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BBF · 01-14-2003, 10:28 AM

This is really good so far!

.:BF:. · 01-16-2003, 06:28 PM

Wow It's Coming Along Great. Cant Wait To See How Beaver Reacts To Wally Getting Surgury

Laurel · 01-16-2003, 10:23 PM

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. - CLEAVER KITCHEN - DAY

June places two pieces of toast on a plate and places the plate on a tray. She fills a glass with ice water, and places the glass on the tray. Beaver and Larry Mondello open the back door and loudly enter the kitchen.

BEAVER: Hey, Mom! I'm home!

June looks up from the tray.

JUNE: So I see.

LARRY: Hello, Mrs. Cleaver.

JUNE: Hello Larry. Did you boys have a good day at school?

BEAVER: Gee, Mom -- no day is a good day when you're talking about school.

Beaver looks in a cookie jar.

LARRY: Any of your mom's chocolate chip cookies in there?

JUNE: I think there might be a few left, Larry.

LARRY: That's good. You make good cookies, Mrs. Cleaver.

JUNE: Thank you, Larry.

Beaver notices the tray of food.

BEAVER: Making yourself a snack, Mom?

JUNE: This is for Wally. Your brother is very sick, Beaver.

BEAVER: How sick?

JUNE: Dr. Bradley says he has appendicitis.

Larry munches on a chocolate chip cookie.

LARRY: Appendicitis? That's not good, Mrs. Cleaver. I had appendicitis and I went to the hospital and had my appendix taken out.

JUNE: Then you've had first hand experience with appendicitis, Larry?

LARRY: Well, I was a real little kid when I had it, Mrs. Cleaver. But I remember my mom and dad visiting me in the hospital after the operation.

BEAVER: Is Wally going to have his appendix taken out, Mom?

JUNE: I'm afraid so, Beaver.

BEAVER: I guess that'll be okay -- as long as it doesn't interfere with our fishing trip on Saturday.

June picks up the tray and glares at Beaver.

JUNE: Beaver! Do you care more about fishing than your brother's health?

BEAVER: I guess not -- at least when you put it like that.

JUNE: Well, you're going to have to discuss the fishing trip with your father tonight.

(A BEAT)

JUNE: And boys, if you play around here today please be considerate of Wally and keep it quiet.

June exits the kitchen through the dining room. Larry takes a second cookie and grins.

LARRY: Beaver, you might as well forget about that fishing trip.

BEAVER: How come, Larry?

LARRY: You don't think your father is going to take just you, do you?

BEAVER: Why wouldn't he?

LARRY: How dumb do you have to be, Beaver? Your brother is real sick and he's going to have an operation. Your mom and dad are worried about him -- you'll be lucky if they even notice you, Beav.

Beaver scowls.

BEAVER: Maybe you're right, Larry. That dumb Wally -- he's always wrecking my fun.

(A BEAT)

BEAVER: Come on, Larry. Let's go over to your house.

LARRY: How come?

BEAVER: Because all of a sudden I don't feel like being considerate of Wally.

(TO BE CONTINUED...)

sami dg · 01-16-2003, 10:51 PM

Uh oh the Beaver is getting plain out nasty! I cant wait to read more!

*InThisMoment* · 01-17-2003, 01:56 AM

One word...GREAT!!!.

Laurel · 01-17-2003, 11:51 AM

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. - BOYS' BEDROOM - NIGHT

Beaver sits on his bed and scowls as Ward plumps Wally's pillows.

WARD: Well, Son, you look much better than you did this morning. Your mother says you were even able to eat some toast this afternoon.

WALLY: Yeah. I guess the medicine Dr. Bradley gave me is working -- I didn't upchuck all over the bathroom. Boy, Mom sure had a mess to clean up.

(A BEAT)

WALLY: Hey, Dad -- I'm sorry about the fishing trip.

WARD: Wally, you don't give it another thought. There are plenty of Saturdays that the three of us can go fishing.

BEAVER: Harrumph!

Ward glances over at Beaver.

WARD: Did you say something, Beaver?

WALLY: I think he's kind of mad at you, Dad.

WARD: Yes, I have that feeling too.

Ward sits down on the edge of Beaver's bed.

WARD: Beaver, I'm very sorry about the fishing trip. I know you were looking forward to it -- we all were -- and Wally certainly didn't plan on getting this sick.

BEAVER: Sure he did, Dad. He planned it all along because he's a big fat rat!

Beaver sticks his tongue out at Wally.

WALLY: Oh, yeah -- right, Beaver. And my upchucking this morning was just for show.

Ward admonishes Beaver.

WARD: Beaver, I've just about had enough of this behavior. You did nothing but scowl the whole way through dinner tonight, and now you're simply being disrespectful of your brother. Now you're just going to have to accept the fact that we can't go fishing this Saturday.

WALLY: Dad, it's okay with me if you want to take Beaver fishing on Saturday.

BEAVER: Yeah, Dad -- why can't the two of us go? I talked the fishing trip up to all of the guys -- Larry, Whitey, Gilbert, Alan -- and how great it is to have a dad that gives up a whole Saturday to be with his kids.

WARD: Beaver, I'm glad that you appreciate spending time with your old dad. But I promised a fishing trip to the both of you, and the both of you it will be. We'll go fishing when Wally is feeling better.

June enters the room. She glances at Wally and holds up a medicine bottle.

JUNE: Well, isn't this a harmonious little gathering.

WALLY: It's a gathering, Mom, but it's not very harmonious.

June feels Wally's forehead and spoons out another dose of medicine. Wally swallows the medicine.

JUNE: Oh?

WARD: Beaver is slightly upset about the fishing trip being cancelled.

JUNE: Beaver, I thought we went through this at dinner. We decided to postpone the fishing trip until after Wally's operation.

BEAVER: Gee, Mom -- I even gave up seeing a really neat movie with the guys to go fishing! It's not fair! Wally always comes first!

Beaver jumps off of his bed and glares at Wally.

BEAVER: Wally, I hope you croak on the operating table!

Beaver dashes into the bathroom and slams the door.

(TO BE CONTINUED...)

sami dg · 01-17-2003, 12:02 PM

I think ol Ward is gonna have to break out the razor strap for this one....lol....its great keep it coming. I love this nasty side of Beaver!!!

*InThisMoment* · 01-17-2003, 04:02 PM

The Beavs gone bad! j/k cant wait for the next part!

.:BF:. · 01-17-2003, 05:49 PM

Oooo... Cant Wait To See What Else Happens. Keep It Comin

Laurel · 01-19-2003, 07:25 PM

INT. - BOYS' BEDROOM - NIGHT

CONTINUED

June Cleaver races toward the bathroom door and bangs on it.

JUNE: Theodore Cleaver! You open this door right now!

BEAVER (from inside bathroom): No!

JUNE: You listen here, young man -- I've had enough of your whining. You better have this door open by the time I count to three.

(A BEAT)

JUNE: One...two...

Beaver opens the door cautiously and June practically drags him by the arm across the room. She deposits him in front of Wally.

JUNE: Now you apologize to your brother. I will not have the two of you fighting over a fishing trip!

BEAVER: I'm sorry, Wally, for what I said -- even though I still think you're a big fat rat!

WARD: Beaver!

BEAVER: I'm sorry, Dad, but that's what Wally is.

JUNE: Okay, Beaver. You get your pajamas on and get into bed.

Beaver sticks his tongue out at Wally as he reaches for his pajamas. June glares at him.

WALLY: It's okay, Mom. Beaver's just a kid.

JUNE: That doesn't give him the excuse to treat you rudely, Wally.

WARD: Okay, boys. You get a good night's sleep and we'll see you in the morning.

WALLY: Good night, Dad. Good night, Mom.

JUNE: Good night, Wally. Good night, Beaver.

Beaver remains silent as he climbs into bed.

Ward turns the lights out as he and June exit the room.

CUT TO:

INT. - HALLWAY - NIGHT

JUNE: Beaver's behavior tonight is absolutely appalling, Ward. He keeps it up, and he won't be going fishing after Wally's feeling better either.

WARD: He'll come around, June. He's just upset about the fishing trip being cancelled.

JUNE: Do you think the boys will be okay, tonight?

WARD: I'll check on them in a few hours -- just to make sure they're not having any brotherly skirmishes.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. - BOYS' BEDROOM - NIGHT

Three hours later

Wally suddenly awakens as he feels a sharp pain in his right side.
He grabs his side and groans as he calls out to Beaver urgently.

WALLY: Beaver! Beaver, are you awake?

Beaver opens his eyes and looks over at Wally.

BEAVER: And what if I am?

WALLY: Beaver, something's wrong. Could you please go and get Dad?

BEAVER: Aw, come on, Wally. You've already ruined my weekend. Upchuck if you feel sick, and let me sleep.

WALLY: Look, Beaver -- would you do me a favor and go and get Dad?

BEAVER: Nothing doing, Wally.

WALLY: Oh, never mind. I'll go get Dad myself.

Wally attempts to climb out of his bed, and is knocked back by the excrutiating pain in his right side. He groans loudly as Ward enters the room.

WARD: Boys! What's going on in here? It's nearly three in the morning.

BEAVER: Search me, Dad. I was sound asleep until Wally rudely woke me up.

Ward glances at the terrified look on Wally's face. He races to Wally's bedside.

WARD: Son! What's wrong!

Wally fights back tears.

WALLY: I don't know, Dad. My side feels like its on fire, and I feel like I have the chills.

Ward switches the bedside lamp on, and feels Wally's forehead.

WARD: Your head is definitely hot, Wally.

June enters the room, stifling a yawn.

JUNE: What's going on here?

WARD: I'm taking Wally to the hospital, June.

June stares at Ward, dumbfounded.

JUNE: Hospital!

WARD: Come feel his forehead, June.

As June feels Wally's forehead, Wally groans. June glances at Ward with fear in her face.

JUNE: He's on fire!

Beaver sits up like a shot in his bed.

BEAVER: On fire! Holy cow!

WARD: Wally, do you think you can make it to the car?

Wally sits up, gingerly touching his side.

WALLY (weakly): I think so, Dad.

WARD: Okay. Give me a minute to change, and we'll go.

(TO BE CONTINUED ...)

*InThisMoment* · 01-19-2003, 09:48 PM

All I can say is this is one TERRIFIC fanfic!

sami dg · 01-19-2003, 11:16 PM

I agree 100% its very good, I guess ol Beaver is gonna regret his actions now!

*InThisMoment* · 01-19-2003, 11:19 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by sami dg
I agree 100% its very good, I guess ol Beaver is gonna regret his actions now!

Oh yes thats the first thing I thought of I can just see Beaver feeling so bad when he finds out how sick poor Wally really is.Sounds like a situation the beav would get himself in to!.Laurel is a great writer!.

BBF · 01-19-2003, 11:59 PM

...suspense...SUSPENSE!!!!! This is one awesome fanfic! I can't wait to read more!

*InThisMoment* · 01-20-2003, 01:56 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by BeaversBiggestFan
...suspense...SUSPENSE!!!!! This is one awesome fanfic! I can't wait to read more!

took the words right out of my mouth!.

01-14-2003, 10:28 AM	#16
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01-16-2003, 06:28 PM	#17
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01-17-2003, 01:56 AM	#20
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	One word...GREAT!!!.
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01-17-2003, 05:49 PM	#24
.:BF:. Member Forum 4000 Club Member Join Date: Nov 21, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 4,736	FANFIC Oooo... Cant Wait To See What Else Happens. Keep It Comin

01-16-2003, 10:23 PM	#18
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	DISSOLVE TO: INT. - CLEAVER KITCHEN - DAY June places two pieces of toast on a plate and places the plate on a tray. She fills a glass with ice water, and places the glass on the tray. Beaver and Larry Mondello open the back door and loudly enter the kitchen. BEAVER: Hey, Mom! I'm home! June looks up from the tray. JUNE: So I see. LARRY: Hello, Mrs. Cleaver. JUNE: Hello Larry. Did you boys have a good day at school? BEAVER: Gee, Mom -- no day is a good day when you're talking about school. Beaver looks in a cookie jar. LARRY: Any of your mom's chocolate chip cookies in there? JUNE: I think there might be a few left, Larry. LARRY: That's good. You make good cookies, Mrs. Cleaver. JUNE: Thank you, Larry. Beaver notices the tray of food. BEAVER: Making yourself a snack, Mom? JUNE: This is for Wally. Your brother is very sick, Beaver. BEAVER: How sick? JUNE: Dr. Bradley says he has appendicitis. Larry munches on a chocolate chip cookie. LARRY: Appendicitis? That's not good, Mrs. Cleaver. I had appendicitis and I went to the hospital and had my appendix taken out. JUNE: Then you've had first hand experience with appendicitis, Larry? LARRY: Well, I was a real little kid when I had it, Mrs. Cleaver. But I remember my mom and dad visiting me in the hospital after the operation. BEAVER: Is Wally going to have his appendix taken out, Mom? JUNE: I'm afraid so, Beaver. BEAVER: I guess that'll be okay -- as long as it doesn't interfere with our fishing trip on Saturday. June picks up the tray and glares at Beaver. JUNE: Beaver! Do you care more about fishing than your brother's health? BEAVER: I guess not -- at least when you put it like that. JUNE: Well, you're going to have to discuss the fishing trip with your father tonight. (A BEAT) JUNE: And boys, if you play around here today please be considerate of Wally and keep it quiet. June exits the kitchen through the dining room. Larry takes a second cookie and grins. LARRY: Beaver, you might as well forget about that fishing trip. BEAVER: How come, Larry? LARRY: You don't think your father is going to take just you, do you? BEAVER: Why wouldn't he? LARRY: How dumb do you have to be, Beaver? Your brother is real sick and he's going to have an operation. Your mom and dad are worried about him -- you'll be lucky if they even notice you, Beav. Beaver scowls. BEAVER: Maybe you're right, Larry. That dumb Wally -- he's always wrecking my fun. (A BEAT) BEAVER: Come on, Larry. Let's go over to your house. LARRY: How come? BEAVER: Because all of a sudden I don't feel like being considerate of Wally. (TO BE CONTINUED...)

01-16-2003, 10:51 PM	#19
sami dg Mayfields pepsi man Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: Alabama Posts: 433	Uh oh the Beaver is getting plain out nasty! I cant wait to read more!

01-17-2003, 11:51 AM	#21
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	DISSOLVE TO: INT. - BOYS' BEDROOM - NIGHT Beaver sits on his bed and scowls as Ward plumps Wally's pillows. WARD: Well, Son, you look much better than you did this morning. Your mother says you were even able to eat some toast this afternoon. WALLY: Yeah. I guess the medicine Dr. Bradley gave me is working -- I didn't upchuck all over the bathroom. Boy, Mom sure had a mess to clean up. (A BEAT) WALLY: Hey, Dad -- I'm sorry about the fishing trip. WARD: Wally, you don't give it another thought. There are plenty of Saturdays that the three of us can go fishing. BEAVER: Harrumph! Ward glances over at Beaver. WARD: Did you say something, Beaver? WALLY: I think he's kind of mad at you, Dad. WARD: Yes, I have that feeling too. Ward sits down on the edge of Beaver's bed. WARD: Beaver, I'm very sorry about the fishing trip. I know you were looking forward to it -- we all were -- and Wally certainly didn't plan on getting this sick. BEAVER: Sure he did, Dad. He planned it all along because he's a big fat rat! Beaver sticks his tongue out at Wally. WALLY: Oh, yeah -- right, Beaver. And my upchucking this morning was just for show. Ward admonishes Beaver. WARD: Beaver, I've just about had enough of this behavior. You did nothing but scowl the whole way through dinner tonight, and now you're simply being disrespectful of your brother. Now you're just going to have to accept the fact that we can't go fishing this Saturday. WALLY: Dad, it's okay with me if you want to take Beaver fishing on Saturday. BEAVER: Yeah, Dad -- why can't the two of us go? I talked the fishing trip up to all of the guys -- Larry, Whitey, Gilbert, Alan -- and how great it is to have a dad that gives up a whole Saturday to be with his kids. WARD: Beaver, I'm glad that you appreciate spending time with your old dad. But I promised a fishing trip to the both of you, and the both of you it will be. We'll go fishing when Wally is feeling better. June enters the room. She glances at Wally and holds up a medicine bottle. JUNE: Well, isn't this a harmonious little gathering. WALLY: It's a gathering, Mom, but it's not very harmonious. June feels Wally's forehead and spoons out another dose of medicine. Wally swallows the medicine. JUNE: Oh? WARD: Beaver is slightly upset about the fishing trip being cancelled. JUNE: Beaver, I thought we went through this at dinner. We decided to postpone the fishing trip until after Wally's operation. BEAVER: Gee, Mom -- I even gave up seeing a really neat movie with the guys to go fishing! It's not fair! Wally always comes first! Beaver jumps off of his bed and glares at Wally. BEAVER: Wally, I hope you croak on the operating table! Beaver dashes into the bathroom and slams the door. (TO BE CONTINUED...)

01-17-2003, 12:02 PM	#22
sami dg Mayfields pepsi man Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: Alabama Posts: 433	I think ol Ward is gonna have to break out the razor strap for this one....lol....its great keep it coming. I love this nasty side of Beaver!!!

01-17-2003, 04:02 PM	#23
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	The Beavs gone bad! j/k cant wait for the next part!

01-19-2003, 07:25 PM	#25
Laurel "Lauriebelle" Occasional Poster Join Date: Sep 20, 2002 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 80	INT. - BOYS' BEDROOM - NIGHT CONTINUED June Cleaver races toward the bathroom door and bangs on it. JUNE: Theodore Cleaver! You open this door right now! BEAVER (from inside bathroom): No! JUNE: You listen here, young man -- I've had enough of your whining. You better have this door open by the time I count to three. (A BEAT) JUNE: One...two... Beaver opens the door cautiously and June practically drags him by the arm across the room. She deposits him in front of Wally. JUNE: Now you apologize to your brother. I will not have the two of you fighting over a fishing trip! BEAVER: I'm sorry, Wally, for what I said -- even though I still think you're a big fat rat! WARD: Beaver! BEAVER: I'm sorry, Dad, but that's what Wally is. JUNE: Okay, Beaver. You get your pajamas on and get into bed. Beaver sticks his tongue out at Wally as he reaches for his pajamas. June glares at him. WALLY: It's okay, Mom. Beaver's just a kid. JUNE: That doesn't give him the excuse to treat you rudely, Wally. WARD: Okay, boys. You get a good night's sleep and we'll see you in the morning. WALLY: Good night, Dad. Good night, Mom. JUNE: Good night, Wally. Good night, Beaver. Beaver remains silent as he climbs into bed. Ward turns the lights out as he and June exit the room. CUT TO: INT. - HALLWAY - NIGHT JUNE: Beaver's behavior tonight is absolutely appalling, Ward. He keeps it up, and he won't be going fishing after Wally's feeling better either. WARD: He'll come around, June. He's just upset about the fishing trip being cancelled. JUNE: Do you think the boys will be okay, tonight? WARD: I'll check on them in a few hours -- just to make sure they're not having any brotherly skirmishes. DISSOLVE TO: INT. - BOYS' BEDROOM - NIGHT Three hours later Wally suddenly awakens as he feels a sharp pain in his right side. He grabs his side and groans as he calls out to Beaver urgently. WALLY: Beaver! Beaver, are you awake? Beaver opens his eyes and looks over at Wally. BEAVER: And what if I am? WALLY: Beaver, something's wrong. Could you please go and get Dad? BEAVER: Aw, come on, Wally. You've already ruined my weekend. Upchuck if you feel sick, and let me sleep. WALLY: Look, Beaver -- would you do me a favor and go and get Dad? BEAVER: Nothing doing, Wally. WALLY: Oh, never mind. I'll go get Dad myself. Wally attempts to climb out of his bed, and is knocked back by the excrutiating pain in his right side. He groans loudly as Ward enters the room. WARD: Boys! What's going on in here? It's nearly three in the morning. BEAVER: Search me, Dad. I was sound asleep until Wally rudely woke me up. Ward glances at the terrified look on Wally's face. He races to Wally's bedside. WARD: Son! What's wrong! Wally fights back tears. WALLY: I don't know, Dad. My side feels like its on fire, and I feel like I have the chills. Ward switches the bedside lamp on, and feels Wally's forehead. WARD: Your head is definitely hot, Wally. June enters the room, stifling a yawn. JUNE: What's going on here? WARD: I'm taking Wally to the hospital, June. June stares at Ward, dumbfounded. JUNE: Hospital! WARD: Come feel his forehead, June. As June feels Wally's forehead, Wally groans. June glances at Ward with fear in her face. JUNE: He's on fire! Beaver sits up like a shot in his bed. BEAVER: On fire! Holy cow! WARD: Wally, do you think you can make it to the car? Wally sits up, gingerly touching his side. WALLY (weakly): I think so, Dad. WARD: Okay. Give me a minute to change, and we'll go. (TO BE CONTINUED ...)

01-19-2003, 09:48 PM	#26
InThisMoment a starlit sky and you & me Forum Junkie Join Date: Aug 02, 2002 Location: Detroit, Michigan Posts: 95,142	All I can say is this is one TERRIFIC fanfic!

01-19-2003, 11:16 PM	#27
sami dg Mayfields pepsi man Frequent Poster Join Date: Dec 13, 2000 Location: Alabama Posts: 433	I agree 100% its very good, I guess ol Beaver is gonna regret his actions now!

01-19-2003, 11:59 PM	#29
BBF Workin' those Scrubs Senior Member Join Date: Jun 12, 2002 Location: The "Natural" State Posts: 2,014	...suspense...SUSPENSE!!!!! This is one awesome fanfic! I can't wait to read more!