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Here's a poem I wanted to share I hope it's alright for me to post it here.
Why did you leave?
You are gone,there's still so much for you to do.
There's stil so much for you to see.
Why did you leave?
You are gone,there's still so much you should experience.
We need your laughter.
We need your smile that helped make each day worthwhile.
You are gone, it wasn't our choice,but yours.
Why did you leave?
Peace you were searching for,hope you longed to see,
love you needed to feel, your body you needed God to heal.
I hope you found what you needed and in God's arms you now rest.
Why did you leave?
To us you were the best>
Hello Joy,
My name is De De, and I must say, this ia a beautiful poem. It is sweet, sad, and full of the truth, would you like for me to post your poem in our web site, under a topic we have called "poems for Freddie"? If so, I will put it in and given you full credit as the writer, I will wait for you to answer.
Once again, this is a beautiful heart touching poem.
Love
DE DE
atlangel 06-01-2001, 12:08 PM Joy, let me be the first to commend and compliment you to the highest degree! You have written a touching, sweet, caring poem that echoes what is in my heart. The questions, the pain, the sorrow. You are clearly a very talented artist. Please continue to create and share. You have touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. Wow, this is a powerful poem delivered with the delicacy of an angel. I know this was sensitive for you to speak about, but you have connected with each of our souls! I hope to see and hear much more from you if possible. Know that, this day, Freddie smiles and nods to you with understanding of your feelings.
Luckymama58 06-01-2001, 12:32 PM What a beautiful poem, Joy. Thanks for sharing it with us! It helps all of us to keep Freddie in our hearts when we can be creative. I know it helps me every time I write another chapter on my story and post it! It's like Freddie is beside me. Keep on sharing!
Joy you made my tears come, How I wish dear Freddie were still here.
catcopy18 06-01-2001, 06:39 PM Perfectly said and painfully truthful!
What a beautifully written poem Joy!
luckymama58,
thank you for your kind words of encouragement about my poem.
what story are you writting? i would really like to read it where can I find it?
Karen64 06-01-2001, 11:49 PM Joy, that is such a beautiful poem! Freddie would be so touched!
Luckymama58 06-02-2001, 09:22 AM Thank you for inquiring about my story. I haven't revealed my identity before this cause I'm shy (also some personel issues I needed to deal with) But if you go to http://www.freddieprinze.homestead.com
and look for the first 6 chapters of the story "Salvation" I'm Dulcinea. (you know that wasn't as bad as I thought it would be! coming out like that! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/wink.gif )
flannelpjs 06-02-2001, 01:29 PM Joy, what a wonderful, touching heartfelt poem...it brought tears to my eyes and a lump to my throat...please keep up the good work..
bella66 06-05-2001, 10:09 PM Joy, just read your poem. was beautiful!
Beautiful poem - maybe Freddie sees it. I hope he feels all the love on this board!
atlangel 06-07-2001, 10:03 AM To Luckymama58:
I love the way you write. Your work is wonderful and much appreciated. I am enjoying your story more than I can say. Please keep up the great work. You are a very talented and gifted writer.
Luckymama58 06-07-2001, 04:54 PM Thank you for your kind words of encouragement, atlangel. This is my first attempt at writing, and I've been very nervous about it. All I can say is that I have a great source of inspiration in Freddie and great friends who keep encouraging me. Keep going over to the site cause Ch 8 should be posted soon! And keep telling all the authors what you think. Thats the only way to keep them writing!
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