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Carmen_Epstein
04-05-2002, 02:15 PM
I'm writing a fic called "The Crush" for the Laverne and Shirley category on Fan Fiction.net.

Summary: Katie develops a crush on Lenny after one night of babysitting. First he signs the cast on her arm and then he agrees to watch her at the last minute when the girls are late getting home and Carmine's at an audition.

I got up to the part where my character goes down to Laverne and Shirley's for the weekend. (my character is a seven year old in this series). I'll post a little bit so anyone who wants to help, can get a feel of the story.

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She imagined a reception, a honeymoon, and a long happy life in just half an hour. That's when her mother came in and interrupted her train of thought. Katie put away her book, grabbed her bag and walked through the quiet livingroom.

Katie: Hey ma, where'd everyone go?
Mrs. Goldman: Oh they went to friends houses for the weekend.
Katie: I stil have time, I'm gonna enjoy uninterrupted cartoons.
Mrs. Goldman: Katie it's time to go, I have to meet your father in Manhattan. Carmine Ragusa is escorting me there, so I don't have to take the subway alone.
Katie: Carmine? Are you two seeing each other?
Mrs. Goldman: You've been watching those soaps again haven't you? I keep telling you, they are not for children! When are you gonna start listening to me!
Katie: Okay, sorry geez, i'm going now.

She walks out the door and takes the elevator to the 3rd floor.

Rockapella722
04-05-2002, 04:18 PM
I LOVE the name you chose.. Katie.

That's my name and when I read your fic I'll keep seeing my own name and be like.. "Hell, yeah." Cuz Lenny's a babe.

I'm sorry, but I gave up on writing L&S fics a while ago because it's so hard for me to put words in their mouths.. so I can't help you. :(

Carmen_Epstein
04-05-2002, 05:05 PM
:) Yeah, I wanted to put myself in there as a kid so. I do that with all my stories. I love the name too.

I took a break from writing fan fics for awhile and then started again. Not too long ago.