Well................................................ You guysies asked for it so I guess I have no choice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wrote this last night after watching last nights episode!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!! I love Jinny with Jack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's waaaaaaaaaaaaaay cuter and nicer than Teddy ever was!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Chapter 1

Jinny Exstead stood in front of her bathroom mirror and combed her shoulder blade length hair. She smiled at her reflection and walked out into her two brothers, John and Casey, rolling around in the floor fighting. She stepped over them and screamed, "John, you are 20 years old! You'd think you'd learn!"
John Exstead Jr. stood up panting. "Yeah, well..... Hey, what's up?" He grabbed a strand of her hair. "You're wearing your hair down."
Jinny knocked his hand away. "Jack likes it down." She walked into the kitchen and poured herself a glass of orange juice.
John and Casey followed her. "Since when do you care that a guy like your hair down?" John asked.
Jinny glared at him over the rim of her glass.
"I think it looks cute Jin," Casey smiled at his sister.
"Thank you, Casey!" Jinny grinned. "Are you going to ride the bus or do you you need me to drive you?" Casey shook his head as Jinny grabbed her keys. "Okay. Ciao!"




Hey, I'm really sorry to cut it short but I'm at school and I can get in trouble for being on here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

:D YAY KENZ! More please!

It is really great so far! Keep writing! (and posting, duh!) lol

Awww....... :blush: thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Y'all, I am sooooooo sick! I have a really bad sinus infection and yesterday I was stuck in bed so naturally I wrote more for y'all!



Chapter 2

Magda Ramirez hummed to her self as she entwined her dark hair into two French braids. She secured one with a ponytail holder and began on the other. She glanced down at the maroon ribbons under her brush. 'Jin'll have to do that for me,' she sighed. Before she had time to finish her thought, Jack Ellis sat down beside her. She nodded to acknowledge him. She finished the braid and took the other rubber band out of her mouth. "Good morning, Jack," she said cheerfully.
"Hey, Mag! Hey, Jack!" Jinny yelled as she jumped out of her car and ran towards them. She sat down on Jack's lap and he started playing with her hair.
Magda cleared her throat. "Um..... Jin? We're wearing braids tonight, remember?"
"Mmm-hmm," Jinny nodded. "But I can't do my own so I brought my comb and stuff so you could do it. Is that okay?"
"Sure. Only if you'll put my ribbons in for me. I can't ever get the name to show," Magda smiled warmly at her best friend.
Jinny hopped off Jack's lap and stood behind Magda. "Give 'em here!"
"So, Jin," Jack spoke, "Are you girls going to be able to cheer and march?"
"I guess they'll have to let us won't they?" Jinny laughed as she secured the last ribbon. "I mean, Raina's drum major and she's a cheerleader."
"Yeah," Magda added. "The band kinda can't march without her!"
"I think the question should be about you, Jack. Is Coach going to let his starting quarterback skip halftime?" Jinny handed her Magda her comb. "Please do my hair."
Jack smiled as Magda moved behind Jinny and started to braid her hair. "No, but I'm going to anyway," Jack replied.
"Jack, don't!" Jinny exclaimed, forcing Magda to yank her head back down. "Oww..."

Chapter 3

Later that night Jack and Jinny sat on the couch in his apartment. "Where did Louise come from?" He asked the brunette in his arms.
Jinny sighed. "It was my mom's name. She died when I was 14*."
Jack spoke one simple word. "How?"
"She killed her-self. I'm tired," She said hurriedly and got up smoothing her cheerleading skirt out. "I'm going home. G'night!" Jinny waved and slammed the door behind her.
"Jin, wait!" Jack tried to stop her from leaving.


* Didn't Jin's mom kill herself when Jin was 14? Or was is 15? I don't remember........ Hope y'all are likin' it so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :wave: Adios!

:clap: YAY KENZ! Ok, so this is a high school one.... lol. I didn't figur that out till now. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyways, I love it! More please chica!

AWESOME FIC!! More soon!!!

And yup, 14's correct.

Originally posted by Babes_Cat
:clap: YAY KENZ! Ok, so this is a high school one.... lol. I didn't figur that out till now. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyways, I love it! More please chica!

LOL me either! Post more please!

Okay, you guys totally disregard all of the above! Because that really sucked and I'm gonna give you a whole lot to keep you occupied!!!!!! But i have to give you background information so that you'll understand certain parts....... Part of it is incomplete because I don't know everybodies birthdays...... Check out my post on the main message board for more info.......

Name: Jinny Louise Exstead
Age: 17
B-day: April 4
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Height: 5'6"
Family: Dad, 2 brothers (John Jr. and Casey)
Love: Jack Ellis
Sch. Activities: Cheerleading, band (quads), softball, FHA
Fav. Color: Purple
Fav. Saying: "Rock on, rock on!"
Car: VW Bug
Pets: -none-
Best Friend: Magda Ramirez
Fav. Sport: To play - softball, to watch - football
E-mail: SxySftballSwthrt (If these are NEbodies I'm sorry. My friends helped me with these.)
Fav. Singer: Avril Lavigne
Fav. Song: "Unwanted"

Name: Magda Grace Ramirez
Age: 17
B-day: June 13
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Height: 5'2"
Family: Mom, Dad, 2 younger sisters (Lily, Christina)
Love: Gabriel Herrera
Sch. Act.: cheerleading, band (trumpet), show-choir, softball, FHA
Fav. Sch. Sub.: English
Fav. Color: Yellow
Fav. Saying: "If you're God's gift to women, I hope you kept the reciept."
Car: None at the moment (but Jin lets her drive her car)
Pets: Runt of the littler mini-doberman named Tornado
Best Friend: Jinny Exstead
Fav. Sport: Softball
Email: SofballGurl0504
Fav. Singer: Nicole C. Mullan
Fav. Song: "Sometimes"

Name: Jack Lawrence Ellis
Age: 18
B-day: July 31
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Height: 6'0"
Family: Somewhere but he lives alone
Love: Jinny Exstead
Sch. Act.: football, basketball, band (sax), baseball
Fav. Sch. Sub: math (right now, trig)
Fav. Color: Navy Blue
Fav. Saying: "Don't count your chickens until they've hatched."
Car: Forest green jeep
Pets: none
Best Friend: Gabriel Herrera and Nate Basso
Fav. Sport: football, softball (he likes to watch Jin play)
Email: JumpinJack04
Fav. Singer: ICP
Fav. Song: "The Dating Game"

Name: Nathan (Nate) Bartholemew Basso III
Age: 17
B-day: March 6
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Brown
Height: 6'0"
Family: Mom, Dad, sister with Downs Syndrome
Love: Lily Ramirez (he like CD though)
Sch. Act.: football, basketball, baseball, band (sax)
Fav. Sch. Sub: Lunch
Fav. Color: Orange
Fav. Saying: "Cut the blue wire."
Car: Camero (black)
Pets: Spotted poodle named Pepper
Best Friend: Jack Ellis and Gabriel Herrera
Fav. Sport: football
Email: BigDumbFace32
Fav. Singer: Good Charlotte
Fav. Song: "Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous"

Name: Candace (CD) Hope DeLorenzo (I know married name)
Age: 17
B-day: March 28
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Blonde
Height: 5'11"
Family: Mom, step-dad
Love: Like Nate but doesn't know it yet
Sch. Act.: cheerleader, basketball, softball, volleyball, track, band (tuba)
Fav. Sch. Sub: Science
Fav. Color: Red
Fav. Saying: "To each, his own."
Car: PT Cruiser her mom's boyfriend bought for her
Pets: none
Best Friend: Jinny Exstead and Magda Ramirez
Fav. Sport: softball
Email: HotCDChick13
Fav. Singer: Puddle of Mud
Fav. Song: "She Hates Me"

Name: Raina Rae Washington
Age: 17
B-day: August 31
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Height: 5'5"
Family: 2 moms
Love: none
Sch. Act.: cheerleading, Math and Science Club, Drum-Major
Fav. Sch. Sub: All of them
Fav. Color: Pink
Fav. Saying: "God Bless You"
Car: station wagon
Pets: bird named Ziggy
Best Friend: none
Fav. Sport: Cheerleading
Email: RaInArAeRoX
Fav. Singer: Play
Fav. Song: loves their whole CD

Name: Gabriel Jesus Herrera
Age: 18
B-day: June 7
Eye Color: brown
Hair Color: black
Height: 5'11"
Family: Mom, Dad
Love: Magda Ramirez
Sch. Act.: football, basketball, band (tuba)
Fav. Sch. Sub: football
Fav. Color: black
Fav. Saying: "Huh?"
Car: none
Pets: Shih Tzu dog Molly
Best Friend: Jack Ellis and Nate Basso
Fav. Sport: football
Email: MagWantsMeBad
Fav. Singer: all jazz music
Fav. Song: "Maggie" (Get it?)



SxySftballSwtHrt: Hey, peeps! What up?
SofBallGurl0504: n/m/h, Jin.
JumpinJack04: Ditto. Jin, are you coming over 2nite?
SxySftballSwthrt: I dunno. Dad has another one of his g/f's over here, so it depends on what time evil Kate leaves. :[ She vants to suck my blood! Lol.... She is seriouly evil, tho.
BigDumbFace32: Hey! Quit talking about me! Lol.... It's not nice!
SofBallGurl0504: Lily say hi, Nate.
HotCDChick: Nate, what's up with you and Lily?
BigDumbFace: What about me and Lily?
HotCDChick13: I mean, are you friends? Are you dating? Are you engaged? What's going on?
JumpinJack04: [whispers to SxySftballSwthrt] Does she like him or sumpthin?
SxySftballSwthrt: [whispers to Jack] I can find out! lol....
SxySftballSwthrt: Hey Magda and CD. Do you guys wanna have the monthly sleepover party at my house Friday after the game?
HotCDChick: Sounds good to me!
SofBallGurl: I'll have to check w/ my mom. Want me to e-mail Raina?
RaInArAeRoX: E-mail me about what?
SxySftballSwthrt: [whispers to everybody except Raina] Ok, who's the idiot that invited her in here?
SofballGurl0504: [whispers to SxySftballSwthrt] I did Jin. We need to be nice.
RaInArAeRoX: So... What's up every1?
SxySftballSwthrt: Don't you have something else to do like saving the world? Or getting a new personality?
RaInArAeRoX: Oh, Jin... You're so funny! I've already done my work at the soup kitchen today!
SxySftballSwthrt: Well, I don't know abou you guys but I have softball in an hour and I have to stop by Jacks! Adios!

:lol: I love how you made that a conversation.... that was great Hun. More please, and soon! :)

Hey! I'm realllllllly glad that you guys liked it... So, I'm gonna be nice and type s'moa for ya!

Jinny Exstead signed off her computer and grabbed her car keys on the computer desk. She was glad she had softball practice; it would give her an excuse to talk to Magda and to stop be Jack's apartment. She stuffed her keys into her pocket and gathered her hair into a ponytail as she made her way down the hall. She passed her brothers, John's, room and banged on the door over loud heavy metal music blasting from inside his room. The door opened and John Exstead Jr. stuck his head out. "What do you want?" he asked.
Jinny secured the ponytail with an elastic band. "I need you to pick up Casey this week." She pushed him aside, entered his room and shut off the music.
"Why do I have to pick up the spaz? You're the one he idolizes." John was still yelling over the music, even though it was turned off.
Jinny rolled her eyes. "Because Monday and Tuesday, I have a softball tournament, Wednesday I have cheerleading, Thursday I have an FHA trip, and Friday there's an away game." Jinny stuck out her bottom lip and pouted. "Please?"
John thought about it for a minute. "Well... If I do this, I'm going to have to be well compensated. Gas there and back, an oil change, a--"
"An oil change?" Jinny shouted at her older brother.
John held up his hands apolegetically. "Hey, it'll be 3,000 miles if I pick him up every day! I don't make the rules!"
Jin raised her eyebrows. "Will you do it or not?"
"For pay!" John said.
Jin smiled. "For the pleasure it brings. 'Bye!" She said and left him and figure it out.



Well, y'all....... I g2g.... Adios!

:D More please.

Well, thank you muches Babes_Cat since you appear to be the only one reading this!!!!! Lol...... NEwayz, I haven't had time to post more because we've been taking standarized (sp? thatz a big word) at school this week..... But, here ya go!

Magda Ramirez smiled as she slid her hand into the softball glove. She had played softball for the past seven years and been on the high school varsity fast-pitch team since she was a freshman. It was the first practice of the season and all of Magda's friends that played were excited but none as anxious as Magda. She was the pitcher this year and she was going to lead her team to state. She heard a voice behind her. "Beautiful day, isn't it?" Magda recognized the voice as her coach's.
She turned around. "Yes, it is. It's usually never this warm in Spetember." Coach Johnson was an athletic woman with greying hair.
"I hadn't expected anyone to be here this early. We still have half an hour before practice starts," Coach smiled at Magda.
"I bought a new glove and wanted to get the feel of it."
"Come on. I'll throw a few to you. Y'know, Ramirez?" Coach asked as she and the pretty Latina threw the ball back and forth. "I think this is year we win state."
Magda was comforted by the soft thud the ball made as it sunk into her glove. "We're gonna have a pretty good team this year, Coach. I really think we can win if we try. Well, and if we have a good day."
"We can win if we don't give a rip. Since the school is in 5A now, it's gonna be a piece of cake."
"I hope so. I'd hate to lose every game my senior year," Magda replied and threw the ball back to her coach.

CD DeLorenzo carefully steered her candy-apple read PT Cruiser into the parking lot of Tillman high school. She pulled the car expertly into the parking spot and turned the key to off. She grabbed her duffle bag the held her cheerleading stuff and opened the door. She locked it and heard the cries of her fellow cheerleaders Jenny Morgan and Raina Washington. "Are you excited?" Jenny shrieked.
"I am, totally!" Raina replied.
CD listened to their constant chatter for about .5 more seconds before shouting, "Have you seen Brian?"
They stood stunned for a moment before pointing over their left shoulders and saying in unison, "He's over there with Jack, Natem and Gabe."
CD smiled. "Thanks!" She strolled hurriedly over to where Brian stood and pulled him over to the side. "We need to talk."
"What is it, Candy Cane?" Brian's hand stroked the side of her face.
She pushed his hand indignantly away. "Don't call me that anymore. You don't have the right. Brian, this isn't working. Really."
"Is it because I'm black and you friends don't think a mixed relationship will work?"
"No!" CD replied. "It just wouldn't be fair to either of us. Let's just be friends, okay?" Brian said something, but CD didn't hear it because one of her best friends in the entire world, Jinny Exstead, had just arrived. CD knew it without turning around, because Jinny was known to arrive in her VW Bug with Avril Lavigne blasting through the open windows.
The music stopped as aruptly as it began, and Jinny Exstead and Magda Ramirez approached the group. CD overheard a piece of the conversation as they neared her.
"Hey, CD!" Jinny yelled as Magda tried in vain to het her attention.
"A word about your driving, Jin," Magda said. "It's horrible."
Jinny shook her head. "That fire-hydrant came out of nowhere!"
Magda rolled her eyes and scoffed. "Whatever. Hi, CD. Where are you practice clothes?"
"They're in my gym bag. I was just headed to change. Will you guys come with me?"
"Oh, hey, I'd love to, but, y'know, I've got a thing..." Jinny pointed to Jack.
Magda and CD rolled their eyes. "Okay... Whatever, Jin," Magda said and she and CD started toward the bathroom.

"Is everybody here?" Magda smiled as she surveyed the eleven cheerleaders stretching before her. "Okay... Then, is everybody warmed up?" She waited for nods before she sprang her idea. "Okay, guys, for those of us that were here last year, Jin, CD, Lauri, Kelsi, Bo, and myself, remeber who bad we looked at districts last year. But now, we have a new sponsor, Mrs. Bartholomew," Magda paused as the new sponsor held her video camera and waved. "And," Magda continued. "New captains. Me and Jinny Exstead."
"We spent the whole summer devising a new schedule. We're going to practice longer, harder, and more intensely." Jinny stood up with a clipboard in hand. "And this year..." She paused melodramatically and looked at Magda. "We build," they said together.
"What!" Raina lept to her feet. "We can't build! The school board said it was too dangerous!"
Jinny scoffed. "Screw the school board!"
"We talked to them already," Magda interrupted and gave Jinny a disapproving glare. "Jin, motto 5!" Magda said warningly.
Jinny's eyes widened. "You're not... No, Mag!"
"Jin... 'I will not...'" Magda stopped there to let Jinny finish.
"'I will not bring down my superiors, elders, or fellow squad members. We are sisters that nothing can ruin. I will not speak word against them because I wouldn't want to hurt my family.' Happy?" Jinny said sarcastically.
"Okay people!" Mag clapped her hands twice. "Let's go! Since Raina, Jenny, Jinny, CD, and I are the smallest, we're going to be the flyers, okay? First you hold your hands like this." She entertwined her fingers as she spoke. "Jin, you be the other base and Raina will fly. CD you be on back and be ready to catch her if she falls. Raina, balance yourself on our shoulders and put your feet in out hands. When you're ready, tell us and we'll lift you. Okay, go." Magda and Jinny kneeled and Raina securely locked her feet in place.
"I think I'm ready now guys," Raina said.
"Okay, Raina, now lock you knees and Jinny and I are going to stand up. When we are all the way up, pull your right leg up, okay? Ready, Jin?" Magda watched carefully for any mistakes that Raina might make. "1, 2, 3... Up!" She and Jin slowly raised their hands to shoulder level and stood up and as Magda gave Raina the okay to pull her leg into a liberty there was a wolf whistle from behind them. Raina lost concentration and balance in mid-liberty, but Jinny and Magda had prepared for this, so they expertly let her feet go and caught her in a perfect cradle.
Mrs. Bartholomew bounded down the bleachers. "Who whistled?"
Magda's boyfriend, Gabriel Herrera came in with Jack. "I'm sorry, ma'am. I did," Gabriel confessed.
"Perhaps we should cancel practice for today girls. We'll continue where we left off tomorrow, okay?" Mrs. Bartholomew shoved past Gabriel, Jack, Jinny, and Magda. "I swear, wolf whistling in the middle of cheerleading practice!" she mumbled walking past them.
"Hey, are we still going to the drive-in tonight?" Jinny asked Jack.
"Aww... How sweet!" Magda said and then hit Gabe playfully. "We never go anywhere!"
"Hey," Jack said. "Why don't you guys come with us?"
"Yeah!" Jinny replied. "There's enough room in Jack's jeep. Come on! It'll be fun! Please!"
"Sure!" Gabe smiled at Magda, as she turned the color of her burgandy gym shorts.

Well, guys thatz all!!!! I'll write s'moa on spring break! BTW, Teddy's going to be an issue!!! And Nate and CD might have a thing going!! LOL! Adios.....
:wave:

HAPPY SPRING BREAK!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by Diamond_Dust_31
Well, thank you muches Babes_Cat since you appear to be the only one reading this!!!!! Hey, one is better than none right? ;) YAY! And Teddy trouble.... oh oh oh! More please!

Lucky duck... I'm not on Spring Break till the 3rd week in April. :(

I'm still reading!!! This is awesome!! More soon por favor!

I WANT MORE!!! COME ON....GET A POSTING! I love these conversations. They're so funny.

POST MORE!!! I LOV E THIS STORY!!!

Hey guys, Check out Senior Year. It's the same thing. SO...

Going back to the hair color and eye color info, Jinny's hair is black with reddish highlights. Yes her eyes are indeed green, but they also naturally change colors based on her surroundings and mood and time of day. You can say they are green when there is no other colors around her and she's wearing nothing but white. You can say that Jinny has camelion eyes, very similar to Vanessa Williams eyes, plus at certain times of day, her eyes will mutate in color, especially at sunset.

Now for Magda. Magda's hair is not black or brown, but amber. Her eyes are either hazel or greenish-brown or brownish-hazel-green or just plain hazel(light brown with smidgets of green/gold).

Nate Russo. His hair is black. His eyes are a dark gray color.

Don't beleive me, just look at any division eppisode where Nate is outdoors. At times his eyes tend to shine a brightish gray color, because his eyes are gray. Magda's eyes are actually a very dark olive color(extremely dark greenish to greenish-brown color) just like Tyra Banks or country singer Shanaya Twains eyes. It's just hard to tell because Magda's skin is actually olive colored, not light brown like some think. You can actually even tell.

Jinny's eyes also turn violet(blueish purple or purplish-blue), silver, and gray, all on it's own. The violet color probably comes rarely, most likely due to her surroundings.

Ak, is Taraji's b-day 8/31? And is Jon's 3/6? I dunno, coz I can't find them...

Originally posted by croatian_princess
Ak, is Taraji's b-day 8/31? And is Jon's 3/6? I dunno, coz I can't find them...

Actually, I think Taraji's is Aug. 19 and Jon's is somewhere in Feb-Mar. I couldn't find it either, so I just made up a date based on his atrological sign, (Pices). And thanks for all the info, dali lama. I don't really pay that close attention and would have nver noticed all of that... Thanks.

Other people tell me that Jinny's eyes are a light aqua to light green color, while Magda's eyes are dark green. Yes, dark green does look brownish in color from a distance. I call the kind of eyes that Magda has "Military Camoflage type green", or just plain camo-green. Yes, it's a dark shade of green, indeed.