View Full Version : Jinny's Stalker strikes again*
NancyMarcAurora 07-13-2004, 07:34 PM TheDivision..ItS like one of the 5th season episodes)
(Jinny's online)
(Just entered her chat room she always goes in while her baby boy John Jr. is sleeping and her husband Hank is working late while she is off tonight)
Jinny: (Logs onto the computer)
JiNNyGerl: Hi guys
MagDaCopMomma: Jin! I haven't seen ya in here for like almost 3 weeks!
JiNNyGerl: Yeah, hows Ben..asleep?
MagDaCopMomma: Yes, thank god! how's John?
JiNNyGerl: Same! asleep.
MagDaCopMomma: Doesn't John turn 2 months today?
JiNNyGerl: Yep. his hair is starting to grow in darker and he has Hank's smile but my eyes.
MagDaCopMomma: Ohh I wish Benjamin was a little tiny baby again. He always slept for me and it was much easier than now lol
JiNNyGerl: lol well John use to sleep great! Now he sleeps in the daytime and wakes up in the night. Its horrible anymore. Anyway I took him to his pediatrician and he said he might have a sleeping disorder because there were other side affects beside the sleeping..
MagDaCopMomma: He'll be fine Jin just relax and everything will probably be fine.
CanDyDeeTasteMee: Hey everybody!! I have some great news!
(CD and Nate are together again)
Mores later itll get betterr
Snowfall 07-14-2004, 12:19 AM This looks great! Post more soon! :)
NancyMarcAurora 07-14-2004, 10:41 AM CanDyDeeTasteMee: Me and Nate are planning out our wedding..GUYS WERE GETTING MARRIED! I'M SO GLAD I HAD THE SENSE TO COME BACK TO HIM..I'M JUST SO HAPPY! I'VE ALSO DECIDED TO WORK WITH THIS POLICE STATION BUT..INSTEAD OF WORKING IN HERE I WANT TO WORK WITH THE DARE PROGRAM AT THE MIDDLE SCHOOL CLOSEST TO HERE AND THE OTHER ONES SOON AS WELL. HOW DOES THAT SOUND?
JiNNyGerl: Alright, CD! thats great! hopefully we are all invited to your wedding...
MagDaCopMomma: Oh CD! I always knew you and Nate would have a relationship someday and now you're getting married!
RainaRainOnMe: Hey guys I read the convo and I am just so happy for Nate..my partner!! God this is so great! I have some ideas for the wedding and all!! I was fighting StaCe for the bag of chips so thats why i didn't come in the chat sooner.
CanDyDeeTasteMee: Of course! all of yous are invited! Im so happy that you all are happy for me! We arent sure what kind of wedding we will have..we'll need a little time to think that overr.
JiNNyGerl: Eh sorry guys I gotta go..John woke up crying and I really think he needs to be changed! ByE..congrads CD!
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JiNNyGerl has just logged off*
Mores later..sry its shorter. Oh the title Jinnys stalker was a mistake so thats not what its called
Snowfall 07-14-2004, 11:47 AM Awwww, that was so cute! I'm glad that CD had the sense to go back to Nate, too. ;)
And what's the title supposed to be? :confused:
NancyMarcAurora 07-14-2004, 12:06 PM To new beginnings and to change.
(Jinny just logged off her computer)
Jinny: Johnny John John I'm coming. (she said slowly walking into John Jr's room)
(John Jr was beat red screaming and spitting up all over his mint green bunny blanket.)
Jinny: Oh my..are you sick my baby bunny boy? (She asked John in a sweet voice)
Jinny: (placed her hand against his cheek) Jesus, you're..youre burning up! (Jinny said shocked as she felt how hott he felt)
Jinny: John, please stop crying..please you're really freaking me out here. Oh..gotta call Hank.
Jinny: (runs down the hallway becoming a nervous wreck) (She dials the phone as she snatches it and trys to reach Hank)
Hi, this is Jinny..Hank Rileys wife..yeah Jinny Exstead..right. Can I please speak with him..this is kind of an emergency.
(As she was onhold for a moment she was rubbing her head making her hair flip back feeling scared because John Jr had never been sick before.)
Hank: Jin? What's up?
Jinny: Uh, Hank..the baby's sick. I ..I really need you to come home..can you leave now?
Hank: Jin, calm down. Babies get sick..does he have a fever?
Jinny: I think so, I..uh felt his forehead and hes red and spitting up mucus. I'm gonna take his temperature in a minute.
Hank: Well in that case I'll be there as soon as I can. I'm just wrapping up a few things and I'll be right there. I promise.
Jinny: Thanks, bye.
John Jr then was silent.
Jinny: (Goes down the hall to his room in concern)
Jinny: (Enters John's room and looks over the crib and stares at the color he turned and opens her mouth and gasps)
Jinny:Oh my god! John! (Jinny gasps as she covers her hand over her mouth and shrieks)
Mores Laters*
Swimgirl587 07-14-2004, 12:52 PM Great post MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!
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NancyMarcAurora 07-14-2004, 01:59 PM Jinny: (Grabs John Jr. and charges down the hallway with him very pale turning blue in her arms)
Jinny: Oh my god..oh my god. This can't just can't be happening!
(She paniced to herself)
Jinny:(Slaps her coat on and John jr's as well)
Jinny: (Darts out the door and runs into Hank as he comes up to the doorstep)Hank! John..look..Johns turning blue..hes not breathing right and hes burning up! Hank, please! Help him! Drive me to the hospital!(Jinny screamed being very paranoid)
Hank: Oh my..get in the car come on! (He said quickly getting in the car helping jinny put John Jr in his carseat)
(CD's at Nate's apartment)
Nate: Hey CD, if you're still not use to this place that's ok. We can always move into your's.
CD: Listen Nate, im comfortable but..I have alot of money saved up from last year and the year before and you said you have savings too. Let's use them to buy a house.
Nate: Good idea. (He said smoothly)
CD: Here's some ad's in the paper for houses for sale.
Nate: Are you ever gonna get off that computer? Damn you people can chat for days on that thing.
CD: Oh shut up, Nate. (She said chuckling a little)
Nate: Why don't you do something else. Like..go soak your head.
CD: (Started cracking up) That was my line I said to you before. You remembered..
Nate: I could never forget the lines you say to me.
CD: (Gazes into his eyes and goes over and hugs him)
Nate: (Hugs back) I missed you so much when you were gone.
CD: I bet I missed you more.
Nate: That..that's not possible.
CD: Oh Raina told me she has some wedding ideas for us.
(She mentioned as she went over to tell everyone she has to be going)
Nate: Raina!? (He siad laughing a bit)
CD: Yes, why not?
Nate: I don't know it seems kinda weird.
CD: How?
Nate: Well it's my partner thats trying to plan our wedding.
CD:Yeah well maybe she'll have great ideas.
Nate: Let's not spend too much though.
CD: Oh I want this wedding to me very modern and in my own way I want to with maybe some other ideas tossed in. It won't be really expensive.
Nate: Tomorrow, I kinda told everyone I'd get you to come back to the station for old time sake.
CD: Ok..tomorrow I'll go. I just felt a little nervous seeing everyone again, I have no clue why.
Nate: What, you think theyre going to look at you differently now? CD theyre not like that, so just don;t worry about it. Be yourself..act like your coming into work again.
CD: I know, Im being weird. Thanks for the advice.(She said sighing)
Mores soon
Snowfall 07-15-2004, 01:05 AM That was really good! I like this fic. Post more soon! :)
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NancyMarcAurora 07-16-2004, 01:15 AM StArts:(Jinny and Hank are at the hospital)
Jinny:(Paces around the room folding her hands that are pressed against her lips in the waiting room w/ Hank as he sits down on the bench in the waiting room waiting for news on their son.)
Jinny:I haven't heard anything in the last 28 minutes. (muttered to herself)
Hank:(with his head facing the floor) Jin, what do you want me to do? (He asked gently)
Jinny:God, now I know how Magda felt when her son was diagnosed with Leukimia.
Hank: Jinny, honey..please just stop..your going to get histerical.
Hank: Well, what do you want me to do Hank!? I can't go in there and you don't want me to bother anyone about it and let them do their work! This is killing me! I need to know something..hes just a month old! Thi..this poor innocent baby! (she bellowed in a shaky voice)
Hank: Jin..I feel that way too I'm scared to death and petrified out of my frigen mind! He's my son too..we just have to stay cool and think positive in this situation. Can you do that? Not just for me and you, but for John Jr as well.
Jinny:(Shoots him a pitiful look) He..he doesnt deserve this, Hank. If its anyone that deserves something like that it's me. (She said as she sat on the bench next to hank)
Hank: How..how can you say that? You may of had past problems..but you dont deserve anything like this. I beleive you are a good person. A caring and loving..sincere..loyal__
Jinny: Hank, I've lost my mother when I was young. Then my big brother, my partner Magda almost died from a shooting not that long ago..and _
Hank: Ohh Jin.._
Jinny: All that time I had problems and I was so desperate for love and being so lonely, out of all the things I've been through.._it just isnt as bad as what they went through. Like it didnt hit me hard enough. Magda is a good person and John deep down never wants to hurt me and my mother..
Jinny:You get the point.
Hank:(Gives her a sorry look) Jinny, your'e special. You probably never realized it but..you have this gift. You are gifted..Jinny.
Jinny: (Shows a half smile) If you say so, than Ill take your word on it.__Thank you(She said softly beginning to lean against his shoulder with her eyes getting teary)
Hank:(Looks same as he holds her in his arms)
Mores Later*
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Snowfall 07-16-2004, 01:25 AM Awwww, that's so sad and sweet.....:( Post more soon!
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NancyMarcAurora 07-16-2004, 05:28 PM StarTs:(CD and Nate at work at their desks)
CD:(Sits at her desk tapping her pencil searching for a file)
God damnit! Ever since I started working at the desk just for extra money..Ive been too frustrated!
Nate: Well, on Monday were going to sign up for that DARE program teaching job, ok.
CD: Alright, I guess I shouldnt be whining while I'm working. I only have 2 days left to work desk sop what am I bitching about?
Nate: Well, you know women...
CD: Whats that supposed to mean?
Nate: Maybe..
CD: I have my monthly? Is that all you..men think about when a woman is frustrated? Let me tell you something_
Captain: Guys, Jinny won't be in today. John Jr..is in the hospital and their getting the results in about 10 minutes so..(she cut in)
CD:(Gives Nate a look) Oh my god is he going to be ok?
Nate: Let us know Cap.
Captain:I will, uh what was that ..Nate? About women?
Nate:(Laughs a little) Hehe..yeah, I was just kiddi..n..really I meant_
Captain: Thats what I thought.
CD:Ha! (She said like a miss know it all)
Mores Later sry its short
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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 07-16-2004, 10:44 PM I love it!!!! More please:D Since there is a new page an all;)
NancyMarcAurora 07-16-2004, 11:13 PM Starts:(In Magdas bedroom with Gabe..they are living together now)
Magda:(Sits there reading a magazine about relationships)
*Phone rings*
Hello?
Jinny: Hi Mag, I uh know its late..
Magda: Jin, you sound..like something is wrong..
Jinny: There is, Mag..John Jr...after I logged off the computer was crying_and he was spitting up and beat red and burning up. Then the next thing I know..he was turning blue. (She said holding her head up a little to prevent tears from falling)
Magda; Oh my gosh..is he alright..what did the doctor say?
Jinny: Now were in the hospital and his results should be here in about 2 more min..utes.
Magda: Ohh Jinny..honey are you okay? Ill be right there..
Jinny: No, Mag_you dont have to come I have Hank here and all..
Magda: Jin, Im coming anyway..this is like my little nephew here.
Youll get through this Jin,see you there, bye.
Jinny: (Hung up the payphone)
Magda: Gabe, honey can you stay here with Ben I'm going to go to the hospital now..Jinnys son was rushed there early morning last night.
Gabe: Sure, I hope everything will be okay..Mag
Magda: Well, Ill inform you when I get back or if I call you first. Bye baby.
Hank: (Half asleep with his head leaning back on bench)
*Then a tall red head woman came up to us with a chart against her chest*
Doctor: Miss Exstead..I assume?
Jinny:(Spins around and says yes yea thats me..uh hi about my son?)
Doctor: Hi, I am doctor Morgan.
Hank(Snaps out of his tiredness and pays attention)
Doctor: John Jr, the Exstead baby..he is going to be just fine. I have to tell you he was in critical condition and hour ago.But 14 minutes ago he started to breathe on his own and hes fine,we are positive too and we also have him on an IV and hes been given meds.
Jinny:What was the problem..what triggered this?
Hank: So, hes ok..we can take him home soon?
Doctor: Yes you can..certainly. John was diagnosed with Asthma. This is quite rare for a newborn to develop this early in age. Asthma is usually diagnosed when the child is about 2 years old of age or maybe 3. But he pulled though, he seems strong.
Jinny: (Her heart begins to beat normally again) Asthma? So is he going to be fine from now on?
Doctor: John will; have to take medication everyday untill we check him when hes a little older and we change the plans..only because hes so young. Also since hes too young for an inhaler we are going to have him everymonth come into the hospital and have him injected with this other medication. So that will prevent the attacks.
Jinny: (Takes deep breath) Ok, wow. This is going to be different.
Hank: Jin, I have Asthma..
Jinny: Hank? You have it..too? You..you never told me.
Hank: I kind of never really worried about it so it wasnt surprising that I had forgotten to tell you.
Jinny: Is it genetic?
Doctor: It could be..its very possible in these cases. I'll be right back, okay?
Jinny: Ok. Thanks, Doctor Morgan.
Hank: My fault, Jin. He inherited it from me. Jesus, hes going to have problems with it..playing games outside..activities..
Jinny: Hank, none of this is your fault even if it was genetic. Thats not fair to say it was your fault. Now John Jr's got Asthma..hes got it and now we will deal with it.
Hank: Yeah youre right..Jin.
Jinny: Of course I am.
Mores Later
Snowfall 07-17-2004, 01:11 AM Awwww, so sad......this fic is great! Good job! Keep going! :)
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Swimgirl587 07-17-2004, 06:34 PM Great Post it was so sweet!!! :D Post more soon!! :yourock:
NancyMarcAurora 07-18-2004, 07:51 PM StarTs:(Magda arrives at the hospital)
Jinny:Now this is the medicine, he is required to have..everyday, right?
Doctor: Yes, this is called Episitis. I will also provide you with Epi Pen. That is an injection just in case if he possibly has a really bad attack and you can't get through to an ambulance or anything. This will help calm it down alot.
Hank:Ok, what times..are you going to give us a sheet that tells us everything and all?
Jinny: Uh, yeah, Hank! Don't you think she would let us know?
Hank:(Gives her a stupid look and sighs)
Jinny: I'm sorry, hun. Im just a little shaky and overwhelmed a little still thats all. (rubbing her eyes)
Doctor: You can see your son now.
Magda:(Barges in) Jin, honey! Is he ok? Are you..ok?
Jinny: Hi Mag(Hugs her) Thanks for coming I appreciate it were covering everything and all. Johns ok, but he has asthma. So were able to take him home tonight and were going to see him now.
Magda: Oh thank god hes ok. So he's fine..now?
Jinny:Yeah Mag..thank god! I had a real scare. (Jinny said as she was walking into the room that her son was lying in)
Hank: (Walks in room first)
Let me see my big boy! (Picks him up gently)
Oh are you ok?
Jinny:Give me my baby..(Handles him gently also sliding her hand under his back) My baby..(Hugs him firmly)
Magda:aWW LET ME SEE HIM..HI JOHN ITS AUNT MAGDA..I HEARD
YOU WERE A LITTLE SICK.(SHE SAID LIGHTLY PATTING HIS STOMACH)
JINNY: LETS GET OUT OF HERE GUYS.
MORES LATER X0X0
Snowfall 07-19-2004, 12:33 AM Originally posted by NancyMarcAurora
Jinny:Give me my baby..(Handles him gently also sliding her hand under his back) My baby..(Hugs him firmly)
Awwwww.....how sweet. Post more soon! :)
bananasplit 07-19-2004, 03:09 PM post more soon!
NancyMarcAurora 07-20-2004, 07:06 PM Starts: (CD and Nate looking at the houses 2 weeks later)
CD: Oh, it's nice sized and has a pretty color to the house.
Nate: Just out of curiosity, does this place have a garage?
CD: Nate, did you see a garage outside before we came in? No!
Nate: Shut up miss CandyDeeTasteMee. (He mumbled and giggled a little)
CD: Spying on me and my computer buissiness eh Nate?
Nate: Yep.
Sales lady: (Enters the living room holding a chart close to her chest) So, like it so far?
CD: I love the outside frame and the color of the inside. But I'm afraid I don't like the way there is no garage and I'm going to say no on this one, sorry.
Sales lady: That's ok, guys. If you want to talk again, here's my card. I'll be in touch just in case you change your mind. (She smiled)
Nate: Thanks Miss Hayes for your help.
Sales lady: (Bobbed her head once yes and walked CD and Nate out.
CD: On the House mission again, let's go partner. (She winked and nudged him)
Nate: (Gets into his car alongside CD)
CD: I'm so frigen hungry I can eat..well you right now. (sHe looks at Nate and says hastily)
Nate: You calling me fat CD? (He asked with a fake attitude)
CD: Of course not Nate. I'm saying you have a fat head! (She kidded)
Nate: Stop it! (He kids around as he pulls down car mirror and takes a glance making sure shes kidding for sure)
CD: Cracks up..oh I think its getting bigger.
Nate: Which head babe..ay? (He flirts)
CD: It's definitly not the head down south!
Nate: Hey!
CD: I guess now you should take a look to make sure its still the same size its been.
Mores LaTer*
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 07-20-2004, 10:34 PM LMAO!!! That was hilarious! More:D
Snowfall 07-21-2004, 12:08 AM Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
LMAO!!! That was hilarious! More:D
What Kelly said! :lol:
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