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sara · 01-07-2003, 03:26 AM

The last verse doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the song. The other verses talk about how he never calls, and then you say if you ever call me I will call the police? Personally I think it would work a lot better with a different last verse.

01-07-2003, 03:26 AM	#14
sara Member Senior Member Join Date: May 21, 2002 Location: grandville michigan Posts: 2,296	The last verse doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the song. The other verses talk about how he never calls, and then you say if you ever call me I will call the police? Personally I think it would work a lot better with a different last verse.
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