Kristen
09-26-2003, 01:33 AM
Before I post my story, let me explain some stuff. This is my first time writing "Nanny" fanfic, and I'm really desperate for feedback. But please be nice. :) This story probably takes place in the first or second season of the show, I haven't decided. As I'm sure you'll notice, it's not finished yet. But if I get some feedback on what I have so far, I'll post more. OK....now my story.
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"Matters of the Heart" (Working Title)
It was early evening in the Sheffield household. Niles was doing dishes, and Fran was at the table reading a magazine. The phone rang. "Sheffield residence," Niles said, answering it. "Yes, she's right here, I'll get her." Fran looked up, figuring it was for her. "Who is it?" she asked as he handed her the reciever. "Your father," Niles answered. "It sounds urgent." Fran looked puzzled as she put the phone to her ear. "Hi, Pop. What's wrong?" Fran paused. "Oh my God! I'll be right there!" She frantically hung the phone up. "Niles, can you give me a ride to the hospital?" "Of course, Miss Fine. What's the matter?" Fran couldn't believe what she was saying, "It's my mother. She was having chest pains, and my father called the ambulance!"
Just then, Maxwell entered. "Niles, how is dinner coming along?" he asked, unaware of the situation. Then he looked at Fran. "Miss Fine, what's the matter?" Fran was too hysterical to answer, so Niles spoke for her. "That was her father on the phone. Mrs. Fine had to be rushed to the hospital with chest pains." Max walked over to Fran and tried to comfort her. "Let's all go to the hospital. We can take the limo." Ordinarily, Fran would've been overjoyed at the chance to ride in Max's expensive limousine, but this was no time for that.
After informing Maggie of the situation, and asking her to watch her brother and sister, the three of them set off for Queens General Hospital. The kids had wanted to come along, especially Gracie. She and Fran were extremely close, and Grace wanted to comfort her Nanny. Maxwell told the children to stay home, and he promised to call as soon as they knew anything. On the way to the hospital, they stopped and picked Val up. Not only was Sylvia like a second mother to Val, but Fran wanted her best friend by her side at a time like this.
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"Matters of the Heart" (Working Title)
It was early evening in the Sheffield household. Niles was doing dishes, and Fran was at the table reading a magazine. The phone rang. "Sheffield residence," Niles said, answering it. "Yes, she's right here, I'll get her." Fran looked up, figuring it was for her. "Who is it?" she asked as he handed her the reciever. "Your father," Niles answered. "It sounds urgent." Fran looked puzzled as she put the phone to her ear. "Hi, Pop. What's wrong?" Fran paused. "Oh my God! I'll be right there!" She frantically hung the phone up. "Niles, can you give me a ride to the hospital?" "Of course, Miss Fine. What's the matter?" Fran couldn't believe what she was saying, "It's my mother. She was having chest pains, and my father called the ambulance!"
Just then, Maxwell entered. "Niles, how is dinner coming along?" he asked, unaware of the situation. Then he looked at Fran. "Miss Fine, what's the matter?" Fran was too hysterical to answer, so Niles spoke for her. "That was her father on the phone. Mrs. Fine had to be rushed to the hospital with chest pains." Max walked over to Fran and tried to comfort her. "Let's all go to the hospital. We can take the limo." Ordinarily, Fran would've been overjoyed at the chance to ride in Max's expensive limousine, but this was no time for that.
After informing Maggie of the situation, and asking her to watch her brother and sister, the three of them set off for Queens General Hospital. The kids had wanted to come along, especially Gracie. She and Fran were extremely close, and Grace wanted to comfort her Nanny. Maxwell told the children to stay home, and he promised to call as soon as they knew anything. On the way to the hospital, they stopped and picked Val up. Not only was Sylvia like a second mother to Val, but Fran wanted her best friend by her side at a time like this.