I was giving Lonelinesshurts ideas for her fan fiction but she is switching alot of the new things I put in there around so she gave me an idea to take on a new fan fiction. Me and her will have some alike ideas but when I gave her some she used them. So Here goes the new fan fic I made of my ideas I gave her.

Starts: (CD is still a SFPD cop and Nate is still one too and they are partners..but they just got married)
CD: Nate we've looked and places and hopped from house to house. *CD complained sweating her ass off while shoving her face in front of the air conditioner in Nate's car*
Nate: Last one, last one I promise. *Nate said flat out*
CD: Oh my go..this is a trailer! Oh god Nate! I do not like those and you know that!
Nate: We are just looking! They explained everything about it and all. Hey you might like it. *He said calmly*
CD: Do I really have to get out of this car?
Nate: Yes, come on sweatin's good for ya.
CD: *Shoots him a look* Yeah, say that again to my face. Not to mention to someone who has PMS today!
Nate: (Gets out of car) The sales lady said she'd meet us up here around 5.
CD: Where the hell would they be? They just like watching 2 good old people sweat their asses off.
Gun shot is fired*
Nate: (Jumps up quickly while CD prepares herself with her gun)
CD: (Breaks open the trailer door)
Nate: These people are all dead! Ohh **** the bastard snuck out the back.
CD: Jesus! What were they trying to do..kill us?
Nate: I don't know..Guess his plan didn't work out the way it was suppose to. The question is were they and why.

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:) Here is more*(Fic based on CD and Nate)
Starts: (CD and Nate in Captain Kate's office)
Captain: So you don't recall seeing the man up close but you saw the back door open to the trailer?
CD: Right.
Captain: Well, why didn't you catch the guy look to see where he went as he got out?? Come on guys!
Nate: We weren't even on a case.
CD: Your right Cap, we are cops and we should of treated this like a case..were sorry.
Captain: It's ok. Just get on it right away.
5 hours later*
Break time
CD: (Takes sip of her hott coffee)
(Scatters through newspapers for houses forsale section)
Magda: (Eve strops on CD a little bit to see what she looked troubled about)
I..uh heard what happened about the trailer and all. Thank god you didn't buy it! (She kidded approaching CD)
CD: Oh hey Magda. Yeah right now I'm trying to somehow find a decent house with a reasonable price.
Magda: That's why I came up to you.
CD: Huh?
Magda: I have a house right up the street from mine and its reasonably priced and its kinda cheap. It has 5 bedrooms and its got a 2 car garage and a nice porch just built onto it and it was just repainted. It's great. What do ya say..check it out or not?
CD: Oh my gosh are you serious..it's not above me and Nate's budget we told you before...?
Magda: Nope. (Magda replied very sure)
CD: Great! I'll be there whenever you want me to.
Magda: Cool, here's the card to where and when the open house nights are and some info about it.
CD: Th..anks Mag your'e helping alot!
Magda: No problem.
CD: (Slips card and info paper into her pocket)
Nate: (Walks up)..Hey you sexy blonde sassy cop mama (He jokes)
CD: Excuse me? It is very rude to flirt with a cop without her consent. (She kids back)
Nate: (leans over) Oh yes..even though you have PMS..i love ya enough to take the risk. (Kisses her on neck)
CD: 0oh making out at work..Cap's gonna give you a detention. (She laughed)
Jinny: Cap..im sorry but John Jr woke up sick this morning and here's some files..I can't make it to work today. (Jinny barges in mumbling on)
Captain: Is he alright? Aww..poor baby.
Jinny: Yeah he is..thanks. I'm on my way to get him meds..he is home with my dad but he has to leave soon and Hank is working so..
Captain: Thats fine and I hope little J.J. feels better and call me later to inform me on how he is doing.
Jinny: I will, Thanks again Captain. (Leaves)

Mores Soon and more ideas coming upp..this is just beginning of fic.

Okay i like the story so far Especially the trailer and Magda encounter (as you know CD and Magda are my two favorites) I hope there is more on the way soon (faster then I write I hope lol)

TY lol here more!
Starts: (CD and Nate are at home and Nate is on her computer looking up some houses for them and all)
Nate: (Clicking left and right with the mouse still searching)
CD: Nate Magda gave me a card today I totally forgot to mention it. It was for a house..here read it. Let me read it over first.
Nate: I don't know Mag could have way different taste than we do.
CD: Oh..Mr. Trailer! (She chuckled)
Nate: Ok one mistake..ok one BIG mistake. (He admitted)
15 minutes later
CD: A frigen graveyard! This so called good house was built over a graveyard? There is no way me and Nate would go for that Mag. (CD explained in a surprised tone to Magda on the phone)
5 days later
CD: I cannot believe I agreed to come to this open house.
Nate: I love this house! This is the one.
CD: Yeah except for the fact that dead spirits may be haunting this house. And knowing that there are dead people living under here! You did see Poltergeist didn't you Mag?
Magda: Oh come on CD..you are so weird! Dead people! Ha!
CD: The thought is just plain eerie.
(4 Minutes after the tour)
CD: I have to say I did enjoy it.
Nate: That's it were buying it!
CD: Wait a damn minute I am going to call back just in case I am interested ..tomorrow. I need to have time to think this over.
Nate: Alright that's fair.
Magda: Glad ya liked something about this house. Ya know, I really should cut holes into Ben's old sheets I was going to put away and put it over my head and sneak in at night.
CD: He he haha. (CD answered with her arms folded with a half smile)
Nate: Oh..k let's grab a bite I'm starving.
CD: You're always hungry. It's very piggish Natiepie.
Nate: That's not what you said last night my CandySandy. (Nate said ina sexy voice)
Magda: Candy..Sandy? (She laughed) Good one Nate.
Nate: Oh yeah..uh oh I said CD's middle name.
CD: Ok my name is Candace Sandra Basso..eh the name clashes. (CD said to herself irritated)
Nate: Ha..too bad I didn't take your last name..mine would of sounded good too. But no..

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I like this part CD was so true to character. Now more puh-wease:crysoup:

Coolies, NEW FIC!!!! :D This is really good---post more soon!

Starts: (Magda is over CD's house on the phone with the salesman)
Magda: Yes, thank you so much. (Magda says as she hangs up the reciever)
CD: Well? Can we meet alone about the house sometime today?
Magda: He said we'll all have lunch first so we are all going to meet at ShadySun Buffet at 4:00.
Nate: Sounds good to me. I better go get dressed..
CD: Mag you have become such a big help to me. I love ya for it. (CD hugs Magda) But..except for this house with dead people floating under it. (She kidded as she pulled away from hugging her)
Nate: Hey CD! (Nate hollered from his room)
CD: Yah?
Nate: Have you seen my underwear? I can't find any of it! What am I suppose to wear..a thong? Don't tell me you washed all my underwear.
CD: (Laughs) There is some in the dryer but I'll be so kind to go get you it so Mag doesn't have to see your little tushie. By the way Nate how is that constipation medicine working?
Nate: (Turns red) Uh..he he CD come here please!
Magda: (Covers mouth and chuckles) Poor Nate has a clogged up tushie.
CD: (Cracks up) Now we are even!

(Jinny is out getting liquids for the baby while Hank is home with him)
Hank: Hey little J.J. now we are going to lay down and stop crying ok? (He talked to him in baby talk)
Hank: (Goes to place baby down on his blankets and baby starts to fuss) Ohh god. Jinny where are you?? (He whined to himself)
(Baby then throws up on him all over and continues to scream and it turns into a giggle)
Hank: Oh..my..
Kate: Stace, would you please get that paper for me?
(Phone rings)
Kate: Hello, Captain McCafferty?
Louis: Kate I can't seem to find Katie Ann's diapers..did you misplace them?
Kate: They are in the cabinet under the bathroom sink.
Louis: Thanks, bye.
Kate: (Rolls her eyes and shakes her head)
(She hung phone up and then picked it up again when she heard another ring)
Jinny: Captain..its Jinny.
Kate: Hi Jin how is John Jr.?
Jinny: He's doing ok but I am going to be gone for a little while longer so can you tell Mag today when she comes back from CD's to call Hank for me?
Kate: Sure, hun.
Jinny: Thank you, bye.
Hank: (Looks both ways just in case Jinny was there for a reason and steps into the DiVision floor with John in his carseat)
Kate: Hank? Wha..what are you doing here? With the baby? He is sick.
Hank: Look, Jin's been gone for a while now and the baby has never been sick before so it's kind of hecktic for Jinny shes being to over protective and shaky and I am about to go out of my mind!
Kate: Let me see him..(Picks up the baby out of his carseat)
(Everybody huddles up from the room around John Jr. and Kate)
Kate: Uh guys..the baby is sick..throwing up...and..all.
(Everyone: Aww poor baby yeah we shouldnt bother them yeah he is so cute his little nose...so on with the gossip)
Hank: I'm sorry Kate.
Kate: No it's ok.
Jinny: (Decided to phone Hank now to tell him she'll be home earlier now.)
Hank: (Gets a ring off of his cell) Hey Jin..
Jinny: How's my baby?
Hank: We'll im rather good..
Jinny: Not you! My other baby.
Hank: Oh..right..
Jinny: Hank, I'm sorry. I am just ina very bad mood and I just got my period and all. I am so sorry..by the way how are you.
Hank: Eh..a mess. (He laughs)
Jinny: Anything wrong...
Kate: (Takes phone from hank) Hey Jinny this is Kate.
Jinny: What are you doing at my house what a surprise..arent you suppose to be at work? (Ohh my..gosh what if they are having an affair..no that wouldnt happen..I know Hank..hmm..) (Jinny thinks to herself mysteriously in a confused way)
Kate: I am at work. Hank came to me for help with the baby and all..he was having a hard time.
Jinny: He.. he brang my baby out to a police station without his mommy?? I am going to kill him! I...
Kate: (Cuts her off) Jinny the baby is bundled up and he is fine..it's ok I'll put him in my office and care for him for a while.
Jinny: Aw, Cap I don't want you being stuck with my kid that is sick..
Kate: Jin..it's ok I want to. Hank can catch up on some of his sketchings he missed today too.
Jinny: Thanks so much..I love ya.
Kate: I love ya too..I guess I am a grandma to 2 kids now.
Jinny: Bye (She laughed)
Hank: She..mad?
Kate: No..you go finish up here and I'll handle JJ.
Hank: Really? Now if he is any trouble you come and get me, ok? Thanks CaptAIN.
Kate: I'm sure I can manage with a 4 month old.

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More soon right?

Here is more:
Starts: (CD and Nate are at the meeting)
Salesman: You now what you guys seem like such nice people. And since you know my cousin Earl and one of you's saved his life on the job..so I am going to remove the graveyard for free.
CD: Oh my go..are you serious? (She chanted)
Nate: Really?
Salesman: (Nodds head yes) Yep, now come on let's go.
CD: (Smiles at Nate) I can't believe this, now we can buy it.
Nate: Happy now? (He said in a funny voice)
CD: Yes..I am.
Salesman: Now, ya'll come back now ya here? Tommorow come by at 6 and I will lone ya the house, k? (The jolly kind fat guy told them in his texas accent)
CD: Thank you so much and we will be back.
Nate: I'll give ya a call later.
CD: (Calls Magda) Hey..Mag. Guess what we are buying the house! He is going to remove the graveyard for free! (She said getting excited)
Magda: Oh..thats great! You and Nate should be really happy.
CD: Nate and me are moving in as soon as they can remove it.
Magda: I am so glad..uh I have to go..Ben is calling me.
CD: Ok, well I'll talk to you at work bye.
Nate: CD hand me the salt please.
CD: Here. (Hands it to him)
Nate: Thank you.
CD: Nate, I was thinking..about what you said 2 months ago..and I have decided that I am going to go through with it.
Nate: (Looks up and drops his fork down) Are..you sure?
CD: Yes I am..I know you really want a baby and all and I sort of want one too now.
Nate: (Puts on a big smile) I'm so happy you are doing this!
CD: See I knew you had a sensitive side.
Nate: Your..your sure you want to do it? Your not just doing this for me, right?
CD: Absoloutly not. I have wanted to have a baby for some times now actually.
Nate: Well the sooner the better.

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I'm glad she wants a baby. To bad she can't adopt me lol. More soon please

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Nate: Have you seen my underwear? I can't find any of it! What am I suppose to wear..a thong? Don't tell me you washed all my underwear.
CD: (Laughs) There is some in the dryer but I'll be so kind to go get you it so Mag doesn't have to see your little tushie. By the way Nate how is that constipation medicine working?
Nate: (Turns red) Uh..he he CD come here please!


LMAO!!!!!!!!! :lol: That part cracked me up! This is a cute fic---please continue! :D

Starts: (9 months later)
CD: (Laying in a hospital bed awaiting for her child to be done in the nursery while she is examined)
Nate: I can't belive it we have a girl. Maybe next time we will have a boy, ya think?
CD: Well Nate..you are the one who creates the gender so it will just have to be all on you. (She smiled in a sarcastic way)
Nate: Yep..so did you think of a name yet?
CD: Can you believe all those months we still have not decided on a name?
Nate: Uhh..I'm going to go to the library down stairs and search for some online names..and some other..stuff. (He said going to leave)
CD: Our little princess in nameless..go print it out and come back.
Nate: Oh..ok.
CD: (After Nate left the room she pulled out the notice of resignation to quit the force and just stares at it feeling sad)
(Picks up phone and dials Captain's office)
Kate: Hello, Captain McCafferty?
CD: Hey..Captain.
Kate: Oh my god CD I haven't heard from you in almost 2 months!
CD: I am so sorry I guess I kind of forgot and I was busy too. I'm sorry.
Kate: Everyone misses you..Nate too. He has been coming to work and he is working with Raina for a while..they had a rough start at first but became good friends...finally.
CD: I had the baby..last night. It's a girl.
Kate: Oh my god! (She sprung up and shouted) Tha..thats wonderful! When can we see her? What did you name her? Is she healthy?
CD: (laughed) Ok, Cap..calm down. She is very healthy..5 pounds 11 ounces and 19 inches. Nate is very happy and proud..but we are both kind of stumped on the name part. You will see her soon I guarantee you that.
CD: I also have been working somewhere else besides desk at work.
Kate: Ohh? Where?
CD: At the Dare program..as a Dare teacher..I finished collage so I went to get my degree and I got it.
Kate: That's great. So you are becoming a DaRE teacher in areas for drug problems. You will make good money doing that.
CD: Kate, I really want to tell you I am so sad about leaving and I wanted to bring the baby in for one last goodbye and 1 last day at work before I leave.
Kate: Oh CD, (Kate sighed) I will miss..you so much. It's like loosing a daughter..one of my favorite cops...you, Nate, Jinny, Magda, Raina. It's going to be hard for me to let go too.
CD: Well, I kind of promised myself I wouldn't cry...ya know?
Kate: It's ok to cry. I guess in your mind it would not be very professional huh?
CD: (Laughed a little ina cracking voice) No..no it..it wouldn't.
Kate: When are ya coming?
CD: I will be comng in with Nate and I will call you before we leave, ok?
Kate: Sounds wonderful, love ya and I gotta go.
CD: See ya Captain, bye.
(Signs the papers)
(8 minutes later Nate returns)
CD: About time, hand me one of the papers.
Nate: Hmm..I like Ariel, Autumn, Allison, Bradie, Skye, Leanne
CD: I like Justine, Jade, Michelle, Trinity..
Nate: I like the name Trinity..I do.
CD: Then let's name her Trinity.
Nate: Ok, what about her middle name?
CD: Hmm...
Nate: Trinity Michelle
CD: Cute!
Nate: Uh, nurse! (Nate hollered)
CD: We have a name for baby girl Basso.

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I love the baby's name. more soon?

Awwwwwww, that was SO SWEET! Awww.....baby Basso has a name.....that was so incredibly sweet! I really like this fic. :)

Starts: (CD and Nate arrive at work)
CD: (Looks carefully to see who is in the area before she comes in)
(Tiptoes quietly holding her baby in her carseat followed by Nate)
Kate: (Rushes out of her office) Oh my gosh! Look at her! (Making a big fuss over the new baby)
Magda: CD! (Goes over and hugs her with a big smile on her face)
CD: Mag! Captain...I missed ya's.
Nate: This is Trinity Michelle Basso.
Kate: Ohh that is a pretty name. Hi you are so pretty..she takes after her mommy and her daddy.
Magda: She has Nate's nose and CD's eye shape and she has chestnut brown hair.
CD: I love her hair color..hope it stays that way.
Kate: She is so tiny. KatieAnn was about the same size as her.
Jinny: CD, Nate congrads! (Hugs both)
CD: Thanks, Jin.
Nate: Yep her name is Trinity Michelle Basso.
Jinny: O0h very nice ring to it.
CD: This might be weird but in the baby's facial features she kind of looks like John Jr.
Jinny: Oh my god you're right..hey maybe Trinity is John's twin. (She joked)
CD: Are you sure you had the baby with Hank and not Nate? (She kidded)
Jinny: Wait a minute you could of also screwed my man.
Kate: Umm, guys there is a little one in the room.
Jinny: Sorry..
CD: (Clears throat) Sorry Trin. Mommy can sometimes have a dirty mouth.
Magda: Would you mind if some of us..hold her?
Raina: Ohh my gosh CD! (Hugs her)
Nate: Hey Raina.
Raina: How's it feel to be a daddy?
Nate: Like the boss. (Nate said in a muscular tough voice)
Raina: Aww, what's her name?
CD: Trinity Michelle Basso.
Raina: She has beautiful hair too.
CD: Ok, one at a time can hold her.

(Later that day)
CD: Hey guys it has been great today..as you all know I am leaving today and all..
Jinny: Wha..t?
Magda: Your..your leaving?
Raina: You are?
Kate: Uh..
CD: Captain, didn't you tell them before I came?
Nate: (Sighs) Oh lord.
Kate: CD is leaving and quitting the force, and she has told me last month about this and Nate turned them in to my office yesterday.
CD: I am gonna miss you guys. (CD said, her voice becoming groggy and her eyes building up tears)
Kate: I will certainly miss you so much, you were a good cop CD. Never forget that. (hugs her)
Magda: Hey, I wouldn't blame ya if you wanted to quit and all. But I hope we can all keep in touch with you.
CD: Of course Magda. Bye. (Hugs her while Magda's nose began to run)
Jinny: I hope what Magda says is going to be true. You are a good cop and we all had some good times and I will miss you. (Sighs and hugs with her lip quivering trying not to cry)
CD: (She couldn't bear holding back the tears so she just let them run down her face just thinking about how upsetting this was for her and this was the last time they will work together again)
Nate: (Stands there frozen in silence watching CD and his co-workers say their goodbyes)
Kate: By..e Nate. (Smiles in a sad and happy way because she was happy for Nate and all and he was a great cop to this Division but she was not ready for him to leave)
You are a great cop..don't you forget that either Inspector Basso.
Magda: Guess this is it. (She wipes her left eye)
Nate: Yes..it it is. (He takes deep breath)
(Hugs Magda)
Jinny: See ya, buddy. I'll miss ya. Thank you for saying yes to being my date for my half sister's wedding and trying to be there for me. That also showed me that you do care. (Hugs him)
Nate: No problem Jinny, you take care of yourself and that little baby boy of yours. And tell Hank to treat you good..and I am sure he will.
Jinny: He will oh believe me. Thanks Nate. I'm gonna miss ya.
Raina: (Sobbing even though she hasnt known Nate and CD for a long time but she was partnered with Nate and all for a long time and the others who were getting worked up got her worked up even worse then them)
I know we have not known eachother that long Nate, but I gotta say you were a good partner and a good friend to me. Taught me alot and all. Have a great life with CD and take good care of her. I am glad that you are really happy.
Nate: I am happy, Raina. I will miss you and I will keep in touch with you. You just give it some time and the right guy will come along, okay? Don't sell yourself short..you are too good for that.
(He hugged her)
CD: (Starts to sob and cup her hands over her nose while tears hit the back of her hands)
( He then hugged Kate while tear cascaded down the corner of Nate's eye as he blinked harder every second of the moment)
CD: Uh..(Wipes her eyes) Bye guys..I love you all. (Picks up baby's carrier and slowly walks out the door with Nate behind her)

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aww... I loved it more soon I hope.

Kelly is back! Kelly is back! Kelly is back!!!!! This is an awesome fan fic. MORE JESSIE!!:wave:

Yay Kelly's back! Heres mores ppls:

Starts: (CD and Nate 9 more months later)
CD: (Doing the dishes) Nate are you keeping an eye on Trinity?
I am drenched in water. Nate we have to get this thing fixed!
(She shouted growing more and more frustrated)
Nate: (Rushes into kitchen) CD..I can't find Trinity! Oh my god! (He paniced holding his head)
CD: Well, where could she..you weren't watching her?
Nate: Yes I was but I put her down in the hallway for one minute while I went to the bathroom and I left door half shut so I could see her a little.
CD: (Drops a dish) Oh go..****! Ok, she can't walk so she has got to be crawling somewhere.
(They search house)
Nate: I looked in the bedrooms, and no sign of her.
CD: Damn it where is she? Trinity? Trin?
Nate: (See's backdoor partially open) Oh crap I must of forgot to close the door all the way when I was getting the newspaper.
CD: (Runs outside and see's the baby on top of their pool deck waddling and wobbling as she stands up pulling off a cute smile)
CD: Oh my god! (Charges towards deck and climbs steps and carried her down breathing normally after she is close in her arms)
Nate: Is she..she ok? (Speeds over and rubs his hand over the baby's soft curly auburn goldish colored hair)
CD: Yeah, she's fine. Nate we went swimming last night and I asked you to put the steps up. (CD scolded out of breath)
Nate: I..Im sorry CD..I forgot..I hate when I go to do something and something else comes up like the bathroom today and the phone call last night.
CD: Ohh it's ok. Please try not to do that anymore. God I can't believe she could of drown.
Nate: All it takes is one second for your whole life to change.
CD: Thank god our didn't. (CD suddenly burst into tears and hugged Trinity as she was babbling)
Nate: (Sighs as they went into the house to eat lunch)

I have lots more to add byes mores soon!:wave:

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!!

Wow! Poor Trinity and CD and Nate! That must have been so scary.......that was really good! Post more soon!

Starts: (CD and Nate 12 years later)
Nate: (Runs downstairs and misses a step and slips) Woah, ****!
CD: (Comes rushing when she hears Nate) What happen...(Cuts herself off and bursts out laughing)
Nate: Shut up.. (He says in a half serious half wobbly voice)God this rug on the stairs isnt tight enough.
CD: God Nate, I was having a bad morning until you showed up, thank you for making it so much better. (She continued to chuckle)
Nate: (Gets up) I get to work..I'm already late.
CD: (Goes back over to cooking breakfast for herself and if her family wants any) So 2nd day on the new job, eh?
Nate: Yep. Ya know, I really like this job. It's so my thing..ya know? I've always wanted to be a Captain and since I took some extra training..I finally am..god I thought I wouldnt be able to do it. It was hard work. Reminds me of Captain..our captain..
CD: Yeah I do miss her alot and the whole crew..but now you are the new Captain..you get it easier.
Nate: Now I call the shots. (Nate said acting like he's cool)
CD: Ooh now you're the hott cop?
Nate: Sure am baby. (Kisses her)
CD: Trinity! Wake up! (CD hollered to her daughter who was sound asleep upstairs)
Trinity: (Comes out of the bathroom and wobbles downstairs)
Mom come on, can I take a day off?
CD: No, I said in 1 week when it is your birthday.
Trinity: 1st day of school, 8th grade..ehh. (She muttered)
CD: I know middle school isn't the best but 8th grade is your last year. Plus you can tell those younger kids who give ya crap off! You are the oldest now.
Trinity: True.. (She nodded)
CD: Look you'll love 8th grade..it's not as bad as 7th..or 6th.
Trinity: I want to go back to elementary school now.
Nate: (Leans over counter sneaking some brownies CD had made for her job while CD turns her back) When you were attending grade school ya hated it for a while.
CD: Aw, you were always so shy. Always afraid to play with the other kids always so polite. Now this is your chance to start a new thing this year, be more open and out there this year. Join a play, a club.
Nate: And keep up the good grades. Don't let these clubs or plays you join, if ya do kill your grades and all. We like ya as a A-C average student and we want ya to stay that way.
Trinity: Yeah, yeah I know. I got it.
CD: This year as for math, I would like if you would ask for help more instead of waiting till the last minute, ok?
Trinity: Ok, ok I will. I hope I can get a boyfriend this year. I mean I'm not desperate but all those other years the really shy guys would ask me out. But I would always screw up and say no..
CD: Because you weren't ready then. Maybe this year things will be different.
Nate: Trin, you are a cery pretty girl and you will have boys falling at your feet but the ones I don't like.. I will step on them. (He said ina funny voice chewing the brownies.)
CD: Your dad's right. (Notices the brownie hes eating)
Nate! Get to work now! And if you lay another hand on my frigen brownies your ass is mine. (She seriously kidded)
Nate: Woah, I think I better go to work now, bye my wife and baby. (He joked back and left ina hurry)
Trinity: I'm going to go get dressed. (She putters off to her room)
CD: Uh, Trin ya gotta eat something. Are you feeling ok?
Trinity: Yes I'm fine mom. (Turns corner in hallway after she goes upstairs)
CD: Okay..(She says to herself)

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Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
Nate: Trin, you are a cery pretty girl and you will have boys falling at your feet but the ones I don't like.. I will step on them. (He said ina funny voice chewing the brownies.)


LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: I can SO see Nate doing that!!!!!! That was a great post, do it again really soon! :)

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LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: I can SO see Nate doing that!!!!!! That was a great post, do it again really soon! :)

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Starts: ( Nate is at work and CD is at home waiting for her daughter to come home)
CD: (Thinks to herself while reading the rest of the DR. Phil weight lose book she had recieved for christmas last yr)
Wonder how her first day of 8th grade was, she usually starts out really nervous but usually comes home fine. (She thought to herself)
(5 minutes later)
(Hears front door start to open)
Trinity: Mom? Mom, I'm home. (She hollered in a frustrated tone)
CD: So..how does it feel to be an 8th grader? (CD asked smoothly hoping that Trinity had a good day)
Trinity: I hated it! (She complained as she threw her backpack down on couch)
CD: What happened? Why? On your first day?
Trinity: (Plopped down on couch and then shot CD a look and had her arms folded)
You know what mom, I am so sick and tired of you treating me like..like a little kid. (She screamed in her face as she rose up)
CD: (Points her finger at her face) Listen little girl you do not scream at me! I just asked you how your day was and you go off acting like a little bitch. What is your problem?
Trinity: (Rolls her eyes and rushes up the stairs)
CD: (Just stares at her while shes running up stairs)
Something is wrong here..(She thought)
Nate: (Opens door) Home finally! God it was so damn hott today.
What?
CD: Nothing. Nothing.
Nate: Well, you had a..this look on your face. That means your mad! (He says in a weird voice)
CD: I am not mad. I'm just agrivated.
Nate: Is it Trinity? Well, ya gotta see she is what they call bratty selfish teenagers right now.
CD: She was going off on me today and all and it pissed me off..and
Nate: (Cuts her off) Maybe she had her period.
CD: You are so sexest Nate. (She says in a funny/mad voice)
Nate: No, no I'm just saying maybe that was it..
CD: It's just that..even all summer she started to get weird.
Alot of things this past summer.
Nate: Yeah she was a real pain in the ass..but you know how 13 can be right?
CD: Well at least she doesnt get alot of bad out of control acne like I did when I was younger..ohh that was horrible. If I were that age now I'd be hugging the person that had invented those products we have today. Yeah I had alot of trouble with my skin.
Nate: Me, nah wasn't acne..I never even got it really. My problem was that I was made fun of even though I didn't really care at 1st...because my thing wasn't as big as the other guys I hung out with..(He said blushing fading into a shade of red)
CD: (Lifts head back and cracks up) Ohh god.
Nate: Ohh and the braces..god the braces. I looked worse because when I was younger I had very messed up teeth..it made me look like a donkey. I wasn't too popular in middle school either. I think that's where Trinity inherited her shyness from.
CD: (Still laughing getting ready to cross her legs bearing the fact she had to go to the bathroom)
Nate: Ya, true no laughing matter. Some kids called me the Jewish donkey and yelled Hee Haw He haw.
CD: Gosh, your killing me..I gotta pee.
Nate: Dinner time yet? (Grabs another brownie and a cupcake)

Mores Later




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Awww, that was so funny, that last part there with Nate! LMAO! :rofl: Poor Trinity, what's her problem? :confused: Post more soon!

The last two post were great I hope there is more soon

Starts: (CD walks half way up the stairs to call Trinity for dinner while Nate sits down)
CD: Trinity! Come on dinner time. (She hollers)
Nate: (Takes a glance at her) Want to talk to her about this afternoon?
CD: Yes I do.
Nate: Remember I am not the bad guy. (He says while already taking half of the spaghetti bowls sauce for his noodles)
CD: Ohh so it's ok for me to be the bad guy? You going to save some for the family or you gonna hog it all down before we all even get to the table? (She says sarcastically with her arms folded)
Nate: ( Looks up after filling his plate)
Heh..ya I ..I didn't eat at..all today.
CD: What happened to that lunch I packed you this morning?
Nate: Hmmm, the betta in my office ate it. (He said out of nowhere)
CD: (Raises her left eyebrow)
Nate: No? (With a half smile on his face)
CD: Thank god I made 2 bowls of that sauce.
CD: Where the hell is she? Trin! Dinner!
Nate: Maybe..she needs to be left alone for a while.
CD: Well, shes gotta eat and her dinner is getting cold.
Nate: Uh, then later if shes hungry heat it up for her so she can eat it.
CD: This is bull****, she is just ignoring me and it is ticking me off.
(Unfolds arms and walks upstairs in hallway outside her door)
CD: (Knocks 2wice) Come on, it's time for dinner get down here.
(No answer)
(All of sudden blasting music)
CD: (Waits) Trinity! (Knocks again louder and trys to open door but it is locked)
CD: Open the door, now. If you want to talk then tell me but If you are mad at something else that you don't want to discuss then do not take it out on me.
(Goes down stairs)
Trinity: (Follows)
Ok, I'm here. Sorry I didn't answer.
CD: Alright, but next time I call you please give me an answer.
Nate: Want to talk to us about what you were upset about earlier?
Trinity: I wasn't upset.
CD: You seemed tense.
Trinity: (Plays with her fork)
Nate: (Sighs) Ohh okay..
You know you can talk to us about anything. No matter how embarassing, painful, bad, horrible, and ugly it is.
CD: Yeah true, we are your parents and we do love you very much. I understand why you are a little agrivated with me and I am sorry for asking what was wrong. You know your only my daughter and would you blame me? I asked you like 2 questions and you blew up in my face.
Trinity: Look, I'm sorry. (She finally said)
I was just a little moody thats all.
It won't happen again.
Nate: You sure anything isn't wrong?
CD: Was it something from school today that happened..a somebody, possibly?
Trinity: No it's really nothing. It was just because uh..my teacher that I got for uh English..was the one I hear is a real witch and I didn't really like her..shes just anul..and uh lots of other annoying stuff.
CD: Well, you love English. It is one of your favorite subjects. You are also a good writer and all. English has always been giving ya good grades.
Nate: Yeah, you're really smart at that.
Trinity: Heh, ya you're right.
CD: (Had a inner feeling that wasn't or was only part of what was going wrong)
Nate: Ok. Eat people eat. (Thinks his daughter is fine and if she has something really wrong she will come to them but it is probably just teenage issues..you know girl stuff)

Mores soon!




:wave: :wave: I like going slow on my fics! ha:lol:

Awwww, that was so great! Good job! And don't worry about going slow.....I'm pretty slow these days, too. I just don't have much time with college and working and all.....post more when you get a chance! :)

No I mean I do post alot usually lol I am usually a fast poster and all but i meant that I go slow with what is going to happen yet in the fics.

Starts: (Trinity is asleep in her room before CD wakes her up)
CD: (Slowly walks up to her room and opens the door) Trin..time to get up, come on.
Trinity: (Still asleep)
CD: Look, it's not my fault ya keep forgetting to set your alarm clock and I have to get you up.
Trinity: (Still asleep)
CD: Get out of bed now. (She scolds lightly and then taps her a few times and tries to move her)
Trinity: (Still asleep)
CD: (Leans over and feels her head) Eh, shes got a fever.
****.
Trinity: (Still asleep)
CD: (Goes back down stairs) Nate, you ready?
Nate: (Dawdles out with his nose all cherry red) (Sneezes)
CD: Ohh god, your'e not sick too are you??
Nate: Yeah I am and I ain't going to work today.
CD: Trinity's sick too. (Big sigh and rolls her eyes)
Nate: CD shes only missed 2 days of school since Kindergarten and this would be her 3rd so relax she can still make it through college.
CD: Ohh I hope so.
(Later)
Trinity: Mom? (She comes down stairs rubbing her eyes)
CD: Hey, are you feeling better at all? I have some Tylenol I'm going to give you soon.
Trinity: Mom what day is it today?
CD: Friday..ya gotta 3 day weekend.
Trinity: Ohh ok.
CD: Why, anything special planned today at school?
Trinity: Uh, just that today was the day that we were having a new kid come into our class and all and I wanted to see because he just happens to be a guy.
CD: Ohh..maybe he's a real hottie.
Trinity: Hopefully he is.
(Monday morning)
Trinity: (Enters house and closes the door) Mom?
CD: Hi, how was the day today?
Trinity: It was fine as usual..but better.
CD: How so?
Trinity: The new boy at school was so hott and so cute, oh my god and he had the most beautiful eyes I have ever seen in my life on a guy.
CD: Wow..did you..talk to him by any chance?
Trinity: Yep. He started talking to me and I just listened for a while and then I started talking and at the end of the day he siad do you want to go out with me!(She chanted)
CD: Oooh so you too are dating now? That was quick and all.
Trinity: Wha, what do you mean quick? We got to know eachother alot today...
CD: It just seemed a little rushed..when can I see this sexy guy of yours?
Trinity: So what you meant was that I am desperate? Right that is what you did mean about me. Ohh poor Trinity she can't get a guy and she has tried but she can never get one no matter how hard she tries but now someone feels bad for her and all and she decides to go off with him because she can't get no one else??
CD: Trin, calm down I didn't say that..god what the hell..
Trinity: You know what mom, I shouldn't of told you any of this at all! (She shouts)
CD: No you come back here (Her daughter begins to walk away) right now! I am so tired of you treating me like this when I am doing nothing wrong.
Trinity: Of course it is all my fault and you never do anything..you're so innocent mom! (She says sarcastically)
CD: Ok, go up to your room and hide I don't care.
Trinity: (Rushes upstairs and slams her door so hard that CD's hanging plant breaks off the hook)
CD: That plant was dying anyway! (She screams loud so Trinity can hear)

Mores Later:wave:

Geez, what's Trinity's problem? :confused: Post more soon!

Starts: (Later that day)
CD: (See's Nate get home from work and as he walks in the door she rises up from the couch)
Nate, I'm telling you Trinity has something going on that is bothering her and I knew it the other night..
Nate: Why, what happened today?
CD: She was acting up again after she got home from school, and the worst part is that I don't know what I am doing wrong with her. I mean is this just teenage stuff? Or did I turn her into this new angry hurt person 24/7?? (She mumbled on and on)
Nate: Look, I really think you're blowing this a little out of porportion. Trin's 13 now she is a teen. This is actually the beginning of this stage..she has until..I think 16 when she actually stops. You were a teenager once CD. You should know this too.
CD: (Sighs) You know what Nate, you're right your'e right. But why am I acting like this if I know you're right?
Nate: Because she is you're baby and you hate to see her like this. (Nate confirmed)
CD: Ah, you're right again. I mean I want her to be more happier again and I'm just not use to her behaving like this.
Nate: It's her age.
CD: Ok, you hardly know what this is like for me because you are usually at work when it occurs. If you saw it you'd probably want to just shut her off like a tv. Even if this is because of her age she still should not mistreat us. And it's our job to correct her.
Nate: Let's go and talk to her now and have a meeting on this..thing.
CD: Glad you are starting to see things my way. (CD rolls her eyes sarcastically)
Mores soon..more stuff comin!
;)

That was great! :) Keep the good stuff coming! :D :cool:

Starts: (CD and Nate are knocking on Trinity's door)
Trinity: What the hell do you guys want? (She asked annoyed)
CD: (Barges in) Ok, this is it. This has to stop. You never acted like this in you..your whole life living with us! (CD firmly said) I ain't gonna take this **** from my own child.
Trinity: That's just it mother I am not a child! (She screamed back)
CD: Well listen to me little girl you are my child!
Trinity: (Stays silent for 1 minute while Nate holds back)
I..I'm sorry mom ok! I am..I just haven't been myself lately ok!
CD: I know but as your mother I won't take this anymore..and starting right now you are going to express yourself like a human being. We don't all read minds, ya know. (Looks at her for a minute frustrated and closes her door)
Trinity: (Sighs and throws her pillow at the door)
I ****ing hate them, god! I hate living here anymore! (Trinity said feeling confused about what was going on with her and what were her parents thinking that was going on)
2 months later
Nate: (Driving Trinity to her friends house)
Bye..have fun.
Trinity: I will dad..thanks for taking me bye.
(Later on inside the house)
Trinity: Sam..oh my god is that Vodka and oh my god is this Heroine?? (She gasped)
Sam: Shh..my dad's asleep and all but my mom's on business..somethin for work.
Trinity: Uh, ok I don't wanna get caught with this **** at all and you know I don't do drugs and all or drink I always never wanted to do stuff like that.
Sam: Yeah but I'm not saying I want to look cool and **** ..I'm saying that everyone like does it and I have been doing it and I think I'm addicted. So I guess I should just have some fun with it..but like not enough to get me all weird..ya know what I'm saying??
Trinity: Sam..I don't wanna sound like a dork or anything but this is bad stuff..even for someone as young as you are.
I have heard many things about Heroine. My mom's friend Jinny went through something similar to this situation and I don't want to get involved so..
Sam: Ohh don't worry I ain't gonna make ya try it or anything. (She told her as she poured it into a glass)
Trinity: Good. Because I don't need that stuff to help my problems or make me happy.(She said)
Sam: Ok, let's play a game..my friend taught me this one.
Trinity: Ok..?
Sam: It's called the Alphabet game.
Trinity: ...Would ya care to elaborate?
Sam: Wait before I start drinking I am going to invite some people over. (She said getting up)
Trinity: Who?
Sam: Ohh just people you are familiar with and me too.
Trinity: (Felt like nothing was really was going to go wrong)
1 1/2 hrs later
Sam: Trinity you know Tara, Jessie, Kelly, Angie, Deirdre, and Daya right?
Trinity: Yeah..hi peoples.
All: Hey Trin.
Sam: (Pours 8 glasses of Vodka and sprinkles heroine in it)
Deirdre: Ohh I love this game.
Kelly: Uh, this isn't the alphabet game is it..
Sam: Sure is Kel.
Jessie: I pass..I don't do things like this and I really wouldn't wanna ya know screw myself up.
Tara: Guys don't be asses. Come on.
Trinity: No..this doesn't seem like a game for me either..I agree with Jessie and Kelly. (Sprung up and said)
Angie: (Has something behind her back in a bag) I bought some Smirn Off Ice to make this better!
Sam: Aw, cool your'e the best Ang.
We can use that later for fun.
Daya: I'm in for it..my dad's gone for the weekend at his girlfriends house and he is probably getting drunk again. This will really make him feel bad.
Trinity: (Kept silent)
Jessie: If I am gonna stay here I am not going to be forced to drink if I don't want to.
Sam: Jessie you are such a Ditz..so paranoid. Jeez..
Jessie: (Stands up and get's in Sam's face) You know what Sam I am tired of you and your ****! **** off ********** and I hope you wind up in rehab with Syphilis sores all over your mouth! (Leaves and calls her mom on cell phone)
Kelly: (Glances at Sam) Sorry Sam..no offense but I'm with Jess. (Gets up and follows her) Wait Jess..I'll go home with ya and have my mom pick me up there.
Jessie: No, ya can sleep over my house..let's go.
Sam: Well, the rest of ya if ya want can stay over night too if you want.
Trinity: Uh, I'll have to check with my mom.
Angie: Surprised ya stayed Trin.
Sam: Wait guys we can't start playing I gotta tell Trinity about it.
(After 3 minutes of getting it into Trinity's head they started)
Deirdre: I'll go first! (She said with enthusiasm)
Sam: Remember Dee..states!
Deirdre: Alabama! (Clap Clap)
Sam: B..a...ahh **** there isn't any B states ha!
Ok, here I go..(Takes shot glass and chugs it down) Oohh that was intense baby!
Tara: Conneticut! (Clap Clap)
Trinity: Time out..time out. Before Daya goes..I just forgot I have to go somewhere at about..uh..8:00 pm..well well well it's 8 now.
Sam: Hmm, where ya gotta go?
Trinity: Dentist..late night appointment at 8:30.
Deirdre: Can't ya stay for a couple more minutes after your 1st turn?
Trinity: No, no this can't wait.
Sam: Trin, Trin, Trin..seems like you are trying to get a way out of the game.
Trinity: I'm not, I swear.
Sam: Ok, fine I believe ya.
Deirdre: (Stays quiet)
Daya: Let's hurry up and do my turn.
Tara: (Before Trinity is about to call her mother in the kitchen Tara then embraces her lie)
Trinity girl come back here..the dentist offices around here are closed.
Trinity: (With her back turned she get's this weird look on her face) Ya but we go to one that is at someone house..
Sam: What kind of friend are you..lying to me?? I mean that's not you Trinity. Why are you being a bitch all of a sudden?
Trinity: I'm not! I really have to go somewhere!
Sam: I can tell you're lying Trin. I've known you way too long.
Trinity: Apparantly I don't know you anymore!
Deirdre: You are seriously acting dumb Trinity.
Tara: Trinity's a loser anyway..she has always been.
Sam: I know that now.
Trinity: Ok, fine I'll stay.
Tara: Ok, go Daya..your turn.
Daya: Delaware! (Clap Clap)
(Her heart begins to race and grows more nervous by the minute)
E...ohh no. This isn..t....uh...
Tara: (Pours drink for her and Tara did do that on purpose so Trinity would land on a state that she couldn't do)
Sam: Come on Trin..it's just one little shot of Vodka it won't hurt ya. Plus it is the rule.
Trinity: (Heart beats faster and is sitting there thinking what will happen if her mom and dad find out..they won't be able to trust her again and Trinity was afraid to drink and knew it was wrong..and should of left right there and then with Jessie and Kelly or just have called her mother 2 minutes ago)
Deirdre: Well?
Daya: Chug-alug girlfriend!
Trinity: (Smells it and makes a scrunched up face and had thoughts racing through her mind about alcoholism..drug abuse and all that stuff she has seen on Lifetime movies and all)

Mores Later..ahh I gotta go..sorrys more later! Bye!







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Aww you used my name. Thanks. I feel a little better now:D And Im so glad Kelly and Jessie left that party!! More!:wave:

That was great! Too bad "Tara" is such a bitch in this story.....LOL....but still, I feel honored that you used my name! :) Post more soon!

Im sorry i did that lol i didnt realize i was using ya for a bad person lol i was just using ur names sorrys

You could've used my name too!! :(

Hi I'm Maria and I loooooooooove your fanfic. I hope you post more soon. :D

LOL im sorry I didnt know ur name..but i will put names on here that replied! Ur next!

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
LOL im sorry I didnt know ur name..but i will put names on here that replied! Ur next!

And then she'll go right back to me right my little Jessie?:D hehe

Starts: (Same place..Trinity is about to have her 1st drink)
Trinity: (Slowly her lips meet the alcohol and she makes a weird face after she licks them)
I don't know if I should do this guys..and I already tasted it.
(She said in a hurry)
Deirdre: Aw, come on Trinity. That was nothing..I could gobble that whole bottle down.
Sam: Trinity..you're wimping out on me...
Trinity: Well, wha..what if I am allergic to it?
Something could happen to me..what if my heart stops..what if I could drop dead..have a bad reaction to it..(She mumbled on)
Daya: Uh...
Tara: (Bursts out laughing)
Oh my god..you really are a joke kid. I can't believe ya invited this ****** Sam...
Sam: Shut it Tee shes my friend but she will try it...come on Trin you're holding us up.
Daya: Yeah come on girl! I want my turn...I want to get as drunk as I can possibly get tonight.
Tara: 5 years later...
Deirdre: Chug-a-lug come on!
Trinity: Eh..(Chugs it down and then swallows as she shrivels up her face and shakes her head as it goes down)
(Breathes heavily and coughs 3 times)
This stuff burns oh my god...(takes deep breath) That tastes nasty..just like that medicine I had to take when I was little..it was called Robutussion..man I hated that.
Tara: What an ass..(Shakes her head)
Trinity: Shut up, I tried it so go screw yourself.
(She snapped back)
Deirdre: O0h..now Trinity has the balls to talk back to people..so impressed.
Daya: God damn it let's stop the game and just pour drinks and do something else. I'm getting too damn bored.
Tara: Daya stop complaining. Anyway..Trinity ohh that was a good comeback..I give you credit.
Trinity: Ohh..surprised you are not pissed off at me.
Tara: I'm a reasonable person..it rolled off my back. (Shoots her a freaky glance)
Trinity: (Nodds casualy)
Sam: Ok, I'm pouring drinks! Come and get em!
(Later that night after they ate and all)
Trinity: Oh my god..(Feels sick and so worried that she drank all that Smirn Off and didn't realize that she'd had enough she just completely dozed off thinking it was Sprite)(Throws up a little on Sam's bathroom floor)
Sam: Aw..Trin in the toilet, man! (Rushes over with a cookie in her mouth and trys to help her up while Sam is starting to feel sick herself)
Sam: (Blows throwup all over Trinity's head)
Oh my go..I am so sorry Trinity..
Trinity: God..ugh this is so sick!
Deirdre: Here is some towels Sam. (Half in a daze drifting off)
Daya: So gross! (With a drink in her left hand holding on to Deirdre so she'll have somethin to lean on)
Tara: Dee, come here for a second I need your help! (Tara hollered in a dreary voice)
Deirdre: Coming!
Daya: I feel, I feel..(Passes out on Sam's bed)
Trinity: (Lays her head on the toilet) Uhhg..jesus I am so stupid! This is bad..ohh..(Dozes off) Mom..where are ya..ah im sorry..
Tara: Hey, Dee..let's do it now..everyone's sleeping.
Trinity: (Sleeping)
Tara: (Takes off all her clothes)
Deirdre: (Giggles a little)
Deirdre: (Sticks her hand in a cup of water)
Tara: (Spits gum in her hair and meshes it in)
Deirdre: (Takes scissors and chops the whole front of her hair very short and makes the bottom all uneven)
Tara: We are so mean..(Laughs)
Deirdre: Ohh **** what if we get caught?
Tara: Dee..we are going to leave the house and leave a note.
Deirdre: (Goes through Sam's moms things in her droor and finds a dildo) Oh my gosh..Tara look!
Tara: (Shoves it in Trinity's ass crack) I love being a bitch to this *******. (She says in a bitchy voice)
Deirdre: (Goes to Sam's bathroom) Look, tampons..let's shove them in Trin's mouth!
Tara: Aw, this is too good. (Does it)
Deirdre: Hey how about peircing her nose..remember I did Sam's before?
Tara: What if she wakes up though?
Deirdre: She's drunk and I will make this painless and use the numbing gel I brang in my bag.
(Does so)
Tara: I think we've did enough. Time to leave..you can go home from my house and we'll say we decided to leave early..first let's spray our mouths so they don't know we were drinkin, ok?
Deirdre: Good idea!
(Sun arises)
Mores Later..they are so jealous and cruel sick bitches aren't they!?
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WOW That was sooo mean!!! Post more! Trinity better get them back good!

Starts:(Angie is sitting in the kitchen all night long eating and she passed out on kitchen floor)
Angie: (Lays there with droll dripping out of her mouth)
(Sam's dog Teddy comes along and lifts up his leg to Angies head)
Angie: (Talks in her sleep) Ohh man i feel sick..I must be dilusional..or is an animal pissing on my head?
(Falls back asleep)
Ahh **** Brb..Mores ina min!:wave:

Starts: (Angie is just getting up 1 hr later)
(Wobbles) Tara..it's time for my constipation medicine..woah..(stumbles and knocks over a lamp) Man..this booze really took a toll on me babay! Wooh! Get ready for some hott stuff because here comes angie! (Trips over her foot and slides onto the purple carpet mat on the floor and flys down the stairs on it on her stomach)
(In other room)
*Where girls are all sleeping*
Sam: (Moans and gets up and without noticing Trinity she putter's over to Daya who is upside down on her bed)
(Rubs her head) I feel awful..
Sam: (Turns around and shreiks) God! Oh my..who did this..Trin..Trinity wake up..(Shakes her)
Trinity: (Opens one eye) Oh god..(Places her hand over her forehead) this is bad..I have a killer..my 1st hangover of my life! I can't believe..(Sees her hair and the gun in it and that shes naked) (Screams and jumps up) Ohh my god Ohh my god! Sam what did you do to me!? (Her hands shaking and feeling so confused) What happened?? (Demands and starts to get teary eyed)
Sam: I am so sorry..what did they do to you..those bitches..It had to be one of them..I was asleep the whole time I swear!
Trinity: (Begins to sob really hard) I wanna go home..I will tell my mom what I did I don't care..I just wanna call her and take a shower and put some clothes on! (She muttered as she covered up her body feeling ashamed)
Sam: (Hugs her and realizes what kind of friend she's been to her and all) I'm sorry really..I am..I haven't been a very good friend lately. I'll take the blame.
Trinity: Really..you will? You serious??
Sam: Yep.
Trinity: Thank you so much..but I need to tell my side too..I can't let you totally lie for me..
Sam: Come on let's go see what we can do with the hair.
Daya: (Awakes) Hey Sam..(Half dead) Great party..I'm gonna go walk home..peace.
Sam: Bye Day.
Sam: Dee and Tara ain't here it looks like..I am suspecting it was them..
Trinity: They'll pay for this..they really will.
Sam: Hey, where's Ang..haven't seen her since early last evening...(Hears singing)
Trinity: (Gets weird look on her face)
(Singing from the basement)
(I am the star and I am the star Hi Ho the Dario I am the star!)
Sam: Angie..ohh god she's going to wake my father up..uhh..
Father: Sam! (He yells)
Sam: Ohh no..not this..

Mores Later!:wave:

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! :eek: :eek: :eek: That is disgusting! Oh, how did a fellow Tara ever get led so astray....;) j/k. Post more soon!

You aren't gonna make me wait until tomorrow to see more of this are you? Come on.. please just a little more tonight? PLEASE! This is funny stuff. And if you don't, I will have to tell everyone here about your little "misunderstanding" with screen names that took me 2 weeks to explain to you!! LOL You don't want that now do you? Well then post more now!!!:wave: :D

AND a new page! Now come on!!

TY lol ill post more soons

SOON?!? Nah nah..NOW!

Starts: (CD and Nate's house)
CD: I better call the house...to make sure Trinity is there because miss head like a rock did not call us to let us know she is staying overnight.
Nate: Yeah..I was just a bit pissed off about that.

Mores later..sry bedtime! n i feel sick!

2 lines..2 lines?!?! THAT'S ALL I GET!?!? WELL IT HAD BETTER BE GREAT TOMORROW YOUNG LADY OR THE CAT'S OUTTA THE BAG!!!:wave:

Starts: (CD and Nate in same place..their house)
CD: She's dead. I can't believe she didn't call. (She went on and on)
Nate: I'm calling right now and someone better pick up.
(He says growing more and more impatient)
(Dials and no answer)
CD: No answer?
Nate: Damn her!
CD: Go on over now and pick her up..if you have to by the hair!
Nate: Sure thing.

(Next scene)
*Sam's house*
Dad: Samantha Lynn Miller, get your ass in here! (He shouted)
Sam: I..I'm so sorry dad..I should of told you that I had friends sleep over but..
Dad: Ohh, I'm not half as pissed as I am now when I found a whole bunch of beer bottles in my frigen hallway! (He hissed)
Sam: They..aren't mine I swea..
Dad: Don't even think about lying through your teeth about this. I know it was yours and god knows how long you've been doing all of this.
Sam: (Sighs) Dad, I'm really really really sorry..
Dad: It is going to take a long long time for me to be able to trust you again.
Sam: (Gives a scared look)
Dad: I want all of your friends to get their stuff together because they are going home. You and I will have a very long talk...
Sam: Yes, dad.
Dad: And as soon as I walk into my kitchen to get myself a cup of coffee..what do I find..huh? A wad of my food scattered on the floor..my floor that I just waxed yesterday morning.
Dad: Right now..sorry's just won't cut it.
(In Sam's shower)
Trinity: (Slouches down in the corner of the shower crying her eyes out holding her hair in her hands that's on her head)
Sam: Trinity..are you..ok?
Trinity: I'm so stupid, I can't beleive this happened..how could I have done this.
Sam: Trin, it wasn't all your fault I'm to blame too. You could of left but I had to force you to stay..I'm sorry.
Trinity: No, Sam..even though you've been a ****ty friend..I have a mind of my own..this was something I wouldn't do..but I did..it.
(She told her getting all weepy)
Sam: This is horrible..and I'm punished too so you can be happy about that..
Trinity: I'm just upset as can be now and who knows what will happen the moment I get into my father's car. And I can't lie..I'll feel too guilty..
Sam: I bet they will be more sympathetic at first instead of angry.
Sam: Trin..I was wrong about ya..you're not a loser..I am the one who really is..you are always right and all and a good friend..and I go off and act like a prissy bitch and then this is what you get in return..no that should of been me..
Trinity: Thanks Sam..for saying that but believe me.. no one deserves this..ugh it was so humiliating.
Sam: I can't imagine.
Trinity: Well, I'm almost finished up..so I need ya to turn around so I can get my towel.
Sam: (Turns around while Trinity gets out and gets dressed)
Trinity: Ok, done..I'm going to call my dad now..
Sam: Hope you can fix your hair and it turns out good.
(Beep)
Sam: (Looks out window and see's Trinity's father's car)
Trinity: Ohh god..it's my dad isn't it..you can tell hes gonna be really mad. I forgot to call yesterday and all...
Sam: I'll go out there and talk to him 1st..ok?
Trinity: Ok, thank you so much.
Nate: (See's Sam run out to his car) Hi, Sam where is Trinity..she didn't call us last night to let us know she was sleeping over..
Sam: I know..she fell asleep early she didn't feel too well. I'm sorry I didn't call..I was so stupid not to.
Nate: Oh, ok..then I don't have a reason to kill her. (He kidded)
Sam: (A nervous look fades on her face) Yeah..well I'll get her..she took a shower at my house.
Trinity: (Walks slowly out to the car and bursts into tears)
Nate: Trinity? Oh my god why..what happened to you..are you ok?
Trinity: Sam is lying..I forgot to call last night and one of the girls there did something really nasty to me while I was sleeping and I didn't wanna drink and I was about to leave but then I followed the part of me that wanted to stay and then I wound up getting into more trouble! (She cryed between words)
Nate: Oh my..you were drinking!
Trinity: Yes, yes I will never do it again though! Punish me or whatever but just don't treat me different from now on and hate me! (She screamed in a hysterical voice)
Nate: (Hugs her) Ok, hop in the car we'll talk when we get home, calm down.
Sam: Sorry, Mr. Basso for lying to ya..
Nate: It's ok, Sam..go on in.
Trinity: (Wipes her eyes and sits there trembling hoping that she will wake up from this nightmare)

Mores Later!
:wave:

Ahh yes Jessie. Thanks so much for making me such an interesting character....*gives a wierd look*lol Can't wait to see what I do next... :crazy: :p

Lmao! More soon!:wave:

Originally posted by TDivisionInspector
Ahh yes Jessie. Thanks so much for making me such an interesting character....*gives a wierd look*lol Can't wait to see what I do next... :crazy: :p

LOL, yeah, I know what you mean....

That was great, Jessie! Post more soon!

Ah..satisfactory..I would have enjoyed more than that though. I am sitting her in school hoping to laugh my ass off and..nothing. Come on Jess, MORE!:D :wave:

Starts: (CD is at home while she waits for Nate to hopefully arrive with her kid)
CD: (Putter's around the house gathering up Trinity and Nate's laundry)
CD: Oh my god..I'm gonna kill him..leaving his underwear under our bed..(She whines to herself) He's such a pig!
CD: (Enter's Trinity's room and lifts up her mattress just out of curiosity to see if she is possibly hiding anything..drugs..ect. She felt really guilty about it though) (Feels something like a bottle of medicine and pulls it out)
What the..(Reads it carefully with a concerned look fading on her face) Anti-Depressent..Teen Meloncoly..where did she find this? (She demanded to herself)
Nate: (Pulls up to driveway)
Uh..C..D? Were back. (Nate calls out with a nervous frustrated tone)
CD: Oh, good did you find Trinity there?
Nate: Ye..ah I did..we need to discuss some things and issues here..ok?..
CD: Wait, um Trinity would you please get in here for a minute?
(CD anxiously shouted)
Trinity: (Paced slowly for a minute in the hallway and then walked slowly into her bedroom where she heard CD's voice)
CD: (Stood there facing the wall holding the pill bottle awaiting for Trinity to step into the room)
Trinity: (Turned corner into room) Some..thin you want mo..m? (She asked in a husky voice as she was about to break down)
CD: (Spins around, gasps and just stares in shock for a moment)
Trinity..wha..what happened to yourself..you look like a mess!
Wha..what happened to your hair? Did you cut it..oh my gosh! (She asked randomly)
Trinity: (Bit on her lip and broke down and a tear that she couldnt hold back cascaded down her face)
Mom..I can explain..it wasn't me who cut it..
CD: Did someone go to hurt you?
Oh my..what the hell happened..your eyes look bad too..and you didn't call..tell me what the hell happened and then we can talk about this..(Waves the pill bottle)
Trinity: (Moans)
(Next scence..she explained everything that took place and how sorry she was and how dumb she was and the pressure she felt and she was never going to do that again and more that she had to say and get out)
CD: You drank? How stupid can you be..to get drunk at a house where there is girls you hardly know about and they were already harassing you there..and this would be probably the last thing I would ever expect from you..I can't believe it..you..you were never that desperate to fit in..you never did stuff like this before and..and..
Trinity: Mom! Please..calm down! I mean I said everything I needed to say and I even said I'm sorry and all and I know you can tell I am..and dad already gave me a long talk and all and yelled at me in the car..so can't you just give me my punishment so I can go lay down..my heads killing me! (She yelled)
CD: Oh yeah? Well, that's what it feels like to be drunk! (She sarcastically said)
Trinity: Mom! (She shouted putting her hand on her head groaning) Come on..I get it..I really do. I already feel terrible for doing it and not going with my first gut feeling, ok! Right now I feel even more worse by what just happened to me last night..to me! Can't you just have some sympathy!?
CD: (Gives her a look) Ok, yes I do feel really bad for what you went through..but you were doing something that you knew was over the limits. (She stated)
Trinity: Please give me my punishment.
CD: Not just yet..we are going to talk all day tomorrow..today I will let you rest..and your dad is in the shower right now and he will also be talking more to you tomorrow too.
Trinity: So what is it gonna be then?
CD: I haven't decided yet. (She tells her as she sighs rubs her head) Just go..somewhere right now..I just am so mad about what those girls did to you and what you did to me.
Trinity: Oh and about the pills..I didn't take then yet..I was going to..Sam gave them to me..because I was pretty sure I was going through depression..but I was going to get your permission for those cause they could be dangerous. (Trinity swung around and said sniffling)
CD: (Turns around and just glances at her)
Trinity: Wha..you don't believe me..? You don..'t..do you? God..mom! I am telling you I am not lying! Oh, ok..if you want to take blood from me then do it! I get drunk one time and I spill my heart out to you and apologies that I really mean and you really do not care. I knew as soon as I got home you..I don't know about dad..would see me through your eyes differently after this! And..I think I was right...(She bellowed as she had tears building up in her eyes as some streamed down her face)
CD: Look, don't yell at me like that..and you don't know what I'm thinking. (She snapped) I'm just angry..now go get some rest I will be up to talk with you.
Trinity: (Runs up the stairs and lightly closes her door getting ready to cry and then layed in her bed under her covers and then just started writing stories and then fell asleep)
CD: (Paced around and felt really bad for her daughter and half of her felt so scared and angry about her kid's life and if she is mothering her right)
Nate..this is really..really bad for me to handle..and I know that you have spoken with her..but..the truth is..I always feel like this frigen bad guy.
Nate: I talked to her..and what do you mean?
(He asked clueless)
CD: You know very well what I mean.
Nate: I..I don't want to hear this..right now I am not..not in a good mood. (He said putting the conversation off fast)
CD: You don't wanna talk about this because you ar afraid it will lead to something you don't want me to remind you of..is that it?
Nate: No! (He said in a louder voice)
CD: Our daughter is in trouble here and I feel bad about this and I know she does like 10 times more. Now I need to know what you're thinking. Ya know Nate..we talk and talk about other things..about us..alot of the time..you never like to..alot of the time you never feel comfortable it looks like..to discuss Trinity and her life and whats going on with her. Why?
Nate: Maybe it's because I was always afraid of being a father..and never relaxed about raising her...I..I can't explain it. It was a little easier for me when she was between the ages 6 and 10..it just felt more like..like I could breath again.
CD: I really get what you are saying..but I need you to open up to me..Nate. (She explained sitting down next to him on the couch trying to communicate)
CD: I'm going up there now..it's been 4 hours..and I haven't heard from her at all..I'm also a little upset about those pills that she was going to ask us about.
Nate: Pills..?
CD: There was anti-depressant pills she was going to inform us about..they were under her mattress..she didn't take them yet. And I do believe her about that...
Nate: (Sighs) Things are going wrong..the..the wheels are turning and I don't know what direction they are spinnin in! (He yelled to himself while becoming confused) How could I have not missed this..how? I mean I love my daughter..but I..I'm not a good enough father..I was never father material I guess..
CD: (Keeps looking down staring at the floor and doesn't know what to think)
Nate: she has always been my little girl..and you have always been the over protective one and I always tried to be the best dad I could be..I loved her..paid attention to her..she was my little tomboy for a while..a handy girl..she could do everything if she put her mind to it..always had great common sense..and when I hear something like this happen..it..it really freaked me out. Long story about what I have been feeling all these years..I also wana get this together and go up there and talk to her.
CD: (Laughed a little) Then when she started to grow out of the sport loving stage and just into nothing it hurt you a little didn't it?
Nate: ...A litt..le yeah it did. (He admited)
CD: Come on..my Natie Pie. (She joked for a minute)
Nate: Ohh that brings back the rookie days..(He kidded)

Mores Later..more stuf coming!








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That was very interesting..I like it! :) Now that she is in trouble, let's get back to the funny stuff.. I also think Kelly should be in the story more dont ya think? I mean she's such a good character for leaving the party so Trinity should hang out with her. Whatcha think?:p ;) :D

Kelly you have just read my mind;) i aint saying anything else about it LOL!:happyface

Starts: (Trinity's sobbing in her pillow and just woke up like 15 minutes ago)
CD: (Opens door) Trinity..we need to talk.
Trinity: (Stays silent and looks up kind of embarassed that she is hysterical)
CD: I think I've punished you enough, baby. (Notices her crying and sits besides her as Nate stands there with his arms folded)
Trinity: You..aren't mad at me and don't hate me anymore..
CD: Trinity..we could never hate you..
Nate: Trinity we love you so much..you're my little girl and I was so happy when you were born.
Trinity: I know..you couldn't not love me..I just had a feeling that I really made you guys see me differently now..
Nate: No..
Trinity: Dad..what I did was really really really messed up..and I deserve a real punishment.
Nate: We know other parents would and we would..but we really think you have learned from what you did. Me and your mom thought this over..and we want to talk to you for a while about this. Just make sure you are doing fine...with everything..and if anything goes wrong..
CD: You come to us..no matter what the hell happens..I am still a little mad about what ya did..but I still love you and I don't hate you at all.
Nate: You made a mistake..and your'e growing up..we make all kinds of mistakes like these. This is actually normal..but it is not happening ever again. And I am going to try and be more of an alert dad about these things.
CD: Mhmm.
Nate: What was with those pills?
Triniy: Ohh, don't worry I..I didn't take any of them at all..I was afraid to take medicine without your permission.
CD: Do you think you are slipping into depression?
Trinity: I..I'm not sure..it's hard to tell and all..yeah I think I am.
Nate: Well, do you think you need to see a counsler?
CD: We just want to help you and if I suspect something is going wrong I want to take you to a specialist or if you decide to start actually talking to me then do it. (She firmly said to her)
Nate: She's right Trin. I don't wanna walk upstairs or if your mother walks upstairs and goes to wake you up and you don't wake up..our lives will just fall apart.
Trinity: Wait..uh I never said anything about me committing suicide..ever. I feel like it alot but I never said I would..I guess I just don't have it in me.
Nate: (Breathes deeply)
CD: Keep it that way.
Trinity: I got what you are sayin though..so can I pick din..ner?
Nate: What you want?
(2 minutes later)
(Nate and CD walk downstairs)
CD: So glad we straightened that out.
I hope she's going to be ok..I really do..she and I need to talk more.
Nate: Hey maybe we should strap her to her bed and just leave her there and feed her and you know..if she has to go to the bathroom..get her a bedpan..and..
CD: (Slaps his arm) As much as I'd like to do that right now..I think this needs to be handled a bit different.
Nate: Damn..

Mores verry soon!:wave:

Starts: (4 weeks later and Trinity is still a little weird..but her mom took her to get her hair cut up to her neck and it's feathered so it makes it look nice and they fixed it)
Trinity: Mom, school isn't going so great..I mean at first it was but now it's not going good at all...(Trinity whined as she came down the stairs after she finished her homework)
CD: Why, what happened?
Trinity: Ever since you called those girls parents..and other stuff..they are more ignorant to me and they all hate me..and I try not to bother with them..Sam is sticking by me now though..that's the good part. Dee and Tara bother me now and Daya just doesn't bother with us so I have no problem with her really.
CD: What are they saying to you..if those bitches do anything to you..tell someone and that'll keep pissin her off and she'll eventually give up and stop and just leave you be.
Trinity: No..no you don't know Tara and Dee..they are best friends and the way they are.
CD: They were always jealous of you..I mean I remember you bringing up their names when you were little..they were nice and mean nice and mean..they're crotches.
Trinity: At leasts my grades aren't bad.
CD: Anything you need come to us..don't hold back please.
Nate: (Enters house from work) Home..Hey Trinity how was school?
Trinity: It was ok..
Nate: Ya been sayin ok for the last 5 days..is everything goin good..yes..no? Remember..talk to us.
Trinity: It's just..ugh it's too hard to talk about..but it's the girls at school..it's really complicated and bad what;s been going on there.
CD: You know it's Friday..if ya noticed..let's take this weekend to forget all what's happened and try to get over it..let's go to the new mall.
Trinity: Ok, let's go..I'm ready.
Nate: I'll go change something on my car and I'm gonna stay here..malls just not my thing.

(At mall)
Trinity: Thank ya for buying the stuff for me, mom.
CD: Your welcome..and I think after this shopping spree..you should be done with clothes for now.
Trinity: Mom, I really can't stand Dee and Tara..really I just wanna beat the livin **** outa them..I hate them..those big ********s. God..
CD: I want to talk to them and their parents again..I'm pissed with this. (She said feeling a swift of anger over her)
Trinity: This time I don't care if you talk to them..I just want them to leave me alone..it doesn't work if I try.
CD: (Grabs bag of clothes after paid for) I'll take care of things don't worry.

Come on! That was great! I need more! Tonight! Please! *Sweet smile* I got the Nancy smile! Now you got to post more hehe:D

Sorry guys..I got knocked off almost..long story..that was almost where it was gonna stop but here's more:
Starts: (CD and Trinity come back from the mall)
CD: (Comes in and searches for Nate)
Trinity: Mom, should I try these clothes on and make sure they fit right?
CD: Yeah, Trin do that I'm gonna go talk to your father for a min.
CD: Nate? (He walks in wearing his big magnifying glasses and has his toolkit in his hands)
Nate: Yeah? Whatd ya get at the mall?
CD: Nate oh my god take those off your'e going to make me pee myself..(She begins to cackle)
Nate: Come on..I look professional.
CD: Yeah..yeah. Now seriously..I am really worried about Trinity..I don't want this depression thing breaking her and with those girls..theyre going to make her life hell.
Nate: I talked to some of the parents too last time and now what else can we do..threaten the kids?
CD: (Nodds)
Nate: We gotta think on this.
CD: Yeah ok, your'e right..got ya.

More ina min..sry if im not answering quick..im kinda frozen/not/error..kk brb..

Starts: (That night Trinity recieve's a call)
Trinity: (Picks up even though the caller ID says her name)
He..llo
Tara: Hey girl! What's goin on?
Trinity: Ohh ok so now you are playing nice..what do you want?
Tara: Look, I spoke to Sam and I realized what I did was horrible..I was so wrong. I really am sorry..i mean it. I just feel so bad now. But if you want to actually be my friend..then just say the words.
Trinity: Wait..I don't know if this is true..(She said as she squinted her eyes and felt confused)
Tara: You can even ask Sam tonight. Oh by the way..me, Dee..don't worry I talked to her too..and other people who were at Sam's that night will be there..we meet by the secret lake place..behind like all the gates and houses..right between the woods. At hmm..8:45?
Trinity: I..I don't know if I am allowed..
Tara: Please ask..
Trinity: (Feeling unsure and weird again about this) Oh..ok..hold up.
Trinity: Mom?..
CD: Yeah?
Trinity: Ta..uh can I go out at 8:45 to Kelly's..me and her and Jessie are just having a meeting near her house?
CD: Where is this meeting?
Trinity: It's just in her backyard, mom.
(She stated like it was no big deal but behind that act was a very scared girl and felt bad again about lying to her parents)
Trinity: (Thought to herself better take Kelly, Jessie and maybe Angie with her for backup and have them lie..it was wrong and risky but she wanted to see what was going on)
CD: (Finally guessed she could fully trust her kid)

>Not thinking that this could be th last time she will ever see her again..**
Mores l8er..bedtime!~
:happyface :wave:

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
>Not thinking that this could be th last time she will ever see her again..**

WHAT'S THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN?? AND WHY IS SHE DRAGGING POOR KELLY INTO THIS?? That's not fair! And YOU STOP THERE?? That's not right at all!! Come on Jessie! Good ol' Jessie. PWETTY PWEASE?:D

That was great, Jessie! :) Poor Trin.....she's so going to get harassed again. :(

Starts: (Kelly and Jessie arrive at Jessie's and they go to Angie's house after that to pick her up and they walk on over to that lake and the hideout place)
Angie: Hey peoples what is up girlies? (Open the door and see's the girls there)
Kelly: Angie just out of curiosity did you eat too much sugar because you really shouldn't..
Jessie: Ohh god...if it gives her diarreah I ain't walkin too close to her.
Trinity: Woah..oh..k there..um Angie just follow me, Kel, and Jess..ok?
Angie: (Starts laughing like a maniac) Babay..I'm just all hyper tonight!
(They all grab Angie by the arms and she follows them)

More ina Minute!!! Brb ppls

Starts: (Left off where Angie, Jessie, Kelly, and Trinity are going to that hideout near the lake to meet up with Tara because they aren't going to Tara's house and Tara alerted Trinity on her cell phone)
Trinity: Come on..not that much longer.
Jessie: Yeah I love workin out..I could walk all night.
Kelly: (Panting) God..I have my period and I feel like total ****..can't believe that bitch wants to see you.
Trinity: Hey..where's Ang?
(Hearing bushes rattling)
Angie: Girls im ok..I just have major bad diarreah ohh man hold on..I brang some charmin in my book bag..ohh so soft.
(Angie shouted)
Kelly: Ohh..that is so nasty..well hurry the fuk up!
Jessie: I told you we should of left her home!
Trinity: Shh..ok you almost done?
(3 minutes later)
Angie: (Climbs out) Yep done..and I used some leaves back there to wipe my ass..I ran out of charmin.
(Started walking again and then Angie begins to scratch her ass)
Kelly: (A weird look appears on her face as she glances at Angie)
Jessie: (Just stares at Angie) Woah, Angie can I ask why you are scratchin your ass in public? That's just wrong..
Angie: God..it had to be those leaves.
Trinity: By any chance Angie..those leaves couldn't possibly have poisen ivy on them..could they?
Angie: Ohh crap!
(They finally get there and it is growing darker and darker)

Mores soon!

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
Kelly: (Panting) God..I have my period and I feel like total ****..can't believe that bitch wants to see you.

Kelly: Ohh..that is so nasty..well hurry the fuk up!
Kelly: (A weird look appears on her face as she glances at Angie)
Jessie: (Just stares at Angie) Woah, Angie can I ask why you are scratchin your ass in public? That's just wrong..
Angie: God..it had to be those leaves.
Trinity: By any chance Angie..those leaves couldn't possibly have poisen ivy on them..could they?
Angie: Ohh crap!


LMFAO!! Funny but...nasty!! And Kelly is a PMSing bitch! lol And Angie is sooo funny hehe Like the real thing ;) J/K Angie J/K!

Ok, I gotta post quick or Kelly's gonna kill me! aHH! aHH! saVe mEE! anYwaY heRRes MorEs pplS!*

Starts: (At secret hideout near the lake)
Angie: (Continues to scratch her ass) Eh..how dumb can I be to wipe my ass with poisen ivy?
Jessie: I can name some other times..
Angie: Thanks..but no.
Kelly: I'm gettin PMS and you people better just shush!
Trinity: Yeah, yeah, yeah..when the hell is she coming..it's getting chilly..Ang can I borrow your jacket? (She asked while they all sat on the log in front of the lake)
Angie: Sure..here. (Hands it to her because she wasn't wearing it)
(5 minutes later)
Tara: (Has a flashlight in her hand and has a bookbag on her back and Deirdre is stepping over the branches and that was all that showed up)
Hey..Trinity great ya showed up..I need to talk to you..ohh you..you brang Kelly, Jess, and Angie?..(She slowly said as she had a surprised look on her face)
Trinity: Yeah, I did. I wasn't going to show up but then I thought I should hear what you have to say to me. So you really are sorry about all of this and want to be my friend now? Is it true?
Kelly: I would watch what you tell her Trinity..you never know what Tara will do next. (She said sarcastically)
Jessie: If I were you Trin, I wouldn't trust her..unless we both can tell she is really sorry and all that other shizzile.
Tara: Kelly, Jessie..you may think you know alot about me..but all in all I don't think you do..
Trinity: Well, spill it.
Angie: (Stayed silent rubbing her ass)
Deirdre: I realized I was wrong too..and I've decided that I need some help..I mean real friends help eachother..you know? (She stated pacing back and forth in a weird toned voice)
Tara: (A funny look swept across her face that was a little freaky and Jessie just noticed it as Trinity was too tired I guess to see it)
Kelly: (Shot Jessie a look like what are they trying to get at)
Tara: Isn't that right Trinity?
Trinity: Yeah..true...
Deirdre: Ok..and you do want to become my true friend right?
Trinity: Sure..(She responded with a confused expression)
Jessie: Uh, can't you see Trinity..they are all fake.
Kelly: You can so tell..look at them..you can see it.
Tara: Shut..! (She snapped at Kelly and Jess) I mean..shh Dee's talkin..please be quiet.
Kelly: (Gives her a sarcastic look like fuk u)
Are you like nuts you guys..I mean it..
Jessie: What you guys getting at?
Tara: (Stays silent for a minute and kneels down and goes to unzip her backpack)
Deirdre: So, Trinity, Trin, Trin..would you please help your two new official friends get on with their lives?
Trinity: Oh..k..now I'm lost.
Tara: (Slowly slips out a dull, cerated swiss army knife with a red and purple cover on the bottom)
Angie: (Stays frozen as she see's it)
Kelly: Holy mother fuking god..(She muttered ina painicy tone of voice)
Trinity: (Gasped and froze while she started to get hysterical)
Jessie: (Stayed frozen as well and hardly let out a breath) You guys are crazy..oh my god..you aren't going to do thi..s..ok, if this is a joke..oh my..this is going way too far! (Jessie firmly stated in a very nervous serious voice keeping her hands gripped to the log she was sitting on)
Kelly: Hey..come on..(Kelly yelled while she started shaking a bit)
Trinity: P..p..please don't..do this to me I don't wanna die!Ohh god..Ohh god! (Her voice grew louder and huskier)I'm sorry whatever I did.. (She whined becoming more and more hysterical and starting to cry but no tears flowed yet)
Tara: Relax relax Kell, and Jess..we aren't going to hurt you guys..yet.
Kelly: (Swallowed hard)
Yet?
Jessie: Kelly remember when you thought your period was the worst..this definitly beats it.
Deirdre: (Chuckles a little quietly)
Tara: And Angie..same goes for you. If you mention this night to anyone you will be seeing me as soon as possible and I will make sure of that.
Trinity: (Her stomach was in knots and her heart raced) Wha..what about me? (She screamed)
Angie: (Bulged her eyes out and was dying to scratch her ass but she was too afraid to make a move)
Deirdre: Trinity,..be a friend and help me help Tara to get you down to that lake. (She told her in a freakier voice)
Tara: Yeah..I would really really appreciate it. (While just focusing on Trinity's whereabouts and then flipped up the knife)
Trinity: (Took a deep breath and started shaking and didn't have much time to think and when she tried to scream nothing came out)

Mores Soon*



:wave:

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
Ok, I gotta post quick or Kelly's gonna kill me! aHH! aHH! saVe mEE!

YOU'D BETTER RUN!!! That's all and you left me there??? That's so wrong! Come on Jess! I NEED MOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
Kelly: I'm gettin PMS and you people better just shush!

Omg, how did you know I say that?:o

I stalk ya thats why! LOL*:talk: :lol:

I stalk ya thats why! LOL*:talk: :lol:

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
I stalk ya thats why! LOL*:talk: :lol:

I'm starting to think you do hehe:D

Starts: (Angie, Kelly, Jessie, and Trinity are terrified about what is going to take place next)
Tara: (Moves closer to Trinity)
Trinity: Oh my god..please don't hurt me..ohh god please..just please, I'll do anything..anything. (She pleaded with fright)
Kelly: (Sat frozen and was pressed against Jessie as Jessie couldn't hold back)
Jessie: (Stands up) Get the hell away from her! (She demanded)
Deirdre: Jessie..hunny if I were you right now I'd sit down before something drastic happens to both of you.
Tara: (Ignores Jessie's statement and places the knife down at her side and gets closer and closer to Trinity just loosing it)
Trinity: Tara..(Turns her head fast to each side and doesnt know what to do or when to do it) Ta..ra! (She yells as she almost falls over a stick into the water)
Tara: Oh, what's the matter Trinity? Huh?
Am I scaring you to death?
Trinity: (Starts to cry harder) Yeah, Tara you are..
Tara: (Silent for a minute and drops the knife as a different expression comes upon her face)
Kelly: (Breathes again and puts her hand over her heart) Man..
Jessie: (Looks confused and still a little freaked)
Angie: (Sits there about to fall asleep and thinking great now this is the part in my dream I wake up right)
Trinity: (Shows a half smile and half worried look like she is relieved but still scared)
Deirdre: (Knows what Tara was trying to do and just watches for a second to everyones reactions)
Tara: (Then the mad look appears on her face again and she picks up the knife in a faster motion) Good. (She replys and then makes her move on Trinity)
Trinity: Ohh god..no! Please..please leave me alone..please please! (Shouts as she gpes to run on the side of the woods path still trembling)
Kelly: (Covers her mouth and shrieks) Ohh my gosh! Ohh my..Jessie we have to do something! Oh my go..d!

Mores laters:wave: sry brb i was gonna continue

Starts: (Trinity is kind of running for her life)
Tara: (Bolts with the dull, cerated swiss army knife in her hand)
Trinity: (Continues to run and then as her legs tremble she looses control a little of her body balance and her pace grows slower)
Tara: (Practically flys towards her and catches her hair and pulls her over to her and Deirdre rushes over to help Tara)
Kelly: (Gets up swiftly and walks closer and steps back at same time) Ohh..jesus..christ!
Jessie: (Darts over and grabs Dee's hair and with all Jessie's strength she pulls her down to the ground so hard that she falls down with her)
You son of a bitch! (She bellows still shaking from the terror going through her mind) Why!? Wh..y?! (She has her hair and her hand vibrating and she is screaming those words into her ears)
Kelly: (Her eyes bug out) Jessie, don't your going to get hurt! Jess! (Get's confused on what to do) *Jumps on top of Dee and makes sure she can't get up to help Tara hurt Trinity*
Angie: (Forgets that her ass itches and feels helpless and not thinking..she ran over to the lake where Tara and Trinity were)
I've had enough of you..bitchface! (Screams)
Tara: (Picks up a rock while holding Trinity and throws it at Angie's head and she quickly collapses and is knocked unconcious)
There whore!
Dee..D..You little cocksuckers..get the hell off of her..now! (Tara yelled in a frustrated voice)
Trinity: (On her knees in the water crying and almost to a point where she's hyperventalating)
Tara: (Has the knife to her throat and just working it back and forth but not cutting her skin)
Trinity: (Pants harder and harder and squinting her eyes tight)
Deirdre: Get the fuk off of me you big hoes! (Fights Kelly and Jessie)

Ahh **** brb

OMG OMG!! TOO LITTLE!! I NEED MORE!! IM GOING TO HYPERVENALATE! PLEASE!! NOW!!

Starts: (Kelly and Jessie are holding down Deirdre and Angie is laying on the ground with her head bleeding)
Kelly: (Gets up fast) Ang..! (Feels her pulse in a panic and feels sick) (Thank god your'e ok she thought when she felt that she was alive and just knocked out)
Kelly: (Thinking maybe I'll go find help and try to run outa there to the nearest house)
Tara: (Points knife towards Kelly) Hey..little girl..don't.move! (Tara screams and demands)
Kelly: (Freezes and spins around with her hands to her sides)
Tara..please don't do this! I mean it! (She commands)
Tara: Shut up! Just shut the hell up..I'm getting pretty tired of you...(Voice increases)
Kelly: (JUmps back and moans in a crying voice) Ok..ok..

Mores 2morroa!:happyface

Wow..a segment full of me! *snaps out of it!* That was it?? Oooh there had better be more tomorrow! I know where you live!!!

Starts: ( In the same crisis they left off at)
Deirdre: (Knees Jessie in the stomach and she falls back) You little bitch! (Shouts and kicks Jessie a few times growing angry)
Kelly: Stop it, just jus..stop it! (Runs over and pulls Dee by the shoulders off of Jessie)
Jessie: (Groans and gets up and goes for Tara while Kelly and Dee are fighting)
Kelly: (Punching Deirdre in the head)
Tara: (Still has the knife and just glares into Trinity's eyes)
(Suddenly acts like she is going to slit her throat)
Trinity: (Shrieks) Oh my god..! Pl..e..(Cry's harder and shakes even more)
Tara: Oh my god..ohh..ohh..(Mimics her) You are just so dramatic aren't you?
Trinity: (Too frightened to say anything and then something slips out) Wh..y? Why? Do you rea..(swallows) lly hate me that much?
Tara: (Smiles and stays silent for a moment)
Jessie: (Sneaks up behind Tara and jumps on her back as Tara falls sidways still with the knife in her hand) You..bitc..(About to stab her in the stomach as she tries to hold her down as best she could)
Kelly: (Pushes Dee down rwal fast and lets go of her and then bolts over to Tara and knocks the knife out of her hand leaning over)
Trinity: (Standing there and was about to run down that path but she couldn't leave her friends there so they'd get killed..it just happened all so fast)

Mores soon:wave:

Keep going....

that was great!! So suspenceful (sorry I probably spelled that wrong).

Keeeeeeeeeeeep Gooooooooiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnngggggggg

PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

Starts:
Kelly: (Trying to get the knife on her stomach reaching for it as Tara is on top of her)
Deirdre: (Snatches the knife before Tara and Kelly and first kicks Trinity in the lower back so she'd fall down as she snuck up behind her)
Kelly: No! (Shouts while Tara is holding Kelly's mouth shut and sitting on her)
Trinity: Ohh my gosh! (Views Dee with the knife and then she bounces on her back) Get the fuk away from me..please! Don't do this..(She pleaded)
Jessie: (Goes to pick herself up and before she could stop Deirdre, Tara grabs Jessie's arm and pulls her down and holds her by her hair roots)
Trinity: (On her stomach in fear) (Screaming and moaning) Stop it! Just leave me alone! I wanna live...(Deirdre lifts the dull, cerated knife up high and stabs Trinity in the back with it about 8 times) No!...Sto..p..ohh my go...(She shrieked as she screamed between breaths) Ah..eh..(Crys louder and groans) Hel..p me! (Yells and begins to loose conciousness)
Deirdre: (Then digs the knife in the back of her neck untill the whole blade sinks in) (Shouts and screams and it sounds like screetching) Oh..eh..sto..p..ahh..god! (Her voice gets lower)
Kelly: (In shock and bites down on Tara's hand and panics) Help! Help! Help! Get off of me..leave her alone!
Jessie: Let me go! Trinity! Hang on don't go..(She bellowed in a teary voice)
Tara: Dee, get her! (When Kelly breaks free)
Deirdre: (Kicks Trinity in the head before she bolts after Kelly while Tara still has Jessie)
Jessie: Ohh, Kel she has the knife..run run..go go go..! (Screams sobbing)
Kelly: (Running and Dee just throws the knife into Kelly's direction but misses her and it gets stuck in a tree)
Trinity: (Laying there bleeding out still muttering some words and falling in and out of conciousness)
Angie: (Wakes up and realizes what's going on and while Deirdre is chasing Kelly so Kelly won't get help..she notices Tara letting go of Jessie and pulling the knife out of the tree and going for Trinity)
Jessie: Angie! (Yells as she runs over to her trembling) I don't know what to do..are..are you ok?
Angie: Yeah..my head just hurts..oh my gosh she stabbed her! (She gasped)
Tara: (Pulls it out getting fed up) (Pushes Angie aside and holds the knife up high with 2 hands and shuts her eyes tight and feels Trinity's pulse and she is still breathing)
(Just looses it and lifts up her head and cuts her hair and slits her cheeks)
Kelly: (Running and is on a street already and screaming help while Dee is trying to catch her) Please somebody..help! Help..help..help!
Angie: (Too afraid to move and realizes Trinity won't live even if she took the risk so she just snuck real fast and ran out to help Kelly)
Jessie: (Still standing there and then watches Tara torture Trinity and see's Angie run off)
(Follows Angie feeling so horrible just ditching Trinity and she knew she was going to probably die or maybe live but just be paralyzed)
Tara: (Not even noticing she's the only person there alone with Trinity she stabs her in the stomach while she's turned over and then her mouth just suddenly squirted blood out as she took her last breath)
Tara: (Slices her front parts of her neck up and then Tara really lost it when her mind got twistedly sick)
How do you feel now little whore? (Says louder as she roughly rips her pants off)
Trinity: (Blood gushing out from under her)
(Neighbors are waking up and coming out of their homes)
Deirdre: (Looks around and then runs as fast as she can home as she glances at Kelly, Angie and Jessie in the middle of the street)
Tara: (Raping Trinity and getting fun out of it and to top it off, jams the blade inside Trinity's body and leaves it in there as she lays helpless while her whole body beats up and down with her whole system shutting down)
Tara: (Breathes very hard and blinks tightly)
(Gets rid of the knife by going deeper into the water and she broke the knife with a rock. It was thrown into the water but not near Trinity)
Tara: (Slides one of the logs over to Trinity and pulls Trinity into the water face down and pushes the rock with all her might onto her head and leaves her there to die)
Tara: (With her jacket drenched in blood and her pants she puts them in her bag and goes home to burn them while she changes into new clothes in the bushes, then leaves quietly to go home and scared to death because in order for her not to get caught, or be a suspect she has to make sure Kelly, Angie, and Jessie are dead too)

Mores Later!:wave:

Um......I'm sorry, Jessie, but I just can't read this fic anymore. :mad: It's just too sick and twisted. And also, I don't mind you using my name for a decent character, but I really don't like that the character with my name mutilated and killed Trinity. That's just......not cool.

Ah, I'm sorry Tara.I was just listening to what people were telling me to do for the fic and I was trying to make it intense..I know what ya mean though..about using your name FOR this character and I'm so sorry again..I can switch your character around easily or just leave ya out of the fic and figure out something..reply to this if u read it and lemme know, ok? Bye sorry I didn't mean anything by it..but from now on u aren't going to be mentioned that much or some of the other ppls in it cause the rest is basically focused on..or mostly on CD n Nate and more ideas I have coming up. Please reply!!!

Starts: (Sarah is the new Tara for this fiction and it is that night at 10:45pm and Kelly, Angie, and Jessie are at the police station)
Angie: (Sits in one of the 5 chairs there rubbing her eyes growing more tired)
Kelly: (Looks at Jessie and Angie) Can you believe we did this? I thought we would never make it..or at least one of us besides..Tri..well you know who..(Voice breaks up a little as tears build up in her eyes again) would wind up dead.
Jessie: (Sighs and just stares at the ground with her eyes still raw from rubbing them earlier and crying) Yeah..I really didn't know what to think, really. It all just happened too fast..
Angie: Damn, I have a killer headache..thank god it's just a minor concusion. (Holds her head with her eyes squinted)
Kelly: Uh, I just remembered..how are we going to inform Trinity's parents that she's dead? And HOW she died..oh my god.
I can't even think about her..look at her school picture..just knowing what happened.
Angie: That was just horrible..Sarah is another problem you know! We just can't sit here while the police are out sarching for her body..Sarah..and we are certain she will find out..and then you can just guess what'll happen next to all of us.
Kelly: Man, this is going to get ugly for us..very. (Became worried)
Jessie: Angie is right, how the hell are we going to protect ourselves..(Swallows hard and her heart beat speeds up)
Kelly: I'm..I'm scared. (Pulls her jacket over her chest)

Mores soon
:talk:

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
Ah, I'm sorry Tara.I was just listening to what people were telling me to do for the fic and I was trying to make it intense..I know what ya mean though..about using your name FOR this character and I'm so sorry again..I can switch your character around easily or just leave ya out of the fic and figure out something..reply to this if u read it and lemme know, ok? Bye sorry I didn't mean anything by it..but from now on u aren't going to be mentioned that much or some of the other ppls in it cause the rest is basically focused on..or mostly on CD n Nate and more ideas I have coming up. Please reply!!!

Thanks for changing the name, Jessie. But still, Trinity's dead. That was just too horrific. Maybe this could all turn out to be a dream or something?

OMG u just read my mind lol i was thinking about doing that yesterday night omg LOL..ty for understanding though about whole thing..sry again~;)

Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
OMG u just read my mind lol i was thinking about doing that yesterday night omg LOL..ty for understanding though about whole thing..sry again~;)

No problem. :)

i have to agree with tara, this is so sick and twisted, and i'm sorry but 99% of teenagers are not like this, and i am really offended that u would associate my name with such a horrible human being, i do not do drugs, i do not drink, and most of all my sister and i would not ever murder someone. and to be murdered in such a horrific way. i am beyond pissed......i am downright damn upset. i might even report this to moderator..this is way beyond pg13 rating

I really like it and I am very into it and I do agree that the thing with those 2 girls names mentioned was too much..It seems like she knew those 2 girls on the boards and she just wanted to spice it up a bit..anyway I want more! Keep posting please*:wave:

To the people who want more of this ok heres more:

Starts: (CD is christmas shopping for a while since items at the mall are beginning to go on sale)
CD: (Paying for her gifts and get's a ring on her cell phone) Goddamn it. (Ring Ring...) Hold on, hold on. (She mumbled) This better be important. Hello? (Answers)
Nate: (In a very graspy low volumed voice) Hey..CD.
CD: Nate? What is it?
Nate: (Breathing and moaned)
CD: Nate? Wha..is anything wrong?
Nate: (Swallowed) I need you to come home as soon as possible, ok? I really need to tell you something.
CD: (Quiet for a second) Oh..ok. Nate are you ok? Is Trinity home yet?...
Nate: (Hung up)
CD: (Pulls her cell phone away from her ear for a minute and just stares at it getting a bad feeling in her inner gut)
Worker: Excuse me, hun? Ma'am? Hello?
CD: (Back into focus) Wha..oh. I am so sorry..Miss. Really, it's been so hectic today.
Worker: (Laughed) It's quite alright dear. I understand. (Ringing up the objects CD has bought)
CD: (Smiles a little) My husband just paged me on my phone and..he didn't really seem ok. I'm a little nervous actually, things haven't been too good between me and my daughter at home lately. (Kind of forgot she was speaking to the cashier)
Worker: Oh. Well I'm sure everything will be ok.
CD: I'm sorry. (Places her hand over her forehead sighing)
I know you don't want to hear my personal..crap.
Worker: Hey, it's ok. I do that sometimes myself. You know what? Go home and meditate.
CD: Med..itate? (She just nodded)
Worker: Sure. Here you go, a book about it. (She took out of the isle rack)
CD: Thank, you. But no thanks.
Worker: (Handed it back to her) I'll give it to ya for free. For being a lovely customer. (Winked)
CD: Are..are you sure? I mean you don't have to.
Worker: Please, take it. It will help you unwind from pressure.
CD: Ok, thank you..very much. (grabbing her bags to go)
Worker: Merry Christmas, and Happy Holidays.
CD: You too, bye. (Exits the mall to go home)

Mores soon--sry if i offended like 2 people that read this. I didn't mean to and I was dumb for writing some stuff that was a little over the top. That's just how I write. lol And for listening to friends who helped me with it lol. Ok so bye ppls~

:wave:

Come on Jess! I want to see what happens!!! Post more soon! :)

Come on I can't wait forever to get this story to continue. SO COME ON!!!!! :boxing: :hello

Starts: (CD enters her home and looking for Nate as she puts her keys on the table)
CD: (Drops keys on table)
Nate? (Taking off her jacket feeling a little nervous)
(CD slowly walked towards the bedroom and found herself speechless when she saw her husband sitting on Trinity's bed crying)
CD: N..ate? Oh my go.. What's wrong? (She ran over practically shaking and kind of already guessing something horrible has gone wrong)
Nate: (Cry's harder and harder not knowing how to tell CD and he did not want to see or make CD cry)
CD: Did something happen?
Nate: (Nodds yes)
CD: Oh my god! (Covers her mouth and begins to get hysterical) Is..is..she ok? She..'s she is ok right? .....__
Nate: (Just stares with a tear cascading down his faded red face)
CD: Nate!? (Screamed)
Nate: (About to collapse) She..she's dead. (Continues to cry)
CD: Ohh..oh my god! Oh..oh my gosh. (She sobbs and falls into Nate's arms hysterically) Dead? (Breathes hard) Why!?! Why!? I don't underst..oh my god!
Nate: (Hugs her tightly almost wanting to just kill himself right there but CD needed him now more than ever and they needed to try to pick up the peices)
---------------------2 weeks later---------------------
(CD is puttering around the house looking at everything Trinity has done since Kindergarten for her mother)
CD: (Kneels down searching threw the cabinet) Where..where is it? God! I can't find..
Nate: (Peeks in after cooking dinner) Um, can't find what..babe?
CD: (Rubbing her head frustrated) I..I can't seem to find something of Trinity's. (Sniffling and getting ready to burst out in tears)
Nate: CD..honey...
CD: Nate, this..this isn't working! I can't find the project she made for me on Mother's Day. I swear! I placed it in this cabinet! This one Nate!
Nate: (Puts his hand on her shoulders as she breaks away)
CD: No! I'm fine. Just please stop. (Wiping her eyes)
Nate: You need to sleep, we can find it later don't worry.
CD: (Silent for a moment and then a flashback kicked in)
---Flashback---
CD: Trinity? My god, look Nate! She's walking on her own now! (Overly excited) She is not even 8 months old yet!
Nate: Shh, wait what if she falls?
CD: Nate, she'll be fine. The whole house is baby proof now.
Nate: Wish we could just put her in a big bubble. (Laughing)
CD: Think she'll give us grandchildren?
-------Flashback Ends-------
CD: (Breathing hard and then began to knock things feircly off the table)
(Crying hysterically) No! She was a good kid! A good kid Nate! She was our..she was our baby! (Layed on the ground crying as Nate came over and held her)
Nate: I know, it wasn't fair. But, I love you. I loved Trinity. We have to get through this. We can get through this, CD. I hate to see this happen to you. I will do anything to make your happiness matter. Please let me help you.
CD: (Laying there in his arms with her tear stained face against his black sweater)
Nate: Look, now we have to have a fineral for Trinity, she's our dead daughter! (Said with his voice breaking up)
CD: (Crys louder) God, god don't say that! Don't ever say that to me.
Nate: I think it would be better for you if she was cremated
CD: (Pulls away from Nate for a second with her jaw trembling)
What did you just..say? Cr..emated? You son of a bitch! Bastard! (Gets up again) With..with all the pain she has already gone through! Ohh..ohh god. (Holds her head looking at the ground)
Nate: CD, I didn't mean...
CD: (Stares at him as her head heats up growing more angry by the minute)
They stabbed her! Beat her! God, they even raped her! Drowning her flesh, so even after she was dying she couldn't rest in peice faster! (Crying in between words almost halusinating)
Nate: (Covers his face with his hands getting more upset and runs into their bedroom and wanting to go back and comfort CD but for some reason he became weaker..weaker in a way that he's never known before)
CD: (Just looked around with tears building up in her eyes and continued to search through the cabinets)
----------2 months later----------
(CD is sleeping and her phone rang)
2pm in afternoon-
CD: (Jumped up and gasped) He..hello?
Kate: Hey! CD..it's Kate!..
CD: Wha..oh my gosh! (Excited) Hi..how have you been. I haven't seen ya in almost 5 years!
Kate: Well, I'm doing pretty good. Just that my blood pressure is a little high.
CD: My god, we gotta catch up. Where's the rest of the guys?
You know we should have..like a reunion. I really would love to see them.

more l8er!

Starts: (CD is still in bed leaning over with her hair a ragged mess from being so depressed and lazy with herself)
Kate: That would be just great. I was wondering how you have been doing and all.
CD: (Nodds) Um, have you spoke to Jinny these days? How is Hank and the baby?
Kate: CD, John JR. has grown up so fast..hes 14 now, a teen. And I spoke to Jinny recently and she said John has been busy with girlfriend lately. Hank is still in the sketch artist jobs..
CD: That's great..really is. Glad to hear that nothing bad or anything happened..or tragic. (She said dozing out a little)
Kate: Well, no they are doing fine.
CD: I would really like to see them now.
Kate: Oh my gosh I shouldn't be going on and on. How's Nate..aka Inspector Basso. (Giggled)
CD: Ohh, um not tha..t good actually. But hes managing with his job and all.
Kate: CD, you seem a little unsure about things..like something is wrong. Are you and Nate ok in your relationship?
CD: Yeah, were doing ok..getting through some th_ings.
Kate: I want to see Trinity too. I can imagine how hard it is right now having a 12 or 13 year old at home.
CD: (Suddenly just lost it and as her jaw trembled and tears pack up in her eyes she hung up)
Kate:CD?... (Holding the phone just shocked and sensed something was terribly wrong and CD needed support right now) Oh my..(Shrugs and sighed)
Kate! (Captain hollered) Katie! God damn her is she deaf? Your mother will be here in 5 minutes to pick you up!
More Later!

that was really good and kinda of sad at the same time. I thought it was great though. Keep up the good work :wave: