Punchline
02-18-2012, 07:09 PM
Raising Hope, please! Let go of the rope, you don't have to jump that shark that just swam in your way!
If ever there were a I time I could accept a "then I woke up and it was a dream" bail-out it would be for this. I love this clever little dark comedy because when it's working, it hangs its comedy on the edge of sorrowful, troublesome topics that have been twisted and turned into funny.
As a viewer, and probably as a human being, one of my favorite stories to lose myself in is a tale of a love with too many broken pieces to ever work out right. See Maggie and Joel in Northern Exposure. Pam and Jim in the Office. Even Ross and Rachel of Friends. They are Romeo and Juliet genre love stories pushed into the modern era, and Raising Hope had the perfect set up to do the same kind of wonderful to Jimmy and Sabrina. I found myself much like a witness to a traffic accident during the Valentines Day episode. I saw the writing step off the curb into oncoming traffic and there was nothing I could do stop it.
If one of your series "big problems" is that Jimmy wants Sabrina, then for the love of all things decent and writerly, don't let Jimmy get her (and so easily!!) by season 2!!! With so talented a writing staff, why would you drop a bomb on the playground of story opportunities you'd created between Sabrina and Jimmy?
I worry that the integrity of the story is now compromised. I tune in every week to watch Jimmy learn how to be a father, to see this family function despite all of the reasons it should not, and to watch the tension between Jimmy and Sabrina. That's Raising Hope. I don't want to see "Jimmy and This Girl He Likes Raising Hope."
So please, to the writing staff of Raising Hope, don't cheap out on me. This is a unique and talented piece of writing, to which mainstream viewers are rarely treated. Please don't steer it into shark infested waters.
If ever there were a I time I could accept a "then I woke up and it was a dream" bail-out it would be for this. I love this clever little dark comedy because when it's working, it hangs its comedy on the edge of sorrowful, troublesome topics that have been twisted and turned into funny.
As a viewer, and probably as a human being, one of my favorite stories to lose myself in is a tale of a love with too many broken pieces to ever work out right. See Maggie and Joel in Northern Exposure. Pam and Jim in the Office. Even Ross and Rachel of Friends. They are Romeo and Juliet genre love stories pushed into the modern era, and Raising Hope had the perfect set up to do the same kind of wonderful to Jimmy and Sabrina. I found myself much like a witness to a traffic accident during the Valentines Day episode. I saw the writing step off the curb into oncoming traffic and there was nothing I could do stop it.
If one of your series "big problems" is that Jimmy wants Sabrina, then for the love of all things decent and writerly, don't let Jimmy get her (and so easily!!) by season 2!!! With so talented a writing staff, why would you drop a bomb on the playground of story opportunities you'd created between Sabrina and Jimmy?
I worry that the integrity of the story is now compromised. I tune in every week to watch Jimmy learn how to be a father, to see this family function despite all of the reasons it should not, and to watch the tension between Jimmy and Sabrina. That's Raising Hope. I don't want to see "Jimmy and This Girl He Likes Raising Hope."
So please, to the writing staff of Raising Hope, don't cheap out on me. This is a unique and talented piece of writing, to which mainstream viewers are rarely treated. Please don't steer it into shark infested waters.