horizonbeach11
07-24-2018, 03:13 PM
I didn't want to hijack the other thread where this episode was mentioned, but I was curious if any of the rest of you felt that this episode felt "off" somehow.
Things about it that seemed "off":
Under use of laugh track. I know, I know, this is not something that one could normally accuse any sitcom of, but I think it's because I've been so conditioned to hear a laugh track after just about every comment in a show, M3S included, that I really picked up on the lack of it here, especially after Dodie's lines, and there were a lot of them, as this was a Dodie episode. She would say something like, "Oh, Mama, do I have to go out there? Klunky old Alfred is out there!". Normally, this would have been followed by a brief laugh track, as if to cue the audience that it was cute, but this episode is rife with Dodie saying things like that over and over and OVER again from beginning to end, and nary a giggle, so she really just ended up sounding somewhat like a mean little brat.
Which leads me to the next "off" thing: kids in sitcoms (at least older sitcoms where parental wisdom and authority were still respected) "get" to be bratty for about five minutes, at which point wise mom or dad will step in, give them a talking to about the error of their ways, and they will instantly feel badly about their actions and all is well again. But in this episode, Barbara told Dodie over and over and over that she was basically being a brat and it never did sink in, Dodie just kept it up throughout the whole thing, she never did back down or apologize or obey Barbara. This felt weird, especially for a sitcom like M3S that always tried to teach little moral lessons in each episode and had basically good, obedient, and compliant kids in it. "The Brady Bunch" is another example of this, those kids always felt badly and apologized, just as Steve's boys on M3S did. You came to expect it.
The color, sound, editing, acting, and overall quality was pathetic. I don't think it was MeTV's fault because I don't see this with all of the episodes that they air. It feels like the PTB knew that the show was going to end soon so they stopped investing top dollar in it, I also noticed this in the episode where Katie briefly contemplates ending her marriage to Robbie which was made around the same time. One minute the family would be in the kitchen sitting around the table, then the next second it would be a scene in the living room with just Uncle Charley and Katie with no lead in, intro music, or whatever else they use to introduce the next scene. Now the editing may have been on MeTV, I can't say for sure, but again, I don't see this in every episode that they air so what gives?
Writing. In this episode, I would estimate that Dodie starts at least half of her sentences with, "Man!" Over and over, "Man, Mama...", Man, Daddy...", Man, we have to eat dinner with Alfred? Man, that's rotten!", etc. etc. Could they possibly have written it like this, or was this maybe just the way that Dawn Lyn was talking at that phase in her life and the PTB didn't really care enough anymore to correct her? It was almost jarring, coming out of a little girl over and over this way, and why didn't Barbara, the proper Engilsh teacher of season ten, correct Dodie like she would have then? She was really nitpicky at that point, Dodie would say, "I don't feel good" and Barbara would immediately respond with, "You don't feel WELL." But two years later Dodie talks like Shaggy from Scoobie Doo and it's just hunky dory? Weird.
Anyone else find this one "off"?
Things about it that seemed "off":
Under use of laugh track. I know, I know, this is not something that one could normally accuse any sitcom of, but I think it's because I've been so conditioned to hear a laugh track after just about every comment in a show, M3S included, that I really picked up on the lack of it here, especially after Dodie's lines, and there were a lot of them, as this was a Dodie episode. She would say something like, "Oh, Mama, do I have to go out there? Klunky old Alfred is out there!". Normally, this would have been followed by a brief laugh track, as if to cue the audience that it was cute, but this episode is rife with Dodie saying things like that over and over and OVER again from beginning to end, and nary a giggle, so she really just ended up sounding somewhat like a mean little brat.
Which leads me to the next "off" thing: kids in sitcoms (at least older sitcoms where parental wisdom and authority were still respected) "get" to be bratty for about five minutes, at which point wise mom or dad will step in, give them a talking to about the error of their ways, and they will instantly feel badly about their actions and all is well again. But in this episode, Barbara told Dodie over and over and over that she was basically being a brat and it never did sink in, Dodie just kept it up throughout the whole thing, she never did back down or apologize or obey Barbara. This felt weird, especially for a sitcom like M3S that always tried to teach little moral lessons in each episode and had basically good, obedient, and compliant kids in it. "The Brady Bunch" is another example of this, those kids always felt badly and apologized, just as Steve's boys on M3S did. You came to expect it.
The color, sound, editing, acting, and overall quality was pathetic. I don't think it was MeTV's fault because I don't see this with all of the episodes that they air. It feels like the PTB knew that the show was going to end soon so they stopped investing top dollar in it, I also noticed this in the episode where Katie briefly contemplates ending her marriage to Robbie which was made around the same time. One minute the family would be in the kitchen sitting around the table, then the next second it would be a scene in the living room with just Uncle Charley and Katie with no lead in, intro music, or whatever else they use to introduce the next scene. Now the editing may have been on MeTV, I can't say for sure, but again, I don't see this in every episode that they air so what gives?
Writing. In this episode, I would estimate that Dodie starts at least half of her sentences with, "Man!" Over and over, "Man, Mama...", Man, Daddy...", Man, we have to eat dinner with Alfred? Man, that's rotten!", etc. etc. Could they possibly have written it like this, or was this maybe just the way that Dawn Lyn was talking at that phase in her life and the PTB didn't really care enough anymore to correct her? It was almost jarring, coming out of a little girl over and over this way, and why didn't Barbara, the proper Engilsh teacher of season ten, correct Dodie like she would have then? She was really nitpicky at that point, Dodie would say, "I don't feel good" and Barbara would immediately respond with, "You don't feel WELL." But two years later Dodie talks like Shaggy from Scoobie Doo and it's just hunky dory? Weird.
Anyone else find this one "off"?