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candace~n~nathan · 08-11-2003, 10:44 PM

this is great!!! keep it up!!!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-12-2003, 01:15 AM

Thanks for all the compliments. It's hard to get back into the routine of writing something new.

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The phone to his ear Nate could hear everything going on within the apartment. C.D. must have clicked on her cell.
It was quietly for a moment before he hears a man’s voice boast out, “OFFICER DOWN! OFFICER DOWN! 10-71 Code three”
He didn’t know what to do. Or where to go… He had no idea where C.D. was…
“C.D.!” he says into the phone!
“Come on talk to me!!” he raises his voice making several people in surrounding tables look to him, “What’s going on!?” he asks just as loud. Hoping maybe someone would hear his faint voice from C.D.’s cell phone.
“Sir, If you continue to interrupt…” The waiter was interrupted by a badge in his face, “This is Police business!” are his only words to the man. Be it… not much, but he couldn’t think straight right now. He had to know what was happening… Then he had an idea. Jumping up from the table he darts out the door of the restaurant heading directly to his car. Fumbling for his keys in his pocket he finds them, pulls them out, but drops them onto the rain-dampened pavement. Leaning over he grabs them, and in record time pushes them into the lock on his door, and was soon sitting inside the door still open, and his leg half way out being drenched by the rain. Turning on the car Nate stops motionless the phone to his ear and his other trying to catch any news pertaining to where his partner was on the radio.

After having summed up tonight’s session with her therapist Jinny smiles she had meant everything she said to her. She was really beginning to feel better about her life. Once saying her goodbyes she makes her way to the door her coat draped over her right forearm. Stepping out of the Office she moves through the vacant waiting room, and out the glass door. Shivering from the burst of chilled air that hits her body as she exits Jinny doesn’t move out from beneath the shelter of the awning before putting on her coat. Once it was on she inhales and rushes out from beneath it to her car, unlocks it, and gets inside. Closing the door once her feet are inside Jinny brushes the water from the shoulders of her jacket and leans forward to turn on her engine. Moving her hand to her left she turns on the heater… It was unusually cold tonight. A burst of cold air from the vents hit her in the face as a voice comes over dispatch, “780 Crest Point Apt #1 Officers down 10-71. Code 30.”
Glancing at her watch Jinny thinks what the hell…

TDfan69 · 08-12-2003, 01:48 AM

Keep going!!!!!!!!!

Sweetchild2005 · 08-12-2003, 11:18 AM

She soo did not stop there.....

HIGH ENOUGH · 08-12-2003, 11:52 AM

I like it alot. i think it's super, but when does Magda come in?

-Brandon.

ks · 08-12-2003, 03:46 PM

Commercial breaks sitnk.

ks

TLC4Whitney · 08-12-2003, 04:20 PM

MORE!!!

CD DeLorenzo · 08-16-2003, 12:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TLC4Whitney
MORE!!!

I second that.

Laney · 08-16-2003, 06:07 PM

What's with everyone stopping just when its getting good?
More!!!

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-16-2003, 09:07 PM

Wow, thanks for all the replies. Here is some more...

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The song was over, and Raina looks up to Johnny whom had his arms still grasped around her, “The songs over.” She tries to chuckle off.
“I know.” He smiles down to her still moving even without the music, “I’m just enjoying being near you.”
“Johnny.” She chuckles slightly moving her hands to his arms, “I want a drink…”
“Just wait, baby… We’re having a moment.”
Narrowing her eyebrows Raina shakes her head taking his hands from her, “No, we were dancing. Now, I’m getting a drink.” She says looking to him again before turning and making her way around the other couples on the floor.
“What’d I do?” he asks himself before rushing after her, “Raina!” she doesn’t acknowledge him, “Raina, baby!” he says again grasping her arm.
“Get your hands off me…” she mocks him, “baby.”
“Whoa now…” the man puts his hands up, “What just happened?” he motions with his hands.
“You’re pressuring me. You’re not going to be the one deciding how long I’m dancing.” She says, “You’re lucky I even came.”
“Okay… okay. I’ll back up…” he assures, “I’ll take it slow.”
Shooting him a look she turns toward the bar to order her drink, a smirk across her lips.

Turning the corner down Crest Point Nate immediately knew where he was heading. There was already flashing lights, and ambulances in the front. He could hardly stop his car before he was out of it dashing for the entrance of the apartment building. Many doors in the hall were open with the occupants trying to see what was going on, but Nate rushes to the one the Officer’s were crowding around.
“I’m sorry. You can’t go past this point.” The officer says putting out his hand to block the man.
Pushing his hand hard into his pocket Nate grabs his badge, almost dropping it before he could even get it out of his pocket his eyes were scanning the room, but he couldn’t see anything beside Liz, and a pair of feet sticking out past where the paramedics were huddles, he knew it was C.D., “She’s my partner!” he motions inside with the hand holding the badge.
The man posted at the door nods once and allows him to enter. As soon as he is permitted inside he rushes over to his partner seeing her eyes cracked open slightly.
“C.D.!” the man pleads, “I’m here!” he moves frantically around the paramedics to the other side where only one E.M.T. was, “I’m here.” He takes her hand in his. She was already positioned on the stretcher.
Once finishing injecting the needle for the IV the E.M.T. looks to Nate, “I’m sorry, Sir.” He motions him to move away, “I need you to step back. We’ve got to get her to the hospital before she loses anymore blood.”
“Is she going to be alright.” He gets up from his knees as they pull the stretcher up on its wheels.
“I honestly can’t answer that right now she’s lost a lot of blood.” The Paramedic says as they begin pushing his partner away from him.
“Oh my god.” He pleads running his hand over his head. Reaching down he grabs his badge he had dropped on the floor when talking to C.D., and then rushes to catch up to the stretcher. Once outside Nate runs until he is next to the stretcher, and walks along side it.
“I should have been here.” He pleads to the blonde lying there motionless.

candace~n~nathan · 08-17-2003, 12:34 AM

Aw, come on!!! Don't stop!!!!

planet_stella · 08-17-2003, 05:59 AM

yeah,don't stop, post more !

Sweetchild2005 · 08-17-2003, 11:33 AM

STOP STOPPING AND POST MORE!!!!

TLC4Whitney · 08-17-2003, 11:37 AM

Awwww this is so good, post more please

#1_Nancy_McKeon · 08-18-2003, 12:25 AM

Thanks guys. Glad you're liking it.

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The headlights of Jinny’s car hits the side of the Ambulance before she realizes she knew the person being put inside. Darting out her door she leaves it open rushing up to Nate whom she sees kiss C.D.’s hand before she it pushed into the vehicle, “I’ll be there!” Nate assures his partner, “You’ll be okay!” he tries to assures himself this time since by now the doors to the back of the ambulance were being closed.
“Hey!” Jinny exclaims, “I heard the call on the radio… What happened!?” she catches a glimpse of C.D. before the doors were fully closed. “I thought you guys were off duty?” she asks.
“I… we….” The man shakes his head.
Touching the side of Nate’s arm Jinny looks up into his face, “Hey… hey…” she tries to calm him, “You want me to drive you to the hospital?” she asks.
“No… My…” his voice pauses as he motions to his car, “Is over there.”
Jinny stood there in silence with that man as another stretcher is wheeled out, but this one containing a body covered by a white sheet.
“Who is that?” Jinny asks looking at Nate, but not waiting for a response before she moves over to it pulling the sheet back, and seeing Liz’s blood splashed face before an Officer hurries to stop her. Her response was only to toss the sheet back over it, “What in the hell happened?” she questions as she turns around to Nate.
“I…I don’t know. I was waiting for C.D… we were going to have dinner, and she never showed up.” He stutters as he speaks, “So…” he pauses trying to gather his thoughts, “I called her cell phone someone picked up, and that’s when I heard a man shouting about an Officer Down.”
The woman could tell how distracted Nate was, “How about we leave your car here, and…” she pauses touching his arm, “I will drive you to the hospital. I really don’t think you should be driving right now.”

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08-12-2003, 11:52 AM	#20
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08-12-2003, 03:46 PM	#21
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08-12-2003, 04:20 PM	#22
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08-16-2003, 06:07 PM	#24
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08-11-2003, 10:44 PM	#16
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	this is great!!! keep it up!!!

08-12-2003, 01:15 AM	#17
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks for all the compliments. It's hard to get back into the routine of writing something new. ----------------------------------------------------- The phone to his ear Nate could hear everything going on within the apartment. C.D. must have clicked on her cell. It was quietly for a moment before he hears a man’s voice boast out, “OFFICER DOWN! OFFICER DOWN! 10-71 Code three” He didn’t know what to do. Or where to go… He had no idea where C.D. was… “C.D.!” he says into the phone! “Come on talk to me!!” he raises his voice making several people in surrounding tables look to him, “What’s going on!?” he asks just as loud. Hoping maybe someone would hear his faint voice from C.D.’s cell phone. “Sir, If you continue to interrupt…” The waiter was interrupted by a badge in his face, “This is Police business!” are his only words to the man. Be it… not much, but he couldn’t think straight right now. He had to know what was happening… Then he had an idea. Jumping up from the table he darts out the door of the restaurant heading directly to his car. Fumbling for his keys in his pocket he finds them, pulls them out, but drops them onto the rain-dampened pavement. Leaning over he grabs them, and in record time pushes them into the lock on his door, and was soon sitting inside the door still open, and his leg half way out being drenched by the rain. Turning on the car Nate stops motionless the phone to his ear and his other trying to catch any news pertaining to where his partner was on the radio. After having summed up tonight’s session with her therapist Jinny smiles she had meant everything she said to her. She was really beginning to feel better about her life. Once saying her goodbyes she makes her way to the door her coat draped over her right forearm. Stepping out of the Office she moves through the vacant waiting room, and out the glass door. Shivering from the burst of chilled air that hits her body as she exits Jinny doesn’t move out from beneath the shelter of the awning before putting on her coat. Once it was on she inhales and rushes out from beneath it to her car, unlocks it, and gets inside. Closing the door once her feet are inside Jinny brushes the water from the shoulders of her jacket and leans forward to turn on her engine. Moving her hand to her left she turns on the heater… It was unusually cold tonight. A burst of cold air from the vents hit her in the face as a voice comes over dispatch, “780 Crest Point Apt #1 Officers down 10-71. Code 30.” Glancing at her watch Jinny thinks what the hell…

08-12-2003, 01:48 AM	#18
TDfan69 Member Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 08, 2003 Location: Nevada Posts: 209	Keep going!!!!!!!!!

08-16-2003, 09:07 PM	#25
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Wow, thanks for all the replies. Here is some more... --------------------------------------------- The song was over, and Raina looks up to Johnny whom had his arms still grasped around her, “The songs over.” She tries to chuckle off. “I know.” He smiles down to her still moving even without the music, “I’m just enjoying being near you.” “Johnny.” She chuckles slightly moving her hands to his arms, “I want a drink…” “Just wait, baby… We’re having a moment.” Narrowing her eyebrows Raina shakes her head taking his hands from her, “No, we were dancing. Now, I’m getting a drink.” She says looking to him again before turning and making her way around the other couples on the floor. “What’d I do?” he asks himself before rushing after her, “Raina!” she doesn’t acknowledge him, “Raina, baby!” he says again grasping her arm. “Get your hands off me…” she mocks him, “baby.” “Whoa now…” the man puts his hands up, “What just happened?” he motions with his hands. “You’re pressuring me. You’re not going to be the one deciding how long I’m dancing.” She says, “You’re lucky I even came.” “Okay… okay. I’ll back up…” he assures, “I’ll take it slow.” Shooting him a look she turns toward the bar to order her drink, a smirk across her lips. Turning the corner down Crest Point Nate immediately knew where he was heading. There was already flashing lights, and ambulances in the front. He could hardly stop his car before he was out of it dashing for the entrance of the apartment building. Many doors in the hall were open with the occupants trying to see what was going on, but Nate rushes to the one the Officer’s were crowding around. “I’m sorry. You can’t go past this point.” The officer says putting out his hand to block the man. Pushing his hand hard into his pocket Nate grabs his badge, almost dropping it before he could even get it out of his pocket his eyes were scanning the room, but he couldn’t see anything beside Liz, and a pair of feet sticking out past where the paramedics were huddles, he knew it was C.D., “She’s my partner!” he motions inside with the hand holding the badge. The man posted at the door nods once and allows him to enter. As soon as he is permitted inside he rushes over to his partner seeing her eyes cracked open slightly. “C.D.!” the man pleads, “I’m here!” he moves frantically around the paramedics to the other side where only one E.M.T. was, “I’m here.” He takes her hand in his. She was already positioned on the stretcher. Once finishing injecting the needle for the IV the E.M.T. looks to Nate, “I’m sorry, Sir.” He motions him to move away, “I need you to step back. We’ve got to get her to the hospital before she loses anymore blood.” “Is she going to be alright.” He gets up from his knees as they pull the stretcher up on its wheels. “I honestly can’t answer that right now she’s lost a lot of blood.” The Paramedic says as they begin pushing his partner away from him. “Oh my god.” He pleads running his hand over his head. Reaching down he grabs his badge he had dropped on the floor when talking to C.D., and then rushes to catch up to the stretcher. Once outside Nate runs until he is next to the stretcher, and walks along side it. “I should have been here.” He pleads to the blonde lying there motionless.

08-17-2003, 12:34 AM	#26
candace~n~nathan Member Senior Member Join Date: Jul 30, 2003 Posts: 1,855	Aw, come on!!! Don't stop!!!!

08-17-2003, 05:59 AM	#27
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08-17-2003, 11:33 AM	#28
Sweetchild2005 Nancy McKeon Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 29, 2002 Location: At my house in a room...with NO green carpet! Posts: 493	STOP STOPPING AND POST MORE!!!!

08-17-2003, 11:37 AM	#29
TLC4Whitney WhitneyHoustons#1Fan Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 04, 2003 Location: California Posts: 181	Awwww this is so good, post more please

08-18-2003, 12:25 AM	#30
#1_Nancy_McKeon The One and Only Senior Member Join Date: Dec 16, 2000 Location: USA Posts: 2,656	Thanks guys. Glad you're liking it. --------------------------------- The headlights of Jinny’s car hits the side of the Ambulance before she realizes she knew the person being put inside. Darting out her door she leaves it open rushing up to Nate whom she sees kiss C.D.’s hand before she it pushed into the vehicle, “I’ll be there!” Nate assures his partner, “You’ll be okay!” he tries to assures himself this time since by now the doors to the back of the ambulance were being closed. “Hey!” Jinny exclaims, “I heard the call on the radio… What happened!?” she catches a glimpse of C.D. before the doors were fully closed. “I thought you guys were off duty?” she asks. “I… we….” The man shakes his head. Touching the side of Nate’s arm Jinny looks up into his face, “Hey… hey…” she tries to calm him, “You want me to drive you to the hospital?” she asks. “No… My…” his voice pauses as he motions to his car, “Is over there.” Jinny stood there in silence with that man as another stretcher is wheeled out, but this one containing a body covered by a white sheet. “Who is that?” Jinny asks looking at Nate, but not waiting for a response before she moves over to it pulling the sheet back, and seeing Liz’s blood splashed face before an Officer hurries to stop her. Her response was only to toss the sheet back over it, “What in the hell happened?” she questions as she turns around to Nate. “I…I don’t know. I was waiting for C.D… we were going to have dinner, and she never showed up.” He stutters as he speaks, “So…” he pauses trying to gather his thoughts, “I called her cell phone someone picked up, and that’s when I heard a man shouting about an Officer Down.” The woman could tell how distracted Nate was, “How about we leave your car here, and…” she pauses touching his arm, “I will drive you to the hospital. I really don’t think you should be driving right now.”