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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-28-2004, 08:57 PM
This is a Sequel to Call Someone. Hope you like it.
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It is 7 months later and CD is now almost 8 months pregnant with Nates baby of course but they did not get married. CD didn't want to get married because of the baby. Magda got a new partner. Her name was Stacy and she was very annoying. Magda has been moody ever since she was partnered with her. Nate was bugging CD because he was always on her all the time. He wanted to make sure she wasn't hurting the baby in the least bit. CD thought it was sweet but it was begining to annoy her. Kate and Raina were the same. Raina was studying to take the Inspector's test. No one sat in Jinny's desk. They left the desk just as it was in memory of her. They didn't remove anything from it. Magda and Kate sometimes just gaze at it but they learned to control their feelings. It is now 7:50 and people are just arriving at work. Magda and Kate were all ready there and they were talking when CD and Nate walked in.

Kate- Hi Nate.
Nate- Hello.

Nate was holding CD's hand as she is walking in.

Kate- Oh my God CD! What's wrong??
CD- Nothing why?
Kate- Why is Nate guiding you in?
CD- Because he is a guard dog. He was afraid walking would hurt the baby. *Rolled her eyes*
Magda- *Laughs* Nate what is wrong with you?
Nate- Am I the only one that cares? It said in all the baby books that extreme exercise can make you go into labor.
CD- I wouldn't call getting on an elevator exercise.
Nate- Well I would now come on you need to sit down.
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How do u like it so far?

babyexstead
03-28-2004, 09:06 PM
I LOVE IT!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!

DIVISION/NMFAN4466
03-28-2004, 09:09 PM
more please it was great!!!!!!!:D :happyface

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-28-2004, 10:27 PM
Aww thanks guys! Here's more..
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CD just rolled her eyes and sat down. Then Raina came in.

CD- Hi Raina.
Raina- Hi CD how are you? And how is our little darling here? *Pats her belly*
CD- The baby is good. I have an appoitnment to see the doctor this afternoon--if that is ok with Cap'n.
Kate- Of course. Take all the time you need.
CD- Thanks.
Kate- Ok assignments. Magda where is your partner?
Magda- Well the person I am working with isn't here yet. She isn't my partner.
Kate- *Noded* Ok there is a murder at a McDonald's. Who wants that?

CD was about to raise her hand but Nate put it down for her and spoke up.

Nate- Is there anything else?
CD- *Pouted*
Kate- There is another murder in Chinatown.

CD was again about to raise her hand but Nate put it down again.

Nate- Next..
Kate- Well I only have one left. That is bringing people in for questioning on that robbery.
Nate- We will do that.
CD- *Gets out of her chair* Nate, come with me. *Pulled Nate out of the chair and dragged him over to the locker room door*
Nate- What's the matter with you??
CD- You are being a *****. Why won't you let me do any cases??
Nate- I did! We are doing the robbery.
CD- That's not a case. I want to do a murder or something. Nate you are making it to obvious.
Nate- Making what too obvious?
CD- That this is your kid!!
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Ya like? :)

candace~n~nathan
03-28-2004, 11:36 PM
awwww, that nate is too cute!!!! Poor CD, tho, I'd kill him! :D lol

and yeah, we liked, so post more! :)

babyexstead
03-28-2004, 11:43 PM
This is great! WRITE MORE SOON!!!! YOU GO KELLY!

Snowfall
03-29-2004, 02:09 AM
That was sooooooo great! I'm really glad you wrote a sequel. That's so funny that no one knows that it's Nate's kid! :lol: Something tells me that they do, though.....;) ;) :D Post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-29-2004, 03:43 AM
I never expected this many replies. I am glad you like it. Here's more..
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Nate- What's the matter with you??
CD- You are being a *****. Why won't you let me do any cases??
Nate- I did! We are doing the robbery.
CD- That's not a case. I want to do a murder or something. Nate you are making it to obvious.
Nate- Making what too obvious?
CD- That this is your kid!!
Nate- I'm sorry but I don't know why we just don't tell them.
CD- Because then we cant be partners. I want to be your partner.
Nate- But I would rather you be my wife.
CD- Nate..
Nate- Alright. Could we discuss it later?
CD- *Grins* Ok. How about we go out for dinner?
Nate- *Looks at CD's belly and pats it* Are you sure? You know what the book says. It said eating spicy or--
CD- NATE! SHUT UP!!

Kate and Magda heard that and started laughing.

Magda- Seems like CD is givin him hell in there.
Kate- Sure does.

Just then Stacy walked in.

Stacy- Hi sorry I am late! I saw this sale on this absolutely gorgeous hat and I fell in love. I had to have it.
Kate- A hat? I see.
Stacy- Well ya look at it.. *Pulled a pink hat with tulips at the top out of a bag* Isn't it?
Kate- I--I would wear it everyday.
Stacy- Really?? *Excited*

Kate rolled her eyes and went into her office.

Magda- Stacy, if we are going to be partners, I can't have you being late all the time.
Stacy- I'm not that late.
Magda- Late enough to disrupt our work.
Stacy- Geez, did you treat your last partner like this?
Magda- Leave her out of this.
Stacy- Did you treat her like a little kid??
Magda- Stacy...
Stacy-..like your own personal slave? HUH??

CD- So please stop treating me differently ok?
Nate- Ok. Here let me help you--
CD- *Glared*
Nate- Ok. We can do a murder case.
CD- Thank you. We need to stop by the store on the way.
Nate- Why?
CD- I need more cheese.
Nate- *Laughs remembering that is all she will eat during her pregnancy* Of course.
CD- Thanks. Let's go tell Captain.

Magda couldn't help herslef and punched her right in the nose. Stacy got right up and tackled Magda to the floor. They were hitting and kicking each other. CD was coming around the cornor and didn't see them. She got caught right in the middle of it. They were rolling on the floor and as Stacy was trying to get up, she accidentally pushed her elbow into CD's stomach and CD fell down.
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ANYSNTHATWORKS
03-29-2004, 07:43 AM
OK LOOK I'm READING........SCROLLING............READING.............SCROLLING and then it stops! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh where's more of that I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

zwalane
03-29-2004, 09:11 AM
so we have a sequel, kool. r u gonna tell us what happened to that SOB. where is Teddy?

JinnyExstead897
03-29-2004, 04:52 PM
I like it please keep going!!!

candace~n~nathan
03-29-2004, 05:07 PM
i always knew i wanted stacey to get ran over.......or choke on her hairclip after I shoved it down her throat......;)


hehe, uhhh post more??? :D

Snowfall
03-30-2004, 01:50 AM
Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
i always knew i wanted stacey to get ran over.......or choke on her hairclip after I shoved it down her throat......;)


hehe, uhhh post more??? :D

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lisa, you are soooo hilarious! :lol: :lol:

That was great, Kelly! Please let CD and that baby be OK! Post more soon.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-30-2004, 09:56 AM
Originally posted by Snowfall
ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lisa, you are soooo hilarious! :lol: :lol:

That was great, Kelly! Please let CD and that baby be OK! Post more soon.

Do you honestly think I would harm CD or her baby? It's not like I am writing this with Rasa ;) J/k Rasa. Love ya! :eyes: :heart: :loveya: :kiss:
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They were rolling on the floor and as Stacy was trying to get up, she accidentally pushed her elbow into CD's stomach and CD fell down.

Kate came out to see what all the comotion was.

Kate- What is going on here?
Nate- Oh my God CD! Are you ok??
CD- *Tyring to get up* I'm fine.
Nate- *Helping her up* I had better take you to a doctor.
CD- I told you I was fine. Just sore now! *Glared at Stacy*
Stacy- Look, CD I am sorry.
CD- Sure you are. You could have killed my baby!!

Nate got freaked out by that comment and quickly took CD's hand.

Nate- Come on CD.
CD- What where am I going?!
Nate- I am taking you to the doctor's.
CD- What? Why?
Nate- Because that bitch may have hurt the baby!!
Stacy- HEY!
Nate- *Rolled his eyes* Come on!

He said that and dragged CD to the elevator while Kate was dealing with those two.

Kate- Ramirez, Newland, in my office..NOW!

CD- What is the matter with you??
Nate- She may have hurt the baby. I am not taking any chances and you shouldn't either.
CD- Nate--
Nate- Just do it! For me.
CD- *Pouts* Fine..*grumbles* ..as long as I can get some cheese on the way.
Nate- *Grins* Ok.

Kate- What the hell was that?
Magda- I'm sorry. It won't happen again.
Kate- Your damned right it won't. Obviously you two can't be partners.
Stacy- Thank God.
Kate- What was that Officer?
Stacy- Nothing.
Kate- Well maybe you can think about this over your suspension.
Stacy- What? What about her??
Kate- She will be dealt with but SHE wasn't the one who hurt a pregnant inspector. Thank goodness she went to the doctor. Do you realize what you could have done. You could have damaged the baby. We don't even know if you didn't.
Stacy- I apologized! Damnit what does a person have to do around here to prove they are sorry?
Kate- Turn in your badge and gun now please.
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More to come later..:D

JinnyExstead897
03-30-2004, 04:49 PM
Very Dramatic!! More please!!

Snowfall
03-31-2004, 01:20 AM
OOOOH, yay, Stacy's been canned! :D Well, only temporarily I guess, but I'll take what I can get! ;) ;) Post more soon!

Snowfall
03-31-2004, 01:21 AM
New page btw....ya know what that means! :D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
03-31-2004, 09:38 AM
Originally posted by Snowfall
OOOOH, yay, Stacy's been canned! :D Well, only temporarily I guess, but I'll take what I can get! ;) ;) Post more soon!

I might can her. You never know;) My mind always changes..:)
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Stacy- I apologized! Damnit what does a person have to do around here to prove they are sorry?
Kate- Turn in your badge and gun now please.

Meanwhile, CD and Nate were at the doctor's office.

Dr. Jacobs- Hi Candace. Nathan.
Nate- Hi Doctor.
Dr. Jacobs- What seems to be the trouble? You came here on an emergency.
Nate- Well this is important.
Dr. Jacobs- I am sure it is but not many people threaten to arrest my nurses if they don't let you in to see me. I think one nurse went home crying. *Laughs*
CD- *Laughs* I told him not to do that.
Dr. Jacobs- So what's wrong?
Nate- She got hit at work in the stomach.
Dr. Jacobs- Does it hurt CD?
CD- Just sore.
Dr. Jacobs- Well we will make sure nothing happened to the baby ok?
Nate- Thank you.

Kate came out of her office and walked over to Magda's desk.

Kate- Can you tell me what happened?
Magda- It's not important.
Kate- It is to me.
Magda- Nothing. She brought up Jinny and was saying stuff so I gave her what she needed. I know it is childish and I won't do it again.
Kate- You have said that about the last 4 partners you have had. Now 5. I can't have you keep going through partners. I have someone coming in the afternoon for an interview. She is already an Inspector so if she does good on her interview, she will be your new partner ok?
Magda- All right.

Dr. Jacobs- Exactly what happened?
Nate- She was elbowed in the stomach by an Inspector.
CD- I am here you know. I can answer what is wrong with me.
Nate- I'm sorry.
Dr. Jacobs- Me too. What happened CD?
CD- Well, I was elbowed in the stomach by an Inspector. *Laughs*
Dr. Jacobs- Well, all things considered, everything seems to be all right. You will be very sore though..and have a nice bruise. I want you to take a maternity leave as soon as you can and I don't mean in 2 months. I mean if it is possible, by the end of the week at the latest.
CD- But--
Dr. Jacobs- No. No buts. You need to do this. Do you want to hurt your baby?
CD- No.
Dr. Jacobs- Well then we need to do this.
CD- Ok. *Pouts*
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candace~n~nathan
03-31-2004, 06:35 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
CD- Well, I was elbowed in the stomach by an Inspector. *Laughs*


aw, CD's so cute!!! and that was really good,kelly, post more!

Snowfall
04-01-2004, 01:26 AM
LOL, that was so cute and funny with Nate and CD at the doctor's, and Nate threatening to arrest the nurses! :lol: I also thought the part where Kate says that Magda has gone through 5 partners is hilarious....post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-04-2004, 03:52 AM
Originally posted by Snowfall
LOL, that was so cute and funny with Nate and CD at the doctor's, and Nate threatening to arrest the nurses! :lol: I also thought the part where Kate says that Magda has gone through 5 partners is hilarious....post more soon!

Thanks :) Here's a little bit more..
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A few hours later, Stacy was all ready gone and the new Inspector walked in. She was about 5'6, blackish hair, green eyes. She walked right into the Captains office. When she passed Magda's desk, Magda just stared at her. There wasn't a complete resemblance but she looked familiar. Meanwhile, CD and Nate were coming out of the doctors office and drove back to the station. When they were going into the elevator, there were having a little argument.

Nate- CD you have to do this.
CD- Nate, what am I going to do with myself for the next month?? I can't do it. It is only for a month. I will go on light duty but that is as far as I am going.
Nate- You have to go home. I will let you stay this week but starting Monday you are staying home.
CD- You don't own me. I will do what I want when I want.

She stepped out of the elevator and into the Felony Division and saw Magda and Raina standing there. She was walking towards them when Nate yelled out something a little too loud. Captain walked out with the new Inspector just in time to hear what he was about to say..

Nate- I may not own you but that is my baby too!!!!!!!
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I know it was short. I will post more tomorrow. It is 3:52 and I am exhausted so Im going to bed :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-04-2004, 03:52 AM
Originally posted by Snowfall
LOL, that was so cute and funny with Nate and CD at the doctor's, and Nate threatening to arrest the nurses! :lol: I also thought the part where Kate says that Magda has gone through 5 partners is hilarious....post more soon!

Thanks :) Here's a little bit more..
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A few hours later, Stacy was all ready gone and the new Inspector walked in. She was about 5'6, blackish hair, green eyes. She walked right into the Captains office. When she passed Magda's desk, Magda just stared at her. There wasn't a complete resemblance but she looked familiar. Meanwhile, CD and Nate were coming out of the doctors office and drove back to the station. When they were going into the elevator, there were having a little argument.

Nate- CD you have to do this.
CD- Nate, what am I going to do with myself for the next month?? I can't do it. It is only for a month. I will go on light duty but that is as far as I am going.
Nate- You have to go home. I will let you stay this week but starting Monday you are staying home.
CD- You don't own me. I will do what I want when I want.

She stepped out of the elevator and into the Felony Division and saw Magda and Raina standing there. She was walking towards them when Nate yelled out something a little too loud. Captain walked out with the new Inspector just in time to hear what he was about to say..

Nate- I may not own you but that is my baby too!!!!!!!
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I know it was short. I will post more tomorrow. It is 3:53 and I am exhausted so Im going to bed :)

candace~n~nathan
04-04-2004, 11:41 AM
LOL oops!!!!! Poor Nate spilled the beans!! :D MOOOOOORE!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-05-2004, 01:22 AM
Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
LOL oops!!!!! Poor Nate spilled the beans!! :D MOOOOOORE!

LOL He sure did! This post is for Nancy. It may be a little late but better late than never. HAPPY BIRTHDAY NANCY!
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She stepped out of the elevator and into the Felony Division and saw Magda and Raina standing there. She was walking towards them when Nate yelled out something a little too loud. Captain walked out with the new Inspector just in time to hear what he was about to say..

Nate- I may not own you but that is my baby too!!!!!!!
CD- NATE!!

Everyone stared at them. Kate walked up to them.

Kate- Inspectors, in my office. Now.

CD and Nate followed Kate into her office while the new Inspector stayed outside her office not sure what to do. She didn't know what was going on but inside she found it funny.

Kate- What the hell was that about?
CD- I'm sorry. It won't happen again.
Kate- Nate, is what you said true?
Nate- What did I say? *Acts dumb*
Kate- Nate, you said you were the father of CD's baby. Is it true?
Nate- I don't remember saying that.
Kate- Don't do this. You know perfectly well you said it.
CD- Nate we should just tell her.
Nate- Tell her what? We have nothing to tell.
CD- Nate! Just tell her.
Nate- Tell her what!??!
CD- Dear God Nate. I am telling you we have to tell her. Captain, this is Nate's baby.
Nate- *Stood up and looked shocked* What!? Captain, I had no idea.
CD- NATE!!!
Kate- CD don't get worked up. I don't know what I am going to do with you two. You are my best Inspectors and you two do well together.
CD- Well I could only stay a little while longer. The doctor said I have to take an early maternity leave.
Kate- Well until then, we will let this go. Now get out of here. *Smiled*

CD and Nate left the office and CD was very mad.

CD- How could you do that??
Nate- Do what?
CD- Deny it after I told her.
Nate- You told me never to tell her.
CD- Well if I am in the middle of telling her, you can say something geez!!
Nate- Well Im sorry if I am not perfect like you ok? I am just an ord..

While Nate was talking CD leaned on the desk and looked like she was in a lot of pain and Nate didn't notice. He was still talking.

Nate- ...we all can't be soo perfect...
CD- Nate..
Nate- ..I try my best..
CD- Nate....
Nate- I mean I do the best to my ability and that isnt....
CD- NATE!!!!!!
Nate- What?
CD- I think..I am in labor.
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I will end it there for tonight.

Snowfall
04-05-2004, 01:40 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KELLY!!!!! :eek: :mad: Please let them be able to stop the labor! It's too soon! Hurry back and post more!

planet_stella
04-05-2004, 02:39 PM
I could yell at you now Kelly, but I won't. Because I have already yelled at you for putting CD into early labor....:mad: :angryfire You better post more on this fic....:D

Snowflake345
04-05-2004, 04:42 PM
How could you do this to CD. Putting her into early labor. You better get you a$$ back her and post more

:rant: :cuss:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-05-2004, 04:44 PM
Hey you guys are lucky. I could have killed her just like Jinny hehe j/k. You will get more this afternoon/tonight.

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-05-2004, 05:06 PM
Or I will post more now lol :)
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CD- NATE!!!!!!
Nate- What?
CD- I think..I am in labor.
Nate- What!? You can't be. You are 5 weeks early!!
CD- I am having bad stomach pains. Oh God they hurt!
Nate- Well start your breathing and we will get you to a hospital.
CD- Gee, I never would have thought of that.
Nate- Magda will you watch her while I page the doctor?

Magda walked over to CD's desk and held her hand. Kate came out of her office.

Kate- Now what's going on?
Magda- We think CD is in labor.
Kate- Oh my God. CD how are you doing.
CD- Just freaking great.
Kate- Ok.
CD- Sorry Captain. It just..hurts.
Kate- I know it does.
Magda- Ok CD just breathe. Everything is ok. Just concentrate.
Nate- Ok I just paged the doctor. She should be calling back. CD are you ok?
CD- *Glares*

Dr. Jacobs had just finished with a patient when her beeper went off and saw Nate's number. She just laughed wondering what is wrong now. She called Nate right away.

Nate- Just relax. Everything will be ok. *Phone rings* Basso? Hi Doctor.
Dr. Jacobs- Nate, what's wrong?
Nate- She is having stomach pains. I don't know what to do. It's too early. I am not prepared. We haven't even went shopping yet. Ok maybe we did but I still don't know what to do. What if it is sick? What if--
Dr. Jacobs- CALM DOWN! Ok Nate has her water broken?
Nate- No she didn't have any water! What does drinks have to do with this!?!?
CD- You idiot!!! Just tell her no. *Starts breathing as more pain comes on*
Nate- I'm not an idiot. Dr. she said no it hasn't.
Dr. Jacobs- Ok you two come down to my office.
Nate- We have to get to the hospital first.
Dr. Jacobs- I am telling you. Come down to my office. It could be false labor since she is perfectly healthy. Or you could be right. She could be in early labor. Was she at work or arguing with anyone?
Nate- Both.
Dr. Jacobs- Who was she yelling at?
Nate- *mumbled* ..me.
Dr. Jacobs- What?
Nate- Me.
Dr. Jacobs- Nate what did you do?
Nate- LONG story.
Dr. Jacobs- Alright just bring her down here. You have got a lot of time with the first ones.
Nate- Ok. Bye.

Nate hung up the phone and went over to CD.

Nate- Ok we have to go down to the doctors.
CD- I thought we were going to the hospital?
Nate- She wants us to go to her first so she can check you out.
CD- Ok *Pauses as more pain comes on*
Kate- Call us and let us know what is going on so we could be there.
Nate- Ok Captain. Come on CD. Let's go.

They made it all the way down to the doctors office and got taken in immediately. The Doctor came in.
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Enough for now?:)

croatian_princess
04-05-2004, 05:18 PM
Nope. Sorry. It just missed the writing limit. Maybe another chapter or 2? Hmm, Kel, we all know ya wanna...:p

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-05-2004, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by croatian_princess
Nope. Sorry. It just missed the writing limit. Maybe another chapter or 2? Hmm, Kel, we all know ya wanna...:p

Hey! Where have you been?? :D I will post more later.

Snowfall
04-06-2004, 12:58 AM
That was soooooo great! Thanks for posting again! But please let CD and the baby be OK! :( Post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-06-2004, 01:16 PM
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Kate- Call us and let us know what is going on so we could be there.
Nate- Ok Captain. Come on CD. Let's go.

They made it all the way down to the doctors office and got taken in immediately. The Doctor came in.

Doctor- Wow it seems like I haven't seen you in a while. *Smiles*
CD- *Not amused*

The doctor examined CD.

Doctor- Ok you have gone into early labor. I want to admit you to the hospital to try and stop the labor. Is that ok?
CD- That's fine! Anything to stop this!!!

They got to the hospital and a nurse took CD to her room and gave her medicine to help stop the labor. CD was not to get out of bed. Her and Nate talked.

Nate- CD Im sorry.
CD- For what?
Nate- For arguing with you. I shouldn't have said what I said in Captain's office and we were fighting. I shouted and I made you go into labor. I am so sorry. Let's never fight again.
CD- Well we all know that won't happen. *Laughs* I will be ready to kill when i deliver this baby. Especially now that I know what contractions feel like.
Nate- *Laughs* In pain and she still has her sense of humor. I love you.
CD- I love you too. *Kiss*

The nurse then came in about 2 hours later to see if the medicine was working.
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I will post more later:)

planet_stella
04-06-2004, 02:13 PM
KELLY........You jerk ****** **** ***** ********!!!!!!!!!!!!:angryfire :smash: :cuss::soapbox: :livid: :mad:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-06-2004, 02:14 PM
Originally posted by planet_stella
KELLY........You jerk ****** **** ***** ********!!!!!!!!!!!!:angryfire :smash: :cuss::soapbox: :livid: :mad:

That's a little uncalled for don't you think? :D

planet_stella
04-06-2004, 02:16 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
That's a little uncalled for don't you think? :D

NO! I don't think!!!!!:p

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-06-2004, 02:18 PM
Originally posted by planet_stella
NO! I don't think!!!!!:p

Hey as I said before, I could have killed her or something. Consider yourself lucky! :D:D

planet_stella
04-06-2004, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Hey as I said before, I could have killed her or something. Consider yourself lucky! :D:D


YOU consider yourself lucky that i didn't kill you for doing that to CD......yet. So, you better make everything be alright...

Snowfall
04-06-2004, 03:38 PM
That was so wonderful, Kelly! I hope that everything is going to be OK.....post more soon! I love this fic!

monkeygirl
04-08-2004, 03:08 PM
hey, kelly, I promised i'd reply, so here u go! now post more soon!!!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-09-2004, 12:45 PM
Originally posted by planet_stella
YOU consider yourself lucky that i didn't kill you for doing that to CD......yet. So, you better make everything be alright...

This part is dedicated to Rasa. WE LOVE YOU:D
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The nurse then came in about 2 hours later to see if the medicine was working.

Nurse- Has the pains stopped?
CD- Yeah but there is still a little cramp every now and then.
Nurse- Ok well the contractions have stopped. You can go home.
CD- Thank God!
Nurse- BUT the doctor said you are to stay in bed. NO WORK what so ever.
CD- But--
Nurse- No. No buts about it. You need to or you will go into early labor and have the baby premature.
Nate- Is that what you want?
CD- Of course not!!
Nate- Then you need to go home. I will ask Captain to give me the next week off so I could be with you.
Nurse- Good. But other than that, everything else is fine. You can go.
CD- Thanks.
Nate- Let's get you home.
CD- I love you.
Nate- I love you too.
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I hope you all liked it even though it was short.

planet_stella
04-09-2004, 05:07 PM
Awwwwww thanks:) I'm so glad CD's not in early labor:D Post more!!!! And i love you too:loveya: :kiss: :bighug:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-10-2004, 02:12 AM
Originally posted by planet_stella
Awwwwww thanks:) I'm so glad CD's not in early labor:D Post more!!!! And i love you too:loveya: :kiss: :bighug:

Awwwwwwwwwww. Thanks. Luv ya gurl! :dance: :hug: party: :love:

Sorry guys but I won't be posting on this fic for a while. I am not ending it but there won't be any new posts due to medical reasons. I will post as soon as I can. :D

Snowfall
04-10-2004, 09:29 PM
Awww, that's OK, Kelly. I totally understand. Just get better, and when you do, I'll be ready for more of this amazing fic! :D

croatian_princess
04-10-2004, 11:14 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Hey! Where have you been?? :D

Psych ward. And you?

Originally posted by Jinnygirl88
Sorry guys but I won't be posting on this fic for a while. I am not ending it but there won't be any new posts due to medical reasons. I will post as soon as I can. :D

Aww, get better soon! :mango :banana: :cheer: :banana: :mango

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-11-2004, 09:10 PM
Thank guys! I really appreciate it. I got REALLY bored so I wrote some more. I figured I would give you guys a little piece.
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After all the commotion was over, Kate realized she hadn't even introduced Magda to her new partner.

Kate- Oh Magda, this is your new partner, Jenny Schroller.
Magda- It's nice to meet you.
Jenny- Same here.
Kate- Well we got a murder in Chinatown.
Magda- We're on it Captain.
Jenny- Let's roll.

Magda kept thinking she looked like, acted like, and spoke like Jinny. She thought it was kind of funny but it made her miss Jinny more and more. Nate got CD home and he sent her right to bed.

Nate- Is there anything I can get you honey?
CD- Well I am a little thirsy.
Nate- I will get you some water.
CD- Thanks.

Nate returned with the water. CD tried to get up for a minute but Nate caught her.

Nate- And where do you think you are going??
CD- Well the TV is out there so I want to go watch it.
Nate- I will move the TV in here. You are not getting out of this bed. Understood?
CD- *Grins* And if I dont?
Nate- Well then I will just have to place you under arrest. *Smirks* With my handcuffs. *Kisses her*
CD- Oh it's worth going to jail over.

Magda and Jenny were on their way to the crime scene. They were quiet most of the way so Magda broke the silence.

Magda- So tell me a little bit about yourself.
Jenny- Well, I have 2 brothers. My dad died when I was little. I live alone. I can't keep a steady boyfriend. *Kind of laughs* And I don't have a dog.
Magda- I'm sorry about your dad.
Jenny- Thanks. How about you?
Magda- Well I have a son, Ben. He is eight. I might be getting married. I have been working at The Division for about 5 years and I don't have a dog either. *Laughs*
Jenny- Might be getting married?
Magda- Well he asked me but I am not sure I want to go through with it.
Jenny- Oh ok. So what happened to your last partner?
Magda- She was just suspended today. She and I got into a fight.
Jenny- Yikes. What about?
Magda- She was making fun of my old partner.
Jenny- What happened to her.
Magda- *Pauses* She was killed.
Jenny- Oh I'm sorry. In the line of duty?
Magda- No. By her boyfriend.
Jenny- Oh. Is he in jail?
Magda- Yeah he has been there for about 7 months and he will be spending a long time in there for murdering a police officer. She was my best friend. *Starts to get teary*
Jenny- So is that why all the flowers and stuff were there?
Magda- Yeah that was her desk. Jinny Exstead.
Jenny- She sounds cool.
Magda- Yeah she was. She was the best.
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I hope you liked it. I felt bad I left you at a bad part so I wrote more.

croatian_princess
04-11-2004, 09:53 PM
Kelly! I posted more, and now you have to!!!!! :p

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-11-2004, 11:35 PM
Originally posted by croatian_princess
Kelly! I posted more, and now you have to!!!!! :p

I will try. It's a little hard but I will do my best:D

Snowfall
04-12-2004, 01:22 AM
That was soooo great! I'm glad you posted more, Kelly. Post more when you can! :D

planet_stella
04-13-2004, 02:53 PM
I'd like you t oget bored more often,Kelly.;) ;) That was so sweet.... Post more whenever you can:):bighug:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-15-2004, 12:58 PM
Originally posted by planet_stella
I'd like you t oget bored more often,Kelly.;) ;) That was so sweet.... Post more whenever you can:):bighug:

Ok I had a little spare time so I wrote a little more..here it is..sorry to make you guys wait so long.
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They got to the crime scene. There were 2 dead bodies. It looked like a married couple.

Magda- What do we got?
Officer- Someone stopped a car here as you can see the tire tracks. The victims were Cathy Jones and Robert Jones. They were shot to the back of the head.
Jenny- Alright let's get the tire tracks to the lab.
Magda- Yeah. Any witnesses?
Officer- This woman over here.
Jenny- Ok thank you.

Magda and Jenny walked over to the woman. She looked about 50. She seemed frightened for some reason.

Magda- Ma'am. I am Inspector Ramirez and this is my partner Inspector Ex-- I mean Inspector Schroller. We're from the San Francisco Police Department. We were informed that you were a witness to this crime.
Woman- Yes I saw a man with a rifle getting out of a car.
Magda- What was the mke of the car?
Woman- Brown.
Jenny- That's it?
Woman- I am 53 years old. My eyesight isn't what is used to be Inspector.
Jenny- Ok do you remember what the man looked like?
Woman- He was tall.
Magda- *Looked at Jenny rolling her eyes* Ok we will be in touch Mrs...
Woman- Miss Parker.
Magda- Ok Miss Parker it is most likely we will need to question you again.
Woman- *Looked worried*
Jenny- Ma'am are you ok?
Woman- Yes. Fine.

Kate- Jenny, Magda, I got information on the case. The tire tracks belong to a Brown Elantra. He also left prints on the bodies.
Jenny- Not to smart now is he?
Kate- His name is Bryan Parker.
Magda- Parker. That's the name of the woman we questioned.
Jenny- We need to bring her back in here.

They sent a patrol car to pick her up and bring her into the station. They had her waiting in an interrogation room as Jenny and Magda watched her through the window. She was crying her eyes out. They finally went in.

Magda- Miss Parker, giving false information to a police officer is not a good idea. Why didn't you tell us the killer of a newly wed couple was your husband?
Woman- I don't know. I was shocked at the time I guess.
Jenny- Well you couldn't have been that shocked. Remembering that a killer is your husband doesn't leave your memory that well. Tell us exactly what happened NOW!
Woman- Alright! Bryan was married to Cathy. They were married for 5 years. Then Cathy wanted a divorce and it broke Bryan's heart but he accepted it. Robert Jones was his best friend. He and Cathy were dating for a couple months until he proposed to her. Bryan was devistated. About 1 year later he met me and 2 years after that, Cathy and Bryan were married. She got pregnant right away. Cathy told Bryan during their marriage that she didn't want kids. Cathy gave birth to a son about 3 months ago. He wanted to kidnap the son to raise him as his own. He felt that baby should be his. So he asked me to help him out but I refused. He brought me along anyway to help with the kid. I thought if I didn't, the baby would get hurt. I only came to help the baby. Then when Cathy and Robert struggled, he shot them. *Starts to cry* Then he didn't even look at me and bolted with the baby in his car. That is all I know I swear. I don't know where he is.

Meanwhile, CD and Nate are at home. CD is still in bed and Nate is waiting on her hand and foot. Nate had to run to the store quickly to get her more spray cheese.

CD- You sure you don't mind?
Nate- No it's ok. So thats 5 cans of srapy cheese, two bags of White Cheddar Cheese popcorn, 3 bags of Sour Cream and Cheddar chips, 1 bag of Cool Ranch Doritos, and 5 bags of Nacho cheese Doritos.
CD- And the Cheese Doodles. Don't forget the Cheese Doodles. *Smiles*
Nate- Ok I will be back in a flash.

When he left, CD got up. Nate felt her getting up and ran back into the apartment.

Nate- What are you doing??
CD- What are you doing back?
Nate- I felt vibrations of you getting up and--
CD- Vibrations??
Nate- Yes. What are you doing out of bed?
CD- I was only getting some Iced Tea.
Nate- I will get it for you.
CD- You know, I think when the Doctor said I have to stay in bed, I think she meant I couldn't work or do anything straining. I don't think getting a drink is in that catagory.
Nate- Well I do. Now get back into bed!
CD- FINE! *Grins*
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I hope you liked it. Again, sorry for making you wait so long.

planet_stella
04-15-2004, 01:47 PM
VIBRATIONS?!?!?! LMAO!!! That was soo great Kelly! Post more! And don't make us wait so long!:D

Snowfall
04-16-2004, 12:57 AM
Awww, that was wonderful, Kelly! Nate is such a sweetie....post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-18-2004, 11:34 AM
Thanks everyone. I'm glad you like it. I found time to post a little more. (Since for once I wasn't sleeping ;) )
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When Nate came back, he went into CD's bedroom to find she wasn't there and began to panic. He looked all over the apartment to find her. He finally found her in the baby's room. It was yellow with the old fashioned Winnie the Pooh crib, changing table, mobiles, and other funiture on it. She was sitting in a rocking chair and just dazed.

Nate- Sweety, what are you doing in here?
CD- *Came out of her daze* I was just thinking.
Nate- *Came closer to her* About what?
CD- Thinking about whether or not I am cut out for this. Whether I will be a good mother.
Nate- You will be a great mother.
CD- I don't know. *Teary* My mother wasn't the best and I am sure she thought the same when she was about to have me. What if I do the same to my baby that she did to me?
Nate- You won't. Trust me. I saw how happy you were when you found out you were pregnant. I saw how happy you were when you and I decorated this room. You were glowing. You are going to love this baby with all your heart and so will I. You know we are going to be great parents to this baby and I will always be here to help you through this.
CD- Thanks. *Smiles* But what about Captain? She knows about us now. We won't be able to work together.
Nate- Well I would rather work somewhere else than not be this baby's father. You and my child come first, not work.
CD- You really mean that?
Nate- Of course I do. I love you CD. And I love our baby.
CD- We love you too. *Kisses Nate*
Nate- Well enough lovey dovey stuff. What are you doing out of bed young lady??
CD- You had a brief shining moment there Nate.
Nate- *Laughs* Come on. I got you your food.

CD had a huge smile across her face and rushed out to the kitchen to get her chips and cheese.
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planet_stella
04-18-2004, 03:11 PM
That was soo sweet and cute and adorable.....Awwwwww.....But way too short!! Post more SOOOON! :bighug: Rasa:heart: Kelly

Snowfall
04-19-2004, 12:08 AM
Originally posted by planet_stella
That was soo sweet and cute and adorable.....Awwwwww.....But way too short!! Post more SOOOON!

What Rasa said!
:D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-21-2004, 09:54 AM
Aww thanks. Sorry it's long in between posts.
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After a week of working as hard as they could, Jenny and Magda still haven't found who had done this. It was now harder since there is now a kidnapping involved. There was no call however for ransom which meant he is planning on keeping him. All of a sudden, Cathy cam rushing through the doors of the Felony Division.

Miss Parker- Inspectors! Can I please talk to you.
Magda- Come with us.

They lead her into an interrogation room.

Miss Parker- Bryan called me about an hour ago. He was asking me what to do since he was crying so hard. I told him to take him to County General because baby's aren't supposed to be crying so hard. I know he is going there and I got the number he called from. *she wrote it on a piece of paper*
Jenny- Thank you very much Miss Parker.
Miss Parker- I know the baby won't be hurt but he is no good with Bryan all by himself.
Magda- We will go there now.

They went to the hospital while officers tracked the phone number. When they found the house where the number was coming from, uniforms went to the house and found baby toys, bottles, playpins, etc. They also found a shirt with blood stains on it. You can tell someone tried to get it off but it didn't work. They took the shirt as evidence. When Jinny and Magda went to the hospital they tried to hide the fact that they were cops and called ahead so they can go into the pediactric ER to see if he was there. A man was sitting down waiting to go in. He was with a baby boy that looked about 3 months old. Jenny went to sit next to him. Magda gave her a look like 'What are you doing?' Jenny gave a look like 'Trust me.' She sat next to him.

Jenny- That's a beatiful son you have.
Guy- Thank you.
Jenny- How old is he?
Guy- Almost 4 months old. *Baby smiled*
Jenny- He is adorable.
Guy- Do you have a baby being looked at right now?
Jenny- *Thinking of what to say* Yes, my husband is with my little girl right now.
Guy- Oh. What's wrong with her?
Jenny- High fever. What's wrong with your son?
Guy- He has been crying rather hard. I wanted to make sure nothing was wrong.
Jenny- My name is Rachael Louis. What's your name?
Guy- Bryan Parker nice to meet you.

They shook hands but Jenny wouldn't let go of his. She quickly took out handcuffs while Magda came rushing over and grabbed the baby.

Bryan- Wha--what's going on??
Jenny- Inspector Schroller, San Francisco Police Department and you Bryan Parker are under arrest. You have the right to remain silent....

When they arrested him, they took the baby to Cathy's mother as she requested. When they got back, Kate came out of her office.

Kate- Good work Inspectors. Magda can I see you in my office.
Magda- Sure.

They walked into her office. Magda can tell by the look on Kate's face that this was not good.

Kate- Magda...I'm sorry..but I just got a call from Attorney Ellindford.
Magda- That's Frank Malatris's lawyer. Oh no..
Kate- Yes. He is out of prison.
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babyexstead
04-21-2004, 10:27 AM
You had him get out of jail? Why? LOL......GOOD JOB!!! POST MORE.....I'll check back when I get home at about 3ish.

Snowfall
04-22-2004, 12:03 AM
That was great, Kelly! Post more soon. :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-07-2004, 12:23 AM
Hey guys. I'm sorry I haven't been keeping this very updated. Had a very hard last 2 weeks. Anyway, here is a little more.
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Kate- Magda...I'm sorry..but I just got a call from Attorney Ellindford.
Magda- That's Frank Malatris's lawyer. Oh no..
Kate- Yes. He is out of prison.
Magda- What? How can this be??
Kate- I know. Apparently his lawyer said at the parole hearing that he was devistated about Jinny cheating on him and the judge bought it.
Magda- Jinny didn't cheat on him. She told him it was over.
Kate- I know but no one can prove that and that is what the ADA is counting on. There will still be a trial but for now, there is nothing we can do.
Magda- No. No I won't believe you. I can't believe you.
Kate- I'm sorry Magda.
Magda- Me too.

With that she left Kate's office and grabbed her coat. She passed by Jenny.

Jenny- Magda?

She ignored everyone and walked away. She went home where she spent the whole night in her room. She has been feeling so guilty since it happened. She didn't stop Frank when Jinny was alive and she can't stop him now when she is dead. She spent most of the time crying and again, feeling guilty. Suddenly, a bright light came into the room. There was a woman standing there from what Magda could see. She seemed to be wearing a white silky dress. Magda looked into the light. She had tears coming down her face. Then she realized what the bright light was. It was hard to believe but it was true. It was--Jinny.
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I know it isn't much but it's something lol

Snowfall
05-07-2004, 12:32 AM
Wow, how sweet! Now maybe "Jinny" can help Magda find a way to keep that horrible excuse for a human being in prison. ;)

CandyBasso
05-09-2004, 02:42 PM
Awwww.....that was so sad and so sweet! I hope Frank will go back to the jail soon! Post more!

MinnIeMcKeOn
05-09-2004, 10:20 PM
Please post more!! I really like it!!**x0x0Jessie:talk:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-10-2004, 02:07 PM
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Magda looked into the light. She had tears coming down her face. Then she realized what the bright light was. It was hard to believe but it was true. It was--Jinny. Magda was stunned. She could barely move. The woman came coming closer to her until the woman was standing right in front of her.

Jinny- Hey Mag.
Magda- Jinny? Is it really you?
Jinny- I certainly hope so. *Laughs*
Magda- I just can't believe you are here. I have missed you so much.
Jinny- I have missed you too but I do watch you everyday. Was it really necessary to punch Stacey's nose? *Laughs*
Magda- I didn't like the way she was talking about you.
Jinny- Mag, I know this may be hard to realize but I have been gone for about 7 months. You have to let go of me.
Magda- I can't. I will never let go.
Jinny- I don't want you feeling guilty. You haven't done anything wrong.
Magda- I could have tried my best to prevent you from--.
Jinny- Magda listen to me. I know you don't like to say this but Mag, I'm dead and there is nothing anyone can do to take that back. What happened did happen. You did everything you could. Everyone did everything they could. If anyone did anything wrong, it was me.
Magda- No. No--
Jinny- I was stupid. I didn't listen to you or Kate. I should have. You have no reason to feel guilty. You have to believe that.
Magda- I am trying. Believe me I am. But no matter how hard I try, I still can't understand.
Jinny- I know it will take some time. But promise me you will try harder. I can't stand to see you like this..or Teddy.
Magda- What do you mean?
Jinny- He is in worse shape than you. He hasn't worked since it happened. He can't even walk through The Division doors.
Magda- How is he surviving?
Jinny- His father loaned him some money. His father was the only one that liked me *laughs* so he understands why Teddy is acting this way. Which is why I need you to do me a favor.
Magda- Anything.
Jinny- I need you to go see him. Try and talk to him the way I talked to you today.
Magda- Can't you go and see him too?
Jinny- I can't. I don't know what will happen if he sees me like this. And I can't visit too many people. Everyone will start to think we aren't really dead. That is why I chose to see you. You are strong. I know Kate is upset to but she is holding her own. Teddy is to upset to see me. You are upset but I felt it would be better to see you.
Magda- I wanted to see you too. I just didn't think it was possible.
Jinny- I am always watching you. I will be with you forever. Jenny is a very special partner you will have. Don't punch her nose please?
Magda- *Laughs a little* You always did have that sense of humor.
Jinny- Well I got to go. Remember, try and talk to Teddy. I might be able to visit him soon but not now. Try and tell him what I have told you.
Magda- I will.
Jinny- And Mag..
Magda- Yeah?
Jinny- Let go. Try to let go of me. I will always be with you but I can't stand to see you and Teddy fall apart over this.
Magda- I will try and I am sure Teddy will try too.
Jinny- Alright. I must leave now. I love you Magda.
Magda- I love you Jin.

Jinny smiled and Magda smiled back. Jinny faded away. Magda wiped her tears away and grabbed her coat and raced over to Teddy so she would keep her promise.
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Snowfall
05-11-2004, 12:56 AM
Awwww.....that was so sweet and so sad. And wonderful! Post more soon, Kelly! :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-25-2004, 03:44 PM
Hey is anyone but Tara reading this? Anyway, here is more.
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Magda wiped her tears away and grabbed her coat and raced over to Teddy so she would keep her promise. When she got to his apartment, she knocked on the door. There was no answer but she heard a TV inside. She knocked on the door even harder and there was still no answer. She twisted the knob. To her surprise, it was unlocked. She walked in and Teddy's apartment was a mess. It looked a lot like Jinny's when she was drinking. There were clothes all over and pizza boxes. There was no real booze around. Just beer. She finally found him in his bedroom. He looked awful and so depressed. He looked like he hadn't shaved in weeks.

Magda- Teddy..
Teddy- Magda? What are you doing here. It's 11:00 at night.
Magda- I needed to see you.
Teddy- I am sorry Magda but I can't talk now. A TV show is coming on.
Magda- You're watching Lifetime?
Teddy-Yeah. They got great shows on here.

Magda sighed and turned off the TV.

Teddy- Hey!! The Golden Girls were coming on!!
Magda- Get hold of yourself. What has happened to you??
Teddy- Nothing. I just changed a little bit.
Magda- A little bit?? You are a train wreck!
Teddy- Stop it Magda. I like the way that I am.
Magda- Teddy, you have to get it together. You can't like the way you are. You are like this because of Jinny.
Teddy- No I'm not. I told you I am fine!!
Magda- Stop pretending Teddy. You haven't even been to work.
Teddy- I am taking a break.
Magda- A break is 1-4 weeks. You took a 8 month break??
Teddy- I can't go to work. I can't do it.
Magda- Teddy. It's ok if you just admit that you miss her. We all do.
Teddy- *Starts to cry* I do miss her. It's easy for you. You only miss her. It's my fault she is dead.

It was 11:30PM. CD and Nate were fast asleep in their bed. All of a sudden, CD jumped up.

CD- Nate..Nate wake up.
Nate- *Moaned* What's wrong honey?
CD- My water just broke.
Nate- Does this mean I have to wake up?
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CandyBasso
05-25-2004, 04:17 PM
That was soo soo sad:( Poor Teddy, I feel sorry for him....

And yaaayyyy!!!!!!!!!I'm so happy that CD's gonna have the baby soon! Post more!:D

Snowfall
05-26-2004, 01:26 AM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
CD- My water just broke.
Nate- Does this mean I have to wake up?


LMAO!!!!!!! :lol: Nate's reaction is so funny! Post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-10-2004, 01:14 AM
Sorry it's been long. Anyone still interested here? lol
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It was 11:30PM. CD and Nate were fast asleep in their bed. All of a sudden, CD jumped up.

CD- Nate..Nate wake up.
Nate- *Moaned* What's wrong honey?
CD- My water just broke.
Nate- Does this mean I have to wake up?
CD- That would be a pretty good idea yeah!!!

Nate, just realizing what CD had said, jumped up out of bed.

Nate- Oh my god, you're in labor!?!
CD- Uh..yeah!
Nate- Well why didn't you say anything??
CD- *rolled her eyes* Just call the doctor.
Nate- Ok..where's the phone??
CD- On the hook where it always is..

Magda- Teddy, it wasn't your fault!
Teddy- That's what everyone keeps telling me. You don't get it. I should have done something more.
Magda- Teddy, listen to me. I had a visit from someone. Don't think I am crazy but it was from--Jinny.
Teddy- Ok I thought I was delusional.
Magda- No I'm serious.
Teddy- Yeah Jinny Exstead, a woman who has been dead for 8 months, went to visit you.
Magda- Teddy, you don't have to believe me. She told me about you. She told me how you were doing and how you haven't been back to work or the Division since it happened and how you've been borrowing money from you're dad to survive.
Teddy- How did you know all that??
Magda- I told you, I talked to Jinny!!
Teddy- Ok and "if" you talked to Jinny, what does it have to do with me?
Magda- She wants you to stop feeling so guilty.
Teddy- Um..it's getting late. I think you should go.
Magda- Teddy--
Teddy- Please.

Teddy got up and opened the door for Magda. Without saying a word, she walked out the door. As soon as he shut the door, she heard Teddy start crying. Meanwhile, Nate called the doctor and was told to bring CD to the hospital. She would meet them there.

Nate- Ok have we got everything?
CD- I think so.
Nate- Ok let's go.
CD- I just have to grab something.

Nate was already walking out the door and didn't hear her. He put the bags in the car and started to drive away. CD walked out the door and noticed what he was doing. She pulled out her cellphone.

Nate- *Answered his cell phone* Basso?
CD- Hi honey.
Nate- Hi sweetie. How ar-- wait a minute..where are you!?!
CD- Well remember when you asked me if we had everything?
Nate- Yeah.
CD- Well you forgot something..
Nate- What?
CD- THE PREGNANT WOMAN!!!!

Nate of course, felt like an ass and went back to pick her up. They got ot the hospital. While CD was being checked out by the doctors, Nate called everyone. First was Kate. Kate was sound asleep and was a little grumpy when her phone rang.

Kate- *Sounding miserable* McCafferty?
Nate- Uh hi Captain.
Kate- Nate Basso..what a pleasant surprise. It's nice to hear from you at 1:00 IN THE MORNING!!!
Nate- I'm sorry but I wanted to tell you CD went into labor. We are at the hospital.
Kate- Oh Nate I'm sorry. It's just early *Giggles* Ok I am on my way over.
Nate- Ok. I gotta call everyone else.
Kate- Nate, go be with CD. I will call them.
Nate- Thanks. I'll see you when you get here.
Kate- Bye.

Nate went back to CD's room.

Nate- How are you doing baby?
CD- Just great! I am here in excrushiating pain and you ask me how I am doing??
Nate- I'm sorry I just--
CD- No I'm sorry honey. I am just in a lot of pain.
Nate- I know. I'm sorry you have to go through this. I just called Kate. She is on her way down and she is calling the others.
CD- I really want Jinny to be here.
Nate- I know sweetie.
CD- *Started to breathe as another contraction came on*

Kate got dressed and when she got in the car, she pulled out her cell phone and started calling people. First she called Magda.

Magda- *Answered her phone* Hello?.. Oh hi Captain... Yeah... Oh my god I am on my way..Ok..Bye.

Kate then called Raina.

Raina- *Answered the phone* Hello?
Kate- Raina, it's me.
Raina- What's up Captain?
Kate- CD's in labor.
Raina- Really?! OOH I am soo excited!!!!
Kate- *Laughs* Calm down. I called Magda and we are both going to the hospital.
Raina- I will be right there.
Kate- Ok bye.
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There ya go. I will try to post more tomorrow. :D

Snowfall
06-10-2004, 01:24 AM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Nate- Ok..where's the phone??
CD- On the hook where it always is..




Nate was already walking out the door and didn't hear her. He put the bags in the car and started to drive away. CD walked out the door and noticed what he was doing. She pulled out her cellphone.



ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol: :lol: :lol: That was so freakin hilarious! Post more soon, Kelly!

CandyBasso
06-10-2004, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Nate- *Answered his cell phone* Basso?
CD- Hi honey.
Nate- Hi sweetie. How ar-- wait a minute..where are you!?!
CD- Well remember when you asked me if we had everything?
Nate- Yeah.
CD- Well you forgot something..
Nate- What?
CD- THE PREGNANT WOMAN!!!!

LMAO!!!! That was SOO hilarious!!! I loved it! Now post more!!!!:D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-12-2004, 12:32 AM
I'm glad you both liked it. I wish a lot more people were reading this but I will post more for you two..
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So Kate, Magda, and Raina were all on their way to the hospital, CD and Nate were waiting anxiously for their baby to arrive. Nate was in the waiting room waiting for Kate to arrive. CD wanted Kate to be in there with her. At 1:25AM, Kate was the first to arrive.

Kate- Nate, how is she?
Nate- She is ok. She is 4 cm.
Kate- Why aren't you in there with her?
Nate- I was waiting for you. She wants you to be in there with us.
Kate- Really?
Nate- Of ocurse. You are like a mother to her.
Kate- I would be happy to go in there with her.
Nate- Well you go ahead. I will wait for Raina and Magda.
Kate- Ok. What room?
Nate- 213.
Kate- Thanks Nate.

Kate found CD's room and walked in. She saw CD laying in the bed. The look on CD's face amazed Kate. She smiled soo sweetly at Kate.

CD- Oh I'm glad you're finally here.
Kate- Believe me, I am happier to be here. I am so glad you want me to be here. How are you doing?
CD- Well I am never having kids again. *laughs* Thank god this is almost over!
Kate- Well think about the wonderful life you will have at the end of this.
CD- I just hope I will be a good mother.
Kate- You will be a great mother. The best.
CD- Thanks Kate. *smiles*

Meanwhile, Raina and Magda showed up at the same time.

Magda- Hey Nate. How's CD?
Nate- She's doing good. She is 4 cm dilated.
Magda- Oh Nate I am so happy for you.
Raina- I cant wait for the baby to be born! I will play with it and kiss it and cuddle it..
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More to come later..:) :wave:

Snowfall
06-12-2004, 01:25 AM
Awwwww, Kelly, that was so incredibly SWEET! :D CD and Nate are going to make the best parents.....awwww.....post more soon! I can't wait for that baby! :)

CandyBasso
06-13-2004, 01:55 PM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
I cant wait for the baby to be born!

Yeah...I can't wait for it to be born either! Geez Kelly.....give CD a break and let the baby be born!:rolleyes: Post more!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-21-2004, 02:08 AM
Ok you want CD to have her baby? Ok you got it!
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Raina- I cant wait for the baby to be born! I will play with it and kiss it and cuddle it..
Nate- *Trying to interrupt* OK Thanks Raina. Well I am going to go back in there.
Magda- Let us know.
Nate- I will. *Leaves*
Raina- That was a little rude. It's like he meant to cut me off like that.
Magda- *Rolls eyes*

Nate got back into the room to find Kate holding CD's hand while CD is trying to breathe through another contraction.

Nate- Is she ok??
Kate- *Giggles* Yeah she is having another.
CD- *Takes cleansing breath* I can't take much more of this.
Nate- It's ok honey it's almost over.
CD- Shut up! You're the one that did this to me in the first place!!
Nate- Well I--

Kate touched his shoulder to get his attention. She motioned to him to just ignore it. It was the pain talking. Nate nodded. About 2 more hours later, a nurse came in.

Nurse- How are you doing Candace?
CD- I would be much better if you killed the man who put me in this position!
Nate- *Looked scared but remembered what Kate said before and grinned*
Nurse- *Laughs* *Talks while checking how dilated she is* Well I don't know if we can do that. You are progressing quickly so it looks like it won't be much longer. You are 7cm. Only a little more of this.
CD- Thank God!!!!
Nurse- I will be back in a little bit.
Kate- Thanks. *Nurse left*
CD- Nate I just realized that we haven't even picked out a name yet.
Nate- Omg we didn't! Well how about I say a boy's name and you say a girls name and Kate tells us if they are good.
CD- Ok sounds fair. You go first.
Nate- Ok well I had this imaginary friend when I was little. He went with me everywhere. I loved him so much. On weekdays, we would go--
CD- JUST GET TO THE DAMN NAME!!!
Nate- Ok sheesh..anyway, its..Spyke!

CD and Kate looked at each other and stared back at him with weird expressions.
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Ok so I changed my mind;) Im soo evil!!!:angdev:

Snowfall
06-22-2004, 12:39 AM
You are sooooo evil, Kelly! ;) :lol: That was so funny though! I love this fic! Post more soon!

Inspector Bariteau
06-22-2004, 04:26 PM
GREAT POST! NOW LET HER HAVE HER BABY ALREADY! Geesh!!! I wanna read more!!!!! I love CD when she's mad. hehehehe haha She was like: Get to the damn name!!!!!!! haha Loved it! MORE!

TDfan69
06-22-2004, 04:56 PM
okay, I am playing catch up here. This iis one funny story, keep it up! I hope you are feeling better!

Wendi

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-22-2004, 05:48 PM
I'll take the part that I am evil as a compliement:D And hey Wendi! Welcome to the fic. I hope you like it and thanks I am feeling better. :) Here's more..
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Nate- Omg we didn't! Well how about I say a boy's name and you say a girls name and Kate tells us if they are good.
CD- Ok sounds fair. You go first.
Nate- Ok well I had this imaginary friend when I was little. He went with me everywhere. I loved him so much. On weekdays, we would go--
CD- JUST GET TO THE DAMN NAME!!!
Nate- Ok sheesh..anyway, its..Spyke!

CD and Kate looked at each other and stared back at him with weird expressions.

CD- I don't think so!!
Nate- Hey! Kate has the say in it. Kate, what do you think?
Kate- Well..I don't think so!!
Nate- *Pouts* And what is your name Miss Perfect?
CD- *Grins at Nate* Lyla.
Kate- Aww how sweet!
Nate- *Mummbles* Of course..
Kate- What Nate?
Nate- Of course it's sweet. *Forces a smile*
CD- Ok ok if it's a boy, we can name him Spyke.
Nate- *Smiles* Really? Thanks sweetie. You're the best. *Kisses her*

CD took a deep breath as another contraction came on. Kate leaned into her.

Kate- You really wanna have a son named Spyke?
CD- *Talks in between breaths* That's ok..I know it's..going to be a girl.
Kate- Ah you got the feeling huh?
CD- Oh yeah.

CD said and then she got this look on her face. Nate looked at her. CD was in so much pain and there was nothing he could do about it. Then the doctor came in.

Doctor- Hi CD. How's everything going in here?
CD- Oh please let this be over. I can't stand the pain anymore.

She said that with tears in her eyes. The Doctor looked at the fetal heart monitor.

Doctor- CD, I'm sorry but the baby's heart rate is lower than I would like. We will see if it goes down within the next few minutes.
CD- *Paniced* Is my baby going to be ok??
Doctor- Don't worry. If the heart rate doesn't go down, we will do a c-section. It's going to be ok CD. I promise.
CD- Ok.
Doctor- Alright I'll be back in a few minutes. *Leaves*
CD- Nate, I'm scared.
Nate- I know. It'll be ok. You heard what the doctor said. *Kisses her forehead* It's going to be ok.
____________________________________________________I hope you liked it. Let me know. :wave:

Snowfall
06-23-2004, 01:04 AM
Awwwww, poor CD! I hope everything goes OK. Post more soon! :)

Inspector Bariteau
06-23-2004, 10:54 AM
Awesome Kelly! Keep it up! And I hope she has her kids before she turns into an old lady! hehehe That would be a LOOOOOOOOOONG time! LOL

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-26-2004, 02:04 PM
Sorry guys but she still isn't quite there to having the baby yet. It will be in the next post..I promise! ;)
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The nurse came in with a gurney.

Nate- Don't worry honey. Everything is going to be alright.
CD- I love you.
Nate- I love you more. *Kiss*
Kate- I will be waiting right here.
CD- Thanks Cap'n.

With that they wheeled her off to the operating room. Kate went back out to the waiting room while Nate got dressed in scrubs. Magda and Raina got up as they saw Kate approaching. She wasn't smiling but wasn't crying either. They didn't know what was going on.

Magda- Captain, what's going on?
Kate- CD has to have an emergency C-section.
Raina- Oh my god. Is CD ok?
Kate- She's fine. The baby's heart rate was going down so they are going to do a c-section. It is the easiest and safest way.

Magda couldn't help but think about Jinny. First it was her best friend, now her friends baby. She started to get teats in her eyes. Kate put her hand on her shoulder.

Kate- Magda, it's going to be ok.
Magda- I know. I am just being a baby. *Wiped tears*

In the operating room, Nate had just come out of the room where he was getting sterelized and walked over to CD. He grabbed her hand.

Nate- I am here CD. I will not leave your side.
CD- Ok.
Doctor- Now CD, when I tell you to, count backwards from 100. Ok?
CD- You got it.
Doctor- *Few minutes later* Ok CD, start counting.
CD- 100...99....98...9..7...9..6...9.....5.......*Asleep*
Doctor- Ok let's get started.
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Did ya like? Anyone want more?

Inspector Bariteau
06-26-2004, 03:12 PM
WHAT THE HOLY &%^$ DO YOU THINK???????????????????

Snowfall
06-27-2004, 01:17 AM
That was soooo great, Kelly! I always love the CD/Nate parts so much. :) Bring it on, baby! :)

CandyBasso
06-28-2004, 03:22 PM
The CD/Nate parts were so sweet......Get your ass back here and post more!!!!! NOW!:D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-29-2004, 01:49 AM
Hey. Here's more go
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Doctor- Now CD, when I tell you to, count backwards from 100. Ok?
CD- You got it.
Doctor- *Few minutes later* Ok CD, start counting.
CD- 100...99....98...9..7...9..6...9.....5.......*Asleep*
Doctor- Ok let's get started.

Kate, Magda, and Raina sat in the waiting room, waiting impatiently to hear some news. Kate didn't want to bring this up but they really needed to talk about this.

Kate- Magda, I know this isn't really the best time but I think we need to talk about this afternoon.
Magda- Oh that.
Kate- His lawyer is one of the best. We are going to need to do an investigation. Now you are too involved in this case..
Magda- Captain, if we need to do this investigation, don't tell me I can't--
Kate- Actually, I want you and Jenny leading it. I know I am not supposed to but you are one of my best Inspectors.
Magda- Thanks Captain. I want to nail this bastard.
Kate- And we will.

In the operating room, Nate sat there hoding CD's hand as she slept while they were cutting her open. Nate stared at her, daydreaming about what their life will be like when they have their baby. As Nate was coming out of it, he heard a baby's cry.

Doctor- It's a girl.
Nate- Oh my God. *Looked at CD* We have a girl honey. How is she?
Doctor- She looks just fine. Would you like to cut the cord?
Nate- I would love to!

He walked over to his daughter. He took the scissors and cut his daughter's umbilical cord. She was cleaned up, weighed, and taken to the nursery. Nate sat back down next to CD. He felt like everything was perfect..until now.

Nurse- Doctor, she is bleeding out.

Nate overheard this and got very worried.

Nate- What? What's going on?
Doctor- Nate there is a little problem with CD. She is bleeding more than she is supposed to. We may have to do a histerectomy.
Nate- What? No. You can't.
Doctor- We may have no choice.
Nate- There has to be another option.
Doctor- Yes. Loosing CD.
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Snowfall
06-29-2004, 02:01 AM
KELLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :eek: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Please let CD be OK! I have to know! Post more soon! :eek:

Inspector Bariteau
06-29-2004, 11:50 AM
GO KEL-KEL, GO KEL-KEL! lol *Stirs the pot motion* hehe This is my favorite fic of yours!! I like the ending line...losing CD?!?!? I DON'T THINK SO BUDDY. hehe

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
06-30-2004, 02:08 AM
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Doctor- Nate there is a little problem with CD. She is bleeding more than she is supposed to. We may have to do a histerectomy.
Nate- What? No. You can't.
Doctor- We may have no choice.
Nate- There has to be another option.
Doctor- Yes. Loosing CD. We have to do this.
Nate- You can't!

In the waiting room, Magda, Raina, and Kate stood up when they saw a nurse. Kate went up to her.

Kate- Excuse me, we are here for Candace DeLorenzo. She is having a c-section. We have been waiting and no one has come out to talk to us.
Nurse- I will ask someone for you.
Kate- Thank you.

They sat in that waiting room for another hour and didn't hear anything. They finally saw Nate walking toward them.

Kate- Nate, what's going on? You took so long.
Nate- It's a girl. 6 lbs 8 oz.
Raina- That's wonderful.
Kate- And CD?
Nate- We almost lost her. She started bleeding a lot and they wanted to do a histerectomy.
Magda- Oh no.
Nate- She's ok. They were able to stop the bleeding and she still has her uterus.
Kate- Thank god.
Nate- Well I am going to go back to her. I will let you know when she can have visitors so you can see the baby.
Magda- Thanks Nate..I mean Daddy! *Hugs Nate*
Nate- *Big smile* Thanks Mag.
Raina- Aw me to! *Hugs Nate*
Nate- Thanks Raina. And thanks Captain for everything. *Hugs Kate*
Kate- *Smiled and nodded* Go be with CD and your daughter.
Nate- My daughter. That sounds soo good. *Smiles*
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CandyBasso
06-30-2004, 10:23 AM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Magda- Thanks Nate..I mean Daddy! *Hugs Nate*

Awwww, that line was sooooo sweet! And I'm glad that CD and the baby are ok. Post more!

Snowfall
07-01-2004, 01:25 AM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Kate- *Smiled and nodded* Go be with CD and your daughter.
Nate- My daughter. That sounds soo good. *Smiles*
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! *tear* I loved that part! How sweet! Post more soon! :D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
07-07-2004, 07:58 AM
I got my pc back yaay!! I also see there is a new page..thanks Tara! *Sigh* Ok here's more..
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Kate- *Smiled and nodded* Go be with CD and your daughter.
Nate- My daughter. That sounds soo good. *Smiles*

He left for CD's room.

Kate- Let's all go get some sleep. We'll come and visit CD tomorrow.

They nodded and left for home. CD was still asleep in her room. Nate sat in a rocking chair next to her bed. CD's eyes flickered open. She was very sore but all the pain went away as she saw what was in front of her. Nate was rocking in the chair with a little girl wrapped in a pink blanket with bright blue eyes and a pink bow in her hair. Nate was singing to her..

Nate- Hush little baby, don't say a word. Daddy's gonna buy you a mocking bird. If that mocking bird don't sing, Daddy's gonna buy her a diamond ring..

CD- *Smiles* *Weakly*You're buying her rings already?
Nate looked up at CD, startled but so happy she is finally awake.
Nate- Well I need to be the best Daddy ever! Hey honey. How are you feeling?
CD- Sore *Giggles*
Nate- I'm not surprised. You gave us quite a scare. I am guessing you would like to hold your child? *BIG smile*

He handed his little girl to his mommy. She excitedly took her daughter into her arms. She looked at her daughter.

CD- She is so beautiful.
Nate- Of course. She looks just like you.
CD- What happened in there?
Nate- You were losing a lot of blood. They were going to do a histerectomy.
CD- Oh my God..they didnt...?
Nate- No sweetie. I wouldn't let them. *Sounded like a hero*
CD- Thanks. So I am ok?
Nate- You're perfect. We're all perfect. So, what's her name?
CD- Well I'm sorry but it isn't Spike. *Giggles*
Nate- Ok fiiiiiine! *Pouts then smiles* I couldn't have my little girl named that anyway.
CD- Shall we go with Lyla then?
Nate- Lyla Louise.
CD- That's perfect. I love you Nate.
Nate- I love you too.

They kissed and spent the next hour just staring at their little girl. Then there was a knock on the door.

Kate- Can I come in.
CD- Please do.
Nate- Come see my..our daughter.
Kate- *Walked over* Oh my gosh she's gorgeous!!
CD- Thanks. She is perfect.
Kate- She sure is. May I?
CD- Oh absolutely! *Talks to baby* Go say hello to Grandma Kate.

Kate was so happy when she heard that. CD handed her the baby.

Kate- Aww. What's her name?
Nate- Lyla. Lyla Louise.
Kate- Louise after..
CD- *Nodded*
Kate- It's perfect.
CD- I thought so too.

Then there was another knock on the door. It was Magda and Raina.

Magda- Hi. We had to come back. How are you feeling?
CD- I'm fine. Sore though.
Raina- Ooh Cap can I hold her?

Kate looked at CD for approval. CD laughed.

CD- Sure Raina.
Kate- Be careful *Smiled* *Handed Lyla to Raina*
Raina- I will. Oh she is so cute. And sooo tiny.
CD- Thank God! If she were any bigger, I wouldn't have been able to move while I was pregnant! *They all laugh*
Magda- My turn.

Raina pouted but handed the little girl to Magda.

Magda- Oh this brings back a lot of memories.
CD- I bet. Now I can get some good advice.
Raina- What's her name?
CD- Oh I'm sorry. I wasn't thinking *gigles* It's Lyla Louise.
Magda- Lou-- *looked at Kate*

Kate nodded. Magda got a little teary but held it back and smiled.
Magda- Well hello Lyla. Nice to meet you.
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So how was that? Let me know! ;)

Snowfall
07-08-2004, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
I got my pc back yaay!! I also see there is a new page..thanks Tara! *Sigh* Ok here's more..
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They nodded and left for home. CD was still asleep in her room. Nate sat in a rocking chair next to her bed. CD's eyes flickered open. She was very sore but all the pain went away as she saw what was in front of her. Nate was rocking in the chair with a little girl wrapped in a pink blanket with bright blue eyes and a pink bow in her hair. Nate was singing to her..

Nate- Hush little baby, don't say a word. Daddy's gonna buy you a mocking bird. If that mocking bird don't sing, Daddy's gonna buy her a diamond ring..

CD- *Smiles* *Weakly*You're buying her rings already?
Nate looked up at CD, startled but so happy she is finally awake.
Nate- Well I need to be the best Daddy ever! Hey honey. How are you feeling?
CD- Sore *Giggles*
Nate- I'm not surprised. You gave us quite a scare. I am guessing you would like to hold your child? *BIG smile*

He handed his little girl to his mommy. She excitedly took her daughter into her arms. She looked at her daughter.



You're welcome! :D And awwwwwwwwwwwwww, that part was soooo incredibly sweet and beautiful!!! I loved it!!! Post more soon! :D

CandyBasso
07-09-2004, 10:52 AM
Awwwwwww.....that was so sweet! I loved that CD/Nate/Layla Louise part! Post more!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
07-21-2004, 03:46 PM
Sorry it took me forever. We had to get a new computer and I lost everything I wrote on this. Here's more.
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2 days later, CD and Lyla were released from the hospital. They were home and Nate was with them. One night, Lyla was crying and CD was trying to calm her. CD was panicing.

CD- I don't know what she wants. I rocked her, fed her, burped her, changed her,--
Nate- Babies just cry CD. It's ok. *Walked over to CD and Lyla* Here come to Daddy.

Nate picked up Lyla and held her. After a few minutes, Lyla stopped crying. CD felt kinda hurt.

CD- She likes you better than me.
Nate- What? No she doesn't. She just didn't feel like crying anymore and got tired out. Don't think like that CD.
CD- It's true! She doesn't love me!
Nate- Yes she does CD.
CD- I'm going to lie down. You seem to have things UNDER CONTROL! *Left for her bedroom*

Nate sighed. He thought this just might be a bad night for her and she will be alright in the morning. It was 2:30 AM when Lyla started crying again. Usually CD went to go get her but she didn't even move when Lyla cried. Nate got worried.

Nate- CD, don't you want to go see how Lyla is doing?
CD- What's the point? She'll cry until you hold her.

Nate was too tired to argue and went to Lyla's room and fed her. The next morning was busy at the Division. Magda and Jenny were working on Jinny's case.

Magda- You sure you are ok with this?
Jenny- Of course. Why?
Magda- Well I know it feels kind of weird working with me on the death of my partner.
Jenny- I understand and with the way everyone is reacting to it, it seems she was a great person and I want us to catch the bastard that did this to her.
Magda- *Smiled* You know, you remind me a lot of her.
Jenny- Really?
Magda- Yeah. She was always out to do good and she was a hell of a good partner..like you.
Jenny- I guess that's good. You won't punch me! *Laughs and walked over to the filing cabinet*
Magda- *Whispers to herself* And her sense of humor. *Smiles*

Kate then walked out of her office.

Kate- Magda, Jenny, my office. They both walked into Kate's office and sat down.

Kate- We have a little problem. There's no way we can prove Jinny wasn't cheating on Frank.
Magda- Well what proof do they have that she did.
Kate- Well number one, she was with a lot of guys when she was drinking. They want to use that.
Magda- Oh my god..
Kate- And they want to put Teddy on the stand since Jinny cheated on Teddy when they were going together.
Magda- But all that's back when she was drinking. She was sober! She didn't cheat.
Kate- Magda, I hear you but we can't prove she wasn't drinking.
Magda- That son of a bitch!
Kate- We're just going to keep trying. Have you been able to contact the other women he has beaten up?
Magda- No not yet.
Kate- Well I called Teddy down here to talk to him. He should be here any minute. He sounded awful.
Magda- I went to see him the other night..Jin--I heard he was in bad shape so I went to see him.

Kate was curious as to why Magda said Jin but she wasn't going to get into that. Just then there was a knock on the door. It was Teddy.

Teddy- Captain McCafferty.
Kate- Theodore. How are you?
Teddy- Getting there. What's up?
Kate- Well the defense attorney has gotten Frank Malatris out of jail. They want to put you on the stand because Jinny cheated on you when you two were going together. They had him released because he said he said he killed Jinny because she cheated on him. We know she didn't but we can't prove it. Can you help us?
Teddy- I am not going to get involved in this! I'm sorry but I can't help you.

Teddy stormed out of the office. Magda and Kate were stunned. They never saw Teddy act like that before.
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I hope you liked it. Want more? :wave:

Snowfall
07-21-2004, 11:51 PM
Awwww, poor Teddy sounds like he's in depression.....:(

And poor CD and Lyla! Post more soon!

NancyMarcAurora
07-22-2004, 01:23 PM
Teddy probably doesnt want to defend Jinny b/c she hurt him and all..but he loved her and now she is dead and hes been through alot. Anything can make him look like hes not defending her in court and all. Frank could be set free and Teddy prob doesnt want that either..P00r tEddy. Magda and Jenny are really becoming friends. Poor Mag its sad how Jin died and now it seems like Jenny is taking her place. But at least Magdas happy.:( :) Please post more Kelly!!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
07-25-2004, 08:25 PM
I decided to post more since it is my mom's birthday today. HAPPY BIRTHDAY MOM! party:
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Kate- Well the defense attorney has gotten Frank Malatris out of jail. They want to put you on the stand because Jinny cheated on you when you two were going together. They had him released because he said he said he killed Jinny because she cheated on him. We know she didn't but we can't prove it. Can you help us?
Teddy- I am not going to get involved in this! I'm sorry but I can't help you.

Teddy stormed out of the office. Magda and Kate were stunned. They never saw Teddy act like that before.

Jenny- I know I don't know him but what was that all about?
Magda- I'll explain later. Captain, may I take my lunch break now so I can go talk to him?
Kate- Please do. If he doesn't help us, we'll have no case.
Magda- Ok I'll be back soon.

Magda left the station and went to Teddy's apartment. His car wasn't there and he didn't answer the door. He then tried the Anchorside. He found Teddy at the bar. Magda went and sat on the stool next to him. He was doing shots.

Magda- Teddy, what are you doing?
Teddy- Well I am either being depressed or getting drunk. Take your pick.
Magda- Come on Teddy. Let's get out of here. You don't belong here.
Teddy- YES I DO! I don't want to work. I don't want to go home. Everywhere I go reminds me of her. Especially this bar..but Jinny came here to forget her troubles. So I am doing the same.
Magda- And do you remember where that got her? It got her suspended. It was for the best but if it wasn't for this bar, she wouldn't have been suspended in the first place. Jinny made the mistake and she paid her dues. You don't need to be here. Come on let's go back to The Division and talk to Captain. I'll be there with you. It's going to be ok.
Teddy- No! I told you, I don't want to do this. I can't. I got to go.

Teddy left the bar as Magda stood there. She didn't know what she was going to do next. At CD's place, Nate decided to stay home one more day because CD was still acting funny. That day, she stayed in bed. She didn't even hold Lyla. She just lied there crying all day. It was 1:30PM and Nate didn't know what he was going to do. He made a phone call. Nate pulled out his cell phone and dialed.

Nate- Hi it's Nate..I'm fine..She's fine..No CD isn't so great..I need your help..I think she's going through that..um..postpartum depression thing..yeah...can you?...oh great..7 o'clock is fine..we'll be here..thanks. *Hung up* Thank god!
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More will come tomorrow :wave:

Snowfall
07-26-2004, 01:30 AM
Awww, poor everybody! :( And I hope CD feels better soon! Post more soon, Kelly!

NancyMarcAurora
07-26-2004, 11:49 AM
OH nO teDDys geTTing the JinNy diSeaSe! mUst saVe Teddy!! Mores please good job KeLLy*:)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
07-28-2004, 01:40 PM
Ok guys I worked hard on this part lol so I hope you like it..no LOVE it :) It's also the 100th post! YA!!! party:


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Nate- Hi it's Nate..I'm fine..She's fine..No CD isn't so great..I need your help..I think she's going through that..um..postpartum depression thing..yeah...can you?...oh great..7 o'clock is fine..we'll be here..thanks. *Hung up* Thank god!

Magda decided she was not going to talk to Teddy until tonight. She was going to go by his apartment again. It was 6:45PM and there was a knock on CD's door. CD was still lying in bed. When Nate heard the knock, he was on the couch feeding Lyla. He was happy when he heard the knock because he knew the person at the door could talk some sense into CD. He got up and opened the door with Lyla and a bottle in his other arm.

Nate- Oh Captain thank god you're here!
Kate- Nate, what's going on? Hi Lyla! Let me have her. *Nate handed Lyla to Kate* Hi sweetie. How are you? I'm your grandma Kate. Yes.
Nate- Ok CD won't hold the baby, she won't feed the baby, change the baby, she won't even look at the baby.
Kate- Ok let me and Lyla go talk to her. You stay out here ok?
Nate- Ok if you think it will work..

Kate went into CD's bedroom to find her laying down watching TV. Kate didn't show it, but she was extremely worried about this..and confused at the same time. At the hospital, CD seemed to want the baby so much. Now CD was acting like she didn't have a baby. Kate knew at that time, she had to do something.

Kate- Knock knock.
CD- *Looked up* Oh hi Cap. Come on in.
Kate- I found this little baby out in the living room. She looks like she needs her momma.
CD- What would she need me for?
Kate- CD..
CD- Look, I'm sorry..but when I pick her up she keeps crying. When Nate does, she stops. She doesn't like me.
Kate- CD, babies cry. They don't mean to do it..it's just what they do. Maybe at that moment, Nate did comfort her but now she needs you. Look at her..she wants her mother. She want you.
CD- I need to get some rest now. Thanks for coming.
Kate- CD..Na--
CD- Goodnight Captain.
Kate- Night CD.
Kate walked out of the bedroom with a sad confused look on her face. Nate knew it hadn't gone well.
Nate- Nothing?
Kate- Nope..but I got an idea.

While Kate was telling Nate her idea, Magda kept calling Teddy's house but no luck. Then she got a phone call.

Magda- Ramirez.
Officer- Hey we got a call from a woman. She said there is a man sitting outside her apartment and won't leave.
Magda- Why are you calling me about this?
Officer- Well it's Inspector Exstead's old apartment.
Magda- What? Damnit Teddy. I'll be right there.

She quickly grabbed her coat and ran out the door. It's now 8:15PM and Nate went into CD's room.

Nate- Sweetie, they need me to go to the station to wrap up an old case of mine.
CD- What case?
Nate- The uh..Friedman case.
CD- I don't remember that one.
Nate- It's an old one from my old station. I will be back soon.
CD- Wait you're leaving me here alone with Lyla?
Nate- Well I can't take her to the station.
CD- But I bet everyone would love to see her. I mean..--
Nate- I won't be gone long. Surely you can handle her.
CD- Fine!

Nate left the apartment. Kate was waiting outside for him. They both started talking in a whisper. Meanwhile, Magda went down to the apartment building and found Teddt sitting outside the door in handcuffs.

Magda- I got the call. Ma'am, are you pressing charges.
Woman- Ok I won't but get him off my property!
Magda- We will Ma'am. Thank you. Come on Teddy.
Teddy- No.
Magda- We don't want to drag you out to jail now come on!!
Teddy got up and Magda escorted him out.
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I hope you liked it. :talk:

Snowfall
07-29-2004, 01:08 AM
Yay, Kelly, you posted again!!!! Awww, that post was so great! I'm so glad that Nate is trying to get CD to be alone with Lyla....

and poor Teddy! he needs help!

NancyMarcAurora
07-29-2004, 01:09 AM
wOw..raCyy gReat!!Mores Mores Mores* Pleasee:happyface :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
08-06-2004, 02:55 PM
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Magda- I got the call. Ma'am, are you pressing charges.
Woman- Ok I won't but get him off my property!
Magda- We will Ma'am. Thank you. Come on Teddy.
Teddy- No.
Magda- We don't want to drag you out to jail now come on!!

Teddy got up and Magda escorted him out. CD was lying in her bed when she heard a banging noise. She got up and looked around. No one was there. Lyla started crying. CD looked up and saw shadows outside the windows. CD quickly went to the phone and called the police.

CD- *Dials 911* Hello this is Inspector DeLorenzo. There is an intruder outside my apartment. I am alone with my daughter. I need someone over here NOW! *Hung up*

She went over to Lyla who was still crying and picked her up.

CD- It's ok sweetie. I'm not going to let anyone hurt you. No one is going to hurt my baby.

Lyla looked up at her mother and just smiled. CD felt so grateful that her baby was ok. Then there was a knock on the door.

CD- Who is it?
Police- SFPD.
CD- I'm coming.

CD walked over to the door with Lyla in her arms. She opened the door.

Police- We got the man you called about Inspector.
CD- Thank you very much.
Police- One thing though. He asked to speak with you.
CD- Well..alright.

The police pulled the man in front of CD.

CD- Oh my god..Nate?!?

Magda and Teddy sat outside in her car.
Magda- Teddy, what the hell is going on with you?
Teddy- Nothing why do you ask??
Magda- Cut the bull**** Teddy. What were you doing at Jinny's apartment?
Teddy- I was going to my place and took a wrong turn..
Magda- Teddy just STOP IT!

Teddy couldn't help himself. He broke down into tears.

Magda- Teddy, you can cry and watch tv all you want..be depressed all you want..it isn't going to bring Jinny back.
Teddy- I just want her back so much!
Magda- Well we can't get her back. But we can help her! We can put her killer behind bars for the rest of his life..but we need your help.
Teddy- *Wipes tears* Ok. I'll do it.
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Ok no one is on these boards anymore! lol I am not gonna post more till i get...5 replies;) :p

NancyMarcAurora
08-06-2004, 04:09 PM
Aww Poor Teddy..I feel so bad for him..More please! Good job kelly!:) :) :) :) ;)

Snowfall
08-07-2004, 01:01 AM
LMAO about CD and Nate! That cracked me up! :lol: OK, this is your second reply....

Snowfall
08-07-2004, 01:04 AM
Haha! New page! So now you HAVE to post more! :D :p

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
09-05-2004, 07:16 PM
Sorry everyone my computer was down. I have to eat dinner now but I will be posting more on this tonight. Thanks.:wave:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
01-15-2005, 01:42 AM
Wow that was a looong dinner. But yummy. So now that I am done with my September 05, 2004 dinner, I am ready to post more. I hope people are still reading this.
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CD- Nate, what the hell?
Police- Ma'am, you know this guy?
CD- Sadly yes. He is my partner.

Just then, Kate came up to where they were all standing.

Kate- What's going on here? Inspector Basso, I want an explaination for all of this.
Nate- I couldn't find my key! Next thing I know, this man grabs me and tells me I am under arrest.
Kate- Excuse me officer, this man is one of my police Inspector's over at Felony Division. I will handle this.
Police- Yes Captain McCafferty. Thank you. *Left*
CD- Nate you scared me half to death! I thought you were someone coming to kill me and my baby! My heart jumped up into my throat. What the hell were you thinking?
Nate- I was thinking I forgot my key! I didn't think it was a crime!
Kate- Ok ok. We will deal with this tomorrow. *Heals Lyla crying* Your daughter wants you now.
Nate- I'll go.
CD- No. I'm her mother. I will go. *Left*
Kate- *High fives Nate*

The next morning, Magda came in with Teddy and they went straight into Captain's office.

Kate- Hi Magda. Teddy, I'm glad you're back.
Teddy- I want to help you. I will do everything I can to put that SOB behind bars!
Kate- I'm glad we're on the same page. *Smiles*
Magda- We have Frank and his attorney coming in at 12.
Kate- I don't think that's a good idea.
Magda- Don't worry I'm not going in. Jenny is going to handle that. If I go in, I'll kill him.

Just then, Nate walked into the Division. With him was CD and Lyla stopping in to pay a visit.

Nate- Hey everyone, come look at my beautiful daughter!
CD- OUR..
Nate- *Smiles* Right.
Raina- Oh look at her. She looks just like her mother. *Starts talking baby talk* Goochie Goochie Goo.
Nate- *Whispers* Well at least they speak the same language!
CD- *Cracks up* Soo mean Nate..but soo funny!

Magda came out of Captain's office and walked over to CD and the baby.

Magda- CD it's great to see you! How is Lyla doing?
CD- She's great. The love of my life.
Nate- AHEM! I thought I was the love of your life.
CD- You were until you nearly gave me a heart attack last night.
Nate- You just can't let that go can you? *Giggles*
CD- Not a chance.

Kate looked out the window and saw CD there and she just smiled. She was so happy their plan had worked out. She walked Teddy out of her office and then called Nate in.

Kate- Nate, could I see you for a minute?
Nate- Sure. *To CD* I'm in for last night.
CD- I wish I could say I'm sorry but..I hope she tears you apart! *BIG smile*
Nate- Well thank you Miss Congeniality.
CD- Anytime Bozo. *She kissed his cheek*
Nate- *Blushes* *Went into Kate's office*

Kate- So how did it go last night?
Nate- It worked beautifully.

CD- Oh Lyla you are smelly! *Looks for diapers* Where did he put them? Mag, could you watch Lyla for a second I have to go ask Nate where he put the diapers.
Magda- Sure go ahead.

As CD was about to walk into the office, she could hear their conversation.

Nate- If you hadn't come over that night, I don't know what I would have done.
Kate- I'm just glad I could help. I could come over tonight if you need me.
Nate- No thanks. CD is okay now.
Kate- Well you have my number.

CD heard enough. She grabbed the baby, put her in her carseat, and left the station.
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Well that's it for tonight. REPLY PEOPLE! Let me know you're reading cause if you're not, I won't continue this one. Thanks. :)

Snowfall
01-15-2005, 02:23 AM
Grrr....listen to the girl, people!!!! Reply!!! I know that I'm not the only one reading this!

Btw, Kelly, that was really great! I really hope that you write more to this. :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
01-18-2005, 02:20 AM
Grrr....listen to the girl, people!!!! Reply!!! I know that I'm not the only one reading this!

Btw, Kelly, that was really great! I really hope that you write more to this. :)

Thanks Tara! You're soo sweet! Just for that, I'll reply now. :)
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Nate came back out of Captain's office and saw CD wasn't there.

Nate- Hey where's CD and Lyla?
Magda- CD grabbed Lyla and stormed out of here.
Nate- What? Why?
Magda- I'm not sure. She was going to ask you where the diapers were and then came back and grabbed the baby. I didn't have time to ask what was wrong. She was out of here fast. What did you do?
Nate- Oh no..
Kate- She must have heard.
Nate- I got to go.
Kate- Go!

Nate got in his car and raced to CD's place. He rushed into the apartment and found CD and Lyla there.

Nate- CD, what's wrong?
CD- Don't talk to me!
Nate- CD wait..
CD- Oh Nate if you had to be screwing someone, couldn't it be someone other than our Captain??
Nate- WHAT!?
CD- I heard you..asking her to come over. You have a daughter now! I thought that was enough for you.
Nate- You're not even hearing me out! You heard it all wrong.
CD- Oh I'm sure. You guys have that all planned out. Paul did it to me everytime I caught him cheating. I know the whole routine.
Nate- CD stop it! I am not Paul. I'm Nate, the man who is not cheating on you!
CD- Really? Then what the hell were you and Kate talking about huh?
Nate- I'll tell you but don't get mad. Last night whenI was outside the house and Kate came shortly after that..
CD- Yeah..
Nate- Well, we staged the whole thing. We had the cops recieve the call. I didn't have to go into work and there is no Friedman case.
CD- What? You made me think there was someone outside the place on purpose??
Nate- I had to. Kate and me saw what it was like with Lyla. Before, you wouldn't even look at her. We figured this was the only way to help you. It worked didn't it?
CD- Nate..
Nate- What?
CD- You're such a romantic. *Smiles* I'm sorry I jumped to conclusions.
Nate- I understand. Just know that I love you..and only YOU!
CD- I know. I love you too.

It was 11:50AM and Frank Malatris came through The Division doors. Kate saw him and just cringed. Magda saw him and wanted to do nothing but shoot him. Luckily, Teddy did not see him. An officer escorted him into the interrogation room. Magda then pulled Jenny aside.

Magda- Okay Frank Malatris is here.
Jenny- You mean the bastard who..
Magda- Yes. We have a few questions for him. One thing though. I can't go in there. I'll kill him if I do.
Jenny- I understand. I'll take care of it. I'll just go get his file.
Kate- *Walks up* I'm going in behind the glass.
Magda- I'm going to.
Kate- Are you sure that's a good idea?
Magda- I have to go..for Jinny.
Kate- *Smiles and nods* Let's go then.

Jenny got the file and went into the interrogation room.

Jenny- Mr. Malatris, thank you for coming in.
Frank- Oh please, call me Frank.

Magda- This guy makes me want to puke.
Kate- Tell me about it.
Magda- You think he'll cooperate?
Kate- Very little.

Jenny- Okay 'Frank', I see your attorney isn't with you.
Frank- For 200 bucks an hour, I can handle this one on my own.
Jenny- So I guess you know why you're here. We're looking into the death of Inspector Jinny Exstead. I'm new here so I will need some backround information from you.
Frank- Okay shoot.

Magda- I wish I could..

Jenny- How long were you and Miss Exstead dating before you got married?
Frank- About two weeks. We knew right away we were in love.

Magda- Oh please!
Kate- Calm down let him finish.

Jenny- And when you got married, things changed?
Frank- From my culture, when you get married, you respect each other. She did not respect me. Instead she cheated on me. The first time she did, we had an argument which put her in the hospital. I know I may have gone overboard but I was upset. Any man would be.
Jenny- The first time? What do you mean?
Frank- She cheated on me twice.
Jenny- You weren't even married for a month. If you were so in love, why would she cheat on you?
Frank- You'll have to ask her that..oops.

Magda- That's it!
Kate- No Magda..pull yourself together. We can't do anything right now. We'll get him in the end.
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Well? How was it?

Snowfall
01-19-2005, 02:03 AM
Awww, Kelly, that was great! I LOVE Nate, and I HATE Frank! lol Post more soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
01-25-2005, 01:30 AM
Awww, Kelly, that was great! I LOVE Nate, and I HATE Frank! lol Post more soon!


LOL Thanks! Here's more..
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Jenny- Frank, how many wives have you had?
Frank- *Counts* 5 and then Jinny makes 6.
Jenny- Well you seem to forget that all of those wives had restraining orders against you. Why is that?
Frank- As I said before, where I come from, your wives have to respect you. None of them respected me so I disciplined them.
Jenny- Wow all those wives did all that? Must have been hard for you.
Frank- You can only imagine.
Jenny- Well, we heard that one of your girlfriends was murdered as well. What can you tell me about that?
Frank- Nothing. I wasn't involved there.
Jenny- What do you know about that? I mean, if you were able to murder one wife, why not two? Maybe she was disrespecting you like Jinny did.
Frank- No no. I had nothing to do with that. I was out of town.
Jenny- But it says here you have no witnesses. The judge just happened to be female and all charges against you were dropped.
Frank- What can I say? I got lucky.

Magda- I have to get out of here.
Kate- Are you okay?
Magda- Just ducky. Tell me when he's out of here.

Jenny- One last thing.
Frank- Okay.
Jenny- How do you know Jinny was cheating on you? According to 5 different testimonies, Jinny was only dating you and no one else since when she was drinking.
Frank- The day she died, I came home and found her with that lawyer.
Jenny- Well Mr. Malatris, Jinny had just gotten out of the hospital. Surely you didn't expect her to be alone that night.
Frank- She wouldn't be alone. I am always there for her.
Jenny- Thank you that'll be all. We'll call you if we need to talk to you again.
Frank- Any time.

After he left, Kate made a few calls to find out which judge was doing that case but nothing. Still she kept trying. Then Teddy came into her office.

Teddy- Hi Captain. You needed to see me?
Kate- Yes. There is going to be a trial in 3 weeks. Frank and his lawyer are coming here in 1 week to discuss it and try to do a plea bargain.
Teddy- Oh no. You--
Kate- No we aren't doing a plea bargain. We're going right to court. I need to find a male judge though. We can't test him doing the judge in again.
Teddy- What do you mean?
Kate- I shouldn't be telling you this but it seems one of his other girlfriends was murdered. The charges were dropped. I think it was because he said or did something to the judge. I'm trying to locate her now. Best be on the safe side and get a male judge.
Teddy- Okay. I'm going home now okay?
Kate- Are you alright?
Teddy- Yeah. Bye Captain.
Kate- Bye Teddy.

Teddy drove straight home. All of this was happening so fast. He just went into a corner and cried. And then, he saw this bright light. He didn't know where it was coming from. Then he saw a woman in a white silky dress. He couldn't believe his eyes. It was Jinny!

Meanwhile, at The Division, they called everywhere trying to locate judge.

Magda- Captain, I made calls trying to find that judge for you.
Kate- And?
Magda- I found her.
Kate- Excellent!
Magda- Not really.
Kate- What do you mean?
Magda- Her name is Judge Sarah Marcus. She's dead.
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I'll leave ya there for tonight. REPLIES!!!!!!!

Snowfall
01-25-2005, 01:56 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! YIKES!!!!!!!!!!!! I've got to know more soon!!!! Heh

TDivisionInspector
01-25-2005, 03:13 AM
Ok tell me what happens now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! QUEEN CLIFFY! (cliffhangers) Like what happens after this:

Teddy drove straight home. All of this was happening so fast. He just went into a corner and cried. And then, he saw this bright light. He didn't know where it was coming from. Then he saw a woman in a white silky dress. He couldn't believe his eyes. It was Jinny!

I mean HELLO I NEED TO KNOW! SO TYPE TYPE TYPE!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-07-2005, 12:50 AM
Sorry it took me a little while..I'm not in a very good mood tonight but I did write some more on this so here ya go!
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Teddy- Jinny?
Jinny- Hi Teddy.
Teddy- Gosh it's so good to see you. Magda was telling the truth.
Jinny- Yes she was.
Teddy- I can't believe I'm actually seeing you..aren't you..
Jinny- *Smiles* Yes Teddy I am dead. I needed to see you. Teddy- What did you want to see me for?
Jinny- I needed to say thank you in person for what you are doing for me.
Teddy- What?
Jinny- For being so brave enough to testify for me and help put him behind bars. You have to do something else for me..then I can rest in peace.
Teddy- Anything.
Jinny- You got to stop blaming yourself for my death.
Teddy- But--
Jinny- No! This was not your fault. You listened to me remember? I told you to get out of there. Yes I miss being there with all of you but I am happy where I am. I am safe. Just promise me you will put him away for me.
Teddy- Oh Jinny I promise!
Jinny- You're going to be alright. I am always watching you. All of you. I love you Teddy.
Teddy- I love you Jinny.

Jinny disappeared. Back in the station..

Kate- DEAD!? What do you mean?
Magda- She was murdered..the night after she made the decision on Frank. Who knows what the deal was. She was shot in the head though, just like Jinny.
Kate- Why doesn't all this surprise me? Let's call it a night.

A week went by and they didn't get any farther. Today though was the week that Frank and his lawyer, Attorney Ellindford were coming in and the day CD was coming back to work. At CD's place..

CD- Oh Nate I don't wanna leave her.
Nate- She'll be fine.
CD- But what if she get sick or gets hungry or--
Nate- Do you want to take her with you?
CD- No! All those germs and those convicts touching her? She's okay for visits but she can't be there all day with me.
Nate- Then we got to let the babysitter take care of her today.
CD- Alright.

There was a knock on the door. It was the babysitter.

Anne- Hi. I'm here.
Nate- Good we're all set. You know where the diapers, bottles, and food are. Feel free to anything we have in the fridge.
CD- If there are any problems, call us right away.
Anne- We will. *Picks up Lyla* We'll have a good time.
CD- Bye sweetie. Mommy will be home before you know it.
Nate- Bye Lyla. You two have fun.
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There ya go. More soon:)

Snowfall
02-08-2005, 12:24 AM
Awwww...... *tear*. Very good and sad and sweet. I hope your day is better! Post more soon.

Swimgirl587
02-08-2005, 06:00 PM
That was great Keep up the good work. I love this fanfic!! :happyface :crazy:

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-09-2005, 12:45 AM
That was great Keep up the good work. I love this fanfic!! :happyface :crazy:

Yay a new reader!!! Then we have to post more! (You may have replied before but you're new now lol)
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At the station, everyone was preparing for Frank and his attorney to come in. CD and Nate arrived and that made Jenny feel better cause Jenny didn't want to go back in alone with him.

Nate- Hey guys.
Magda- CD you're back!
CD- Yeah..I got to make a phone call. *Rushes to her desk*
Magda- Hello to you too. *Looks at Nate*
Nate- First time leaving Lyla home with a babysitter.
Magda- Oh I remember that. I didn't leave him with one until he was 3 and that was my mom. I tried to take him with my everywhere I went..but you can't do that forever. Nate- Well I tried to tell her to bring Lyla in with her but she wouldn't. Afraid the convicts and germs.
Magda- *Laughs*
CD- Okay Lyla knows we got here okay.
Nate- Honey she's a month old. She can't understand what you're saying.
CD- Yes she does! *Glares* A daughter knows what her mother is saying at any age.
Nate- You're right I'm sorry.

Kate came out of her office and saw CD and Nate. She was glad to see them back together..everyone was but she had to have the talk with them. She hated that talk.

Kate- CD. Nate. *Motioned for them to come in her office.

CD and Nate didn't think too much of it and sat down in the two chairs in front of her desk. Kate let out a big sigh and looked at them.

Kate- CD it's so good to see you back.
CD- Thank you Cap'n.
Kate- But now that you are, I have to decide--
Nate- You know green is definitly your color! Brings out your eyes!
Kate- Well thank you Nate but this is Navy blue..
Nate- Oh well..both colors do. I mean..I'm really nervous. Look Captain, I already know what you're going to say.
Kate- You do?
Nate- Yes.
CD- Nate would you let the woman talk.
Kate- Thank you.
CD- But before the woman does I would like to let her know that I was recently aware of what happened at my apartment with the 'robber' outside. *Glared at Kate* *Then grinned*
Kate- *Grins* You have evil in you Inspector. I hope it doesn't pass into your daughter. Look, I trust both of you. I'm going to give you a trial. I will let the two of you stay partners but there will be no scenes here at the station. Another Captain did this when I was Inspector and the two partners were having sex right on the interrogation tables! I won't have that here. Is that clear?
Nate- Of course. We would never on the table!!
Kate and CD- NATE!!!
Nate- A joke, a joke to lighten the moment!
CD- We understand Captain.
Kate- Good. Now we got Frank Malatris and his attorney coming in today. If someone could go in with Jenny I would appreciate it.
CD- Who's Jenny?
Kate- Magda's new partner.
CD- Oh. Well I will go over the case with her and I'll go in with her.
Kate- Thanks. Get back to work.
Nate- *Left*
CD- *Opened the door but paused and looked back at Kate* So who was the other Inspector with you?
Kate- What?
CD- In the interrogation rooms.
Kate- I have no idea what you're talking about.
CD- *Nods and leaves*
Kate- *Grins*

CD walked over to a woman who was the only one she didn't recognize and knew it had to be her.

CD- Hi Jenny?
Jenny- Yes?
CD- I'm Inspector DeLorenzo you can call me CD. Captain said you were going to be questioning Mr. Malatris. If you wouldn't mind I would like to go with you.
Jenny- I wouldn't mind at all. The guy freaks me out.
CD- So you know what he did huh?
Jenny- Yeah it's terrible.
CD- Yes but we will get justice. Can I see your notes.
Jenny- Sure over here.

It was now 1:00PM and Teddy walked into the station. Captain saw him come in and knew this was a very bad time for him to be here seeing as Frank was going to be there any minute! She had to get him out of there and fast.

Kate- Teddy, what are you doing here?
Teddy- I just came to see how things were going on the case and to know if there was anything else I could do. The trial is in 2 weeks and I am jumping out of my skin. I want to help. I made a promise.
Kate- Believe me Teddy you are helping. Just by testifying against him is helping us. We've got everything else under control.
Teddy- Well..if you're sure.
Kate- I'm sure. Just concentrate on the trial.
Teddy- Ok. Thanks Kate.
Kate- Bye Teddy.

Kate let out a sigh but as he was opening the Division doors to leave, Frank and his attorney were walking in. Teddy saw him. Looked him straight in the eye.

Frank- That's him! The man who slept with my wife!
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Snowfall
02-09-2005, 01:30 AM
SO GREAT Kelly!!!!!!!!!! You're doing such a great job with this fic. More soon?

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-11-2005, 11:38 PM
Well I got like two ppl reading this. That's not enough guys! I'm gonna have to end this soon if no one reads lol MORE READERS!!!!:) Here's more..
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Frank- That's him! The man who slept with my wife!

Teddy tried to keep calm but couldn't let him say that in front of the attorney.

Teddy- I didn't sleep with her. You killed her!
Kate- Teddy, just leave. We'll handle this.

He just glared at Frank and stormed out.

Kate- Mr. Ellindford, please take your client into the interrogation room.
Mr. E- Of course. Come on Frank. *They left*
Kate- That can't ever happen again.
CD- Okay so who's going in there.
Kate- Well I guess I will have to pop in there. Magda can't go in.
Magda- I will go in.
Kate- I don't--
Magda- I have to. I made a promise.
Kate- *Nodded* So CD, and Magda, get in there. Jenny would you like to sit out on this one?
Jenny- I don't mind.
Kate- Okay. Let's get him.
CD- Got it.

So CD and Magda walked into the interrogation room. They both say there with smirks which got the rest of them pissed off already.

CD- I'm Inspector DeLorenzo. This is--
Frank- Magda. How could I forget you? You were the one who disapproved of Jinny and me.
Magda- Proves my intuitions were right.
Mr. E- Okay enough with the comments. We want to know straight off if there are any deals on the table.
CD- No way. We're going right to court.
Mr. E- You'd be wasting you're time. You're gonna lose this one. We are willing to make a deal.
CD- We're not making any deals with you..and we'd also feel we should inform you that Theodore Blumenthal will not be testifying for you.
Mr. E- Now wait a minute--
Magda- He will answer questions on the witness stand truthfully of course but he will not be testifying for you.
CD- We have many witnesses that can testify under oath that Jinny was not having any affairs when she was married to your client. I don't know what case you think you have.
Frank- Oh I have a case. She disrespected me. Any lawful judge will see that.
Kate- *Walks in* Mr. Ellindford..
Mr. E- Captain McCafferty. Your Inspectors seem to have quite a bit of an attitude problem.
Kate- I don't think so. They are just confident. *Get in Frank's face* Anyone who thinks they can kill one of my Inspectors and get away with it, is gonna fry.
Mr. E- Is that a threat Captain?
Kate- No Counsel it's a promise.
Mr. E- We came here on a friendly call and we seem to be getting no where. Let's go Frank.
Frank- You're just going to take this from them? They're a bunch of women and you're putting up with it?
Mr. E- Frank, let's go.
Frank- *Glared* Fine!
Mr. E- See you all in court.

They all just glared back a him when he was leaving.

CD- What do you think he meant by all that women crap?
Kate- I don't know but nothing good.
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That's all for now. :wave:

Snowfall
02-12-2005, 02:12 AM
Oh man.....let's get that Frank committed!!!!!

That was great, btw! Post more really soon!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-15-2005, 12:58 AM
Oooh come on Tee! It's Valentine's Day and Frank is feeling lonely without Jinny! I think I should cut him a break and have all charges be dismissed! I think that's a grrrrreat idea! hehe Well I thought I would have time to write but I got to get to bed but there will be a loong post tomorrow for ya cause I will write in the car lol :wave:

TDivisionInspector
02-15-2005, 05:53 PM
Great work Kelly! I don't know if Frank should get a break at all. I mean eck, he's a guy so he automatically is at fault. No matter what. hehehehe After all, you're the writer you can make it that way. BUT if ya wanna give him a break do that too. It's your fic. LOL

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-20-2005, 04:28 PM
I didn't get to write more in the car cause I fell asleep lol But I have nothing to do today AND I have tomorrow off of school so MORE FIC! YAY!
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Later on in the afternoon, Teddy of course felt terrible for what had happened earlier and went back to the station to personally apologize to Kate for what he did.

Teddy- Captain.
Kate- Teddy, I wasn't expecting you.
Teddy- I had to come here in person and say how sorry I was for what happened before with..
Kate- It's alright. I know he provoked you. And I don't think it hurt our case in anyway. I think we got him.
Teddy- Good. Well I'd better get going. I got more cases.
Kate- I'm glad you're back to work. Jinny would be happy. Teddy- I know. That's why I'm doing in. *Smiles*

As Teddy walked out, he saw a woman standing by the door with dark hair. From the back, you could swear it was Jinny! He walked up to her and then she turned around.

Jenny- Can I help you?
Teddy- Oh. No I'm sorry. I thought you were someone else. Jenny- That's ok. I'm Jenny Schroller, an Inspector here.
Teddy- I'm ADA Teddy Blumenthal.
Jenny- Oh a lawyer. You got a case here?
Teddy- Unfortunately. Inspector Exstead's murder.
Jenny- I'm working that one as well. That was a damn shame. I heard she was a great cop.
Teddy- The best. I have to run. Maybe I'll see you around sometime.
Jenny- Maybe. Nice talking to you.

Teddy left and Magda walked up to Jenny.

Magda- I see you met our ADA.
Jenny- Yeah. He seems real nice.
Magda- He is. He's just down though. He'll be beter once this trial is all over.
Jenny- What do you mean?
Magda- He used to date Jinny. He really loved her. *left*

Jenny realized and just sighed. CD ran over to her desk and picked up the phone but Nate slammed it back down.

CD- What are you doing?
Nate- CD, you just called the babysitter 5 minutes ago! Lyla is sleeping. What if you wake her up?
CD- What makes you think I am calling the babysitter?
Nate- You are, aren't you?
CD- Of course but you aren't supposed to know.
Nate- Come on, let's go get some coffee.
CD- But what if she needs me Nate. This day is killing me.
Nate- How about tomorrow we bring her in and we just see how it goes. It's got to be better than today.
CD- Alright. Obviously you can't stand being without her either!! *Smirks*
Nate- *Rolls eyes*

Kate came out of her office to see the progress they were making on the case.

Kate- Ok what have we got.
Magda- I'm going go to see Teddy and make sure he is all prepared for court.
CD- Captain, who is going handling the case? Teddy can't do it.

Allen O'Connor walked into the room.

Allen- I am.
Kate- I have called Mr. O'Connor to handle it.
Allen- Do you know how many times Inspector Exstead has called me an SOB behind my back? I would be honored to do this for her.
Kate- Good. If you would come with me, I will go over everything with you. Everyone else, back to work.

Kate and Allen went into her office while everyone else gossiped.

Raina- Who is that guy?
CD- That ADA O'Connor.
Magda- I thought he was loooong gone..
CD- Me too.
Nate- What's the big deal about him?
CD- Well he..*Realized Raina was in the room*..we'll talk later.
Jenny- Well I have a doctor's appointment so I have to go for a bit.
Magda- Are you ok?
Jenny- Oh yeah just a check up. I had a transplant last year and they need to make sure everything is ok.
CD- What kind of transplant?
Jenny- Heart.
Magda- Wow that must have been scary.
Jenny- Yeah. April 24th will be the day that changed my life. I'll be back soon. *Left*
Magda- Whoa..April 24th was the day Jinny died. She had a organ donor card on her.
CD- You don't think..
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Hehe I'm evil:D

Snowfall
02-21-2005, 01:33 AM
WHOA!!! When you told me that Jenny and Jinny would have more in common that I thought, I didn't know you meant the same heart! This is great stuff!

NateFan101
02-26-2005, 02:41 AM
That was a heart-felt post..I loved it! You're doing a great job so far. Keep it up and give Frank the electric chair! Nate rules!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-17-2005, 01:36 AM
WHOA!!! When you told me that Jenny and Jinny would have more in common that I thought, I didn't know you meant the same heart! This is great stuff!

LOL I told you it would be unusual! I hope you like this next post. Sorry I haven't been here.
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The night before the trial, everyone was a mess. Kate, Magda, and Teddy couldn't sleep a wink. Neither could CD and Nate but that was mainly because of Lyla. Jinny's family was having a tough time too because they are all being called to testify. They all wanted to see him fry. Teddy couldn't take it anymore. He got out of bed, put on some clothes and left his apartment. He didn't come back for a few hours. The next morning, ADA O'Connor was all ready to go.

Allen- So are we all clear on how everything goes?
Kate- Allen, do you have any idea how many times we have had to testify for our jobs? *Laughs*
Allen- Okay just making sure. We just need to wait for ADA Blumenthol and we will be all set.
Magda- I noticed Frank the Scank isnt here either.
Kate- Oh he will be. Is John her brothers ready to go?
CD- Yeah I checked on them. They're a little nervous but should be good.
Allen- Great.

Just then, Teddy came into the door. He looked like he had a little too much to drink the night before. Magda could see it in him. Luckily no one else could.

Allen- Teddy, you're here finally. Okay we're all set.

Mr. Ellindford walked over to them, just putting away his cell phone.

Mr. E- Well I hope you're happy Kate.
Kate- Excuse me?
Mr. E- How'd you do it? Did you have one of your inspectors do it?
Kate- Whoa..
Mr. E- He didn't do anything wrong and I was going to prove it if you had given me a chance..
Kate- WHOA! STOP RIGHT THERE! What is going on? What are you talking about?
Mr. E- My client, Frank Malatris, was murdered last night.
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There ya go! Hope you liked it. Was the cliffhanger too much? Hehe

Snowfall
04-18-2005, 01:15 AM
AWESOME JOB, Kel! And don't leave us hanging there! Pleeeaaase?!

J/K. I know you have stuff to deal with. Post more whenever you can. :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-19-2005, 10:38 PM
LOL Well I didn't wanna leave you hanging at such a bad spot (which you do to me ALL the time! ;) ) so here's some more to tie you over.
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Mr. Ellindford walked over to them, just putting away his cell phone.


Mr. E- Well I hope you're happy Kate.
Kate- Excuse me?
Mr. E- How'd you do it? Did you have one of your inspectors do it?
Kate- Whoa..
Mr. E- He didn't do anything wrong and I was going to prove it if you had given me a chance..
Kate- WHOA! STOP RIGHT THERE! What is going on? What are you talking about?
Mr. E- My client, Frank Malatris, was murdered last night.
Kate- What do you mean he was murdered?
Mr. E- The cleaning lady found him dead this morning. She just called me.
Magda- Well it saves the government money and time.
Mr. E- Are you implying something Inspector?
Magda- Just that he got what he deserved.
Mr. E- I have to go. I will be insisting that someone interview you guys PERSONALLY!
Kate- Yeah what else is new.

Mr. Ellindford left the courthouse. They explained what happened to the judge and he just got up to go to his next case.

Kate- Guys this complicates things.
Magda- What do you mean? It's not like one of us killed him.
Kate- Never the less, we'll need to make a list of everything we did last night as soon as the autopsy establishes a time of death. We need alibis. Mr. Ellindford knows how much we hated him, especially you and Teddy.
Magda- Wait, you don't think they will actually charge me with something just for hating him.
Kate- You never know. Make that list! You work with Teddy also. Have him especially make one. We need to be prepared.
Magda- You got it. You'd better explain things to Jinny's family. They're pretty shocked.

Kate nodded and went over to them. Shocked wasn't even the word for them. They have been through so much and now this. They just wanted to go home. Magda took Teddy aside and talked to him.

Magda- So you know what happened. Teddy, we're in a little bit of trouble. The Captain thinks we should go back to the Division and make a list of everything we did last night.
Teddy- What for?
Magda- Well they think one of us did it.
Teddy- What? That's crazy!!
Magda- Well never the less, let's get back to the station. You need a ride?
Teddy- No I have my car. I'll meet you there.
Magda- Okay. See ya there.

Magda couldn't shake the feeling like he was hiding something. She figured she would just talk to him there. Everyone headed back to the station. Teddy showed up not long after.

Magda- Okay Teddy, we should probably start from 8PM.
Teddy- 8PM I was having dinner with a client. He needed to talk. After that, it was maybe 10:15PM. I headed home. I went to bed, but I tossed and turned so I got dressed and left. That was maybe 12:00AM.
Magda- And where did you go.

Teddy didn't speak which worried Magda. Teddy got a look on his face.

Magda- Start explaining Teddy.
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I'll try and post as soon as I can:) Wish me luck :wave:

Snowfall
04-20-2005, 12:45 AM
OMG!!!! Teddy did it?! I've got to know more!!!!

But yeah, I'm getting what I deserve, I'll grant you that....LOL

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
04-29-2005, 10:51 PM
Hey. Sorry for the delay. Heeeeeeere's more! :wave:

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Teddy didn't speak which worried Magda. Teddy got a look on his face.

Magda- Start explaining Teddy.
Teddy- Well I don't really know. I remember getting dressed and leaving but I don't remember going anywhere.
Magda- Teddy, this doesn't look good at all.
Teddy- I know. I don't know what I am going to do.
Magda- Do you own a gun?
Teddy- I am an ADA. Of course I own a gun. I got one after..
Magda- We'll need to check it for prints. Do you have it?
Teddy- Yes I carry it with me all the time.
Magda- Oh no.

After Magda took Teddy's gun down to the lab, she went to the Captain's office.

Magda- Cap'n, we have a problem.
Kate- Do I wanna know?
Magda- Teddy doesn't know where he was last night.
Kate- What do you mean?
Magda- He remembers leaving his apartment at around Midnight but after that, he doesn't know what he did. And to make things better, he owns a gun.
Kate- No.
Magda- I couldn't believe it either. You don't think he was really capable of doing this do you?
Kate- Well, Mr. Ellindford made it quite clear to me that his client was shot..17 times.
Magda- Eww I'd hate to do that autopsy.
Kate- Well we questioned him. We can't arrest him until we can link him to Frank last night..but the odds don't look good. We need to get his gun checked for
prints.
Magda- Way ahead of you.
Kate- Good. I have to say if he did do it, I don't think they will be too hard on him. Him being an ADA and seeing as what Frank did to him..
Magda- Cross your fingers.

Magda left her office. She was about to leave when Kate rushed out of her office.

Kate- Magda! I just called the motel that Frank was staying at and they said no murder took place there.
Magda- What!? What are you talking about?
Kate- I spoke to the manager. And I called the morgue and no one by the name of Frank Malatris has been brought in.
Magda- Oh my god. We have to get to Teddy.
Kate- We'll take my car.
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Is that a big enough cliff hanger for ya? LOL I'll post more soon.

Snowfall
04-30-2005, 01:03 AM
Oooooh this is getting good, Kelly! Moooooooore!!!!!! :)

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-02-2005, 10:56 PM
Oooooh this is getting good, Kelly! Moooooooore!!!!!! :)

Well I'm glad at least one person is interested! :) Here's more..
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Kate- Magda! I just called the motel that Frank was staying at and they said no murder took place there.
Magda- What!? What are you talking about?
Kate- I spoke to the manager. And I called the morgue and no one by the name of Frank Malatris has been brought in.
Magda- Oh my god. We have to get to Teddy.
Kate- We'll take my car.

Meanwhile, Teddy was at his apartment slugging down a few beers. He was sure that they would find something against him and have him charged with murder. He
wasn't even sure he hadn't done it. He had no idea where he went that night and he HATED Frank. Who could blame him but that's not the point. He could've
commited murder. Just then he heard a knock on his door. He got up and very wobbly walked over to the door. He figured it was Magda since she had told him
he would be by to check on him. He looked through the peekhole and saw a man with a gray jumpsuit on and a baseball cap.

Teddy- Who is it?
Man- Delivery for a Theodore Blumenthal.

Teddy didn't know what it was but he opened the door anyway.

Teddy- Yes I'm Theodore.
Man- Here's your package. I'll need your signature right here.
Teddy- Ok.

He grabbed the pen and tried to write his name but he couldn't. Instead he signed it Theo Blumen.

Teddy- Is that good enough.
Man- Too much to drink?
Teddy- OH yeah.

Just then, Teddy noticed some blood coming through his clothing.

Teddy- Hey man you're bleeding.
Man- Oh shoot! I was trying to open a package earlier and must have cut myself. Can I use your bathroom?
Teddy- Sure come on in. The place is a little messy but--

As soon as he closed the door, the delivery man put his hand over Teddy's mouth and held a gun to his head. He whispered into Teddy's ear..

Man- This is your worst nightmare. I'll take care of you like I took care of her.

Just then Teddy knew where he heard that voice before..
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OW! Writer's cramp I got to stop!!! ;) Enjoy!

Snowfall
05-03-2005, 12:56 AM
OOooh, Kelly, don't give me that writer's cramp thing!!!! LOL MOOOOOOOOOREEEEE!!!!!

TDivisionInspector
05-04-2005, 12:36 AM
EXACTLY! I'd type in here what I type to Kelly in her im box, but they'd block it out anyway! LOL She is sooooooooooo full of......of.......of....IT! Little miss "Tara is the only one reading!" HA!!!!!!!!! :-P

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-11-2005, 07:04 PM
Wow a new page..guess I had better write more huh? And if you would post a reply more often, I'd know u were reading now wouldn't I!? :p
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As soon as he closed the door, the delivery man put his hand over Teddy's mouth and held a gun to his head. He whispered into Teddy's ear..

Man- This is your worst nightmare. I'll take care of you like I took care of her.

Just then Teddy knew where he heard that voice before..

Teddy- Frank? Oh my god.

Magda got into Kate's car and tried to call Teddy on her cell phone. At Teddy's they heard the phone ring.

Frank- You let that phone ring. Don't you dare answer it.
Teddy- Fine..calm down man.

Magda- There's no answer.
Kate- Try his cell.
Magda- *Called his cell* No answer there either. He never turns that thing off. I'm really worried.
Kate- Me too.

Magda and Kate were speeding over there as fast as they could. Kate called for back up, just like last time. Meanwhile, Frank sat Teddy on the couch cause he
couldn't stand himself.

Teddy- You're supposed to be dead.
Frank- That's what I wanted you all to think. So you wouldn't be worried if a strange delivery guy showed up at your door.
Teddy- My god that's an awful thing to do.
Frank- Everything I do is awful but at least I'm not the only one commiting sins here. You had an affair with my wife.
Teddy- What will it take to convince you that I didn't sleep with Jinny while you two were married. I swear I didn't.
Frank- You think I'm gonna believe you..cute.
Teddy- *Thinks* 'I'm a dead man'.

Magda and Kate finally arrived. They ran up and knocked on his apartment door. He screamed trying ot let whoever was at the door that something was up. Frank hit him with his gun after that. Then he held it up to his head.

Frank- You keep your damn mouth shut. You know I have killed people before so I would have no problem killing you. Let them go away.

Magda- Teddy? Are you there? We heard a scream we know someone is in there.

Frank- Go away or I blow his head off! Leave the building!

Magda- Oh god. *Looked at Kate*
Kate- Frank? This is the Captain of the SFPD. We can try and negotiate..

Frank- *Shoots into the air* Negotiate that! Now get out of the building NOW!

They walked out of the apartment building and Magda was in a panic.

Magda- Oh my gosh! I can't lose another friend to that man Captain I can't!
Kate- Magda calm down. I'm going to call every cop on the force to get their asses out here!
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DAMN! My hand again!! I'll write more whenever! :D

XxNancyMcKeonXx
05-11-2005, 07:27 PM
loving it!! omg lol post more please!

Snowfall
05-12-2005, 01:08 AM
Yikes!!!! This is getting intense! Post more!

TDivisionInspector
05-13-2005, 12:56 AM
Yeeeah. NOW I REMEMBER! Why I don't read your fics! Cuz of those insane cliffhangers!!! Are they all dead or what?!?!?! Let's go and screw your damn hand!

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-14-2005, 01:37 AM
Oh come on they aren't THAT bad! lol
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Frank walked back over to the couch and sat down facing Teddy while holding the gun in his direction.

Teddy- Why are you doing this to me? Why now?
Frank- I told you already.
Teddy- But that was a year ago.
Frank- Yep. A year ago today.
Teddy- Oh my god that right. Jinny didn't die till the next day though.
Frank- Well if it will make you feel any better, I won't kill you till midnight so you'll have the same anniversary. *Laughs*
Teddy- Not funny jackass.

Frank got mad and walked over to him pointing the gun to his head.

Frank- What did you call me?
Teddy- Nothing.
Frank- That's better.

Everyone outside was waiting. There was nothing they can really do. Lots of people from the SFPD came, including CD and Nate.

Kate- Hey guys. Where's Lyla? You didn't have to come.
CD- She's at home with the babysitter.
Nate- How could we not come. We heard about Frank.
Magda- I should have shot that bastard when I had the chance.
Kate- Magda..

Frank- Well it's 11:15..you got 45 minutes buddy.
Teddy- You don't call me buddy or I'll call you jackass.
Frank- Oooh are we getting a little testy?
Teddy- Just a tad when someone is about to kill me! But you know I'm not a woman. I'm not gonna cry and beg for my life. I would never beg to a lowdown jerk
like you.
Frank- Trying to get me testy now are you..smart. But not smart enough to talk me out of it.
Teddy- You find a sick pleasure in torturing other people who disapprove of you.
Frank- Yep. Who cares?
Teddy- For Jinny's sake, I'm not going to play along in your sick game. I'm not going to give into you.
Frank- Don't you dare mention my wife as if she were yours. If you had just kept your hands on your own property, this wouldn't have happened.
Teddy- PROPERTY!? You calling Jinny property now.
Frank- You're right, property is too strong a word..garbage now is more like it.
Teddy- You son of a---
Frank- Keep in mind here boy, I'm the one with the gun. So shut your mouth.

Magda- Maybe you should call him. It's too quiet up there.
Kate- Yeah. What's the number?

Inside Teddy's apartment, the phone rings. Frank motioned for Teddy to stay on the couch and if he moved, he was dead. Frank answered the phone.

Frank- Teddy the wife stealer's apartment.
Kate- Frank, this is Captain Kate McCafferty.
Frank- Ahh I remember you.
Kate- Frank you got to let him go. He's an ADA you'll get the death penalty.
Frank- Doesn't matter anyway. Don't call again.

Frank slammed the phone down. Kate got worried by his last sentence.
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How was that? Not too bad right? :p

Snowfall
05-14-2005, 01:49 AM
OMG KELLY!!!!!!!!!!! Curse you and your cliffhangers!!!!!

So post again really soon? hehe

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-29-2005, 01:26 AM
I will continue this fic here since this is the second to last post. Enjoy.
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Kate- Frank you got to let him go. He's an ADA you'll get the death penalty.
Frank- Doesn't matter anyway. Don't call again.

Frank slammed the phone down. Kate got worried by his last sentence. Magda knew if they had just stood there like last time, someone would not come out alive.

Magda- Captain, I need to get in there.
Kate- I don't think so!
Magda- It's our only shot. Frank had no problem leaving a dying woman in there last time. What makes you think he won't do it again?
Kate- Well I'm not letting you go in there. He's too unstable.
Magda- Then think of something damnit I'm not standing out here! *Pauses* I didn't mean any disrespect Captain.
Kate- It's okay we're all on edge.

Kate looked up at the apartment and noticed the fire escape outside Teddy's apartment. She had an idea.

Kate- Okay Magda, you want to help? Here's an idea..

Frank still paced back and forth and wanted to wait until midnight to kill Teddy. He knew no one would have the guts to try and stop him. They didn't last time.
He was kind of nervous though. Something didn't feel right. He felt he was being watched. Then the phone rang. It was Kate calling Teddy's apartment.

Frank- What do you want now?
Kate- We need to talk some more Frank.
Frank- I don't think we have anything to talk about.

Frank walked away from the window and all of a sudden, Teddy saw Magda's head appear from the window. She saw Teddy and motioned to him to stay quiet.
Teddy did so. Magda then pulled out a gun. She aimed it right at Frank's head. She knew she had to get a perfect shot in order to make sure he wouldn't hurt
Teddy incase she missed. While he was on the phone, she aimed some more, to the perfect spot. And then pulled the trigger.
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Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
05-29-2005, 06:49 PM
I know it's soon but here's the last post. I hope you like it!
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Magda then pulled out a gun. She aimed it right at Frank's head. She knew she had to get a perfect shot in order to make sure he wouldn't hurt
Teddy incase she missed. While he was on the phone, she aimed some more, to the perfect spot. And then pulled the trigger. Frank fell to the ground and she
knew then it was all over. She rushed over to Teddy to see if he was alright.

Magda- Teddy, are you okay?
Teddy- Yeah I'm fine.
Magda- It was all a game..
Teddy- I know. He told me he did it to get to me.
Magda- It's over now.

Magda called in the paramedics. They checked for a pulse but couldn't get one. Magda escorted Teddy outside. They were both shaken up but Kate
congratulated them. Teddy was especially happy. They put Jinny's killer away for good, he would never hurt anyone else. The night was long. Teddy could barely sleep. He stayed at Magda's house since the police were still at his apartment. Magda came out and found him awake.

Magda- I had a feeling you were up.
Teddy- Well anyone who had a night like that would have trouble sleeping.
Magda- I could imagine. *Sat next to him* You did good.
Teddy- You too. I could never repay you for saving my life. He was going to kill me.
Magda- I know he was..but we were too quick for him. *Smiles*

Then they saw a light. It was the same light they had seen before when Jinny appeared to them.

Teddy- What is that light?
Magda- I think it's..

Jinny appeared to them wearing that silky white dress, looking as pretty as ever according to Teddy. She had that sweet smile on her face.

Teddy- Jinny you're back.
Jinny- I can only stay for a little while. I'm afraid this is the last time I can appear to you.
Magda- Why?
Jinny- You two caught him. You don't need my help anymore. I don't know how to thank you. I knew the two of you could do it.
Magda- What else could we do. We made a promise.
Jinny- Teddy, you were in a dangerous situation and you did it for me. And Magda, you risked your own life to save him.
Teddy- I promised you we'd get him.
Jinny- I have to go. Just know the two of you that I am with you always.
Teddy- Don't go Jinny please. Not again.
Jinny- I won't really be gone Teddy. But I need you to know something.
Teddy- Anything.
Jinny- Don't be afraid to love someone else again. I'll always know I was your first true love, but I can't go on watching you watch Lifetime all day. You need to love again.
Teddy- How can I?
Jinny- I trust you. You can do it. And Magda, you need you not to be afraid to be as close to another partner.
Magda- I will try Jinny. It's not easy.
Jinny- I know. I love you both very much.
Teddy- We love you Jinny.
Magda- Goodbye Jin.

With that, Jinny disappeared. Magda and Teddy looked at each other and smiled. The next morning, everyone was in a better mood. They haven't been that happy since Jinny died.

Magda- Morning Captain.
Kate- Good morning Inspector. Get any sleep last night?
Magda- Not really.
Kate- Well it's going to be a busy day.
Magda- Good.

Then CD and Nate walked in. They had Lyla with them since having her there at all times was very important to CD. Kate didn't mind.

Kate- Morning you too. And how's that little angel?
Nate- Kept us up all night.
CD- She's wonderful.
Nate- She sure is.
Kate- *Smiled*

Jenny was the last one to come in.

Jenny- Hey I heard about all the action last night. Was anyone hurt?
Magda- Frank's dead..for real this time. Just incase, they're doing an autopsy. *Giggles*
Jenny- Good! *Laughed* How's Teddy doing?
Magda- He was shaken up last night but we had a talk and he's much better this morning.

Teddy walked in. He was out getting everyone coffee to thank them for the great job they did.

Teddy- I come with coffee!
CD- You couldn't get donuts too?
Teddy- Don't push your luck. *Winked at CD*
CD- Okay okay.
Jenny- Hey Teddy. You doing okay?
Teddy- I am great.
Jenny- That's good. Look listen, I was probably too chicken before and with the case going on I didn't want to intrude..*Interrupted by Teddy*
Teddy- Actually Jenny, I wanted to know if you would go out with me tonight.
Jenny- Really? You'll go out with me?
Teddy- Of course. Pick you up at 7?
Jenny- I'll be ready. Thanks.
Teddy- No thank you.
Magda- *Smiled* And Jenny, I'm sorry if I haven't really been including you.
Jenny- Are you kidding Magda? You've been great.
Magda- Well I would like us to be great partners.
Jenny- To me we already are..but that doesn't mean we can't be closer. *Smiled* Thank you Magda.
Magda- You're welcome.
Jenny- And to think I wasn't going to come in today! *Laughs*
Kate- *Came out of her office* Okay cases!

With that, all of the inspectors got back to work and a woman in a silky white dress, smiled and disappeared into the light, once again.


The first time I laid my eyes on you I knew.
We’d spend this life side by side.
I still feel the same though you’re so far away.
I swear that you’ll always be my...


Forever love. I promise you.
Someday we’ll be together.
Forever love. I won’t give up. No matter what.
I’ll be waiting for you. Forever love.


Minutes and hours and years may go by.
But my heart knows nothing of time.
So don’t cry, just keep me right there.
In your dreams. And hold on to these words of mine.


Forever love. I promise you.
Someday we’ll be together.
Forever love. I won’t give up. No matter what.
I’ll be waiting for you. Forever love.


Love is the road to our destiny.
Nothing can change what is meant to be.


Forever love. I won’t give up. No matter what.
I’ll be waiting for you. Forever love.
I’ll be waiting for you. Forever love.



THE END
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Thanks everyone for reading my fic! I hope it wasn't too boring.