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Divisionbabe05
04-02-2002, 09:20 PM
Aight yall I dont have much written..I'm gonna post EVERYTHING I have written so far...this is my first fic and after I post this if yall have any ideas IM me @ Divisionbabe05 cuz I'm gonna need em! I want lots of ideas and I will pick which ones I wanna use and give ya credit for it. Thanx...here goes:

Jinny woke up in a cold sweat...she had been asleep for about 2 hours at the most. She had just woken up from another dream...well more of a nightmare actually. She had been having these dreams every night for about a week now. She couldn’t take it anymore. She wanted to drink so badly, but held out.

She got up to get a drink of water. She walked into the kitchen and opened the cabinet...her dad must have switched the cabinets around because this one, which she thought had glasses in it, had plates in it. She opened another cabinet, but instead found her worst nightmare right in front of her...the liquor cabinet. She closed it quickly, after a few moments of thinking she opened it slowly once again. She grabbed a bottle of vodka and sat it on the table. She opened the bottle slowly and, after a few seconds, took a quick drink. Then more and more and more until the whole bottle was gone. She stood up and stumbled up the stairs. Just as she was collapsing onto the bed on the verge of passing out, she woke up once again breathing hard. “omg...a dream within a dream...that’s 2 in one night, this has to stop!” she said to herself quietly. She didn’t want to think about it anymore so she decided to try to get some sleep. Afterall, these nightmares exhausted her.

That morning Jinny woke up and got ready for work. She looked like hell, but didn’t care. She slowly walked into the division about 15 minutes later with her hand on her head. She sat down at her desk and laid her head down. Mag noticed and walked over to her partner’s desk. “Jin, u ok?” Mag asked with a worried expression on her face. “No...no I’m not ok” said Jinny barely above a whisper. “Jin c’mon lets go talk” said Mag and with that both of them went into the locker room to talk. “Ok Jin, what’s goin on? Talk to me.” Mag said to Jin with a concerned tone of voice. “It’s...It’s those damn dreams, Mag.” “Nightmares.” “They wont go away!” Jin was on the verge of breaking down. “Mag...I’m losing control and I don’t know what to do...” Jin said quietly. “Have you been going to AA, Jin?” Mag asked. “Of course! I go all the time, but it’s not helping to get rid of my dreams...they wont go away no matter what I do.” Jin replied getting slightly agitated. “ok...it’s ok Jin were gonna take care of this.” Mag said confidently. “How...how the hell are “we” gonna do that?!” Jin replied in an angry tone. “Whoa, Jin c’mon calm down...don’t worry we will find a way.” “I’m sorry...I’m just on edge” Jin replied quietly. “I know...I know” Mag said to Jin as she put her arm around her best friend.

Babes_Cat
04-02-2002, 09:23 PM
Ok, babes, get going on more! Well, get some ideas first! ;)

aeysh1
04-02-2002, 09:26 PM
more!

Ewan's My Man
04-02-2002, 09:39 PM
OMG!! POST MORE!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
04-02-2002, 10:08 PM
this kicks serious ass! write more now!

Esperanza
04-02-2002, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
this kicks serious ass! write more now!
I totally agree!!! More... when you get ideas that is!

AllIWantIsYourClutch
04-02-2002, 11:07 PM
WOO HOO!! GO HAPPY MEAL!!! Post more pwease!

Divisionbabe05
04-03-2002, 07:34 PM
Here's a lil more:

Jin decided to go home and grab a bite to eat. Mag stayed at the division...for reasons that she wouldn’t let Jinny know. “Hey Cap...can we talk?” mag asked as she knocked on the door. “sure, what about?” Cap said as she took her reading glasses off. “It’s about Jinny...she is having some problems and I told her I would do something about it, but, honestly, I have no clue of what to do.” replied Mag. “Is she drinking again?” asked Kate anxiously. “No...well not exactly...she has been having dreams every night that she is drinking and she says that she can’t get rid of them...I think she will drink if she doesn’t get some help.” Kate let out a sigh of relief knowing that one of her best inspectors wasn’t back to her old habits...yet at least. “I agree, I’ll get right on it.” replied Kate. “Thanx Cap.” Mag replied as she walked out the door. “No problem” Cap said as she called for Raina to look up the number to the county hospital.

Jin came back from lunch and sat down at her desk. They had no case today and she was bored out of her mind. After a few moments, Kate came out of her office and asked Jinny to come in and shut the door. Jinny got up and walked in with a curious look on her face. “What’s this about cap?” Jinny asked. “I know you have been having dreams about drinking and I think that if you don’t get help you will start to drink again and I can’t have that happen and I don’t want to see it happen. Kate replied as Jinny sat there trying not to get angry. “How did you...” Jinny began with an angry tone, but was cut off by Kate. “I have scheduled a psych consult at county for you, I’m giving you the rest of the day, they are expecting you in half an hour.” Kate stated as Jinny stood up. “Whoa whoa whoa! You can’t do this!” Jinny yelled. “Jinny, you need to get this taken care of...or you’re ridin a desk and that’s final” Kate said calmly. Jinny walked out the door and slammed it behind her. She gave Mag a glare and walked out of the division. She took a cab to county and got out. She walked in and up to the psych ward where she signed herself in. After about 15 minutes she was called in. “Well, here goes.” she said to herself as she stood and followed the doctor into a small room.

I'll write more tonite and add tomorrow.

Esperanza
04-03-2002, 08:20 PM
This is great!!!! Add more!

Ewan's My Man
04-03-2002, 10:39 PM
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!! POST MORE!!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
04-03-2002, 11:30 PM
i have it when people leave us hanging....

Jinny Girl
04-04-2002, 01:47 AM
... if you dont post more I *points to self* will kill *makes a gun with the fingers thing* you *points to britt*

AllIWantIsYourClutch
04-04-2002, 01:18 PM
(to the tune of the meow mix commercial)


More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.

More! More! More!

Divisionbabe05
04-06-2002, 02:39 PM
Alright yall I'm REALLY sorry, but I have 2 HUGE research projects due this week and I havent even started on them...so I really havent had time to write...after these projects I will definetly write more I promise.

sue z q
04-07-2002, 03:50 AM
Originally posted by Divisionbabe05
Alright yall I'm REALLY sorry, but I have 2 HUGE research projects due this week and I havent even started on them...so I really havent had time to write...after these projects I will definetly write more I promise.

HA! Know how it feels, huh? When I had projects up to my ears, did I say, "Oh, sorry, folks, got school..." :p Nuh, uh, Britt, that ain't gonna fly....I NEED MORE!!!!!! LOL, PLEASE!!!! hehe I'll pull out a few of my own threats... ;)

Divisionbabe05
04-07-2002, 11:04 PM
Why thank you Susan for that warm and caring reply LOL, but for real I gotta do good on these...this is my last 9 weeks. Also, I dunno where I'm goin with this right now...I wanna go ahead and get her outta the doc's office and doin better cuz I have other things planned for this fic...I just started out with the dreams cuz I thought it would just be a good way to start. Why dont you HELP me out a lil girl? I could use it!

Babes_Cat
04-21-2002, 02:58 PM
*sighs* Hey Britt, you got any more comin on this cuz I been waaaaaaaaaaaaaiting lol! I love it and hope ya post more wicked soon Babes!

Divisionbabe05
04-21-2002, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by Teddys_Gurl
*sighs* Hey Britt, you got any more comin on this cuz I been waaaaaaaaaaaaaiting lol! I love it and hope ya post more wicked soon Babes! I'm workin on it...I have 2 projects due on tuesday and after I turn em in I swear I am gonna post...some of the story is lyin on my floor in my room so I have written, just havent posted...more soon I promise!

Babes_Cat
04-21-2002, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by Divisionbabe05
I'm workin on it...I have 2 projects due on tuesday and after I turn em in I swear I am gonna post...some of the story is lyin on my floor in my room so I have written, just havent posted...more soon I promise!

YAY! Ok, I can wait!

Divisionbabe05
04-23-2002, 05:59 PM
As promised I'm posting more...its not much, but its ok for tonite. I have ideas for the story so its all good. I think I'm gonna combine the novel and script forms of writing and kinda integrate both of em in. Just depends on what part I'm writing. Neways, here's more.
Jinny saw a chair and sat down. The doctor sat down in a chair across from her and wrote down a few things.

Doc: Hi...Jinny is it?
Jin: yea...
Doc: How are you?
Jin: *sarcastically* just....great.
Doc: Oh, ooook well I’m Dr. Scott...I got a call from your Captain this today, she said you need some help with some dreams you’ve been having.
Jin: Great...what else she tell ya?!
Doc: Well, she just told me some things that she thought would help me better understand the situation.
Jin: And that would include....?
Doc: Well, about drinking, re-hab, your mother....
Jin: Well thats just great, I feel so much better knowing that one more person knows everything about me!”
Doc: I take it that your not too happy about being here....I just wanna help ya know.
Jin: *Quietly* Yea...I know, look can we just get started?
Doc: Of course.

After a few hours of talking to Dr. Scott, Jin walked out of the hospital feeling a little better. She hated to admit it, but it helped her more than she thought it would. She decided to go home and get some rest since Cap let her have the day off.

Swimfan85
04-23-2002, 06:26 PM
very good, vvvvvvvvverrrrrrrrry vvvvverrrrry good, add more please!!

JoJoJoJoJoJoJoJoJo
04-24-2002, 09:56 PM
come on Britney....MORE!!!!!!!