You know, a few days ago, I thought that I have given up writing fanfiction. But in my 20+ I have been here, I thought about what I was missing. Well, with this new generation of fanfic writers here, I wanna let you know... that I am BACK at fanfic writing. Here's a taste of my own fanfiction.

Here's my comeback to fanfiction making. I hope you guys will enjoy this.

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György Ligeti's "Lontano" plays...

The camera shows an old wooden operating table, and we are looking at the feet and shackled ankles of an unfortunate victim. We slowly move up the body as it shows us a pair sexy and beautiful legs and thighs. We see now a pair of light skin colored underwear adorning the victim's waist area, and we see the shackled hands and wrists. We now see a woman's upper body with a skin colored woman's bra on. The chest area slowly heaves and falls with a woman's pained and soft breathing. We slowly move to the woman's shoulder length brown hair. We get to see her face as her lips are slightly opened. Her loving, beautiful and caring brown eyes are shown with dread, fear, and sadness as she tries to flutter them to get a better view. Her full head of hair is also beautiful and nicely combed.

This victim is... Lauren Easton!

Lauren slowly looks at her surroundings, and she has never been to an old, dreary basement/workshop in her life. She seems to wake up from her drunken state, her dizziness all gone. She slowly moves her head and see all the twisted tools of the trade, and her clothes she wore at the Big Brothers Big Sisters charity are in a wardrobe. She also sees beakers of dangerous solvents, cannisters that says "W" on the labels, and quick drying glue.

Lauren begins to shed tears as she still feels the pain of the shackles, as she sees a hideous person approaching her. Lauren's eyes are pleading at this person.

"Please... Help me, please...", Lauren tearfully said as she broke down. "Let me... Go...", she continued to cry.

The person gets some tissue paper, and roughly wipes the mascara and tears from her eyes, and she feels the stinging pain from the rubbing. Lauren violently breathes air out of her mouth, with her chest violently rising and falling with every breath.

Lauren continues her saddened pleas not to do anything awful like the person has done. "Please... No more... Pain...", Lauren harshly said, but the person is not buying it.

The person wheels an apparatus of eight needles full of something that's quite dangerous. Lauren looks at this hideous looking thing, and she violently tries to get out of the shackles, but they are too strong for Lauren's wrists and ankles. The person wheels it over to the table. Lauren's eyes are wide with fear as she can't believe she has to face eight needles of terror. The person strategically places the needles on her legs and arms. Checking each one to see if the juice comes out of each needle, the person violently jams the needles in Lauren's arms and legs, causing her in scream in pain, like a tortured animal.

Each needle is pumping a chemical in which the muscles become inoperative and super numb, that she would not have control over them forever. Lauren feels the fluids entering her arm and leg muscles, rendering them crippled like broken bones. Once enough fluid is pumped in her, the person removes all eight needles, and wheels the apparatus away.

Lauren begins to breathe really heavily now, and is still breathing violently as the fluids take over her muscles, as she can not move her arms and legs, except her head.

"Please... No... Please... don't... hurt... me...", Lauren tearfully and quietly said as she can't move her body.

The person gets a bigger needle with the same fluid, and gets the juice out of it, and jams it in her chest area near her heart, causing her to scream more. The person inserted enough fluid and discards the needle. Lauren slowly tries to breathe with her chest, but thanks to the fluid entering her chest muscles, her chest slowly rises and falls in a minimum rate, little by little.

The person gets a funnel and a container of a dangerous solvent. The person takes it to the already tortured Lauren, but the person is not finished with the torture on a beautiful, nice, caring and young woman who made children happy. This person wants to make her suffer with dread, fear and pain. The person roughly places the funnel in her mouth. The person picks up the container, and pours this dangerous solvent in her mouth, causing a burning sting inside her throat and her upper system! Lauren tries to make the loudest sounds of pain, but she is forced to drink the dangerous solvent. Lauren feels the burning inside her throat and her insides as the person finishes the container and tosses it aside, along with the funnel. Lauren tries to cough out the remaining bits of the solvent, but it's already inside her system, rendering her vocal cords, except the art of moaning with her slightly opened mouth.

The person gets a small jar of quick drying glue. The person adds a spoon of glue. The person goes to Lauren, and violently closes up her lips. The person pours the glue on her closed lips, and blows on them to get her lips to dry. The glue succeeds, and Lauren is in a state to make moans instead of speaking.

Lauren's insides are still burning with the solvent, and her heart is beating with fear. The person then gets a sheet of super sticky fly paper. The person sticks the fly paper on Lauren's face, causing Lauren to moan in more pain. After a few seconds after it's applied, the glue is stuck to her face, and the person violently rips it off, revealing Lauren's eyebrow hair being yanked off.

With Lauren's body immobilized with fluid and solvent, the person unshackles Lauren's restraints, and carries her to an apparatus with rows of sprays, and a vat of wax above. The person sets Lauren's body standing up, and makes a standing pose that will keep her body balanced.

We are shown a hand opening Lauren's right eyelid and placing an eye shield to prevent her eye from closing. He does the same thing to her left eye. Lauren is without eyebrows since he ripped them out with parchment paper. Now the person fixes her brown hair in a bun and places a helmet on her head to prevent the wax from getting in her hair.

Lauren tries to make sounds, but thanks to the glue he applied to her lips, she won't be able to talk.

Lauren's body is covered with just a skin colored bra and underwear.

The person re-fixes Lauren's pose as a standing figure, carefully opens her fingers.

As the person switches on the valve, Lauren's moans are getting loud with fear as she hears the wax begin to bubble. Lauren tries to heave to chest, but the embalming fluid in her body renders her chest muscles inoperative. Lauren hears her heart beat louder and faster and she knows that fear is coming for her. The sprayers begin to steam out as wax begins to come out of them. Lauren begins to feel the heat as a ring of blue flame dances around the vat, high above her.

Lauren continues to try and make more sounds, but only to louder extremes as the sprayers begin to become active as more wax comes down from the vat.

Lauren also can't see due to the shielding and the immovable eyelids.

The sprayers begin to spit more steam, and begin to spit more wax, and Lauren's moans are beginning to be more louder.

Before she knows what's coming to her, the sprayers begin to spray hot wax, full force, at Lauren's frozen body, and Lauren lets out a ear piercing moan! The sprays encase Lauren with wax and steam smoking on her body. Her loudest moans made her feel hotter than down below, and she didn't deserve to be a wax figure. Lauren would begin to cry, but she can't. Lauren would want to breathe, but she can't due to the wax encasing her. Lauren's heart is beating at a quickest rate, she wouldn't stand the heat as the wax continues to spray on Lauren.

After the person sees that the sprayed wax on Lauren's steamed body is just right, he switches the apparatus off. The sprays around Lauren slowly die down and steam still appear from the tips of the sprayers.

Lauren feels the immense pain her skin has caused due to the steam rising, burning her skin, and continues to moan in pain.

The person moves the sprayers to the side, and then proceeds to do another thing on Lauren's waxed body.

The person gets his putty knife ready to smooth the bumps and drippings off the excess wax on her body. He even wipes the excess off her bra and underwear. Lauren continues to moan in extreme pain as he continues to smooth the wax.

After the body is all smoothed up, the person takes off the helmet, and takes the eye shields off her eyes without any problems. Lauren still has the power to move her eyeballs, but can not blink due to the wax making them immobilized. The person takes her wax encased body to the cooling fans. the person switches them on at the right temperature, fanning cold air to freeze the wax so Lauren will not be able to move at all. Lauren continues to moan under the cold temperature.

Moments later, Lauren's waxen body is prepared for the museum, and the person takes the MMA clothes from a clothes hamper. It's a MMA attire of a dark blue sports bra with the zipper on the back, and short MMA shorts with a zipper on each side. He takes them, and goes to the wig-block. He chooses a wig with 6 corn lines, 3 on each side, and dark brunette is the color. The wig is like Hilary Swank's hair from "Million Dollar Baby". the person takes this wig along with the clothing to Lauren's waxed body.

Lauren continues to moan and looks at the attire. the person strategically places the sports bra on her, and covers the skin colored bra, and carefully zips the back. Now he places the MMA shorts where her skin colored underpants are, and zips up the both sides of the shorts effortlessly. Next he grabs some MMA ankle tape and applies the tape of each foot. And finally, the person places the Hilary Swank wig under Lauren's bun of brown hair. the person almost forgets the real important things: A pair of fingerless MMA gloves made of leather. He places them carefully on each hand, and fixes them to make sure the fingers are properly secure, and seals the wrist straps on Lauren's wrists. the person then places false eyebrows on Lauren's old eyebrow locations.

the person stands back and admire the latest creation: Lauren Easton as a MMA Fighter before her last fight to the death. To Lauren's mind when being encased in wax, she was a caring, sweet, nice, and beautiful Big Sister to be around with children, and a big nightclub goer, but now... Lauren will now have nothing but immobilization, a dying heart beat, moans, and her moving eyeballs. This is going to be the end of Lauren.
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Does this fanfic remind you of the 2005 remake of a 1953 movie?

I have included a photo of the young woman who is a victim in this fanfic. I still love to make horror and thriller fanfics after all these years.
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WELCOME

BACK!!!!

GLAD YOU'RE STAYING HERE

HAPPY POSTING

Thank you, and I am very happy to come back in the world of fanfiction.

By the way, what do you think of my fanfic? And I like details on what you thought of it. Don't be shy. :)

Ahhhhh thank you for staying sweetie..


Im sorry your having a hard time. We all are I think :(


You have talent buddy!

Well, dude, thank you for making me feel better. :) I am recovering now, and decided to write a preview to make my comeback.

BTW, dude, what did you think of my little preview?

It really shows what ya can do :)

Would ya like to share with us whats bothering you? We could help ya feel even happier :)

I thought that my other fanifcs would be no good, and I never finished with my Facts Of Life/Silent Hill crossover, thinking my career as a fanfic writer would be at a close. I have had writer's block, and my zest for checking out Silent Hill became zero. I thought I would continue, but... That's when I quit.

Until I got this thought about seeing "House of Wax" from 1953, and combining it from the 2005 remake which I read the script only, and I got to write a preview for a NEW fanfic I was making based on "House of Wax". Instead of Wade (2005 movie) getting waxed, I thought "Why not have a sexy, hot, nice, pretty, and beautiful young woman in her 20s get waxed by the Sinclairs? This would show women that they can become tortured with pain, dread and fear as they become encased in wax!" When I looked at this woman I uploaded along with my preview, I think "She's the right choice for a woman to be waxed! She's PERFECT!" And thanks to my energy, I wrote this preview for the fanfic I am going to make! :)

Also, like icecream says about lovable sitcom characters being killed in various fanfics in the "Delete the fanfics" board, I had to use my PTSD and think about a Wax Museum with TV characters in wax, posed in different crime poses with video game backgrounds.

Imagine THIS, based on what icecream posted, there's a Wax Museum Bo Sinclair owns, and it has Dwayne F. Schneider as a Wax figure dressed in Arthur Morgan's western duds from Red Dead Redemption 2, another exhibit with WWE Superstar Becky Lynch dressed as Kim Possible with her spy attire with the trademark hair, Cody Lambert in Tommy Vercetti's Vice City attire, a Los Santos exhibit where Steve Urkel is CJ Johnson, and Carl Winslow is Officer Frank Tenpenny in a gun fight, the possibilities are ENDLESS! I can use icecream's post as inspiration for the House of Wax museum!

Do you guys think I can go for the comeback? :)

BTW, do you guys also feel sympathy for Lauren as much as I do?

Yes, I think you could do the comeback. And I really liked the idea icecream had, of killing off Ricky, the little kid who couldn't sing, who briefly joined The Partridge Family in season 4.

Thank you, Stevea. I have this idea for all the members here, including icecream if this person is still with us...

What other lovable sitcom characters, or superstars should I add as video game characters or anime characters as wax figures for the Wax Museum segment in my fanfic?

Anyway, I hope everybody is having a future New Year's Eve, and I made a few adjustments to this teaser. I also have 2 more photos of my inspiration to be the victim. If you look at her face, do you guys feel sympathy for this victim to be waxed with torture?