View Full Version : To Win His Heart(my 2nd GI Fanfic)


*InThisMoment*
04-25-2003, 12:29 AM
Now People Don't Be discouraged by my other one..:lol: but here it is.please reply!


*the scene faced into Gilligan and the skipper siting in there hut*

Skipper:well Gilligan i'm hiting the sack.

Gilligan:*yawns* yep i'm beat

*Gilligan and Skipper get into there hammicks and Gilligan is fast asleep* *than the scene fades into the next day gilligan is sitting by the lagoon when he hears a womens yell*

Gilligan:huh? that sounded like a scream.

*women screams*

*gilligan hears the scream and looks to see a young women in the lagoon drowning*

*Gilligan jumps into the lagoon and grabs the young women and carries her to safetey*

Gilligan:are you ok mrs?

Women:yes.thanks to you!

Gilligan:where'd you come from?

Women:there was a bad storm.i had to abandone ship.it was only me and my husband *starts to cry* he didn't make it.he couldn't swim very well and he drown.i couldn't stop so i had to leave him! *crying very heavy*

Gilligan: oh i'm so sorry!

*the skipper runs up to him after noticing the women*

Skipper:Gilligan who is this!?

Gilligan:her and her husband were in a bad storm and had to abandone ship.she was the only one who made it!

Skipper:whats your name?

Women:Mary Ellen.

Skipper:well i better go get the Professor!


To Be Continued...

(this may not look like it but its a MA/G Fanfic)


Pleaze Reply! :)

JWood201
04-25-2003, 08:49 PM
LOL. Cute! Keep going ...

dummygally
04-27-2003, 12:10 AM
KEEP GOIN!!!!!!!!!!!

iDOhavealife
04-27-2003, 09:54 PM
Keep going there, Fonz! This should be interesting, if you're headed where I think you're headed, LOL.

*InThisMoment*
04-28-2003, 12:03 AM
Here WE go! ;)


*the scene fades into the professor running to the lagoon to see what was happening* *professor helps the women up*

Proffy:are you ok?

Women:I Feel fine...

*inturupting*

Proffy:we better take you to the hut.and make sure everything is right.Whats your name?

Women:Mary Ellen.

*Mary ann walks up looking a bit in shock.she saw a girl she sweared looked awfully like her.none of the others noticed this.but for some resin she it was weird to her.*

Mary Ann:Well hello..*still in shock*

Gilligan:*staring at mary* this is Mary ellen...

Mary ann: oh well hello my name is mary ann summers...

Skipper:well lets get to the hut and dry you!

Mary:thank you.and thank you so much for saving me.heaven knows what might of happened if you hadn't saved me. *looking lovingly at Gilligan*

Gilligan:*geting bashful*oh well gee...*he couldn't help but stare at the lovly girl.he was the only one he knew he seemed more attracted to than Mary ann*

*they all walk back to the hut*

Ginger:*talking to Mary ellen*My Name is ginger grant.

Mary: OH i love ALL your movies! your my favorite actresses!

Ginger:*flattered*well thanks you.

*professor walks in*

Proffy:well Mary you still feel fine?

Mary:yes.i feel normal.

Proffy:i'm so sorry about your husband.

Mary: oh me too...me & him had a huge fight...actually we were *starts crying* we we were going to get a divorce!

*Mary ann walks in to the suply hut* *where they were at*

Mary ann:hello there Mary ellen...

Mary ellen:hi.

*the scene fades into everyone eating lunch together*

Proffy:so you studied science in school?

Mary ellen:and loved it.everyone called me a wiz.but than i dropped out to get married.the marriege didn't really work out.but neither of us had the guts to divorce.so we hung on to our marriege.like i said we were gonna get a divorce.but than well...

Gilligan:well i don't know why anyone would want to divorce you.your so sweet. *he seemed uncomfteroble complimenting a women so he sturrtered it out*

Mary ellen:why thank... *mary ann inturrutps*

Mary ann:would you pass me the guava juice?

Proffy:umm..sure mary ann.

*Mary Ann had a jealous look on her face.she couldn't beleive Gilligan was saying the things she wish he would say to her.

*Proffessor hands her the juice but she turns it down*

Mary ann:i'll be in the hut *running off*

TO BE CONTINUED...

Please reply!

dummygally
04-28-2003, 04:19 PM
Keep goin!

*InThisMoment*
04-29-2003, 10:14 PM
I wanna keep goin' but no one else wants to read it! :crying:

iDOhavealife
04-29-2003, 10:59 PM
I do. I've been waiting for you to post more. :D

JWood201
04-29-2003, 11:10 PM
Why do you think no one wants to read it? I do. I commented on the first post... I normally like, when it's posted in little short sections, to wait until the end to comment on the piece as a whole.

Just know we're not ignoring it! We're just waiting for more!

*InThisMoment*
04-30-2003, 01:28 AM
Aww gee thanks! :) well heres some more!


*the scene fades away from mary ann and fades into her and Ginger sleeping.mary ann is still amake.with a few tears on her pillow.she thinks to herself.she knows that gilligan likes mary.she can tell just by the way he looks at her.she thinks to herself.mary ellen is just like her.she dresses, talks and looks like her.simple and sweet.yet gilligan would always push away from mary ann when she acted romantic with him.she knew gilligan was shy.but he didn't seem so shy when he was with mary.she faded away from sad to mad.her name was even like hers.she lied there in bed and wanted to hit something.she really liked gilligan but she knew gilligan would never like her back...soon she drifted back to sleep...

*the next morning Mary Ann seemed at ease.but she still had things on her mind.she couldn't stop gilligan from liking her.there was really nothing she could do.she knew she wasn't the type.but she felt mad inside at Mary.she didn't ever act mean or rude to anyone that she could remember but she had so many thoughts going thru her head about mary.she was widdowed.was just gilligans type.mary ann went on to her normal day but was certain to show no "liking" to mary.


*Mary ann and mary are hanging the clothesto dry.she didn't say ant thing until now to her all day.*

Mary ann:i see you feel right at home here on the island.

Mary ellen:well yes.it's just like a family.you all are so sweet and kind to me.

Mary ann:i see you have a little thing for gilligan.

Mary ellen: oh i didn't think anyone would notice.i've only been here for 3 days...


Mary ann:well it's pretty obvious.me & him are close...

Mary ellen: oh really?

Mary ann:*geting mad* yes as a matter of a fact yes!

Mary ellen:well you don't need to get mad!

Mary ann: h i'm sorry.it's just he has never had true feeling for anyone but me...i wouldn't want you to get attached or anything...*being sarcastic*

Mary ellen:well i don't know him very well...but he has been flirting *geting competitive**and lying* ;)

Mary ann: oh go on!

Mary ellen:i could go on and on.if i were you i wouldn't get too "attatched" to him.he seems to like me quite a it!

Mary ann:right.i've known gilligan for almost a year and i know him like the back of my hand! he's shy and sweet.he would never flirt.he doesn't even know how!

Mary ellen:well than he's been puting on quite a act for you little mary ann!

Mary ann:this is the end of this discussion! i know gilligan he's sweet and innocent and would never live up to what you made him up to be! *walks away*

To Be Continued...

please reply! :)

JWood201
04-30-2003, 04:41 PM
Ooohhh! Nice. Keep going. Hehehe!

Julie the GI girl
04-30-2003, 06:09 PM
oooooooo......CAT FIGHT!!! reow, reow! hiss!

lol...i love it. keep going!

*InThisMoment*
04-30-2003, 06:17 PM
Originally posted by Julie the GI girl
oooooooo......CAT FIGHT!!! reow, reow! hiss!

lol...i love it. keep going!

:lol: i'll try and write more as soon as possible! :)

*InThisMoment*
05-02-2003, 03:51 PM
*Mary ann runs off crying*

Mary ann: oh gilligan would never be like that! never!

*she runs into the professor*

Proffy:excuse me Mary ann!

Mary ann: Ohhh! *crying*

Proffy:i know it was nothing i said!

*Mary ann is siting in her hut crying when Ginger walks in*

Ginger:hi hun.whats wronge?

Mary ann:that stupid mary ellen! she ruinded everything for me & Gilligan!

Ginger:what?

Mary ann:she says shes got Gilligan Wraped around her little finger!

Ginger:slow down! you like Gilligan!? *laughing*

Mary ann:well yea! and theres nothing weird about it.we have a lot of things in common!

Ginger:well...

*Mary ellen walks in looking very diff.shes dressed in a slinky dress with her long brown hair down.*

Mary ann:Mary ellen! you look so diffrient!

Mary ellen:so i do.

Ginger:well why?

Mary ellen:cuz i felt like it!

Mary ann:well you looked so diff. earlier!

*mary leaves.with a very happy look on her face.but she's got tonight on her mind*

Ginger:i think shes the kind that changes her mind on the spur of the moment!

Mary ann:to say the least!

Ginger:but back to you.how long have you had feelings for gilligan?

Mary ann:ever since we met.i was geting on the ship.and he looked at me with his innocent eyes.and i knew we were mean't for each other.you notice i like it here on the isle.but you see i can never get gilligan to see that girls aren't creepy or grose...i just want him to like me so bad!

Ginger:well he likes mary ellen and she's just like you!

Mary ann:yea!

*the scene fades into Gilligan and Mary ellen siting at the lagoon talking*

Mary:Gilligan?

Gilligan:yea?

Mary ellen:i really like you!

Gilligan: oh you do? *in a shy voice*

Mary ellen:ever since i met you i liked you.

Gilligan:but you hardly know me.we haven''t even had a real conversation yet...

*mary geting closer*

Mary:thats because i was so shy....wait a sec. i'll be right back! *in a teasing voice*

Gilligan: ok...


*mary leaves and comes back in the slinky dress and makeup that Ginger And Mary ann seen her in...*

Gilligan:Mary?

Mary:yea?

Gilligan:what happened to you?

Mary:nothin' Nothin' much...from what i hear you dont knotice women much...well i figure now you have to notice me...cuz i wan't you to like me alot...like i like you!

*reachs over and gives gilligan a big kiss*


To Be Continued...

Please Reply! I Know It Was short...:)

JWood201
05-02-2003, 04:04 PM
**gasp** Oooohh! Let's see how MA handles this one... heh heh. Keep going!

*InThisMoment*
05-04-2003, 10:33 PM
ii'll write more soon...it's just i want atleast ONE more reply! ;)

JWood201
05-04-2003, 11:02 PM
Oh, COME ON! Just post some. I know a lot of people here wanna read it, but just don't get the time to comment on every section. Like I said before, I like to wait to comment on a bigger piece, rather than lots of times after every part.

Just post, dude. Sheesh. Hehehe!

*InThisMoment*
05-05-2003, 03:18 PM
Gilligan:Woah! Mary?

Mary:Yes Honey!


Gilligan:You seem So...Diffrient

Mary:I've Heard Your A Shy boy?

Gilligan:yea?

Mary:well little mary ellen's gonna change all that.your gonna love me.besides hon i heard you like me!

Gilligan:i did before but i don't now!

Mary: oh common! you know you love me.*wraps her arms around him* you can't resist me!

*gilligan gets up and runs off*

Mary: oooh! that dumb mary ann can have him!

*gilligan runs into mary ann who is at the other side of the island crying*

Gilligan:why are you here?

Mary ann:you don't want to know Gilligan! *srying hard*

Gilligan:Why?

Mary ann:it's all because of that dumb Mary ellen!

Gilligan:Yea!

Mary ann:What?

Gilligan:she seemed so nice.than i saw her well...difreint...

Mary ann:so did i.she isn't the girl i thought she was!

Gilligan:yea.boy i thought i actually loved her.you know i never felt that way about a girl.

Mary ann:*a tear runs down mayr ann's cheek*I Know Gilligan.you would never feel that way about me.

Gilligan:What?

Mary ann:well i guess now is a better time than never.i really really like you gilligan.but i didn't think you'd ever like me back.But Gilligan Tell Me One Thing?

Gilligan:what?

Mary ann:she was JUST like me.why couldn't you like me like you liked her!? we are just the same! *starts crying harder*

Gilligan:because i never thought a pretty nice girl like you would like me back.

Mary ann:Really Gilligan?

Gilligan:yes.i liked mary ellen.but not like i like you.

Mary ann:well i never thought even if you did have feelings like me you would ever be so open about it?

Gilligan:i never thought i would either!? but seeing mary ellen got me to thinking...i should tell you how i felt.besides seeing you so upset about it.i couldn't just let you stay that way! i...i...i really like you mary ann.

Mary ann: oh thank you so much gilligan! *mary ann starts crying again* i'm so happy!

Gilligan:than why are you crying?

Mary ann:i'm so happy!

Gilligan:are you still gonna be mad at Mary?

Mary ann:No Gilligan.as long as i know you like me i don't care!

Gilligan:thanks!

THE END

i hope you liked it!

*InThisMoment*
05-05-2003, 03:18 PM
Gilligan:Woah! Mary?

Mary:Yes Honey!


Gilligan:You seem So...Diffrient

Mary:I've Heard Your A Shy boy?

Gilligan:yea?

Mary:well little mary ellen's gonna change all that.your gonna love me.besides hon i heard you like me!

Gilligan:i did before but i don't now!

Mary: oh common! you know you love me.*wraps her arms around him* you can't resist me!

*gilligan gets up and runs off*

Mary: oooh! that dumb mary ann can have him!

*gilligan runs into mary ann who is at the other side of the island crying*

Gilligan:why are you here?

Mary ann:you don't want to know Gilligan! *srying hard*

Gilligan:Why?

Mary ann:it's all because of that dumb Mary ellen!

Gilligan:Yea!

Mary ann:What?

Gilligan:she seemed so nice.than i saw her well...difreint...

Mary ann:so did i.she isn't the girl i thought she was!

Gilligan:yea.boy i thought i actually loved her.you know i never felt that way about a girl.

Mary ann:*a tear runs down mayr ann's cheek*I Know Gilligan.you would never feel that way about me.

Gilligan:What?

Mary ann:well i guess now is a better time than never.i really really like you gilligan.but i didn't think you'd ever like me back.But Gilligan Tell Me One Thing?

Gilligan:what?

Mary ann:she was JUST like me.why couldn't you like me like you liked her!? we are just the same! *starts crying harder*

Gilligan:because i never thought a pretty nice girl like you would like me back.

Mary ann:Really Gilligan?

Gilligan:yes.i liked mary ellen.but not like i like you.

Mary ann:well i never thought even if you did have feelings like me you would ever be so open about it?

Gilligan:i never thought i would either!? but seeing mary ellen got me to thinking...i should tell you how i felt.besides seeing you so upset about it.i couldn't just let you stay that way! i...i...i really like you mary ann.

Mary ann: oh thank you so much gilligan! *mary ann starts crying again* i'm so happy!

Gilligan:than why are you crying?

Mary ann:i'm so happy!

Gilligan:are you still gonna be mad at Mary?

Mary ann:No Gilligan.as long as i know you like me i don't care!

Gilligan:thanks!

THE END

i hope you liked it! :)

*InThisMoment*
05-05-2003, 03:19 PM
i know it wa short.but i thought it turned out ok! :)

JWood201
05-05-2003, 11:03 PM
Yay! Cute stuff. :D

iDOhavealife
05-07-2003, 09:53 PM
That was cute and sweet! ;)