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a different form of my smiley dancers-
ya know what that means!!!
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! OMG NOOOOO!!!!!!! They found me here noooo!!!!! They follow me everywhere!!! HELP!!!!! and all this torture! Noooo! **************************************************** "You even get to help" She said after getting out the dough and tomato sauce. They poured everything they felt like on it and soon it was in the oven. Jinny decided that was the perfect moment for giving them some privacy and excused herself. "I'll be right back." She said and went to the restrooms. After she had left CD sat down on the ground, leaning against the now closed fridge. Nate sat down next to her and looked at her for a moment, glad that she was okay. "What a crazy day, huh?" He finally said after a while. She nodded and turned and smiled at him. "It had a couple of nice moments though." "Yeah a few." He smiled back at her and reached out to slightly stroke over her cheek with the side of his forefinger before cupping it gently. She leaned into his touch, glad that after such a horrible day a little touch like that could make her feel perfect again. She wrapped her arms around his neck and leaned her forehead against his. "Thank god you're okay." He whispered as they looked deep into each others eyes. "I was so scared you could get hit when the bullets started to fly." Swallowing he finally admitted that. "Me too." She wrapped her arms around him even closer. Putting his hands on her waist he drew her as close as humanly possible and slowly his lips sought the soft solace of her own. What started out as a nuzzling of lips soon grew into more as they gave in to what they longed for so badly with not only their bodies and souls but also their hearts and minds. They didn't even notice when Jinny returned. Smiling she leaned against the doorframe. She really was happy for them. They made a cute couple and certainly deserved the happiness in their lives. But seeing them so happy together just made her miss him even more. Once they had been as happy as CD and Nate now were. Just being in each others arms made the world a better place again and she wanted that back so badly. She had hoped to find that in Jack, but he had only made it worse because she didn't even find anything close to it in his arms. Suddenly she realized the pizza was done so letting them smooch around some more she got it out of the oven and then sat down next to them. "Pizza anybody?" She called out. CD and Nate quickly seperated and gave her guilty puppy looks. "We... we were just..." CD stammered while Nate cleared his throat. "All over each other." Jinny said and chuckled. "Don't worry about it." "So, pizza eh?" Nate quickly changed the topic and grabbed a slice and digged in. Only now realizing just how hungry they had been, especially CD and Nate who had skipped lunch already, they devoured the pizza. CD and Nate started to feed each other somewhere between first and third slice and Jinny watched them amused. At least this was better than some mushy romance flick on TV. They finished the pizza and then looked around. "We don't have to do the dishes, do we?" Nate asked. Jinny shook her head. "Under these circumstances, nah." "We should get back though and see if there's anything knew on CD 5 80." CD said and got up. Nate and Jinny got up too and they all headed back to the Division. Checking with the officers there they heard that there was absolutely nothing new. But right after that had been said there was a call and they right away drove to where the car had been found. But of course it already was deserted. That frustrated them and CD slammed her hands on the trunk. "Dammit!" At that something seemed to groan inside the trunk so she right away opened it to find Norman in there, beaten up and shot into his shoulder and thigh. "Guys!" CD called out and Nate and Jinny rushed over. Nate right away got his cellphone out and walked away from them a little, while CD and Jinny tried to stop the bleedings. "Who shot you Norman?" Jinny asked. "Ray." He managed to mutter. "He made me steal another car first." CD nodded, already having expected that. "Where are they now?" He opened his mouth again but his eyes just stared at them emptily. "NORMAN! WHERE ARE THEY?" Jinny yelled at him. CD felt his pulse and looked over at Jinny and then at Nate and shook her head. "Damn them!" Jinny yelled as the ambulance arrived. The EMTs right away rushed over and got him out of the trunk and onto a stretcher. Jinny rode in the ambulance with them and saw how they managed to revive him again. But as soon as they were in the hospital he got rushed into surgery. CD and Nate arrived a couple of moments later. "Anything?" CD asked Jinny. "They revived him in the ambulance. He's in surgery now, the doctor said he'll let us know what's going on." She told them. They sat down in the waiting area. "We're nowhere again!" Jinny called out frustrated. "All we do is sit around and run after every bone they throw us while they laugh at us!" "We'll get them. They might think they're smart but they're not. They're greedy bastards and they made mistakes before. They'll make more mistakes." CD tried to assure her. "How about some coffee, huh?" Nate asked and got up to get it. "One of those greedy bastards happened to have killed my brother!" Jinny yelled and glared at CD. She wasn't mad at her but this was driving her up the walls. "I know Jin, I know." CD hugged her. "And he's going to get what he deserves. But you need to stay cool and calm, okay?" Jinny nodded, hugging her back. "Thanks CD." "Don't mention it." She smiled at her. |
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Whoa, i forgot to post on here!! lol; guess what i want?!!! MOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!
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**************************************************** A short while later Nate returned and handed the women their coffees. After taking a couple of sips the doctor walked up to them. "Inspectors?" They got up and walked over to him. "I'm sorry but he had lost too much blood. He didn't make it." He always hated it when he lost a patient. "Damn them." CD muttered. "Thank you doctor." Nate said and the doc walked away again. They walked back outside again and quietly drove back to the station. "It's 5 am already." CD realized once they got there. "Yeah." Nate had just checked his own watch. "How about we all go home for a while? Take a shower, rest a little and come back to the station then? There isn't anything else we can do now. We're nowhere." He hated to admit it but that was the bitter truth. "Yeah." Jinny nodded. "We made some progress though." "Yeah we did." CD agreed. "Try to get some rest Jin, okay?" "I'll do my best." She said and then got out of the car and walked over to her own and headed home. "And you follow your own advice." Nate looked at CD worried. "You seem tired." "I'll be fine. A shower and some coffee... you know me." She assured him. "Yeah I do." He stroked a strand of hair behind her ear. "I'll see you in a couple of hours then." "Back here." She nodded. He leaned over and gave her a rather innocent peck on the lips. "See you then." "See ya." She smiled at him and gently squeezed his hand before she got out of the car as well and headed into the same direction as Jinny, to her own appartment on Green Street. Nate watched after her and sighed before he as well, headed home for now. While the three prepared to go back to work again Magda did what CD had suggested and talked about the escapees with Kate. But they couldn't see anymore than they already knew anyways. So they gave up on those file and started to talk about their personal lives. In another part of town Johnny surprised Raina just when she had sat down for breakfast and wanted to look through the stuff from Gina's uncle. Even though she wasn't quite ready to admit it yet, Johnny had been right. He was growing on her. Jinny was about to leave her appartment again when there was a knock at her door. She opened it to see both her father and Casey, already wearing his uniform. "Hey guys, come on in." She led them inside. "How's it going? You didn't get him yet?" Her father asked, more than anxious to get revenge for his oldest son's death. She sighed and shook her head. "We were close yesterday but they got away again." "Dammit!" The gray haired man clenched his fist and slammed it on the kitchen counter. "Look Jinnygirl... you really need all the help you can get and I wouldn't mind..." "DAD!" Casey interrupted him. "Not again! Please!" He slightly glared at his youngest. "I am not some senile old stupid man! I am still your father and I am still one helluva cop!" "Dad please." Jinny stepped in front of him. "Casey is right. Like it or not, you are retired. You suffered a heartattack one year ago and you really shouldn't play cowboys and indians anymore. Both Casey and me are out there and we're looking for Sanchez! John was our brother and we want to see that the SOB who killed him gets what he deserves as much as you do! So please stop it. I already told you I'm going to take care of it and I swear that one's a promise that I'm gonna keep." "Fine." He muttered, having to admit that his daughter had a point. "But you tell me as soon as you know more!" He pointed at her. Jinny nodded. "I promise." "Good. I'll wait in the car." He said and walked out again, looking at his son. Casey took a deep breath and looked at Jinny. "He's going crazy over this." "WHAT? Casey, he was your brother too! Okay, fine, I admit it, he could be a jerk at times, but isn't it making you mad that somebody just shot him, just like that, as if his life wasn't worth a cent? Don't you want to get that bastard who did that to him?!?" She could understand her father, but she knew he couldn't just go out there, wanting revenge. He'd most likely just get himself killed then. "Dammit Jinny! Of course I want that! I want to see him IN JAIL! Where he belongs. You have to admit that dad can't just dig out his old gun and chase after them like he's Clint Eastwood!" He argued. "Of course not! Casey I'm on your side there. Did you even listen to what I told him?" She set her arms akimbo. "Yes I listened. Closely as a matter of fact. And what I heard scares me. You can't just risk everything you just got back just because you want revenge for John's death! Promise me not to do anything stupid." He looked at her intensely, fear evident in his expression. "Jinny please. This isn't the wild west anymore." She managed a small smile and hugged him. "I promise. Don't worry Case. You know me." He hugged her back. "That's why I worry." She gave him a look and together they left her apartment, both heading to work. |
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Im reading...and think its time for more....
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gimmee some more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uh, please!!
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MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?
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TRACEY FOREVER!!!
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okay, here's more
![]() **************************************************** A little while later Magda, Jinny, CD and Nate and Liz, the Marshall, all were back at the Division again. They pretty much just had sat down at their desks when Spivey stormed out of his office and read from a newspaper with raised voice. He blamed them because Ray and Gina still were running free. Apart from that he was pissed because the night before they had told him they were finishing their reports but all he had found on his desk this morning were two notes. 'Anchorside: big shootout, Gary dead' and 'Norman found in car from Anchorside shootout, didn't survive injuries'. But the newspaper report troubled him even more because he also had a boss to answer to and that certainly wasn't something to help him with his ambition. And the answers those Inspectors were giving him right now didn't satisfy him at all either. He wondered what else he'd have to do to get their respect. They kept on dancing around on his head and slowly he statred to think that it didn't even make a difference if he was there or not. And now apart from the inspectors being a major pain in the ass that marshall had the nerve to tell him off. But not with him. He hadn't expected her to just walk out though. Under the dirty looks of the others he stormed back into his office and slammed the door shut behind him. Raina meanwhile was still in the park and finally found the time to look through what Gina's uncle had sent her. One picture in particular caught her eye. She right away called Jinny and told her about her hunch. Completely unaware of all of those recent events Kate was still lying in bed, reading some magazines. Suddenly Louis knocked on her door with a surprise in tow. Overjoyed by her daughter's return the two shared some quality time, reminiscing about the past and looking forward to the future. Back at the station Nate entered the bullpen just as Magda walked out. "Hey, look, what I got here." He said and put a picture of Spivey on top of his beloved grid. His body and arms and legs were a bonsai tree though. Upon seeing that everybody started to laugh immediately. "Nate, where the hell did you get that?" CD asked eventually. "A buddy of mine in the photolab made it." Then he handed her a darts arrow. "The honor of the first shot should be yours." She chuckled and aimed. "Middle of his forehead" She announced, threw the arrow and hit the spot she had aimed for. "Not bad." Nate grinned and handed out arrows to everybody else. When he wanted to give one to Jinny she shook her head and hung up the phone. She liked that little prank but right now she had something else on her mind. "I'll be back in a few." She said and walked out too. The others all took their turns and soon the whole picture was covered with arrows. While they relieved their frustration this way Magda had a serious task ahead of her. Still contemplating if she really was doing the right thing she walked into Jonah's office and for once managed to resist the temptation and returned his key. She had decided to be with her family and leave her affair with him behind. Jinny right away drove to where Raina was awaiting her already. Together they walked on the boat where Raina had suspected that Ray and Gina might be hiding. Soon it was clear that they had been right. Even though Ray was nowhere in sight they caught Gina in the little kitchen. But Ray sneaked up behind them. Gina warned him and went for her gun so that Raina had no choice but shoot her. But still Ray tried to look for a way out, not letting go of his gun. Listening to Jinny he got infuriated and raised his gun again, wanting to kill her, but Jinny was faster and had to kill him in self defense. Raina called it in and soon an ambulance, coroner and crime scene were all over the boat. Jinny stayed there while Raina accompanied Gina and the EMTs to the hospital. The shot hadn't been that bad and the doctor assumed she would make it. A couple of hours later everything was pretty much back to normal again. The commotion had cooled down and CD and Nate had successfully managed to keep the press away from Spivey and Spivey away from Jinny or Raina. First they told him he was needed for a press conference and offered to drive him there. He gladly accepted, knowing he'd make quite an appearance like that. But when they reached their destination there was no press of course. "Where is that press conference?" He asked annoyed. CD shrugged and checked her watch. "Maybe we're early?" "Nah. We're on time. I'm sure they'll come soon." Nate said. Spivey paced for ten minutes, got out his cellphone made a call and then glared at CD and Nate who were leaning against the car, grinning at each other. "You two morons drove me to the wrong address! The conference was at the station!" "It was?" Nate asked surprised. "And I was sure it would be at in front of the bridge." CD shrugged. "I mean with the Golden Gate bridge as background and all, because of..." "SHUT UP!" He glared at her. "It was at the station! And apparently because I wasn't there Ex..." "Exstead, sir. Inspector Jinny Exstead." Nate said when he noticed he had forgotten her name again. "Her and Inspector Wyoming talked to the press!" He was furious. "Washington. Raina Washington. But Wyoming was close." CD corrected him, trying hard not to laugh. "Yeah, hey, you're lucky they were around." Nate added. "DRIVE ME BACK!" He yelled at him and got back into the car. |
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ha ha, take tahat spivey!!!!
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**************************************************** CD and Nate exchanged a look, grinned broadly and then got into the car again too. Knowing where the traffic was heavy around this time, CD of course drove the route that would take them an hour to even get back because they were constantly stuck in traffic. That pissed him off even more of course and he started to yell at them again. "You're cops dammit! Use the siren! GET ME BACK TO THE STATION!" "But this is not an emergency, sir." CD said. "We are not supposed to use the siren unless there's an emergency, right?" She looked at Nate. "Right." He nodded and looked at Spivey. "Now, you don't want us to break the rules, do you?" He growled in frustration, wondering what the hell he had done to deserve this crowd of idiots working at his Division. And he really had to do something about that. Once they were back at the station he went straight to the office and CD and Nate knew they had to keep him there, no matter what, sohe couldn't get too nosy or arrest anybody again. They followed him and apologized for the misunderstanding about the press conference and then out of the blue both CD and Nate started to become strongly interested in the cult of clipping bonsai trees. So while he went on a rampage about it and told them more than they ever wanted, or rather actually not really wanted to hear. Meanwhile they were still stuck in the office and shot each other desperated looks while he talked to his tree as if it was his firstborn son. But at least like that he was busy with something else, and after all that had been their task. At the same time Jinny decided to call Kate and fill her in on everything. "McCafferty." Kate answered the phone and smiled when she heard Jinny's voice. She was proud of them. "Look Cap, I don't know if you heard what happened..." Jinny started. "Yeah I did. It's all over the news and I keep on getting phonecalls here. Did Spivey give you much trouble?" That was the only thing that worried her. "None so far actually. CD and Nate are in the office with him since forever. By now we're not sure anymore who gagged and cuffed whom there." She joked. Kate chuckled slightly. "I wonder why he's there in the first place. You guys did all of that on your own. And that was great work." "Well I'm not so sure... I mean we should have gotten them sooner. They always were a step ahead of us." That still bothered her somehow. "Well you guys did a great job. You should be proud." She nodded slightly. "Thanks Cap." Jinny was glad she was on their side. "So how about you?" "I'm coming in uhm to the station later." Kate said, hearing how Louis walked up behind her. "Hey that's great. We'll be here." She really hoped she was coming back for good. "Ya, I'll see you then. Okay, bye." She hung up the phone again. "Bye Cap." Jinny hung up herself. Upon hearing the last part of that conversation Louis got worried but Kate told him she was going to turn in her retirement papers. Upon that he told her that he only wanted her to be happy, no matter what. She leaned closer to him and they kissed and cuddled. No one really had realized how fast the day had come to an end again. Jinny walked along the hallway towards the bullpen when she saw her father waiting for her there. He told her how proud he was of her and that her brother could rest in peace now. But Jinny reminded him that she did the right thing because Sanchez had gone for his gun. She knew she had provoked him. But she knew she had done the right thing. Not really in the mood to talk to her dad any longer right now she walked into the bullpen again. The elevatordoors opened at the lobby and everybody got out. Nate and CD among them. "Nate?" CD smiled at him. "Yah?" He turned around to her. "What are you doin' tonight?" She asked him, her voice low and sexy while giving him a slightly seductive look. "Havin dinner with you I hope." He smiled at her. "I can meet you." She said. "I need to go somewhere else first." He slightly wondered what she was up to but trusted her so didn't worry about it too much. "Okay. Well uhhh. I'll meet you at the lil Italian place on Polk." "What's the name of it?" CD asked, not sure if she knew it. "The little Italian place on Polk." He repeated, having no clue about the restaurant's name. She smiled at him broadly at that. That was so typically Nate. "Nevermind." She slightly shook her head. "I'll find it." And then she turned to leave, grinning even more. Nate grinned back at her. He already couldn't wait to see her again. "You're not gonna change your mind, are ya?" He asked, just wanting to make sure. She turned around again. "I'm not gonna change my mind." She looked at him for a long moment, her eyes making clear how much she was looking forward to tonight. |
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!
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OMG!! this is awsome!!! you must post MORE!!
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![]() Hey Jeanie, see this? I'm posting more! So you can stop bugging me lol j/kAnd yay! I actually managed to post on all of em now! (I think so at least lol...) **************************************************** CD was grinning broadly when she entered her appartment building and already considered what she’d wear to her date with Nate that lateron. Suddenly she frowned when she saw another woman enter. “Jinny?” “Hey CD.” Jinny said, as surprised to see her there as CD was to see Jinny. “Everything okay?” CD asked worried. “Well, as okay as it can be at the moment.” Jinny said and sighed. “Hey, who let you in?” She then asked, assuming CD was there to see her. “My friend the key.” CD laughed and held up her keys. “Wait, you mean you live here?” Jinny realized. CD laughed even more and nodded. “Uh huh. Ever since the divorce and all. Hey, what’s all this about anyways?” “I live here too!” Jinny exclaimed. “Since I moved out from my dad’s again.” “No sh-it?” CD asked stunned. “Freaky, huh?” Jinny laughed. “Oh yeah.” She nodded and they walked up together. CD stopped in front of her door and Jinny burst out laughing even more. “This is getting freakier by the minute!” She pointed to the next door. “We’re neighbors even!” “You’re kidding!” CD laughed with her. “And we never noticed!” “Well we noticed now.” Jinny chuckled. “Good point.” CD nodded and unlocked her door. “Hey, I actually gotta get ready for... dinner. But want a coffee or something?” “Sure.” Jinny nodded and followed her inside. “Dinner, huh?” “Yeah well, a date kinda thing.” CD smiled broadly. “Ohhh I see.” Jinny grinned. “Uh huh.” CD nodded. “Hey, do you know how Gina is doing at the hospital? I wanted to drive by to check on her but I figured I can just call as well.” Jinny nodded. “Yeah, and I don’t know. Last thing I heard was seems that she’ll make it.” CD started the coffee and got her phone to call the hospital. She talked to somebody for a moment and then nodded at Jinny. “They said she’s still asleep but there isn’t that much damage.” “That’s good to know.” Jinny said and CD handed her a cup of coffee. “So... hot date, huh?” Jinny smirked. “Yeah, well, it’s the first official date for Nate and me.” She smiled. Jinny grinned. “Then what are we still waiting for here?” She put the coffee away. “We gotta getcha ready for the big night!” “Big night?” CD laughed. “Yeah well, come on!” Jinny smirked. “You can’t tell me you don’t wanna get down and dirty with him.” CD laughed again. “Hmm maybe... depending how it goes... I might take him home.” She smirked. “Thought so.” Jinny grinned. “You have condoms here? Well actually you should take some along, in case he wants to go to his place...” “We’re gonna have dinner at that lil Italian place on Polk street, that’s pretty much just around the corner from here.” CD said. “And he suggeseted that. So he’s probably hoping I’ll take him home already.” Jinny smirked. “Well he’s a guy. Ya can’t blame him for that. Besides he had the hots for you ever since. “That was mutual.” CD admitted. Jinny grinned. “Great! Then the sex is gonna blow ya, I’m sure. So where are your condoms? You should have one in every room, just in case...” She winked at her. “I had my tubes tied, forget the stupid condoms.” CD said. “Candace DeLorenzo!” Jinny laughed. “But knowing Nate, he’s probably buying some as we speak.” |
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i'm glad u posted on this one!!! It was GRRRRRREEEEEEEEATTTT!!! and we need more!!!
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Yeah I see this and I just have this to say it wasn't long enough. I know you have several irons in the fire and all but you really need to post a long one on this one. Thanks and More. Great as always. |
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