Complete Makeover

*Kates office*
K:congradulations,Misty you got the job
M:thank-you,is that all?
K:yes,you can go and meet your new co- workers
M:thank-you
K:your quite welcome
M:*walks out*

*walks past jinny and magda*

J:*looks at Misty*wow
MA:what?
J:her
MA:what about her?



should i continue?

yeah, so far so good... continue soon

Go on this is great.

MA:what about her?
J:i don't know,its like...a feeling i guess
MA:what knd of feeling
J:i don't know just a feeling
MA:what does it feel like?
J:*annoyed*i don't know mag,its just a feeling if i feel it again ill tell you,geez
MA:alright alright ya don't have to yell
J:cold
MA:what
J:she walked in the room,i felt kinda chilly,she walked out i felt normal again
MA:are you sure thats cause of her?
J:i think so

should i post more?

even though no one replyed heres more,

J:i think so
MA:thats crazy Jin, what do you think she is a vampire! *laughs*
J:i don't know maybe
MA: Jinny your going insane,shes perfectly normal.
J:*sarcasticly*oh yea Mag,a young pretty teenage girl,probly still in high school just comes crawling in here looking for a job, perfectly normal
MA:maybe she dropped out
J:if she dropped out she wouldn't have gotten a job,plus don't you have to go to college to be a cop
MA:well,yea but maybe shes one of those really smart kids that skiped a grade or 2
J:and graduated college?
MA:well,maybe
J:mag your the one thats going crazy
MA:i heard that there was this kid that finished college when he was 10
J:yeah right

*a dark room sumwhere*
Voice:hows the plan going?
Misty:so far so good,i got the job.
V:good,and remember,we only have 2 weeks left so hurry up
M:i know,i will

should i post more?- has anyone figued out Misty's secret yet,if you think you have pm me and tell me what you think it is

Good so far! What's Misty's planning?

thank-you Brandon,at least 1 person is reading this

I love it. Keep up the good work.

even though only 2 people are reading this heres more-

*a few days later*
Jinny and Misty are working on a case together.They're driving back to the division.

M:so,tell me about yourself.
J:why
M:i don't know,just tell me sumthing,anything!
J:anything?ok,my name is Jinny Exstead and im a cop.
M:sumthing i dont know?
J:my best friend is Magda


~sorry its so short,ill post more in a little while
:seeya: g2g

J:my best friend is Magda
M:sumthing i didn't know!?
J:fine-im single,i have a bofriend i have no pets and i live in an apartment
M:do you have kids?
J:does it matter!
M:yes-do you or not!?
J:NO!!
M:thank-you! what is...
J:shut up already!
M:fine 2 more questions...
J:1
M:2
J:1
M:2
J:0
M:fine 1-whats your address?
J:why? you aren't planning to cum visit me are you
M:no,i just want 2 know,so what is it?
J:...

Keep up the great work.

J:well...
M:come on its not like im gonna come kill you!
J:*they arrive at the divison*well were here,lets go*gets out and runs into the division*






k-sorry its not much,im gonna go 2 sleep now

is anyone besides Brandon and Jessica reading this?

It is great!!!

I'm here :wave: and I am reading it this is great! Post more.

k-ill try to post more tomorrow-unless im dead Keep me in your prayers!! lol



if ne1 here wants more replie! if i get more than 2 replies ill post more! if i don't! oh well it was worth a try..... *sigh*

You shouldn't write for replies, write for yourself :) If the others don't like it, it's their problem.

uhhhhh thanks i guess.




does that mean you don't want more?!

I want more!!!!

I would like to read more. Post soon! :) ;)

Me 2!

:cat:

!NEW READER! !NEW READER! !NEW READER! welcome by the way lol im jenna!

ill TRY to post more soon:)

Hehe. I'm Jordan. I love this story. How much longer do we have 2 wait? :confused: I'm gettting :sleep2:, and :bored: ! Love 2 read more soon!

:cat:

*on the phone*
J: i swear shes gonna come kill me!!
Teddy: no shes not! its not like u told her where u live!.....did u?
J: no but...
T: then how will she kno where to go?
J: she probly tricked captain into telling her!
T: how would she do that?
J: i don't kno! she probly told cap that she wanteed to come over for a friendly visit!!
T: would cap have told her?
J: probly- i dunno


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k- i kno that sucked and it was real short lol but Angie asked me to post more so Angie! this is for u! lol (sorry it sucked) lol

It DIDN'T SUCK! You just need to post more. Cuz it's so good. :-)

Originally posted by iliveforjayandnancy2
It DIDN'T SUCK! You just need to post more. Cuz it's so good. :-)


yaaaaaaaay!! i got a new reader!!

YAY!!!! You posted more on this!! Thank goodness I was starting to get worried. You need to post more on this. You are getting new readers because this fic is great!! And like Cat said, don't post more for the replies. Do it for yourself. But, if you are still posting for replies,. here is a good one. POST MORE SOON!! :)

Originally posted by JinnyGirl88
YAY!!!! You posted more on this!! Thank goodness I was starting to get worried. You need to post more on this. You are getting new readers because this fic is great!! And like Cat said, don't post more for the replies. Do it for yourself. But, if you are still posting for replies,. here is a good one. POST MORE SOON!! :)


yay! another new reader!!!! coooooooool! lol i got a dentist apointment today- ill post more as soon as i get back, but right now i gotta go catch up on all my other fics! ta ta!!........................

Teddy: well, your a cop! you can protect yourself!!
Jinny: geez you don't seem as over protective as you normally are...
T: well i just think your acting silly!
J: well what if she really does kill me?!?!?!
T: than ill miss you dearly but right now ive got to get sum sleep! (hangs up)
J: sum boyfriend.....
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

k- sorry so short....

Teddy...the jack-ass. And you didn't hear that from me, Jeanie. LOL LOL