This is called " Continued after "Thats them".

Starts: (In doctors office)
Jinny: Baby??! What baby? You mean you found out from the blood tests that I am pregnant?
Doctor: You didn't know that? ( He asks in a little bit of shock)
Jinny: No! I really didn't!
Doctor: Well, we did run the blood tests 3 times Miss Exstead.
Jinny: But how..oh my god..
Doctor: Are you going to be ok?
Jinny: Uh..yeah..umm thank-you for telling me this.. i guess ( she said in a shocked and worried voice)
Magda: Oh my god, Jin..you and Hank? Oh my..I just cant beleive this..are you okay?
Jinny: Oh my god is right! Magda, whats going to happen? I cant raise a baby or even deal with having one right now! oh my..god..this has to be a dream...(she said in a shakey shocked voice)
Magda: Jinny, this is a real shocker..and I know how you must feel..and your right..this is too much for you to handle. What are you going to tell Hank?
Jinny: How am I going to tell him??! How am I? I dont know Mag! I am so scared right now! Oh god..I can't even put this into words! I just got out of the divorce and all..and I am just beginning to feel some happiness and actually feel..good about myself! Hows this going to happen? How? I have enough problems to deal with!! I know I'm not ready to have a baby..and you know im not..What am I going to do? I wish i could just wake the hell up! ( Jinny exclaimed in a scared voice and bolted down the hallway) ( Magda followed her and they caught the elavator)
(Jinny started to get panicy and then got teary eyed)

That was it so far>ill post more very soon..i always continue stuff like this..i just made one up quickly..ill try to finish most of it before 2 wks when the real continuing ep comes along!xoxoJessie Bye

That was GREAT! I need more of this fic..NOW!!! hee j/k post more when ya can Jessie! :)

This whole fan fic is just based on Magda and jinny and Hank and all..

Starts: (In the car)
Magda: I still can't..believe that this is happening to you..
Jinny: how do you think I feel Magda?
Magda: I can only imagine
Jinny: Its like im in a nightmare..this just can't be true!
Magda: Jin, they did it 3 times
Jinny: I'm positive..it is Hank's
Magda: When are you..uh planning to tell him?
Jinny: I really want to as soon as possible..when we discussed our relationship, we decided not to keep any secrets from eachother. So this wont stop me from telling him about his baby.
Jinny: Besides he deserves to know..( Jinny said very frustrated)
Magda: I'm hear for you though, its going to be ok..well figure something out. You were there for me when I had my pregnancy scare, right?
Jinny: Yeah, she said with a chuckle..and the getting serious she said but this isnt a scare..this is real.
Magda: I know..and I don't want you to keep any secrets from me either..let me know when you need support, Jin. I will help you. I am going to suggest that you go see your therapist if you feel too overwhelmed and talk to her a little.
Jinny: Really Mag..i dont need..
Magda: Jinny, please..and no your not a nut job..she's just going to help you through it a bit..like she did before when you found out that you were depressed.
Jinny: Ok, I will. ( she said feeling a tad bit better and trying to get her mind off what she heard today)

Ok thats it so far..remember this is a quick short mainly about jinny and magda fan fic of whats gonna happen in the next episode. (More magda moments soon..coming up)xoxoJessie bye

WOW that was great please post more !!!!cant wait to read what happens next!!!!:happyface

Guys you know whats weird..I wrote a little fan fic about Jinny and Hank continueing after the kiss in the paint room and I put that they were in the shower and all..its like im psycic! lol ..Tya! Im posting more!!

Starts: ( Magda dropped Jinny off hr house (mags house) and they were sitting on her bed talking and Magda let Jinny spend the night. Meanwhile Magdas on the phone)

Magda: Jin I'm going to call Gabe and see how him and Ben are doing, ok?
Jinny: Go ahead..Im just gonna read a magazine about pregnancy. It shows some of the phases you go through.
Magda: Hey thats a goof idea.
Gabe: Hello?
Magda: Gabe?
Gabe: Magda, uh hi, how have you been lately?
Magda: Ok I guess, how are you doing with Ben, is the trip going well?
Gabe: oh we really are having fun
Magda: Thats terrific, I hope Ben wasnt upset at all still from back at the house.
Gabe: Actually me and Ben did have a little talk about me leaving and all.
Magda: Oh..and Gabe I do deserve to be yelled at..I know I made a very big mistake..
Gabe: Even though you did something foolishand were under alot of stress, I am willing to forgive you. you have given me a second chance for something that I did foolish. By leaving you pregnant with Ben.
Magda: Really..umm..Gabe, you dont know how good it feels to have those words spoken to me ( she says a little teary eyed)
Gabe: Well, you gave me an opportunity to change, and I think I can forgive you.
Magda: If you decide to, Thank you, Gabe I really should of told you how unhappy I was getting, and how I was sinking further into depression. I just wanted a strong marriage with some love, honesty, and trust. And I still do...(she said starting to cry and her thorat acheing)
Magda: It's just that, you've been gone on all your trips and...
Gabe: I know Mag, look I'll call you saturday night, ok, Here's Ben. I still love you Magda, remember that.
Ben: Hey mom!
Magda: Hi, baby tell me about your trip on Saturday ok because mommy's gotta get back to work real quick.
Ben: Ok, talk to you on Saturday then.
Magda: Ok honey!
Ben: Bye mom!
Magda: Bye.


Thats it so far..isnt it weird though how i was gonna write my own version of what happened next before last nugts ep and I like wrote that theyd be in the shower and Hank would be telling Jinny where things were under the sink and in that episode we saw she told him where they were lolxoxoJessie MoRe to come! I post fast..if u like it youll be thankful ill be writing it! lol Bye
:lol:

POST WHATEVER U GOT THIS IS GOOD:D

post anything and fast its good so far!! :happyface

Tya for all the replies lol I'm gonna start thinking up some stuff to write now..Hmmm..oh got an idea!

Starts:( Morning at Mags house)

Magda: Jinny, wake up come on we have to go to work, now!
Jinny: (just opened her eyes) It's time already..huh..
Magda: Uh yea Jin! We overslept, here just put my purple t-shirt on, get ready..and ill call captain.
Jinny: I need pants Mag..look tell captain Ill be over there in like 30 minutes, ok?'
Magda: Alright..oh my god what a crazy week this has been..and not just for me!
Jinny: Damn it, I lost my earing!
Magda: Ill search my bed when we get off from work later.
Jinny: Ok, uh just let me get my shoes on and Ill be outa here..
Magda: Hey Jin, did you sleep well at all?
Jinny: Oh my..I forgot..Im pregnant.. arent I? That really wasnt a dream, was it Mag?
Magda: Im afraid not Jin.
Jinny: Oh..god..umm Im gonna go now, Ill see you in 30.(she said a little confused and worried)
Magda: Bye Jinny ( she said as she sighed)

Thats it so far..Ill post more soon..rememebr this short story revolved around Magda and Jinny..lol Ill finish it before the next ep continues lol xoxoJessie

SHORT BUT SWEET PLEASE POST MORE :happyface :typing:

Originally posted by DIVISION/NMFAN4466
SHORT BUT SWEET PLEASE POST MORE :happyface :typing:


why do you always type in capital letters? lol mmooooorrrreee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cause i like 2lol :joke:

I love this fic. Moooooooooooooooooooore!

Heres some more..

Starts:(Jin and Mag are at work now)

Kate: Nate, did you check Gary Danzigers records? Any criminal ones from his past or recently?
Nate: No..the guys clean..clean enough to be a saint!
Raina: Thats for sure, I went to have a little chat with Garys friends..his family..it turns out that his family never would think hed be involved in any kind of trouble. They also said that when he was a kid he had the honor roll every year and alot of the times they were straight A's, plus he was grounded once in his life. Hard to beleive and he went to college..one of the finest ones in the country. Then became a very good doctor after his parents helped him through medical school. From his friends, which there was alot, they told me that he was involved with charity. Its like saying hes definitly not a suspect and definitly did not murder any of his patients. Even though he was in that area close to that time.
Nate: Surprised he isnt a frigen priest..
Kate: Yeah well, usually when we find out about something like that..about people, we assume they're perfect. But later the police uncover that they are the murderers. Funny how life fools ya huh?
Raina: You said it captain.

I know this was short..but ill be back on soon to post the rest i was gonna write..bye xoxoJessie

guys sry bout tha sad smiley face..accidently posted it there lol bye

[QUOTE]Originally posted by OjiNmagnatebonnO
[B]Heres some more..

Starts:(Jin and Mag are at work now)

Kate: Nate, did you check Gary Danzigers records? Any criminal ones from his past or recently?
Nate: No..the guys clean..clean enough to be a saint!
Raina: Thats for sure, I went to have a little chat with Garys friends..his family..it turns out that his family never would think hed be involved in any kind of trouble. They also said that when he was a kid he had the honor roll every year and alot of the times they were straight A's, plus he was grounded once in his life. Hard to beleive and he went to college..one of the finest ones in the country. Then became a very good doctor after his parents helped him through medical school. From his friends, which there was alot, they told me that he was involved with charity. Its like saying hes definitly not a suspect and definitly did not murder any of his patients. Even though he was in that area close to that time.
Nate: Surprised he isnt a frigen priest..
Kate: Yeah well, usually when we find out about something like that..about people, we assume they're perfect. But later the police uncover that they are the murderers. Funny how life fools ya huh?
Raina: You said it captain.
Nate: Let's go talk to Gary and see if we can uncover something..in the way he acts or anything.
Raina: Its worth a shot.
(Magda walks into Kates office)
Magda: Sorry Captain, I overslept a little and I have had a pretty rough week too.
Kate: Its fne, its just that youve never done that before..
Magda: I know..itll never happen again though.
Kate: Like I said its fine.
Magda: Like I said on the phone, Jinny will be arriving soon.
Kate: Okey dokey.
Magda: Listen, Jinny had a very rough day yesterday, so dont be surprised if shes a little off.
Kate: Not too off, I hope..
Magda: No..you know what, all i meant was, she hit he head yesterday and she had a mild concusion.
Kate: She shouldnt of came to work today..
Magda: Sgould I call her up on her cell and let her know that. She needs rest.
kate: Absoloutly, you do that while I go check how Stacys doing with copying some records.

Brb jesie

Contiinued

(Downstairs in Copy room)

Kate: Stacy? What are you doing? The copy machine is going crazy! (The whole floor is covered in papers) I said to make 8 copys, not 10,000!
Stacy; Im so sorry captain..i did click 8 but I didnt know that 8 meant 800. Like I said Im so sorry! Please don't fire me! Ill do anything you say! Ugh Im so stupid!
Kate: Stacy, 008 is 8, 080 is 80, and 8 is 800 according to this machine! But its not your fault, ( she said trying to find a way to stop the machine)Im not too familiar with it either. Plus the people who fixed it actually screwed it up. Found it! ( she flipped the switch off to stop it) Umm..lets get someone i here to halp you clean this up.
Raina: Captain where you going?
Kate: (as shes walking down the halls) Oh Raina, can you help Stacy clean up the Copy room for like 5 minutes or 10..or so..?
Raina: What about Nate?
Kate: Ill take your place for 10 minutes, ok?
Raina: Oh, thanks captain..
(Goes into copy room)
Raina: Holy..
Stacy: Dont worry you dont have to do much if you dont want to!..
Raina: No its ok..what happened?!
Stacy: Had a little trouble working Caps copy machine.
Raina: No..(she said sarcastically) really?
Stacy: (laughs) Look, Im really glad that you decided to room with me.
Raina: No problem, I had second thoughts..and really began to see what kind of person you are. And I thought..this can work out. I mean we might actually wind up as best friends.
Stacy: (sounding happy) Really? ..Oh, and dont worry Ill try not to be annoying!
Raina: (Laughs) Stacy, you know what? You remind me alittle bit of myself..not that long ago I was known to be a tad bit annoying and on the "new kid on the block side" too.
Stacy: Cool. I better get moving on these papers!
Raina: Dont move too quick, Captains doing me a favor by giving me a break!

( Jinnys House)( You hear the phone ring)

Jinny: Hello?
Jack: Hey Jin.
Jinny: Oh hi!
Jack: I had to say goodbye to ya one last time..
Jinny: Yeah, me too
Jack: Anything going on with ya right now? Ya doing anything?
Jinny: Uh, no im not ( she said in a lonley and nervous voice)
Jack: So, you and Hank in love yet? (he said in a joking playful voice)
Jinny: No..(she said sarcastically)..look Jack I really have to go.
Jack: Jin, Im sorry, did I affend you in any way..I was just joking around. Trying to be nice..thats all.
Jinny: No Jack, its not you..
Jack: Well, if somethings botheirng you, please, talk to me. If you want to talk...look Jin, we are still married.
Jinny: I know that..but really If I have a problem..I have to deal with it on my own. Jack, I do have a problem but it doesnt concern you. This concerns me and Hank. I have to tell Hank first though. Its a long story...I have to go now..
Jack: Jinny, you dont mean..your not pregnant by any chance??
Jinny: Goodbye Jack..Ill call you soon. I still do love you, as an exhusband that is...
(she hangs up)

More later! xoxoJessie
Jack:

;)

Heres More....

Starts: ( 3 days later)

(Phone rings..Magdas house)

Magda: Hello?
Jinny: Hi Mag...
Magda: Hi Jin, how ya feeling?
Jinny: Well, my heads alot better..but I'm starting to feel some nausea.
Magda: Are you sure your ready to come back to work, I mean its been 3 days and all but..the doctor says if you continue to feel dizzy or nauseated..then you should make an appointment with him.
Jinny: Listen, I'll be fine. If the nausea occurs at work throughout the day then Ill go see him..ok?
Magda: Ok Jin, so Ill see you at work?
Jinny: Im coming in at 10:00.
Magda: Ok, uh Jin..when are you going to tell Captain about you being pregnant? You work for her.. and pretty soon it is going to be dangerous for you to be working on the job. She does deserve to know.
Jinny: You know what Magda, I will tell her when I am ready to start accepting it myself! I mean I want to be honest and all but, what am I going to do If I can't be your partner for like 8 months or so?
Magda: I'm sure Cap will find you something to do, Jinny.
Jinny: Ok..fine Ill tell her this afternoon.
Magda: Alright, good. Look, I'm going to go now because I gotta be in for work at 8:45 and its already 8:30..
Jinny: Oh go ahead..Ill talk to ya when I get there later, bye.
Magda: Bye.


More later...xoxoJessie

Heres More continued.......

Starts: ( Down at the SFPD station)

Jinny: (working at her desk, and sees Magda walk into the station) Hi Mag..
Magda: Hi, uh how do you feel now? Better? any nausea, or anything reoccuring?
Jinny: I've had a little heartburn, but nothing else.
Magda: Well, thats good, i guess
Jinny: Umm, Captain assigned me to be writing at desk for the next 2 to 3 days here. Any case fly in yet?
Magda: Uh yeah, a woman called here this morning to report her 9 year old boy missing from his bed this morning at approximitly 8 am. She went to wake him up for school and all there was was a basketball under the sheets and his punching bag beneath it.
Magda: You sure your okay Jinny?..
Jinny: Im fine..well as of right now that is....
Magda: Well if you do need to talk Im here.
Jinny: I know. Thank you.
Jinny: So, any suspects or enemies related to this?
Magda: There are two options to this case. A kidnapping, or a run away.
Jinny: Is there any evidence? I mean shouldnt you go talk to the Mother, father, or whoever the guardian is to find out where her kid was last night, and if there is any thing he said or did to make him run away..or disappear.
Magda: Alright Im going now.
Jinny: Mag, Jack called last night.
Magda: Oh?
Jinny: Yeah, he wanted to say goodbye one more time..ya know it is kinda hard and all.
Magda: What did you guys talk about?
Jinny: nothing much..
Jinny: And he told me that if anything is bothering me, I should talk to him about it, I mean were still married.
Magda: Uh huh..
Jinny: Its not like hes having second thoughts like you said..hes just worried..its difficult to let go for him..and a little for me too.
Magda: I know, Jin..it must be tough especially when now you found out your preg..nant and all.. (paused for a sec)
Jinny: That reminds me, when I told jack that I had a problem, but I have to deal with it on my own...and I said this was between me and Hank, he said "Jin your not pregnant by any chance, are you?"
Magda: Oh geeze.
Jinny: God Mag, this is gonna be extremely hard for me to tell Hank about this. And that this is.. his baby.
Magda: Its going to work out, and it will not be your fault. He'll
probably be glad that you found out so soon.
Jinny: I sure hope so. Ya know Im holding you up, go ahead and get some evidence about the case, and Ill finish up here. We'll talk later.
Magda: Sure Jin.

More Later..xoxoJessie..R ya happy Kelly? LOL!

Well not quite...u still havent posted when Jinny tells Kate. I need to see that!!!:):)

Ok this is for you KeLLy lol! Heres More of it....

Starts:( 2 hours later)

Kate: (walks into the ladies room..hears gagging and coughing)
Hello? Uh, excuse me, are you okay?

Jinny: (stopped coughing for a minute and kept silent) (she panicked when she heard the sound of Captains voice)
Kate: ( looked misteriously at the bathroom doors..and then turned around and went to wash her hands because her ink in her pen exploded all over her arm.)
Jinny: *Sighed* ( gets up and opens door)
Kate: (glances up in the mirror) Jin..ny? Are you alright? I heard..
Jinny: Yes, Captain I was throwing up. I just started to feel nauseated about 5 minutes ago.
Kate: Well, are you well enough to make it through the rest of the day? (she said a little concerned)
Jinny: Cap, I really have to talk to you.
Kate: Uh, thats fine Jinny, just meet me in my office after lunch. Which is in 2 minutes.
Jinny: Ill be there, thanks..
Kate: No problem, is everything okay? Anything wrong, that I need to know about.
Jinny: Your getting warmer..Ill talk to you after lunch, kay?
Kate: See ya. ( she said sounding worried about Jinny)
Jinny: Oh, you have to use toilet paper, there is no paper towels.
Kate: Thanks for the point out.
Jinny: Bye.

More soon xoxoJessie..Kelly read how do ya like it so far?? Im gettign to the part where she tells KATE lol ill make it good for ya!
bYe peoples!



;)

Nope..not satified until she says "Captain, I'm pregnant!"

that was great we need to no bout jinny and captin post soon please!!!!!:happyface

Get back here and post before I :explode:

MoRes! Kelly im gonna make u satisfied!! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Starts: ( Magda walks into station with a substitute partner.)
Magda: Hey Nate, Raina how was lunch?
Nate: Oh delightful.. he said sarcastically
Raina: Oh Nate your the biggest baby! (she laughed)
Magda: What happened?
Raina: Well, me and Nate were at Anchorside..and Nate felt a splash of salad dressing on his face.
Nate: It was the guys on the right of us flicking food. A bunch of teenagers just waiting to get their ass kicked by me. They kept throwing food around and when it got in my hair, I got pissed and went over to them.
Raina: He started yelling at them and he scared them, it was funny. Heeven started to turn red.. ( she said laughing harder)
Nate: Yeah.. haha Raina! ( he said sarcastically)
Magda: Ok then. Well I talked to the little boys mom. The boys name is Ryan Kelly.
Nate: Were still assigned to work on the damn doctor case. Its taking forever.
Raina: Yeah, I do hate cases like this.
Magda: Ill give Captain the info in 10.

(Captains office)
Jinny:(sits in the chair waiting for Captain to meet with her.)
Kate: *Walks in* Ok Jinny, tell me whats up.
Jinny: (Jinny glared at Captain remembering the time when she came to her to find out if IA cleared her, and Kate never said if she beleived Jinny or not.)
Jinny: Captain this really is hard for me to say.
Kate: What? Its nothing serious, about your health, i hope..
Jinny: No, my head is pretty much fine. 5 days ago, when I..ya know "hit the wall", I started to feel kinda dizzy after wards. So Magda rushed me to the emergency room. We both waited around for the blood results and all.
Kate: Yeah, he said you had a mild concusion. I was getting scared there..
Jinny: I did have one, so Hank came down to teh hospital, and he was scared and was asking me if everything was ok. I told him to leave.
Kate: Hank, our sketch artist? Are you seeing him?

xoxoJessie brb more 2 come

no fair u cant end it like that please post more !!!!!!!!

[QUOTE]Originally posted by OjiNmagnatebonnO
[B]MoRes! Kelly im gonna make u satisfied!! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Starts: ( Magda walks into station with a substitute partner.)
Magda: Hey Nate, Raina how was lunch?
Nate: Oh delightful.. he said sarcastically
Raina: Oh Nate your the biggest baby! (she laughed)
Magda: What happened?
Raina: Well, me and Nate were at Anchorside..and Nate felt a splash of salad dressing on his face.
Nate: It was the guys on the right of us flicking food. A bunch of teenagers just waiting to get their ass kicked by me. They kept throwing food around and when it got in my hair, I got pissed and went over to them.
Raina: He started yelling at them and he scared them, it was funny. Heeven started to turn red.. ( she said laughing harder)
Nate: Yeah.. haha Raina! ( he said sarcastically)
Magda: Ok then. Well I talked to the little boys mom. The boys name is Ryan Kelly.
Nate: Were still assigned to work on the damn doctor case. Its taking forever.
Raina: Yeah, I do hate cases like this.
Magda: Ill give Captain the info in 10.

(Captains office)
Jinny:(sits in the chair waiting for Captain to meet with her.)
Kate: *Walks in* Ok Jinny, tell me whats up.
Jinny: (Jinny glared at Captain remembering the time when she came to her to find out if IA cleared her, and Kate never said if she beleived Jinny or not.)
Jinny: Captain this really is hard for me to say.
Kate: What? Its nothing serious, about your health, i hope..
Jinny: No, my head is pretty much fine. 5 days ago, when I..ya know "hit the wall", I started to feel kinda dizzy after wards. So Magda rushed me to the emergency room. We both waited around for the blood results and all.
Kate: Yeah, he said you had a mild concusion. I was getting scared there..
Jinny: I did have one, so Hank came down to teh hospital, and he was scared and was asking me if everything was ok. I told him to leave.
Kate: Hank, our sketch artist? Are you seeing him?
MoRe:
Jinny: Yes, I am..we got to know eachother and a week ago, we slept together..
Kate: Oh my god..wow..what does you telling me this have to do with..(she paused)....
Jinny: I think you guessed it Cap..
Kate: I'd rather hear you say it.
Jinny: *sighed* as I said about the results..the doctor told me that "my baby is fine". Then thats when I found out that I'm...pregnant.........
Kate: Well, all be damned..(she said shocked)
Jinny: Ya know, Im having alot of trouble adjusting to this myself!
So would you just please say somthing that will help me??
Please, I need some support this time Captain!(she said getting histerical)
Kate: Jinny, calm down. So this baby is Hanks? Oh my..does he know yet?
Jinny: No..and I do plan to tell him, but I dont know when or how to.
Kate: Jin, I'm proud of you though..
Jinny: Why?..I got pregnant! ( she said confused)
Kate: For telling me this as soon as possible. Now that you tell me this, I would of thought that you would of kept it to yourself for the longest time..but you came forward with your problem and your willing to talk to someone about it. Thats why I'm proud.
Jinny: Uh, thanks. ( she said feeling a inch bit better)
Kate: Well, if you want my advice, call your GYN in the morning and see if she can take ya in for a follow up on you and your baby. And see if she can get you settled with a doctor who can treat both you and your little one.
Jinny: Fine, I'll do that, thank you for talking with me again..
Kate: Like I said, I'm proud of you.
Jinny: You know what, Ive known you for a while now, and its like your my mother. (she said laughing a little) I mean you support me when you think I really need it..and all. I wish my mother would of done that....
Kate: Jinny, Im touched, really. I guess your kinda like a daughter to me..I see ya everyday..I boss ya around. So I can say that I own ya. (she said with a smile)
Jinny: Thanks Captain, and goodnight.
Kate: Goodnight Jinny.

xoxoJessie more to come!! itll get better!




:)

THAT :crybaby: WAS :crybaby: GREAT

POST MORE PLEASE:crybaby:

Im gonna post more tomorrow! I am a fast poster! lol prob the fastest! tyou for all ur replies! Oh attention all nmk fans..theres a marathon of Starsky & Hutch on March 4th..on Tvland! just wanted to let ya know..for those who never saw the crying child..maybe theyll show it! lol ok xoxoJessie:D

Tya again for ur replies! Ok heres more i thought of...

Starts: ( Raina and Stacys house)

Raina: Stacy, ya know if you do mind me getting the bigger room, I can sleep in the smaller room.
Stacy: Raina, No...you won it fair and square..please im not that kind of person.
Raina: Are you sure?
Stacy: Im positive.
Raina: ok..
Stacy: So, what do you want to do now?
Raina: Uh, I dont know..what do you have in mind?
Stacy: Want to go out to eat tonight?....
Raina: Sure.
Stacy: First of all, what kind of food do you like to eat?
Raina: Oh thats kinda hard, I have like 3 or 4 favorites!
Stacy: ohh, well mines Italian and Mexican food.
Raina: Oh my god those are my top faves!
Stacy: Well well well, see we do have something in common! (she said sarcastically)
Raina: Since its our first night in our new little home..shoudlnt we do some fun stuff to make it kinda special?
Stacy: Yeah, your right!
Raina: I know, let's go on a jog..you said you run.
Stacy: Great, fine with me.
Raina: Let's go get out running clothes on and run our asses off! (she laughed)

I know its not much yet..more later xoxoJessie bye

ur a great writer so write more please!!!!!!!!:happyface

Yep I am satisfied. That made me feel better.

Starts: ( Locker room)

Magda: ( comes outa the bathroom)
Jinny: (comes in)
Magda: Hey Jin, did you tell captain yet..if you dont mind me asking?
Jinny: Yes Magda, I did actually..
Magda: Oh, uh howd it go?..she asked unsure
Jinny: To be honest, better than i thought.
Magda: What did she suggest?
Jinny: It was just a long talk and I explained to her how it happened and how I found out. Anyway, she suggests I go to a GYN and get set up with a doctor that can treat both me and my baby.
Magda: That was a good suggestion.
Jinny: Yeah, but..
Magda: But what Jinny?..you have to find out how far you are..your appointment dates..and get an estimate of when your due date will be around.
Jinny: I dont know Mag, its like this is all going so fast for me.
Magda: Well, Jin..im sorry but ya cant keep saying it months from now..and then when that time comes..that baby will be saying ready or not here I come.
Jinny: I see your point Mag (she said a little frustrated)
Magda: Look, I dont want to scare you at all, but Im telling you..you are not ready and plus this is your 1st child. Your gonna be a little scared or maybe even alot anyways.
Jinny: Alright,"mommy" Ill go see the GYN (she said sarcastically)
Magda: (chuckled a little) Good..and what I suggest for you to do before you plan out this appt..CALL HANK! Okay Jin?
Jinny: I suppose that is the right thing to do, I also sort of made a commitment to Hank as long as were in a relationship together. And that was "TELL THE TRUTH, and BE HONEST..and always take the risk and tell eachother. So that were not at the risk of hurting eachother. (she said meaningful and worried)
Magda: One of the things I should of settled with Gabe first, huh?
Jinny: Could of helped..

( At kids parents house again)

Magda: Did your son say anything to you or do anything to make you suspect he'd want to run away?
Mrs Kelly: No..
Magda: (just stared in confusion)
Mrs Kelly: Well as I told you before, his father died last year.
Magda: Im really, sorry again for your loss ma'am.
Mrs Kelly: He really..(started to cry a little) was a good dad, ya know..
Mrs Kelly: He always took care of me..supported me...and spent time with Ryan, alot. Ryan always had love and attention..we gave him that all his life.
Mrs Kelly: So why would he run away?
Magda: Well, what the police are trying to determine is if this was a kidnapping, or a run away case.
Mrs Kelly: Well you also said you couldnt find andy enemies..and you talked to all of his friends.
Magda: Yeah I know..
Mrs Kelly: I mean..hes 9 yrs old for gods sake!
Magda: My little boy ran away at age 8 in a half.
Mrs Kelly: Oh, you have kids too, Inspector?
Magda: Yeah, one boy..hes 11 now.
Mrs Kelly: Why did he run away?
Magda: (smiles and shakes her head for a sec) he wanted to be with his father..long story..me and his father were fighting..we juts got back together after he left when I was pregnant with my son. its a long story..
Mrs Kelly: Kids, your there parents..ya know?
Mrs Kelly: You think you know them, untill they wind up killing themselves..or running away,,getting into soem kind of trouble..(she said covering her face getting ready to cry again)
Magda: Ill come back later and talk to you if I find out anything or what..ok?
Mrs Kelly: Alright..thank you inspector.
Magda: Please..call me Magda.

xoxoJessie More later! New scene coming up!
Byes
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Awwwww Mrs Kelly:D:D:D:D:D:D More please??:):)

that was nice to use kellys name please post more!!!!!!!:D :happyface

Hello people..im gonna post more now..im thinkin im thinkin...

Starts:( Raina and Stacys new home)
Raina: Wow, that was one hell of a run we did!
Stacy: Yeah, i know! (panting and laughing)
Raina: What do you want to do for dinner? We still eating out?
Stacy: Uh huh, what do you feel like eating?
Raina: Lets go out to..that new restaurant that had the grand opening i think almost 2 weeks ago..
Stacy: LorensLunchNdinnerLot..also known as LL N D lot..ok great!
Raina: Lets take my car..I have a radio..hey ya know what..I think our first night should be a tad bit wild..but not too wild! (she said jumpy in an excited way)
Stacy: Ohh..well..alright! Ok..sounds kinda..FUN! (she said surprised)
Raina: Well, this roomy thing is going smooth so far huh?
Stacy: Yah, I guess it is, huh..(she said happily)


(Next day at office)
Nate: Hows the rooming with Stacy?
Raina: Oh..(she laughed) well were having fun so far..its going pretty good.
Nate: Heard you got the "big" room
Raina: Yeah, we flpped for the bigger room.
Nate: Ya know what, I have to go to the bathroom, be right back.
Raina: Have fun..
Nate: Gives her a look..weirdly

(Bathroom)
Nate:(locks the door)
Nate: (pulls out his cell)
Nate: (then pulls out jackies number)
Nate:(dials)
Nate: Hey, Jackie..
Jackie: What are you doing, now?
Nate: Getting ready to hit the road and go home.
Jackie: Hmm..
Nate: What
Jackie: I dont know, I was thinking of doing something with you tonight, dinner..anything. When we talked and all..it brang back memories of when we went to hign school..you never asked me out..I had a crush on you..and then there was those rumors that you liked me alot and you just didnt know how to tell me...remember that..Natie pie?(she teased softly)
Nate: (laughs a little) Oh yeah, I remember that..thought you'd never bring that up again.
Jackie: Well, I never forgot..
Nate: *sighed* well, Jackie, look, I have to go back to work for one more hour, but Ill stop by, ok?
Jackie: Ok, great..buh byee (she said flirty)
Nate: See ya, Jackie

(Raina at her desk)
Nate: (comes back looking serious)
Nate: You want to grab dinner?
Raina: Well, I guess 2 nights going out to dinner wont be bad..
Raina: Sure, Nate..ill go.
Nate: Stacy can come if she wants too..i mean..
Raina: No its ok, shes going to be at a reunion..and she said she will probably be back late, anyway..so its fine.
Nate: Ok..good..lets go.
Raina: I got the perfect place to go..Ill surprise ya..kay/
Nate: (laughed in a weird way and look) uh ok..
Raina: Someone that i wont mention once said you liked this restaurant..i think it was the end of last year.
Nate: Alright..
Raina: (In car drivers seat)
Nate: Im starving!
Raina: God..i can eat anything now! Remind me never to diet again! (she said sarcastic)
Nate: Uh..never diet again..
Raina: Then she pulled into a parking lot
Nate: Oh, theres a parking space..on the right..
Raina: oh, thanks..(pulls in)
Nate: Good then we should be close because its starting to rain..
Raina: Oh, damn..I hate it when it rains *she said looking through her purse looking for her credit card*
Nate: Why?
Raina: Well, this may seem funny to you..but my hair gets frizzy and puffy.
Nate: Oh my gosh..thats a tragedy (sarcastically said)
Raina: Nate..shut up (she said frustrated and laughing at the same time still searching for her credit card)
Raina: Found it! Oh good..lets go.
Nate: *(got out)*
Raina: Nate I heard you were Italian and loved Italian food also..so we are at..(Nate looks at the front of the place and cuts her off)
Nate: The Little Italian Place on polka..(he says as he flashbacked a quick memory of CD leaving) (as he was remembering, he kept hearing in his mind repeat over and over again..WONT CHANGE mY mIND...repeat)
Nate: Raina: I dont feel so..(throws up)
Raina: Nate are you okay??
Nate: Yeah..gagging..another one of these panick attacks..ive had one before..at least I think its another one..
Raina: Oh god..lets go inside and get you to a bathroom, ok?

(Towards the end of episode)
(Jinnys house)
Jinnys answering machine: Hey, Jinny..its me Hank..I called you almost 4 times..but you never returned my calls yet. Is something wrong..something up? Anyway..hows your head? I was getting a tad bit worried about you. Maybe ill stop by next week..i dunno..but ill call ya tomorrow. Bye.
Jinny: (stared in a sad way)
Jinny: ( got into bed and pulled out a magazine)(the one about Pregnancy for Dummies..she found it at Magdas house..when Magda got it by mistake in the mail)

( Magdas House)
Magda: *opened a droor and pulled out a picture album and was looking at baby pictures of Benjamin..and then pulled out Gabes..she never got to really look at it*
Magda: (as she looked at it, she felt lonley)

(Nate in his car)
Nate: (went to Jackies house)
Jackie: (Talking to her husband on the phone saying) "yes, Dave..we still have a marriage..no no..i love you..i cant wait for you to get home..im sure..yeah..bye.
Nate: (Overheard conversation)

The End* (Created by Deborah Joy Levine)
Lifetime tv productions~

End of eppie guys..howd ya like it??

Bye!xoxoJessie gerl

Poor Nate. I don't really blame Raina about the restaurant. She didn't know. I REALLY want Jinny to tell Hank. Jess, think we can get another episode on here huh??? :D:D:D:D

For those of you who want to start reading my new fan fic..i suggest u read my rect 1st one i made..the ep after thats them.."rush to the door"..i guess its called? ok xoxoJessie:talk: