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iDOhavealife
02-27-2003, 01:53 PM
OK, I'm attempting to start the "diary" fanfic. This one is not coming together in my mind as easily as the "Second Ginger Grant" fic did, so bear with me, LOL. I'm not even sure what direction this will take yet. So it'll be a surprise to me, too! And so far, Ginger is a friend to Mary Ann in this one. Will wonders never cease?


Diogenes, Won't You Please Take a Hint?

Scene 1

"Hi, Ginger!" Mary Ann said brightly, as she came into the hut the two shared.

Ginger guiltily hid the book she had been reading behind her back. "Uh, hi, Mary Ann." She thought for a minute, then made a decision. "Umm, Mary Ann, remember when you found Gilligan's diary a while back? Did you get a chance to read all of it?"

"No, just the parts I read to you and the others about the Skipper, the Howells, and you. Then Gilligan came along and I gave the book back to him. Why?"

Ginger pulled the book out from behind her back. "Because I found it again."

"Ginger! You should give that back to Gilligan! I realize that when I found it, I read parts of it out loud to everyone, but that was only because of all the trouble that was going on. You shouldn't read all..."

Ginger interrupted her. "Did you read what he wrote about you?", she said with a smile.

Mary Ann was suddenly intrigued. "No...what did he write?", she asked, trying to see what was written in the book.

Ginger hid the book again and said teasingly, "well, I don't know if I should tell you. You said I should give the book back to..."

"Ginger, what did he write?" Mary Ann was curious in spite of herself.

"OK, OK, calm down. Gee, I was only teasing you..."

"Ginger!"

"OK." Ginger reopened the book and found her place. She began reading. "There's another girl here on the island with us, her name is Mary Ann Summers. I can't explain how I feel about Mary Ann because I've never felt this way about anyone before. When I first saw her come on board the Minnow, I noticed how pretty she was. We've been here almost a year now, and I think she's the most wonderful, beautiful girl I've ever known. She's always sweet and kind to me, but I don't dare think she might feel the same way I feel. She's even kissed me a few times, but like an idiot, I didn't know how to react. I'd like to tell her how much I like her, but I know I'll never have the courage. So, I guess I'll just have to be happy with my daydreams." Ginger finished reading and looked up at Mary Ann.

Mary Ann stood there, shocked. "Let me see that!", she said, grabbing the book from Ginger. She wanted to read this for herself--she was a little afraid that Ginger might be joking. But no, there it was, and it was in Gilligan's handwriting.

"Mary Ann, Gilligan has a big crush on you. A huge crush from the sound of it. Now the question is--do you feel the same way?" Ginger had always suspected that Mary Ann secretly liked Gilligan, but she wondered if Mary Ann was even aware of it.

Mary Ann slowly put the book down. She sat down, then looked over at Ginger. "Yes," she said softly. "I feel the same way. But I can't tell him."

"Why not?!", Ginger asked impatiently. "Gosh, Mary Ann, he just said he's crazy about you!"

"Because he didn't tell me. He told his diary. And it may be silly, but I want him to tell me first." Mary Ann looked at the floor, exasperated with herself and the situation.

Ginger threw up her hands. "Well, you may be waiting a long time! You know how shy he is. He'll never tell you."

Mary Ann suddenly had an idea. "Unless I can encourage him to tell me. You know--pay extra attention to him, give little hints. It just might work!", she said, smiling.

Ginger wasn't convinced. "I don't think Gilligan takes hints very well. I still say the direct approach is best. Go over there and tell him you read his diary, and you feel the same way."

"No, I just can't do that. You'll see--I'll make this work." Mary Ann smiled to herself, making plans.


I have some very vague ideas about the next scene. I usually get inspirations when I'm loading the dishwasher after dinner, LOL. Something about the monotony of that job....
:wave:

JWood201
02-27-2003, 04:55 PM
Aww! How sweet! I love Ginger in this one - so funny. LOL. Mary Ann's plotting... hehehe.

Ah, yes, dishwasher duty. **shudder**

Keep going! Yay!

Julie the GI girl
02-27-2003, 06:10 PM
oooo!!!! this is great!! and Ginger isn't being as bad. lol.
*frustrated sigh* oh Mary Ann....just go tell him! lol. the tension between those two is killing me.

iDOhavealife
02-27-2003, 06:27 PM
Glad you like it. Just wish I could think of what happens next, LOL. I have some ideas that I'm trying to pan out. :)

TVPersonGMA
02-27-2003, 08:15 PM
This is a good fanfic, keep up the good work;)

iDOhavealife
02-27-2003, 08:24 PM
Thanks! :) I've been waiting for you to add on to yours. :D

TVPersonGMA
02-27-2003, 08:25 PM
I just did add a few scenes, go and check them out!;)

iDOhavealife
02-28-2003, 11:25 AM
I have to go out of town for the weekend. I probably won't be able to post again until Monday. Hope you guys have a great weekend!

:wave:

iDOhavealife
03-03-2003, 06:33 PM
Geez, this fanfic is not writing itself very well, LOL.

Oh, and slightly offtopic:--did you guys know there's a band called "Gilligan Loves MaryAnn"? I ran across their site one day when looking for stuff for the Bob Denver tvtome.com page and also for fanfic. Cool.

Julie the GI girl
03-03-2003, 08:15 PM
Originally posted by iDOhavealife

I have some very vague ideas about the next scene. I usually get inspirations when I'm loading the dishwasher after dinner, LOL. Something about the monotony of that job....

yes, well....at least you HAVE a dishwasher. at my house i AM the dishwasher. *jealous stare*

LOL...yeah...that was completely off topic....but i felt the need to comment since i have to do the dishes in a few minutes. blah.

anyway....sorry about the writer's block! i know how it is. lol, chances are inspiration will strike when you least expect it.

oh, and...cool name for a band! :D

JWood201
03-03-2003, 10:14 PM
Aww, sorry about the writer's block. It happens to the best of us. :D

Oh, yeah, I found that band's site a while ago. I was so very amused. Hee!

TVPersonGMA
03-04-2003, 09:39 PM
Yeah, I'm having a little...actually a lot of writers block on the "wedding" fanfic.:(

And plus, In have been sick too:eek:

iDOhavealife
03-05-2003, 04:01 PM
OK--here are a few more scenes ;)


Scene 2

Later that afternoon, Mary Ann went out looking for Gilligan. She was a little nervous about seeing him now that she knew what he had written. Maybe Ginger was right--maybe she should just tell him she knew about his diary and that she felt the same way. But she really wanted him to tell her first--she needed to hear it from him, not from his diary. She found him sitting on a rock at the lagoon, fishing. She walked up and stood slightly behind and to the side of him.

"Hi, Gilligan", she said cheerfully.

Gilligan jumped, startled. He had been half-asleep. "Oh, hi, Mary Ann."

Mary Ann sat down next to him. "Are you having any luck?"

Gilligan nodded. "Yeah, I've caught a couple of big ones to have for dinner. See?", he said, holding up some fish on a line.

Mary Ann smiled. "Oh, Gilligan, you're so wonderful to take such good care of us. You always make sure we have plenty to eat. We really don't give you enough credit." She jumped up, went behind him, and gave him a hug. "You know what? I'm going to make you a special pie for dessert. No, I'll make you two pies." She gave him a kiss on the cheek and hurried away, leaving Gilligan to wonder what in the world that was all about.


Scene 3

That evening, Mary Ann sat down on her bed, exhausted. She had spent most of the day being extra-attentive to Gilligan--she had baked him pies, made sure he had extra helpings at dinner, and had just generally worn herself out being cheerful. And of course Ginger was right--Gilligan didn't take hints very well. She looked up as Ginger came in.

"Well, you were right, Ginger--this just isn't working", she sighed. "At least not yet anyway."

Ginger sat down at their dressing table and started powdering her nose. "If you had called him 'sweet' one more time at dinner, I was going to be sick", she said. She turned to Mary Ann. "I think you're going to have to be more aggressive."

"More aggressive?" Mary Ann looked unsure. "Ginger, I'm not very good at being aggressive. I could never 'vamp' men the way you do."

"Of course not. Besides, there's only one Ginger Grant," Ginger said with her usual seductive swagger. "But you're going to have to let him know you're interested. Get him alone and do something besides offering to cook for him."

"Ginger!" Mary Ann said, somewhat shocked.

"Oh, I didn't mean that." Ginger giggled. "Although his reaction might be interesting."

Mary Ann giggled too at the thought of Gilligan's reaction. "Well, I'll think of something. Right now, I'm going to get some sleep." She got up to get changed for bed. "Maybe something will happen tomorrow."


Scene 4 (note: TVPersonGMA, I'm borrowing your bit about getting caught in the rain and going to a cave, LOL.)

By the next morning, Mary Ann had decided that Ginger was right--she had to get Gilligan by himself, even if she didn't have a clue about what she would do once they were alone. So, after breakfast, she stopped Gilligan before he could disappear.

"Gilligan, I need to...umm", she said, thinking fast, "uh...pick berries this morning for lunch. Would you be able to come and help me?"

"Sure, Mary Ann. I was just going to go fishing again anyway."

"OK, good. Thanks, Gilligan," she gave him a warm smile, hoping to cover up her nervousness. She had no clue what to do next and hoped some opportunity would present itself.

They walked along picking berries, mostly in silence. Mary Ann was desperately trying to think of something to do, while Gilligan wondered why she was so quiet. She was starting to think that maybe she should just tell him the truth when there was a sudden flash of lightning, with a clap of thunder following almost immediately.

"Oh, gosh, I think we're going to have a bad storm!", Mary Ann said, stopping and looking up at the sky.

"Yeah. We'd better find some shelter. I think we're too far from camp to make it in time." Gilligan looked around. "I think there's a cave nearby--maybe we should try to go there."

"OK." Mary Ann followed Gilligan through the jungle. The storm was coming fast. It started raining--hard--just before they got into the cave.

"Boy, that was close!", Gilligan said, looking out the cave entrance at the storm. He turned to Mary Ann. "Did you get very wet?"

"No, not too bad", Mary Ann said, brushing damp hair from her eyes. The wind had loosened her pigtails. "Did you?"

"No, I'm OK." Gilligan turned again to the cave entrance and stood watching the storm. Mary Ann had a sudden idea.

"Gilligan--I'm cold." She hated to lie to him, but she had to try to get his attention. "Could you maybe...put your arms around me?"

Gilligan turned to her, looking nervous. "Uh...sure, Mary Ann." She went over and put her arms around him, snuggling close to his chest. He nervously put his arms around her. Funny, she didn't feel cold to him--she felt warm. Gilligan didn't really know how to react--he had liked Mary Ann for a long time--well, more than "liked", but he didn't know how to tell her. His only experiences with girls had been bad ones--he had been laughed at and beaten up a couple of times by big brothers. But Mary Ann was so sweet, and she had always been nice to him--maybe he could tell her. While he was trying to gather his courage, the rain stopped, though neither of them noticed. Gilligan was finally able to find his voice. "Uh, Mary Ann...".

She pulled away a little and looked up at him. "Yes, Gilligan."

Gilligan looked into her eyes and couldn't say anything else. All he could think about was all the times he had wanted to kiss her and couldn't, and now she was right here, and she was looking at him like she wanted him to kiss her. "Don't think about it, just do it", he thought to himself. He leaned closer to her, intending to kiss her. Mary Ann closed her eyes and lifted her face to him.

"Gilligan!? Mary Ann!?" They jumped apart as they heard the Skipper and the Professor calling for them. Gilligan looked at Mary Ann sadly, then hurried out of the cave. Mary Ann sighed and followed him.

"We were worried about you two", the Skipper said, coming up to them.

"Yes, that was a very bad storm. We were afraid you had gotten caught in it", the Professor added.

"We're both all right", Mary Ann said. "We just got rained on a little bit. We went into a cave." She smiled at Gilligan. "I'd better get back to camp and start lunch." The Skipper looked from her to Gilligan--something was going on here, but he didn't know what. Maybe she and Gilligan?...but no, this was Gilligan after all. Skipper chuckled to himself at the thought.


Scene 5

That night, Gilligan sat on the bench near the huts, absent-mindedly poking a stick into the fire. He was thinking about what had almost happened in the cave. His feelings were very confused. He was disappointed, but also a little relieved--what if Mary Ann had been mad at him for kissing her? What if she was mad at him for almost kissing her?

Mary Ann came out of her hut and saw Gilligan sitting there, staring into the fire. She went over and sat down beside him. "Hi, Gilligan", she said softly.

Gilligan didn't look up. "Hi, Mary Ann." He sat there thinking for a moment, then looked up at her. "Mary Ann...uh...this afternoon...if the Skipper and the Professor hadn't come along when they did...", he didn't know how to finish, and he looked back down at the fire.

"I know, Gilligan...you would have kissed me."

"I'm sorry, Mary Ann."

"Oh no, Gilligan, it's all right. I...wanted you to kiss me." She paused for a moment, then put her hand on his arm. "I still do," she said softly.

It took Gilligan a second to realize what she had said, then he looked up at her, surprised. "You do?", he asked, his voice breaking like it did when he was nervous.

"Uh huh", she nodded.

Gilligan looked at her for a moment and realized she meant it. He moved a little closer to her and put his arm around her waist. He leaned over and gave her a small kiss. "I don't kiss very well", he said, blushing.

"I think you do", Mary said, blushing too. She touched his face with her hand. They sat there looking at each other for a moment, then he slowly leaned over and kissed her again, this time a lingering kiss. Then he looked into her eyes.

"Mary Ann...I..."

"Gilligan! Where are you, my boy?" This time it was Mr. Howell. Once again, Gilligan and Mary Ann jumped apart guiltily. Mr. Howell came hurrying up to them.

"There you are, Gilligan! Mrs. Howell and I need you to come to our hut immediately! We simply can't find it anywhere!"

"You can't find your hut, Mr. Howell?", Gilligan asked, confused.

"No, no! My teddy bear! Come along, my boy, we need you to crawl under our beds and look for it."

"But, Mr. Howell...", Gilligan started.

"No buts! Let's go!" Mr. Howell grabbed Gilligan's arm and hurried him along. Mary Ann sighed and headed back to her hut. "Well, it's a start", she thought to herself, then smiled.


OK--hopefully, I'll have more tonight or tomorrow.:wave:

TVPersonGMA
03-05-2003, 04:16 PM
Good Job, but would it hurt to see Mary Ann vamp Gilligan. I mean...it'd be weird, but it would be interesting too:lol: sorry I have a sick mind

Julie the GI girl
03-05-2003, 04:38 PM
*sinks down in the chair and melts into a big mushy puddle on the floor*

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!
:dizzy: wheee!!! that was so cute!!! i'm getting all frustrated though. stupid interruptions!!!! lol....i love it i love it i love it!!!

:love: <-----Gilly & MA

iDOhavealife
03-05-2003, 04:45 PM
No, I don't think it would hurt to see Mary Ann vamp Gilligan, :lol: . But in this fanfic, I don't know...I just see her as being a little unsure of herself in this situation. I guess I could let her get so frustrated by all the interruptions that she just attacks him, ;) .

TVPersonGMA
03-05-2003, 04:47 PM
Yeah let her get in a skimpy costume and do it on Gilligan:lol:

iDOhavealife
03-05-2003, 04:54 PM
Geez, I spelled "aggressive" wrong--not once, but three times, LOL. I noticed it when I was re-reading. OK, I'll fix it...

iDOhavealife
03-05-2003, 05:43 PM
I made a change that I found so funny that I want to reprint it in this post, in case you read the fanfic before I made the change (uh...yeah). Here it is:

"There you are, Gilligan! Mrs. Howell and I need you to come to our hut immediately! We simply can't find it anywhere!"

"You can't find your hut, Mr. Howell?", Gilligan asked, confused.

"No, no! My teddy bear! Come along, my boy, we need you to crawl under our beds and look for it."

Yuck! I'm in the middle of cleaning out my fridge and needed a break. Thank goodness for a garbage disposal. Well, back to the grind...(no pun intended, really, LOL).

JWood201
03-05-2003, 05:56 PM
Awwwwww! **melts** So frikkin' cute. I love it.

Love the change: "You can't find your hut?" LOL. So classically Gilligan.

Ooh, and, "If you had called him 'sweet' one more time at dinner, I was going to be sick." -- perfect. I love it.

:love: <-- MAG. Oh, yes, Julie...I concur. LOL.

iDOhavealife
03-06-2003, 01:45 PM
We need some dream sequences here, LOL! TVPersonGMA asked if Mary Ann could vamp Gilligan--well, I guess I just don't see Mary Ann as being like that--I don't know. I may have to eat those words in a future fanfic, LOL. However, she could do it in a dream...


Scene 6

Mary Ann went to bed that night thinking about Ginger's suggestion that she be more aggressive. She couldn't just "vamp" Gilligan---could she? She really didn't think she'd be able to go through with it. It just wasn't her style. She was still thinking about it when she fell asleep; that's probably why she had this dream:

She was walking through the jungle, but something felt different. She looked down at herself and saw that she wasn't wearing her usual gingham dress or shorts. She was wearing a gown similar to Ginger's--tight and low-cut. And her hair was done up like Ginger's too. She was puzzled about why she was dressed like this, but then she saw Gilligan up ahead.

"Hi, Gilligan", she said, surprised that her voice didn't even sound like her own. She sounded more like Ginger--sultry and seductive. What was going on here?

"Uh..hi, Mary Ann", Gilligan said, starting to get nervous. He also wondered why Mary Ann was looking like Ginger. He hated when Ginger "vamped" him--it made him very uncomfortable, and he usually ended up knocking himself out on a tree or some other hard object. He made it look like an accident, but secretly--he did it on purpose.

"Um...Gilligan", Mary Ann said, coming closer to him and putting her arms around his neck. He started backing up, just like he always did with Ginger. "I read your diary...isn't there something you'd like to tell me?", she purred, trying to press against him.

"Like what?" Gilligan was so flustered that he couldn't even remember having a diary. He liked Mary Ann, yes, but he just couldn't deal with her acting like this. He kept backing up until he bumped against a rock. He sat down, and Mary Ann sat down right beside him, with her arms still around him.

"Wouldn't you like to kiss me?" And before he could say anything, Mary Ann kissed him passionately, knocking him backward off the rock and falling off herself. She suddenly woke up.

"Well, that didn't work", she thought to herself. "I scared the poor guy to death." She turned over to go back to sleep, determined that she would get him to admit his feelings--but without "vamping" him. "Besides, he was pretty interested tonight", she thought, smiling to herself.


Scene 7

Over in his own hut, Gilligan was dreaming, too. He was dreaming about the time he had tried to save Mary Ann from drowning. He had almost drowned that time, too, but the Skipper had jumped in and saved both of them, becoming a hero. But in his dream, he was able to save her himself. He carried her up onto the beach, both of them plopping down on the sand until they could catch their breath. "Oh, Gilligan! You saved my life", Mary Ann gushed. "How can I ever thank you?"

"I'll think of something", Gilligan said. Then he pulled her close and kissed her like he wished he could kiss her in real life--passionately, not timid at all. In his dreams, he didn't feel awkward and unsure of himself--he felt confident and strong. Mary Ann returned his kiss, wrapping her arms around his neck. Then he....

"Gilligan? Gilligan!" The Skipper was shaking him awake. "Wake up, Little Buddy...time for breakfast." The Skipper hurried out the door, humming to himself in anticipation of Mary Ann's cooking.

Gilligan sat up, leaning back on his elbows. He gave a deep sigh. "Boy, talk about lousy timing."

Julie the GI girl
03-06-2003, 04:22 PM
ooooo dreams!!! yay!
this story is great....i officially love it. :D

JWood201
03-06-2003, 06:29 PM
Awwwwwweeee! I'm in love. Totally in love with this story. LOL. I've never actually seen dream sequences in a GI fanfic before -- nice!

Gilly's being all studly in his dream -- I love it. LOL. "Then he..." What?! What'd he do?! LOL. Bad, Gilly... **shakes head** Hee.

More more more!! **begs**

iDOhavealife
03-06-2003, 06:43 PM
OK, OK, I'm going to write more, LOL! But I won't tell you the rest of the dream--just use your imagination, LOL.

Yes, Gilligan was scared of girls, but I don't think it was because he wasn't interested in them. I think, in his dreams, he was probably just as interested in them as any other man. But he just didn't have the self-esteem to deal with them in reality. I've seen fanfics that implicate that he has had "relationships" (we'll just use that word here, LOL) with women in the past, and I just don't see that. Gilligan was not experienced--if he had been experienced and was still afraid of girls--well, that would have been just a little too Freudian, LOL.

Gee, no dream sequences in any GI fanfics? That surprises me because the show used so many of them. I love them. Of course, I haven't read many GI fanfics--I won't even read the ones that have the Professor and Mary Ann together--they disturb me, LOL.

OK, just taking a short break--gotta go start dinner, sigh. Spaghetti tonight.

:wave:

JWood201
03-06-2003, 07:09 PM
Ooh, spaghetti! Yum!

ANYway, um, yea, Gilly was so not "experienced." Gosh... that's just... creepy. **shudders**

Ugh, yeah, MAP stuff creeps me out too. It's wrong, man. LOL. Maybe I should put a dream sequence in a fanfic eventually. Hm. I like the concept.

Can't wait for more! (But, then again, you knew that...)

TVPersonGMA
03-06-2003, 07:34 PM
Yeah those MAP are just downright nightmarish!:eek:

And what's funny is that all the feedback for MAP Fanfics are all negative..and that's good, so all you MAP shippers out there...YOU GUYS ALL SCARE THE HELL OUTTA ME:mad:

*InThisMoment*
03-06-2003, 10:07 PM
great fanfic!!!

Julie the GI girl
03-06-2003, 10:34 PM
Originally posted by TVPersonGMA
so all you MAP shippers out there...YOU GUYS ALL SCARE THE HELL OUTTA ME:mad:

LOLOL!!!!! i'm so highly amused by that.

I AGREE! that's just....wrong on so many levels. they never showed any interest....the Prof himself even says so. "i have never shown the slightest romantic interest in Mary Ann!" no you didn't. thank you.

*chokes* Gilly....experienced? uh-huh. sure he was....and Proffy knows everything about women. lol

*shudder* that IS creepy. Gilligan is about as innocent and naive as they come.

*InThisMoment*
03-06-2003, 10:56 PM
mary ann and the professor just don't go together.now GINER and the professor MAYBE but the professor wasn't really interested in girls.

Julie the GI girl
03-06-2003, 11:00 PM
for Ginger he'll make an exception. lol. dang....i think i'm gonna be the first person to write a Proffy/Ginger fanfic. a deeply involved one anyway. lol

iDOhavealife
03-07-2003, 11:21 AM
There's another scene in GI to disprove the MAP shippers--in "The Matchmaker", when Mrs. Howell suggests to Mary Ann that there are eligible bachelors right on the island, Mary Ann says something to the effect of: "I'm much too young for the Skipper. The Professor and I have nothing in common" (no they didn't, thank you very much), "and Gilligan...Gilligan? Gilligan a husband?" She doesn't give a reason why she couldn't be with Gilligan, she just laughs at the thought of him being a husband. So there! LOL.

I'm going to try to write a little more now. This is a busy day for me, so I can only write this morning for a bit. Hope I can get something accomplished.

iDOhavealife
03-07-2003, 01:16 PM
Scene 8

Mary Ann cleared away the breakfast dishes, trying to think of a way to get Gilligan alone again. But apparently the Skipper had other plans for Gilligan.

"Hi, Mary Ann. Can I get some fruit for our lunch? Gilligan and I will be out in the jungle all day today, gathering supplies."

Mary Ann was disappointed, but she tried not to show it. "Oh, so you and Gilligan will be gone until tonight?", she asked, getting together some food for them.

"Yes, so don't expect us for lunch--maybe not even for dinner. Thanks." Skipper smiled at Mary Ann and hurried away to begin work.

Mary Ann put her hands on her hips and thought for a moment. "This is getting ridiculous", she thought. She saw Gilligan coming and had the beginnings of an idea.

"Gilligan", she called to him.

"Yeah, Mary Ann?" He stopped heading into the jungle and came back to her.

"Uh, Gilligan..." She was just going to have to be more assertive or nothing was going to happen, so she took a deep breath. "Gilligan...I...wanted to finish our conversation from last night. So could we maybe...meet tonight...maybe down by the lagoon?", she finished, not all sure she was handling this right.

Gilligan looked a little surprised. "Yeah...I guess so, Mary Ann."

"Gilligan!!"

They heard the Skipper yelling for Gilligan to hurry up. Mary Ann reached up and gave Gilligan a soft, lingering kiss on the lips. "Until tonight", she said, and hurried away.

Gilligan stood there staring after her, somewhat dazed. He shook his head a little to clear it. "Coming, Skipper!", he yelled, his voice breaking and squeaking like it did when he was nervous.


Scene 9

That night, Mary ann waited nervously by the lagoon. What if he didn't show up? What if she was handling this wrong? She had brought one of their Tiki torches down to the lagoon, and she had brought the radio, hoping to make things a little more romantic--she just wished she didn't feel so awkward abaout this. Sometimes she envied Ginger, who could handle men so effortlessly. She didn't exactly want to be like Ginger, but she wished she could be more confident.

Gilligan showed up about 15 minutes later. He and the Skipper hadn't made it back in time for dinner. He had cleaned up, and then the Skipper had asked him why he was headed back out so late. He didn't exactly want to tell the Skipper about meeting Mary Ann, so he had mumbled some excuse and left in a hurry. He stood and watched Mary Ann for a few minutes before she saw him. She was sitting on a rock, nervously looking at her fingernails. Gilligan was sure, though, that she wasn't as nervous as he was.

"Hi, Mary Ann", he said softly, walking over and sitting down beside her on the rock.

"Hi, Gilligan". She smiled at him, then looked back down at her hands. Suddenly she couldn't think of a thing to say or do. They sat there, very uncomfortable, looking all around at anything besides each other. (If you've seen "The Matchmaker", you know what I mean, LOL.)

Gilligan finally noticed that the radio was playing softly. "Would you like to dance, Mary Ann?", he asked, just to have something to say.

"That would be nice." They stood up and began to dance, standing about a foot apart. Mary Ann, starting to get over her shyness, finally smiled at him and put both of her arms around his neck and her head on his shoulder. Gilligan held her nervously, thinking about ways to tell her how he felt. Why couldn't he just act like he did in his dreams? His dream-self wouldn't have any problem telling her--in fact, he would have told her a long time ago. He took a deep breath and started to speak...

"Gilligan!" It was the Skipper again. He was calling for Gilligan from the doorway to their hut.

Mary Ann stepped back and threw up her hands. "Not again!", she said, going over and sitting back down on the rock. She began to cry a little out of sheer frustration.

"What's wrong, Mary Ann?" Gilligan came over and sat down beside her, looking concerned.

"Oh, Gilligan. I've been trying for three days to get you to tell me how you feel about me. I...I read your diary and saw what you wrote, and I just wanted to hear you say it."

"You read my diary?" Gilligan looked surprised.

She nodded. "Yes. I'm sorry, Gilligan. Ginger found it, and she told me you had written some things about me...and I just couldn't resist...I had to read it."

"That's all right, Mary Ann. I'm just surprised anyone found it, that's all. I couldn't even find it." He was suddenly embarrassed, realizing what she must have read. "It's a good thing I didn't write down everything I've felt about her", he thought. He got up and walked a little way toward the lagoon, then stood there looking out at the water.

Mary Ann came up behind him and touched his shoulder. He turned toward her, and she took both his hands in hers. "So, Gilligan...how do you feel about me?", she asked softly.

Gilligan didn't know how to answer her. He stood there looking at her, thinking about how much he loved her. But how could he tell her? She was so wonderful, and he was just Gilligan. He looked again into her eyes, and he saw that she wanted him to tell her he loved her. He suddenly couldn't resist. He put his arms around her waist, pulled her close and kissed her like he did in his dream, and he was surprised when she put her arms around him and returned the kiss.

"Where is that boy?", the Skipper thought to himself, coming through the jungle. He stopped suddenly, seeing Gilligan and Mary Ann standing beside the lagoon, kissing passionately. His mouth fell open. He was surprised--no, he was astonished. He suddenly felt awkward standing there watching them, and he turned to go back to his hut. But he decided he'd better have a talk with Gilligan--and from the looks of things, he'd better do it soon.

Gilligan suddenly realized he wasn't acting like himself. He stopped kissing Mary Ann and stepped back from her, a little ashamed of himself (and truth be told, a little proud). "I'm sorry, Mary Ann. I don't know why I..."

Mary Ann stepped close to him again. "It's all right, Gilligan", she said softly, putting both hands on his face. She pulled him close and gave him a gentle kiss. "And you're wrong about not kissing very well", she said, smiling. She lowered her hands and took his hands in hers. "Now, Gilligan...tell me."

Gilligan looked down at the ground, searching for words. He took a deep breath. "Mary Ann...I...I love you. I think about you all the time, I dream about you every night. You're the most wonderful person I've ever known. You're beautiful and sweet, and..." He looked up at her. "I know I don't deserve you..."

Mary Ann put her finger on his lips, shushing him. "Don't ever say that. You're the most special man I've ever known, Gilligan...and I love you, too. And don't look so surprised", she said, laughing at his expression. "You're easy to love."

Gilligan finally smiled at her. He put his arms around her again, and pulled her to him. He gave her a gentle kiss, then looked into her eyes. She smiled at him, her eyes shining, and he kissed her again...


:wave: Gosh, I got a little sappy there at the end, didn't I, LOL. I'm going to end this fanfic here, but I think I'm going to let this story stand as a launching point for their courtship (yes, that's an old-fashioned word, and I like it, LOL). I'll continue from this point with them together already. I think I will, anyway. Who knows? I have some ideas already, so I'll hopefully start the next part next week.

Now I gotta get to work! (sigh)

*InThisMoment*
03-07-2003, 03:40 PM
:clap: that was great!

Julie the GI girl
03-07-2003, 04:39 PM
*sniff, sniff* that was beautiful. *big sappy smile*

ooooo a continuing courtship!! i'm interested in seeing how Skippo deals with knowing about those two...sorta. heh heh.

YAY!

TVPersonGMA
03-07-2003, 06:18 PM
Aw, man I hate it when a good fanfic ends:(

JWood201
03-07-2003, 08:12 PM
YAY! **applause** I love it. Skippy's great - I love it when he's baffled. Hee!

I'm so glad you're gonna keep writing more from here! YAY!

iDOhavealife
03-07-2003, 11:26 PM
Thanks, everyone! I hope I can think of ways to keep things interesting, LOL.

:wave:

TVPersonGMA
03-08-2003, 12:28 PM
BTW, JWood, when will you're "Whatever Happened To Baby Allison" and "Return of Duke" stories be finished, when will they be posted? I really want to hear them along with the Mini- Scandal stories too:D

JWood201
03-08-2003, 01:07 PM
They'll be posted as soon as they're finished...whenever that'll be. I'm a perfectionist, therefore I work slowly. LOL.

The "Return of Duke" thing'll probably be done first, since it's shorter and less-involved. I still can't tell you when. It depends on how much time I get to work on it, when and if inspiration strikes, etc...

I'll be sure to keep you posted, though. I'm glad you wanna read them!

dummygally
04-26-2003, 07:27 PM
Keep goin wit the story!

iDOhavealife
04-26-2003, 08:16 PM
Thanks for the encouragement, but actually, this fanfic is finished. I am working on a follow-up, though, but Real Life has sadly intervened, and it's not going as well as I had hoped. I'd love to have it finished sometime in the next couple of weeks, though.

:D

JWood201
04-26-2003, 08:52 PM
Huuurrry uuppp! Hehehehe.

I know, I shouldn't talk since I haven't written in months. **looks ashamed** I can't help it. **sheepish grin**

Carry on. **hobbles away**

Julie the GI girl
04-26-2003, 11:29 PM
awwww....poor little hobbler. we'll call you "Crippled Court" har har! no, seriously...feel better.

now that you're stuck sitting a lot...you can write. lol. j/k.

i got a little done!!! *grins with accomplishment* but i didn't get any farther in the plot. i just fixed a lot and added mucho dialogue. dang...it's already around 5,000 words and i'm not even a third of the way through want i want to write. and this is only the first part! will i EVER get done? ha ha.

JWood201
04-27-2003, 01:39 PM
**standing ovation** Yay, Julie! I might possibly ponder writing something soon. It all depends on the good graces of the Inspiration Fairy. **shrug**

It also depends on if I figure out where the plot is going. Right now I have no vision, no mapped out story in my mind. Which probably isn't a good thing - both for the future of my story, and for my sanity. **shrug**

I'll live. It'll get done eventually. And you'll all get to read something. Donno what it'll be, or if it'll be any good. LOL.

JWood201
06-16-2003, 09:13 PM
If I may, iDOhavealife, I'd like to post this on my site along with the "Second Ginger Grant Revisted" one. Actually, I've already linked to it, but I figured I'd ask permission since it ain't mine. **sheepish grin** So ... can I? Pwease? I wuv it ever so much!

I thank thee muchly ...

iDOhavealife
06-16-2003, 10:06 PM
Sure, please do! :D It makes me very happy that you enjoy it so much!

JWood201
06-17-2003, 12:19 AM
YAY! Thanks!

You'll be proud to know that I actually wrote a little story last night (wow!). Yeah, I know, I was shocked too. LOL. Anyway, it's still a long time coming ... Now it's your turn to write a lil somethin' else. :D tee-hee!

Tibbs
12-28-2004, 08:57 PM
iDOhavealife, that was way cute! :D

*tnCoUnTrYgal*
06-20-2005, 08:42 PM
aww...cute.