View Full Version : A Precious Gift- CD/Nate


Shortcake31
05-15-2004, 12:28 PM
One Day at the division CD was found in the bathroom, she was throwing up. She felt sick all day. She thought to her self, 'Why am I sick know I didn't eat anything bad.

Jinny walks into the bathroom and sees CD washing her face.
Thinking to herself, 'she doesn't look to good.'

Jinny: CD are you okay?

CD: *startled because of Jinny* Yeah I'm fine. *sees that Jinny is giving her a look that says "yeah right tell me the truth."*
What?

Jinny: Come on CD, tell me the truth.

CD: Okay, I have been feeling sick all day and I have no idea why.

Jinny: Did you eat or drink anything that could have made you feel this way?

CD: No. I am late though *sees yet another look from Jinny* DON'T GO THERE!!!

Jinny: Oh come on, I have to.

CD: I can't afford a baby and-

Jinny: Oh please, besides you won't be alone. And you don't for sure that you are pregnant yet. I will go pick up a test. *leaves*

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A few minutes later Jinny comes back with the test and CD follows the instructions and does her business.

Finally it was time to find out

Jinny: *seeing CD hesitate to look* Want me to do it? CD nodds

Jinny:*makes a smile as she sees what the test says:

CD: What?

Jinny: You're pregnant!

That is it for today............ so tell me what you think. And I better get some replies. I don't just mean one or two, a lot

CandyBasso
05-15-2004, 12:32 PM
Yaayyy!!!! New fic!!! It was a great start!Please continue!:D

Snowfall
05-16-2004, 12:41 AM
That was really great! Keep going! :D

But don't plan on getting lots of replies. There's nothing wrong at all with your fic----there just aren't a lot of replies going on around here lately. I usually only get one or two replies, sometimes three.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-16-2004, 01:26 PM
Very true Tara. I haven't been replying myself. *Slaps hand* Bad me!!! I like this fic. Post more soon.:)

MinnIeMcKeOn
05-16-2004, 04:54 PM
Keep going!! I ThiNk im goNNa like ThiS oNe!! x0x0Jessie:talk: :)

Shortcake31
05-16-2004, 04:56 PM
Here you go............more..I know about the replies I was just tryin to motivate everyone!!!
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CD: What!!!

Jinny: YOU'RE PREGNANT!!!

CD: OMG, that's great

Jinny: Wait a second I thought *getting cut off by CD*

CD: I changed my mind. I mean I was scared about it at first, but when you said all of you would be there for me I changed my mind. I want this baby.

Jinny: That's great CD. And you don't have to worry we will. So when are you going to tell everyone?

CD: When ever I feel the time is right.

Jinny: Whose the father?

CD: Nate. *saying that without hesitation*

Jinny Wow, well I kind of has a feeling. Are you going to tell him?

CD: Probably the first person I tell

Jinny: Really, you are not nervous at all?

CD: Well at first, but when I realized how much he wants kids. I thought it wouldn't be so bad. I mean he would talk about wanting kids everytime we were on a stakeout or just talking in the car. Jinny, think about it I am giving him what he has dreamed of having.

Jinny: That's great, so when are you going to tell him?

CD: Tonight over dinner.

*As they are walking back to the bullpen*

Jinny: Well CD I am glad you are not to afraid to tell him

CD: Me too!

*scene fades*
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That's all for right now.........more? :D

Snowfall
05-17-2004, 01:13 AM
Originally posted by Shortcake31
Here you go............more..I know about the replies I was just tryin to motivate everyone!!!
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Jinny: Whose the father?

CD: Nate. *saying that without hesitation*

Jinny Wow, well I kind of has a feeling. Are you going to tell him?

CD: Probably the first person I tell



LOL, OK, I gotcha. And I LOVED that part so much! I can so see CD saying that! :D Here's your first reply---post more soon!

CandyBasso
05-17-2004, 01:35 PM
Awww.........I'm so glad CD's happy about the baby! Post more! She has to tell Nate!!!!:D

Shortcake31
05-20-2004, 02:50 PM
Here you go guys ............MORE!!
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It was later that night and CD and Nate were at dinner

CD: Nate.

Nate: Yeah?

CD: I have something to tell you.

Nate: Okay, what is it?

CD: I'm pregnant and you're the father. But if you don't want it I acn have an abortion.

Nate: OMG!! CD that's amazing! And as far as an abortion, are you crazy, of course I want it.

CD: Oh god Nate, I love you so much, and I am glad that you are my baby's father.

Nate: I love you just as much, and I am glad that I am your baby's father too! *they move in a kiss like there is no tomorrow*

Both of them ate dinner and left to go to CD's place for the rest of the night*

Sorry guys that's all for now. I have Graduation today and I am so busy. I will get back and post as soon as I can. :D :wave:and sorry for it being so short.

Snowfall
05-21-2004, 12:38 AM
Awww, that was so sweet! This is such a great fic! And happy graduation! :D Post more soon.

CandyBasso
05-23-2004, 11:34 AM
Awwwww that was so sweet! I'm glad Nate's happy about the baby! Post more!:D

Swimgirl587
05-24-2004, 01:13 PM
I just wanted to let you know that yet again my f***ing computer kicked me off the boards again so I had to yet again create another SN. I am sorry for having so many, but my computer is the one you should be mad at.

Thanks for your cooperation guys :D :wave:

Swimgirl587
05-28-2004, 07:22 PM
okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting. :wave:

Snowfall
05-29-2004, 01:20 AM
Originally posted by Swimgirl587
okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting. :wave:

I'm here, I'm here! I didn't reply because you didn't post any new fic last time. And, eh, about the CD/Nate haters, forget them!!!! Haha. They're missing out on some of the best storylines ever. :D I'm always up for some CD/Nate fic, so post soon! :D

CandyBasso
05-29-2004, 01:22 PM
Originally posted by Swimgirl587
okay where did my readers go. Oh yeah, it's a CD and Nate fanfic so they don't like it. So it's okay if I stop posting. :wave:

NO, it is NOT ok if you stop posting!!!! I love CD/Nate fics!!!! So get your butt back here and post more!!!!!!!!:D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-29-2004, 02:26 PM
I love CD/Nate fics so get back here!!! ;)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-29-2004, 02:28 PM
party: NEW PAGE!!!!

Swimgirl587
06-20-2004, 07:12 PM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :crazy:
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*Later that night at CD's*

Nate: You know I have been thinking

CD: Yeah.

Nate: Since your pregnant, and I got that bonus from the Captain-

CD: Wait, you got a bonus?

Nate: Yeah, you know that homicide case that we got a year ago.

CD: Yeah, what about it?

Nate: Well that guy, John Willick that was very difficult to find and arrest. I caught him while he was having lunch with his girlfriend.

CD: Whoa, way to go Nate. No wonder you got that bonus. Wait, what does that have to do with us?

Nate: Well, you didn't let me finish. What do you think of us moving in together in a house?

CD: *her jaw practically dropped to the floor* Um, uh, well I don't know Nate.

Nate: Come on CD, I just got a bonus and a lot of them are selling for a fare price.

CD: Hey, what the heck lets go for it. And besides I can't have my son or daughter live in this small apartment with no backyard to play in.

Nate: That's my girl.

*they both move in for a passionate kiss*

That's all for tonignt!!! :D :wave:

Swimgirl587
06-20-2004, 07:15 PM
I wanted to tell you guys that I won't be here to post on July 3rd- 10th because I will be going to the Virgin Islands with my family!! :D

But I will take my notebook with me so I can keep writing. :wave:

Snowfall
06-21-2004, 01:00 AM
Awwww, that was sweet and so great! I love this fic! And have a great time at the Virgin Islands! :wave:

TDfan69
06-22-2004, 05:12 PM
The Virgin Islands???? I am sooooooo jealous. Oh well, I will have to settle for my boss and her kid going to CA for a week and I get the house to myself......................:grineyes: :clap: :dance: :banana: :banana:

Wendi

CandyBasso
06-28-2004, 02:29 PM
That was so sweet! And yaaayy!!!They're moving in the a house together! Post more when you're back!

Swimgirl587
08-04-2004, 09:27 PM
Sorry I haven't posted, its just I haven't found the time.
Well, I back and I had a great time in the Virgin Islands and I am ready to post more.

Well here's more!!!
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*7 months later*

CD is obvisously showing and is put on desk duty

CD sitting at her desk board out of her mind doing paperwork.

CD: Nate I'm sick of this. I would like to get this baby out of me NOW!!!!

Nate: I know, honey. It will come and everything will be fine.

CD: How do you know? You're not the one carrying this thing inside you for 9 months. *just then all the color seemed to drain out of CD's face, and she held her stomach like she was in pain*

Nate: *seeing this he rushes over to her side * CD whats wrong?

CD: I just got this sharp pain in my stomach. I think we need to go to the hospital.

*Nate nodding in agreement leads CD out as they head to the hospital*

Sorry guys that's all for tonight!! :D :wave:

And sorry for the short post :(

Snowfall
08-06-2004, 12:36 AM
Wow! That was soooo great! Post more soon! :D

Swimgirl587
12-09-2004, 07:38 PM
Here's more guys!! Enjoy!! :wave:
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*Nate and CD had reached the hospital and CD was immediately put in a room because she was 5 cm dilated.

CD: Nate I'm so scared. She is so early. What if she doesn't make it.

Nate: Don't worry everything will be fine. They will do everything they possibly can to make sure our baby is okay.

CD: Oh Nate, you know the right thing to say at the right time *on the verge of tears at this point*

Nate: Glad I could help *just as he finished his sentence the doctor came in*

Dr. Murphy: Hello! How are you, I mean other than this *she puts her hand on CD's stomach*

CD: I've been better

Dr. Murphy: I've got the results from your tests. And I am very sorry to have to tell you this, but you are going to have to have an a C-Section.

CD & Nate: WHAT??

Dr. Murphy: I know this is very hard for you to take in all at once, but we had no choice. We need to take you down there right now.

CD: WAIT!! right now?

Dr. Murphy: I'm sorry but it has to be now.


*After that was said they wheeled her off to the O.R. in the maternity ward (of course)*

******Sorry that's all folks. More soon though. I PROMISE!!!

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Sorry that I have not posted in a while I have been so busy with school and registering for classes (such a pain). Anyway I am back and I will be sure to post more often. Sorry!! ;)

Snowfall
12-10-2004, 01:50 AM
Awww, you posted!!! That was so wonderful! Scary, but wonderful! I'm glad to have some CD/Nate fic. Please post again soon, when you get time! I know how the time crunch goes, believe me! ;) :)

Swimgirl587
11-13-2005, 10:49 PM
Hey guys I'm sorry I haven't posted in a long time...I mean a LONG TIME..it's just I've been really busy and stuff. But I want to ask you something..If you guys have some great ideas for me, that would be great. I would love to hear what you guys have to say.

Well I hope to hear from ya...ttyl...:wave: :cool:

Swimgirl587
11-16-2005, 11:58 PM
Hey guys..I am so sorry that it took me so long to post more..but it's back up and I will promise that I will not wait as long as I have been in between posts. Well I hopet that you enjoy this :D ;)


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*in the O.R*

*CD is laying on the table scared out of her mind waiting for what's going to happen*

Dr. Murphy: Ok CD, you are going to feel some tugging.

CD: Yep definitely feel it, but it's not bad.

*All of a sudden Dr. Murphy pulled out a baby*

Dr. Murphy: Congratulations! You have a beautiful baby girl.

*CD was so happy she started to cry. Nate started to cry also. And he bent down to kiss CD on the cheek.

Nate: I love you

CD: I love you too. *she said through tears* Dr. Murphy why isn't she crying?

Dr Murphy: She's alright, were getting it *all of a sudden the baby started to cry* See there you go.

*Dr. Murphy started wrapping her up*

Dr. Murphy: Come on sweetie, lets go to mommy and daddy.

*She handed the baby to Nate and he walked over to CD and she gave her a kiss*

CD: She's so beautiful, isn't she

Nate: Absolutely

Dr. Murphy so what's her name

Nate and CD: Violet

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Sorry folks but that's all for now..I will post when I get the chance and time..hope up enjoyed it. :wave:

Swimgirl587
03-14-2006, 06:31 PM
*sighs* ok no replies :( ...but here's more :D hope you like it!!
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Nate and CD sat in there room and CD was holding Violet

CD: Oh Nate, isn't she beautiful?

Nate: Yeah, she definitely is *holding Violet's left hand in his and she gripped his finger* Wow, she has quite a grip.

Just than the Nurse came in

Nurse: Oh miss Delorenzo, would you like to try breast feeding again?

CD: Sure, you have to keep trying right?

Nurse: Yep, you sure do *she puts Violet in the breast feeding postion in CD's arms and after 3 attempts, Violet finally was breast feeding*

CD: Oh wow, this feels weird

Nate: Good or bad weird?

CD: Wonderful weird *she smiles and Violet and sees she's done eating and now getting sleepy* Okay, she's getting tired now, so can you put her in the bassinet. *she slowly put Violet in the bassinet and stroked her head.*

Nate: I can’t wait until we get to take her home

CD: Me too!



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It’s been now a two days since Violet has been born and now CD and Nate get to bring her home. They now have the house.

CD: I can’t believe it Nate, we actually have a house to watch Violet grow up and in, and have a backyard she can play in.

Nate: I know I can’t believe it either *he picks up the car seat and he heads for the front door with CD right behind him*

*As they walk in the everyone is in the living room*

Everyone: SURPISE!! WELCOME HOME!!
CD: Wow, this is great…you guys are awesome.

Jinny: Well yeah we are *they all laugh*

Kate: Oh CD Nate, we have a surprise for you…come on it’s upstairs.

*They all follow Kate upstairs, they stop at the end of the hall on a room on the right.

Kate: Ok, all of us wanted to so something special for you…so here it is..*she opens the door to the nursery. The walls are painted pink with a border of teddy bears on the top. And there are pink curtains on the window and to the right of the window is a rocking chair and the crib in on corner of the room, and the changing table on the other side

CD: *in total shock of it all* Oh My God!! *she said with tears in her eyes* This is so beautiful.

Nate: You can say that again. Thank you guys so much

CD: Yes, thank you…you guys are great

Magda: You don’t have to thank us, we were happy to do this.



*They all exit the room and have a fun evening together and a great time spending time with baby Violet*

Sorry guys...but that's all I can give you for now. ;) :wave:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-15-2006, 12:12 AM
Soooo great! We all know what wonderful parents they are going to be! :D I'm glad you got into a writing mood, we need you in another one again soon!! :wave: :cool: