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MariposaLKB
06-20-2001, 04:27 PM
I usually write original stuff, but the last time my daughter was listening to her Allan Jackson Greatest Hits CD, when he was singing "Midnight in Montgomery", I suddenly got the idea for "Midnight in Los Angeles" So in honor of Freddie's birthday, here is what I wrote:

Midnight in Los Angeles

Midnight in Los Angeles, I walked up a lonely road,
and thought how last I saw him was his last New Year’s Eve show.
I stopped at the marble wall where I knew he could be found,
knelt to pray and saw his name, and felt the wind die down.
Then a dark man with the sweetest laugh took me by surprise
wearing black dress boots, a blue velvet suit, and haunting haunted eyes.
He said, “Mami, buenos noches, it’s cool to know you care.”
Then the wind picked up and he was gone--was he ever really there?

When it’s midnight in Los Angeles
you’ll hear him laughing still,
see his smile light up the starry sky
but feel a lonely chill.
And when the wind is right
you might smell smoke
and wine upon the air.
Midnight in Los Angeles--
Freddie’s always laughing there.

Anna
06-20-2001, 05:49 PM
That was so cool!! It had a lot of feeling,good job my friend.

Karen64
06-20-2001, 06:46 PM
Bravo, Mariposa! Those lyrics were beautiful!
I can picture Freddie, tall dark and handsome! Mmmmmmmmm!

Pitooey
06-20-2001, 07:51 PM
To think that we all love this man so much. That his laughter is still with us after all these years. The poem was very impressive. I know he's smiling at you today!

atlangel
06-20-2001, 08:12 PM
MariposaLKB, Wow! I love the lyrics you have composed for Freddie. I am so touched by your talent and insightfulness. What a moving, stirring and beautiful tribute to him. Through your words, I can envision his smile, hear his laughter, and see his soulful eyes. Thank you for reaching inside your heart and sharing your lovely and heartfelt sentiments.
I am sure Freddie is smiling on you and is thrilled by all the love expressed here for him on a daily basis.
FREDDIE FOREVER!

MariposaLKB
06-20-2001, 08:30 PM
Thank you all so very much for your sweet words! I cannot take all the credit--Allan Jackson wrote a beautiful, haunting song about a visit to the grave of Hank Williams (I think it really happened, perhaps not the ghostly visitor, but the stop at the grave) and I just thought so strongly of visiting Freddie while I listened to it recently with my daughter. I especially love the description of "haunting, haunted eyes", which is just how I always think of Freddie's, so I kept that. Again, thank you all and of course thanks to Allan Jackson and most of all to our beloved Freddie.

Joy
06-20-2001, 08:35 PM
Beautiful lyrics, I love that song anyway but now that I have those beautiful words in my mind I'll enjoy it even more because I'll think Of Freddie.
Thank you

hue_mee
06-20-2001, 08:46 PM
That was beautiful ! Freddie Is smiling down at you ! Girl ,he would be so proud !

Luckymama58
06-20-2001, 10:09 PM
What a beautiful tribute to our handsome friend. I could picture him standing right there beside you in those lyrics as it says he came to the grave and then disappeared. Gave me chills, in a good way! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif