View Full Version : A story idea...


Ryanmo97
01-28-2002, 01:13 PM
I'm working on a new story and I was wondering if you guys wanted to see it as it progresses.

I call it, "Herbie goes to Peekskill"

I'm sure you all know who Herbie is. But, if you don't, Herbie is a white VW Bug with a mind of his own. In this story, Jo enters a fix up race, a race in which mecanics get a few hours to fix a car and have it go one lap, and one of the cars is Herbie. Well, Jo figures that it should be a snap to fix him because she's worked on Mrs. G's Bug. Anyway, he fixs him and they win. But, the story doesn't end there.

So what do you think?

MrsGarrettRocksMySocks
01-28-2002, 05:28 PM
GREAT!! Sounds good!

Acting Girl 19
01-28-2002, 10:14 PM
Great! I can't wait this sould be good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ZeldaGilroy
01-28-2002, 10:45 PM
I love Herbie. Sounds like a great story. Can't wait to read it!

Ags2000
01-29-2002, 02:49 AM
Originally posted by FactsFan
I love Herbie. Sounds like a great story. Can't wait to read it!

Herbie ROCKS!!! I can't wait for this story.

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chrissya
01-30-2002, 02:50 PM
run with the idea