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Jack's Beatle Poster
08-25-2001, 03:34 PM
ALL IN THE FAMILY FAN FICTION by Dustin Viney
August 25, 2001
"Edith's Visitor"
Special Guest Star: Jennilee Harrison as Cindy Snow
once upon a time, during the later years of All In The Family...
*pardon some of my spelling, I was typing too fast!!*

(Edith is in the kitchen chopping carrots into little peices & humming)
(Little Stephanie is sitting at the kitchen table doing her home work)
Edith: La de de doo doo...Hmm hmm hmmmm...moooon riiiiiverrr!!
(Edith tosses the chopped carrots into a pot filled with broth)
(She gets out some tomatoes and starts chopping them)
Steffy: What are you making, aunt Edith?
Edith: I'm making stew tonite, Steffy!
Steffy: Oh. Okay.
Edith: Da da daaa....moon riiiiiiiverrrr!!!!...
(Steffy plugs her ears, sticks out her toung and crosses her eyes)
Edith: La de deeeee....*singing louder* moooon riiiiiverrrrr!!!!!!!
(Steffy sighs and gathers all her work together and heads to the living room)
(Archie comes in the front door)
Archie: *as he hangs up his coat* No good filthy pinkos!! Always...
(Steffy runs up to Archie and hugs him)
Steffy: Hi uncle Archie!
Archie: Oh hiya there kido. EDITH, I'M HOME, HERE!
(Edith runs out of the kitchen)
Edith: *as she runs* Arrrr-ch--ie-ie-ie!! *hugs him* Your home! *kisses his cheeck*
Archie: I know that Edit'! Quit slobberin'! Why isn't supper on the table heh?!
Edith: Tonite we're having vegtable stew!
Archie: Well where is it, I sure don't see it on the table over there!
Edith: That's cause we're havin' company tonite, Archie! And so--
Archie: Aw holy geez, there you go again inviting another one of your giddy friends without asking me first!! I'm the man of the house around here, Edit'! I decide if we have company or not and tonite is a big NO!
Edith: But Archie, I haven't seen her in ova' 8 years! And she flew alll the way from LA 'fer a job interview and she needs a place to stay for the weekend and I already told her yes!
Archie; Well I say NO! She can stay in a hotel!! Now you get whatshername on the horn there and tell her she's not welcome here!!
Edith: Oh but Archie I can't, she's already on her way in a cab now, she'll be here in a few minutes!
Archie: Getting back on the main subject, Edit' where's dinner?!
Edith: It's cookin', Archie, it's cookin'!
Archie: A man works hard all day. He comes home and expects to see dinna' on the table there!
Edith: Oh Archie *pinches his cheeck* your so cute when you get angry! *giggles*
(Steffy laughs)
Archie: Edit' how many times do I gotta tell ya, don't fondle me when I get home from work! What are you laughin' at little goil!
Steffy: Nothin'!
Archie: You should know better than to do a thing like that in front of the n-e-p-h-e-w, Edit'!
Steffy: I'm your neice, uncle Archie.
Archie: Hey hey hey! You better watch that smart mouth of yours there!
Edith: *sniffing the air* Ohh my! My stew!! *runs into the kitchen*
Archie: Eh, while yer in there Edith, how 'bout at least bringing me a beer, huh?!
Edith: *from kitchen* Okayy Archie!!
(Archie sits down in his chair, puts on his reading glasses, and reads the newspaper)
(Steffy sits down in Edith's chair and finishes her home work)
(Doorbell rings)
Archie: Aw geez!! A man can't even sit down and read the paper without lousy company throwin' there weight around!
Steffy: I'll get it!! *runs to the door*
Archie: Tell 'em to go to hell will ya, kiddo?
(Steffy answers the door)
(Jennilee Harrison as Cindy Snow is at the door)
Steffy: Hi! You must be Cindy, aunt Edith's friend!
Cindy: I sure am! Hi!
(Archie hides himself behind the news paper)
Steffy: I'm Stephanie.
Cindy: Hello there Stephanie!
Steffy: Just a sec, I'll get aunt Edith.
Cindy: Okay!
Steffy: *stands by Archie's chair and screams* AUNT EDITH!!!!
Archie: HOLY GEEZ!!! *covers his ears*
(Edith rushes in with a beer)
Edith: Heeeere's your beeer Ar--OHH CINDY! *drops the beer on the floor and it explodes*
Cindy: Edith!!
(Edith runs over to Cindy and hugs her)
Archie: *thows down the newspaper* AWW GEEEZ LOOK WHAT YOU DID TO MY BEER, EDIT'!!!!
(Steffy sits back down on the chair)
Edith: Oh! I'm sorry Archie! I'll get you another one! Cindy, why don't you come in and make yourself comfy on the couch! Dinner will be ready in a few minutes! *runs to the kitchen*
Cindy: Okay!!
(Cindy slams the door hard & a window breaks)
Cindy: Oops! I'm so sorry about that!!
Archie: LOOK WHAT YOU DID THERE!!! NOW YOU KNOW YOU GOTTA PAY 'FER THAT!!!
(Steffy giggles)
Cindy: Hey, I don't believe we've met! You must be Archie! *holds out her hand*
Archie: *stares at her palm* the hell do youse want, a tip?
Cindy: No silly! Friendly hand shake!
Archie: Oh yeh. Right. *shakes her hand* Uh eh how do ya do there.
(Edith walks out of the kitchen with a beer)
Edith: *walking over to Archie* Here's your beer, Archie! *notices the hand shake* Awww isn't that nice!
Archie: Give it to me will youse!! Don't just stand there gawking at us like you was some sorta
pre-vert! *grabs the beer out of Edith's hand*
Edith: Dinner will be ready shortly! You two just sit and get accquanted! *trots off into the kitchen humming*
(Archie opens his beer and sips it then burps)
Cindy: So! Archie, why don't you show me around! I'd love to see the upstares!
Archie: Why? There aint nothin' up there but the terlet. *takes a sip & burps*
Cindy: But Archie, isn't my room up there?!
Steffy: Here Cindy, I'll show you to our room! We're gonna be room mates!
Cindy: Okay!
(Steffy runs up stares)
Cindy: Nice meetin' ya Arch! *goes to shake his hand, but she makes him drop his beer all over his lap*
Archie: OHH GEEZ LOOKIT THAT!! LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE NOW!!!
Cindy: Oh I'm so sorry, Archie! Here, lemme clean it up! *takes a napkin and trys to wipe up the beer all over Archie's lap*
Archie: *pushes her hand away* Woah woah woah!! I'll handle it from here, youse go upstares!!
Cindy: I'm so so sorry Archie! *grabs her bags and heads upstares*
Archie: EDIT'! EDITH, COME OUT HERE!
(Edith comes out of the kitchen)
Edith: Yeah Archie?
Archie: That woman has got to GO!
Edith: Oh Archie!! Why don't you just give her a chance?? She's a very sweet girl!
Archie: Oh yeh very sweet, very sweet! You call this very sweet?!! *points to the spilled beer all over his lap*
Edith: Oh Archie! What happend there?! Did you have a little accident? *giggles*
Archie: Oh yeah, laugh it up laugh it up!!
Edith: Why don't you go upstares an' change, Archie? Dinner's almost done! And I'll get ya anotha beer! *giggle*
(Archie starts to walk upstares but slips on the 3rd step because Cindy dropped one of her socks on the step from her bags)
(Archie falls on his back)
Archie: *lying down* EDITH!!! MAN DOWN! MAN DOWN! I SWEAR THAT WOMAN IS TRYING TO KILL ME BY DA END OF THE DAY!!
(Edith walks in)
Edith: Oh Archie, get up off the floor, silly! Dinners ready.
Archie: Well help me up, will youse?!!
Edith: *kneels down on the ground* DINNER'S READY!!! *helps Archie up*
Archie: Ow geez are you tryin' to blow my ears out?! *stands and dusts himself off, blocking the final bottom step*
Cindy: We're coming, Edith!
(Cindy runs down the stares and knocks Archie down when she reaches the final steps)
Cindy: Oh no!! Mister Bunker, are you hurt?!!!
Archie: *lying on his back again* Only a fractured skull, that's all!!
Edith: Oh my!!! Archie!
Cindy: Ohhh I'm so sorry!!!
*Edith and Cindy help him up*
Cindy: Gee, mister Bunker! What can I do to make all this up to you??
Archie: Just help Edith get supper on the table will youse?!!
Cindy: Yes sir!
(Edith and Cindy run to the kitchen)
(Edith and Cindy pour the stew into 4 bowls)
Cindy: Edith, I feel terrible about all of this!
Edith: Oh don't worry about it, it's not 'yer fault! Archie is always clumsy like that! *giggles*
(Steffy comes down stares)
Archie: *sitting at the dinner table* Hey kiddo. Come ova here.
(Steffy jumps into Archie's lap)
Archie: Oww geez, I've had enough torture down there for one day, gimme some breathin' room will youse?!!
Steffy: Sorry uncle Archie.
Archie: Sorry...ugh...I never wanna hear that word again, it means nothin'. Anyways kiddo, have you noticed that Cindy is a little bit on the, what do ya call, cukoo side?
Steffy: She's just a little clumsy that's all. She broke the vase on my nightstand.
Archie: Ohh boy. It figures.

end of part one.
what does cindy do to archie at the dinner table? find out on part two, coming soon.

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When you gotta gun
in your hand, your
free to make any speech
you want!!-Archie Bunker

STANLEY: The car was overheated,
Helen!
HELEN: So was I!!

MARGE: Kids can be so
cruel!
BART: We can? Thanks, Mom!
(Bart socks Lisa)
LISA: Oww!!

HELEN: Stanley, you got
2 choices. You either
put your pants on and take
me to that resturant...
Or leave them off and we
could stay here and
have fun!

KIMBERLY: Willis, you gotta
do something about that
bathroom.
WILLIS: Like what?
KIMBERLY: Like not leaving
the seat up.
WILLIS: That's Arnold.
ARNOLD: No way, I stand
on the seat!

DarleneIllyria
08-26-2001, 11:09 AM
Omg- that was so funny. I can't wait til part 2! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

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Jack's Beatle Poster
08-29-2001, 06:51 PM
NOW PART TWO OF "Edith's Visitor"
~sorry you all had to wait too long to see part 2...I was too lazy to post it so I'm finaly doing it now~

(Edith comes out of the kitchen with 2 bowls of stew)
Edith: Mmm doesn't that look yummy?! *She puts one bowl down on her side and one on Steffy's side*
Archie: Edit', Edit' where's mine, heh??
Edith: Ohh! Cindy's bringing it out!
Archie: Aww geez, I don't like the sound of that.
(Cindy comes out of the kitchen with the other 2 bowls of stew)
Cindy: One for meee *places a bowl on her side of the table* and one for...*spills the soup all over Archie's shirt* ARCHIE!! I'm so sorry!!! Boy-I sure am making an mess of things!!
Archie: OH GEEEZZ THAT BURNS!!!!!! You are really gettin' on my nerves little goil!!! *runs upstares and nearly trips on Cindy's sock again* Damn!
(Steffy laughs)
Edith: Ohhh my...
Cindy: Ohhh...*starts to cry* I feel so terrible about this, Edith...I can't do anything right!!
Edith: Oh no, no don't cry Cindy, don't cry. You can do anything right, it's just that you can't do anything right when Archies around, but when Archie isn't around you can do anything right..
Cindy: (blank stare).....what?
(Steffy rolls her eyes and laughs)
==LATER THAT NIGHT==
(Archie is in his chair watching TV, Steffy is lying on the couch asleep and Edith is in her chair reading a book)
Archie: Look at that, Edit'! It's the perky potty comercial there! Heh heh heh! The thing I don't get is-why doesn't he stay down there after he gets flushed??
Edith: *tittering* Ohh Archie.
(Cindy comes downstares dressed in her frilly night gown and walks up to Archie and Edith)
Cindy: Goodnight Edith. *hugs her and gives her a kiss*
Edith: Oh goodnight Cindy! Don't let the bed bugs bite! *titters*
(Cindy is about to hug Archie when--)
Archie: WOAH WOAH THERE! Put some clothes on!! You don't see me an' Edit' marching around in our undergarments do ya???
Cindy: Oh mister Bunker *laughs* your a great guy!
(Cindy hugs Archie. Archie struggles and one leg of his chair plops off and the others follow-suddenly, Archie's chair collapses and hits the floor, waking up Steffy)
Steffy: Huh?
Archie: GET AWAY FROM ME, YOU!!!!
Cindy: I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorry !!!! *runs upstares*
(Archie lets loose a frustrating grunt)
Edith: Ohh Archie...I'm sure it was an accident. Would you like a beer?
Archie: I'D RATHER HAVE A NEW A CHAIR!!!
Edith: *giggling* But Archie-there aint any chairs in the fridge!
Archie: *as he stands up and dusts himself off* Oh you are a PIP, Edith! A real PIP!!
(Archie storms over tward the kitchen, but slips over the beer that Edith had dropped hours ago when Cindy arrived)
Edith: Ohh I forgot to pick that up!! I'm sorry Archie!
Archie: *flat on his butt* WELL DON'T JUST STAND THERE-HELP ME UP WILL YOUSE??!!!
(Edith runs over to Archie as Steffy runs upstares giggling)
==THE NEXT AFTERNOON==
(Edith is sitting on her chair reading)
(Steffy is at the table doing her homework)
(Archie comes in the front door and hangs up his coat)
(Edith jumps off her chair and runs up to Archie and hugs him)
Edith: ARCHIE YOUR HOME!!! *hugs him*
Archie: Oh really, Edith? Gee you coulda fooled me!
Steffy: Hi uncle Archie.
Archie: Oh hiya there, kiddo. Say where's Hurricane Cindy?
Edith: She had to do some shopping-she'll be back later.
Archie: Oh that's swell-that's swell. Where's supper? It sure doesn't look like it's on the table there, Edith!
Edith: It's cookin', Archie-it's cookin! It will be a while. Why don't we sing some old classics on tha piano?
Archie: Why don't you go speed up the dinna' department, huh??
Edith: *sits down on the piano bench* Oh come on Archie-it's been a while!
Archie: Edith you know I can't sing on an empty stomach...
Edith: *puts on her glasses* Here's a good one! *signals for Archie to join her*
Archie: Aw geez!! When did I ever lose control ova' youse, Edit'?! *sits next to her*
Edith: Ready? *starts playing*
Archie: Boy the way Glenn Miller played.
Edith: Songs that made the hit parade!!
(Steffy sits down on the couch and watches them)
(Cindy comes in the door with bags in her hands and stands and watches)
Archie: Guys like us-we had it made.
Both: Those we're the days!
(Archie gets ready to cover his ears)
Edith: AND YOU KNEW WHERE YOU WERE THEN!!!! *a glass on the table explodes*
Archie: Girls were girls and men were men!
Both: Mister, we could use a man like Herbert Hoover again!!
Archie: Didn't need no welfare state.
Edith Everybody pulled his weight!!
Archie: Gee, our old Lasalle ran great...
Both: THOSE WERE THE DAAAYYSSSS!!!!
(Steffy and Cindy applaud them)
Cindy: That was great you guys! Can I do one?
Edith: Ohh hello Cindy! You can play piano?
Cindy: You bet I can! *sits next to them*
Archie: Aw geez...
Cindy: Here's one of my all time favor...*the piano bench colapses-Cindy, Archie and Edith hit the ground*
(Cindy gets up)
Cindy: Oh my god!! Are you guys okay?!!!
Edith: Ohh I'm alright Cindy!
Archie: My back!!!
(Cindy helps Edith up)
Archie: Crap!
(Cindy helps Archie up but he falls over backwards and knocks the piano over)
(Cindy and Edith gasp loudly)
(Steffy goes wild with laughter)
==THE NEXT AFTERNOON==
(Archie comes in the front door)
Archie: Edith I'm h--
(the door slams open on Archie's back)
Cindy: Hi everybody! *sees Archie* Ohh I'm sorry! Did I hurt you?
Archie: YES BUT WHAT THE HELL DOES IT MATTER-I'M USED TO IT!!!
(Edith walks in)
Edith: Cindy!! Archie!! Your home!!!
Cindy: I've got good news everyone! I got the job and I'm moving up here to New York!
Edith: Oh thats wonderful, Cindy!! I'm soo happy for you!!
Archie: *sitting in Edith's chair* Oh woopity freakin' doo.
Cindy: But I'm gonna need a place to stay for a while until I find a home...
Edith: Oh you can stay HERE for as long as you want!!
Cindy: Oh thank you Edith!!! *hugs her*
Steffy: Hooray! We get to be roomies still!
Cindy: Yeah!! Probably for a few months!! Then I'll come and visit you guys everyday!! Ohh I'M SO HAPPY!
(Archie is shocked and speechless)
Archie: I I I I uh dah deh muh n-n-n guhhh...
(Edith starts singing Oh Happy Days in a horrible voice)
(Steffy starts cheering and clapping)
(Cindy runs around in circles and starts to sing "New York city here I come! Right back where I started from!!")
Cindy: *hits the lightswitch hard on accident and it short circuts and sparks then the lights go out and everyone is still making noise* Oopsie!! Oh well...New York city here I come....
(Archie falls on the floor and starts going crazy-making weird noises and drooling and screaming-)
(All the singing and dancing and screaming from Edith, Cindy and Steffy resumes)
THE END!

That was fun writing an All In The Family fan fic. I should do more. What do you guys think?

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When you gotta gun
in your hand, your
free to make any speech
you want!!-Archie Bunker

Favorite sitcoms:
Three's Company
All In The Family
Simpsons
South Park
Thats My Bush
Lucy, Gilligan...

Read my hillerious
All In The Family fan fic
called "Edith's Visitor!"
Starring Jennilee Harrison
as Cindy Snow!

DarleneIllyria
08-29-2001, 07:59 PM
That was great! You should write more fan fics!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif

------------------
Hottest Men alive:
Dale Midkiff
Anthony Starke
Tim McGraw
Jonathan Crombie

Jack's Beatle Poster
08-29-2001, 10:15 PM
Originally posted by Jenny:
That was great! You should write more fan fics!!! http://www.sitcomsonline.com/ubb/smile.gif


Thanks! Glad you liked it. (-: Maybe I will make some more...

what do the rest of you think?

------------------
When you gotta gun
in your hand, your
free to make any speech
you want!!-Archie Bunker

Favorite sitcoms:
Three's Company
All In The Family
Simpsons
South Park
Thats My Bush
Lucy, Gilligan...

Read my hillerious
All In The Family fan fic
called "Edith's Visitor!"
Starring Jennilee Harrison
as Cindy Snow!

Beruche
09-02-2001, 10:45 PM
It was really good.I liked it.

ThomasE
09-28-2001, 05:15 PM
Ha Ha Ha! That was sooo funny!

archie fan 2001
11-14-2001, 02:00 AM
That was great!! pure greatness!! you did a very good job keeping all of the characters in character! i could totaly see that being a real episode.

readymade
12-24-2001, 02:18 PM
I'm really impressed! If I didn't know any better, I could have sworn that I'd seen that episode on TV before. Keep it up!! :D

Take care,
Tanya.

Jack's Beatle Poster
01-08-2002, 11:24 PM
Originally posted by readymade
I'm really impressed! If I didn't know any better, I could have sworn that I'd seen that episode on TV before. Keep it up!! :D

Take care,
Tanya.

Why thank you, Tanya, I am glad you enjoyed it.;)

Jack's Beatle Poster
01-08-2002, 11:25 PM
Originally posted by archie fan 2001
That was great!! pure greatness!! you did a very good job keeping all of the characters in character! i could totaly see that being a real episode.

Thanks, Archie Fan!:wave:

Jack's Beatle Poster
01-08-2002, 11:26 PM
Originally posted by ThomasE
Ha Ha Ha! That was sooo funny!

He he he Thank you Thomas :lol:

Jack's Beatle Poster
01-08-2002, 11:28 PM
Originally posted by JOblairJOblair
It was really good.I liked it.

And thank you as well, Jo Blair Jo Blair! :cool: