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Old 01-23-2002, 03:45 PM   #8
consentida
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Okay! Here some more of my fic:

***LATER THAT NIGHT 12:25a.m***

~~Melissa went to sleep. Kate was in the living room, on the couch going over some papers. The phone then rings.~~

Kate: Hello?...Oh my God. No! No that can't be. Oh God. (crying) When did this happen?....Oh. Oh God...What am I going to do?....Well, thank you for letting me know. OK. Bye Bye.

~~Kate sits down on the couch and tries to calm down. She thinks for a little bit.~~

She thought: I can't believe this happened. What am I going to tell her? HOW am I going to tell her?

~~Kate sighs. She gets up from the couch and heads towards the spare room in which Melissa is sleeping. Kate sits down on the bed and looks at Melissa sleeping. Kate starts stroking Melissa's face and hair. She gives Melissa a kiss on the cheek, trying to wake her. Melissa opens her eyes and looks at Kate. When Kate looks at Melissa, a feeling of hurt takes over her body, but Kate holds in her tears.~~

Kate: Hi Sweetie.
Melissa: Hi
Kate: How are you doing? How are you feeling?
Melissa: I'm fine
Kate: Uh, sweetie...I have to tell you something.
Melissa: What? What is it?

~Kate pauses. She looks hurt. She looks into Melissa's eyes.~

Kate: Honey, I just got a call from the airport. A plane crashed. Apparently it was your parents' flight. There are no survivors.

~~As Kate's words penetrated Melissa's ears, she began to sob. She put her head in her hands and just cried hysterically. Kate did her best to comfort her, but had never really been good at that.~~

Kate: Its going to be ok, honey.
Melissa: How can you say that?
Kate: Because I know it will be ok. I know its hard for you. Its hard for me too and I know we just met but we have to do our best to comfort eachother and be there for eachother.
Melissa: Why does everything always happen to me? I'm always the one who gets hurt.
Kate: Your situation could be worse.
Melissa: What are you talking about? My parents died and I'm stuck here with you! How could my situation be any worse?
Kate: You could've died too! Or you might have not had a place to stay! And who said you were stuck here? Noboday said I was going to.....keep you.

~Kate starts crying hysterically. Melissa is doing the same. Kate looks at her young niece crying and hurting. She begins to feel guilty.~

Kate: I'm sorry. I don't know why I said that.
Melissa: I don't care anymore. You can say whatever you want. Its not like you care about me.
Kate: Don't you ever say that!
Melissa: Why not? You don't know me. You couldn't possobly care about me.
Kate: That isn't true. I've cared about you since you were born.
Melissa: What do you mean 'since i was born'? You didn't even live in New York when I was born. You lived here.
Kate: Yes thats true, but when I found out that your mother was pregnant, I flew to New York to be with her. I was so excited for your parents. I spent everyday of your mother's pregnancy with her up until the day you were born. About a month before you were born, your mother was admitted to the hospital because she was having some difficulty with her pregnancy. While your mother was in the hospital, I.....your father and I...um...sort of had an affair.

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!
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