of them had regretted ever since then, she was pregnant. With Jack's baby. And she had no idea how he'd react.
Janet McFarland 09-06-2004, 12:21 AM Jack woke up in his bed the next day. Groggy, he turned over to see his alarm clock. 12:21 P.M. it said. "I wonder why Janet didn't wake me up", he wondered, she always does." With Chrissy away in Fresno visiting her family for Thanksgiving, Jack and Janet had been spending more time together than ever. Their schedule consisted of going out to lunch and dinner, staying up late cuddling together even though they both had work the next day, and just talking. "Something isn't right," Jack thought. Then he remembered. Him and Janet went out last night, to the Regal Beagle. He remembered he was paying for everything they ordered, including the drinks. But then he suddenly forgot what happened after that. Trying to remember, he got out of bed and walked to Janet's room, and knocked. Nooone answered. "Janet, I need to ask you something," Jack said as he slowly opened the door. Janet wasn't inside, and it looked like she had left Apartment 201.
Bella_KitKat 09-06-2004, 07:17 PM Her hand was shaking as Janet once again slammed down the telephone, but now tears were streaming down her cheeks. Now I know I'm pregnant. Either that, or I'm going emotionally insane. She had tried unsucessfullt to call Jack for the last half hour, but had always chickened out after the sixth digit. Sisters were wonderful things. Jen had wisely chose to take her daughters shopping with their friends, leaving Janet to face her demons alone. She knew she had to call. Jack must be so worried about her. Taking a deep breath, she let it ring and Jack's concerned voice tore her heart apart.
"Where are you?" were the first words out of his mouth. "Baby, are you okay?"
Her knuckles were white from gripping the reciever so tightly. "Jack, um, there's really something I need to tell you...."
LuLu Rogers 09-06-2004, 07:17 PM Janet looks at her watch "8:30am, Jack's probably up now, looking for me. I guess I should go back and tell him how I'm feeling." She makes her way back home. Meanwhile, Jack is searching franticly. "Where could she be?! She wouldn't just leave without telling me first!" He calls the police, but they cannot help him until Janet has been missing for 24 hours. He sits on the couch and cries, praying that he will hear from her soon. Later, Janet arrives. "Oh Janet! You're alright! I was so worried!"
He runs up to hug her, but sees that she's upset and decides against it. "What's wrong Janet?" "Jack, We need to talk." They sit on the couch together.
LuLu Rogers 09-06-2004, 07:18 PM Originally posted by Jack's Girl
Janet looks at her watch "8:30am, Jack's probably up now, looking for me. I guess I should go back and tell him how I'm feeling." She makes her way back home. Meanwhile, Jack is searching franticly. "Where could she be?! She wouldn't just leave without telling me first!" He calls the police, but they cannot help him until Janet has been missing for 24 hours. He sits on the couch and cries, praying that he will hear from her soon. Later, Janet arrives. "Oh Janet! You're alright! I was so worried!"
He runs up to hug her, but sees that she's upset and decides against it. "What's wrong Janet?" "Jack, We need to talk." They sit on the couch together.
Sorry! Bad timming! Disregard!
MRS. Ralph Furley 09-06-2004, 07:21 PM ok, i'm not going to continue the story because i couldn't write to save my life.http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_3_102.gif but i want to ask you that jack didn't find out about the child till he was like 3, i would like him to suspect it first. i mean i would like the child to act silly like him and look a little like him. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_14_12.gif
Janet McFarland 09-06-2004, 07:59 PM "Ok Janet, I'm listening, go ahead," Jack said as he patiently waited for Janet to tell him her news.
Bella_KitKat 09-07-2004, 09:32 PM She sighed, dreading the words that she was about to say. "Jack...um...do you remeber what we did a couple of nights ago?"
"Not really," he responded uneasily, not quite sure he was liking where this conversation was headed. "What's wrong? Just tell me, 'cause I've got to be honest, you're really scaring me."
Janet took a deep breath. "We had a little - a lot - too much to drink, and I kissed you. You kissed me back, and, well, to make a long and embarrasing story short, we had sex. A couple of days ago, my period was late, so I took a test. I'm pregnant, Jack. And it's yours."
MRS. Ralph Furley 09-08-2004, 07:19 AM TC is a funny show, How is getting Knocked up funny. :confused:
verynsanedru 09-08-2004, 11:43 AM well depends on where the person got knocked up
Janet McFarland 09-08-2004, 06:22 PM Originally posted by MRS. Ralph Furley
TC is a funny show, How is getting Knocked up funny. :confused:
What?
Anyways..
"When?" "How?" When Janet didn't respond to the how question, he knew that was a stupid question to ask. "Janet, are you sure you're pregnant?" Jack asked. After Janet said her baby was his, a million thoughts went through his head. Yeah, he wanted to be a father, but not now. And with Chrissy coming back in a few days, how was she going to react? And would Janet keep the baby?
Bella_KitKat 09-08-2004, 09:48 PM "Yes, I'm sure," Janet whispered, tears once again brimming in her eyes. "I know this isn't what you wanted. I'm sorry."
Jack's voice was gentle yet firm. "All right, Janet, listen to me, honey. 'Sorry' does not enter into this equation, okay? Making a baby takes two people, and I promise you that throughout this pregnanacy will involve two people. For the next nine months and years after, I'll be there for you, okay? Whatever you want. Just come home. We've got a few days before Chrissy is due back, and we can use the couple of days to figure out what we're going to do."
"Thank you," she murmured softly. "I needed that. I'm really scared, Jack."
"I know, sweetheart. It scares me, too. Just, please, come home to me. I just want to hold you and be there for absolutely everything." He was about to hang up the phone, but thought of one more thing he needed to say. His voice was so low Janet wasn't quite sure she'd heard him correctly, but she knew it had been said. "I love you. I love you both."
Janet Tripper 09-08-2004, 10:15 PM That is really cute!!:D!!! I enjoy reading it...keep it going;)!!!!!
:wave:
Bella_KitKat 09-09-2004, 07:22 PM The moment Janet opened the door to the apartment, Jack's outstretched arms were waiting for her. She ran to him, clinging tightly to his shirt, tears pooling in her eyes. He kissed her lips softly, though they lingered a little longer than usual. "So...there's a baby in there."
She nodded, smiling in spite of herself as he placed his hand on her stomach. "That's what the doctor said."
Jack sighed, pulling back slightly, his arms still securly wrapped around her. He touched her cheek softly. "We're going to have a baby."
"I know," Janet replied, her eyes shining with pride and unshed tears. "My parents are going to so hate me."
"No, they won't," he assured her. "I won't let them. I'm always going to protect you, Janet. You and our child are the two most important people in my life now."
"Thank you for being so wonderful," she murmured. "It really helps."
"How do you feel?"
Janet laughed softly. "Icky. But it's a good 'icky', you know? I can definently put up with the nausea. We're going to have a baby!" She snuggled deeper into his embrace, thankful beyond belief for this guy. "This may sound weird, but if I were to have a drunken night with anyone and have it end up like this, I'm glad it was you."
Jack kissed her on the forehead. "I'm glad it was you, too."
"What are we going to tell Chrissy? And Larry? And - oh,God - the Ropers?"
"We'll figure it out. We'll figure everything out. Just don't stress out, cause I read somewhere once that it isn't good."
She glanced at him in amazement. "You're really going to stick around, aren't you? You're not going to walk out on me later on."
"Never," he promised, hugging her fiercely. "Never, ever. I'll always be here whenever you need me."
Janet McFarland 09-09-2004, 07:54 PM "Aww hon, that's so sweet of you, I really appreciate this," Janet replied softly. And she really did. She loved Jack, and it wasn't love like brother and sister love, it was real love. She wasn't sure how Jack felt about her, so she wasn't going to say anything. She was so stressed out, but just being in Jack's arms made everything go away.
"I wonder if it'll be a girl or a boy," Jack replied, interrupting her thoughts. "I hope it's a girl, I've always wanted a girl," Janet replied. When Jack didn't say anything, she asked what was wrong.
"Do you think I'll be a good father?" Jack blurted out. "I mean, I want a baby, you know I do, but will I do a good job?" "Janet, you were born to be a mother, you can see that, but I'm not sure how it will be with me."
"Oh Jack, you'll be great!" Janet exclaimed. "Why are you even worrying about this, you're funny, sweet, honest, responsible, and pretty cute if I might add." Janet giggled when she said that last line.
"Aww Janet, thank you so much, I'll do the best I can at this, I just want to make you happy." And he meant that with all his heart. He loved Janet more than anything else in the world and he was going to be commited to her and their new baby, no matter what it took. He then hugged her and gave her a kiss, and surprisingly, he enjoyed it.
MRS. Ralph Furley 09-09-2004, 08:45 PM Aww this story is so beautiful, your doing a wonderful job girls, keep it up. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_5_107.gif
Bella_KitKat 09-09-2004, 09:15 PM Originally posted by MRS. Ralph Furley
Aww this story is so beautiful, your doing a wonderful job girls, keep it up. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_5_107.gif
Why don't you try to write what happens next? We'd love to hear it...
Janet McFarland 09-10-2004, 03:44 PM Originally posted by MRS. Ralph Furley
Aww this story is so beautiful, your doing a wonderful job girls, keep it up. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_5_107.gif
Thanks :D
Bella_KitKat 09-10-2004, 05:51 PM The first sounds he heard when waking up was gagging coming from the bathroom. When Jack went to investigate, he found Janet on her knees hunched over the toilet. He waited untill she had stopped. "You okay?" he asked softly.
"Does it look like I'm okay?" she snapped. "It's six in the morning and I'm puking my guts out. It doesn't take a genuis to figure that one out." She would have yelled some more, but the nauseated feelings overwhelmed her again and she threw up.
Jack came up behind her, tucking stray locks of hair behind her ears and wrapping his arms lightly around her waist. "I've got you, love," he murmured. "I'm here."
She managed a half hearted smile. "Thanks. I'm...I'm sorry for yelling. I just...I just hate waking up to this...and the hormones, I get all bitchy. I'm sorry."
He planted a small kiss in her palm. "It's fine. Sweetie, you're carrying our baby. You're allowed to be cranky." He held his hand out to her. "C'mere, hon."
Willingly, she went to him, curling up in his lap and sighing heavily. "Just one more thing I have to get used to."
"The throwing up?"
"Everything changing. Everything changing between us."
MRS. Ralph Furley 09-10-2004, 08:56 PM Originally posted by jackandjanetforever
Why don't you try to write what happens next? We'd love to hear it...
Thanks for your interest, but writing is not my thing. :(
Poor Janet, i heard that smelling a newspaper in the morning is good for morning sickness. :confused:
Janet McFarland 09-15-2004, 08:06 PM "Aww Janet, don't think like that," Jack said affectionately. "How about I fix you up a special breakfast, it's Saturday, and we can spend the whole day together," Jack added. Janet weakly nodded her head.
"That would be nice." "Thanks Jack, this means alot to me."
While Janet showered and got dressed, Jack was in the kitchen cooking their special breakfast. He cooked all of her favorites, which consisted of eggs, bacon, blueberry pancakes, and fruit. He put some flowers in a vase on the table, adding a nice touch.
Janet then walked in, admiring everything. "Oh Jack, this looks good enough to eat!" she exclaimed. She then realized what she had just said, and giggled. Jack smiled, "Well that's another Chrissyism we can add to our long list," Jack said playfully.
Then, as if on cue, the phone rang. "I'll get it," Janet said quickly. As soon as she recognized who was on the other line, she almost died. It was Chrissy.
LuLu Rogers 09-17-2004, 04:17 PM Janet regained composure, and managed to say, "Hello." "Hey Janet! Are you and Jack doing ok?" Janet looks around nervously. "Oh yeah, we're fine." "Good! I wish I could say the same about my mom." "What's wrong Chrissy?" "I'm afraid that mom has taken a turn for the worst. The doctors say she won't make it much longer." "Oh Chrissy! I'm so sorry! Do you want to talk to Jack?" "No, that's ok. I need to go, Goodbye Janet." "Bye Chrissy. Take Care." Janet hangs up the phone and goes back to Jack in the kitchen. "Who was that honey?" "It was Chrissy. She said that her mother isn't going to last much longer." "Oh, poor Chrissy!" "Yeah. I feel sorry for her." "Well, we'd better eat our breakfast before it gets cold." "Yeah, I guess you're right." They sit down and enjoy their breakfast together.
MRS. Ralph Furley 09-17-2004, 05:16 PM Janet, (on the breakfast table looking at janet) "Yes Jack" "i want you to know that i wasn't complete drunk that night, i knew what i was doing, i just wanted you so much, i remember everything that happened, it was the most wonderful day of my life. (Janet reaching out for Jacks hand and looking straight in to his eyes) "i remember it too, and i wouldn't change that night for anything in the world. i love you jack" (Jack, replys sweetly and lowly) "and i love you baby"
I just didn't want them to be drunk the night the baby was concieved. i hope is alright. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_2v.gif
Bella_KitKat 09-17-2004, 10:36 PM "So what do we do now?" Janet asked.
Janet Tripper 09-17-2004, 10:51 PM Originally posted by jackandjanetforever
"So what do we do now?" Janet asked.
Jack smiled and Janet smiled back tenderly. “Well we better think fast we have a little Tripper on the way,” Jack said laughing as he touched Janet’s stomach.
Janet smiled thinking of how much she loved the man in front of her. Slowly and carefully she rested her hand on his right cheek. “You are the most wonderful thing that has happened to me Jack. I love you and knowing that you feel the same way about me has changed everything. It’s like I am in a whole new world.”
“You mean so much to me too, Janet. I know it was very irresponsible for me to take advantage of the situation that night we…well you know.” He smiled as they both blushed. “But I knew that if I ever wanted to be with you it had to be then, because I didn’t think you ever feel this same way about me.”
Janet’s eyes filled with tears as her heart skipped a beat. “I’ve always loved you Jack, and always will.” She said as she leaned over to kiss his soft lips.
Bella_KitKat 09-17-2004, 11:06 PM He kissed her back, his mouth and lips gently teasing hers. Never once breaking the kiss, he scotted his chair across the floor so he could pull her onto his lap. She moaned softly, his tongue probing hers for entrance. Her lips parted to let his tongue enter. "I love you," she whispered softly.
"I love you, too," he murmured, his forehead touching hers as their fingers became entwined. "And I love this baby."
Janet smiled slightly, but it soon turned into a worried frown. "How am I ever going to tell my parents that I had a one-night stand? They'll murder me...and then they'll go after you."
Janet Tripper 09-17-2004, 11:12 PM Originally posted by jackandjanetforever
He kissed her back, his mouth and lips gently teasing hers. Never once breaking the kiss, he scotted his chair across the floor so he could pull her onto his lap. She moaned softly, his tongue probing hers for entrance. Her lips parted to let his tongue enter. "I love you," she whispered softly.
"I love you, too," he murmured, his forehead touching hers as their fingers became entwined. "And I love this baby."
Janet smiled slightly, but it soon turned into a worried frown. "How am I ever going to tell my parents that I had a one-night stand? They'll murder me...and then they'll go after you."
"Well we can get marry!" Jack said as if he had just ocme up with the greatest idea ever.
"Marry?" Janet asked suprised. This was happening to fast. She loved Jack and getting marry was their only option but she knew this was to fast. A small feared build up; she didn't want to get hurt. Jack was rapped up in the moment and she feared that someone prettier, sexier and better than her will come around make Jack be his normal girl-chasing self and he would soon drop her and the excitment of their new baby.
"What's the matter...Janet?" He asked as his smiled turned upside down. "Don't you ...wouldn't you want to marry me?" He asked hurt.
Bella_KitKat 09-17-2004, 11:30 PM "Y-yes...yes, someday," she finally stammered, unsure exactly of what to do. She was sure that if Jack's armshadn't been securely around her, she would have slid off the chair. Not good for a pregnany woman. But, then again, what do you say when your best friend tells you after a hundred years that the girl he wants is you?
"Why not now?"
"Because, Jack, I know you. It sounds awful, but I don't think you really love me. You love the idea of me. Or else you love me and want to marry me because you think it's the right thing to do. Well, guess what? I'm not a charity case, and I don't need anybody's pity. Especially yours. I don't want to raise this baby on my own, Jack, but I will if I have to. I will not put us through the pain of being loved and then walked out on when something prettier comes along."
Janet Tripper 09-17-2004, 11:38 PM Originally posted by jackandjanetforever
"Y-yes...yes, someday," she finally stammered, unsure exactly of what to do. She was sure that if Jack's armshadn't been securely around her, she would have slid off the chair. Not good for a pregnany woman. But, then again, what do you say when your best friend tells you after a hundred years that the girl he wants is you?
"Why not now?"
"Because, Jack, I know you. It sounds awful, but I don't think you really love me. You love the idea of me. Or else you love me and want to marry me because you think it's the right thing to do. Well, guess what? I'm not a charity case, and I don't need anybody's pity. Especially yours. I don't want to raise this baby on my own, Jack, but I will if I have to. I will not put us through the pain of being loved and then walked out on when something prettier comes along."
"Janet I love you and I respect you. I love everything about you even this stuborn attitude you've always had." Jack said as he notice the concerned on Janet's face.
"You are right. I've been known to do that. You know me more than anyone else, but thi is different Janet." He said as he pulled her closer towards him. "This is you." He said as he rubbed her hand.
"I know Jack this is me...this is 'US' we are talking about and that is why it makes me so nervous. I know you better than I know my self, we have been living together forever. I know how much you love girls and I also know how responsible you, if you know you have to do something you do it...even..." Janet's eyes could no longer held back the tears as they started to roll down her face. "even if its not what you want." She finished.
Bella_KitKat 09-17-2004, 11:49 PM "Why don't you let me decide what I want?" he whispered softly, caressing her cheek. "Janet Wood, I love you. I love you and I love our baby. I want to be with you, and I'll tell you a secret. I'd want to be with you even if you weren't pregnant. I love you so much."
Janet's mind flashed back to a movie she and Jenny had watched when they were teenagers. She had scoffed at the concept then, but now she held it so true.
She was totally, absolutely, positively convinced that it was possible to fall in love in one day.
Because it had happened to her.
Janet Tripper 09-17-2004, 11:59 PM Originally posted by jackandjanetforever
"Why don't you let me decide what I want?" he whispered softly, caressing her cheek. "Janet Wood, I love you. I love you and I love our baby. I want to be with you, and I'll tell you a secret. I'd want to be with you even if you weren't pregnant. I love you so much."
Janet's mind flashed back to a movie she and Jenny had watched when they were teenagers. She had scoffed at the concept then, but now she held it so true.
She was totally, absolutely, positively convinced that it was possible to fall in love in one day.
Because it had happened to her.
Jack's wonderful words made feel like she was the only woman on earth. He had the most incredible way of making her feel so special.
She smiled letting him know she was over her little moment, “Sorry Jack. I just …losing you would be the worst thing that could happen to me…I am just afraid but I love you so much how could I deny myself this wonderful life with you by my side for the rest of our lives.”
”So what do you say baby?” Jack said with the sexiest smile. “Do you think you have what it takes to be Mrs. Janet Tripper?” He asked playing with her hair.
“You bet you.” She replied with a small kiss.
Bella_KitKat 09-18-2004, 12:14 AM "We're really getting married?" she asked him softly, before sqealing and throwing her arms around his neck. "We're getting married!"
He laughed, giving her stomach a light pat. "I love you, sweetheart." Suddenly he turned serious, kissing her long and hard. "I gave you my heart that night, Janet."
"And I'm never giving it back," she murmured, giggling as his mouth rained down her neck.
The feel of his lips on hers, the excitement, the knowing that they were going to spend their lives together with a baby on the way...she never wanted it to end. And, as she saw Jack smiling at her, she knew it wouldn't. Every time she looked at Jack, the memory of this time, this place, this moment, the memories of this moment wouldn't come rushing back.
It was a moment she'd never forget.
The moment that she fell in love for the very first time.
Janet Tripper 09-18-2004, 12:23 AM "Okay, Mrs. soon to be Tripper." Jack said as he took some orange juice and pour her some. "You better eat right, I want my wife to be and my child to be healthy."
Janet smiled and nodded her head as she watch Jack cut her hot pancakes for her. "Now open up." Jack said.
Janet gigle, "Jack I am pregnate not dying. I can feed myself."
"Sorry. I just don't want you to get tired or stress out or anything." He said as he took her napking and tired to extand it on her lap.
"Thanks babe, but I think I can handle it."
"Okay but remember if you need me I am here for you whenever and wherever."
"Yes honey." Janet said as she took a nother sip of her orange juice.
She took in a deep breath as she watch Jack take his dishes and put them in the sink. Everything seem so clear....so peaceful. Like when the sun comes out after a heavey violent storm.
Being in love never felt so right to her.
Bella_KitKat 09-19-2004, 05:19 PM Aside from the constant vomiting and the other joyous perks of pregnancy, the next few months seemed to go by rather quickly. The two had gotten married only a few weeks ago - Janet wanted to still be able to fit into her dress when she walked down the aisle - and were now settling into life. Luckily for them both, Chrissy had not returned. It whad been hard enough telling her parents. As expected, they had been furious with her, but her sister had talked to them and convinced them that if they didn't come to the wedding, Janet would never forgive them. So they did, and things were slowly falling back into place.
Janet sighed, putting her hand onto her bulging stomach. She honestly loved being pregnant, but there were parts of it that she hated. Not being able to get comfortable was one of them. Jack seemed to read her mind, because he came up behind her, kissing her softly. "Only a couple more days, luv."
"I know," Janet replied excitedly. "Can't wait."
He was about to kiss her again. His lips were inches from hers when she suddenly shied away from him, gasping. She felt something pop, and a secoinds later she felt something warm and sticky running down her leg.
"Um...Jack?"
"Hmmm?" he mumbled, kissing her neck.
"I don't think we'll have to wait anymore. My water just broke."
Janet Wood-Tripper 09-21-2004, 08:00 PM Come on guys! i'm dying to c what happens next. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/23/23_30_105.gif
Bella_KitKat 09-23-2004, 07:59 PM "Excuse me?" Twenty minutes later, they were deciding whether to go to the hospital now or later. "You're...you're in labor?"
"No ****, Sherlock," she muttered, gasping as another contraction ripped through her. "Ohhh....."
"Another?"
Janet managed to nod, as she gripped Jack's hand. Only five minutes later, her muscles tensed again. "I suggest we go now, unless we want to have this baby be born in your car."
Jack got her bag from the other room, and three minutes later, they were ready to leave. Suddenly, yet another contraction hit, and it was so severe and intense, Janet could've sworn that the baby was going to slide out of her at that moment. "God....I don't think this baby's going to wait."
Janet Wood-Tripper 09-23-2004, 08:12 PM Oh please guys! let them have a liitle girl that looks like janet, but is silly like jack. :)
Bella_KitKat 09-23-2004, 08:54 PM "What?!!!"
"Contractions...only...five minutes...apart," she cried, whimpering but trying to breath through the pain. Another one had started, and it didn't let up for a whole minute.
Jack, who was already on the phone with 911, rubbed her hand reassuringly. "They said if you need to push, push, alright, sweetie?"
Janet nodded, then screamed at the next one hit. This one, she felt the need to push, and she bore down as hard as she could untill the pain ceased.
Concractions coursed through her body about thirty more times in the twenty minutes that it took for the ambulance to come.
Then....
Bella_KitKat 09-24-2004, 07:31 PM SOMEBODY WRITE SOMETHING!!! :lol:
Janet McFarland 09-24-2004, 07:58 PM It was a couple hours later, and Janet was laying in a hospital bed in Wilshire Memorial. Jack was standing next to her, anxiously awaiting for their baby girl to get cleaned up. Janet had just given labor in Jack's car, and then an ambulance had come. Everything seemed to be going so fast, but Janet didn't care. All she wanted to do was hold her baby girl in her arms.
Just then, a blonde nurse, Terri, had walked in with a bundle in her arms. "Here you go Mrs. Tripper, what a beautiful girl you have!" "Oh, thank you," Janet replied as she took her precious baby girl in her arms. Jack lightly kissed Janet on the cheek. "That nurse is right, she is beautiful, just like her mother."
Janet blushed, but couldn't take her eyes off her baby, which had beautiful blue eyes like her father, and a patch of dark hair on top her head, like her mother. "Oh Jack, she's beautiful, what should we name her?" Janet asked. "I've always liked the name Christine," Jack replied. "Oh that's a pretty name!, how about Christine Marie?" Janet asked. "I love it, Janet, I absolutely love it," Jack agreed as he kissed Janet.
Janet Tripper 09-24-2004, 11:09 PM As the nurse was doing a regular check on Janet, Jack took the time to get out and go check on their daughter. She was so beautiful. He stood outside watching her from the window. She was dressed all in pink and fast asleep. Jack smiled as he felt his body being overtaken by a strage feeling. He was so proud of that small child. Of the way his life had totally changed.
Out of no where Jack felt a small hand agaist his shoulder, "Hi honey." Jack said as he saw Janet next to him. "Shouldn't you be in bed?"
"The nurse said I could come see our baby." Janet said as she took his hand. "She is so pretty." She said softly.
Jack nodded and smile as she placed her head on his strong chest. "Jack thank you for making me most happiest woman alive." She said as she snuggled against his chest.
Janet Wood-Tripper 09-25-2004, 10:41 PM Oh how wonderful your story. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/3/3_3_5v.gif I'm so happy she had a little girl http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/15/15_5_2v.gif and the name Christine.. adorable. http://smileys.smileycentral.com/cat/4/4_6_7.gif
JRfan 09-29-2004, 08:48 PM That was a really good story!
Janet Wood-Tripper 10-01-2004, 07:05 PM So what happens next? :confused:
Janet McFarland 10-01-2004, 07:54 PM I'll try to write something soon.. I can't think of anything right now :p
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