jinny is sitting on the couch at her dads

jinny :dad i found an apartment
johnsr: your moving?
jin:yep
jinny:look dad its not far from here if i need you its three blocks away
johnsr:u dont have a car
jin:i found a motorcycle pretty cheap......
johnsr: i know how much u liked that one u had
jin:yeah
johnsr:why did ya get rid of it
jin:when i started working there the police officers werent using bikes dont know why every other station did and it was really startin to rust any way
johnsr:alright but.....when ya leavin
jin:next week
jinny;you'll have to come over for dinner
johnsr:oh i will


at the division

(jinny goes into the caps office)
jin:cap i'll have a change of number as of next week
cap:found an apt huh?
jinny:ya
cap:where is it
jinny:merrill and pine
cap:that wouldnt be lakes side would it
jin:yeah name sucks but.....
cap:thats where i live

ok i know it sucks right now but guess where theadore lives!

HAHA! TEDDY! YAY! More please!

Originally posted by aeysh1
dads



at the division

(jinny goes into the caps office)
jin:cap i'll have a change of number as of next week
cap:found an apt huh?
jinny:ya
cap:where is it
jinny:merrill and pine
cap:that wouldnt be lakes side would it
jin:yeah name sucks but.....
cap:thats where i live

ok i know it sucks right now but guess where theadore lives!

Ok this is gonna be good. U hafta post more!!!!

Originally posted by consentida25


Ok this is gonna be good. U hafta post more!!!!

EXACTUMONDO...HMM..TEDDY, JIN AND THE CAP...LIFE IS GREAT. POST MORE SOON !

thanx to the replys i'll post a little more thanx for replying


jin:no way
cap:jin dont worry its a huge building
jin:ya 3 class sections lower class medium and upper i jus took a look at upper those apts ar huge! (worried voice) what class r u in
cap:middle
jin:good i'm in lower till i get a little more saved!

~jins dads house 6 days later~

jin:i still cant believe i had to get a lease where my captain lives
johnsr:oh well jin she cant do anything to ya off duty(her dads making something in the kitchen
jin:(to herself) or maybe she can
johnsr:comes back out) well got all your stuff packed
jin:yep
johnsr:so when can i visit

g2g thanx again for replying

post more...:D

MOORE!!

heres more....

jin:oh we'll set up somethin
jin:dad whAT TIME IS IT
johnsr:7:00
jin:shoot dad gotta go i'll be back by 10
(jinny ran out the door)
(johnsr shook his head sat down and ate his soup

(jinny pulls into a pizza hut parking lot)
(she goes in and spots naTE cd mag and raina)
jin:hey sorry i'm late
mag:its ok sit down we were late too
raina:ya we stopped at anchorside
(magda gave raina a look)
(jinny quickly changing the subject) have u ordered?
mag:no what do you guys want
nate:sausage
cd:i could go with sausage
jin:not me peeperoni or cheese
why dont we get 2 half and half
mag:what ?
jin:i'll order

(waitress comes up)
waitress:r u ready to order
jin:ya uh mag raina what did you want
mag:cheese is fine or pepperoni
raina:me 2
jin:ok 1 large half pepperoni half cheese and another large half sausage half cheese and a breadstick
waitress:anything else
jin:hold on whaT TO DRINK?
mag:i'll have a diet coke
raina:same here large
nate:pepsi
cd:sprite
jinny:root beer got that
waitress :yep your food will be ready shortly would u like your drinks ahead of time
jin:yes
waitress:ok be back shortly
mag:thank u
cd:so jinny heard you found an apartment
jihn:did ya here the best part about being the same apartment as the caps
raina:ooo lucky you (sarcasticly)
jin;i know
mag: i'm helping her unpack
jin:and staying for supper
mag:yep
jin:can we get off the saubject now
cd:i guess
jin:thank u
raina: uh so....anyone see a good movie lately
jin:shrek is supriseingy a good movie
mag:jinny please ben went to see that for his friends 8th b-day

getting closer

more! more! more!

MORE !!!!!!!

more

jin:while i cant help it it is
waitress comes back
waitress:heres your drinks
jin:thanks (takes a sip)
mag:thanku
cd:nods
jin;so anything new on the case cd nate?
cd:yeah it turns out the bartender
mag:(clears her throte)
jin:mag stop it
mag:stop what
jin:stop trying to protect me
mag:jin u will need it wether u admit it or not
(waitress comes back)
waitress:heres the pepperoni cheese and breadstick
jin:(standing up )thanku (she pulles her wallet out and throws some money on the table) that should cover me(e grabs 3 pieces of pizzaand puts them in her breadstick box )
mag:jin what r u doin
jin:leavin and know what i dont think livin with cap would be near as bad as livin with U!
(walked out)
magda:sighs

-back at john sr-

jin:dad i'm home
johnsr:your early its only 8:15
jin:i know pizza?
johnsr: where did ya get that
jin:stopped at pizza hut
johnsr:oh sure
(jin hands him a piece)

-next day-


i'll leave ya hangin lol who is readin this?

I'm reading this! It's AWESOME. post asap

MORE!

lol..wouldn't be as bad as living near mag. lol...lol..post more!

_next day moving day!

jin drove up on her new motorcycle
(cap was looking out the window and saw it)
(mag and cd saw it they were both just coming in)
(jinny got off her bike and pulled off her helmet)
cd:new wheels huh jinny?
jin:yep excuse me (walks into the division

(walks into the caps office)

jin:cap can i get off early today?
cap:sure

ooooh more

cap:big moving day ?
jin:ya
cap:u could have the whole day off i dont have any new cases mag will just have desk work and besides charles is coming in today and i dont think u to hit it off to well
jin:thats not my fault
cap: i know i know
jin: ok buh bye
(jin waks out the doors)
(cd and magda r pulling stuff out of cds trunk and dont see jinny)
(jin started the motorcycle )
(cd and mag heard it revving and turned to look)
cd:wow jin had a short day
mag:yep
(now walking inside with the stuff under their arms)
cd: i cant believe she can ride that
mag: i know i rode 1 once with gabe scary
(teddy walks up)
teddy:hey wheres jinny?
mag:uh she got off early
teddy:so what is she walking home taking a bus?
mag:she bought a motorcycle
teddy:uh motor cycle?
mag:ya
(just then jinny drove back up)
mag:thats her?
mag:why is she back
(jinny got off her bike)
teddy:jin mag said u left
jin:ya well........why should it matter? i just had to get somethin i left in my desk walks past him

what do u think

cool!

more!

*walks past him*?!? there better be a kiss involved here. hmmhmm! lol...more !

Originally posted by InspectorExstead
*walks past him*?!? there better be a kiss involved here. hmmhmm! lol...more !

HAHA YEAH!!!


More please!

there will be soon enough!LOL

MORE!

WOW! THANKS FOR ALL THE REPLYS!

(jinny walks into the division AND looked upset)
(cap comes out)
cap:jinny is every thing ok
jin:YEAH! just forgot my wallet!
cap:ok ok just askin
(jinny starts walking out)
cap:i guess i might see ya tonight?
jin:u might.......uh....bye cap
(walks out)
(jinny comes out and teddy is standing by her motorcycle)(jinny trys to walk past but he stood in her way)
jin:excuse me!
teddy:look jinny i know your upset about what i said...
jin:you had every right..
teddy:but i did not have to say it so....so mean
jin:look i cant tal............ i gotta go
teddy:ok can we talk sometime?
jin:uh yeah....i'll see ya tommorrow at work we'll set a date then
teddy:how bout well todays monday friday at that restauraunt we were at last time?
jin:oh.. ok bye
(jin got on her bike and drove away)
teddy:(sighs)

what do u think?

SWEET!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!

if i get some more replys tonight i'll post more tonight .
i already posted this morning because i didnt have school who else didn't?

Originally posted by aeysh1
if i get some more replys tonight i'll post more tonight .
i already posted this morning because i didnt have school who else didn't?

i did have school. more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i'll post more in a bit right now i have dishwasher duty

heres more

(jinny pulls into john sr.s driveway takes off her helmet and goes inside)
jin:dad i'm home
dad:hey jinny girl
jin:hi uh can i use your car to haul my stuff?
johnsr:sure
jin:ok i better get movng (walks down the hall and comes back with her bags)
johnsr:oh uh do u need help loading your things?
jin:yeah sure i have one more bag in my room

(scene cuts to jinny closing the trunk her dad standing next to her)

jin:well thanks dad
johnsr: no prob
jin:well bye (they hug)

-at the division-

mag:(looking like shes having a hard time concentraiting at her desk turns her chair around toward cd) cd do you think i'm being over protective
nate:yes
cd:shut up she asked me........ok look magda i know your trying to be a good friend but your amking jin feel like probobly a little kid what she

(cap comes out)
cap;nate cd we have an art museum robery and murder at heres the address report to me (gos back to her office)
(cd and nate leave)
(magda gos into the caps office)
mag:cap can i take some personal time i finished the file folders
cap:um.....sure have a good day
mag:thanks (leaves)

(jinny walking the halls to her apt with her bags)
jin: ok 127 129 and (looks up to see magda standing by the door)

what do u think so far?

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!

i'l try to post more tonight

lol..nice cd/nate scene....moooore!

heres more

jin:what are you doing here?
mag:i told you i was coming to help.
jin:mag.......
mag:jinny i;m just trying (gets cut off)
jin:to protect me let me give u an exampleof what its like say you start talkin about some of your weak points i cut in change the subject
mag:well i guess sometimes...,.
jin;sometimes doen't begin to cover it(they both look down at the floor)
jin:look i know you are trying to help me but ease off okay
mag:i guess i can do that
jin:ready to go in?(jinny sticks in the key and opens the door)
mag:not bad jin
jin:mag can you go down and get my bags i got to ask the manager something
mag:sure

guess who will be on next post/hint his name starts with a t

thanx for the 3rd page guys!

AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!! TEDDY!!!! IS HE THE MANAGER?!?!?!?! AAAAAAAAAHHH!!! MMOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

um no but he'll be in the next scene i'll post a little now but not much

jinny walking down halls arrives a tfront desk

jin:hi i'm a new renter could i get a copy of this key
man:i'll see if we have one (gos into another room)
(teddy walks down the hall)
teddy:jinny? jinny what are doing here
jin:i was about to ask you the same thing i live here
teddy:no way me too
jin:o goll 12 differnt apts i chose this one. i am sorry people who dont want to be friends should not live this close
teddy:about that thats why i wanted to talk again.
jin:ya see i was going to but i dont see what there is to talk about
(man come out)
man:room 131 here you are
jin:thANKS
(starts walking away)
teddy:(whispering to himself) room 131
(jinny comes into her new apt)
jin:mag you will never guess who also lives here

omg, that was so good. U have to post more. NOW!!!!!!!! lol. j/k

new reader!welcome to the fanfic

i'll post more as soon as i get a few more replys *cough 4th page 4th page(hint hint)lol

mag:who?

sorry i hit the wrong button

jin:teddy?
mag:in a place like this??
jin:excuse me i remember you saying a little bit ago this place was nice
mag:you know what i mean for teddy
jin:yeah i guess (she said while pulling a boombox out of a box and plugging it in)(she turned on some rock music and left it there)
mag:cant we listen to jazz or something?
jin:come on mag live a liitle
(mags cell phone rings)
mag:hello? did you give him tylylnol ok ok i'll be there(hangs up)
jin i got to go bens got the flu
jin:go go might be contagious (sarcasticly)
mag:see ya jin
jin:buh-bye now
(mag walks out)
(jinny starts unpacking more boxes)
(and then hears a knock on the door)

Originally posted by aeysh1
jin:go go might be contagious (sarcasticly)


LOL...:happyface :lol: ..JEEZ...BEN IS SICK IN EVERY FANFIC. LOL. MORE!!!!

jin:yeah its open
(teddy comes in)
jin:what the he** are you doing here?
(teddy closes the door behind him)
teddy:look jinny i've been thinking about what i said and....
jin:and what teddy
teddy:look jin i feel awful about what i said although i meant some of it i might be able to be friends
jin:friends? really? no thanx (she said while turning around and unpacking more)
(teddy grabbed another box and tried to help)
jin:what do u think your doing?(she said while yanking the box from him)
teddy: i didn't mean friend i meant - more
jin:what was that (in a lighter tone)
teddy:you heard me
jinny:well you didn't feel that way when i asked you to talk
teddy:look at least think about it heres my number and room number call me or if you need to talk come on up to my place
(he left)
(jinny started crying a little as she unpacked)
(she threw a magazine across the floor and sat down *crying*
(than she stoodup dug through some boxes and finally pulled out her karate stuff and headed out the door)

whos reading this?

i am!! but i'm mad...2 reasons...my headphone just got disconnected on one side and the fact that u stopped! more!

she came back into her house grabbed an empty duffle bag and put her karate stuff along with a water bottle into the bag
then headed out she got on her motorcycle
then the scene cuts to jinny pulling over at the ymca and grabbing the bag
g2g post more later

she walked in and went into the room and walked over to a man
jinny:hey sam care to work on karate with me
sam:sure havent seen u around lately
jinny:i've been busy (and left it as that as she walked out to another room and he followed her
sam:ready?
jin:why not

(nate walks past the door turns around and walks in)

nate:jinny you didnt tell us about your karate?

this caused jinny to turn around and be knocked to the ground by sam

jinny:what are you dojng here
nate:oh my cousin wanted me to meet him here but i just got a call on my cell and he cant make it
jinny:sam this is nate
they shake hands
nate:ya know yo should sell tickets for the division folks to watch whole new level of respect (sarcasticly) what belt are you?
jin:black

what do u think?
im catching up on my fanfics tonight

Wow... i just started reading this, and it's great!!! Post more!

nate:hey uh.....mind if i watch my schedueles obviously been cleared
jin:its a free country
jinny and sam start practicing some more while nate sits down and watches by how hard jinnys pushing herself u can tell shes upset sam stops
sam :jinny something wrong

i'll post more in a few minutes

ooo 4th page i'll post more in a few minutes i have just been told i have to sweep .......fun lol

hurry up and sweep... i want more NOW!!!!

jin:NO! how bout just kickboxing now
nate:ya know kickboxing too?
jin:its part of karate she said while throwing a kick at sam then sam threw a kick at her she grabbed his leg and pulled him to the ground
nate(jokingly) 1-2-3 ding

cd sat in her apt. picked up the phone and dialed then put the phone to her ear

cd:hey paul its me
cd:please dont call me candy anymore
i just called cause i have the rest of your things boxed up

what do u think?