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OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-01-2004, 05:44 PM Im going to skip a fan fic for March 7th, and go 2 March 14go to
Starts: ( In Kates House)
Kate: Come on katieann..you come from my side of the family..your a smart girl..yeah you are..come on you can do it.(she said playful)
KatieAnn: Looks at Kate in confusion but reaches her arms out and balances why bobbing uo and down.
Kate: You can do it..just keep your balance..*she said letting go of her hands slowly*
KatieAnn: Sat up for a minute and waved her hands in the air..and then tipped over a little.
Kate: Oh my gosh you did it! (she said laughing a little when she tipped over)
Kate: Louis! Guess what, Katie Ann isnt even 6th months old yet and she sat up fully! But tipped over a little but hey the kid has great balance! (she said convincing him and laughing)
Louis: Ya know Kate, if you react to Katie Ann this way when she just sat up a little..then I cant imagine you when she begins to crawl! And when she walks...I better be cautious and watch you dont give yourself another stroke! (He said making fun of her a little)
Kate: Oh..shut up Louis!
Louis: Im gonna go check the mail.
(Kate picks up KatieAnn and takes her to the kitchen for breakfast.)
Louis: (kate walks into the kitchen and looks upat Louis and sees him in a shocked or stunned way.)
Kate: Louis.wahts wrong..what did we get?
Louis: Oh..my god..its the bills...they say we havent paid them..it reads we missed 3 payments and our water bill is sky high!
Kate: What? This has got to be a mistake. Theres no way this happened..this is weird.
Louis: Are you sure??
Kate: Yeah..well at least I positively think I am. (They stare at eacother in confusion)
Commercial..The division scenes....the beggining**
MORE LATER BEGINNING OF EP! PoST!!!! xoxoJessie
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-01-2004, 06:47 PM MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!
^^^Does that answer your question?? :D:D:D:D:D:D
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-01-2004, 07:15 PM Starts:(Nates appartment)
Nate: (Sighing putting on his shoes and looking at his yearbook)
Nate: Notices Jackie in the Cheerleading, Drama, Softball, Volleyball, Feild Hockey, Student Council, and Chorus..activities.
Nate: (remembers he used to fantasize about her and him when he was a teen) (He really liked her)
Nate: (as he stares..he hears a ring from the telephone)
Nate: (picks it up as he was a tad bit startled by it)
Nate: uh, Hello?
Jackie: Hey, Nate!
Nate: Uh, hey Jackie (he said in a low miserable voice)
Jackie: Umm..I was a little worried..I called your house last night and noone answered. And you didnt stop by at my place..
Nate: Ya know, I have to go.
Jackie: Is something wrong..anything?
Nate: Ah..no..no..there isnt..ill talk to you later..bye.
Nate: *Hung up.*
(he headed for the Anchorside..which was now having a special thing where they were now temporaily serving breakfast in the mornings)
(In Magdas House)
(Door opens and its Ben coming in halfway with Gabe w/ packed bags)
Ben: Mom, Mom! Im home! Wherea re you?
Gabe: Magda? Magda?
*Magda walks in*
Magda: Ooh..my babys home! How was your trip? Sorry I didnt hear you..I was in teh bathroom.
Ben: It was cool! And fun! Dad says that you and him can have a talk about you and him living with eachotehr again.
Gabe: Yeah, I told you about that, Mag.
Magda: Well, uh Benjamin..let's see, ok?
Ben: Sure..go ahead..talk. (He said rushing them)
magda: Uh, Ben, I would like to have a 5 minute little talk with dad, ok?
Ben: O..ok (He said a little mysterious)
Magda: So, Gabe..how was the trip for you?
Gabe: Oh..its all been smooth..and going great.
Magda: Im glad. (she said unsure of herself and trying to make a good conversation without any sudden fights interuppting)
Gabe: Look, Magda.....I love you and you know I do.
Magda: Honey, I meant what I said on the phone.
Gabe: I know..me too.
Magda: I love you..and thats why I had to tell you..well part of it.
Gabe: I understand taht.
Magda: I felt so guilty after it happened..so I broke it off with the doctor I was seeing. And when I held it in for a while..I realized taht it wasnt fair for you not to know..and at the same time..i was thinking it isnt fair for you to know. Its so hard to explain. And..I knew the hurt you felt when you hear me blurt it out like that. It wasnt supposed to come out..in that sort of way either.
Gabe: Yes, Im aware of all that.
Ben: (comes back in)
Ben: Are you guys done?
Gabe: Yeah.
Magda: Well, Gabe..ill talk to you next week, ok?
Gabe: Sure, Bye..i love you..(they hugged)
Ben: Wait..I thought you guys were getting back together??
Magda: Baby, we are still talkign about it and trying to make things a little better before daddy moves back in.
Ben: I have to wait? Oh..alright....(he said looking dissaponted)
Magda: Bye Gabe.
Gabe: Goodbye Magda..
More later! What do ya think?
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-02-2004, 06:17 PM MOOOORE!!!!
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-02-2004, 06:40 PM Starts: ( In Jinnys house)
Jinny: Magda, will you be honest with me?
Magda: Sure, Jin..what?
Jinny: Since Im pregnant, does it nessecarily mean I should get married, to Hank..If I told him and he approved of it?
Magda: Jinny! Thats crazy talk..you shouldnt rush into anything yet. I mean..maybe you and Hank are the right couple..at least I have a feeling you are. But..you still have time Jinny..
Jinny: Thank you! (she said releived)
Magda: Im only telling you to wait because..you havent gone hardly anywhere with this relationship..I mean you guys have been communicating rather good..but you have to have a feeling inside that shows love for eachother..
Jinny: I just don't want my life to turn into some kind of depression stage..i went through recently..
Magda: If you relax and deal with whats happened, then youll get through it.
Jinny: Ooh, I really hope so.
Magda: *nodded as she sipped her coffee*
Jinny: So..did Ben and Gabe return yesterday?
Magda: Uh, yeah they did.
Jinny: Whats up with you guys? Anything decided yet on whats gonna happen?
Magda: Not completely.
Jinny: Ah..so how did Ben seem?
Magda: Oh..he seemd happy and a little anxious and excited at the same time, i guess..
Jinny: Well, I hope everything works out, Mag.
Magda: Jinny, remember when I told you..the doubts, and those bad feelings I had about me and Gabe not for eachother, and it wasnt right for us to get married? It was a couple days..maybe a week before our wedding.
Jinny: Oh..yeah..i do (she said in a low voice)
Magda: *sighs* I hate to laugh a little but those feelings really paid off....*oh god*. But I did fall back in love with him..the way he treated me..and the way he was with Ben. It was like, he had never left and he already knew Ben and all.
Jinny: Mag, nobodys life is perfect, and if it was......*she paused with a look on her face*..we'd still be miserable.
Magda: *gave Jinny a look like true, as Jinny walked passed her to her car*.
More Later after DiN Din! xoxoJessie** ByE:talk:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-02-2004, 06:57 PM Ok so you didn't have to dance but I still want more!! You hear me??;)
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-02-2004, 08:39 PM Starts: ( Kates House)
Kate: How could this happen?
Louis: I dont know, Kate....Im very confused right now.
Kate: I mean, 3 payments??? That could leave us with the possibility of getting sued..
Louis: I hope we have enough money to pay off these 3 payments...and enough time to get all the money in.
Kate: Just imagine if I dropped out of work..*she said in a sarcastic voice*
Louis: *gave her a look*
Kate: I mean yeah..im right..you yelled at me all that time about me continuing more w/ my job, and imagine what kind of fix we would be in if i hadn't continued..
Louis: Kate, just ..drop it, ok? Damn, I havent been in work alot lately.
Kate: Well if I work longer hours and you do..we might be able to totally pay off these bills.
Louis: I guess thats the only way out right now.
*KatieAnn starts to make miserable sounds.*
Kate: I'm going to go see KatieAnn, see if shes thirsty.
Louis: Ill..ill go start dinner.
( Division station)
Magda: Hey Captain..I got a copy of those sketches Hank drew for us. We might need him alot lately.
Kate: Oh..and Magda..can I speak with you for a few seconds?
Magda: Uh..sure Captain, yeah. (she looked nervous)
Kate: Please shut the door.
Magda: (shuts door)
Kate: Is Jinny ok? I mean does she need to talk with someone? I just mean..
Magda: No..Captain I know what you mean.. shes working through it right now.
Captain: Im just a little worried about her. you dont think she would start drinking again..and sink into depression, do you?
Magda: No! No Captain, and If she was depressed..and thought about drinking again..I wouldnt let her..I'd help her and guide her through it.
Captain: You know, when you were gunned down last year and you almost died...and we were all scared..Jinny, was the one who was more of a wreck and couldnt stay calm. She really cares about ya. I could see it and when she said your the best..and her words were "she stuck by me when no one else would". "It should have been me". That was one of my first hints that had me thinking..she was getting too unhappy. You are a good person Magda. Im proud of you for being there for Jinny too.
Magda: *Looked touched and a little stunned) Thank you Captain. I really appreciate that. Really... and shes been there for me so far when my problems came along.
Kate: Well, what are friends for..ya know?
Magda: Yeah..umm can I go now..Jinnys waiting for me to help her with these files.
Kate: Go ahead. Take it easy..you work too hard.
Magda: Thanks Captain..but Im ok (she said smiling)
MoRe Laters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxoJessie
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-02-2004, 08:51 PM That was GREAT!! I need more!!!!
DIVISION/NMFAN4466 03-02-2004, 09:21 PM sorry i am so late but its all great !!!!! i want moreplease!!!!!!! :happyface
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-03-2004, 05:51 PM Starts: ( In elevator)
Jinny: Oh god..I keep getting heartburn...but not much sickness..thank god!
Magda: Your lucky with that one!
Magda: I did forget to ask you, when exactly is your appointment?
Jinny: Umm..I dont know yet.
Magda: You did make one, didnt you?
Jinny: Just drop it Mag!
Magda: Jin..
Jinny: Magda Im so sorry..no i didnt make one. Im just a big chicken thats all....
Magda: Well, Jinny yeah it is scary going to your first appt when its your first time being pregnant.
Jinny: Yeah, you left out one thing..I havent told Hank yet.
Magda: I hope you do that soon Jin.
Jinny: I wont break my commitement that I made with Hank, I care about him.
Magda: *sighs* I love ya Jin..and I love ya even more when ya talk like that.
Jinny: I love you too..I never had a friend as great as you.
Magda: Captain, mentioned to me aout when I was caught..in teh line of fire. In the hospital..you said some pretty nice things about me.
Jinny: *laughs a little*...well I meant every word.
Magda: Thank you Jin..
More so0n..just a short one lol xoxoJessie
DIVISION/NMFAN4466 03-03-2004, 05:56 PM MORE please:happyface
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-03-2004, 06:01 PM That was great!! MOORE!
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-03-2004, 08:11 PM Starts: ( Nate is on his way home coming into his apartment)
Nate: Decides to put his jacket back on and head to Jackies.
Nate: (walking up to her house)
Jackie: *Opens the door after he knocks*
Jackie: Hey Nate!
Nate: Uh..hey Jackie how are ya?
Jackie: Good good..come in baby..(she said excited that hes there)
Nate: Jackie, we need to talk.
Jackie: Sure..before we do I want to show you some recent pictures I have. Of me and my friends..and family too. Heres the box she went into her closet for.
Nate: Th..this is your family? Wow..you guys sure look happy together. Alot of friends, like you always had..(he said smiling a little)
Jackie: Well, I have a strong family chain.
Nate: Oh..he found in the box..is this your picture album of your whole family tree?
Jackie: Yes yeah..some of it was embarassing to show people.
Nate: No I wanna see it!
Jackie: Ok..but don't laugh...(she said demanding in a playful voice)
( 10 minutes later)(Nate had forgot about when she was on the phone with her husband saying shed still have a marriage w/ him)
Jackie: (Laughing..oh that was the time me and my sister went to Florida and I had to go to the bathroom..and I peed my pants..there was no near bathroom! We were in the elevator!)
Nate: (Laughs hard) Oh..god
Jackie: Heres old letters from my old boyfriends.
Nate: Yeah, I know you had alot of them..you were so poular..pretty..and had great personality. Not a snotty girl at all.
Jackie: Thanks Nate.
Nate: Im just saying what is true..
Jackie: (Looks into Nates eyes)
Nate: (Sits frozen..still unsure of himself)
Jackie: Kisses him passionately.
Nate: Goes along w/ it.
Jackie: Nate, I want to be with you....
Nate: Jackie..I really want to take this slow..ok?
Jackie: Uh..ok Nate I guess..do you like me..at all?
Nate: Of course I do.
Jackie: Well lets just get some dinner......im starving.
Nate: Great, I'll order..pizza?
Jackie: Yeah..Im in the mood for pizza.
Nate: Good, cause I love it!
Jackie: Ill order it be right back Natie pie....(really going to call her husband first and asure him that shes not seeing anyone)
Nate: (Look around her room and then searches through her box of album stuff..and then sees the year book that he has..the exact same one he saw recently a few days ago when he looked at her picture.)
Nate: Picks it up and sees her autographs from 4 girls and then..he sees 2 pages ripped out turned over. He flipped tehm over and there was autographs from guys and girls. He started reading them and was shocked........................
MoRe LaterxoxoJessie
:lol:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-03-2004, 08:24 PM YOU STOP THERE?????????? MORE!!!!!!!MORE!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-03-2004, 09:20 PM Starts: ( Nate looking at the year book and is shocked)
Nate: *Read all the horrible comments*, on those 2 ripped out pages..*
Nate: " Oh hey Jackie, hope you enjoyed the blow job you gave me..you nasty whore..hahaha hey can I have another one..ByE GrL! Nick
" Hi Jackie, **** off..my boy friend is not the object of your HOOvER vaccumm cleaner ****hole mouth of yours..k pEacE..Maya
" Hey slutto, Yeah u thought i was ur freind..think again biotch! I hate ur guts! Rott in hell hoe! ..Donnielle
Nate: There was more but he had to talk to her right away..he had read enough!
Jackie: Comes back in in 3 minutes..it's ordered Nate. It'll be here in 45 minutes or less.
Nate: I saw you on the phone..when I stopped by your house the other day. You..you lied to me. I never knew you were married. I meant to talk to you about it earlier..but I didnt want to mention it yet.
Jackie: Nate..no you have it wrong! I did lie..i was married but Im gettingdivorced in 1 month..then it..its final.
Nate: That conversation sounded like your husband didnt know what you were talking about.
Nate:Nodont explain..ithink this should be over..I cant bare with this Jackie, I can't.
Jackie; Wait Nate please! (She said getting histerical)
Nate: Yes!
Jackie: Kisses him..you are like the only one who appriciates me Nate! My husband did..but hes probably out screwingsome other woman while on his rich biussiness vacations. Yes Nate Im rich..I have alot of money. I lost alot of my self respect when I was young..Im gettign over that..but I feel so alone Nate! Please dont go! Im begging you. I feel like now your all i have!!!!!! (she broke down)
Nate: *sighs* (frustrated) Ok..its ok..he huggs her and feels lost and confused. *herememberswhen CD and him shared that kiss. Oh that sweet taste ohher candy lips.*
More Next scene next post!!!!! xoxoJessie
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-04-2004, 08:18 PM Starts: ( Raina and Stacy's house)
Raina: *relaxing on the floor in her Pjs*
Stacy: *Bringing them chips and while Rainas on the phone with Dom*
Raina: Yeah..Dom! Thats crazy! I am not going to no club to pretend to be your hooker just so you can get back at one of your friends!
Dom: Ya know hes jealous and says he dont like you but I think he does. He always trys to look at you! His eyes are glued to your pretty little butt girl...
Raina: Dom! (she said embarassed) you are so.. weird!
Dom: Ok..im just playing with you..but he is jealous.
Raina: Well, just tell him that he needs to get over it..and you just happened to get lucky! Thatll teach him not to be a jackass to you! (she teased)
Dom: (laughed) Yeah I was lucky wasnt I? I have to go..Raina?? Raina??
Raina: *got too distracted in the movie her and Stacy rented*
Dom: Now Im gonna go inpregnate another one of my female fans..bye baby..(didnt really hang up)
Raina: Wha..what the hell (she said just waking up*)
Dom: See now I knew you loved me! Just another logan you laid on me to get your attention.
Raina: Bye Dom..Ill call you tomorrow and maybe you can stop by..
Dom: Love ya..*hangs up)
Stacy: Dom..huh? (she said noisy)
Raina: Stace I told you about Dom.
Stacy: Are you guys serious?
Raina: I guess..
Stacy: Ahh..(she said in a sarcastic voice)
Raina: Its..well if you have to know..I really like him and have been seeing him..I just am a little picky about guys..and Im very cautious...
Stacy: Oh..me too.
Raina: Do you realize something?
Stacy: What?
Raina: Girl..we need some furniture.
Stacy: Yeah..true.
Raina: Well shop for it on next Saturday.
Stacy: I cant wait..all new stuff!
Raina: Im gonna go put these away before I eat the whole bag!
More later xoxoJessie**
DIVISION/NMFAN4466 03-04-2004, 08:24 PM BROVO more please
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-04-2004, 09:13 PM That was great!! More please..:)
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-07-2004, 12:05 AM Hey guys..i just mixed up Rainas lovers..i put Dom instead of Johnney. SrY..ill change his name. More
Starts: ( Magda looking at Ben and Gabe in picture album)
Magda: *stares at Ben and Gabe when they were both the same age*
Jinny: They look so much alike when they were 6.
Magda; Oh i know..
Jinny: When he was a baby he looked like ya..he looks more like ya now than Gabe.
Magda: Im thinking of actually starting all over again and actually having a marriage with Gabe. After we got married it was like we had never had a real marriage at all. The 1st week we were I found out that Ben had gotten diagnosed with Leukimia..and..
Jinny: Thats how..well not quite..how I felt with Jack.
Magda: So we do have something in common that makes us BOTH screwups right? (she said sarcasticlly)
Jinny: Mag..your not a screwup.
Magda: Yeah..then why did i cheat on my husband?
Jinny: You were..uh..
Magda; Screwed up at the time? she said trying not to laugh.
Jinny: Ok you got me! Maybe a little..
Jinny: But you have to put yourself back on your own feet.
Magda: Yeah..who am I to beat on myself..your pregnant! (she said laughing)
Jinny: Now that you said it..I hate to feel like I wanna laugh..but its true. Of all the times I screwed up..even with men..I never got knocked up!
Magda: Yeah..thats a new one.
Jinny: Oh...but seriously..what am I gonna do? Im scared..and I think I really really like Hank..hows this gonna make him feel..react?
More L8er xoxoJessie
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-07-2004, 12:10 AM MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-07-2004, 12:58 AM More fan fic!
Starts: ( Kates Office)
Kate: Well I had Raina and Stacy take the day off yesterday..Jinny and Magda took part of theday off..and Nate called in for desk work.
Kates Boss: Wow..all those inspectors got off easy??
Kate: They're good people..good cops..they deserve an easy time every now and then.
Kates Boss: Remember..dont treat them like babies..they shouldnt be taking days off..only when they are required too.
Kate: Sure.
Kates Boss: Glared..and left.
Kate: Whatever *mumbled afterwards*
( Division station)
Jinny: (sits at desk)
Magda: (walks around bored because Captain hasnt informed them about the case)
( Foreign Mexican bursts through the door limping.. saying " Help! Help! (pointing to her stomach)
Jinny: Oh my god..uh call 911.
Magda: We have to do something..she looks like shes about to deliver!
Jinny: Damn..umm quick get her in the other room *where the cops talk to the criminals*
Magda: We were taught how to deliver a baby..I pretty much am clear.
Jinny: Yeah? Well not me.
Magda: What do you mean? You did take the test..right? (lady moaning in the backround while another police woman gets her in the room)
Jinny: I did..but I am a little rusty with it.
Magda: Jin hand me those blankets and gloves Im going to do this!
Jinny: Mag..Im kind og uncomfortable with this..
Magda: Jinny, slide these under her..behind..(she demanded throwing her gloves to slip on)
Jinny: Oh god..she said in a panic.
Magda: I guess my 1st step is to uh..check how far she is huh? (she said uncomfortably)
Jinny: I guess thats what they do.
Magda: Come on Jin slide it under..further..
Jinny: I am! I am! Mag..
Magda: Yeah...
Jinny: This is beginning to scare me (she said as the lady screamed oh my gosh oh my gosh)
Magda: *looked at Jinny for a minute* Its going to be fine ma'am. Can you speak much english?
Lady: *Babbling Mexican*
Magda: *said in Mexican..or Spanish language that she is going to check her and try not to worry and said she'd help her through the labor*
Jinny: Oh great..a foreign woman in labor and were the ones that have to look in there and get taht baby out!
Magda: You can do this Jinny..just try.
Jinny: Ok Lets start..I guess she should push since shes what dialated?
Magda; Um..10 cm about.
Jinny: So its time?
Magda: You guess right!
Lady: *Starts pushing* (screams and wacks Jinny in the face*
Jinny: Woah..woah..calm down! Oh my god the head is out Mag! Damn this is horrible even imagining it!
Magda; Jinny I need you to hold the head for me while I get the sucction out of the 1st aid bag.
Jinny: Oh God..
Jinny: (Goes over scared and holds it with a towel in her hands)
Lady: *Screams in spanish really loud and she yelled " Mucho head!! Mucho head!! (Which it was a big head)
Magda: Wow! Thats a big head there its looks like about 38 inches wide!
Jinny: Jesus! Hey..umm ladywould you please try to hold in your screams your really freaking me out here! I am pregnant and I would appreciate a good impression on me!!
Lady: (her baby slides out into Jinnys hands)
Jinny: *shakes as she holds the baby*
Magda: Carefully nervously takes the baby boy.
Jinny: That is a big boy!
Magda: Looks about 10 to 12 pounds..its chubby and has the most adorable eyes and cheeks!
Jinny: And the whitest slimy peelings on him..
Magda: You sure knowhow to ruin a good birth moment Jin!
Jinny: Well..it is true..
Lady: Leon! Boy!
Magda; Yeah..(in spanish)its a strong little boy..Leon you say? Hes got beautiful eyes.
Lady: Gracias..
Magda: oh my name is Magda..and this little helper is my partner Jinny. ( were homoside inspectors) (she said in spanich)
(Police officer helped the lady out to the ambulance)
Magda: Comes out..Well I guess we did do something good today.
Jinny: Uh huh..scary too (she laughed)
Magda: Oh Jin, youll be fine!
Kate: Comes over to them
Kate: great Job girls!
xoxoJessie More later almost end of ep!
:talk:
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-07-2004, 01:31 AM That was great!!!! More NOW please????? :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-07-2004, 01:36 AM Im a fast poster guys ill be back tomorrow. bye
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-07-2004, 04:23 PM Starts: ( Nate leaving his desk from the division station)
Nate: * bumps into Raina*
Raina: Oh sorry Nate..
Nate: No my fault..
Raina: Nate, is something bothering you?
Nate: Come on lets talk..I need someone to talk to as of now
Raina: Really?..im right behind you..
Nate: *Goes to a bench out in the hallway*
Raina: Ok Nate..lay it on me.
Nate: Alright, see..theres this woman that I known in high school..well hardly knew..and we met one day and since then we were inseperable.
Raina: Oh..a woman..huh?
Nate: Yeahh..her name is Jackie..i loved her since Iw as in high school..i wanted her so bad to be my girlfriend.
Raina: So whats the problem?
Nate: I read her year boom and it said a bunch of nasty comments in it about her being a slut and all and messing w/ ppls boyfriends. Even the guys called her a slut!
Raina: Oh..man.
Nate: I mean I knew there was something wrong..she couldnt of have been perfect.
Raina: yeah, Nate..if I were you..I'd drop his woman.
Nate: he came cryng in my arms saying her husband deosnt appreciate her at all and just bosses her around. Her self respect is gone..and I was the only one she can turn to as of now..
Raina: Well, that is a tough position Nate.
Raina: If I were you I would forget this..before you get mixed up with this woman who could possibly become crazy!
Nate: *Sighs*
Raina: Ok..well if you need anymore advide..come to me..dont be afraid to. Im your partner..partners are there for eachother.
Nate: Thanks Raina..I uh appreciate it.
xoxojessie More later im getting icecream yum yum fattening! LOL ByE
:p
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-07-2004, 04:45 PM MORE!!!
OjiNmagnatebonnO 03-10-2004, 01:09 AM Starts: (Jinny's appointment)
Magda: You will love my OB Jin.
Jinny: I hope so...
Magda: You'll be fine, you just have to think this through..alot!
Jinny: I know..and maybe ya know it will work out.
Magda: Just relax..and take it one step at a time.
OB: *Walks in* Hey Magda, how are you? (she said in a pleasant voice)
Magda: Im fine and so is Benjamin.
OB: Who do we have here in my office?
Magda: This is my dear friend Jinny Exstead. This is her first baby and shes a little nervous.
Magda: Ok, Ill just wait outside..
Jinny: Uh..shes gonna stay..
Magda: Ok..id be glad to stay!
OB: Great..any friend of Magdas is a friend of mine!
Magda: Jin, you can let go of my shirt now..just sit tight..
OB: Ok, hun can you just lift up your shirt, a bit for me.
Jinny: *Does it slowly*
OB: *Takes out a heart beat monitor probe*
Jinny: Uh..wait..what is that?
OB: Oh this is a heart beat probe..now I would normally use a stephiscope..but this is alot more fun. (she said ina lively voice)
Jinny: *Looked a little unsure*
OB: Ohh, dont be afraid hunny I would never hurt you or your baby..and I enjoy what I do. And am very good at it. (she said putting the probe gently to the side of her stomach)
Jinny: *Hears a low sound* *silent*
Jinny: Looks around) Ok, is there..something wrong?
OB: No..no thats good oh thats real good..(beat gets louder as she turns up the volume)
Magda: *Gets excited* There it is, Jin
OB: Your baby has a very strong and active heartbeat!
Jinny: Woah..
OB: *Gets beeped for a 3 minute procedure*
OB: Oh Im so sorry..I have to..well Ill be right back.
Jinny: *Covers her face and thinks for a minute**sighs*
Magda: I know Jin, your having doubts and everything..
Jinny: *Smiles a little*
Magda: Maybe not...
Jinny: I dont know Magda, Is it possible to fall in love at first..sound? (she said getting a little happier and emotional)
Magda: Oh Jinny, yes yes it is! (She said excited)
Jinny: Oh my, Mag, Im gonna have a b..aby.
Magda: Yeah!
Jinny: Ya know Magda, I can't tell you how many times I've had unprotected sex with men I hardly knew. When I was drunk, and now I meet this incredible man..who I care about and i know he cares about me..and I dont know. Maybe it was just meant..to be.
Jinny: Its gonna be fine, right..
Magda: Jin its gonna be more than fine.
Jinny: Oh I am hoping it turns out that way.
Jinny: All I have to do now is..tell Hank. (she said a little jumpy)
Magda: Hmm..well Congradulations..! *Goes to hug Jinny)
Jinny: *Looks like I guess so* *Hugs mag back*
End of this ep..going on to where jinny tells hank!)
Bye xoxoJessie
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Directed by Deborah Joy Levine
Jo_Luvs_Ketchup 03-10-2004, 01:14 AM Awww that was soo sweet. Can't wait to read the next episode.
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