dick is in this fan fic its when jinny and mag first start workin there

cd and dick are sitting at their desks
cd turns around to dick

cd:you hear some new inspectors start working here today
(looks at what will be their desks)
cd:(reads the nameplates) jinny ex---teed no exstead and mogda rem---ir az it looks like
(jinny walks in looks in the caps window to see an empty desk)
jinny: (to cd whos turned around) hey uh yo, wheres the captain?
dick:she went to the bathroom and to get more coffee mix
jinny:(looks around to find her desk and sits on it)
cd: hi i'm cd
jin:wow up with the newest software (sarcasticly)
cd:short for candice de and this is.....
dick:dick nice to meet you(he sticks out his hand for jinny yo shake instead she just nods)
jin:so how long does the captain take inthe hole?!?
(cd and dick exchange glances)
(magda walks in)
jin:let me guess is this one of the secritarys (she said looking at mags clothes)
mag:as a matter of fact i'm inspector (mag shot back)
cd:(breaking the arguement) so inspector exstead how long on the force
jin:oh little over 2 years
cd:and you?
mag:fresh out of the acadomy
jin:at leat fresh outta somethin (ynder her breath)
magda glared at jinny
kate walks in
kate :oh your here in my office please

well i know it sucks but it will get better

no it does not suck!! its a great idea!!!!! please add more tonight heheh!!

alright again for u lol
im posting right now

kate:well welcome to the division and..
jin:can u cut the speach short so we can get on with this
kate:well uh....... heres the forms fill them out then we'll take yuo down to shooting range
jinny pulled the chair in front of kates desk out not kates chair and sat down grabbed a pen from kates desk and started writing



cd:well that jinny has a mouth of her own
dick:no kidding
cd:well thats what you need for this profession backbone


jinny:all done
(hands the forms to kate)
kate(reading the form) to siblings both cops and a father who was also a cop wow family line huh?
jin:guess so
kate;wait you missed one your mother
jinny:my mothers ........dead uh.. can i go now
kate:sure wait at your desk for inspector remeraz

cd:how'd it go inspector?
jin:make it jinny....i guess how its expected

mag:ok i'm finished
kate:(looking over the forms) thank you i'll be out in a few minutes then you can go to shooting range
mag:ok

jin:so uh guys see the 49ers vs the raiders last night
dick:yeah good game
(mag sat down at her desk)
cd:say uh you guys want to join us at the anchorside bar for a drink tonight after work?

so what do u think?

awesome!!(hehe more for me i feel special)! HAPPY EASTER!!!! (Or passover) great job!

thanx i cant post more tonight because i have to go to bed to get up early for our chuches easter service

HAPPY EASTER!

MORE!!! This is awesome!

jin:sure i'll be there
mag:alright just got to check with my mom
jin:jin:check with your mom?*smirks*
mag:to see if she can watch my son....ben

_anchorside_

jinny was the first to show up and was sitting at the bar drinking a shot *she finished*
jinny:miller
man:(opens the cap and hands it to her)
jinny takes a long drink
cd and dick walk in talking with magda
cd:o hey jinny over here
jinny gets up and stumbles a little and sits down
jin:so magda your mom oked u huh?
mag:very funny
cd:dick your usual
dick nods
cd:how about you magda
mag:o make it a white wine
jiny:(under her breath )why ofcourse
cd:(ignoring jin) it looks like you have you rdrink
jinny drinks down the last bit
jinny:not anymore
cd:i'll be back with the drinks

what do u think

whis reding this?

I am! And I'm LOVING it! This is such a great idea... really original!

Keep up the great work! And post more!:D

:mad: will somebody,any body help me post on theTD boards before I blow your but to smitherines.:(

I'm reading......but I dun read it.........so post more!!!