How Jinny Really Died : By Jenna (*Nancy Mckeon*)




no one seems to like my other fics so i guess ill give this one a try....
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Jinny Exstead turned off the light in her bathroom and closed the door. She lit a candle in there and then pulled down the shower cutain thingy making sure it was completly dark after she blew out the candle. She stared into the mirror (it was dark so she couldn't see anything) and started. She started saying "Bloody Mary". She said it 5 times, each time getting louder and louder and the last time she said it she yelled it as loud as she could, almost screaming!


then the screen goes to the man who lives in the apartment thingy below her. he was sitting on his couch watching a football game.then you hear glass breaking and then you hear a scream. but all he does is look up and then he goes back to watching his football game lol.


thats it. jinny was dead. she found out what she wanted to know.the legend of bloody mary was true. she had just brought bloody mary back to life. she gave her life to bring back an evil spirit.bloody mary had just murdered jnny. and now she was free to murder others....




well? do ya guys like it? do ya want more? huh?

Yes, more please, and Nooooooooooooooooooooo Jinny can't be dead!!! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!

Kewl....keep goin...:D

Originally posted by Bonnie Is Great!
Yes, more please, and Nooooooooooooooooooooo Jinny can't be dead!!! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!



don't worry jinnys not dead-well she is but shes not gone for good ill bring her back-itll take major thinking but ill do it somehow....

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
don't worry jinnys not dead-well she is but shes not gone for good ill bring her back-itll take major thinking but ill do it somehow....

Lession one in fan-fiction: NEVER give anything away! :lol: :joke: This is good! Please keep posting!

Keep on going this is great.

wow this is my first fic that i got more than 2 replies by differn't people!!!! just for that ill give you more fic!

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*4 days later*

(Jinny's Funeral)


Teddy: i still can't belive she's gone.
Magda: i know, and i stil don't get how she died! all they told us was that they found her dead on the bathroom floor, blood everywhere and the mirror broken!?
Teddy: yeah, its weird.-were there any wittness's?
Magda: no-not yet anyway- how do you think she died?
Teddy: no idea *sigh* i miss her:(
Magda: so do i.:( and so does her dad and casey and *sigh* i think even john misses her
Teddy: yea




k-thats all for now!

Keep it coming it wonderful:) :) :) !!!
Hadar

Originally posted by ONE LIFE TO LIVE
Lession one in fan-fiction: NEVER give anything away! :lol: :joke: This is good! Please keep posting! \




woops! sorry! whats lesson #2? lol

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Teddy: yea.
Magda: when was the last time you saw her?
Teddy: 2 days ago-i took her to see a movie.
Magda: oh-what movie'd ya see?
Teddy:"The Accident''
Magda: oh-what was it about?
Teddy: there was this girl-she was in a car accident- she crashed into a tree in the middle of the night-she flew through the window and bled to death.
Magda: oh
Teddy: yea
Magda: was that the whole movie?
Teddy: no- b-4 she died she caught her boyfriend cheating on her so her spirit was like haunting his mirror sorta - she killed him at the end
Magda: oh.


okey dokey~:crazy:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
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woops! sorry! whats lesson #2? lol

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lesson number two: post more than just teasing appetizers. :D

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
lesson number two: post more than just teasing appetizers. :D




what's a teasing apetizer? lol j/k sorry im new at this whole fic writing thing



ps- you forgot to ask for more lol j/k:D

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
what's a teasing apetizer? lol j/k sorry im new at this whole fic writing thing



ps- you forgot to ask for more lol j/k:D

what you wrote... meaning you should post longer posts, which basically means you just have to post more.... got it?

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
what you wrote... meaning you should post longer posts, which basically means you just have to post more.... got it?



well yea but my fingers get sore real quick so therefore i can't post long posts!:D plus im tottaly out of ideas lol

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
well yea but my fingers get sore real quick so therefore i can't post long posts!:D plus im tottaly out of ideas lol


uhmmmm add some sex... that's what I do when I run out of ideas LOL... and that'd be lesson number three then ;)

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
uhmmmm add some sex... that's what I do when I run out of ideas LOL... and that'd be lesson number three then ;)





uhhhhhhh i ...don't.....kno...... whats sumthing else i could add?



whats lesson #4?



and once again YOU FORGOT TO ASK FOR MORE!!!!!!!!! lol j/k:rolleyes:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
uhhhhhhh i ...don't.....kno...... whats sumthing else i could add?



whats lesson #4?



and once again YOU FORGOT TO ASK FOR MORE!!!!!!!!! lol j/k:rolleyes:

uuuuh.... major kissing lol

lesson number four is: More CD and Nate! :D

And I don't ask for more when I get pressured to ask for more. :p

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
uuuuh.... major kissing lol

lesson number four is: More CD and Nate! :D

And I don't ask for more when I get pressured to ask for more. :p



gosh! what is so special about cd and nate! there just 2 more stinkin people! lol j/k okaaaaaaaaay ill TRY to add sum cd and nate. and fine! don't post! just having you as a reader is honoring enough! lol j/k:p



lesson #5?

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
gosh! what is so special about cd and nate! there just 2 more stinkin people! lol j/k okaaaaaaaaay ill TRY to add sum cd and nate. and fine! don't post! just having you as a reader is honoring enough! lol j/k:p



lesson #5?

okay first of all, they do NOT stink! :bash: :smash: :angryfire :livid: peace:

and who said I'm actually reading this? LOL I'm just here to bug ya ;)

and lesson five: NEVER EVER piss off a CD/Nate fan. Especially not me! muahahahaha! :D :lol:

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
okay first of all, they do NOT stink! :bash: :smash: :angryfire :livid: peace:

and who said I'm actually reading this? LOL I'm just here to bug ya ;)

and lesson five: NEVER EVER piss off a CD/Nate fan. Especially not me! muahahahaha! :D :lol:




...........:o ? okaaaay i was sooo not expecting that lol uhhh im goin to bed now good night lol j/k




lesson#6?



ps-are you really not reading this?:(

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
...........:o ? okaaaay i was sooo not expecting that lol uhhh im goin to bed now good night lol j/k




lesson#6?



ps-are you really not reading this?:(

I'm good at unexpected :D and you shouldn't take me serious. I love to joke around :)

and lesson number six is.... Never take me serious, especially not whith a ;) smiley following whatever I might say

Another person you don't wanna piss off: A Jinny fan!!! I'm one and you're pissing me off by NOT POSTING!!!!! :mad: :angryfire :lol:

Originally posted by ONE LIFE TO LIVE
Another person you don't wanna piss off: A Jinny fan!!! I'm one and you're pissing me off by NOT POSTING!!!!! :mad: :angryfire :lol:



well ima jiny fan 2 and you guys are pissing me off by not asking for more!lol

okay so so far these re the tips and lessons that you guys gave me-



1.) never give away anything
2.)post more than just teasing appetizers
3.)add action! like sum kissing or sumthing
4.) add cd and nate
5.)never piss off a cd and nate fan
6.)never take cat seriously
7.) post at least twice a month




-k i added a couple of those myself. anyone care to give me more advice?

I have one, i have one :idea: !!!

If you eat a fillet of fish you have to be careful from bones that might be there...talking from experience...a bone, stuck in your throat is not a pleasant thing :rolleyes2 :crazy: :eek:

Hadar

P.S- Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeee post more :D :D :D

Originally posted by Goofy
I have one, i have one :idea: !!!

If you eat a fillet of fish you have to be careful from bones that might be there...talking from experience...a bone, stuck in your throat is not a pleasant thing :rolleyes2 :crazy: :eek:

Hadar

P.S- Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeee post more :D :D :D


ummmmmm okaaaaay what the heck does that have to do with fic writing? and my whole ife ive been going to mcdonalds ive never found a bone in my filet o fish:confused:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
ummmmmm okaaaaay what the heck does that have to do with fic writing? and my whole ife ive been going to mcdonalds ive never found a bone in my filet o fish:confused:

that's because there's no fish in McDonald's fishburgers...

Originally posted by Goofy
I have one, i have one :idea: !!!

If you eat a fillet of fish you have to be careful from bones that might be there...talking from experience...a bone, stuck in your throat is not a pleasant thing :rolleyes2 :crazy: :eek:

Hadar

P.S- Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeeee post more :D :D :D

:rotflmao: Have you done that before, Goofy? :lol:

Ok first of all that doesn't have to do with ff writing...but you asked for an advice and since I'm not a professional ff writer i just thought i'll give you an advice for life :D

And yes it happened to me about two months ago in Sbarro :) :rolleyes: :)

Hadar

Originally posted by Goofy
Ok first of all that doesn't have to do with ff writing...but you asked for an advice and since I'm not a professional ff writer i just thought i'll give you an advice for life :D

And yes it happened to me about two months ago in Sbarro :) :rolleyes: :)

Hadar




ummmmmmmmm okaaaay i hope your throat feels better. i hope the fish's ghost feels better to lol

Originally posted by CD DeLorenzo
that's because there's no fish in McDonald's fishburgers...





uhhhhhh really? kool:o

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
okay so so far these re the tips and lessons that you guys gave me-



1.) never give away anything
2.)post more than just teasing appetizers
3.)add action! like sum kissing or sumthing
4.) add cd and nate
5.)never piss off a cd and nate fan
6.)never take cat seriously
7.) post at least twice a month




-k i added a couple of those myself. anyone care to give me more advice?




~k-any one care to give me more FIC advice?

Thank you... my throat is okay :)

I was just kidding I'm sorry if i made you angry.

Hadar

Originally posted by Goofy
Thank you... my throat is okay :)

I was just kidding I'm sorry if i made you angry.

Hadar





uhhhhhhhhh made me angry? how could you have made me angry? you didn't say anything bad? did you?!lol

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
~k-any one care to give me more FIC advice?


Here's another lession: POST!!!! Don't turn into Miranda on us. :lol:

Originally posted by *Nancy Mckeon*
you didn't say anything bad? did you?!lol

Well...not that i'm aware of...at least not intentionally :D

Well...i don't have advices but i would love to read more of your fanfic.

Hadar

Originally posted by ONE LIFE TO LIVE
Here's another lession: POST!!!! Don't turn into Miranda on us. :lol:







lol k-i promise i will post more tonight-sumtime after dinner lol

Originally posted by Goofy
Well...not that i'm aware of...at least not intentionally :D

Well...i don't have advices but i would love to read more of your fanfic.

Hadar




yay! this is my first fic where people are bugging me for more! pretty soon you guys will be tracking me down and trying to hurt me!lol im so proud of myself lol!

hellooooooooo? ain't ne1 gonna ask for more? lol

here goes-- MMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!:D

Um, can I please ask what ever happend to actually posting more on this fic? I just started reading this and I was looking foward to reading more but then everyone kept talking about fan fic advice. Don't get me wrong it is good advice. Especially about McDonalds but I want more of the fic NOW! :p

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
Um, can I please ask what ever happend to actually posting more on this fic? I just started reading this and I was looking foward to reading more but then everyone kept talking about fan fic advice. Don't get me wrong it is good advice. Especially about McDonalds but I want more of the fic NOW! :p



oh yea lol sorry- i just looked through this fic and i notced that their was no fic for 2 pages lol
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Magda: oh
Teddy: yea.......wait- how did they say they found her?
Magda: uhh, she was in the bathroom.... and there was like glass or sumthing everywhere
Teddy: uhhhhh-oh yea
Magda: why?
Teddy: it just sounds like sumthing that happend in the movie we saw, thats all.
Magda: oh-what happend?
Teddy: well, sum of the guy's friends were joking around about his girfriend death and he did sumthing to bring her back
Magda: what'd he do?
Teddy:well, she spent most of her time in the bathroom-you kno make-up, hair clothes....
Magda: yea so?
Teddy:so- he said her name a couple a times and her ghost appeared and killed him, thats all
Magda: oh-what does that have to do with jinny?
Teddy:nothing-it just reminded me of the movie..



k-thats all for now!:happyface

MMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!:D

Thank you for posting. :wave: More please! :D

Yeah, MORE! Now! And Where's the CD/Nate stuff? Hehe.

~Jordan

sorry it took me 4 ever to do this
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that night when teddy went home blah blah blah lol any way that night when he was going to bed he brushed his teeth blah blah lol any way when he was brushing his teeth he looked down and spit out the tooth paste (lol this sucks huh?) and he kinda saw a red glow in the mirror but when he looked up he saw nothing. he kinda knocked on the mirror. it made a regular mirror sound lol. "weeeird" he thought


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k- sorry it sucked but like i said on my other fics im totally clueless! lol does any one wanna post the next part for me? please?

Yes, I'd love you to post the next part. Maybe Teddy shouldn't be home alone, huh? Call Mag, or CD, or Nate, or Rai- wait, not Raina. She'd be all fun, and Teddy's woman just died, soooooooo please post soon. I mean like in the next month. Ya know?

:mango i mango you!!
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As teddy was lying down, he finnally realized that jinny was dead-gone. he would never see her again. he would never wake up, and then wake her up by hitting her with a pillow. they would never wrestle, or chase each other in the rain (water sports!! lol) they would never see each other again. as he thought about jinny, he felt like he was going to cry- not much later he did
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:mango i mango you!!


ne ideas? lol

Aww, this is so sad! You're going to bring Jinny back, though, right? Post more soon!

yay!!! new reader!!!

I'll tell you the same thing I told you in the im. WRITE MORE, and WRITE MORE AT ONE TIME! CUZ IT KICKS ARSE. lol

yay!! another new reader!!!

You should write more, and don't intersperse "this sucks, huh?" all over the place. If it sucked, we would tell you. :)

Post more ASAP!!!