This is my new fan-fic. "Tornado." Actually, where I live (Jackson, Tennesse.) we had a tornado not long ago. Luckily all we got was hail, but I saw some houses that had no roof, and treees where in the road and power lines where knocked over. Ok, I'm going to shut-up! lol! Enjoy! :).

Lighting lit the windows of the Eastland School for Girls. Then came a LOUD roll of thunder, scarying Dorothy "Tootie" Ramsey, Natalie Green, and Blair Warner (my favorite!) who were in the lounge. "Oh, I hate thunder stroms." Tootie said, who was doing her math homework. "I hate math!" Natalie replyed, who was also doing math homework. Then, Blair follwed with: "I hate EVERYONE of you!" She was having a bad day. Her boyfriend from Bates broke up with her. "I don't know what your complaining about, Tootie." Jo said, who was working on a part for her bike. "I love thunder storms!" Blair, who didn't get along with Jo (although they were good friends.) replyed with: "Oh, is that why your so strange?"


What do you thinks so far? Tell me truthfully. Good or bad. It won't hurt my feelings at ALL. I love getting replys from you guys! ;).

sounds good to me.
Just...try doing a new paragraph everytime someone talks...cause, with it all bunched together like that...it's hard to tell. Otherwise...it's GREAT!:)

It's great, we had some tornados scattered around here Thank god nothing hit here it jumped us and hit Massac County

Originally posted by Biker Chick/Jo Fan
It's great, we had some tornados scattered around here Thank god nothing hit here it jumped us and hit Massac County

Well, BikerChick/JoFan. I'm glad your ok. Here's the next part. It's short. But I'm writng the next part now.

Just when Jo was about to say something back to Blair, a tree flew into the window, shattering the glass into a million, tiny pieces. Mrs. Garrett, who was in the kitchen ran into the lounge. "Run, girls." She yelled out of breath. "Down to the basement." Jo, , Nat., and Tooit rushed out of the room. "Blair," Mrs. Garrett said, "aren't you coming?"
"The basement. Blair Warner? I think NOT!"
"Fine! Then let the tornado come and sweep you off to Kansas. Good luck, Dorothy!"
"But-" Blair started to say, but she was cut off by something that hit her arm, which cut it. Holding it, Blair and Mrs. G went to the basement with the other girls.

That's it for now. Will post the next part soon! :)

Now this part is VERY short!

When the strom was over (which took a few hours) all the girls came up from the basement. "Oh, my Lord!" Said Tootie, not beliveing her eyes. "You can saw that again." They heard another Eastland girl say. Tootie again, shocked said: "Oh my Lord!" The girls looked around them. All they found were trees and other stuff like that where Eastland used to be. Eastland was no more!

What do you think? Will post more soon! :).

Post more this is great!!!

Sounds great

Hey, guys! I'm out of idea's for "Tornado." If you could please PM me and give me suggestions, I'd be GRATEFUL! The cridit would go you! ;).


Thanks!

BlairFan101 (Brandon)

Biker/ChickJo_Fan PM me and gave me this GREAT idea! Thanks to all the others who did as well.

A few hours later, our main charters walked around the ramains of Eastland, picking up trash. They all picked up something that reminded them of there stay.
Jo, picked up a piece of her motor bike that she was working on earlier. It was now a piece of junk.
Tootie picked up one her roller skates. When she picked it up, the weel fell off.
Nat. picked up pieces of her partly written book she was writting.
Mrs. Garret picked up her a picture of her, her son, and Jo, Blair Natlie and Tootie. The frame was shamed to pieces.
Blair picked her favorite hair brush. The teeth on it where gone.
All of a sudden, a limo pulled up. Somebody rolled down the window. It was Blair's mom, Monica Warner. Come on, sweetie." She said. Blair placed the brush back where it was and went to the limo.
A few hours later, Mrs. G stood alone in the middle of an Eastland mess. She cried hard. Very hard. She managed to get these words out: Good bye, my girls."
She, then fell onto the mess and cried harder then ever!

Thanks again, BikerChick/Jo_Fan. What do you think so far? Will post more soon! ;)

You're welcome glad it helped hope you post more on it. The idea worked better then I thought it would

Sorry I haven't been on in a few days. I was on vaction. Anyways, I should post more tonight or tomorrow. Got to go. I have a PM waiting for me.

Here's the next part:

Blair lay on her bed, watching TV, when one of the maids, Eliza, came in.
"Telephone for you, Miss Warner." Eliza said, cheerfully. "A Mrs. Garrett."
Shocked and excited at the same time, Blair got out of bed, and ran down the stairs, tripping over them. When she (finally) got to the living room, Blair ran to the phone, and picked it up.
"Hello?" Blair said into the mouth piece. Why, Mrs. Garrett! What a total surpise!" (stop) "What?!" (stop) "Well, I don't know. Are you sure?" (stop) "Alright. I'll be there in 5 minutes."

The limo stopped, and Blair got out. After it drove off, she walked over to her friends.
"Hey." Said Jo, giving Blair a friendly HUG! :eek:. (lol)
"What are we here for?" Asked Blair, looking around.
"This." A voice came from behind them. They all turned to look and saw Mrs. Garrett. "Don't just stand there!" She said. "Let's get to work!" Natalie walked over to her (used-to-be-)Diettion.
"Mrs. G, are you forgetting to wash the fruit off before you eat it?"
"No, Natalie. The 5 of us are going to rebuild Eastland and make it BIGGER and BETTER!"

What do you think so far? Will post the enxt part soon. :)

Keep up the great work!!!

fun! Keep up the good work.

The next part. Feed-back welcome! :)

"Rebuild Esatland?!" Jo repeated, walking to Mrs. G and Natalie. "We're talking BIG bucks!"
"Well." Said Tootie, glancing at Blair. "We DO have Blair."
"We are NOT going to use Blair's money!" Mrs. Garrett replyed, getting a little upset at the girls, thinking this is a bad idea. "We are going to do just fine! We'll manage. We ALWAYS have."
Nobody said a word. Blair didn't even do one of her dramaic sighs. So, Mrs. Garrett said what the girls were thining: "Let's get to work.

A FEW WEEKS LATER

Our 5 main charactors stood back and looked at the new Eastland.
"What do you think?" Asked Mrs. G.
"Looks good." Replyed Blair. "If I DO say so myself."
"My I barf?" Asked Jo. "If I DO say so myself."
The girls walked into the school, Jo and Blair: fighting. Nat and Tootie: arms around each other.
Mrs. G looked up at the sky, and said: "Thank you, Lord. Thank you for giving me my girls back." Then, she, too, walked into the new Eastland.

THE END.

I loved it :)

It was good, If I do say so, Myself. ;)

Originally posted by gbscott1954
Why is it that my suggestions are always tossed aside?


Well, ya know what they say, "If you want somethiong donw right, you gotta do it yourself!";)
I enjoy everyone's fan fics, whether they choose to get help from people here, or do it themselves, it always seems to turn out well.(well, there are exceptions to every rule)
However, great fic, BlairFan101!

Originally posted by MrsGarrettRocksMySocks



Well, ya know what they say, "If you want somethiong donw right, you gotta do it yourself!";)
I enjoy everyone's fan fics, whether they choose to get help from people here, or do it themselves, it always seems to turn out well.(well, there are exceptions to every rule)
However, great fic, BlairFan101!


Great job. I loved it. Well said Lizzie