Ryanmo97
01-28-2002, 01:13 PM
I'm working on a new story and I was wondering if you guys wanted to see it as it progresses.
I call it, "Herbie goes to Peekskill"
I'm sure you all know who Herbie is. But, if you don't, Herbie is a white VW Bug with a mind of his own. In this story, Jo enters a fix up race, a race in which mecanics get a few hours to fix a car and have it go one lap, and one of the cars is Herbie. Well, Jo figures that it should be a snap to fix him because she's worked on Mrs. G's Bug. Anyway, he fixs him and they win. But, the story doesn't end there.
So what do you think?
I call it, "Herbie goes to Peekskill"
I'm sure you all know who Herbie is. But, if you don't, Herbie is a white VW Bug with a mind of his own. In this story, Jo enters a fix up race, a race in which mecanics get a few hours to fix a car and have it go one lap, and one of the cars is Herbie. Well, Jo figures that it should be a snap to fix him because she's worked on Mrs. G's Bug. Anyway, he fixs him and they win. But, the story doesn't end there.
So what do you think?