I'm Westie and this is my first fan-fic for The Division. :D
um, this has no CD/Nate love stuff right now. I mean, I wish they were still together on the show, but there are alot of CD/Nate love fan fics and I want to do something unqiueish. Even though they aren't together, I hope you'll still enough this.

Some background info:
We have Kate McCafferty still as the Captain, Jinny and Magda are still partners, CD is Raina's partner, and Nate is partnered with Carli (made her up). Jinny is with Jack, Magda is alone right now, CD is dating Brian again (I don't particularlly care for their relationship, but you'll see what happens), Raina is dating, and Nate is trying to rekindle his relationship with an old girlfriend.
About Carli- she's married to a man named Ethan and they have a happy marriage. They have 3 kids, Troy, 17, McKenzie, 15, and Dakota, 10.

Anyway, the fic....it gets better later, just read :)

“Nate, there’s a Mr. James Chensworth here to see you,” Captain McCafferty yelled to the young inspector, a look of confusion drawn from her face. Nate nodded with a grin on his face. Mr. Chensworth had called him last night about Nate’s ex-girlfriend, Kayla Hunter. They’d broken up eight months earlier and the past week, Nate had been trying to contact her, to try their relationship again because he would always love her. James was Kayla’s uncle and after a week of calling, James finally contacted him to talk. Nate straightened out his shirt and began walking towards the waiting room.
Moments after leaving his desk, Nate arrived and an officer directed him to the man he needed to see. James face showed no sign of feeling and Nate wasn’t sure how to approach him.
“Mr. Chensworth?” Nate stammered in the form of a question, “You called to talk about Kayla?” The older man slowly looked up at the boyish face. In contrast to Nate, his gray hair was slicked back and parted off to the right. His blue eyes were misty and looked lost.
“Mr. Basso I presume?” his deep, steady voice asked after a moment. Nate nodded slowly, the smile vanishing from his face when he looked at the man. “Let’s go to a quieter place. My driver can take us to the park.” James got up and Nate followed him to the limo waiting in front of his office. He called Kate McCafferty on his cell to tell her he was leaving and then he climbed in the car.
In five minutes, they were at the park, and James led him to a bench.
“You loved Kayla, didn’t you?” James asked as soon as Nate was settled. Nate held his head down.
“Yeah,” he whispered, “I loved her. Why? What’s wrong?” Nate stared him James eyes.
“Kayla died three days ago,” he stated slowly looking up into the sunny sky. Nate sat there, his mouth open, and his eyes, expressionless. His eyes misted up, but he couldn’t cry in front of the man sitting next to him.
“How?” Nate asked, his emotions, choking his voice. James, again, looked uncomfortable. His voice was suddenly stern and recollected.
“She lost too much blood,” he whispered looked down at his polished shoes. Nate still felt incomplete.
“How, was she shot? What made her loose the blood?” he demanded, trying to catch Mr. Chensworth’s eyes.
“Giving birth to her baby- you’re daughter,” he replied sternly. Nate looked shocked.

Please tell me what you think.

Interesting..keep going! Did you say ur new? Whats ur s/n? I love talking to The Division fans lol..MORE!! Im Jessie and If you are new..welcome! ByE x0x0Jessie>s/n is: DiVizionbabe900..and Jessakanmk :wave:

even tho i'm a HUGE CD/Nate love shipper, I must say this has caught my interest, and I'd really like to know what happens next!! :)

Btw, I'm Lisa, and welcome! :D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
even tho i'm a HUGE CD/Nate love shipper, I must say this has caught my interest, and I'd really like to know what happens next!! :)


Yeah, I'm a HUGE CD/Nate shipper, too, but this does look interesting. I'm really hoping that even though this isn't a CD/Nate fic, that they will eventually get together????
:confused: Hey, I can hope, right? :D

Btw, I'm Tara, and welcome to the boards! :wave:

Here's some more. My s/n is SkiingParadise :D Thanks for the replies! And yep, i have something planned for CD/Nate- couldn't resist. I haven't written it yet, but I have it planned out- won't happen for a bit, but i think you guys will like what will happen.

More fic-
“Wha-What?” Nate stammered; his heart racing.

“She didn’t tell you she was pregnant?” James asked in disgust.

“N-No. Where’s m-the baby?” Nate asked, still trying to grasp what happened.

“At the Grace Trellis hospital. No-one wants her. If you don’t want her, she’ll go into foster care,” James stated matter-of-factly.

“Kayla was your niece! You guys were so close? Don’t you want her?” Nate suddenly yelled feeling helpless.

“That little rat took my girl away. Why would I take the devil who took Kayla from me?” he growled, his eyes fierce, glaring at Nate.

“It’s a baby. I can’t take her, I have my job to think about,” Nate retorted, looking into James’ eyes in disbelief.

“Then she’ll GO into foster care,” James replied angrily, “Good day Mr. Basso. To think, if she had aborted, she’d still be here! I’ll tell the hospital your decision.” He got up and headed back to his car, but Nate remained on the bench, looking towards sky, trying to grasp what had just happened.


Meanwhile, back at work…

“Where’s Nate?” Magda asked the Captain after she and Jinny returned from question a witness in a homicide they were investigating.

“A Mr. Chensworth came to see him. He called to tell me that they were going to the park to talk,” Captain called back from her office.

“Who’s Mr. Chensworth?” Jinny asked, her brow wrinkling slightly with confusion.

“Kayla- his ex-girlfriends uncle,” CD responded from her desk, lifting her head briefly from the paperwork she’d been finishing.

“Oh,” Jinny merely stated, “Raina, where are you going?” Her fellow inspector had been gathering her work bag and spring coat.

“To visit Gabriella (Jinny gave her a puzzled look). She’s the sister of the boy on Fitzgerald Street, the one who committed suicide. It’s a case CD and I caught,” Raina responded and headed out the door.

More? This part was a bit sad- at least i thought so lol, but keep reading, it'll get better! :)

YES more!!!! I'm really liking this right now, even if it IS sad, so post more soon!!! :D

That was sooo great! It was a little sad, but that's OK. I'm liking this fic! :) And I can't TELL you how happy I am that you have a little something else in the works... ;) ;) :D Post more soon!

Here's some more :) Yea, i'm setting CD and Nate's storyline up to cross and i think you guys will really like. it won't be for a little while though....but keep reading :)

In Anchorside.

“Jinny, you’ve hardly touched you food,” Magda stated looked at her friend.

“I’m saving my appetite for dinner, Jack’s cooking,” Jinny replied looking quickly at Magda.

“Sounds like fun,” Magda told her, a grin on her face, “Oh look, there’s Raina, Carli, and CD.” Magda waved them over.

“How was visiting Gabriella?” Jinny asked Raina as soon as she, Carli, and CD sat down.

“Good, she’s really torn up about her brother’s death, poor thing,” Raina told the group.

“Wow. If something happened to Troy or Dakota, I don’t think McKenzie would be concerned much,” Carli joked.

“Oh, and Carli, have you heard from Nate?” Magda asked, “He’s been gone a while and I figured, since you’re his partner...” Carli shook her head.

“Well, I better be going,” CD took the girls, “I need to get home and cook a romantic Japanese dinner for Brian.” Raina gave them all looks.

“Seems like you and Brian are doing well…” Jinny remarked with a teasing grin. CD laughed.

“Good-bye!” CD stated for the last time and made her way out of Anchorside.

“What can we say, woman’s in love!” Carli joked and then seriously, “I remember when Ethan and I were like that. Last time I cooked Japanese for Ethan, we were blessed with Dakota nine months later.”

“Oh,” Magda, Raina, and Jinny all said in unison teasingly. Carli just laughed and the inspectors finished their drinks.


More?

That was great. Love this fic. Post more soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

uh YES more!!!!!!! i looooooooooooooooooooooove cd and nate,if u didn't know that, so i'm VERY excited about the future!! :) :D

and it's really great so far!!!

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
uh YES more!!!!!!! i looooooooooooooooooooooove cd and nate,if u didn't know that, so i'm VERY excited about the future!! :) :D

and it's really great so far!!!

Yeah that! :D

Here's some more:

After about fifteen minutes of sitting on the bench, Nate got up and waved down a taxi.

“Where to sir?” a middle age man with a balding hairline and missing teeth asked as Nate opened the back door.

“Grace Trellis hospital,” Nate replied shutting the door after him. For the remainder of the twenty minute trip, he remained silent.

“Here,” Nate said handing the driver a creased bill, “I won’t need a ride anywhere else. Thank you.” With that, Nate shut the door and ran up the steps. He pushed through the swinging doors and up to the receptionist desk.

“I’m looking for a baby,” he clearly stated.

“You’re looking for A baby?” The woman asked slowly looking at him oddly, “An adoption agency is right down the street. I’m sure you’ll find A baby down there.” She had a small smile on her tanned face.

“No, no, that’s not what I mean,” Nate replied, “My gir- ex-girlfriend gave birth to a baby three days ago. Kayla, Kayla Hunter. She had a baby girl, but she…died during the delivery. Where is her baby?”

“I’m sorry, I can’t show her to you unless your family,” the girl replied carefully, “I do remember that baby though, pretty little girl. She’s going into foster care you know, such a shame.”

“I think I am family,” Nate rebutted- the girl gave him an odd look, “I think-I’m pretty sure, that I’m her father. May I please see her?”

“Oh!” she replied puzzled, “Mr. Chensworth told us that he couldn’t find anyone who wanted her, so she could go into foster care. I thought he told me the father couldn’t take her?”

“Yea, he did talk to me,” Nate whispered, brushing some of his brown hair out of his eyes, “I’d just like to see her. I can’t keep her.”

“Okay sir, Natalie here will take you back to the nursery. Good luck,” the woman told him with a smile on her face.

“Right this way sir,” Natalie, dressed in her white uniform, replied having him follow her down the left hall. She led him to a huge window overlooking several newborn babies covered in blankets. “Ask Mindy for assistance.” Natalie pointed to a thin woman with shoulder length brown hair and a warm smile who approached him. Immediately after, Natalie continued down the hall to check on patients.

“Which baby are you looking for?” Mindy asked politely.

“Kayla Hunter’s baby girl,” Nate told her. Mindy entered the lit room and went near the back. She scooped up a tiny bundle wrapped in a pink blanket. She slowly returned with the child.

“Are you her uncle?” Mindy asked, handing the baby to him. The baby’s blue eyes looked up at Nate and she seemed to smile and let out a tiny whimper.

“I’m her father,” Nate whispered, looking up at Mindy.



What do you guys think? I have like 11 pages written :) I'm also thinking of starting another fanfic- a CD/Nate one :)

awwwwwwwwww, that was cute, so get back here so we see what nate does!!! :) and DUH start a CD/Nate fic too! what a GREAT idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;) :D

I decided to post 2 more parts because i have nothing better to do. haha, j/k

“Hey Jack!” Jinny announced brightly walking into the door.

“Hey honey, how was Anchorside. Was dinner good?” Jack asked with a smile on her face.

Jinny hesitated for a moment. “It was great,” she sighed, “What’d you have to eat?” Jack shrugged with a smile and Jinny laughed. She knew it was probably unhealthy.

“Want to take a walk after the game?” Jack asked her, settling on the couch with a beer.

“Sure, honey. Sounds great,” Jinny replied with a half smile. She climbed on the couch next to him and he laid her arm around her and she rested her head on his chest.


“Hey Magda, long time no see!” Doctor Isabelle Sagemyer told her friend as Magda, dressed in a white hospital gown, sat on the examining table.

“Yea, since Ben was born,” Magda replied brightly.

“And how is he?” Doctor Sagemyer asked, listening to Magda’s heart with her stethoscope.

“He’s good. He, uh, had leukemia last year, but he’s in remission. My sister Lilly’s bone marrow was a match, so he got a bone marrow transplant,” Magda responded cheerfully. Dr. Sagemyer nodded distractedly.

“So what brings you to the doctor, Magda?” she asked after several moments.

“I’ve been light headed several times this past week and I’ve had severe nausea. I figured I should see you,” Magda told her.

“And your periods?” the doctor inquired.

“What!?” Magda stated confused, “Doc, I can’t be pregnant; I’m on the pill and Gabriel left me over a month ago.”

“Magda, have you been regular?” Isabelle asked firmly and with a twinkle in her eye.

“Well, no. But it’s probably just stress,” Magda meekly answered.

“Let’s just have a look, anyway,” Isabelle told her, nodding. Magda sided and lay down. Isabelle collected some blood and immediately sent it away for testing. I’ll call you tonight and tell you the results. Meanwhile, get some rest and no alcohol.”

“Yea, yea, yea,” Magda mumbled. She smiled at the doctor and thanked her, and then went to the bathroom to change. After emerging, she headed home to 12 year old Ben.


“Hey baby, I’m glad you’re home. I’m starving!” Brian shouted from the living room.

“You won’t be for long,” CD flirted and went to the kitchen to begin whipping up their dinner.
***
Nate sat in one of the four rocking chairs inside the nursery until 5 pm- 3 hours later. He’d fed her a bottle. He was still in shock.

“Mr. Basso?” Mindy gently interrupted, “Visiting hours are over. You need to leave now.” Nate looked at his daughter, then back at Mindy.

“Can I just have five more minutes?” Nate pleaded.

“I’m sorry sir, but I’m not supposed to break the rules,” Mindy told him kindly.

“When is she…er…going into foster care?” Nate whispered looking into the baby’s eyes.

“She leaves early tomorrow morning,” Mindy answered checking her file, “Before you go, would you like to name her. Her- mother died before she could give her a name. Kayla was such a sweet woman- hardly screamed at all.” Nate suddenly looked interested.

“You- you knew Kayla? Did you see her? What did she look like before she died? Did she see the baby?” Nate asked anxiously.

“Yes, I helped in the delivery. No one would have expected those complications. After the baby was delivered, she looked so peaceful. But, she didn’t see the baby. Doctors took the baby away because she wouldn’t stop bleeding. Before she went unconscious, she kept asking to see her daughter. You could tell, she loved her so much. She would have been the perfect mother- she was glowing with love,” Mindy told him, placing her hand on his shoulder, “I’m sorry this had to happen. I really need you to leave though, I hope you find peace.”

“I don’t ever want to leave her,” Nate replied suddenly. He couldn’t stop staring at his little girl. “Is it too late to change my mind?”


I'll start the other fic tomorrow probably :) night' everybody

awwwwwwwww, that was soooo sweet!!!! post more of this great fic SOON!! :)

Awwww, Nate's such a sweetie! I really like this fic. And I'm really looking forward to your new one, too! :) Post more soon!

New page, btw! Around here when someone gives you a new page you're supposed to post again soon! ;) :D

:D Here's more. I'm really glad you guys like it! Thanks for all the replies! :)

Mindy looked shocked and suddenly a smile seemed to engulf her face.

“No, it’s not to late at all,” she told him. Nate took a deep breathe.

“I’d….like to keep her. I- I don’t know how, but….she’s my daughter…and these past three hours have been the most amazing hours of my life. She looks just like her mother,” Nate steadily told the aid, “Can I take her home tonight?”

“Yes, honey, I’ll get you the paper work,” Mindy gleefully exclaimed running towards the cabinets.

As Nate filled out the forms to take his daughter home, he thought about Kayla and how she would feel right now. Meanwhile, Mindy began getting the infant ready to go home. She was bundled up and ready in half an hour and the paperwork was done. He went to the front desk to check out. There was a new receptionist there, named Marcy.

“Mr. Basso, before you leave, we need the name of the child- to put on her birth certificate. He pondered the name for a bit and finally settled on one.

“Morgan Taylor Hunter Basso,” he replied, “Morgan was her mommy’s middle name and Taylor is the name I wanted my first daughter to be named.” Marcy gave him a warm smile and filled in the missing part of the certificate. “We’ll see you in a month Mr. Basso (he looked confused), for Morgan’s first checkup. We’ll be calling you, okay? Good-bye sir. Good luck.”

Nate smiled and carried Morgan outside. He suddenly felt scared. He had no idea how to care for a baby, he didn’t even have any baby stuff, like a crib, a bottle, clothes! Nate sat down with Morgan on a bench in front of the hospital. With his free hand, he pulled out his cell phone. For several moments he thought of who to call and finally punched the numbers in his phone.

The phone rang once. It rang twice. Suddenly Magda’s cheery voice was on the other end.

“Hello, Isabelle?” she greeted on the other end.

“Uh, no, it’s Nate,” Nate stammered, “Listen Mag- I really need to tell you something.”

I picked Magda because I feels she's the most "motherly" type lol and can help him out. They're just friends though- nothing more. I'll post more later, but I going to start a new one- a CD/Nate one. :)

Awww!! That was so sweet!!!! I like her name, too!! :) :D

post more on this VERY soon!! :D

Awwww, that was so great! I think Nate will make a great dad! :) Post more soon!

i like keep it coming

By now, Nate had already told Magda about Morgan and how he had decided to take her. Magda was trying to be supportive.

“Mag, I don’t know what to do,” Nate panicked on the phone, “I’ve never been around a baby before. I don’t have anything- not a crib, clothes, a bottle, nothing.” Magda concentrated on driving; Nate needed her to pick him up, but still was able to answer.

“It’ll be fine Nate. We can go to Babies Galore, the new baby store. It has everything. Just relax!” Magda reassured him.

Five minutes later, Magda had arrived, bringing Ben’s old baby carrier. She couldn’t help, but think about the call that was coming tonight. Nevertheless, she put on a bright face for Nate who was still sitting nervously on the bench.

“Hey Nate,” Magda greeted, “Is this her?”

“Yes. Meet Morgan Taylor Hunter Basso,” Nate announced proudly and then is a sad, softer tone, “She looks just like Kayla.” He sighed and Magda patted his shoulder.

“It’ll be alright, hun,” she told the baby, “Your daddy’s never taken care of a baby before, so Aunt Magda is going to help you out!” “You ready?” she asked Nate.

“As ready as I’ll ever be,” Nate responded looking at the baby carrier with utter confusion. He carefully handed Morgan to Magda and began trying to open the safety belt in the carrier. Magda put out a hand to stop him.

“That’s alright Nate, I’ll take care of it. Just get settled in the car, we’ll be over in a minute,” Magda told him. Nate began walking towards the car. “And Nate-” Magda began, “relax! Everything is going to be okay!” Nate nodded, but Magda could still see how jittery he was.

“Hello,” an attendant at Babies Galore greeted them, “How may I help you?” Magda smiled and Nate looked blankly at her. When Nate didn’t say anything, Magda took over.

“Hi, I’m Magda, and this is Nate. This is his daughter Morgan. He has no experience with babies, so we’ll need to take a look at newborn necessities- a crib, changing table, clothes, diapers, bottles, the whole works,” Magda told her giving Nate a teasing smile. Nate looked at her and rolled his eyes. She made him sound like a kidnapper rather than a father. The attendant, Laura, looked slightly confused about the situation with the baby, but kept a happy face and led them to the back. For the next hour, Magda and Laura helped Nate pick out everything he would need. Morgan stayed quiet the whole time and even slept. Nate looked enviously at her. Magda carried the baby the whole time.


“That’ll be $1,007.97,” the woman at the cash register told them. Nate was taken about and painfully handed her his credit card. Magda continued to coo at the baby. They left 1 ½ hours after arriving there. By now, it was dark. Magda drove him, Morgan, and all the new baby items to Nate’s house.

Magda helped Nate get everything inside and set up. By the time they finished, it was 8 pm. Nate had laid a sleeping Morgan down in her new crib. She was placed on her back like the attendant had told them to do, and the mattress was firm and the lamb bumpers gave Nate some peace.

“Nate, if you run into any problems, you have my number,” she told her friend, “She seems like a great little girl- I’m sorry her mother isn’t here to enjoy her as well. Good luck!” Magda then hurried home- she hoped that Dr. Isabelle hadn’t called back.

---More of Jinny, CD, Carli, Raina, and Captain will be in the next post. I was just carried away with Nate’s storyline LOL.

--I added more...i have like 13 pages now. I just wrote a CD/Nate part....i think it's cute :)

awwwww, THAT was cute!!!!! even tho i don't usually care about mag, lol, i REALLY liked her in that post!! :) it was great!! post more soon!!! :)

Awww Nate is going to be a great Dad. Now all we need is CD to be the Mommy! :) Post more soon. You're doing a good job!

Tell me about it. That would be awesome if CD would be the mommy. post more soon.

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Awww Nate is going to be a great Dad. Now all we need is CD to be the Mommy! :) Post more soon. You're doing a good job!

That EXACTLY! :D

Here's some more

“It’s beautiful out tonight,” Jinny breathed clutching Jack’s hand tighter. He smiled at her. The only light illuminated were the street lights and Jinny’s smile.

“A perfect spring night,” Jack whispered back. All of a sudden, Jinny’s eyes closed and she fell limp into Jack’s arms.

“Whoa, Jinny, Jinny, what’s wrong?” Jack shouted panicked. Suddenly, Jinny’s eyes flickered open and she regained her balance.

“What was that about?” Jack asked suspiciously. Then, Jinny’s stomach growled. “Jin- I think we better head home, we’ll get you something to eat.” Jinny shook her head.

“No, Jack- it’s okay, I’m fine,” she told him, giving him a smile. Jack was adamant, though.

“No, Jinny, come on. Let’s get home. I’ll make you a sandwich,” Jack told her. Jinny wasn’t in the mood to argue and under the protection of Jack’s arms, they headed home.


“What’d you think?” CD cooed to Brian, giving him a smile. Brian merely grunted. CD’s smile faded slightly.

“Brian, would you be a sweetie and clear the dishes?” CD asked him, attempting to start conversation again. Brian looked at her angrily.

“No,” he stated promptly, “That..is a woman’s job.” CD was taken aback.

“I didn’t know you were so sexist,” CD teased thinking he was playing with her.

“And I didn’t know you were such a bitch,” he retorted.

“Whoa,” CD said, “Brian, I really wish you’d respect me.” He rolled his eyes and she reluctantly began clearing the table. When she finished, she fixed herself a bowl of ice cream and sat down. After a moment, Brian slammed his fist on her table, making the ice cream and CD’s forearm bounce up.

“Where’s mine?” he asked her immediately.

“I didn’t make you one,” CD said with attitude. Brian grabbed her forearm and yanked her towards him.

“Then go make me one,” he yelled at her.

“Brian- your drunk,” she whispered, “Let go of me!” Brian held on tighter.

“I think you need to go,” she cried trying to break free.

“I’m not ready yet!” he screamed, hardening his grip.


“Ben, did I get any calls?” Magda asked out of breathe as soon as she came in through the door. Ben looked up from his homework.

“Yeah, a Dr. Sagemyer- told you to call her back,” Ben told her suspiciously.

“Great,” Magda muttered sarcastically.


“Raina, Carli, you guys are here late,” Captain stated as she turned off the light in her office, work in hand. Raina sighed and Carli blinked her eyes again.

“The Ramley case,” Carli muttered, “We couldn’t get a hold of Nate and CD had a date with Brian- we didn’t want to bother her.” Kate nodded.

“I swear Cap- if another girl dies because of this…this animal- I won’t be able to sleep again!” Raina told her.

“Mrs. Ramley was a wreck this afternoon. To think, her only child. The media is going to have a field day- another 7 year old Shirley temple. Keep working, but remember, an alert inspector is better than a tired one. See you tomorrow,” Captain told them and exited out the doors.

hmm....things between Brian and CD are falling apart :) lol. I like the suggestion of the CD mommy thing.....look for it in the future...i think it's a very good idea! :) Later in this fic...Nate is going to be a big hero...a part of this fic is showing the beginning of the problem he's going to fix *cough*CD....LOL I might post some more later tonight.

post more, post more, post more!!!!!!!! :)

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
post more, post more, post more!!!!!!!! :)

:yeahthat :yeahthat :yeahthat

Oooooooh, YEAH! :D I love how things have fallen apart with CD and Brian! LOL. I mean, I don't want her hurt or anything, of course, but I'm glad he won't be around much longer! And I REALLY like your ideas......:D Post more soon!

The jinny part is really sad :(....and i again picked magda for this part because she's the only one who knows...remember they're just friends and that's all- i could NEVER see them together LOL.


Jack was sound asleep. Jinny had reluctantly gulped down the peanut-butter and jelly sandwich Jack made her and now she was feeling sick. She tottered off to the bathroom, and inserting her forefinger and middle finger in her mouth, she allowed the hot slime of the prior meal to transfer to the toilet. When she finished, she flushed, and used a hand towel to clean her face and most importantly, her mouth. Looking at herself in the mirror, she saw a chunky middle-aged woman. She frowned at her reflection and then turned off the light and headed out the door, to their king-sized bed.

It was now 1 am in the morning. Morgan was screaming. Nate, in his boxers and a gray college t-shirt, stumbled from his bedroom, hair a mess. He went over to the crib and hesitated a minute, trying to figure out how to pick her up. She continued to scream. Finally, he scooped her up, one hand under her head and the other, her lower back. He gently began bouncing her.

“Hush little Morgan, don’t say a word. Daddy’s going to buy you a hmmm, hmmm, hmmm,” Nate sang, humming for the parts he didn’t know, “Uh, sorry Morgan-girl, I don’t know anymore. How about, rock-a-bye baby, in the tree tops, when the wind blows, the cradle will rock, when the bow breaks- the cradle will fall- and down will come baby, cradle and all.” Morgan continued to scream. He kept bouncing her. Half an hour passed. Nothing worked- she wasn’t hungry or wet. Holding the baby in one arm, he fumbled around for the phone. Without hesitation, he punched in Magda’s number. It rang once. It rang twice. Then the phone was picked up.

“Yeah, Inspector Ramirez,” Magda said sleepily, “Oh Nate, hi. What’s wrong.”

“Baby- she won’t stop crying,” Nate told her, speaking over the baby’s screams.

“Is she hungry- sometimes the cry when-” Magda began.

“No, no- she didn’t want her bottle. She’s not wet either,” he explained.

“How long has she been crying?” Magda asked with a yawn.

“Half an hour- I think,” Nate told her.

“Why don’t you cry putting her over your shoulder and seeing if she needs to burp?” Magda suggested.

“Oh no- I’m not trying THAT again. Last time, she puked all over my shoulder,” Nate replied.

“Well, you usually put a towel on your shoulder first smart-ass,” Magda muttered sarcastically. Nate sighed.

“Magda, I don’t know what to do,” he complained, “Can’t you come here and make her be quiet?”

“Well, I guess I could leave Ben alone for a little while. Are you sure you can’t manage alone?” she asked in a whining tone.

“Magda- please. You’re my last resource- you’re the only one who knows about Morgan,” Nate begged.

“I’ll be over in 20 minutes,” she told him and climbed out of bed, phone still at her ear.

“Thank you Magda, I owe you,” he told her, “See you in 20.”

“Yeah, yeah,” Magda muttered and she placed the phone on the receiver.


Brian was still at CD’s house. He still held her arm and had forced her to watch TV with him. She kept asking him to go, but he wouldn’t leave and he wouldn’t let her go to sleep. Finally, he snapped off the TV.

“Brian, please go,” CD begged, tears stinging her eyes. He glared at her, his eyes fiery. Brian stood up, yanking her up with him.

“Stop trying to control me,” he retorted, looking down at her. In a flash, CD broke free of his grip and ran towards her bedroom. Brian seized her again.

“Where do you think you’re going?” he teased shoving her against the wall. She was scared to death- Brian wasn’t acting like himself at all. She tried to push him off of her. One of his huge hands grabbed her hands to stop them from moving and the other tightened into a ball and struck right below her eye. She wrenched one hand free and covered the injured eye. She was shocked- she couldn’t speak.

“We’re still on for tomorrow, right?” Brian pressured. CD shook her head, tears streaming down her pale face.

“I said, we’re on tomorrow- 6 o’clock, dinner- your place,” Brian growled. CD nodded and he released her arms. In a matter of minutes, she grabbed her coat and exited her house. CD crumpled to the floor in tears.

i'll try and post some more later today :)

awwwww damn Brian!!!!! :mad: :mad: and awww, poor nate! lol get those 2 together and THEN they can BOTH resolve their problems!!! ;) :)

here's some more. i have such a great plot that i need to write :)

“Thanks for coming Magda,” Nate told her as he opened the door with his free hand. Magda walked in with Morgan still screaming.

“That’s what I get for her being so good all day,” Nate told her exhaustedly. His let out a yawn and handed Morgan to Magda who held out her arms.

“Oh, it’s alright,” Magda cooed to the baby. Morgan stopped screaming for a moment and looked up at Magda. Nate sighed and shrugged. The baby continued to whimper in Magda’s arms, but it wasn’t nearly as loud.

“Nate, go get some sleep. I can take over,” Magda told him. Nate nodded and trudged off to his room.

Magda stayed for another hour and when she was sure that Morgan was asleep, she left. It was 2:30 a.m.

At 6 o’clock in the morning, all inspectors were up. CD hadn’t slept at all and slowly and tiredly, began getting ready to go to work. After her shower, the first order of business was to cover up the black and blue mark under her eye. She loaded up the cover-up until she was satisfied with the results. She then continued with the rest of her make-up.

Magda had gotten Ben out of bed and had him start off his morning and she began cooking oatmeal. She planned on calling Dr. Sagemyer after Ben left. Within half an hour, he was ready and at 6:15, he was eating his mother’s oatmeal.

Raina had been an early bird and desperate to solve the Ramley case, was already on her way to work.

Jinny woke up before Jack. Her eyes lingered at his sleeping figure, before she pulled herself into the shower. She hoped on the scale immediately after getting in the bathroom. The scale read 110 pounds- she was 5 ft 4. Jinny groaned and climbed into the shower, letting the freezing cold water hit her bare skin.

The alarm went off in Nate’s apartment. His eyes opened slowly and he climbed out of bed. Nate was heading to the shower when he heard a little whimper. Suddenly, he remembered the precious gift in the next room. With a grin across his face, he tottered over to his living room.


Carli had woken up at 5 am and started off the morning with waking up her husband. She had him start showering as she went to 17 year old Troy and 10 year old Dakota’s room.

“Troy, time to get up,” Carli whispered gently shaking her son. Troy’s eyes flickered open. He groaned and climbed out of bed and headed off to the shower. Carli smiled at her remaining sleeping son, before exiting to go to McKenzie’s room. The window in her daughter’s room was open and a cool breeze swept in. She looked to the bed and saw it was empty.

“McKenzie?” Carli yelled panicked, “McKenzie!?” No answer. Suddenly, Carli noticed a note on the dresser. She ran over to it.

and WHY did u stop??????????? ur killing me, Smalls!!!!!!!!! :) :D

MOOOOOOOOORE!!

Oh, this is so great! I really like this fic. Post more soon!

here's some more

It was the fourth time she’d read the note. A boy- not just any boy, but a Junior boy, had asked McKenzie out- at 10 pm- past her curfew! Carli, for the past half hour, had been making phone calls. Only McKenzie’s best friend, Hannah, knew she was out. Carli called the captain to tell her the problem and Kate allowed her the morning to find her daughter.

At 8 am, McKenzie climbed up the fire escape, back into the window and laid down on her bed- her head pounding. Her arrival did not go unnoticed. Carli and Ethan immediately found their way into her room.

“Where were you?” Carli shouted.

“Out,” McKenzie muttered, “Now leave me alone. I DON’T feel like talking.”

“Young lady, we have been worried sick!” Ethan yelled, pushing a black curl behind his ear. McKenzie rolled her eyes.

“Well, I’m fine and you can go now!” McKenzie retorted, rolling onto her side. Suddenly, Troy appeared in the doorway, behind his mother. He was allowed to stay home until they found his sister.

“Mom, I really need to talk to you,” Troy whispered, still dressed in his Catholic school uniform.

“What is it Troy- we’re busy!” Carli whispered back, still fuming.

“It’s about McKenzie,” he whispered back. Carli’s face dropped a bit and she followed him into the hall.

“What’s wrong Troy? Did you know where she was?” Carli demanded looking at her oldest.

“McKenzie’s really changed,” Troy told her, “Ever since she began the high school.”

“How so?” Carli questioned, looking intently at her son, “Sorry, I don’t mean to interrogate.”

“It’s okay,” Troy told her, “It’s just- she started hanging with a new group of friends. She and Hannah are hanging around- well you know, not the most educated that attend the school.”

“What are you getting at?” she asked, a worried expression on her face.

“From what I’ve heard, she’s been doing drugs- coke, ya know? And drinking and (he took a deep breathe)….sex. She changes her clothes after she leaves the house,” Troy told her. Carli looked shocked.

“And you’ve- you’ve taken this long to tell me?” Carli asked him. Troy looked down.

“She’s just my sister,” Troy told her, returning to his usual “cool” self. He rolled his eyes and got his back-pack on, “I’m going to school.” Carli watched in disbelief as her son walked out the front door.


Somehow, Nate had finished getting ready. He was showered and had eaten, as well as fed Morgan. She was quiet this morning and it made him more confident. He knew, though, that he had to tell Captain. He carefully lifted Morgan to his shoulder and with one arm, supported her head, neck, and back, gently pressing her against his shoulder so he could have one arm free. Then he dialed.

The phone rang once in the office. Captain immediately picked up.

“Captain McCafferty speaking,” Kate greeted.

“Hey Captain, it’s Nate,” Nate replied, psyching up to tell her why he’d been gone the previous day.

“Where have you been Nate? I didn’t hear from you after you left with that Mr. Chensworth,” Kate told him with a worried tone.

“I’m sorry,” he apologized, “But since I left yesterday, everything changed. (he took a deep breathe) Turns out Kayla had a baby- my baby…….She died during the delivery four days ago and Mr. Chensworth wanted to know if I wanted the baby. At first I said no and he told me she was going into foster care then. He didn’t want her because he blamed her for the death of Kayla. I wasn’t planning on taking her, but when I went to the hospital and looked into her eyes, I knew I could leave her there…so I took her home. I guess that makes me a father now.” Kate took a minute to let it sink in.

“Well that’s great Nate,” Kate finally said, “Everything will be just fine. Does anybody else know?”

“Just Magda,” he told her, “I called her early this morning because the baby wouldn’t stop crying. She helped her calm down. But I was wondering, would it be okay, if just for a while…..if I brought her to work with me? It won’t be long, I just don’t have any nanny’s picked out- I mean, I just found out yesterday.”

“Nate, its fine. You aren’t the first inspector to have child care issues. Bring her in- what’s her name?” Captain reassured him.

“It’s Morgan,” he replied happily and then sadly, “She looks just like her mom.”

“Oh, Nate. It’s going to be okay. You’ll get through this, I know you can,” Kate told him, “Bring her in, I’m dying to meet her.”

“Thanks so much Captain- I owe you. Bye, see you in 20,” Nate stated.

“Bye Nate- bye Morgan!” Captain told him. Both hung up their receivers.

That was sooooo sweet and great! Nate is such a great daddy. I love seeing this side of him. Post more soon!

awwwww, that was so great!!!!!!! this nate is so sweet!!!! :D More please?? :)

here's more :)

Nate was jumping with excitement when his car pulled into the parking lot. Morgan was dressed in a little blue dress Magda had found. Hoping no one would see him until he explained; he climbed out of the car and opened the back door. Nate grabbed the baby carrier with Morgan in it and began his way into the building.

Nate was nearly to his office, when Magda saw him.

“Hey big guy…and young lady. How did the night go?” Magda greeted him.

“Hey. It went pretty good- she didn’t cry again,” Nate informed her.

“Here, let me bring her in. You give your arms a rest,” Magda told him. Nate gently handed the carrier to his friend and they entered the office. Kate had a huge smile on her face and Raina was watching
them with interest. Magda set the carrier on Nate’s desk and Nate sat down- a proud smile on his face.

CD took a deep breath before she entered their division. Looking around nervously, she hoped nobody would ask her about Brian. She didn’t think she could keep her composure and hail Brian at the same time. As her eyes glanced into the office, her face broke into a grin when she saw Nate.

“Whoa Nate! Who trusted you with their kid?” CD asked teasingly, pretending everything was wonderful although she felt scared. Nate’s smile got even bigger. He loved how she flirted with him. He took a deep breathe.

“She’s mine,” Nate replied, making eye contact. CD looked at him in disbelief and walked over to where the sleeping infant lay. She looked at her for a minute.

“Are you sure?” CD asked him, looking from Nate to the baby. Nate chuckled.

“Of course she’s mine- can’t you see the resemblance?” Nate joked. CD smiled again. She began reaching down to pick the baby up.

“You mind?” she asked inquiring to pick up the baby.

“Not at all,” Nate replied with a grin. CD held the child close to her body and lifted her smiling face to look at Nate.

“So where’s her mother?” CD asked, still smiling. Nate’s smile vanished from his face and he immediately looked down at his feet and then up again. He shifted uncomfortably and finally spoke.

“Her, uh, her mother is dead,” Nate responded, catching CD’s eyes. CD’s smile disappeared as well.

“Oh, I’m...I’m sorry,” CD replied, looking into the baby’s eyes.

“It’s okay….we’re going to make it….somehow,” Nate told her, looking at CD and his baby. By now, everyone had arrived at work.

awwwwwwwww, that was so sweet!!!!!!! that scene was AWESOME!!!!!! come back and do it again please?? :D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
awwwwwwwww, that was so sweet!!!!!!! that scene was AWESOME!!!!!! come back and do it again please?? :D

Yeah! What Lisa said:D:D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
awwwwwwwww, that was so sweet!!!!!!! that scene was AWESOME!!!!!! come back and do it again please?? :D

Ditto! :D

Here's more :)

At about noon, Morgan was in tears. Nate walked calmly to the crying baby and tried to determine how to pick her up. CD immediately went over to help. She surprised him by scooping up the crying baby.

“Shh, it’s okay precious. Everything’s going to be fine,” CD reassured Morgan, bouncing her up and down gently. Morgan immediately quieted down and looked into CD’s eyes and smiled. In turn, CD smiled back. Nate watched from about a foot away, looking curiously at his ex-partner.

“Since when did you become a baby expert?” Nate asked. CD blushed and let out a tiny laugh.

“Mother’s instinct,” she replied handing the baby to Nate. All of a sudden Morgan began to fuss and Nate handed her back. CD gave him a reassuring smile.

“Baby’s are so use to a woman’s scent and feel because of the womb, that it’s hard for them to get use to a male voice because she probably didn’t hear it for 40 weeks,” CD explained, gently bouncing the cooing baby.

“How did we every stop being partners?” Nate asked suddenly looking into CD’s glowing face. She looked back, wanting to feel his warmth again.

“You know Nate- the feelings we HAD for each other,” CD told him suddenly regretting the HAD part- she still had feelings for him. Nate looked down towards his feet, wishing she hadn’t said the HAD part- he felt like it was a signal that it was over. To compensate for his pain, he looked at CD and Morgan with a smile.

“Anyway, how are things with Brian?” Nate asked, hiding his hurt. CD’s smile started to turn into a frown- her natural feelings, but she turned a smile on her face.

“Great,” she replied turning on a phony voice. Nate, smiled, not realizing the pain hidden behind the smile. The whole time, CD was dying to tell Nate what was really happening, but she was scared. She felt she couldn’t tell anyone, not even Nate.

SURE she can talk to Nate!!!!!! ;) go CD, go CD, go go go!! YOU CAN DO IT!!!!

btw that was great, and i want more!!! :) :D

OF COURSE she can tell Nate! :D CD can tell Nate anything! :D That was great, and a little sad. Post more soon!

this part is really sad...my sis wrote it...it'll get better though and some romance is ahead...

CD kept her eyes on the clock as it hit 6:00p.m. She was on the edge of her seat, waiting for the Captain’s dismissal. They’d had a long day of work and now she had to face Brian – with her being late on top of that. Finally, 5 minutes after the hour, she got up enough courage to ask the Captain to leave. “Captain, uh… I have a date tonight. If there’s nothing more I can do, could I go?”

“Sure CD, and say “hi” to Brian for me, will you?” Captain told her. CD swallowed and made her exit. Nate’s eyes lingered on CD as she left.
“I’ll do that,” CD told the Captain shakily, trying to ignore Nate’s eyes. Cap smiled and CD left.

When she drove to her apartment, it was 6:32p.m. She could see Brian’s car parked in the parking lot of the complex. She walked quickly up to her apartment, hoping Brian wouldn’t notice the time. When she reached the door, it was already open, which was odd, since no one but she and the neighbor had the key. She slowly pushed the door open to see a dark figure in the chair in her family room. She quietly closed the door behind her, knowing exactly who it was- Brian.

“Hi,” she calmly stated, making her way toward the chair he was sitting in, “I called you at your place and you cell, but you didn’t pick up.”

He hadn’t uttered a word and he had a beer gently swaying in his left hand. All of the sudden, he dropped the beer and it shattered on the wooden floor. He got up from the chair, rage burning in his eyes, and he slapped her across the face. She sank down in fear, stuttering and explaining where she was.

“Silence!” he shouted, loud enough to get her attention, but quiet enough so the neighbors could barely hear. She looked up at him with terrified toddler eyes. He was like a storm that followed her. “Do you know what time it is?”

“Yes, Brian, I, the captain, I couldn’t get away,” she mumbled, keeping her eyes on the floor.

Brian raged, “Look at me when you speak!” She trembled as she raised her head. He hooked her in her jaw. As she went to fall on her knees, he lifted her up by her shirt and threw her on the couch. CD was crying.

Great fanfic I hate what brian did to CD :mad:

that jerk!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:

uhhh, Nate to the rescue?? ;) LOL :)

or at least post more soon?!

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
that jerk!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:

uhhh, Nate to the rescue?? ;) LOL :)

or at least post more soon?!

That exactly! Poor CD.....post more soon!

lol, Nate's not going to save her quite yet....
By 8 pm, all the inspectors were allowed to go home.

Morgan had been good all day and was sleeping when Nate carried the baby carrier to the car. He secured her in her seat and drove off towards his home. All he could think about was CD…it’d been so hard the past year and he missed her more than ever. He knew captain’s decision was so their feelings wouldn’t interfere with their work, but after all that- they’d gone separate ways. He kept remembering the way she had said “HAD” when discussing their feelings. He thought he was over her, but seeing her today brought back all the feelings. He concentrated on the road and getting home for the rest of the trip. He was relieved that Morgan was in his life and hoped she could help seal some of his “open wounds.”

Magda had made a mad dash for her house. Not only did she want to see Ben, but she wanted to hear from Dr. Sagemyer.
She made it home in record time- 10 minutes. As soon as she came in, the phone began ringing. She dropped everything in her arms and sprinted to the vibrating phone. Magda snatched it off the receiver and hit the red button to receive the call.

“Inspector Ramirez speaking,” Magda answered.

“Hello Magda, its Dr. Sagemyer,” the voice on the other end responded. Magda’s heart skipped a beat.

“What did my results show?” she asked quickly, bracing herself.

“You are pregnant, Magda,” Dr. Sagemyer told her slowly, “I’d like you to come into tomorrow morning- about 7 AM, so we can get an ultrasound and begin your prenatal care, okay?” Magda closed her eyes- she’d known all along.

“Sure, sure. That sounds fine,” Magda whispered as Ben came in the room.

“See you at 7, then,” Dr. Sagemyer told her, “Everything will be fine.”

“Okay- thank you Isabelle,” Magda said, “Good-bye.” She quickly placed the phone back.

“Ben, I need to talk to you,” Magda told her son. Ben immediately looked worried and sat down on the couch. Magda approached him slowly. She took a deep breathe.

“Ben….I’m going to…Your going to have….well….I’m pregnant,” Magda told him, a reassuring smile forming on her face. Magda didn’t know what to expect for his response. Suddenly, Ben broke into grin.

“I get to be a brother?” he asked excitedly. Magda nodded, tears of joy misting in her eyes.

“Come here, poppy,” she whispered, holding out her arms to give him a hug. When she embraced him, she took in the scent of his hair. She remembered him as a baby and suddenly felt a sense of security. This baby wouldn’t leave her like Gabriel had. Now she would have two miracles to love.


Jinny drove home slowly. Her stomach wasn’t so persistent and she was taking in the beautiful scenery.

20 minutes later, she arrived home. Jack was busy watching TV in the living room. She placed her purse and keys on the counter and walked over to the couch. In minutes, she had slid into position right next to him. He laid his arm around her.

“Did you get dinner on the way home?” Jack asked her as she laid her head on his chest.

“Yeah,” Jinny lied. Jack seemed satisfied.


“Ethan, we need to talk to McKenzie,” Carli whispered when she got home. She’d passed on to him what Troy had told her. Dakota was at a friend’s house and Troy was at a party because it was Friday night. Ethan nodded in response and got up to join her. They walked quickly to their daughter’s room. Carli knocked gently on the door.

“McKenzie, sweetheart….can we talk to you?” Carli asked from behind the locked door. They got no response.

“McKenzie, your mother and I need to speak to you- open up,” Ethan stated, a hint of anger in his voice. Still no response. They wanted to get this over with tonight, so Ethan picked the lock and they entered the room. Carli was taken aback when she looked at her daughter’s mirror which had been taken off the wall and laid down, and saw white powder pushed into a small pile. Next to it, lay a rolled up dollar bill.

“McKenzie!?” Ethan yelled, looking to see where his daughter was. They moved to the bathroom where the light was on. It was already open and Ethan pushed forward. Drops of blood splattered the floor and there lay McKenzie, her wrists bleeding. In one bloody hand was a razor. McKenzie wasn’t moving and her face was a pale gray. Ethan ran to call 9-1-1, while Carli put pressure on the slits. When she cleaned some of the blood from her daughter’s forearm, she noticed several scars and felt sick to her stomach.

“What happened to you?” Carli whispered, tears stinging her eyes, “How did I not realize what was happening to you? The falling grades, the attitude, the frequent sick days- the long sleeve shirts!? I’m a cop for god’s sake!” Moments later, Ethan was back and an ambulance was heard in the distance.

Raina and Captain both drove home to empty houses. Raina prepared for a date that night, while Captain fixed herself some tea.

There is a method to my madness- LOL. Her pregnancy helps mix things up a bit- in partners that is :)

Hope you enjoy! :)
btw, i kind of write carli out within the next post or so...they'll be small stuff about how she is in later post, but nothing else big :)

awww, that was really GREAT!! and i like carli!!!!!!!!!!!

that was so good, can't wait for more!!! :)

That was so great! I do like Carli, but I would much prefer that Nate have a different partner, one whose name also starts with Ca...... LOL. Post more soon!

Originally posted by Snowfall
That was so great! I do like Carli, but I would much prefer that Nate have a different partner, one whose name also starts with Ca...... LOL. Post more soon!

that WOULD be cool if Cat was his partner!!! ;) :)

here's more :)
By 8 pm, all the inspectors were allowed to go home.

Morgan had been good all day and was sleeping when Nate carried the baby carrier to the car. He secured her in her seat and drove off towards his home. All he could think about was CD…it’d been so hard the past year and he missed her more than ever. He knew captain’s decision was so their feelings wouldn’t interfere with their work, but after all that- they’d gone separate ways. He kept remembering the way she had said “HAD” when discussing their feelings. He thought he was over her, but seeing her today brought back all the feelings. He concentrated on the road and getting home for the rest of the trip. He was relieved that Morgan was in his life and hoped she could help seal some of his “open wounds.”

Magda had made a mad dash for her house. Not only did she want to see Ben, but she wanted to hear from Dr. Sagemyer.
She made it home in record time- 10 minutes. As soon as she came in, the phone began ringing. She dropped everything in her arms and sprinted to the vibrating phone. Magda snatched it off the receiver and hit the red button to receive the call.

“Inspector Ramirez speaking,” Magda answered.

“Hello Magda, its Dr. Sagemyer,” the voice on the other end responded. Magda’s heart skipped a beat.

“What did my results show?” she asked quickly, bracing herself.

“You are pregnant, Magda,” Dr. Sagemyer told her slowly, “I’d like you to come into tomorrow morning- about 7 AM, so we can get an ultrasound and begin your prenatal care, okay?” Magda closed her eyes- she’d known all along.

“Sure, sure. That sounds fine,” Magda whispered as Ben came in the room.

“See you at 7, then,” Dr. Sagemyer told her, “Everything will be fine.”

“Okay- thank you Isabelle,” Magda said, “Good-bye.” She quickly placed the phone back.

“Ben, I need to talk to you,” Magda told her son. Ben immediately looked worried and sat down on the couch. Magda approached him slowly. She took a deep breathe.

“Ben….I’m going to…Your going to have….well….I’m pregnant,” Magda told him, a reassuring smile forming on her face. Magda didn’t know what to expect for his response. Suddenly, Ben broke into grin.

“I get to be a brother?” he asked excitedly. Magda nodded, tears of joy misting in her eyes.

“Come here, poppy,” she whispered, holding out her arms to give him a hug. When she embraced him, she took in the scent of his hair. She remembered him as a baby and suddenly felt a sense of security. This baby wouldn’t leave her like Gabriel had. Now she would have two miracles to love.


Jinny drove home slowly. Her stomach wasn’t so persistent and she was taking in the beautiful scenery.

20 minutes later, she arrived home. Jack was busy watching TV in the living room. She placed her purse and keys on the counter and walked over to the couch. In minutes, she had slid into position right next to him. He laid his arm around her.

“Did you get dinner on the way home?” Jack asked her as she laid her head on his chest.

“Yeah,” Jinny lied. Jack seemed satisfied.


“Ethan, we need to talk to McKenzie,” Carli whispered when she got home. She’d passed on to him what Troy had told her. Dakota was at a friend’s house and Troy was at a party because it was Friday night. Ethan nodded in response and got up to join her. They walked quickly to their daughter’s room. Carli knocked gently on the door.

“McKenzie, sweetheart….can we talk to you?” Carli asked from behind the locked door. They got no response.

“McKenzie, your mother and I need to speak to you- open up,” Ethan stated, a hint of anger in his voice. Still no response. They wanted to get this over with tonight, so Ethan picked the lock and they entered the room. Carli was taken aback when she looked at her daughter’s mirror which had been taken off the wall and laid down, and saw white powder pushed into a small pile. Next to it, lay a rolled up dollar bill.

“McKenzie!?” Ethan yelled, looking to see where his daughter was. They moved to the bathroom where the light was on. It was already open and Ethan pushed forward. Drops of blood splattered the floor and there lay McKenzie, her wrists bleeding. In one bloody hand was a razor. McKenzie wasn’t moving and her face was a pale gray. Ethan ran to call 9-1-1, while Carli put pressure on the slits. When she cleaned some of the blood from her daughter’s forearm, she noticed several scars and felt sick to her stomach.

“What happened to you?” Carli whispered, tears stinging her eyes, “How did I not realize what was happening to you? The falling grades, the attitude, the frequent sick days- the long sleeve shirts!? I’m a cop for god’s sake!” Moments later, Ethan was back and an ambulance was heard in the distance.

Raina and Captain both drove home to empty houses. Raina prepared for a date that night, while Captain fixed herself some tea.

There is a method to my madness- LOL. Her pregnancy helps mix things up a bit- in partners that is :)

Umm..I think this is the same thing as the last post. I could be wring but I just wanted to point that out. :p :D Post more soon

oops! I was in a rush and really wanted to post more! Sorry! I'll post more later- i'm on the wrong computer....i have to remember to highlight what i posted LOL :)

here's more- new more lol
“Magda- glad to see you again,” Dr. Sagemyer greeted her patient as she entered the room. Magda managed a weak smile.

“I’ve been thinking it over- doc….I’ve finally come to terms with what you told me and I’m ready to be a mother again,” Magda told her, a grin spreading over her face. The smile was contagious and Dr. Sagemyer returned the expression.

“Okay, well let’s have a look,” Dr. Sagemyer responded beginning to spread the lubricant on Magda’s bare stomach, “I’m going to spread this gel on your stomach- it may be a little cold- and we’re going to use this device here to look inside your stomach.” Magda nodded in acknowledgement. The doctor began moving the small device over Magda’s stomach.

“Look’s like you’re about 6 weeks along,” Isabelle said, and then a frown formed on her face.

“What’s wrong doctor?” Magda suddenly asked her eyes wide with fear.

“Um…uh…it looks like your baby has a hole in its back,” Dr. Sagemyer whispered and when Magda looked at her cluelessly, “I think your baby has spina bifida- it’s a nerve damaging condition that is caused when the fetus doesn’t get enough folic acid during it’s first month after conception. The results will most likely leave the baby in a wheelchair for life.”

Magda looked at her in shock.

“But Magda- there is an operation we can do….” Dr. Sagemyer said, “We’ll go in and operate on the fetus while it’s still in the womb. Since we caught this so early- we should be able to fix it before it causes an extreme amount of damage. You interested?”

“Of course! How much damage do…do you think has been done…so far?” she asked hesitantly. Dr. Sagemyer smiled.

“Not much to none,” she told her, “We would still want you to stay resting until your due date though to ensure no further complications. When we operate on the uterus, there is always the chance that the amniotic sac may start leaking or you may go into premature labor. But if the surgery is successful and you hang low for a couple of months, the baby could be completely healthy.” Magda attempted a smile and at that moment- decided she’d do anything for this baby.

“Okay,” she whispered, “Schedule me as soon as possible. I’ll inform my captain today.” Dr. Sagemyer nodded.

“Okay, good-bye Magda,” Isabelle replied exiting the room. Magda took a deep breathe as the door closed and began getting ready to go to work- she was going to do anything for this baby.


“Captain, I really need to talk to you,” Magda whispered, closing the captain’s office door as she entered. Kate looked concerned as Magda approached the desk.

“What is it Magda?” Kate asked, looking up at her face.

“I-I’m pregnant,” she said, a weak smile forming on my face, “But- the baby has spina bifida….my doctor said that they can operate and that the baby could be fine, but I have to “lay low” until I deliver so no further complications occur. The doctor said I can stay active in my home and possibly work from there, but I shouldn’t be doing much driving, or stake-outs…well…you know.” Captain looked sympathetic.

“Okay- Mag. Take as much time as you need,” she replied and Magda then turned to leave. As the door closed, Kate mutter, “2nd inspector today.

~5 minutes later~

“I need everybody to gather around,” Captain addressed everyone as her office door closed, “Where’s CD?” All of a sudden, the blond rushed in. Her bruise from two days ago, plus the newest bruise from the day earlier had been covered up. Brian was getting smarter in that he was now hitting hear where no one would see. She hoped no one would notice.

“I’m here captain,” CD shouted, sitting at her desk. Kate smiled as a greeting.

“Okay, as it turns out,” Kate began addressing Magda, Jinny, Raina, CD, and Nate (plus Morgan), “Carli is taking some time off to deal with personal problems- please send her your wishes. And Magda is pregnant (everybody quickly congratulated her and Jinny looked disappointed because she hadn’t been told first.) Her doctor has ordered her to stay home until the delivery because of complications (everyone looked curiously as her) So, we need to re-partner for the time being. Raina, I’d like you to be Jinny’s partner (Jinny actually looked sort of happy) And, CD, I’d like you and Nate to be partner (a huge grin spread across each of their faces) You guys work very well together…Let’s see how it goes. Remember, this is just temporary. And Magda- we all wish you well.” CD went over to Nate’s desk which had Morgan sitting on top of it.

“Hey partner,” she whispered with a smile. Nate stood up briefly to give her a hug.

“The same spectacular duo,” he replied, his arm still around her. The two were elated to be partners again.

~By the way- when a spina bifida is identified in the fetus, they don’t usually find it until about 6 months or so into the pregnancy- then they operate. For the sake of this baby though- it’s sort of fictional for the stage of pregnancy they find it, but it has to be now. LOL

that's really strange that u put that last part, b/c i was going to ask if it was true or not!! lol, now i know!! ;)

and that was awesome!!! I love CD and Nate being partners again!! :) MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!

Oh, WOW, great! CD and Nate being partners again, and NOW they have this baby to take care of, too! :D Hmmm, I smell something cooking at the Felony Division Kitchen......;) :D Post more soon of this great fic!

here's some more :):) hope you like it :)

“Hey Nate….I think this pregnancy came at just the right time,” Magda said to Nate before she left. He looked at her puzzled.

“I’ll drive myself nuts if I’m home doing nothing the whole day- I could watch Morgan for you- no charge,” Magda offered. Nate’s face lit up.

“You wouldn’t mind?” he asked, a grin spread across his face.

“Not at all….you could drop her off in the morning before work and then pick her up on your way home. If you’re going to stay out late, give me a call and I’ll watch her the night. I have some necessary items from when Ben was a baby,” Magda informed the glowing father.

“Thanks so much Mag- I really owe you,” Nate told her, as she got ready to go.

“Bye Nate- bye CD, bye everyone,” Magda shouted as she headed out the door with Morgan. They all waved except Jinny….she was still trying to grasp what had just happened.

“Inspectors, come here for your assignments,” Captain barked by her office door. They all moved in close. “Raina- Jinny, we have a rape….victims name is Sarah Carlos, 19. She’s in interrogation room 1. I’ll fill you in on the details later. Nate- CD….a kidnapping. We need you over to 1151 South Carol Street…missing is 7 year old Diana Chiles- the only Chiles child. Approach this carefully guys, the Chiles are millionaires…don’t let them run your job.” They all nodded and headed off to deal with their assignments.

~One month later~
Jinny is still going down the road with her self-destructive behaviors of anorexia and bulimia. Magda continues to watch Morgan everyday. CD is still with Brian and he continues to abuse her. She is too scared to tell anyone- even Nate. Carli is still off work- McKenzie is slowly getting better and kicking her habits. The strain of McKenzie is making Carli and Ethan’s marriage go downhill. Nate & CD are still partners and Jinny & Raina are still paired together.

“Hey, I’m sorry I’m late Nate…I had a late night,” CD told her partner out of breathe as she ran in late to work for the 2nd time that week. Nate tried not to be mad, but he was tired from a long night with Morgan. CD attempted a smile, but her face was sore from the previous night with Brian.

“How was your night?” CD asked sincerely, hoping to break the ice. Nate’s familiar grin appeared on his face.

“I think Morgan has night and day switched- Magda is so lucky. She cried nearly all night. I think I was able to steal about an hour of sleep,” Nate told her fondly. CD let out a small laugh.

“What about you?” Nate questioned, suspiciously eying a bluish smudge near CD’s right eye. CD nervously pushed back a lock of blond hair, revealing another bruise barely peaking out from under her light hair. Nate wasn’t sure what to think.

“My night was good too,” CD replied, “Brian came over- we watched some movies.” CD smiled, hoping Nate’s worried expression would go away. He tried to relax, but he wasn’t sure what was going on with CD.

“Inspectors (referring to CD and Nate)- homicide on East Market- corner of Philips and Martina’s flowers. I think it’s the same perp who killed Diana Chiles, Courtney Delving, and Samantha Warner. Victim is 3 year old Olivia Bell- the girl kidnapped a week ago. She was also sexually assaulted before dumped. He’s going younger,” Kate told them sadly. Nate’s face fell and CD’s eyes misted. They’d been hunting this guy for a month.

“We’re on it captain,” CD replied.

awwwwwww :( that was sooo sad, but still so good!!!!! post more soon!!! like tonight!!!! ;)

Awwww! That WAS so sad.....:( I hope Nate gets to kick Brian's butt in soon......Post more soon!

:(CD! Come on leave that creep and get with Nate!:D:D Post more soon:)

here's more :) sorry it took so long to post...i have a lot of school work :) i'll try to post some tomorrow

CD and Nate were about halfway to the Bell’s home to tell them the news- CD driving- when Nate finally decided to pry into what was wrong.
“What’s wrong CD?” Nate asked suddenly surprising CD. She shifted uncomfortably in her seat.
“Nothing….why?” she asked curiously, trying her best to look innocent. Nate stared at her, curiously as well.
“You haven’t been yourself lately…you’ve seemed distracted, nervous. It’s much different from when we were partners the first time.”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about- I feel…I am fine,” CD mumbled, not looking at his face. Nate wasn’t convinced.
“CD…we’re friends- you can tell me what’s wrong!” Nate begged. CD looked at him briefly; the words were at the tip of her tongue.
“Nate, there’s nothing wrong,” CD firmly stated, her lips quivering to tell him what was really wrong. He didn’t want to “break” her so he stopped pushing. They were silent the rest of the way to the Bell’s.

“Jinny, what’s wrong?” Magda asked, gently bouncing month old Morgan to get her to fall asleep. Jinny sat on the couch, pale, and deathly thin.
“Nothing,” Jinny whispered, putting on a false smile, “How’s the last month been….I mean without your job.” Magda wasn’t convinced that it was nothing, but she knew Jinny would come around and she hoped soon.
“It would have been boring if I hadn’t had Morgan hear to play with,” Magda cooed and then in a normal voice, “Ben’s really accepting the fate of his sibling. He wants to help out- he’s helped quite a bit with Morgan. How are things with you and Jack?” Jinny smiled.
“Great. He’s one of the best things that have ever happened to me. His son visited last weekend- you know, Clay. I thought his mother would never release him from her hold, but he came. He’s a darling boy Mag- I’d really like you to meet him as he is my step-son,” Jinny replied, a warm smile across her face. Magda returned the smile.
“Sounds great. After my little one arrives, we’ll be able to do a lot more,” Magda told her.
“Hey Mag,” Jinny said suddenly, “How is- you know?” Magda and Jinny were best friends- she knew.
“The surgery? It went great…The doctor says there is a good chance that there was no damage,” Magda stated optimistically. Jinny smiled.

“Poor people- she’s their only child!” CD mumbled as Nate drove them from the Bell’s house.
“Yeah, I don’t know what I’d do if Morgan went missing and then was killed- she’s one of the best things that have ever happened to me,” Nate said honestly. CD smiled at him- he was one of the best things that had ever happened to her.
“Do you want me to drop you off at your apartment complex?” Nate asked. CD nodded with a smile. Nate returned the favor.

“See you tomorrow babe,” Nate said as CD got out of the car. CD gave him a sheepish grin and pretended to be offended.
“See ya Nate,” she replied, running into the building quickly- Brian’s car was parked outside.
Nate was halfway down the road from the apartment, when he realized CD had left her purse in the car. He immediately turned around and headed back to the apartment…

OMG WHY THE HELL DID U STOP?!!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:


u better be planning on getting back here ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! i HAVE to know what goes down now!! ;) :D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
OMG WHY THE HELL DID U STOP?!!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:


u better be planning on getting back here ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! i HAVE to know what goes down now!! ;) :D

What Lisa said!

here's more :):):)

“Why did he drive you home?” Brian demanded as soon as CD got in the door.
“Brian, he’s my partner- we’re friends,” CD told him cautiously putting her coat on a hanger and sticking it in the closet. Brian chuckled- an evil, twisted chuckle. CD wasn’t sure what to do, so she just stood there, waiting to see what would happen.
“You’re not allowed to have friends that are guys,” Brian angrily replied, firmly grabbing her arm. As she tried to twist out of his grasp:
“Brian- I want you to stop controlling me. We’re through! I can’t take this anymore!” CD yelled, finally gaining her courage. Brian was taken aback.
“We’re never through!” he snarled, shoving her onto the couch.
“No Brian, please stop!” she pleaded, trying to push him away. He yanked her from the couch and threw her against the wall, knocking her against her mantel. Blood trickled from a cut on her forehead. Her first thought was to get her gun, but it was across the room. Brian lunged at her, grabbing her by the waist and slamming her into the floor. As soon as she was down, he began kicking her and swearing. CD tried to push herself up, but his continuous blows knocked her down.
A minute later, she was motionless. Brian continued to punch and kick her.

At that moment, Nate was coming up her hallway. He was poised, ready to knock, when he heard Brian yelling and screaming. He knew CD was in danger and at that moment, he knew Brian was involved in her personality change. Without a second thought, Nate kicked the door down. Brian looked up, surprised, but Nate didn’t take time to notice Brian’s expression. All he saw was a helpless, motionless CD laying on the floor. His adrenaline pumping, he ran full speed at Brian, knocking him against the wall. Mixing swear words with questions, Nate’s shouted into Brian’s face. Within seconds, Brian wrestled free and darted out the open door.
Nate bent down, beads of sweat on his forehead, and checked CD’s vitals. He found that she had a light pulse and labored breathing.
“Somebody help! Please! Help!” Nate yelled frantically. A teenage boy walked by the apartment.
“Help! Call 9-1-1!”Nate shouted at the boy.
“No man, I ain’t callin’ for help. You mess that girl up, you get help for her. Jeez- didn’t you know she was like a cop!?” the boy muttered, a stupid expression hanging on his face. After saying that to Nate, the boy continued on.
“Damn!” Nate shouted. He didn’t want to leave CD, but he didn’t have his cell phone on him. Laying her hand down gently, he raced to the phone and dialed 9-1-1. After he knew an ambulance was on its way, he ran back to CD, who was still not responding. Since she was still breathing and had a pulse, Nate couldn’t help her at all. He stayed there holding her hand, praying the ambulance would come soon.

and why the HELL did you stop?!!!!!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:


this is heatin up and i wanna know what happens NOW!!! :) :D

Well thank goodness SOMEONE knows what that Brain is doing to her. I hope CD is ok. WHY DID U STOP THOUGH!?!?! :mad: We need to know what happens!!

OMG! Get back here and post more! :eek: CD has to be OK! Post more ASAP!

enjoy!
“What the hell happened Nate?” Jinny asked, exhaustedly, when she arrived at the scene. Nate’s face was ghostly pale. They were loading CD into the ambulance.
“Brian. Find him!” Nate told her out of breathe as he climbed in after the paramedic. Jinny nodded- she’d never seen Nate like this.

4 hours later-

“Nate, oh my god! I just heard!” Magda stated loudly on the other end of the phone.
“Doctor says she’s going to be okay,” he replied, “But could you do me a favor? Would you mind watching Morgan until I know CD’s alright?” Nate’s voice was sad and lost.
“Of course Nate,” Magda replied, “Take as long as you need.” They wrapped up their conversation and Nate returned to CD’s room. At the time, they had put her in a drug induced coma to prevent swelling on the brain.

12 hours later-

“Detective Basso? (Nate looked up. He was sitting in a chair next to her bed) We’re going to take her out of the coma we induced now,” the doctor told him, walking to his patient.
“Will she wake up?” Nate asked hopefully. The doctor looked unsure.
“We hope. There’s no guarantee though, just hope for the best,” the doctor medically informed him. Nate tried to be hopeful, but the fact that it was only a chance worried him. The doctor began the process of getting her out of a coma.

CD’s eyes flickered open. The scene was blurry, but slowly became clear. A huge smile spread across Nate’s face.
“Nate,” CD moaned, looking towards him. Nate’s eyes misted and held tightly to her hand.
“I’m right here,” he whispered. CD attempted to sit up, but Nate helped her up. She managed a chuckle.
“Nate, I can sit up by myself,” she whispered, letting her blue eyes gazed into his brown ones. Nate’s face fell into a sheepish half smile.
“CD, do you know why you are here?” he asked curiously. CD looked away, tears filling her eyes.
“Brian,” she whispered, “I-I don’t remember much….but I know it was him.” She couldn’t hold it any longer, large tears slithered down her cheek. Nate affectionately wiped them away.
“It’s okay, I know….I saw him,” Nate told her, sitting in the chair, but still holding his hand. CD’s face remained still. “Jinny’s going to find him- he’s going to pay.” CD nodded, and looked out the window. Her eye was black and she was bruised all over, but she felt strong.

“Where is he!?” Nate demanded as he rushed into the office. Jinny and Raina looked up startled from their desks.
“Nate, I don’t really think it’d be best if you interrogated him,” Jinny told him gently. Nate looked at her.
“Jinny, we need a man to handle this. Brian’s too bi-” Nate started.
“Nate, you know damn well that I’m every bit as capable as you. This is too personal- captain is going to ask you to step aside,” Jinny retorted. Nate took a second to calm down and nodded.
“While you’re making the bastard sweat what should I do? CD told me to go home and get some rest- but I can’t do that. Magda and Ben took Morgan to the park, so I can’t pick her up. What can I do to help?” Nate asked. Jinny allowed a smile to creep up on her face.
“Give Raina your statement. You saw what happened,” Jinny told him. Nate responded with a nod and headed over to Raina’s desk.

That was great! I am glad CD is okay. It's going to be hard but it's better than being beaten up. Post more soon:)

aww, that was GREAT!!! I'm so glad CD's alright; please post more of this VERY soon!!!!!!! :D :D

Awwww, that was so great! I loved the part when CD woke up, and she and Nate were happy to see each other. Now let Brian fry! :D Post more soon!

here's more....I really like this part :)
“Hey, how are you doing?” Nate whispered later that night as CD’s eyes flickered over.
“The doctor said you can go home in the morning,” Nate told her happily. CD smiled.
“I think it’d be best if you stayed with Morgan and I until you get fully back on your feet,” Nate suggested in more of a telling tone.
“Sure, if you think that’s what best,” CD teased. She felt free from all that’d been going on over the past month. Two hours later, Nate was still there.

“Are you planning on spending the Nate?” CD teased. Nate looked at her with a sheepish grin.
“Go home! Pick up your daughter- get some sleep,” CD told him. Nate looked sad, but he missed Morgan. After another 15 minutes, he called Magda to let her know that he was on his way to pick his daughter up. He couldn’t wait.

8:00 am

“I’m Nate Basso, I’m here to pick up CD DeLorenzo,” Nate said, balancing his id with Morgan, who was sleeping. The receptionist smiled at him and checked him in.
“You may go up,” she told him. Carrying Morgan, he headed to the elevator to go pick her up.

5 minutes later.

“Hey,” CD greeted them.
“Look you came to see you,” Nate told her bringing Morgan over. CD reached out her arms and Nate handed the baby to her. She held the infant close to her and Morgan remained asleep. No one said anything- they didn’t have too.
“So, are you ready?” Nate asked 10 minutes later.
“Whenever you are,” she replied. Nate pushed her wheelchair out of the room and CD held the baby. They were at the end of the hall when someone made a comment.
“Oh, what a beautiful baby you have? When did you give birth?” a woman with a young baby asked. Both chuckled.
“She’s not mine,” CD replied, “Morgan is his. He’s picking me up.” The woman looked slightly confused, but nodded nevertheless. The made it out of the hospital, 3 confrontations later. CD was elated that they thought they looked like a family. Nate helped CD into the car and had her holding Morgan. He climbed in the other side. Neither of them said a word as they rode, they just enjoyed the scenery. Morgan was still sleeping when they got to Nate’s apartment. He again, helped CD out despite her protests and they headed into his apartment.
While Nate went to lay Morgan in the nursery to finish her nap, CD took in the safety and comfort of her partner’s home. She always felt safe when she was with him.

“If you want, you can sleep on the couch,” Nate told her, a grin spread across his face. At first, CD’s face showed only a small smile and she didn’t completely unexpected. She walked over to Nate, closing in the distance so that their faces were centimeters apart. They could feel each others breathe on their face. A moment later, their lips locked together and a tingle ran through both of their bodies. As the kiss intensified, they slid down onto the couch.
To them, it felt like hardly any time had passed when Morgan woke up crying. Nate reluctantly got off the couch and headed to the nursery to comfort his baby. CD smiled as he exited- he was so caring and attractive with the baby.

The baby settled down quickly and when Nate returned, CD was sitting upright. Over the next several hours, they talked about their lives. How they’d been since they broke up and what had been going on.


Jinny walked into the kitchen where Jack was cooking. She felt light headed and headed to the refrigerator to grab a glass of water. She had just grabbed the glad when her knees buckled underneath her and she collapsed to the ground. The glass shattered on the ground and left a cut across her forehead. Jack immediately jumped up and ran to her. Jinny was mumbling and not making any sense. He reached up for the phone and began dialing for help.

awwwwww that was sooo cute!!!! i loved it so much!!!!!! can u post more soon?? like RIGHT NOW THIS VERY SECOND?!! ;) :D :D

Awwww, that was SO FABULOUSLY FANTASTICLY AMAZINGLY WONDERFUL!!!!!! :D I loved the part where CD and Nate finally kissed! Yay!!! Post more soon since Lisa gave you a new page! :D

here;s some more:

“How is she?” Nate asked as he and CD holding Morgan rushed into the hospital. Jack was standing there, his arms crossed, and looking exhausted.

“I don’t know. No one will tell me a damn thing!” he retorted sitting down on the couch next to Jinny’s father, Ronnie, and Matt. Nate, CD, and Morgan sat on the couch adjacent to there couch and waited for news.

About an hour later, Captain arrived bringing Magda and Ben with her. She bought Magda in with a wheelchair so she could come to the hospital, but not disobey her doctor’s orders. Finally, after another hour, the doctor came out.

“What took so long!?” Jack demanded when the young doctor went to them.

“Jack, it’s going to be okay,” Magda whispered, “Relax.” Jack looked sad and went back to sitting on the couch.

“She’s been stabilized,” he told them confidently, “From what we can tell….she’s be suffering from anorexia and bulimia. Now, she’s at a-”

“That’s bull,” Jack retorted, “If Jinny had an eating disorder, I would know.” The doctor ignored him tone.

“Most victims of eating disorders are very secretive. If she was able to skip a meal without anybody noticing, she wouldn’t have to go bulimic and throw it up,” he replied, “We believe this has been going on about a month. We have tubes giving her nutrients attached to her now, to stabilize her weight.” Jack looked extremely alarmed and didn’t speak out again. They were all shocked.

“When can we see her?” Magda asked.

“I can take one person now,” he replied and then attempting to joke, “Anybody but Mr. Grumpy over there.” Jack glared at him.

“I’m going back to see my wife,” he told the doctor standing up. The doctor nodded and began walking down the hall with Jack following him.

“My god,” CD whispered to Nate. Neither knew what else to say. Magda sat in her chair, silently praying to god to heal Jinny. Meanwhile, Captain contently read a magazine which Nate went with one of the nurses to the children’s section. Morgan remained asleep in CD’s arms.

After an hour, Jack returned and wheeled Magda to go see her. When Magda came back, tears stained her face. Nate and CD briefly saw her and then went to take Magda and Ben home. Jinny’s dad went back next and then Ronnie and Matt. By then, everybody but Jack and Captain were left. Jack took Captain back from a short period of time and then remained alone with Jinny until closing time.

“I’m sorry,” Jinny whispered, placing her hand with an IV stuck into it on his hand. Jack attempted to smile.

“It’s okay honey. We’re going to get through this,” he told her, giving her a kiss on the forehead. Just then, Carli appeared with McKenzie and Dakota.

“Are we too late?” she asked, standing in the door with her children.

“No, it’s okay Carli, come in,” Jinny told them. Jack stepped back and sat in the nearby chair as Carli moved in. McKenzie and Dakota remained behind her.

“Where’s Ethan?” Jinny asked shortly after. Carli looked away.

“We decided to take a break,” she told her friend, “He’s living in Northern California with Troy.”

“Jack and I know this great counselor,” Jinny told her, her voice trailing off.

“I’m afraid it’s too late for that hun,” she whispered so that her kids couldn’t hear, “He served me the divorce papers a week ago. It’s hard for me to fill them out and sign my name to terminate the marriage. We figured it’d be too hard to send the kids back and forth, so I’m keeping McKenzie and Dakota so I can work with McKenzie- help her.” Jinny nodded, tears stinging her eyes. She felt Carli’s pain.

“Well, if you need anything, feel free to give us a call,” Carli told her, wrapping up their visit. Jinny nodded and smiled. With that, Carli got off her knees and ushered her children out the door. She waved good-bye and they headed home. After they left, a nurse stuck her head in the room and told Jack that it was time to leave. They shared a deep kiss and then he headed home as well. The house would be empty without her, but he wanted her to get better.


the part i just wrote is great- more CD/Nate :)

That was great! Poor Carli, though. :( I'm looking forward to the more CD and Nate part! :D Post more soon!

here's more :)

Seven months have passed. CD and Nate are living together and have just started serious dating. CD is still living with Nate and she is undergoing the process of becoming Morgan’s mother through legal documents. Jinny recovered from her anorexia and bulimia. Under the watchful eyes of Jack, she is back to normal weight and still working in the division. Nate and CD work as partners and Raina and Jinny are temporarily working together. Carli assists both set of partners. Magda is…

“Push Magdalena, push!” the doctor shouted. Magda let out a holler as the labor pains intensified. Nate took the duty of holding one of her hands for support while Jinny squeezed the other. Also in the room was Raina, CD, Morgan (held by CD) Carli, Captain, Ben, her mom, and Lilly.

“Come on Mag, you can do it,” Jinny encouraged her friend. Everybody, but Captain and Magda’s mom watched this experience with wonder as it was their first time attending a birth.

“The baby’s head is crowning,” Dr. Sagemyer announced, “He’s a month early, but he’s going to be big!” Magda’s face showed a mixture of compassion and pain. She squeezed her friend’s hands tighter and yelled.

“Come on Magda, just a few more pushes!” the doctor informed her. With another scream, Magda pushed again. Three pushes later, the baby came out. Dr. Sagemyer placed the baby on her stomach and began wiping him off.

“It’s a boy!” Jinny told her excitedly.

“I have a brother!” Ben delightedly yelled with a huge grin across his face. All Magda could do was smile.

“Congratulations Mag- he’s beautiful,” CD told her, grinning was ear to ear. Nate was mesmerized at the sight of the infant. Dr. Sagemyer wrapped the baby in a light blue blanket and put a blue knit cap over his head. When she was sure he was fine, she left.

“Why is he blotchy?” Raina asked curiously. Magda laughed.

“Some babies are like that,” she told her, “Ben was like that too.” Ben smiled and watched as Magda gently rocked the baby.

“So what’s his name?” Carli asked enthusiastically.

“Hubert Ulysses Ramirez,” Magda stated proudly. CD burst out laughing and Nate got a disgusted look on his face.

“Hubert!?” Nate said in a teasing tone, “What are you going to called him- Huey? Mag- you can’t name him that, he’ll get teased.”

“Since when are you concerned with what everybody thinks?” CD flirted, “Do you know what you look like when you eat breakfast?” An amused smile spread across his face.

“Doesn’t matter what I look like though- you’ll always love me,” Nate flirted back.

“Enough you two,” Magda told them pretending to be offended, “I have to think of a new name.” CD rolled her eyes and everybody waited while Magda thought.

“I know,” she said softly, “I’ll call him Tyler John Ramirez.” Jinny looked at her, her eyes tearing up.

“Thanks Mag,” Jinny whispered giving her friend a hug.

“I’ll call him TJ for short,” she finished, “Does that suit everyone’s fancy?” They all nodded with amused looks on their faces. Dr. Sagemyer returned and recorded TJ’s information for the state records. It was the beginning of a new chapter in the lives of the detectives.

that was so great!!!!!!!! and that was nice of Magda!! and awww i love CD and Nate......:):) so more???? :D:D

Originally posted by candace~n~nathan
that was so great!!!!!!!! and that was nice of Magda!! and awww i love CD and Nate......:):) so more???? :D:D

What Lisa said! I love this fic! :D