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candace~n~nathan
02-13-2004, 12:53 AM
Okay, I won't be on tomorrow night, so I thought someone needed a little fic!!!! ;) I hope everyone enjoys. It's a LITTLE far fetched, but I'm sure THIS is how DJL MEANT for season 4 to start out as!!! ;)



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CD walked into the Division. “Hey guys, I’m back,” she announced
sheepishly.

Nate looked up and his jaw practically hit the ground. It had been
months since the last time he’d seen her.

“CD!” Raina shouted and ran to hug her.

“Hi, Raina, thanks for the welcome!” she replied and looked over at
Nate, who glanced back down at his report.

“CD?” her captain asked as she came out of her office.

“Hey, Cap,” CD said and hugged her as well. “I, uh, need to talk to
you, I guess.”

“You want your job back?” she asked hopefully.

CD smiled. “As a matter of fact.. yes, yes, I do.”

“That’s great!” Jinny exclaimed who’d just walked in and embraced
her friend. “Oh my gosh, where have you been?”

CD grinned. “I had some living to do before I could continue my
life,” she explained. “Actually, I did some traveling, and I went and
visited my best friend from high school.”

“Where does she live?” Raina asked nosily.

CD smiled, missing her gossipy friend. “Germany, actually, so I
spent a couple of weeks there. We caught up after all these years; eating pizzas with those cracker holes on the bottom, eating American Twix bars, and drinking Snapples until we puked.” she grinned. “I had the time of my life.”

“Aw, that’s too bad you had to leave her!” Kate said.

CD shrugged. “Not really.”

Nate had walked over a little closer but not said a word until now.
“Yeah, it’s easy for you to leave the people who love you the most.”

CD looked at him, obviously hurt, but she knew she deserved it.
“Hello to you too, Nate,” she replied. “And actually, it wasn’t too
bad leaving her because she’s moving over here! Her plane leaves in 2 days, and she’ll be staying with me until she finds an apartment.”

“That’s so cool, CD! What’s her name?” Raina asked.

“Catrin, but her good friends just call her Cat,” CD explained. “She
was a German exchange student when we were in high school, she moved back after graduation, but now she’s coming back to stay. I’m so excited!”

“How wonderful; at least you can commit to some of your
relationships,” Nate muttered and walked to the men’s room.

CD sighed. “Guess I won’t be making friends as quickly as I
thought,” she replied sadly.

Raina touched her shoulder. “CD, give him time. You hurt him
deeply; he hasn’t told me everything, but I’ve been his partner, so I forced him to tell some.”

CD nodded. “That’s understandable,” she remarked and turned to
Kate. “So Cap, if I want to come back, do I have a job here?”

“Of course!” Kate promised her. “You won’t be partnered with
Nate, but due to the tragic and mysterious death of Magda, you
could be partnered with Jinny.”

“Really? Wow, I had no idea about Mag!”

Jinny shrugged. “Yeah, ya win some, ya lose some.”

Everyone else nodded.

“Well, Inspectors, you need to get back to work, and CD?”

“Yeah?”

“Go talk to Nate; get this settled before it gets outta hand.”

CD sighed and nodded. “Okay, Cap, I’m on it,” she replied and
walked to the restroom.

Nate was sulking and sitting on the bench when CD opened the
door.

“Hi,” she practically whispered.

“What the hell do you want?” he asked, although it tore him up
inside to be so mean to her.

“Nate, please, before you yell at me, I really need to explain for
being such a bitch.”

“That could take hours,” Nate muttered.

CD simply nodded. “You’re right; I’ll give you the condensed version then.” she paused and made sure he didn’t object, which he didn’t. “Nate, you scared me out of my mind after we got so close. I didn’t think I could handle a marriage ever again, and it freaked me out how quickly we were coming to that stage!”

“I never pushed you.....”

“You’re right you never tied me down and said, ‘CD, do this,’ but I
felt so trapped. I had to get out, and I did.”

“Yeah and went to Germany?!” he exclaimed. “Why the hell would
you go there?”

She nodded. “I know you think it’s weird, but you’re gonna want to thank her.”

“Yeah right,” he muttered.

“You will! Cat told me how stupid I was being, and that I’m
obviously in love with you, and I was just scared.” she paused. “She saved my life, Nate. I was going to make the biggest mistake I’ve ever made, but I’m back to change it.”

“What if it’s too late?” he asked her angrily.

She sighed. “Then I guess I can say, at least I tried. I just want you
to know that you did absolutely nothing wrong to me, and I love you
so much, even now.” she delayed for a second. “And I’m sorry I’m
too late, I just needed you to know,” she said sadly and walked
toward the door.

Nate let her walk out, and he looked at himself in the mirror. He
hadn’t noticed the tears that had started to stream down his face.
He angrily brushed them away and muttered, “She’s not just
walking back into my life whenever the hell she wants.”

He finished wiping his face and went back outside. He saw her
sitting in Raina’s new desk, her old one, as Raina had insisted her
doing while she ran off some copies.

Emotions flooded back, and Nate decided he knew he’d never win
at hardball with her. Plus, she was too big of a prize to gamble
with. He walked briskly to her and put his arms around her.

CD looked up and grinned slightly from his touch.

He bent down and kissed her forcefully on the lips.

She kissed him right back, until he pulled away.

“You learned ALL of that over Snapple and pizza?” he asked her as
he bent down, holding her and running his hands through her hair.

She smiled broadly. “You have no idea how persuasive and
comprehensive my friend is!” she bragged on her.

“I can’t wait to find out!” he replied and kissed her again. “I missed
you so much, CD, please don’t ever leave me again.”

She shook her head. “I won’t, Nate, I, too, love you so much, that I
never want to spend a day away from you.” She put her hands
around his neck and kissed him intently on the lips.

Raina came back in the room, as well as Stacey.

“Who’s that” Stacey whined.

“CD, his girlfriend,” Raina explained.

“Dammit, I wanted him.”

“Back your ass up, bitch, he’s taken!” a voice exclaimed behind her.

CD looked up, recognizing that voice anywhere. “CAT!” she shouted
and ran to her, giving her a huge hug.

“Hey, I see it worked,” she grinned as Nate walked toward them.

“Hi, I’m Nate Basso, and you must be my new second best friend.”

“Why do you say that?” Cat asked.

“Because I got my BEST friend back,” he responded and put his
arms around CD.

Cat grinned. “That’s the most important thing.”

CD nodded. “Hey, I thought you weren’t coming for 2 more days?”

Cat smirked. “I wanted to surprise you! Did I?”

“Of course you did!” CD exclaimed and hugged her again. “I love it
when you surprise me!”

“I love it when you talk some sense into my woman!” Nate
announced.

CD laughed and kissed him. “I love you, honey.”

“I love you more than anything, CD.”

Cat grinned and sat with Raina and Stacey.

“They won’t really stay together, will they?” Stacey whined as they
looked on at the two lovers on top of Nate’s desk heavily making
out. CD’s shirt was already halfway unbuttoned.

“Uh, no, definitely not,” Cat joked.

“Duh, Stacey, look at them!” Raina exclaimed.

“I don’t see it working,” Stacey replied again.

“Why don’t you shut the hell up and leave two decent people
alone?!” Cat shouted.

“You shut up, you meanie!” Stacey muttered, bawling hysterically.

“BITE ME!” Cat shouted and punched her lights out.



THE END!!! :wave:

Snowfall
02-13-2004, 01:05 AM
Oh, WOWEE Lisa! I LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!!!!! :D :D :D I loved every line of it! Yes, I'm SURE that DJL had planned on writing it this way, but she must have been brainwashed over the season hiatus, or someone must have pictures on her ;) ;) . I loved the part of Magda mysteriously dying, and the use of "bite me"! And that "Hey, guys, I'm back" sounded familiar ;) .......hmm, where have I heard that before? ;) :D J/k!

Sorry you won't be on tomorrow night, but then again I won't be either. Thanks so much for this amazing fic!

candace~n~nathan
02-13-2004, 01:18 AM
Originally posted by Snowfall
Oh, WOWEE Lisa! I LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!!!!! :D :D :D I loved every line of it! Yes, I'm SURE that DJL had planned on writing it this way, but she must have been brainwashed over the season hiatus, or someone must have pictures on her ;) ;) . I loved the part of Magda mysteriously dying, and the use of "bite me"! And that "Hey, guys, I'm back" sounded familiar ;) .......hmm, where have I heard that before? ;) :D J/k!

Sorry you won't be on tomorrow night, but then again I won't be either. Thanks so much for this amazing fic!


mag mysteriously dying was an awesome line from my little hero! ;)

CD DeLorenzo
02-13-2004, 02:50 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww that was obviously the cutest and bestest fanfic ever written!!!

*blushes big time*


:cat: :heart: :stupid:

I love you so much, thanks a lot!!!!! *HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGS*

I dunno what to say... me... speechless... that's a first LOL


SNAPPLE!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!

and can I shove some explosives up DJL's ass for not making this happen????

planet_stella
02-13-2004, 11:40 AM
Yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!! The fic was great!!!!! So, um....SEQUEL???:D

Jo_Luvs_Ketchup
02-13-2004, 05:21 PM
Oh I LOVED this fic!!! I soooo want a sequel!!

monkeygirl
02-13-2004, 11:50 PM
aww, yeah, right on! i can TOTALLY see Cat doing that !!!!!

turtle63102
02-14-2004, 01:19 AM
Originally posted by monkeygirl
aww, yeah, right on! i can TOTALLY see Cat doing that !!!!!

I loved that so much. Every thing about it, Mag being dead, Stacey whinning, every thing! love it! Sequel, please!

maria1986
02-14-2004, 01:43 AM
Ooooh I loved that!....I'm glad that Cat chick talked some sense into CD!...I wanna sequal too!:D

CD DeLorenzo
02-14-2004, 02:20 AM
Originally posted by maria1986
Ooooh I loved that!....I'm glad that Cat chick talked some sense into CD!...I wanna sequal too!:D

LOL, she better not start hitting on Nate though ;)

croatian_princess
02-14-2004, 03:18 PM
That was spectacular! Loved it. Stacy's the 1 who better not be hittin on her man ;)

candace~n~nathan
02-14-2004, 04:22 PM
WOW guys!!! I didn't expect all of that feedback!! TY so much!! I was expecting like one reply!! hehe, anyway, i'm back, and that's really sweet that u want a sequel..........

idk tho, but IF i do, it won't be for awhile

croatian_princess
02-14-2004, 04:31 PM
Lisa, of course we want a sequal! Even if it takes longer than expected...;)

maria1986
02-14-2004, 08:15 PM
Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LOL, she better not start hitting on Nate though ;)

or maybe Nate can find out he has a long lost identical twin brother, and CD hooks Cat up w/ him?:D

CD DeLorenzo
02-14-2004, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by maria1986
or maybe Nate can find out he has a long lost identical twin brother, and CD hooks Cat up w/ him?:D


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehe :D *droooooooooooooooooooooooools*

Ewan's My Man
02-14-2004, 09:49 PM
:rotflmao:

That part about Mag was hysterical...actually, a lot of it was hysterical...but the part about Mag made me laugh

CD: Mag's dead?
Jinny: Yea, bummer...

candace~n~nathan
02-15-2004, 12:44 AM
Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
LOL, she better not start hitting on Nate though ;)



don't worry, she will DEFINITELY not hit on nate. Stacey, however, is a MUCH different story............;)

candace~n~nathan
03-01-2004, 12:36 AM
okay, i'm worried as to the location of a certain feline, so i wrote more on this to calm my nerves!!!! i'm SURE this is where she escaped to!!!!! ;) :) :stupid: :heart: :cat:

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Stacey tried to fight back, but she was too much of a weenie that
Cat ended up giving up because it wasn’t a very fun competition.
Nate laughed. “Cat, CD, I’d like you to meet Stacey, our new little
helper!” he announced sarcastically.

Jin noticed Stacey crying on the ground. “Cat, you’re going to fit
right in here!” she announced.

Cat grinned. “Thanks, I wasn’t really looking for a job here.....”

“But you’re taking one!” Nate told her. “How about Stacey’s? She
didn’t really want it anymore!”

“Yes I did!” Stacey complained.

CD kicked her in the ribs to shut her up. “Yeah, Cat, you need to
work here! Kate needs some desperate help; I can tell just from the
10 minutes I’ve been here!”

Cat grinned. “I think I AM needed here, so I can keep an eye on you
two!” she exclaimed to Nate and CD and winked.

Nate blushed. “Well, I haven’t seen her in awhile, so you might want
to stay away,” he teased Cat as he kissed CD. “Actually, hold up!”

“Nate, what’s wrong?” CD asked him nervously.

“I got the perfect plan!” Nate announced. “My best friend from
kindergarten just moved here, and we’ve been hanging out a lot!
We should double-date tonight!”

“You’re best friend from kindergarten?” CD asked and giggled.
“Nate, you’re so cute,” she replied as she kissed him firmly on the
lips.

“Thanks,” he murmured as he kissed her back.

“So what does he look like?” Cat asked excitedly.

Nate frowned. “Well, he sort of looks like me, so I don’t know if
you’d be inter.......”

“REALLY?! Holy hell, sign me up!” Cat exclaimed.

CD laughed.

“I mean, he sounds pretty normal looking.”

Nate laughed. “Well, he’s got like blue eyes instead of brown, and
his hair is a little shaggier than mine. He might be a little taller; you
want to try him out?”

Cat wiggled her eyebrows. “Sure, sounds great!”

Nate nodded and got out his phone. “’Kay, I’ll call him up!”

Nate called his friend Jake, and he agreed to meet the three of
them at Anchorside for a quick bite of dinner and a movie.
************
Anchorside rolled around that night, and Cat got to meet Jake. He
could’ve passed for Nate’s twin, but somehow, an even sexier man.
They were instantly attracted to each other and engaged in
conversation sitting knee-to-knee and forgetting about the other
party.

CD smiled as she looked over at them. “Looks like she found
someone,” she commented.

Nate looked over at the two little lovebirds. “Aw, I’m happy for
her.”

CD nodded. “Me, too.” She glanced at her menu before instigating
a conversation. “Nate, what made you take me back so quickly? I
figured I’d never get to be with you again.”

Nate sighed. “CD, you had me from hello. True, you hurt me more
than you’ll ever know, but I have this feeling that you could do
anything to me, and I’d never give up faith towards you and our
relationship.” he paused, kissed her cheek and picked up her hand.
“Not that I’m wanting you to do something bad to me again,” he
teased her.

“No,” CD said and shook her head. “Never again, Nate. I’m so sorry
for everything; for leaving, for the note, for....”

“Shhh,” he replied as he put a finger up to her lips. “You’ve already
told me, sweetie. Let’s move on,” he whispered and kissed her
softly.

CD grinned and kissed him back.

Cat cleared her throat, and CD looked up. “Oh, sorry guys, we
didn’t mean.....”

Cat put up her hand. “No, it’s not a problem, I just wanted to tell
you that we’re going to skip the movie,” she replied mischievously.
“I’ll be back at your place later tonight, MAYBE,” she remarked.

CD laughed. “Okay, have a great time!” she paused. “Wait, Cat,
Nate told me Jake lives like an hour away?”

Jake nodded. “Yeah, I haven’t found a closer place that I liked yet.”

CD dug out her keys. “Here, go to my apartment,” she told them
and looked at Nate. “I’m not going to be home until morning to
grab some clothes for work, so take it.”

Cat looked at her. “Really? You don’t care?”

“Hell no I don’t care!” CD commented. “Just don’t make a mess in
my bed,” she replied and winked.

Cat smiled and hugged her best friend. “We won’t, I promise.”

“See ya, Nate! CD, nice to meet you,” Jake commented as he led
Cat outside.

CD sighed. “So can we go to your place yet?” she begged him.

Nate laughed. “Baby, I thought you’d NEVER ask!” he exclaimed,
paid the bill, and hauled ass to his apartment.
***********
On Green Street the walls vibrated and the noises grew as the hot
new couple screwed until the break of dawn. Jake couldn’t believe
the amazing woman Nate had found her; he already knew he was in
love with her, but of course, he wasn’t going to tell her that until
she got to know him better.

Cat grinned proudly in the morning as he held her tightly and
stoked through her hair. She couldn’t believe that her best friend’s
boyfriend had found her the most attractive guy she’d ever seen;
she also couldn’t get over how much she thought she loved him. She
definitely would not tell him though until he got to get to know her
better.
******************
CD and Nate laid wrapped in each other’s arms that morning, just
like the old times.

“I think you’ve gotten even better since the last time I was in this
position,” CD teased him.

Nate laughed. “Well, it must be from the ways I was thinking about
you while you were gone because I haven’t even thought about
getting with anyone else! You’re the only woman I will ever want for
the rest of my life!”

CD smiled and kissed him before preparing to go once more before
work. “Good answer, buddy.”

THE END!!!! :D
and sorry about the spacing; i didn't have time to fix it :( BTW- i miss cat! :crying:

maria1986
03-01-2004, 12:51 AM
Aww thats was great:D. And I'm worried about my Cat-Dog too!:(

Snowfall
03-01-2004, 01:58 AM
Lisa! That was so amazing! I LOVED this happy fic. I miss Cat, too! :( I hope she comes back really soon.........

planet_stella
03-01-2004, 08:28 AM
I LOVED LOVED LOVED this fic!!!! It was awesome!!!! We need more fics like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

CD DeLorenzo
03-05-2004, 08:02 PM
*bluuuuuuuuuush* HOW THE HELL DID YOU KNOW ABOUT THAT???? Damn! Does CD have webcams in her appartment?
Well Jake had to pee real quick... but I guess you already know that... so I thought I'd drop a line...

now seriously... I come back... TO THIS!!!!!!!! Whoa!!!! Thanks so much! That really rocks!!! I'm a cat/Jake shuipper, totally! ;) Gimme that guy!!!!! LOL
and yeah, as explanation, after my laptop died, and my new keyboard finally worked and everything was semi-okay with the crappy comp, I suddenly couldn't go online anymore :'(

now I'm at my parents place, using their comp and yeah... here we go again... I wish I had a laptop that's actually working

I missed you all loads too and I hope I find a way to go online again when I'm at my place again, which I hope will be soon, but doesn't look like it. :(

and yeah, Jake's getting impatient.. so I better go tend to him again ;)

LOVE YA LISA!!!!!!!!!!