ok i know this is like my 4th fan fic i'm doing now but o well

jin:well five more minutes mag and we are outa here
magda*smirks*
mag:hey uh jinny how would you like to come to my place on easter
jin:thats tommorrow
cd:wow jin know your days of the week
jin:haha.....
mag:jin did you have other plans
jin:well actually........nevermind
mag:no jiny i wanna hear
jin:when dont you(sarcasticly) ok well......you wanna come to church with me on sunday?
mag:is this a new aa step
jin:actually no...its just...mom used to take us to church this church the one i'm going to
magda and cd exchange glances
mag:well sure
cd:uh jinny(she says whils walking up to jinnys desk) mind if i tag along..............? i just dont have anywhere to go this easter
jin:sure
mag:can we have the address
jin:actually why dont i take dads car and pick u up?
mag:is your dad coming?
jin:no hes visiting his sister
cd:what time are you picking us up?
jin:be ready at 8:30.............AM.....ooo works over see ya

what do you think?

Sounds good! Jinny going to church is definitely something that I would like to see! lol

this rocks!!!!!! awesome idea for the fic, add more!!!!

heres more.....
mag:bye jin
jinny waves as she walks out the door
cd and magda start putting their coats on

next morning.....

jinny is dressed in the same outfit she wore to theadores parents
she pulls up to mags house first and knocks
magda opens the door dresses in a light purple dress with little daisies on it
mag:jinny do you always where black?(sarcasticly)
jinny*smirks* is ben coming ?
mag:no he went to gabes house so i can hide eggs
jinn:well i'm not spoiling any plans.....
mag:no i still have time
jinny:well we are gonna be late
*they get in the car*

-cds apt-

jinny walked in the complex doors
jin:lets see cds on the 3rd floor....
*she sees cd witing inthe lobby facing the other way reading something. jinny taps her on the shoulder*
cd:oh hey jinny ready to go
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what do you think?

... Dear lord I had a purple dress with lil daisies on it in the 5th grade... Post more... NOW.

heres more

-in the car-

cd:jinny whats your churches name/
jin:uh ........new life yep thats it

i gotta go what do u think

omg, i totally can picture mag in that dress. jin and church. never been done. i like it so far. post more! :D

they pull into a gravel parking lot

cd:whys the parkin lot gravel
jin:this is a new parking lot my guess is it isnt finished yet
mag:oh

jinny parks the car
she get out staring in one direction at a good sized building
mag:whats that building
jin:this is my church i just hadnt seen it since the addition...wow huge
mag:i never would have guessed it was a church
jin:well come on guys lets head in

they walk in the church doors
right away jinny spots somone she knows

jinny:hey dave
at fist the man looks at her like he doesnt recognize her
dave:jinny?
jinny:yeah! she said while hugging him
dave:i didnt think i'd see u here againjin:to be honest with u i didnt eather........oh uh.....this is my partner magda remeriaz
they shake hands
jin:and this is cd
dave:cd?
jin:short for candice dee
dave:oh ...nice to meet u
he hands them a church bulletin
dave:oh jinny i think letisha and everyone will want to see u
jin:oh is she here?
dave:yeah shes singing today.........oh there she is

magda and cd exchange glances

what do u think?

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
You're doing a really good job!!

thanks heres more
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jinny:tesha
latesha:jin?
they hug
latesha: well we've missed you
jin:yeah well .........uh this is my partner-
latesha:partner?
jin:yeah i'm a cop
latesha:oh
jin:magda and this is cd
latesha:uh-
jin:short for candice de
latesha:uh huh
jin:well we better get in there comeon guys
latesha:jin..nice seeing you here
as jinny walks in a few people walk up to her and talk to her

what do u think?

cool!! add more!!!

*chants* more...more...more...more

This is good. Post more as soon as you can.