Starts:( In bed when Magda and Jack woke her up and she was in bed after she had that dream about the Captain and her dead mother..its a part to "Baby its cold outside".)

Magda: (Looks at Jack and goes to hug him)
Jack:(Hugs Magda back)
Magda: We did it..
Jack: Yeah..guess so huh?
Magda: Mhmm..but shes..
Jack: Got a long way to go...
Magda: So we made it the worst 72 hours right..so when will the next bad cravings hit again?..
Jack: I think this is the worst shes going to feel for about 2 weeks and then itll come back for a short time again and then go away and get less harsh on her.
Magda: Im going to go uh fix Jinny a plate...
Jack: Yeah..yeah how about roast beef..on a sandwhich?
Magda: Uh..no I think we should give her something light like Zesta crackers with a drink and then ya know what..we can get her some takeout I mean treat her and make her feel good that she did something good these past 72 hours.
Jack: Your right!
Magda: You know, I was so scared when I saw Jinny like this. This really takes me back..to Jinnys intervention not that long ago. Jack you werent there so you didnt see how emotional it was...
Jack: (Gives her a look like theres more than meets the eye)
Magda: I know my partner...and the way she is..but sometimes
its just easy to see through her when you look at her and teh way she acts and all. It is hard seeing her like that all the time at work when she means alot to you as a best friend, a person, and a partner. Im just glad shes okay..bottom line.


x0x0Jessie..more later to more drama lol bye

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

good to know someone knows that Jinny still exists.. CD and Nate suck!

Tya JinnY heres more*
Starts:(In Jinny&Jacks bedroom)
Jinny: (lays there looking around and feels like shes refreshed and good as new)
Jack: (Comes in) Hey, uh Jin..me and Mag fixed ya up some crackers and juice.
Jinny: (Sits up a little and grabs it still looking confused)
Jack: Something light for your stomach ...for now I mean.
Jinny: (Sighs) Umm..thank..thank you.
Jack: No problem..Look Jin anything you need you just holler..okay?
Jinny: Yeah..I know.
Jack:(Leaves the room slowly)
Magda:(Walks in apartment)
Jack: Hey Mag you got her favorite Chinese.
Magda: Well I picked out the stuff that would be not too harsh on her stomach.
Jack: Thanks, Mag..I really love you for this..Jinny is really lucky.
Magda: Ya know what dont mention it I love Jinny and I want her to live and for her to be well.
Jack: God she doesnt know how special she is..god really has Jinny in a special place. She just doesnt know it.

(In Jinnys room)
Magda: (Knocks lightly)
Jinny: (Is in a daze and then jumps up) Uh who is it..
Magda: Its Magda can I talk to you?
Jinny: Ohh sure Mag come in ..come in.
Magda: (Comes in looking relieved) H..i Jinny.
Jinny: Hi Mag umm..sit..sit.
Magda: Jinny you know, I am so glad..that.....your okay and proud of you that you did this.
Jinny: Yeah..and....
Magda: (stops looking down and looks up)
Jinny: I want to thank you so much that you did this for me..I mean you really didnt have to go through this for me.. or Jack. I mean..(getting a little worked up) I am so scared..and... you stuck by me. All the way. You could of told the Captain and all. I could of lost my job already. God..I didnt tell you this..yet in front of Jack but I guess I drifted off to sleep and I had this..vision. Ya know..and it was the captain and she was telling me how I am needed so much back at the station and all this stuff. (She said looking down) I was a bit confused. But it really scared the **** out of me when she found teh drugs I imagined I had hid in the back of the portrait ..hanging...ohh..(sighs)
Magda: Jin..
Jinny: (she looked up again) Then I looked up after Captain had left..and I realized I was staring at my mom..(she said worked up with her eyes watering and a tear running down her cheek)
Magda: (Stares in sadness and begins to feel for her and put herslef in her place for a moment)..(then she realizes something)
Ohh..my gosh...
Jinny: (Tips over and begins to hallusinate)
Magda: Jinny..Jin..touches her face and body and she was cold)
Jinny: (Looks paler than before)
Magda: (Gasps and places her ahnd over her mouth..Jack!) (She yells as she runs out of the room and looks for him and didnt hear an answer)
Magda: Oh my..where is he (she said to herself getting panicy)
Magda: Jack! Jack! Jack! (She yelled as her voice gets shakier)
Magda: (Turns corner and checks in bathroom because she stops noticing the door is shut)
Magda: (Looks mysterious and slowly goes to reach for it and then opens quickly)!!
(Noone appears in there)
Jinny: (Stumbles behind Magda in a blurry backround)
Magda: (Hears something and slowly turns around)
Jinny: (Half holding on to the wall and half up)
Magda: Jinny!..
Jinny: (Stumbles up to Mag slowly like a zombie)
Magda: Jin..(she looks at her weirdly) wha..__
Jinny: (Stares at Mag as her eyes are teary and a little bloodshot)
(she has her hand behins her back)
Magda: (Breathes heavily looking around as shes up against the bathroom door) Umm..Jinny please your..scaring me. Please talk to me.
Jinny: (Smirks a little as she takes her hand from behind her back and_________


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mooooorrrrreeeee!!! the end was creepy...but creepy's good! i like creepy!

[QUOTE]Originally posted by MinnIeMcKeOn
[B]Tya JinnY heres more*
Starts:(In Jinny&Jacks bedroom)
Jinny: (lays there looking around and feels like shes refreshed and good as new)
Jack: (Comes in) Hey, uh Jin..me and Mag fixed ya up some crackers and juice.
Jinny: (Sits up a little and grabs it still looking confused)
Jack: Something light for your stomach ...for now I mean.
Jinny: (Sighs) Umm..thank..thank you.
Jack: No problem..Look Jin anything you need you just holler..okay?
Jinny: Yeah..I know.
Jack:(Leaves the room slowly)
Magda:(Walks in apartment)
Jack: Hey Mag you got her favorite Chinese.
Magda: Well I picked out the stuff that would be not too harsh on her stomach.
Jack: Thanks, Mag..I really love you for this..Jinny is really lucky.
Magda: Ya know what dont mention it I love Jinny and I want her to live and for her to be well.
Jack: God she doesnt know how special she is..god really has Jinny in a special place. She just doesnt know it.

(In Jinnys room)
Magda: (Knocks lightly)
Jinny: (Is in a daze and then jumps up) Uh who is it..
Magda: Its Magda can I talk to you?
Jinny: Ohh sure Mag come in ..come in.
Magda: (Comes in looking relieved) H..i Jinny.
Jinny: Hi Mag umm..sit..sit.
Magda: Jinny you know, I am so glad..that.....your okay and proud of you that you did this.
Jinny: Yeah..and....
Magda: (stops looking down and looks up)
Jinny: I want to thank you so much that you did this for me..I mean you really didnt have to go through this for me.. or Jack. I mean..(getting a little worked up) I am so scared..and... you stuck by me. All the way. You could of told the Captain and all. I could of lost my job already. God..I didnt tell you this..yet in front of Jack but I guess I drifted off to sleep and I had this..vision. Ya know..and it was the captain and she was telling me how I am needed so much back at the station and all this stuff. (She said looking down) I was a bit confused. But it really scared the **** out of me when she found teh drugs I imagined I had hid in the back of the portrait ..hanging...ohh..(sighs)
Magda: Jin..
Jinny: (she looked up again) Then I looked up after Captain had left..and I realized I was staring at my mom..(she said worked up with her eyes watering and a tear running down her cheek)
Magda: (Stares in sadness and begins to feel for her and put herslef in her place for a moment)..(then she realizes something)
Ohh..my gosh...
Jinny: (Tips over and begins to hallusinate)
Magda: Jinny..Jin..touches her face and body and she was cold)
Jinny: (Looks paler than before)
Magda: (Gasps and places her ahnd over her mouth..Jack!) (She yells as she runs out of the room and looks for him and didnt hear an answer)
Magda: Oh my..where is he (she said to herself getting panicy)
Magda: Jack! Jack! Jack! (She yelled as her voice gets shakier)
Magda: (Turns corner and checks in bathroom because she stops noticing the door is shut)
Magda: (Looks mysterious and slowly goes to reach for it and then opens quickly)!!
(Noone appears in there)
Jinny: (Stumbles behind Magda in a blurry backround)
Magda: (Hears something and slowly turns around)
Jinny: (Half holding on to the wall and half up)
Magda: Jinny!..
Jinny: (Stumbles up to Mag slowly like a zombie)
Magda: Jin..(she looks at her weirdly) wha..__
Jinny: (Stares at Mag as her eyes are teary and a little bloodshot)
(she has her hand behins her back)
Magda: (Breathes heavily looking around as shes up against the bathroom door) Umm..Jinny please your..scaring me. Please talk to me.
Jinny: (Smirks a little as she takes her hand from behind her back and_________


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Jinny: (Smirks a little as she takes her hand from behind her back and slips out her police gun)
Magda: (Looks down with eyes bulged out) Oh..Jinny please! (Slow motion as she panics)
Jinny: (In slow motion a bit) (Points it at her)(Tears stream down her face and pour under her eyes)
Magda: Jinny..please (she begged shaking)
Jinny: (Stared in a crazy matter) (Her head tipped over) (Froze quiet)
Jinny: (Suddenly screams hysterically) (With gun vibrating in her hand)
Magda:(Takes deep breath and walks over and grabs gun)
Jinny: (Drops to ground and screams hysterically) Go aw..ay. Pl..please just ....(breathes heavily and begins to hallusinate again)(Begins to moan and cough)
Magda: (Stars to sweat and walks over as her legs are shaking in fear and feeling partially numb)(Rubs her back and then Jinny starts to vomit and a little bit of blood squirts out)
Jinny: (Wipes her mouth and then looks at Magda and is silent for a moment and so is Magda)(Drops back on ground and moans and then crys a little)
Magda: (Gets up uneasily and then rushes to the phone)
Magda: (As she dials she is thinking that she is not going to take a chance of having to take Jinny into her own hands at this stage shes in.)


x0x0jessie more soons!!

mmmmooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!! k, now i gotta go READ what you wrote.......i just know ill want more :D

k, i read it! the puking part was kinda gross though...did she puke ON Magda?? i hope so..i don't like Magda. LOL mmooooorrrrrrreeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know I definitly want more:D

Starts:(Kitchen where the phone is)
Magda: (Dials 911) (She was also thinking about Captain getting this information somehow but for now its kept secret still)
(After she was done they had the people from the mental help center come over just in case she got out of hand)
Magda:(Goes back to hallway to find Jinny and as she does she thinks of Jack and gets clueless for a moment)
Magda: Looks around hallway* What..uh..Jin..ny..
(Shes missing)
Magda: (Heart beats faster and starts to feel panicy again and freaked because she doesnt know what is goign to happen next)
(Then a thought had just zoomed through her mind..I still havent found Jack and thats all shes thinking about as she quietly goes through apartment)
Magda: (Turns to the guest room)
Magda: Remembers that she had placed her purse on teh nightstand and her cop things so she stepped in there and shut door so quietly) (Pulls out her cell and calls Gabe and tells him to come over now and that she has Jinnys address on teh fridge)
Relax Magda...(Breathes lightly)(She says to herself)
Magda: (Pulls out her gun and loads it just in case but hates to do it) (Opens door slowly again and peeks out and then steps out to the hallway holding her gun like she was at a criminals home)
Magda: (Starts to cry a little)
(She looks up and then down and spots a little half way trail of blood leading somewhere..)
Magda: (Moans and shakes a little more panicy)




x0x0Jessie more laters

holy crap!! this is like the movie Halloween!! lol whatever ya'll do,DON'T look out the window!! LOL mmmooorrrrreeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

[QUOTE]Originally posted by MinnIeMcKeOn
[B]Starts:(Kitchen where the phone is)
Magda: (Dials 911) (She was also thinking about Captain getting this information somehow but for now its kept secret still)
(After she was done they had the people from the mental help center come over just in case she got out of hand)
Magda:(Goes back to hallway to find Jinny and as she does she thinks of Jack and gets clueless for a moment)
Magda: Looks around hallway* What..uh..Jin..ny..
(Shes missing)
Magda: (Heart beats faster and starts to feel panicy again and freaked because she doesnt know what is goign to happen next)
(Then a thought had just zoomed through her mind..I still havent found Jack and thats all shes thinking about as she quietly goes through apartment)
Magda: (Turns to the guest room)
Magda: Remembers that she had placed her purse on teh nightstand and her cop things so she stepped in there and shut door so quietly) (Pulls out her cell and calls Gabe and tells him to come over now and that she has Jinnys address on teh fridge)
Relax Magda...(Breathes lightly)(She says to herself)
Magda: (Pulls out her gun and loads it just in case but hates to do it) (Opens door slowly again and peeks out and then steps out to the hallway holding her gun like she was at a criminals home)
Magda: (Starts to cry a little)
(She looks up and then down and spots a little half way trail of blood leading somewhere..)
Magda: (Moans and shakes a little more panicy)

More:
>Magda: (Starts to cry a little)
(She looks up and then down and spots a little half way trail of blood leading somewhere..)
Magda: (Moans and shakes a little more panicy)
>Magda: (Follows trail of blood and it keeps going)
Magda: Jinny..(she says quietly) Pleas..e honey come on come here I want to help you..I wont tell anyone just please let me know that your alright! (she hollers louder)
Magda: God! Jinny! Jin! Answer me! (Blood trail gets more thicker)
(Then she hears ice crackle in a glass)
Magda:(Slowly spins around) (gasps)(her voice gets shaky) Jinny! Oh my god! (She shrieks)
Jinny: (Sitting at other side of kitchen table sipping a glass of water as drops of blood drip from her paleish lips)(Then after another sip she puts her glass down and breathes deeply)
Magda: (Froze and stares at her horrified) Jin..please let me take you to the..___
Jinny: (Makes Magda pause when she coughs and squirts out more blood and a bit of mucus)
Magda: Jesus christ! Jinny! ....were going to the hospital!
Jinny: (Hears ambulance and looks around for moment a little freakishly and lifts her head up and stares straight at Magda)
Magda: Ohh..thank god!
Magda: (Goes around Jinny carefully and peeks out the window)
(Gabe pulls up and rushes out of his car as Mag opens the door and they hug real tight)
Gabe: Magda!
Magda: Ohh Gabe!!
(Ambulance comes up to house with mental health program group)
Magda: (Goes to turn around and calm Jinny down but Jinny isnt to be found)
Gabe: Where is she!?
Magda: Shes gone..again.
Jinny: (Walks downstairs and up other ones) (Quietly she stepped onto the fire escape above apartment)

(Ambulance is searching the house)
Magda: Did you find Jack??Or Jinny????
Paramedic: God..im sorry Mrs Rameriz..we cant seem to find anyone.
Gabe: Well How would Jinny of gotten out of here then__?..
Magda: Ohh my..The Fire escape! Thats it..its it..s probably her only way out of here.
Paramedics: Theres no windows broken or anything..
Magda: The police are here now so well have them check fire escape.
Paramedics: This is crazy..was there any drugs..involved with this case??
Magda: Yess..there is but this is kept to us and only us got it? Only for right now but if it gets too out of hand and its like a life or death situation and we cant fix it then okay...
Jinny:(After just sitting up there feeling so lost she noticed that she could get away.) (There was the ladder to down below) (It was broken though)

(Its been 2 hours)
Magda: (Pacing around) (Suddenly screams) Where the hell is Jack?????????????????????????????????????????????
Gabe: (Gets up and calms her) Magda Magda please sit..down.





x0x0Jessie more laters

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
I know I definitly want more:D

im to lazy to write my own reply...

post more soon!

Starts(JinnyandJacksApartment with Magda and Gabe and Paramedics & Police there)
Gabe: Magda, you should not of been put through all this.
This was a dangerous situation you put yourself in..she could have killed you and the thing you should of done was gotten out of the house and called me there..or went to the neighbors and dialed 911.
Magda: (Sighs frustrated) Ya know what Gabe..you werent there it was too bad.. of a situation to think about what I was going to do. I just knew I had to do something..and fast!
Gabe: Im just so glad your alright.
(35 minutes later Gabe and Magda sit on the couch)
Magda: Never in my wildest dreams did I think something like this would..happen. Especially to my best friend...
Gabe: I know, Mag.
Magda: God (Rubs head) This is really confusing.
Police: (Walk in)
Magda-Gabe: Stands up as Gabe is ready to)
Policeman: Well I am very sorry Mrs Rameriz, but we think we found a dark haired woman..caucasion..and greenish hazel eyes..
Magda: (Looks shocked) Cuts them off* Ohh..Jinny..! Ohh my gosh! (She said in a upset panicy way)
Gabe: Well ....??(He said wanting to know)

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post more soon!

[QUOTE]Originally posted by MinnIeMcKeOn
[B]Starts(JinnyandJacksApartment with Magda and Gabe and Paramedics & Police there)
Gabe: Magda, you should not of been put through all this.
This was a dangerous situation you put yourself in..she could have killed you and the thing you should of done was gotten out of the house and called me there..or went to the neighbors and dialed 911.
Magda: (Sighs frustrated) Ya know what Gabe..you werent there it was too bad.. of a situation to think about what I was going to do. I just knew I had to do something..and fast!
Gabe: Im just so glad your alright.
(35 minutes later Gabe and Magda sit on the couch)
Magda: Never in my wildest dreams did I think something like this would..happen. Especially to my best friend...
Gabe: I know, Mag.
Magda: God (Rubs head) This is really confusing.
Police: (Walk in)
Magda-Gabe: Stands up as Gabe is ready to)
Policeman: Well I am very sorry Mrs Rameriz, but we think we found a dark haired woman..caucasion..and greenish hazel eyes..
Magda: (Looks shocked) Cuts them off* Ohh..Jinny..! Ohh my gosh! (She said in a upset panicy way)
Gabe: Well ....??(He said wanting to know)

Mores:
Policeman: Well I am very sorry Mrs Rameriz, but we think we found a dark haired woman..caucasion..and greenish hazel eyes..
Magda: (Looks shocked) Cuts them off* Ohh..Jinny..! Ohh my gosh! (She said in a upset panicy way)
Gabe: Well ....??(He said wanting to know)
>Magda: Is she..
Paramedics: Yes..she appears to be dead. Im sorry. I can tell you two must have been..close.
Gabe: (Turns to Magda) Magda..Mag..god Im..im sorry.
Magda: (Gets upset and buries her face into Gabes chest as he hugs her)
Policeman: Is there anything we can do...
Magda: (Sniffles a little)well..how did she di..e? (She said mysterious and softly)
Policeman: We discovered her body approximitly 9 minutes ago and she was laying flat down on her face right below the fire escape.
Magda: Ohh.mygod!(she said starting to cry)(Covering her mouth wishing thiswas a dream)
Gabe: I know Mag..
Magda: God! This has to be a dream..I just dont feel liek this thing is real!
Paramedics: Well we have her body in a bga over there..would you like to say a few words?
Magda: Yess..
Policeman: (Comes over to Paramedic)
Paramedic: Bryan..where's the body?
Policeman: (Looks a little scared) I dont know. It was there a second ago and every one was here with me. Theres noway that bodycould of been taken anywhere.(He said in a panicy fast voice)
Paramedic: So you mean..the body bag is missing too?
Policeman: (Shrugged shoulders a little as he started to sweat)
Paramedic: This is ..this is nuts! You mean to tell me that this "dead woman got up in the body bag and walked away!?
Policeman: I dont know what to think! (He said getting freaked)
Magda: What! What are you saying?? Wait a minute!...(Turns to Gabe swiftly in confusion)
(Magda turns to an empty spot with no Gabe)
Magda: Gabe? (Looks around) Gabe! Ohh my god!
Paramedic: This is too freaky..nuts..im sorry but if this is a case Im going to leave. What about you_
(Everyotherparamdic is missing)
Paramedic: Guys..
Policemen: Alright..what is going on here? Do you still need us or what?
Magda; Yes! There is a dead woman supposily roming around this house and a missing man for the past 5 hours and my husband just dissapeared..and now the paramedics are nowhere to be found!!
Magda: (Rubbs her head and starts to shake a little)
Im so scared! God I dont think ive ever been this scared! (She saidloudlyall of a sudden)


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;)

I read this before I had to leave. I might be able to check on later tonight to see if you wrote anymore. This is really good. I think that you did a great job! Don't kill Jinny though, I don't wnat to see Magda cry. It's her best friend after all. Thanks. Write MORE MROE MORE!

post more soon!

Starts:(In apartment when people are starting to dissapear)
Magda: I cant take this anymore! I just cant!!
Paramedic: Im leaving. Im sorry! But this is getting too weird! Goodbye.
Magda: All we need now is for all of you guys to dissapear and then what?!
Policeman: Look, there is an explanation to this..could..could there be a trick thats going on like your best friend getting back at you??
Magda: They said they found her dead!
(All of a sudden they hear Jacks voice)
Magda: (Looks around..ohh my..thats Jack! Thats Jack!!
Policeman: jESUS WHERE IS THAT COMING FROM?
(Jack appears behind Magda)
Magda: (Calls out) Jack! Can you hear me??
Jack: Magda! (gOES AND HUGS HER) God I saw the police outside!
What happened??Are you alright? Wheres Jinny?
Magda: Where the hell were you??
Jack: Wait..didnt you get my note?? Its on the fridge! I had an emergency call that was about a serial killer down atthe station.
Jack: I called on your cell earlier and tried to reach you and tell you what happened just in case you didnt get the note and I just figured you got it.
Magda: Well, thank god your alright! But Jinny isnt quite okay..Jack. I mean everyone here isnt sure exactly of whats been going on.....(Gets freaked out of telling him)
Jack: Well wheres Jinny!?
Magda: (Silent for a moment and just looks at him)
Magda: (Feels dizzy) Woah I just suddenly..(Feels head and sits down) Dizzy and ugh i need to sit down for a minute....
Policeman: Are are you alright Miss Rameriz???
Magda; I dont____passes out
Policeman: Miss Rameriz..omg_
Jack: Magda!




(In apartment in Jinnyand Jacks bedroom)
Magda: (Wakes up to a blurry vision) (Looks around confused and its evening time) (Gets up fast and panicy and remembers what had happened)
Jack: (Comes in) Magda..you fell asleep for a long time!
Magda: Wha..what??? Your okay Jack...
Jack: Of..course im okay..
Magda: Wha..wheres Jinny!!??
Jack: Shes in the shower..umm shell be out in 5 minutes.
Jack: Are you okay?
Magda: (Looks confused and scared) Wait..so Ohh my god..I was dreaming..wasnt..I?
Jack: I guess you were.
Jack: Look, Im gonna go..make you some dinner..I am ordering Pizza Hut if you want that..
Magda: Ohh..yeah Pizza Huts fine.
Jack: Great. (Leaves room)
Jinny: (Comes out of shower as Magda lays on her side still thinking about the horrific nightmare she had)
Jinny: Hi Magda..you were out for a long time!
Magda: (Turns over slowly..) Jinny,..is that you?? Your okay! So Im not dreaming again..right?
Jinny: (Come over) Pinches her a little)
Magda: Ow! God Jinny!
Jinny: See, your awake!
Magda: Imm..im just so happy to see you! (Hugs Jinny)
Jinny: (Hugs back)
Magda: (Looks releived) Then goes to stop hugging her)
(Then Magdas smile wipes off as she sees something totally different)
Jack: (Yells) Hey guys ill be right back Im going to pick up the pizza!
Magda: (Looks more horrified because she is left alone with Jinny)
(She is speechless right now as she starts to get petrified)

x0x0Jessie..almost the end!

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That good. Post more soon!

Magda: Imm..im just so happy to see you! (Hugs Jinny)
Jinny: (Hugs back)
Magda: (Looks releived) Then goes to stop hugging her)
(Then Magdas smile wipes off as she sees something totally different)
Jack: (Yells) Hey guys ill be right back Im going to pick up the pizza!
Magda: (Looks more horrified because she is left alone with Jinny)
(She is speechless right now as she starts to get petrified)

Mores:
>Jinny:(As she sits on her bed staring at Magda with half of face splattered with blood and partially torn on the side..)Mag, umm..whats wrong. Are you okay?(She says softly and her tone of voice is different)
Magda: (Looks confused and like omg dont you notice what you look like right now..this cant be real!!)
Magda: Uhh Yeah..(Backs away a inch) Im going to lay down for a little while longer untill Jack gets back..okay. So can you just ..shut the..door?
Jinny: Okay..Mag..well get well rested. (In weird tone of voice)
(Looks back at Magda with a freaky look and shuts door)
Magda: (Buries her head in her hands and starts to cry)
Magda: Why..why..please god please..say im dreaming.
(Falls asleep for 15 minutes and heres Jack come in)
Magda: (Gets up quickly and goes to hug Jack)
Jack: Woah, hey Mag! Whats wrong?
Magda; Ohh nothing! (Trys to block out what she had seen)
Jack: Well okay. Pizzas here! Come on I heated yours up cause about 7 minutes ago it came and you were out..like a light!
Magda: Okay Im coming. Jack..(Stays close to him)
Jack: Yeah?
Magda: Wh..eres Jinny?
Jack: Ohh Jins fine she is in the shower.
Magda: (Looks puzzled) She already took..a shower..didnt she?
Jack: Not that I know of.
Magda: Okay....
Jack: Ohh wait here shell be out in 5 minutes.
Magda; Wait..where are you going??
Jack: Ohh im taking the trash out.
Magda: No Ill come with you. (Says fast)
Jack: Alright.
Magda: (Walks out)
Jack: (Takes trash out while Magda waits on porch)
Magda: (Comes in with Jack)
Jinny: (Is at fridge)
Magda: Jin?!
Jinny: (Looks up and looks normal and says hey Mag ohh heres your pizza..)
Magda: (Laughs a little) Jinny your okay! I love you!
Jinny: Woah! (Mag hugs her tight)
Jack: Magda you seem a little funny.
Magda: Im just..happy! ummlets have a special night together and do soemthing..play games watch a good movie..anything!
Jinny-Jack: (Looks at eachother and say fine with us)
Magda: (Gets excited and hopes this isnt a dream or turns into a nightmare) This is really great..you guys.


x0x0Jessie the end..no explanation has been founded to the story..strange i know. Bye

That was great! Good Job!

*chants* sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! *200 more sequels*

Ya this was my favorite fan fic i ever wrote lol!! funnest!! ty for liking it..i replied kinda late..ill think about writng a sequal soon!;)

Im thinking of a really good sequal for this..any idead?:talk: :wave: ;) :)

That evening that Jinny Jack and Magda are eating chinese food and chilling out together on a night in.
Magda: Well, anyone wanna watch a movie?(Magda wondered enthusiasticly)
Jack: Yeah go ahead..Magda there's movies right there on the lower shelf of the entertainment center.
Magda:(Crawls over to the TV and scatters a whole bunch of videos) Hmm...
Jinny:(Sits quietly in the air conditioning with her back against the arm of the couch) Guys, you wanna..rent a movie?
Jack: Let's rent a dirty movie!(Jack kidded and said getting turned on)
Magda: Oh my god! (She giggled and wacked Jack lightly with her sleeve)
Jinny:(Stayed quiet and had that funny tone to her voice..a shaky echoing tone)Hey, I know..how about a horror movie? A really reall..y frightening one. ..One that makes you want to shake out of your hair raising skin..and forces you to be scared so badly that death becomes the result.(She confirmed in that same tone of voice biting her lip in between with her knees up against her chest)
Magda:(Silent and just stares flashing back to her dream..nightmare)
Jack: Oh..kay...yeah..wow. That was..pretty creepy Jin..yeah..(He said feeling lost and confused in a kidding matter)
Jinny: Yeah..creepy..whatever you say.
Magda:(Shot Jinny a concerned look and growing more nervous by the minute)

Mores later*


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Magda: Uh, hehe..Jin I'm not really in for a horror movie.
Jack: Mag, come on it'll be fun..how about The Excorsist..new one?
Magda: (Gives a nervous laughing look) Ok..I guess its fine..let's order a horror movie.
Jack: Alrighty. I'll run to the video store 2 blocks from here and rent one and Mag, Jin you guys can stay here.
Magda: What?! (Magda sprung up and shouted)
Jack: Mag, whats the problem? I'll be right back.
Jinny: Yeah, right. No problem..Mag and me will be fine..wont we Mag?
Magda:(Glances at her stuttering) Uh..eh..Jack..let me go!
Jack: Magda it's late and it's better if I go..I'll be right back.(He begins to dart out the door)
Magda: Jack..
Jack: Be right back. (Closes door)

More Later

(After Jack slowly closes the door)
Magda: (Continues to stay in silence allowing her soft layeredhair to cascade gently to the side of her face)
Jinny: So. (Jinny said out of nowhere spontaneously)
Magda: Jin..ny. Uh, is there anything you'd like to do now? Take a shower? Anything..(Magda said clearly)
Jinny: No..no I'm..Im fine. Sitting here gives me pleasure.
Magda: Wha..what do you mean?
Jinny: Magda, are..are you ok? You don't look good. You look..kind of spooked..hmm. ..and why is that..Mag?
Magda: I just don't feel too good..I'm..I'm just gonna sit here and
wait for Jack to return with the movie, oh..okay?
Jinny: (Nodds her head ina funny way) Hmm..okay, Mag you do that.
(Silence kicks in for about 15 more minutes)
Mores Later

Jinny: Come here Mag..Come..Come here..
Magda: (Shoots her a weird look) Jin, I'm right here..do..you..you wanna tell me something?
Jinny: Magda..come here. (Jinny demands aggressivly loosing patience)
Magda: Jinny..your eyes are blood shot..your not on...
Jinny: (Her body starts vibrating a little) (Lunges at Magda swiftly)
Magda: Jin..ny! Get away! (Magda shrieks)
Jinny: (Loosing it) Don't you dare walk away from me! dON'T YOU DARE! (Grabbing Magda's ankle)
Magda: (Screams and moans) Get the hell away! Jinny stop..stop it! What are you doing..Jinny!
Jinny: (Puts pressure on Magda's neck with her hands) You..you bitch! (She hollers into her face..spit exiting her mouth banging Mags head against the carpet) You think you have it all..dont you..dont you?! You little..two timing whore! I'll tell gabe..tell everyone about you mother ****ing affair! How woud you like that! Huh? Answer me! Answer ME! (Jinny continued to grab hold of her neck as Magda sobbed)
Magda: Ple..ase Jinny..st..op! Pl..(Choking) Jinn..y.
Jinny: (Just let's go all of a sudden) Ohh..oh go..d. (Begins to sob and cry very hard with tears flowing down her cheeks realizing what she is doing to Magda)
Magda: (Grabs hold of her own neck and starts to sob too with her nervous body breathing very deeply against the floor)
Jack: (Enters the house) Jinny..Jin? Are you ok?
Jinny: (Sits agaianst the couch with her knees against her chest and her face burried in her hands)
Jack: Jin..wha..what happened?? (Rushes over to her..)what's wrong?
Magda: Jack..she she..tr.ied to strangle m..e. (Magda said out loud catching her breath)
Jack: What!? Oh my..Jin?!
Jack: Jinny..did you try..to hurt Magda?
Jinny: Magda tried to..hurt me.
Magda: What! Jin..thats thats a lie.
Jack: Jin..is this true?
Jinny: (Unburries her tear stained eyes and lifts up her shirt)
Jack: Oh..my god. (Jack views a welt under Jinny's breast) Mag!?
What the hell is going on here? (Jack asked standing up)

Mores Later




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Magda: God, Jack! I swear..look look here here's the red ring around my neck..the the nail marks!
Jack: (Sighs) Uh, Mag..I..I don't see anything.
Jinny: (Very softly) Mag..
Magda: Oh god..where did it go..no! No! (She broke down looking at them both)
Jinny: Youre..nuts.
Magda: Jack! Please..Jinny is obviously doing something here..she is just acting crazy! She she strangled me out of..out of rage!
Jack: Magda..I think something just shadowed over you..and you need to lie down..come on.
Magda: (Steps back slowly) No! No!..N..o! No!
Jack: (Moves closer to Mag) Magda..come on let's just talk. Let's just relax and lie down.
Magda: How..how am I suppose to relax knowing there is a monster..in the same room as me..huh? (Magda swallows hard getting worked up)
Jack: Now..jus..just stop it.
Magda: You..you are in on this too..aren't you..?
Jack: What the hell are you talking about, Mag?
Magda: You know damn well! Leaving me alone here while you go off and disappear for a while and sometimes never come back!! With..with this monster..that was once....my best friend!
Jack: Oh ok, Magda now you have gone too far! (He says raising his voice)

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Magda: (Glares to Jack with tears in her eyes) As much as I..love Jinny..I am not i am not! Going to stay here..I am terrified..and If..if you two think this is a joke..Im leaving..goodbye Jinny..goodbye Jack.
Jack: Good! Leave! Just leave! You're causing enough trouble now. Wha..what? Do we have to give you an intervention now too? Huh?
Jinny: Mag..Magda please! Don..don't leave. I beg you, please. I need help..please stay and hel..p me. (Jinny suddenly came forward and pleaded)
Magda: ( Gives a pitiful look) Ok..let's forget everything I sa..id. And what happened. ok?
Jack: ...Fine. Fine..with me.
Jinny: Good.
Magda: So..what should we do..now? Watch a movie and finish eating chinese and pizza?
Jack: Yep..Jinny can you pass me salt?
Jinny: (Does so)
Jack: Ok..everybody ok now?
Magda: ....Yea.
Jinny: Yeah..ok..right.


More Laters

Oooooh getting creeeepy...I like it hehe Post more soon Jess.:wave:

Starts: (Jinny and Jack zonked out on the couches fast asleep while Magda was snoring on the floor with her new AVON makeup book laying on her stomach)
Jack: (Rolling over snuggling up on the couch)
Jinny: (In a deep sleep with her face smashed against the couch cushions)
Magda: (Laying flat on the floor sound asleep and suddenly sprung up with her heart beating every millasecond)
(Breathing heavily) Ah..(Looks around) God..woah. They're..they're asleep. That's..oh my god. (Sighs thinking was this another dream she woke up to, or another nightmare that is not over and waiting to grow worse) Something isn't right..again.

Sry more laters..o0o scarrrryyy lol:wave:

Starts: (Magda is sitting up just looking around)
Magda: (Glances at the clock as it read 2:43 in the morning and it was still dark)
*She thought about leaving and going home but then again she doesn't feel too comfortable about doing that to Jack. So she decided to wake him up*
Magda: (Steps closer to Jack as he begins to snore) Jack..Jack. (She whispers in a husky voice) (Shakes him a few times)
Jack: (Awakes) Uh..wha. What? Oh Mag..is it time to get up or what?
Magda: No. I just woke up and I wanted to tell you that I got a page from Captain and I have to be there by this afternoon. Do you think you would be ok here with Jin?
Jack: (Stretches and closes his eyes) Yeah..sure go ahead im fine now. (He was still half asleep)
Magda: Ok, I'm going to go now. (Picks up her things and heads out the door as quiet as she could)
*Even though part of her yearned to stay..part of her was very afraid still and wanted to get away from Jinny. Which she felt really bad about doing. Maybe Jinny did not know what was going on*
Jack: (Rolls over as Jinny is still sleeping)......--i mean i think thats really "Jinny"--


Mores later~
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