jinny was out running when some men jumped out
kevin:hey jinny
jinny:who r u
kevin:i'm kevin the man u slept with that u wouldnt give a chance afterward
jinny:kevin i di not even know who u were wheni did that i've changed and i dont do that stuff anymore
(kevin made a wierd sign with his hand and a man came out and hit jinny over the head with a board jinny passed out)
(kevin grabbed the board and hit jinny in the stomach)
kal:hey they wont beleive she passed out from being drunk if you bruise her up
kevin:fine wheres the liquor
kal:here
(kevin started pouring bottles down jinnys throte and some on her clothes)
kevin:ok lets get her in the car
(they dropped jinny off still uncontious in front of where theodore works in the parking lot)
(teddy was working late that night he pulled out a pic of jinny and looked at it for a sec then put on his coat to leave he went down to his car and saw a woman laying face down not knowing it was jinny walked over)

what do u think so far?

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! PLEASE!

OMG!!! U MUST post more!!

thanx guys heres more

he walkked over and brushed her hair back to see it was jinny
teddy:jinny gosh got yourself drunk again come on (he said while picking her up and putting her in the back seat)(driving)
teddy:i thought i heard u went to rehab and were doing good

sorry got to go what do ya think?

I THINK I WANT MORE! But this time i want ALOT] more!!!!!!!!!!

heres more

jinny is still unconcious~
teddy pulls up to jinnys apartment~not knowing she had moved out he half carried jinny to the apartment heard noise inside and knocked
guy:hello?
teddy:who r u
guy:i live her
teddy:no she lives here
guy:i just moved in but wouldnt mind her living here!
teddy:bye
(he took jinny back out to his car and pulled out his cell phone)
(ringing)kate:at her dads why
teddy:uh.. i'm givin her a ride her car broke down
kat:so why didnt she tell u
teddy:uh i have to go (hangs up)
teddy:really blew that one
kate:mckafferty
teddy:hi this is theodore blementhal
kate:yes
teddy:where does jinny live now
kate:with her dad why
teddy:oh.....uh..........well her car broke down and i'm givin her a ride
kate why didn't she tell u where she lives
teddy:uh got 2 go bye(hangs up)
teddy:blew that one


theres more
so whos reading this?

Smmmmmmoooooooooooooooooth Teddy...NEwayzie...post some more!!!

heres more
kate:jinny doesn't have a car (shakes her head and picks up her magazine again
(teddy looks up jinnys dads number and gets to her house)
(no ones home)(teddy walks to the door and sees a note it read:jinny i went to the grocery)
(teddy walks back to the car and looks through jinnys jacket for the keys he finds them opens the door and brings jinny in)
(he laid her on the couch and sat next to her )
teddy sat with a sad look on his face staring at jins face he heard jins dad pull up in the drive john sr opened the door
johnsr:who in the h_ll are u
teddy:i'm theadore blemental i work with jinny shes drunk i found her laying in the parking lot
johnsr:drunk? she was doin so good
teddy:i dont know uh i better be goin
johnsr:ya know she started this because she found her mother after she killed herself (tries to keep back tears) uh....r u a friend of hers
teddy:give a little chuckle )yeah uh...i am
johnsr:than u wont turn her in ?
teddy:i guess not i gotta go
(walks for the door
jinny:dad?
(teddy turns around)
johnsr:yeah jinny girl
jinny:doesn't noice teddy) uh .....these guys hit me
johnsr:dont make excuses i cant beleive u did this
jionny:teddy what r u doin here
johnsr:he found u laying ..in front of work of all places
teddy:i got to go (left)

what do ya think?

*spazz attack* I NEEEEEEEEEEED MORE!!!

johnsr:dont worry jin no one will find out
jin:i was not drinking someone ran up behind me and hit ...
johnsr:dont feed me that crap i'm goin to bed! (walks up stairs)
jinny:(sighs)
~~~~~next day at division~~~~~~
(jinny is sitting at her desk looks tired)
(magda walks over)
mag:jin r u ok
jin:YEAH FINE BACK OFF
cap:extead my office
(jinny goes into the caps office)
cap:jinny my new boss
jin:ya mean hte fat guy
cap:i guess ....anyway he says u have to take a blood a yerine test hes just itchin to get u in trouble somehow mr gaulk will be up in a sec to take u down

ok whos reading this?

this rocks, add more!!!

I M READIN AND I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg..i could've SWORN i wrote back to this...like after teddy said "blew that one"...maybe i'm losing my mind..again. anyways...um...i'm reading ! YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE ! U CAN'T STOPPED...ADD MORE NOW !!!!

thanx for replying heres more~~
jinny:cap cant we do this tomorrow
cap:why u have nothing to hide
jin:no its just uh.........
cap:jin u havent been drinking have u
jin:no course not.....
cap:mr gaulk in here
mr gaulk:come on
(jinny swung her arm around like she did on intervention and right away clutched her stomach)
jin:ahh.......
(jinny is now laying on the floor still holding her stomch)
(cap started dialing an ambulence)
(magda came in and bent down by jin)
cap:mr gaulk get mrs riaham she has nurse training

sorry its not much i wanna keep u hangin lol i'll post more when i get replys

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! EVERYBODY REPLY!!! I NEED MORE!!!

_at the hospital-

(kate,cd,nate,magda,raina in the witing room)
mag:whats taking them so long
cap:we just have to be patient
nate: (turning a magazine upsidedown) which way is this supposed to go
cd:not funny
doctor:extead
mag:yes
doctor:well it appears she has some internal bleading lucky she came in when she did and she probably has a ripped organ
cap:will she be ok?
doctor:most likely she will have to take it easy for a while
mag:great thats just the opposite of jinny
cd:what caused this
doctor:well by the look of the bruise on her stomach it looks like she was hit with a board
(teddy came in )
ted:i just heard is she ok?

OMG! more more more more more more

NNNNNOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! COME ON MORE...MORE..MORE...MORE!!!!